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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
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"akhir esa kab tak chalega bhaiya"


Dad - jab tak hume usse azaadi pane ka tareeka nahi mil jata


Chacha - lekin kab tak bikhariyo jesi halat kar di hai usne humari


Chachi - use agar bachpan mein hi khatam kar diya hota to yeh naubat hi nahi ani thi


Chacha - to tumhara bhai hi leke gya tha na uss manhoos ko maarne ke liye


Chachi - mere bhai ko vich mein mat lao samjhe usne to apna kaam kiya tha pata nahi kese bach gya yeh


# Small Flash back.............


Baat tab ki hai jab main ek saal ke lagh bhag ka tha matlab ki Kishan tab ghar mein kuch ese ese kand hue ki mujhe aur Komal ko manhoos thehra diya gya


Jab in logo se humari masoomiyat ohh sorry sorry manhoosiyat na sahi gayi to in logo ne mujhe marne ka plan bana diya aur Komal ko iss liye zinda rakha ki use ghar ka naukar bana lenge badi hone pe aur vahi inh logo ne kiya


Khair mujh akele ko marne ki vajha thi in logo ke pass


Pehli vajha main Manhoos tha inki nazar mein
Dusri vajha the pandit ji han pandit jab janam hua humara to dada ji ne ek pandit bulaya tha ghar pe


Dada ji - pandit ji yeh mera pota aur poti hai apko inka naam karan karna hai aur kundali banani hai


Pandit - ji jazmaan aap log hume inke janam tareek aur waqt bata de


Dada ji ne unhe sab kuch bata diya is waqt tak sabhi ghar wale bhi vahi the pandit ke chehre expretions badalte rahe


Dada ji - kya baat hai sab sahi to hai


Pandit - dekhiye jazmaan bura mat maniyega lekin baat bohut jaruri hai dekhi jazmaan baat darasal yeh hai ki yeh dono bache shaitan kaal mein paida hue hai jis vajha se taa unar inpe shaitan ka saya rahega aur uss saye ki vajha se apke pariwar pe musibaton ka pahad hamesha girta rahega dusri baat yeh dono bache inke mata pita ki marzi ke bina apko bhasha mein unwanted childs hai iss liye is ghar mein inhe kabhi pyar nahi mil payega aur teesri baat yeh hai ki in dono ka apas mein vivah hoga jise aap mein se koi bhi chah kr bhi nahi rok payega


Dada ji - iska koi upay hai pandit ji


Pandit - ek upaye hai jazmaan ja to inko ek dusre se alag kar da ja fir in dono mein se kisi ek ke pran lene honge aap mein se kisi ek ko


Dada ji - yeh to hum nahi karenge aur yeh rahi aap ki dakshina ise lijiye aur bhojan karke parsthan kijiye


Yeh bol kar dada ji hum dono ko apne sath liye apne kamre ki aur chal diye piche se dad bole


Dad - pita ji hume pandit ji ki baat maan leni chahiye kya pata woh such bol rahe ho


Dada ji - ek lafaz nahi aur samjhe tum sab jab tak main zinda hu tab tak to tum log inka kuch nahi kar sakte han mere marne ke baad jo ji mein aye woh kar lena


Room mein ane ke baad dada ji ne darwaza band kar diya dadi pehle se hi bistar pe thi vahan pe unke body kam nahi karti thi kamar ke niche se issi liye woh bed pe rehti thi har waqt dada ji ne unhe har baat batayi jo abhi abhi hui thi


Dadi - to maan lete aap unki baat


Dada ji - tum bhi unhi ka sath dene lagi are yeh dono dekh naadan hai kitne masoom hai tere bacho ki tarha tera dil bhi pathar ho chuka hai tu reh apne bacho ki sangat mein main ja raha hu in dono ke lekar dusre room mein kya bharosa hai tera apne bacho ki baaton mein akar tu hi inka gala na ghont de kahi ab se in dono ko main palunga


Yeh bolke dada ji apne room se nikal gaye dadi piche se unhe awaaze deti rahi fir dada ji ese hi sabhi ghar walo se alag se rehne lage woh ab apna pura waqt dono bacho jani ki hum dono ko dene lage us din ke baad dada ji ne dadi ki bhi kabhi tabiyat tak nahi puchi shayad kafi naraz ho gaye the woh unse


Khair ek waqt aya jab dadi dada ki yeh berukhi sehan na kar payi aur jyada bimar ho gayi jab unko hospital le jaya gya to raste mein hi unho ne dum tod diya


Par pata nhi dada ji ne kesi berukhi ikhtyar ki thi ko unho ne akhiri bar apni patni ka chehra bhi nahi dekha


Iss incident ke baad ghar wale hum dono se nafrat karne lage fir issi vich dad ki car ka accident hua chacha seediyon se gir gaye


1 saal mein kafi kuch hua jo ki hum dono bhai behan ko manhoos thehrane ke liye kafi tha


Ek din ek metting hui pariwar walo ki jismein yeh decide hua ki mujhe maar diya jaye aur meri behan ko yahi rakha jaye jise badi hone pe yeh log apni naukar bana sake ek reason yeh bhi tha ki hum dono bhai behan bachpan mein hi lafi sundar the khaskar Komal uski usi sundarta pe ek insan ka mann dol gya tha ki woh abhi se itni sundar hai ki age jakar kitni hogi ab hawas ke pujari ko umar ka lya laina dena


Khair mujhe marne ka kaam sonpa gya meri chachi ke bhai ko but yahan un logo se ek galti ho gayi kyu unhe mere dada ne hi inke bheja tha ki inke plan ka pata chal sake aur jo chachi ka bhai tha woh acha insan tha aur dada ji ne uski business mein madad ki thi issi liye woh dada ji ki sath de raha tha


Fir woh raat ko mujhe lekar nikal gaye ghar se aur ek dusre shehar mein lejakar mera palan pochan karne lage ab yeh aap logo ne andaza laga hi liya hoga ki kon tha woh insan


Khair mujhe lejane ke baad unho ne in logo se apna har rishta naata tod liya par vahan bhi unke sath bhi kuch esa hua ek do baar ki naa naa karte bhi unko pandit ki baton pe bharosa ho gya aur ek din esa bhi aya ki un logo ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya yahan unse gadbad hui li woh mujhe meri asliyat nahi bata paye the aur na hi maine kabhi unka mann padha tha


