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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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Lovingheart

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Wow bhai kamal ka update tha bhai aur jitani bate batayi pandit ne woh lagabhag sabhi ki sabhi sach ho chuki dekhte hain kya hota hain.



Waiting for new update bhai


Shukriya bhai for this review
 

Bilal jan

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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update...
 
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The king

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Update 44



Scene.....



"Didi... Maine woh sab aaj hi karne ka soch liya hai jo hum dono ne plan kiya tha"

Prachi - abhi nahi choti pehle ghar ke bado ko handel karne do yahan tak mujhe lagta hai woh log handel kar lenge sab kuch but agar unse koi baat na bani to hum log apna idea use karenge khair jab yeh sab karna hoga na to tum usse pehle jesa socha tha sab kuch kar lena

Aarti - ok didi


In mein se koi ek apne mann mein soch rahi thi

"Tumhe kya lagta hai property itne asani se hath se jane dungi main hargiz nahi aao to sahi ek baar esa dhamaka hoga ki sab dekhte reh jayenge hahhahahah"





Scene change........




Idhar mere hotho pe muskaan naach gayi

"IdhaR hum sab itni serious batein kar rahi hai aur yeh jaban muskaye ja rahe hai"

"Oo hellloooo sun bhi rahe ho ja nahi"


Main - ji dharam patnio sun raha hu main aap sab ki

Pihu - sunna bhi padega ek baat meri kaan khol ke ganth bandhlo


Main - ek mint ek mint kaan ko khol kr ganth kese maru

Meri baat sun ke baki ki teeno has padi aur Pihu meri taraf gusse dekhne lagi

Main - acha acha sorry bolo jo bhi bolna hai baki jo bolna hai woh to mujhe pata hi hai par tum bol hi do

Meera - acha apko bada pata hai Didi abi aap chup rehna aur aap chalo yeh batao ki kya kehna chahti hai didi

Main - bol du fir


Pihu - han bolo main bhi to dekhu


Fir maine bolna shuru kiya Pihu ki acting karte hue

Main - "aur han meri baat kaan khol ke ganth bandh lo vahan jis kaam se jaa rahe ho bs vahi karna yahan vahan taak jhaak nahi karna hum charron hi bohat hai agar hume pata chala na ki koi panchvi tyar hai to vahi tange tod dungi tumhari han nahi to samjh gaye na"


Yeh bolke main hasne laga aur Pihu muh khole meri taraf dekh rahi thi


Megha - didi aap bhul gayi kya kis se ulajh rahi ho aap 😂😂😂

Pihu & Meera - such mein meri matti mari gayi thi


Unka yeh bolna tha ki fir se abki bar sabhi hass diye


Main - khair panchvi hai meri life mein but abi uska waqt nahi hai abhi main chahkar bhi nahi rok sakta isko but kuch dino baad hum usse milenge tab tak fikar nahi karna aur han tum sab se jab bhi dil karega milne to aa hi jaya karunga main bs apna dhayan rakhna sab theak hai

Sabhi - ok

Main - chalo abhi chalta hu main


Yeh bolke main ghar se nikal gya apni ek gaadi mein baith ke gayab ho gya aur pohanch gya apne banglow jane ki Rajput banglow pe

"Sawagat to karo mera guyz"


Rajput pariwar is waqt vese hi baitha tha hall mein aur meri awaaz sun ke ek dum se chonka


Main - kya hua family mera ana acha ni laga kya

Main chalte hue age jakar sofa pe lait gya


Chachi - tum jese mahoos ko dekh ke kon khush hoga


Main - chu chu chu chu rassi jal gayi par bal ni gya

Chacha - bal to sabhi kuch hi pal mein nikaal dunga tumhara yahi


Main -(apna phone dete hue) tumhara phone to kisi kaam ka nahi hai chache yeh le mera lele aur koshish karle

Usne turant phone le liya aur do tin call kiye aur katilana muskan liye mujhe dekhne laga

Piyush - tujhe yahan nahi ana chahiye tha dude ab laash jayegi yahan se tumhari

Main - jesa sanp vesa spolia khair ane to de tum logo ke chamcho ko mera ghanta ni ukhad sakte woh aur ladies in dresses mein jach bohat rahi ho hahahhahahaa

