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Introduction

Dadaji: Thakur PrtapSingh
Age 80 years hai healthy hai Gaanv mai sab ijjat karte because gaanv ke Thakur hai and dayavaan hai.
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Dadiji: MayaSingh
Age 77 hai Ye bi healthy hai husband se and unke baccho se bahoot pyar karte hai. Dyyalu hai and kisi se nafrt nai karte.
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Prtapsingh and Mayadevi ke 4 Bacche hai 1 lardki and 3 ladke

1) Bade papa : Thakur ArvindSingh
Age 48 hai but abi bi healthy hai lalchi kism ke inssn hai . Paiso ke Lover hai 😂 . Bade businessman hai india Ke top 10 ameer mai enka name hai.
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.Bade Mummy : NitaSingh Ye ArvindSingh Ke patni hai.
Age 40 hai abi bi koi deke to Bol nai sakta Ye 40 age Ke hai
Apne pati se pyaar karti unke jese lalchi kism ke hai.
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Inke 4 bacche hai 2 larki and 2 beta

1) Bada Beta : AmitSingh
Age 25 hai Ammer baap ki bigdi hui aulaad hai. Paiso ka gmand hai . Baki age deknge hai.
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2) Dusri Beti : NainaSingh
Age 23 hai. Iss be paiso ka gmand hai. Hamesa party and friends mai rehti hai dusro ko kuch bi nai samjti. Dusra age deknge.
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3) Dusra Beta : RohanSingh
Age 22 hai Ye bi Apne badi behen and bhai ke tarh hai.
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4) Dusri Beti : RiyaSingh
Age 22 Ye Rohan and Riya dono Judwa hai. But Riya baki sabse alg hai. Sabko pyar and respect deti hai paiso ka gmand nai hai.
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Ye sabi abi college Mai hai. Delhi ke and Des ke sabse no1 college mai hai.

College name M.V. College (Iss Story mai jo bi name and dusri jagh ke name Bas kalpnik hai)

2) Dusre Bade Papa : KamalSingh
Age 45 Hai Ye bi bade BHAI ke tarh lalchi insaan hai apne bibi baccho se pyaar karte hai Apne bade bhai ke saath company chalte hai.
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2) Bade mummy : NainaSingh
Age 40 hai Kamal SINGH ke patni hai Ye Achi and Melissa aurat hai apne bacho se pyar karti hai.
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Inke 2 bacche hai 2 larki hai

PyalSingh And PriyaSingh Dono Judwa hai. Age 21 hai right now Abi apne bade bhai behen Ke saath college mai hai
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3) Papa: SherSingh Age 40 hai but abi 25 lagte hai
Gar Mai sabse Chote hai but hosiyar hai sabse jyaada sabse pyaar karte hai but Ek se nfrt jo age pata chelga
inki Ek alg company hai jo india top 10 mai hai.
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3) Mummy : NehaSingh Age 35 hai
Sabi se pyar karti sivya Ek. Baki ache aurt hai koi lalch nai man Mai.


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Inke 3 bace hai 2 larki 1 ladka

1) Badi Beti : NishaSingh
Age 20 hai abse pyaar karte hai sivya Ek (🤣🤣🤣) jo age pata chelga.
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2) Hero(Killer) : VikramSingh
Age 19 hai six pack body hai baki age pta chelga
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3)Choti Behen : TiyaSingh
Hero ki jaan hai. isko pta nai ki iska Ek saga bada bhai hai buhoot cute hai and natkat hai sabki ladli hai
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Dono bade papa ki company ka name hai "SINGH GROUPS OF COMPANY "

Mere papa ki company ka name hai TSS GROUPS OF COMPANY (TSS= THAKUR SHER SINGH)


4) Bua : Smita Roy
Age 40 hai Achi aurat hai apne sab ko pyar karti hai.
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Fufa : Vilas Roy
Age 45 Hai india Ke jaane maane Doctor hai.
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Enki 1 larki hai

name hai Khushi Roy hero Ke age ki hai. Delhi Mai rehte hai Apne cousins Ke saath college mai hai.
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Ye Sab abhi Delhi mai rehte hai sivya Dada and Dadi With Joint family

:congrats: for new story thread
Nice introduction 👌
 

Rambo_004

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Update 3

iss tarh din nikal gai roj mujhe maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nafrat hone laga tha

AB mai ***** saal ka Ho gya tha to mere School Mai admission ke liye MAA ne dad se baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai *******,******** saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta tha and mera body bhi kuch esa hi tha koi bhi dekhe to yahi lagta ki main ********sal ka hu


fir maa jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari School Mai karva di

Mere baki sare bhai behen badi private School mai padte The

Mai morning Mai School jaata and baad mai ghar aake khana khata Apne room mai and Baad mai jab sab kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha


kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakta Tha Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte issse Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torture bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main ******* Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha tha ek bar jo Dekh liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai thi