Aur age ki kahani apko pata hi hai khair idhar jab Komal 8 saal ki hui dada ji ki bhi death ho gayi par dada ji ne marne se pehle hi apni basiyat bana di par uska abhi kisi ko pata nahi tha


Dheere dheere un logo ne Komal pe julm karne shuru kar diye uska school churwa diya usse ghar ka sara kaam karwane lage jab woh 15 saal ki jab hui to jis insan ki uspe niyat kharab hui thi usne apni onchi harkate karni shuru kar di par woh kaamyab nahi ho paya


Kisi na kisi tarha se hamesha uska koi na koi plan fail ho hi jata par han woh Komal ko kahi na kaho touch jarur karta Komal bechari sehti rahi kyu woh ghar chorh ke jaa bhi nahi sakti thi ek to padhi likhi nahi thi dusra dada ji ne usko bataya tha ki uska ek aur bhai hai aur woh yahan ek na ek din jarur ayega


Waqt beet raha tha apni raftaar se fir woh din aa gya jab in logo ki zindgi mein meri entry fir se hui


#Flashback ends here


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#Present......



"Pata nahi mera bhai zinda bhi hai ja nahi"


Chacha - kya pata uss din ke baad se uski koi khabar hi nahi ayi par jab se yeh Kishan laut ke aya hai tabhi apni kuch logo ko bheja hai maine uska pata lagane ke liye ki us se puch saku ki yeh manhoos zinda kese hai


"Uska jabab main du kya ki zinda kese hu main ya woh log kaha pe hai"


Sab ne awaaz ki taraf dekha aur sahmne wale ko dekh ke sawaliya nazro se dekhne lage
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Update a16


Badhte waqt ke sath Kishan ki dhadkne badhti ja rahi thi reh reh ke usko bohat bechaini ho rahi thi woh apni raftaar se age badhta ya raha tha gadi kuch jyada hi raftaar mein bhag rahi thi


Kuch hi der mein woh us city mein pohanch gya raste mein ek yagha kafi crowed tha na jane pata nahi kyu Kishan dil vahan rukne ko hua

Aur woh gadi rok ek dam se nikal ke crowed ki taraf bhaga aur bheed ko chirte hue ander jane laga

Aur sahmne ka manzar dekh ke uske kadam apne aap tham gaye woh ek murat si ban gya uske piche piche hi Pihu Ritu aur Esha the

Sahmne dekhke unki ankhon se rulayi fut padi aur teeno ek hi name leke chillayi

"Mmeeeerrrrraaaaa"

Ji han yahan bheed Meera ki dead body ke aas pass jama hui thi Kishan bas ek tak Meera ki body ko dekhra tha ansu uski ankhon se tapak rahe rhe aur ek dam se woh bhag ke Meera ke pass gya aur uska sar utha ke apni goad mein rakh liya aur rone laga


Kishan - Gudiya aeee gudiya uth dekh tera bhai tere pass hai aaeee guduya ankhein khol na apni dekh na tera bhai tere pass baitha hai Meeru uth na


Aur yeh bolte hue woh rone laga aur ek dam se usne dahaad mari "Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh" "Meeeerrrraaaaa"

Aur woh Meera ke mathe se matha jod ke rone laga Pihu Esha aur Ritu bhi uske pass aake Meera ki body pe sar rakh ke rone lagi

Par abhi bhi uski bechaini thami nahi thi fir achanak se Kishan ko kuch yaad aya aur usne jaldi se Meera ki body ko uthaya aur gadi mein rakha aur un teeno ko gadi mein baitha ke gaadi ghar ki aur badha li

Aur 5 min mein hi ghar pohanch gya
Aur bhag ke ander ghusa ander ka nazara dekh uski ruh kamp gayi kyu aaj uska pura parivaar duniya chod chuka tha

Abhay aur Avantika ek sath farash pe pade the aur ek side Megha ka jisam pada tha aur uske pass kuch likha hua tha

Kishan woh padhen laga


"Megha - Bhai mujhe maaf karna main tumse maafi mange bina hi iss duniya se ya rahi hu bohat koshish ki maine ki main tumhe face karu aur tumse maafi mang lu iss liye kayi bar tumhe unknown no se call bhi kiya par kuch bol na payi bohat koshish kari ki tumhe sahmne se face karu par har bar mere kadam tham jate the kyu ki himmat hi nahi hoti thi bohat bar tumhare shehar ayi par tumhe face na kar payi bhai apni iss behan ko maaf karna manti hu galti bohat badi thi meri par meri akhri icha samjh ke hi puri kar dena isse meri atma ko shanti milegi"


Aur yahi cheez likh ke Megha ne apni akhri saans li

Kishan yeh sab padh ke rone laga aaj uska sab much lut chuka tha Pihu use sambhalne lagi uska rona sun ke mohalle wale bhi aa gaye aur un logo ko sambhalne lage
Issi vich do log apni mann mein kuch karne ka soch rahe the

1st - yahi sahi moka hai Kishan tut chuka hai ab apni chaal chalne ka sahi moka hai bs thoda sa mokka mil jaye hahahaha... Fir sari daulat meri hahahhaha

2nd - Kishan puri tarha se tut chuka hai ab bas bari hai mere war ki ..... Dekhti hu Kishan kese tu bachta hai... Tere marte hi tere sari power meri.... Hahahhahah....
Uske baad sari duniya pe mera raa hoga.. hahahahahha. .....


