Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

[Lovingheart]

Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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[Luffy]

Update 45



" love you so much aapne aaj mujhe kafi sakoon diya hai"

Iss waqt mein apni biwiyon ke pass aya hua yha family ko kaam pe laga ke aur iss waqt sabhi khush thi aur unkk vahi khushi dekhne waya tha main

Main - vaada kiya tha tumse ki har ek dard ka hisab hoga unse shuruwat kar di hai maine

Komal - apne aaj mujhe bohat badi khushi de di hai

Main - yeh to abhi shuruwat hai age age dekho hota hai kya chalo abi main ja raha hu vapis jab bhi jarurat ho to muje bs yaad karna aa jaunga tabhi kr tabhi


Yeh bolke main vahan se aa gya is waqt mom chachi prachi aur aarti ghar ku saaf safayi kar rahi thi aur chacha dad aur piyush bahar ki safayi kar rahi thi

Main - i like it mrs Rajput kafi acha kaam kar rahi ho tum mujhe to laga tha sikhana padega sab kuch but it's quite impressive

Mom - yeh tum jo bhi kar rahe ho theak nahi hai

Main - ab yeh theak galat ka farak aap sikhayegi mujhe Mrs Rajput jinho ne 20 saal tak ek bechari ladki pe jurm kiya apne ek bete ko marne ke liye fhenk diya

Mom - tum dono hi manhoos ho ek manhoos ghadi mein tum dono ko janam diya tha maine aur uski galti ka aaj nateeja bhugat rahi hu main

Main - wah sahi hai maza khud lo aur dosh humpe sahi hai sahi hai khair ab jab hisab ho hi raha hai to sab hisan hoga acha to ladies listen tumhare jitne bhi kapde hai sab ke sab bahar guard ko pakda do aur bol do ki daan kar de tum logo ko to ab un kapdo ki jarurat nahi padegi

Mere itna bolte hi sabhi un rooms mein chali gayi jo jo unke the pehle fir kapde le ayi sabhi un sab ka apni body pe bilkul bhi control nahi tha

Prachi - (jate jate boli) kuch to humara humare paas rehne do kamse kam kapde to rehne do humare

Main - yaad hai meri Komal ke paas tum logo ne kapde bhi nahi chorhe the fate purane jo kapde hote the woh dete the tum log use to tum logo ne kese umeed ki mujh se ki tum logo ko vip treatment milega jao ab jaldi kaam pura karo koi bakchodi nahi chahiye mujhe

Uske baad sabhi ne lunch time tak sara ghar saaf kar diya bahar se bhi aur ander se bhi

Tabhi maine taali bajayi to ek khubsoorat se ladki ghar ke ander ayi mere paas

Ladki - ji sir

Main - Diya in logo pe har waqt nazar rakhna aur yeh lo chabuk jab bhi koi galti kare to har ek pe barsana theak hai

Diya - ji sir


Aarti - tum esa nahi kar sakte humare sath hum tumhari batein maan to rahe hai

Tabhi Diya ne aarti ko chabuk se marna shuru kar diya aur arti chilane lagi baki koi use bachane ke liye age bhi na aa paye sab bs mayushi se uski taraf dekhte rahe aur unki ankhein nam ho gayi

Main - main tum sab ka malik hu samjh gayi to tum sab abse mujh se tu tadak karke baat karne ki sochna bhi mat aur aap bolna sikhlo ya fir maalik kya samjhe sab

Mom - beta....

Main - (bich mein tokte hue) beta nahi malik ek bar mein samjh jao verna Diya damjahyegi fir aur koi behas nahi chahiye mujhe ispe sabhi ladies jakar lunch banao bhukh lagi hai mujhe aur sabhi gents bahar jakar gadiyon ki dhulayi karenge u may leave now


Sabhi - ji

Sabhi apne apne kaam pe lag gaye aaj mujhe bohat sakoon mil raha tha inko saza dekar

Main - chalo thodi masti kar li jaye vese Esha se thoda sa romance kar leta hu "Esha" 5 mint mein mere room mein aao yahan bhi ho

Esha - ji malik



Aur main apne room mein chala gya aur bed pe lait gya kuch hi seconds mein Esha mere sahmne thi office ke dress mein

Main- kesi ho Esha

Esha - main achi hu malik

Main - kahi busy thi kya

Esha - ji malik woh humare naye clients ke sath meeting mein thi

Main - vich mein chorh ayi kya

Esha - ji kyu apse jaruri nahi hai kuch

Main - esa karo meeting complete kar lo jakar fir free hokar aa jana mere paas kuch baat karenge

Esha - ji malik

Uske baad Esha chali gayi aur apun khud se batein karne laga


Main - vese sala main abi loch hi karne wala tha na reader log kya sochenge ki 4-4 biwi hone ke baad bhi Esha se romance woh kya hai na bheedu log ab kya hi kar sakta hu black powers hai unka kuch to side effect hoga hi na ab jab tak tapa tap nahi kiya tha tab tak to theak tha ab 3-3 biwion se chudai kar chuka hu to ab mere ander aag bhadak chuki hai use to shanta karna hi padega na bs issi liye khair i think yeh side effect ap sab ko acha hi lagega