Main Apne pari Ke saath kabhi kabhi Chhupke Chhupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko waqt pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Raha lekin Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha
bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz se khuli to maine Chupke Se bahar ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
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Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rakhne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh se chutkara bhi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bhi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH - hum bhi yahi kehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalaat Mai nahi tha

maine Socha nahi tha ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya tha ki mai kal School ke Baad bhag jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chale jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai thi puri raat mai jaagta raha
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next day
morning Mai

Mai : MAa mujhe kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nahi fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study related

MAA - thik hai beta
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uss din to mera din hi kharb tha

Mai room se nikal ke jaa raha tha ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole

Amit bhai : kutte dekh Ke nai chal sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab ghar wale bhi aa gaye

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot mara

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere School ki taraf chala gya

but school nahi gya

mujhe bahoot gussa aa raha tha maine Ye thaan liya tha ki mai iss pariwar par esa grahn lagaunga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai School na jaake Railway Station chala gya waha pe Ek train chalne ki tayari mai tha
so Mai bhi beth gya
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ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya

Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Ghao itni jaldi Kaise bhar Jaate hain lekin Mere Ghao Sara jaldi bhar gaye the

vo train chlne lagi iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MAA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abhi tak gar nahi aaya

mom: are wah kya khabar sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kahin mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idhar aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna tha haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamara ghar surkashit Ho gaya

Ye sab baate bahar khadi Didi sun rahi thi AB unko bhi gussa aa gayaa and Andar aake boli

Didi - aap kya bol rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum , bhai or Tera vo kutta tha and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samjhi


AB to vo nahi aayega Kahin mar gaya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai tha maa or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo **** saal ki Ho gai thi vo bhi samajhne lagi thi thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi usko dekte Rona band karti hai and bolti hai
Didi : nahi sweety main Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiye kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bhi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu. ...... betu ... vo chala gya...... vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamara bhai

pari : Didi Amit bhai and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to noukar tha Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo noukar nahi tha vo Hamara saga bhai tha

pari: kya wo saga Bhai tha Ye bolte hue vo bhi rone lagti hai

kyunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta tha and uske saath khelta tha Kisi ko pata nai tha iss baare Mai

pari : didi ab bhai kabhi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nahi vo aayega, Kabhi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh se hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa unko marte rehte The Mai ab Kabhi baat nai karungi

did: Mai bhi sweety

ghar se main chala gya is khabar sunte hi sab kush ho jaate hain and ek badi party rakhte hai
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In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki thi mai bi utar gya waha pe board dekha to pata chala ki mai mumbai mai aa gay tha
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maine jo maa ke pas se paise liye The usse kuch khana liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui

Baad mai waha se chalta gaya chalte hue main bahut dur aa gya tha road bi sunsan tha

at home......

MAA ne bi muje dhudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nahi chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti thi pari bhi thoda bahoot ese karti thi

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe the

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai thi main bi sunsaan sadak pe chal raha tha tabhi ek car udhar pichhe se aati hai and mujhe uda deti hai

jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu



Baaki next update mai........
 
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Update 3

iss tarh din nikal gai roj mujhe maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nafrat hone laga tha

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya tha to mere School Mai admission ke liye MAA ne dad se baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta tha and mera body bhi kuch esa hi tha koi bhi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


fir ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari School Mai karva di
images


Mere baki sare bhai behen badi private School mai padte The

Mai morning Mai School jaata and baad mai ghar aake khana khata Apne room mai and Baad mai jab sab kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha


kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakta Tha Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte issse Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torture bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha tha ek bar jo Dekh liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai thi
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Main Apne pari Ke saath kabhi kabhi Chhupke Chhupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko waqt pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Raha lekin Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha
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bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz se khuli to maine Chupke Se bahar ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
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Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rakhne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh se chutkara bhi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bhi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH - hum bhi yahi kehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalaat Mai nahi tha

maine Socha nahi tha ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya tha ki mai kal School ke Baad bhag jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chale jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai thi puri raat mai jaagta raha
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next day
morning Mai

Mai : MAa mujhe kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nahi fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study related

MAA - thik hai beta
images


uss din to mera din hi kharb tha

Mai room se nikal ke jaa raha tha ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
images


Amit bhai : kutte dekh Ke nai chal sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab ghar wale bhi aa gaye