Yeh dono log dikhane ke liye to magarmach ke ansu ro rahe the par ander hi ander bohat khush the

Sabhi logo ne un chaaron ke daah sanskar ki sari tyari ki fir unko shamshan le ke jaya gyA aur dha sanskar kiya gya
Pihu ab tak Kishan ke sath thi woh puri koshish kar rahi thi Kishan ko sambhalne ki

kyu ki usko pata tha is waqt kitna dukh ho raha hoga kyu ki usne bhi apne mata pata ki maut dekhi thi tab Kishan uska sahara bana tha aur Aaj woh uska sahara ban rahi thi

Unka charo ka dah sanskar kar ke baki sabhi to chale gaye par vahan Kishan Esha Pihu aur Ritu reh gaye

Kishan abhi Pihu ke kandhe pe sar rakh ke ansu baha raha tha ki pata nahi ek dam se kese Kishan behosh ho gya

Pihu - bhai kya hua utho bhai Ritu jaldi pani laa bhai lagta hai behosh ho gya hai jaldi se pani la

Pihu ne itna hi bola tha uske chehre pe ek rumal aya jispe chlorofom laga hua tha aur woh bhi behosh ho gayi


Esha - welldone Ritu ab tum esa karo Pihu ko le jao iska jo kuch karna ho tumhari marzi main apne shikar ko leke ja rahi hu

Aur Tabhi vahan do log aye aur Pihu ko utha ke le gaye idhar Esha ne ek chutki bajayi aur woh aur Kishan vahan se gayab hoke ek guffa mein pohanch gaye

Esha - Ab mera iss duniya pe raaj karne ka sapna pura hoga kal ki sham mein Kishan ki bali dungi aur iski sari shakti meri hogi bohat intezar kiya hai maine iss moke ka ab aur nahi hahahahahaha
Kishan bohat tadpaya hai tumne


Aur ek bar fir us guffa mein esha ki hassi ghunjh gayi hahahahahahahaha


Idhar Kishan Behoshi ki halat mein bhi hosh mein tha par woh uth nahi pa raha tha aur na hi apni powers use kar pa raha tha


Idhar Ritu Pihu ko leke ek farm house mein chali gayi aur use ek room mein bandh diya

Aur dusre room mein ghus gayi


Ritu - bohat intezar kar liya Pihu maine bs kal ki raat tak ka intezar fir teri sari daulat meri... Khair Daulat bhi kutti cheez hai teri hi jaan ki dushman ban gayi.... Hahahahahaha


Usne ek peg banaya ho ek hi ghunt mein gatak gayi
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Aaj ke liye itna hi age ki kadi janne ke liye sath bane rahe
Yaha tow jis per bharosa karo woh sab peeth m jhura ghop dete h jitne dost mile sab dushman
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Black water

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Update 46



"akhir esa kab tak chalega bhaiya"


Dad - jab tak hume usse azaadi pane ka tareeka nahi mil jata


Chacha - lekin kab tak bikhariyo jesi halat kar di hai usne humari


Chachi - use agar bachpan mein hi khatam kar diya hota to yeh naubat hi nahi ani thi


Chacha - to tumhara bhai hi leke gya tha na uss manhoos ko maarne ke liye


Chachi - mere bhai ko vich mein mat lao samjhe usne to apna kaam kiya tha pata nahi kese bach gya yeh


# Small Flash back.............


Baat tab ki hai jab main ek saal ke lagh bhag ka tha matlab ki Kishan tab ghar mein kuch ese ese kand hue ki mujhe aur Komal ko manhoos thehra diya gya


Jab in logo se humari masoomiyat ohh sorry sorry manhoosiyat na sahi gayi to in logo ne mujhe marne ka plan bana diya aur Komal ko iss liye zinda rakha ki use ghar ka naukar bana lenge badi hone pe aur vahi inh logo ne kiya


Khair mujh akele ko marne ki vajha thi in logo ke pass


Pehli vajha main Manhoos tha inki nazar mein
Dusri vajha the pandit ji han pandit jab janam hua humara to dada ji ne ek pandit bulaya tha ghar pe


Dada ji - pandit ji yeh mera pota aur poti hai apko inka naam karan karna hai aur kundali banani hai


Pandit - ji jazmaan aap log hume inke janam tareek aur waqt bata de


Dada ji ne unhe sab kuch bata diya is waqt tak sabhi ghar wale bhi vahi the pandit ke chehre expretions badalte rahe


Dada ji - kya baat hai sab sahi to hai


Pandit - dekhiye jazmaan bura mat maniyega lekin baat bohut jaruri hai dekhi jazmaan baat darasal yeh hai ki yeh dono bache shaitan kaal mein paida hue hai jis vajha se taa unar inpe shaitan ka saya rahega aur uss saye ki vajha se apke pariwar pe musibaton ka pahad hamesha girta rahega dusri baat yeh dono bache inke mata pita ki marzi ke bina apko bhasha mein unwanted childs hai iss liye is ghar mein inhe kabhi pyar nahi mil payega aur teesri baat yeh hai ki in dono ka apas mein vivah hoga jise aap mein se koi bhi chah kr bhi nahi rok payega


Dada ji - iska koi upay hai pandit ji


Pandit - ek upaye hai jazmaan ja to inko ek dusre se alag kar da ja fir in dono mein se kisi ek ke pran lene honge aap mein se kisi ek ko


Dada ji - yeh to hum nahi karenge aur yeh rahi aap ki dakshina ise lijiye aur bhojan karke parsthan kijiye


Yeh bol kar dada ji hum dono ko apne sath liye apne kamre ki aur chal diye piche se dad bole


Dad - pita ji hume pandit ji ki baat maan leni chahiye kya pata woh such bol rahe ho


Dada ji - ek lafaz nahi aur samjhe tum sab jab tak main zinda hu tab tak to tum log inka kuch nahi kar sakte han mere marne ke baad jo ji mein aye woh kar lena


Room mein ane ke baad dada ji ne darwaza band kar diya dadi pehle se hi bistar pe thi vahan pe unke body kam nahi karti thi kamar ke niche se issi liye woh bed pe rehti thi har waqt dada ji ne unhe har baat batayi jo abhi abhi hui thi


Dadi - to maan lete aap unki baat


Dada ji - tum bhi unhi ka sath dene lagi are yeh dono dekh naadan hai kitne masoom hai tere bacho ki tarha tera dil bhi pathar ho chuka hai tu reh apne bacho ki sangat mein main ja raha hu in dono ke lekar dusre room mein kya bharosa hai tera apne bacho ki baaton mein akar tu hi inka gala na ghont de kahi ab se in dono ko main palunga


Yeh bolke dada ji apne room se nikal gaye dadi piche se unhe awaaze deti rahi fir dada ji ese hi sabhi ghar walo se alag se rehne lage woh ab apna pura waqt dono bacho jani ki hum dono ko dene lage us din ke baad dada ji ne dadi ki bhi kabhi tabiyat tak nahi puchi shayad kafi naraz ho gaye the woh unse