Chachi - hasle hasle yeh teri akhiri hassi hai isske baad hasne ke liye tu zinda nahi rahega

Main - issi akad ko todna hai mujhe ghar chala gya paisa chala gya akad fir bhi hai nice

Dad - dhokhe se to koi bhi kuch bhi kar sakta hai

Main - no no dhokha kesa ismein maine pehle hi warn kiya tha tum logo ki tum sab se ek ek baat ka hisab hoga tumhi logo ne lightly liya meri baat ko

Itne mein kuch gunde ghar ke main gate se enter hue par unki pair bahar lawn mein hi jam gaye


Main - lo aa gayi tumhare tattuó ki fauj aa jao unki durgati dikhau tum logo ko


Jese hi hum log bahar aye to bahar ka scene dekhke ghar walo ki ankhein fatti ki fatti padi thi kyu ki bahar unke gundo ki lashein padi thi aur unke pass mere guards khade the khoon se bhare hue mere guards ko maine pehle hi bhej diya tha yahan mere ane se

Main - welldone guyz welldone jao jakar fresh ho jao han to Rajput pariwar kesa laga jhatka

Sabhi pariwar walo ki umeedein bikhar gayi thi

Main - to dad chacha and Piyush yahan yeh sab saaf kardo mujhe mera ghar ganda nahi chahiye


Dad - hum tumhare naukar nahi hai


Unho ne abhi yahi bola tha ki unke hath pao khudwa khud chal pade yeh kamal tha mere diye dress ka jo inke body ko control kar raha tha


Main - tum log mujhe naa bol hi nahi sakte jo main bolunga woh karna hi hoga aur ladies aap log bhi jakar ghar ka kaam sambhaliye mujhe sab kuch perfact chahiye so plz leave


Na chahte hue bhi un sab ko mera hukum manna pada 😂😂😂

Maine pure scene ki video Komal ko bhej diya woh bhi yeh scene dekh ke khush ho gayi
Nice update bhai
 

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Update 45



" love you so much aapne aaj mujhe kafi sakoon diya hai"

Iss waqt mein apni biwiyon ke pass aya hua yha family ko kaam pe laga ke aur iss waqt sabhi khush thi aur unkk vahi khushi dekhne waya tha main

Main - vaada kiya tha tumse ki har ek dard ka hisab hoga unse shuruwat kar di hai maine

Komal - apne aaj mujhe bohat badi khushi de di hai

Main - yeh to abhi shuruwat hai age age dekho hota hai kya chalo abi main ja raha hu vapis jab bhi jarurat ho to muje bs yaad karna aa jaunga tabhi kr tabhi


Yeh bolke main vahan se aa gya is waqt mom chachi prachi aur aarti ghar ku saaf safayi kar rahi thi aur chacha dad aur piyush bahar ki safayi kar rahi thi

Main - i like it mrs Rajput kafi acha kaam kar rahi ho tum mujhe to laga tha sikhana padega sab kuch but it's quite impressive

Mom - yeh tum jo bhi kar rahe ho theak nahi hai

Main - ab yeh theak galat ka farak aap sikhayegi mujhe Mrs Rajput jinho ne 20 saal tak ek bechari ladki pe jurm kiya apne ek bete ko marne ke liye fhenk diya

Mom - tum dono hi manhoos ho ek manhoos ghadi mein tum dono ko janam diya tha maine aur uski galti ka aaj nateeja bhugat rahi hu main

Main - wah sahi hai maza khud lo aur dosh humpe sahi hai sahi hai khair ab jab hisab ho hi raha hai to sab hisan hoga acha to ladies listen tumhare jitne bhi kapde hai sab ke sab bahar guard ko pakda do aur bol do ki daan kar de tum logo ko to ab un kapdo ki jarurat nahi padegi

Mere itna bolte hi sabhi un rooms mein chali gayi jo jo unke the pehle fir kapde le ayi sabhi un sab ka apni body pe bilkul bhi control nahi tha

Prachi - (jate jate boli) kuch to humara humare paas rehne do kamse kam kapde to rehne do humare