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot mara

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere School ki taraf chala gya

but school nahi gya

mujhe bahoot gussa aa raha tha maine Ye thaan liya tha ki mai iss pariwar par esa grahn lagaunga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai School na jaake Railway Station chala gya waha pe Ek train chalne ki tayari mai tha
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so Mai bhi beth gya
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ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
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Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Ghao itni jaldi Kaise bhar Jaate hain lekin Mere Ghao Sara jaldi bhar gaye the

vo train chlne lagi iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MAA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abhi tak gar nahi aaya

mom: are wah kya khabar sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kahin mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idhar aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna tha haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamara ghar surkashit Ho gaya

Ye sab baate bahar khadi Didi sun rahi thi AB unko bhi gussa aa gayaa and Andar aake boli

Didi - aap kya bol rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum , bhai or Tera vo kutta tha and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samjhi


AB to vo nahi aayega Kahin mar gaya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai tha maa or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai thi vo bhi samajhne lagi thi thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi usko dekte Rona band karti hai and bolti hai
Didi : nahi sweety main Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiye kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bhi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu. ...... betu ... vo chala gya...... vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamara bhai

pari : Didi Amit bhai and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to noukar tha Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo noukar nahi tha vo Hamara saga bhai tha

pari: kya wo saga Bhai tha Ye bolte hue vo bhi rone lagti hai

kyunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta tha and uske saath khelta tha Kisi ko pata nai tha iss baare Mai

pari : didi ab bhai kabhi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nahi vo aayega, Kabhi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh se hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa unko marte rehte The Mai ab Kabhi baat nai karungi

did: Mai bhi sweety

ghar se main chala gya is khabar sunte hi sab kush ho jaate hain and ek badi party rakhte hai
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In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki thi mai bi utar gya waha pe board dekha to pata chala ki mai mumbai mai aa gay tha
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maine jo maa ke pas se paise liye The usse kuch khana liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
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Baad mai waha se chalta gaya chalte hue main bahut dur aa gya tha road bi sunsan tha

at home......

MAA ne bi muje dhudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nahi chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti thi pari bhi thoda bahoot ese karti thi

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe the

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai thi main bi sunsaan sadak pe chal raha tha tabhi ek car udhar pichhe se aati hai and mujhe uda deti hai

jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
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Baaki next update mai........
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ARTICUNO

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Update 3

iss tarh din nikal gai roj mujhe maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nafrat hone laga tha

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya tha to mere School Mai admission ke liye MAA ne dad se baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta tha and mera body bhi kuch esa hi tha koi bhi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


fir ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari School Mai karva di
images


Mere baki sare bhai behen badi private School mai padte The

Mai morning Mai School jaata and baad mai ghar aake khana khata Apne room mai and Baad mai jab sab kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha


kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakta Tha Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte issse Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torture bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha tha ek bar jo Dekh liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai thi
images


Main Apne pari Ke saath kabhi kabhi Chhupke Chhupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko waqt pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Raha lekin Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha
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bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz se khuli to maine Chupke Se bahar ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
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Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rakhne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh se chutkara bhi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bhi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH - hum bhi yahi kehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalaat Mai nahi tha

maine Socha nahi tha ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya tha ki mai kal School ke Baad bhag jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chale jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai thi puri raat mai jaagta raha
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next day
morning Mai

Mai : MAa mujhe kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nahi fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study related

MAA - thik hai beta
images


uss din to mera din hi kharb tha

Mai room se nikal ke jaa raha tha ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
images


Amit bhai : kutte dekh Ke nai chal sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab ghar wale bhi aa gaye

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot mara

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere School ki taraf chala gya

but school nahi gya

mujhe bahoot gussa aa raha tha maine Ye thaan liya tha ki mai iss pariwar par esa grahn lagaunga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai School na jaake Railway Station chala gya waha pe Ek train chalne ki tayari mai tha
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so Mai bhi beth gya
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ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
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Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Ghao itni jaldi Kaise bhar Jaate hain lekin Mere Ghao Sara jaldi bhar gaye the

vo train chlne lagi iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MAA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abhi tak gar nahi aaya

mom: are wah kya khabar sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kahin mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idhar aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna tha haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamara ghar surkashit Ho gaya

Ye sab baate bahar khadi Didi sun rahi thi AB unko bhi gussa aa gayaa and Andar aake boli

Didi - aap kya bol rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum , bhai or Tera vo kutta tha and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samjhi


AB to vo nahi aayega Kahin mar gaya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai tha maa or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai thi vo bhi samajhne lagi thi thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi usko dekte Rona band karti hai and bolti hai
Didi : nahi sweety main Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiye kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bhi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu. ...... betu ... vo chala gya...... vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamara bhai

pari : Didi Amit bhai and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to noukar tha Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo noukar nahi tha vo Hamara saga bhai tha

pari: kya wo saga Bhai tha Ye bolte hue vo bhi rone lagti hai

kyunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta tha and uske saath khelta tha Kisi ko pata nai tha iss baare Mai

pari : didi ab bhai kabhi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nahi vo aayega, Kabhi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh se hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa unko marte rehte The Mai ab Kabhi baat nai karungi

did: Mai bhi sweety

ghar se main chala gya is khabar sunte hi sab kush ho jaate hain and ek badi party rakhte hai
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In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki thi mai bi utar gya waha pe board dekha to pata chala ki mai mumbai mai aa gay tha
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maine jo maa ke pas se paise liye The usse kuch khana liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
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Baad mai waha se chalta gaya chalte hue main bahut dur aa gya tha road bi sunsan tha

at home......