Khair ek waqt aya jab dadi dada ki yeh berukhi sehan na kar payi aur jyada bimar ho gayi jab unko hospital le jaya gya to raste mein hi unho ne dum tod diya


Par pata nhi dada ji ne kesi berukhi ikhtyar ki thi ko unho ne akhiri bar apni patni ka chehra bhi nahi dekha


Iss incident ke baad ghar wale hum dono se nafrat karne lage fir issi vich dad ki car ka accident hua chacha seediyon se gir gaye


1 saal mein kafi kuch hua jo ki hum dono bhai behan ko manhoos thehrane ke liye kafi tha


Ek din ek metting hui pariwar walo ki jismein yeh decide hua ki mujhe maar diya jaye aur meri behan ko yahi rakha jaye jise badi hone pe yeh log apni naukar bana sake ek reason yeh bhi tha ki hum dono bhai behan bachpan mein hi lafi sundar the khaskar Komal uski usi sundarta pe ek insan ka mann dol gya tha ki woh abhi se itni sundar hai ki age jakar kitni hogi ab hawas ke pujari ko umar ka lya laina dena


Khair mujhe marne ka kaam sonpa gya meri chachi ke bhai ko but yahan un logo se ek galti ho gayi kyu unhe mere dada ne hi inke bheja tha ki inke plan ka pata chal sake aur jo chachi ka bhai tha woh acha insan tha aur dada ji ne uski business mein madad ki thi issi liye woh dada ji ki sath de raha tha


Fir woh raat ko mujhe lekar nikal gaye ghar se aur ek dusre shehar mein lejakar mera palan pochan karne lage ab yeh aap logo ne andaza laga hi liya hoga ki kon tha woh insan


Khair mujhe lejane ke baad unho ne in logo se apna har rishta naata tod liya par vahan bhi unke sath bhi kuch esa hua ek do baar ki naa naa karte bhi unko pandit ki baton pe bharosa ho gya aur ek din esa bhi aya ki un logo ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya yahan unse gadbad hui li woh mujhe meri asliyat nahi bata paye the aur na hi maine kabhi unka mann padha tha


Aur age ki kahani apko pata hi hai khair idhar jab Komal 8 saal ki hui dada ji ki bhi death ho gayi par dada ji ne marne se pehle hi apni basiyat bana di par uska abhi kisi ko pata nahi tha


Dheere dheere un logo ne Komal pe julm karne shuru kar diye uska school churwa diya usse ghar ka sara kaam karwane lage jab woh 15 saal ki jab hui to jis insan ki uspe niyat kharab hui thi usne apni onchi harkate karni shuru kar di par woh kaamyab nahi ho paya


Kisi na kisi tarha se hamesha uska koi na koi plan fail ho hi jata par han woh Komal ko kahi na kaho touch jarur karta Komal bechari sehti rahi kyu woh ghar chorh ke jaa bhi nahi sakti thi ek to padhi likhi nahi thi dusra dada ji ne usko bataya tha ki uska ek aur bhai hai aur woh yahan ek na ek din jarur ayega


Waqt beet raha tha apni raftaar se fir woh din aa gya jab in logo ki zindgi mein meri entry fir se hui


#Flashback ends here


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#Present......



"Pata nahi mera bhai zinda bhi hai ja nahi"


Chacha - kya pata uss din ke baad se uski koi khabar hi nahi ayi par jab se yeh Kishan laut ke aya hai tabhi apni kuch logo ko bheja hai maine uska pata lagane ke liye ki us se puch saku ki yeh manhoos zinda kese hai


"Uska jabab main du kya ki zinda kese hu main ya woh log kaha pe hai"


Sab ne awaaz ki taraf dekha aur sahmne wale ko dekh ke sawaliya nazro se dekhne lage
Awesome update Bhai
 

Naik

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Update 46



"akhir esa kab tak chalega bhaiya"


Dad - jab tak hume usse azaadi pane ka tareeka nahi mil jata


Chacha - lekin kab tak bikhariyo jesi halat kar di hai usne humari


Chachi - use agar bachpan mein hi khatam kar diya hota to yeh naubat hi nahi ani thi


Chacha - to tumhara bhai hi leke gya tha na uss manhoos ko maarne ke liye


Chachi - mere bhai ko vich mein mat lao samjhe usne to apna kaam kiya tha pata nahi kese bach gya yeh


# Small Flash back.............


Baat tab ki hai jab main ek saal ke lagh bhag ka tha matlab ki Kishan tab ghar mein kuch ese ese kand hue ki mujhe aur Komal ko manhoos thehra diya gya


Jab in logo se humari masoomiyat ohh sorry sorry manhoosiyat na sahi gayi to in logo ne mujhe marne ka plan bana diya aur Komal ko iss liye zinda rakha ki use ghar ka naukar bana lenge badi hone pe aur vahi inh logo ne kiya


Khair mujh akele ko marne ki vajha thi in logo ke pass


Pehli vajha main Manhoos tha inki nazar mein
Dusri vajha the pandit ji han pandit jab janam hua humara to dada ji ne ek pandit bulaya tha ghar pe


Dada ji - pandit ji yeh mera pota aur poti hai apko inka naam karan karna hai aur kundali banani hai


Pandit - ji jazmaan aap log hume inke janam tareek aur waqt bata de


Dada ji ne unhe sab kuch bata diya is waqt tak sabhi ghar wale bhi vahi the pandit ke chehre expretions badalte rahe


Dada ji - kya baat hai sab sahi to hai


Pandit - dekhiye jazmaan bura mat maniyega lekin baat bohut jaruri hai dekhi jazmaan baat darasal yeh hai ki yeh dono bache shaitan kaal mein paida hue hai jis vajha se taa unar inpe shaitan ka saya rahega aur uss saye ki vajha se apke pariwar pe musibaton ka pahad hamesha girta rahega dusri baat yeh dono bache inke mata pita ki marzi ke bina apko bhasha mein unwanted childs hai iss liye is ghar mein inhe kabhi pyar nahi mil payega aur teesri baat yeh hai ki in dono ka apas mein vivah hoga jise aap mein se koi bhi chah kr bhi nahi rok payega