Takreeban 1 ghante baad table pe khana lag gya maine aram se khana khaya baith kar Diya bhi mere sath hi baithi thi mere kehne pr Khane se free hokar maine Sab ko bola

Main - humne to khana kha liya ab tum sab bhi khana kha lo par yahan nahi bahar laawn mein maat bicha kar


Yeh bolke maine uth ke Diya ke sath hall mein aa gya vahi kitchen mein


Prachi - mummy ab tak ki zindgi kitne aram se bitayi hai humne par kal se humari zindgi bilkul ulat gayi

Aarti - mera to pura badan dukha raha hai itna kaam karke aur kohde kha kar pata nahi kab khatam hoga yeh sab

Chachi - beta har kisi ka din ata hai aaj iska hai kal firse humara hoga Bs kuch waqt ese hi haste haste bita do

Yeh teeno to batein kar rahi par Mom apni soch mein gum thi kya soch rahi thi woh ane wale updates mein clear ho jayega kyu ki yeh soch age age badhti ja rahi thi

Nice update bro

 

[Lovingheart]

Nice update bro

Thanks bhai

 

[Bilal jan]

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update...

 

[Lovingheart]

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update...

Thanks bhai

Jaldi milenge bhidu aaj hi

 

[seirapapa]

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[Lovingheart]

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Sham tak

 

[Lovingheart]

Posting

 

[Lovingheart]

Update 46



"akhir esa kab tak chalega bhaiya"


Dad - jab tak hume usse azaadi pane ka tareeka nahi mil jata


Chacha - lekin kab tak bikhariyo jesi halat kar di hai usne humari


Chachi - use agar bachpan mein hi khatam kar diya hota to yeh naubat hi nahi ani thi


Chacha - to tumhara bhai hi leke gya tha na uss manhoos ko maarne ke liye


Chachi - mere bhai ko vich mein mat lao samjhe usne to apna kaam kiya tha pata nahi kese bach gya yeh


# Small Flash back.............


Baat tab ki hai jab main ek saal ke lagh bhag ka tha matlab ki Kishan tab ghar mein kuch ese ese kand hue ki mujhe aur Komal ko manhoos thehra diya gya


Jab in logo se humari masoomiyat ohh sorry sorry manhoosiyat na sahi gayi to in logo ne mujhe marne ka plan bana diya aur Komal ko iss liye zinda rakha ki use ghar ka naukar bana lenge badi hone pe aur vahi inh logo ne kiya


Khair mujh akele ko marne ki vajha thi in logo ke pass


Pehli vajha main Manhoos tha inki nazar mein
Dusri vajha the pandit ji han pandit jab janam hua humara to dada ji ne ek pandit bulaya tha ghar pe


Dada ji - pandit ji yeh mera pota aur poti hai apko inka naam karan karna hai aur kundali banani hai


Pandit - ji jazmaan aap log hume inke janam tareek aur waqt bata de


Dada ji ne unhe sab kuch bata diya is waqt tak sabhi ghar wale bhi vahi the pandit ke chehre expretions badalte rahe


Dada ji - kya baat hai sab sahi to hai


Pandit - dekhiye jazmaan bura mat maniyega lekin baat bohut jaruri hai dekhi jazmaan baat darasal yeh hai ki yeh dono bache shaitan kaal mein paida hue hai jis vajha se taa unar inpe shaitan ka saya rahega aur uss saye ki vajha se apke pariwar pe musibaton ka pahad hamesha girta rahega dusri baat yeh dono bache inke mata pita ki marzi ke bina apko bhasha mein unwanted childs hai iss liye is ghar mein inhe kabhi pyar nahi mil payega aur teesri baat yeh hai ki in dono ka apas mein vivah hoga jise aap mein se koi bhi chah kr bhi nahi rok payega


Dada ji - iska koi upay hai pandit ji


Pandit - ek upaye hai jazmaan ja to inko ek dusre se alag kar da ja fir in dono mein se kisi ek ke pran lene honge aap mein se kisi ek ko


Dada ji - yeh to hum nahi karenge aur yeh rahi aap ki dakshina ise lijiye aur bhojan karke parsthan kijiye


Yeh bol kar dada ji hum dono ko apne sath liye apne kamre ki aur chal diye piche se dad bole


Dad - pita ji hume pandit ji ki baat maan leni chahiye kya pata woh such bol rahe ho


Dada ji - ek lafaz nahi aur samjhe tum sab jab tak main zinda hu tab tak to tum log inka kuch nahi kar sakte han mere marne ke baad jo ji mein aye woh kar lena