MAA ne bi muje dhudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nahi chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti thi pari bhi thoda bahoot ese karti thi

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe the

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai thi main bi sunsaan sadak pe chal raha tha tabhi ek car udhar pichhe se aati hai and mujhe uda deti hai

jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
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Baaki next update mai........
Mast update hai bhai .... Ab dekhta hai kya hoga Vikram ka iss accident ka baad aur kya woh kabhi wapas aa payega tiya aur uski sago didi ka pass ... 🎉🎊
 

Shahrukh

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Update 3

iss tarh din nikal gai roj mujhe maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nafrat hone laga tha

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya tha to mere School Mai admission ke liye MAA ne dad se baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta tha and mera body bhi kuch esa hi tha koi bhi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


fir ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari School Mai karva di
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Mere baki sare bhai behen badi private School mai padte The

Mai morning Mai School jaata and baad mai ghar aake khana khata Apne room mai and Baad mai jab sab kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha


kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakta Tha Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte issse Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torture bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha tha ek bar jo Dekh liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai thi
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Main Apne pari Ke saath kabhi kabhi Chhupke Chhupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko waqt pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Raha lekin Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha
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bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz se khuli to maine Chupke Se bahar ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
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Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rakhne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh se chutkara bhi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bhi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH - hum bhi yahi kehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalaat Mai nahi tha

maine Socha nahi tha ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya tha ki mai kal School ke Baad bhag jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chale jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai thi puri raat mai jaagta raha
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next day
morning Mai

Mai : MAa mujhe kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nahi fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study related

MAA - thik hai beta
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uss din to mera din hi kharb tha

Mai room se nikal ke jaa raha tha ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
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Amit bhai : kutte dekh Ke nai chal sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab ghar wale bhi aa gaye

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot mara

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere School ki taraf chala gya

but school nahi gya

mujhe bahoot gussa aa raha tha maine Ye thaan liya tha ki mai iss pariwar par esa grahn lagaunga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai School na jaake Railway Station chala gya waha pe Ek train chalne ki tayari mai tha
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so Mai bhi beth gya
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ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
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Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Ghao itni jaldi Kaise bhar Jaate hain lekin Mere Ghao Sara jaldi bhar gaye the

vo train chlne lagi iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MAA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abhi tak gar nahi aaya

mom: are wah kya khabar sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kahin mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idhar aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna tha haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamara ghar surkashit Ho gaya

Ye sab baate bahar khadi Didi sun rahi thi AB unko bhi gussa aa gayaa and Andar aake boli

Didi - aap kya bol rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum , bhai or Tera vo kutta tha and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samjhi


AB to vo nahi aayega Kahin mar gaya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai tha maa or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai thi vo bhi samajhne lagi thi thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi usko dekte Rona band karti hai and bolti hai
Didi : nahi sweety main Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiye kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bhi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu. ...... betu ... vo chala gya...... vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamara bhai

pari : Didi Amit bhai and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to noukar tha Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo noukar nahi tha vo Hamara saga bhai tha

pari: kya wo saga Bhai tha Ye bolte hue vo bhi rone lagti hai

kyunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta tha and uske saath khelta tha Kisi ko pata nai tha iss baare Mai

pari : didi ab bhai kabhi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nahi vo aayega, Kabhi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh se hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa unko marte rehte The Mai ab Kabhi baat nai karungi

did: Mai bhi sweety

ghar se main chala gya is khabar sunte hi sab kush ho jaate hain and ek badi party rakhte hai
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In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki thi mai bi utar gya waha pe board dekha to pata chala ki mai mumbai mai aa gay tha
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maine jo maa ke pas se paise liye The usse kuch khana liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
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Baad mai waha se chalta gaya chalte hue main bahut dur aa gya tha road bi sunsan tha

at home......

MAA ne bi muje dhudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nahi chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti thi pari bhi thoda bahoot ese karti thi

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe the

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai thi main bi sunsaan sadak pe chal raha tha tabhi ek car udhar pichhe se aati hai and mujhe uda deti hai

jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
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Baaki next update mai........
Awesome and fantastic update bhai keep posting
 

Riky007

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