Dada ji - iska koi upay hai pandit ji


Pandit - ek upaye hai jazmaan ja to inko ek dusre se alag kar da ja fir in dono mein se kisi ek ke pran lene honge aap mein se kisi ek ko


Dada ji - yeh to hum nahi karenge aur yeh rahi aap ki dakshina ise lijiye aur bhojan karke parsthan kijiye


Yeh bol kar dada ji hum dono ko apne sath liye apne kamre ki aur chal diye piche se dad bole


Dad - pita ji hume pandit ji ki baat maan leni chahiye kya pata woh such bol rahe ho


Dada ji - ek lafaz nahi aur samjhe tum sab jab tak main zinda hu tab tak to tum log inka kuch nahi kar sakte han mere marne ke baad jo ji mein aye woh kar lena


Room mein ane ke baad dada ji ne darwaza band kar diya dadi pehle se hi bistar pe thi vahan pe unke body kam nahi karti thi kamar ke niche se issi liye woh bed pe rehti thi har waqt dada ji ne unhe har baat batayi jo abhi abhi hui thi


Dadi - to maan lete aap unki baat


Dada ji - tum bhi unhi ka sath dene lagi are yeh dono dekh naadan hai kitne masoom hai tere bacho ki tarha tera dil bhi pathar ho chuka hai tu reh apne bacho ki sangat mein main ja raha hu in dono ke lekar dusre room mein kya bharosa hai tera apne bacho ki baaton mein akar tu hi inka gala na ghont de kahi ab se in dono ko main palunga


Yeh bolke dada ji apne room se nikal gaye dadi piche se unhe awaaze deti rahi fir dada ji ese hi sabhi ghar walo se alag se rehne lage woh ab apna pura waqt dono bacho jani ki hum dono ko dene lage us din ke baad dada ji ne dadi ki bhi kabhi tabiyat tak nahi puchi shayad kafi naraz ho gaye the woh unse


Khair ek waqt aya jab dadi dada ki yeh berukhi sehan na kar payi aur jyada bimar ho gayi jab unko hospital le jaya gya to raste mein hi unho ne dum tod diya


Par pata nhi dada ji ne kesi berukhi ikhtyar ki thi ko unho ne akhiri bar apni patni ka chehra bhi nahi dekha


Iss incident ke baad ghar wale hum dono se nafrat karne lage fir issi vich dad ki car ka accident hua chacha seediyon se gir gaye


1 saal mein kafi kuch hua jo ki hum dono bhai behan ko manhoos thehrane ke liye kafi tha


Ek din ek metting hui pariwar walo ki jismein yeh decide hua ki mujhe maar diya jaye aur meri behan ko yahi rakha jaye jise badi hone pe yeh log apni naukar bana sake ek reason yeh bhi tha ki hum dono bhai behan bachpan mein hi lafi sundar the khaskar Komal uski usi sundarta pe ek insan ka mann dol gya tha ki woh abhi se itni sundar hai ki age jakar kitni hogi ab hawas ke pujari ko umar ka lya laina dena


Khair mujhe marne ka kaam sonpa gya meri chachi ke bhai ko but yahan un logo se ek galti ho gayi kyu unhe mere dada ne hi inke bheja tha ki inke plan ka pata chal sake aur jo chachi ka bhai tha woh acha insan tha aur dada ji ne uski business mein madad ki thi issi liye woh dada ji ki sath de raha tha


Fir woh raat ko mujhe lekar nikal gaye ghar se aur ek dusre shehar mein lejakar mera palan pochan karne lage ab yeh aap logo ne andaza laga hi liya hoga ki kon tha woh insan


Khair mujhe lejane ke baad unho ne in logo se apna har rishta naata tod liya par vahan bhi unke sath bhi kuch esa hua ek do baar ki naa naa karte bhi unko pandit ki baton pe bharosa ho gya aur ek din esa bhi aya ki un logo ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya yahan unse gadbad hui li woh mujhe meri asliyat nahi bata paye the aur na hi maine kabhi unka mann padha tha


Aur age ki kahani apko pata hi hai khair idhar jab Komal 8 saal ki hui dada ji ki bhi death ho gayi par dada ji ne marne se pehle hi apni basiyat bana di par uska abhi kisi ko pata nahi tha


Dheere dheere un logo ne Komal pe julm karne shuru kar diye uska school churwa diya usse ghar ka sara kaam karwane lage jab woh 15 saal ki jab hui to jis insan ki uspe niyat kharab hui thi usne apni onchi harkate karni shuru kar di par woh kaamyab nahi ho paya


Kisi na kisi tarha se hamesha uska koi na koi plan fail ho hi jata par han woh Komal ko kahi na kaho touch jarur karta Komal bechari sehti rahi kyu woh ghar chorh ke jaa bhi nahi sakti thi ek to padhi likhi nahi thi dusra dada ji ne usko bataya tha ki uska ek aur bhai hai aur woh yahan ek na ek din jarur ayega


Waqt beet raha tha apni raftaar se fir woh din aa gya jab in logo ki zindgi mein meri entry fir se hui


#Flashback ends here


(Flashback jyada nai khicha maine buddies bcoz bore lagta)



#Present......



"Pata nahi mera bhai zinda bhi hai ja nahi"


Chacha - kya pata uss din ke baad se uski koi khabar hi nahi ayi par jab se yeh Kishan laut ke aya hai tabhi apni kuch logo ko bheja hai maine uska pata lagane ke liye ki us se puch saku ki yeh manhoos zinda kese hai


"Uska jabab main du kya ki zinda kese hu main ya woh log kaha pe hai"


Sab ne awaaz ki taraf dekha aur sahmne wale ko dekh ke sawaliya nazro se dekhne lage
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Update 1st

Ek ladki bohat gusse mein thi aur sahmne khade ladke ko dant rahi thi
Woh kafi unche sawar mein chilla rahi thi
Esa lagta hai ki koi ghar mein nahi hai

Ladki - mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna gir jaoge aur itni ghatiya harkat karoge

Ladka -(rote hue) meri baat suno plz maine esa kuch nahi kiya

Ladki - mujhe kuch nahi sunna mujhe nahi pata tha tum mujhe mere pyar ka yeh sila doge ghinn ati hai mujhe tum per itni neech harkat karte hue tumhe jara c bhi sharam nahi ayi