Room mein ane ke baad dada ji ne darwaza band kar diya dadi pehle se hi bistar pe thi vahan pe unke body kam nahi karti thi kamar ke niche se issi liye woh bed pe rehti thi har waqt dada ji ne unhe har baat batayi jo abhi abhi hui thi


Dadi - to maan lete aap unki baat


Dada ji - tum bhi unhi ka sath dene lagi are yeh dono dekh naadan hai kitne masoom hai tere bacho ki tarha tera dil bhi pathar ho chuka hai tu reh apne bacho ki sangat mein main ja raha hu in dono ke lekar dusre room mein kya bharosa hai tera apne bacho ki baaton mein akar tu hi inka gala na ghont de kahi ab se in dono ko main palunga


Yeh bolke dada ji apne room se nikal gaye dadi piche se unhe awaaze deti rahi fir dada ji ese hi sabhi ghar walo se alag se rehne lage woh ab apna pura waqt dono bacho jani ki hum dono ko dene lage us din ke baad dada ji ne dadi ki bhi kabhi tabiyat tak nahi puchi shayad kafi naraz ho gaye the woh unse


Khair ek waqt aya jab dadi dada ki yeh berukhi sehan na kar payi aur jyada bimar ho gayi jab unko hospital le jaya gya to raste mein hi unho ne dum tod diya


Par pata nhi dada ji ne kesi berukhi ikhtyar ki thi ko unho ne akhiri bar apni patni ka chehra bhi nahi dekha


Iss incident ke baad ghar wale hum dono se nafrat karne lage fir issi vich dad ki car ka accident hua chacha seediyon se gir gaye


1 saal mein kafi kuch hua jo ki hum dono bhai behan ko manhoos thehrane ke liye kafi tha


Ek din ek metting hui pariwar walo ki jismein yeh decide hua ki mujhe maar diya jaye aur meri behan ko yahi rakha jaye jise badi hone pe yeh log apni naukar bana sake ek reason yeh bhi tha ki hum dono bhai behan bachpan mein hi lafi sundar the khaskar Komal uski usi sundarta pe ek insan ka mann dol gya tha ki woh abhi se itni sundar hai ki age jakar kitni hogi ab hawas ke pujari ko umar ka lya laina dena


Khair mujhe marne ka kaam sonpa gya meri chachi ke bhai ko but yahan un logo se ek galti ho gayi kyu unhe mere dada ne hi inke bheja tha ki inke plan ka pata chal sake aur jo chachi ka bhai tha woh acha insan tha aur dada ji ne uski business mein madad ki thi issi liye woh dada ji ki sath de raha tha


Fir woh raat ko mujhe lekar nikal gaye ghar se aur ek dusre shehar mein lejakar mera palan pochan karne lage ab yeh aap logo ne andaza laga hi liya hoga ki kon tha woh insan


Khair mujhe lejane ke baad unho ne in logo se apna har rishta naata tod liya par vahan bhi unke sath bhi kuch esa hua ek do baar ki naa naa karte bhi unko pandit ki baton pe bharosa ho gya aur ek din esa bhi aya ki un logo ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya yahan unse gadbad hui li woh mujhe meri asliyat nahi bata paye the aur na hi maine kabhi unka mann padha tha


Aur age ki kahani apko pata hi hai khair idhar jab Komal 8 saal ki hui dada ji ki bhi death ho gayi par dada ji ne marne se pehle hi apni basiyat bana di par uska abhi kisi ko pata nahi tha


Dheere dheere un logo ne Komal pe julm karne shuru kar diye uska school churwa diya usse ghar ka sara kaam karwane lage jab woh 15 saal ki jab hui to jis insan ki uspe niyat kharab hui thi usne apni onchi harkate karni shuru kar di par woh kaamyab nahi ho paya


Kisi na kisi tarha se hamesha uska koi na koi plan fail ho hi jata par han woh Komal ko kahi na kaho touch jarur karta Komal bechari sehti rahi kyu woh ghar chorh ke jaa bhi nahi sakti thi ek to padhi likhi nahi thi dusra dada ji ne usko bataya tha ki uska ek aur bhai hai aur woh yahan ek na ek din jarur ayega


Waqt beet raha tha apni raftaar se fir woh din aa gya jab in logo ki zindgi mein meri entry fir se hui


#Flashback ends here


(Flashback jyada nai khicha maine buddies bcoz bore lagta)



#Present......



"Pata nahi mera bhai zinda bhi hai ja nahi"


Chacha - kya pata uss din ke baad se uski koi khabar hi nahi ayi par jab se yeh Kishan laut ke aya hai tabhi apni kuch logo ko bheja hai maine uska pata lagane ke liye ki us se puch saku ki yeh manhoos zinda kese hai


"Uska jabab main du kya ki zinda kese hu main ya woh log kaha pe hai"


Sab ne awaaz ki taraf dekha aur sahmne wale ko dekh ke sawaliya nazro se dekhne lage

 

[Lovingheart]

Update Posted

 

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