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iss tarh din nikal gai roj mujhe maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nafrat hone laga tha

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya tha to mere School Mai admission ke liye MAA ne dad se baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta tha and mera body bhi kuch esa hi tha koi bhi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


fir ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari School Mai karva di
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Mere baki sare bhai behen badi private School mai padte The

Mai morning Mai School jaata and baad mai ghar aake khana khata Apne room mai and Baad mai jab sab kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha


kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakta Tha Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte issse Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torture bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha tha ek bar jo Dekh liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai thi
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Main Apne pari Ke saath kabhi kabhi Chhupke Chhupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko waqt pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Raha lekin Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha
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bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz se khuli to maine Chupke Se bahar ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava
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Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rakhne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh se chutkara bhi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bhi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH - hum bhi yahi kehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalaat Mai nahi tha

maine Socha nahi tha ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya tha ki mai kal School ke Baad bhag jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chale jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai thi puri raat mai jaagta raha
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next day
morning Mai

Mai : MAa mujhe kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nahi fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study related

MAA - thik hai beta
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uss din to mera din hi kharb tha

Mai room se nikal ke jaa raha tha ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole
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Amit bhai : kutte dekh Ke nai chal sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab ghar wale bhi aa gaye

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot mara

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere School ki taraf chala gya

but school nahi gya

mujhe bahoot gussa aa raha tha maine Ye thaan liya tha ki mai iss pariwar par esa grahn lagaunga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai School na jaake Railway Station chala gya waha pe Ek train chalne ki tayari mai tha
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so Mai bhi beth gya
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ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya
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Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Ghao itni jaldi Kaise bhar Jaate hain lekin Mere Ghao Sara jaldi bhar gaye the

vo train chlne lagi iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MAA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abhi tak gar nahi aaya

mom: are wah kya khabar sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kahin mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idhar aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna tha haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamara ghar surkashit Ho gaya

Ye sab baate bahar khadi Didi sun rahi thi AB unko bhi gussa aa gayaa and Andar aake boli

Didi - aap kya bol rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum , bhai or Tera vo kutta tha and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samjhi


AB to vo nahi aayega Kahin mar gaya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai tha maa or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai thi vo bhi samajhne lagi thi thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi usko dekte Rona band karti hai and bolti hai
Didi : nahi sweety main Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiye kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bhi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu. ...... betu ... vo chala gya...... vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamara bhai

pari : Didi Amit bhai and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to noukar tha Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo noukar nahi tha vo Hamara saga bhai tha

pari: kya wo saga Bhai tha Ye bolte hue vo bhi rone lagti hai

kyunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta tha and uske saath khelta tha Kisi ko pata nai tha iss baare Mai

pari : didi ab bhai kabhi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nahi vo aayega, Kabhi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh se hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa unko marte rehte The Mai ab Kabhi baat nai karungi

did: Mai bhi sweety

ghar se main chala gya is khabar sunte hi sab kush ho jaate hain and ek badi party rakhte hai
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In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki thi mai bi utar gya waha pe board dekha to pata chala ki mai mumbai mai aa gay tha
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maine jo maa ke pas se paise liye The usse kuch khana liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui
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Baad mai waha se chalta gaya chalte hue main bahut dur aa gya tha road bi sunsan tha

at home......

MAA ne bi muje dhudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nahi chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti thi pari bhi thoda bahoot ese karti thi

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe the

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai thi main bi sunsaan sadak pe chal raha tha tabhi ek car udhar pichhe se aati hai and mujhe uda deti hai

jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu
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Baaki next update mai........
Badhiya update diya ha aapne
 
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Update 4

Car se takkar hone Ke baad mai dur jaa gira

Muje bahoot chote lagi ti

Mai road pe gira hua ta car wale nikal gya full speed mai
mujhe koi hosh nai tha

Kafi der baad waha se Ek car nikli car Mai Ek aurat and admi ta

Jese us aurat ki najar mujh pe padi wo boli dekho ranvir waha pe koi gira hua hai jaldi gadi roko