Ladka - lekin maine esa kuch nahi kiya di

Tabhi chaaaatttaaakkkkk ki awaz ayi


Us ladki ne ladke khich ke tamacha mara

Ladki - mat keh mujhe apni gandi juban se di mar gya aaj se tu mere liye samjha

Aur isi ke sath woh us room se nikal gayi aur woh ladka use rokne ke liye uske piche gya par tab tak woh ladki apne room mein jake darwaza band kar chuki thi

Ladka bahar se use pukarta raha

Ladka - di meri baat suno plz
Di ek bar meri baat sunlo plz

Aur isi ke sath uski sanse ukhadne lagi
Aur woh lambi lambi sanse lene laga aur uski ankhen band hone lagi par pata nahi kaha se ek dam uske chehre pe pani ki bunde girne lagi aur uski band hoti ankhen khul gayi
Aur woh ek dam se uth ke baith gya

Woh is waqt apne room mein apne bed par tha
Tabhi uski nazar sahmne khadi ladki par padti hai

Ladki pyar se uske sar pe hath pherne lagi
Aur use gale laga liya

Ladki - phir se woh sapna aya tum bhul kyu ni jate woh sab woh sab beeti hui batein hai

(Note:- sapne wali ladki aur yeh hakikat wali ladki dono alag alag hai inke characters waqt ane pe pata chalenge)

Ladka - didi kya karu woh sab bhula hi ni jata di ki woh batein aaj bhi yaad ati hai aur mera dil cheer deti hai jab ki meri koi galti bhi nahi thi

Aur woh ladka rone laga

Ladki - betu chup hoja dekh rote nahi hai aur tune apni begunahi sabit kar di thi na fir kyu un sab baton ko yaad karte ho

Ladka - didi un logo ne ek bar bhi meri baat nahi suni thi aur jo jo batein unho ne kahi woh sab aaj bhi iss dil ko tar tar kar deti hai

Ladki - (baat badlte hue) chal chodh ready hoja mujhe bhi der ho rahi hai office jana hai

Ladka - ok di

Ladki - acha yeh bata aaj college jaoge ya office ana hai

Ladka - di aaj college jaunga do din ho gaye hai

Ladki ne pyar se uske hotho pe halke se chuma aur usse alag ho gayi

Ladka -(chidte hue) di apko kitni bar bola hai yahan pe kissi mat kiya karo

Ladki - kyu main karungi akhir mera itna cute sa bhai jo hai

Aur ek baar aur ek hotho ko pyar se chum liya
Is baar ladka ek takiya utha ke use marne hi wala tha ki woh ladki vahan se haste hue bhag gayi aur woh ladka bhi muskurate hue bathroom mein ghuss gya

Woh ladki niche jake kitchen mein ghus gayi aur nashte ki tyari karne lagi kuch der mein woh ladka bhi ready hoke aa gya Aur dinnig table ke pass ake chair pe baith gya

Kuch der mein woh ladki khana leke aa gayi ek plate mein khana serve karke woh us ladke ki goad mein hi baith gayi

Yeh inka roz ka tha phir woh apne hatho se us ladke ko khilane lagi aur woh ladka bhi kuch der mein un dono ka khana finish ho gya

Ladka - didi aap itni badi ho gayi ho fir bhi meri goad mein baith jati ho

Ladki - to kya hua meri marzi main chahe yahan bhi baithu tumhe isse kya

Ladka - plz ese mat kiya karo azeeb sa feel hota hai

Ladki uske face ke kreeb apna face lekar jate hue in sexy voice

Ladki - kya ajeeb sa feel hota hai jara mujhe bhi batao

Aur yeh bolke usne apne hoth kate jisse us ladke ki hawa tight ho gayi

Ladka - d..d..di...didi p.p..plz hame der ho ri hai

Aur woh jaldi se apni didi ko side karke bahar ki aur bhagne laga aur woh ladki vahan khade hoke jor se hasne lagi

Fir kuch der baad muskurate hue boli apne aap se

Ladki - bhai yahi vajha hai ki mere dil mein tumhare liye pyar din wa din badhta ja raha hai itni line dene ke baad bhi tumne ab tak mujh se esi vesi harkat karne ki sochi bhi nahi I Love You bhai I really Very Love you i will wait for you for my whole life

Aur yeh bolke woh bhi office ke liye nikal gayi
Aur in dono ke jane ke baad piche se nokar ake ghar ki saaf safayi bagera karne lage
Yeh unka roz ka routine tha raat ko sara kam nipta ke sare nokar servent quatars mein chale jate the aur subha in dono ke jane ke baad aa jate the

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Door kisi shehar mein 4 log dinnig table pe baithe the sab log shanti se khana kha rahe the in mein ek mard tha ek aurat aur do ladkia thi

Itne mein Aurat boli

Aurat - Meera beta Kishan se baat hui kya tumhari

Meera - han hui thi na kal raat ko hi hui thi aur aap ke liye ek buri khabar hai ki woh zinda hai

Dusri ladki - Meera badon se baat karne ka tareeka bhul gayi ho kya

Meera - ufffff haye dar gayi main to darasal baat yeh hai miss Megha Singhania main badon se baat ni kar rahi balki main to apne bhai ke gunhegaro se baat kar rahi hu

Megha - (gusse mein) bs bohat hua tumhara manti hu ki woh hamari galti thi par

Meera - (bhadkte hue uski baat vich mein katte hue) par kya? han par kya? Aap ko aaj bhi apni galti ka ehsas nahi hai ab to aap logo se mujhe baat karne ka bhi mann ni karta padhe likhe gawar

Aur itna bol ke woh vahan se uth gayi aur bahar nikal gayi vahan baithe bakki teeno Megha, aurat aur woh mard bs nam akhen liye baithe the Meera ki baaton ne unhe dard pohanchaya tha

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Intro time

Abhay Singhania - yeh india ke ek jane mane bussinessman hai hero Kishan ke papa

Avantika Singhania - yeh hero ko maa hai aur housewife hai

Megha Singhania - yeh Hero ki badi behan hai nature ki thodi se garam hai par aaj kal yeh apni ki gayi galti ki vajha se akeli si rehne lagi hai yeh is waqt M.B.A. last year mein hai