Main - yaad hai meri Komal ke paas tum logo ne kapde bhi nahi chorhe the fate purane jo kapde hote the woh dete the tum log use to tum logo ne kese umeed ki mujh se ki tum logo ko vip treatment milega jao ab jaldi kaam pura karo koi bakchodi nahi chahiye mujhe

Uske baad sabhi ne lunch time tak sara ghar saaf kar diya bahar se bhi aur ander se bhi

Tabhi maine taali bajayi to ek khubsoorat se ladki ghar ke ander ayi mere paas

Ladki - ji sir

Main - Diya in logo pe har waqt nazar rakhna aur yeh lo chabuk jab bhi koi galti kare to har ek pe barsana theak hai

Diya - ji sir


Aarti - tum esa nahi kar sakte humare sath hum tumhari batein maan to rahe hai

Tabhi Diya ne aarti ko chabuk se marna shuru kar diya aur arti chilane lagi baki koi use bachane ke liye age bhi na aa paye sab bs mayushi se uski taraf dekhte rahe aur unki ankhein nam ho gayi

Main - main tum sab ka malik hu samjh gayi to tum sab abse mujh se tu tadak karke baat karne ki sochna bhi mat aur aap bolna sikhlo ya fir maalik kya samjhe sab

Mom - beta....

Main - (bich mein tokte hue) beta nahi malik ek bar mein samjh jao verna Diya damjahyegi fir aur koi behas nahi chahiye mujhe ispe sabhi ladies jakar lunch banao bhukh lagi hai mujhe aur sabhi gents bahar jakar gadiyon ki dhulayi karenge u may leave now


Sabhi - ji

Sabhi apne apne kaam pe lag gaye aaj mujhe bohat sakoon mil raha tha inko saza dekar

Main - chalo thodi masti kar li jaye vese Esha se thoda sa romance kar leta hu "Esha" 5 mint mein mere room mein aao yahan bhi ho

Esha - ji malik



Aur main apne room mein chala gya aur bed pe lait gya kuch hi seconds mein Esha mere sahmne thi office ke dress mein

Main- kesi ho Esha

Esha - main achi hu malik

Main - kahi busy thi kya

Esha - ji malik woh humare naye clients ke sath meeting mein thi

Main - vich mein chorh ayi kya

Esha - ji kyu apse jaruri nahi hai kuch

Main - esa karo meeting complete kar lo jakar fir free hokar aa jana mere paas kuch baat karenge

Esha - ji malik

Uske baad Esha chali gayi aur apun khud se batein karne laga


Main - vese sala main abi loch hi karne wala tha na reader log kya sochenge ki 4-4 biwi hone ke baad bhi Esha se romance woh kya hai na bheedu log ab kya hi kar sakta hu black powers hai unka kuch to side effect hoga hi na ab jab tak tapa tap nahi kiya tha tab tak to theak tha ab 3-3 biwion se chudai kar chuka hu to ab mere ander aag bhadak chuki hai use to shanta karna hi padega na bs issi liye khair i think yeh side effect ap sab ko acha hi lagega

Takreeban 1 ghante baad table pe khana lag gya maine aram se khana khaya baith kar Diya bhi mere sath hi baithi thi mere kehne pr Khane se free hokar maine Sab ko bola

Main - humne to khana kha liya ab tum sab bhi khana kha lo par yahan nahi bahar laawn mein maat bicha kar


Yeh bolke maine uth ke Diya ke sath hall mein aa gya vahi kitchen mein


Prachi - mummy ab tak ki zindgi kitne aram se bitayi hai humne par kal se humari zindgi bilkul ulat gayi

Aarti - mera to pura badan dukha raha hai itna kaam karke aur kohde kha kar pata nahi kab khatam hoga yeh sab

Chachi - beta har kisi ka din ata hai aaj iska hai kal firse humara hoga Bs kuch waqt ese hi haste haste bita do


Yeh teeno to batein kar rahi par Mom apni soch mein gum thi kya soch rahi thi woh ane wale updates mein clear ho jayega kyu ki yeh soch age age badhti ja rahi thi
Nice update bhai
 
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