Kishan Singhania - yeh Hero shant subhaw ka par jab gussa ata hai out of control ho jata hai aur Aaj kal Yeh dusre city mein rehta hai ghar walo se naraz hai bas apni choti behan ko chodh ke aur woh iski jaan hai dono mein bohat pyar hai

Meera - yeh Hero ki choti behan hai ek dam cute aur natkhat par jab se Hero ne ghar chodha hai tab se isne shararate band kardi hai bas tab hi masti karti hai jab iska bhai iske pass hota hai

One more main character

Pihu Gupta - yeh vahi ladki hai jise Kishan didi bula raha tha yeh Kishan ki muh boli behan hai iska Kishan ke ilava duniya mein aur koi bhi nahi hai kuch saal pehle iske papa aur mummy ki death ho gayi thi tab Kishan ne hi ise sambhala tha han kuch rishtedar hai Pihu ke jo samay pe ayenge par Pihu ke bure waqt mein unho ne uska sath nahi diya tha bas ek cousin ko chodh ke




Bakki aur bohat se character hai jo age ayenge to sath bane rahe an give me support
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Pihu se bhag ke Kishan bahar ake jaldi se bike pe baith ke college ke liye nikal gya
Aur Pihu haste hue apne office ke liye chali gayi

Kishan apne college ki aur badha ja raha tha
Aur uske chehre pe ek badi wali smile thi
Aur woh khud se batein kar raha tha

Kishan - yeh didi bhi na hadd kar deti hai ese behave karti hai jese main unka bf hu har waqt kiss karne ka bahana dhundti hai unhe jyada gusse se kuch keh bhi nahi sakta kyu ki na to unka mere sivha koi aur hai aur na hi Meera aur didi ke ilava mera koi aur hai inke door jane ja ruthne ka main soch bhi nahi sakta

Aur kuch pal ke liye uske chehre pe sadness aa gayi par fir se usne in baton se khud ko nikala aur smile karne laga


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Idhar ek college mein kuch seniors freshers ki raging kar rahe the

Ek group mein abhi kafi jald bazi thi

L - are jaldi karo jitne logo ki raging kar sako karlo aaj Kishan aa raha hai college mein

Chamcha 1 - ane bhai use aap usse utna darte kyu

C2 - han bhai woh akela hai aur ham kitne hai

L - chup maro salo tum sab uske sahmne cheenti saman ho bhul gaye kya jab woh nya nya aya tha college mein to usne kis tarha Arvind ki band bajayi thi aur uske baad kabhi Arvind college mein nahi dikha

C3 - bhai woh din kese bhul sakte hai uske baad takreeban sabhi ki faat gayi thi koi bhi college mein galat kam nahi karta tha air aaj bhi sab ka vahi haal hai

C2 - bhai aap bade bhai se bolke luch karbao uska

Chhhhaaatttaaaakkkkkk


Leader ne use thapad mara aur bola


L - abe eda hai kya agar bhai ne kuch kiya to ham dono bhaio ka iss city se dana pani band ho jayeha samjha nikal ja ab hamre gand se chal bhaag


Itne mein ek dusra group ek ladki ki raging le raha tha iss group mein 5 boys the aur 3 girls

G1 - chalo ladki apna intro do

Ladki - (darte hue) ji mera name Mahi hai
Aur main iss college mein bca 1st year mein hu

Ladka 1 - what is your size?

Mahi - (gusse se) what rubbish? Tameez nahi hai kya

G2 - size hi to pucha hai ismein tameez wali baat kaha se ayi

Mahi - itna hi shonk hai to khud ko bata do ise

Ladka 2 - juban kuch jyada ni chalti tumhari

Mahi - hath bhi chalte hai chalau kya

Ladka 5 - (jo ki shayad leader tha inka) haye janeman teekhi mirchi ho chakhne ka maza ayega yeh ko mera address raat ko yahan pe aa jana fir puri raat jannat ki sair karvayenge

Itna bol woh aur uske sathi hasne lage
Aur Mahi ne gusse mein ladke 5 ke chehre pe chanta marna chaha par usne usse pehle hi hath pakad liya

Yeh scene kuch der pehle wala Leader aur uske chamche dekh rahe the


C1 - bhai yeh peetenge aaj

L - sahi kaha iss MLA ke londe mein kuch jyada hi akad hai aaj nikal jayegi iski sari hekdi ane use


Usne abhi itna hi bola tha ki gate se ek ladka chilaya

Ladka - Kishan aa raha hai sab log sahi se behave karo

Yeh khabar sunte hi jo log raging kar rahe the sab ache bache ban gaye par canteen tak yeh baat nahi pohnchi

Aur idhar Ladka 5 ne abi tak Mahi ka hath pakad rakha tha

G1 - Rahul chodh Kishan aa raha

Ladka 1 - to ane do aaj usse do do jath ho hi jayen

G2 - pagal ho gaye ho kya tum log bhul gaye kya usne Arvind uske chamcho aur Arvind ke bhai ki kya halat ki thi

Ladka 4 - hame sab kuch yaad hai par aaj ham usse uski aukat dikha ke rahenge


Tabhi college ke gate se Kishan ki aur uske bike ki entry hui

G3 use dekh ke apni dono sathi se

G3 - chalo ham teeno chalti hai in pancho se hospital mein mil lenge chalo jaldo verna hame bhi hospital mein jana padega kyu ki uske piche hi Esha aa rahi hai jaldi chalo

Uske baad woh teeno vahan se 9+2=11 ho gayi

Kishan ne bhi yeh sara scene door se hi dekh liya Kishan ne bike seedha us aur badha ki

(Bc lagta hai baap ka college hai sala compound mein bike ghusa li)

Kishan ne seedha jake vahan break lagaye aur utarte hi Rahul ko thappad pad gya aur woh Mahi ka hath chodh ke gir gya

Iss vajha se Kishan ki hassi chut gayi

Kishan - abe bc tu to ek hi thappad mein gir gya kya yaar ladki ka hath pakad abi tak to ek mard bana hua tha ab kya hua:lotpot:

Rahul - (khade hote hue) yeh tune acha nahi kiya Kishan mujhe thappad maar ke aaj tu nahi ja main nahi

Kishan - are o bable koi acha se dialogue mar yaar

Rahul - sale main dialogue nahi marunga sirf teri haddi pasli todunga

Kishan - to itni der se bakwas kyu kar raha hai seedha se fight kar deemag ka bhajipala kahe ko kar raha

Ladka 4 - tum kuch jyada hi uchal rahe ho jante ho iske pita ji kon hai

Kishan - vahi ghisa peeta dialogue janta hu iss aur iske baap ko iska name Rahul hai aur iska baap hai yahan ka Mojuda MLA...
Ab time waste mat karo action ka time ho raha hai aur han class ka bhi

Ladka 2 - bhai lagta hai usko iski aukat dikhani padegi

Kishan - to aaj jao yaar kitni bak bak karoge


Yeh sabhi ek dusre ki aur badhe hi the ki teen awazein ek sath ayi

"Time please listen"




Sawal - kon hai yeh teen log?
Kyu roka inho ne un sab ko?
Akhir kya vajha hai?
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Abhi Kishan aur Rahul aur uski team abi ek dusre ki taraf badhe hi the ki teen awaz ek sath ayi

"Time Please And Listen Please"

Woh sabhi kuch pal ke liye ruke
Aur awaz ki taraf dekha yeh awaaz thi Kishan ke teen dosto ki Arun Esha aur Nitin ki

Kishan - kya hua kyu roka yaar bohat din baad hath ki khujli mitane ko mili hai

Esha - are are sweat heart maine hamne kab roka?

Kishan - abi to roka yaar vich mein tapak ke

Nitin - are rukja tau woh to ham logo ne tere ko iss liye roka kyu ki yeh ladki yahan khadi hai kahi tum logo ke lafde mein is ko chot na lag jaye

Kishan - are baap re apun to yeh socha hi nahi

Arun - (ladki se) chaliye madam side mein khade hoke is scene ka maza lijiye (fir Kishan se) you please carry on

Aur woh teeno us ladki ko leke side ho gaye aur ek bench pe baith gaye aur Arun ne apne bag se popcorn nikal liye jo woh hamesha apne pass rakhta tha

Fir Kishan aur Rahul aur uski team ek sath bheed gaye ab Kishan Akela aur woh Panch

(Galat hai na yaar ek akele ke sath 5 log ab to sab ki maa chhooooo...

Kishan - abe oye ghunchu rukja kahe ko gali nikal ra maa bhen ki bhutni ke maa bhen sab ki ek hoti hai

Third person - sorry dude just mistaken

Kishan - ok ok chal bohat deemag kharab kar liya in logo ka chal abe scene dikha inko aur mera bhi mood mat kharab kar fighting ka chal re khujli ho rahi hai
Aaaahhhhhh abe sale marva diya na kute ne piche se mara re chal nikal yahan se main khud bataunga ab

Third person - main lout ke aunga

Kishan - han re main khud bula lunga chal nikal ab patli gali se


Now the point view of Kishan)

Main aur Rahul ki team bhid chuke the woh log hamla kiye ja rahe the aur main block kiye ja raha tha

Udhar se Nitin bola

Nitin - abe Kishan Jaldi khatam kar class ka waqt hone wala hai

Kishan - ok


Ab tak main normally chal rah tha per ab time ki shortage thi
Fir main ab attacking ke mode pe aa gya
Jisko jo chahiye woh diya jani ki laat ghusa

Sab se pehle ladka 1 gira fir no 4 uske baad no 2 ne dhul chati aur fir turn ayi No 3 ki aur iske jabde pe yeh padi ek jor dar laat:lotpot: sala do palti khake muh ke bal gira aur ab postion thi muh jameen pe aur pond(g**d) hawa mein jani ki doggy style

(Third person - koi ladko ka deewana hai to iski maar sakta hai:lotpot:

Kishan - tu fir se tapak gya bc maine kaha tha main tujhe khud bulaunga

Third person - ghanta bc sare action scrne ki maa behan ek kardi hat yahan se mujhe batane de xhutiya kahi ka

Kishan - fuck off:angry+:

Third person view)

sabhi uski halat pe hass rahe hai idhar Rahul aag babula ho raha tha kyu ki uski team ki waat lagi padi thi

Ab baat yahan izzat pe aa gayi thi to usne apni pocket se choti gun nikal li

(Ab bc MLA ka beta hai ese xhutiya khilone to rakhega hu but bull shit use na kar payega)

Aur Yeh padi uske jabde pe ek jordar laat aur Rahul sahib Dhool chat rahe hai hua yu ki jese hi usne apni pocket se gun nikali Kishan ne dekh liya aur Bijli ki furti se use ek spin kick lagayi jo ki thodi jor se lagi aur Rahul behosh

(Kaha tha na bc use na kar payega sala har kisi ke bas ka thodi na hai)

Kishan ne kisi ko phone kiya aur use kuch samjhaya fir woh apni team ke sath canteen ki aur chal diya

(Are ruko jyada neeche mat jana yahan ka ek scene bakki hai to padho)

Yeh log jese hi canteen ko chal pade to Rahul jo ki behosh hone ki acting kar raha tha usne sar utha ke dekha to Mahi ne peeche mud ke use thumbs up kiya aur Idhar se Rahul ne bhi use thumbs up kiya aur dono ke chehre pe ek smile thi

(Matlab bhisi koi plan bnaya tha kya in logo ne
Aur iss Kishan ko pata bhi nahi chala abe Kishan Chehra padh Mahi ka abe sun

Lo bhaio yeh na sunne wala jab kameene ko jhagdna hota hai aa jata hai)

Canteen mein abi tak bahar ke jhagde ki bhanak tak na lagi thi aur yahan bhi ragging chalu thi aur entry hui Esha aur Kishan ki first table pe jo ki gate ke pass hi tha uspe ek ladki ladko raging kar rahi thi

Esha ne uske sar pe tapli mar ke apne hath ki khujli mitayi bs itna kafi tha ki vahan raging karne walo ko apne hatho aur peron(feets) ki pad gayi aur sabhi jo seniors the apne apne jutte sar pe rakh ke bhagne lage sirf ache seniors ko chodh ke

Aur sabhi juniors khush ho gaye yeh pancho bhi apni table pe baith gaye jaa kar
Pehle yeh 4 logo ka table hota tha aaj panch logo ka hai kyu ki Mahi bhi baithi hai
Nice update
 
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