Ji haa us admi ka name Ranvir hai

Ranvir : ha rokta hu Susmita

Aurat ka name Susmita hai

Baad mai ranvir gadi rokta hai

(New intro

Ranvir Roy : age 44 hai CBI head hai mumbai Ke
wese fit hai nek
Dil insan hai sabki madad karte hai

Susmita Roy : age 40 hai good looking hai
Ye bi ek achi sabka kyal rakte hai

Janvi Roy : ***** age hai ranvir Roy and susmita ki beti hai
Bahoot chulbuli and natkat hai abhi just scl join kiya hai )

Car rukte hi Susmita bahr nikli and mere pass aye

Susmita : Ye to koi Bacha hai bahoot chot lagi jaldi se isse hospital le chlte hai

Ranvir ne muje uthake car mai raka and hospital ki aur le gaye

Hospital mai jaldi le gai
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Hospital wale Ranvir ko jante The Isliye jaldi treatment Start ho gya
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Thodi der baad Dr baahr aaya

Susmita : Dr ab wo Bacha Kesa hai

Dr: wo AB khatre se bahar hai abhi hosh nahi aaya hai

Ranvir : kab tak hosh ayga Dr?
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Dr: subh tak hosh aa jayga

Ranvir & susmita : Ohk Dr

Ranvir : chalo ab hum gar chalte hain susmita subhah wapis aayenge ghar par janvi akeli hai

Susmita : ha chalo

Fir wo dono gar chale jaate hai


===>( tour of home

Ek banglow hai 3 Floor hai

Door se enter karte hi right side Ek bada kitchen hai and baaki guest room hai

First floor par ranvir and susmita ka and janvi KA room hai

3rd floor par gym bana rakha hai chhota sa

Bahar Garden hai chhota saa ghar ke aspas
And ek garage hai
)
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End of home tour <===
 
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ARTICUNO

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Update 4

Car se takkar hone Ke baad mai dur jaa gira
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Muje bahoot chote lagi ti

Mai road pe gira hua ta car wale nikal gya full speed mai
mujhe koi hosh nai tha

Kafi der baad waha se Ek car nikli car Mai Ek aurat and admi ta

Jese us aurat ki najar mujh pe padi wo boli dekho ranvir waha pe koi gira hua hai jaldi gadi roko

Ji haa us admi ka name Ranvir hai

Ranvir : ha rokta hu Susmita

Aurat ka name Susmita hai

Baad mai ranvir gadi rokta hai

(New intro

Ranvir Roy : age 44 hai CBI head hai mumbai Ke
wese fit hai nek
Dil insan hai sabki madad karte hai

Susmita Roy : age 40 hai good looking hai
Ye bi ek achi sabka kyal rakte hai

Janvi Roy : 5 age hai ranvir Roy and susmita ki beti hai
Bahoot chulbuli and natkat hai abhi just scl join kiya hai )

Car rukte hi Susmita bahr nikli and mere pass aye

Susmita : Ye to koi Bacha hai bahoot chot lagi jaldi se isse hospital le chlte hai
images


Ranvir ne muje uthake car mai raka and hospital ki aur le gaye

Hospital mai jaldi le gai
images


Hospital wale Ranvir ko jante The Isliye jaldi treatment Start ho gya
images


Thodi der baad Dr baahr aaya

Susmita : Dr ab wo Bacha Kesa hai

Dr: wo AB khatre se bahar hai abhi hosh nahi aaya hai

Ranvir : kab tak hosh ayga Dr?
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Dr: subh tak hosh aa jayga

Ranvir & susmita : Ohk Dr

Ranvir : chalo ab hum gar chalte hain susmita subhah wapis aayenge ghar par janvi akeli hai

Susmita : ha chalo

Fir wo dono gar chale jaate hai


===>( tour of home

Ek banglow hai 3 Floor hai

Door se enter karte hi right side Ek bada kitchen hai and baaki guest room hai

First floor par ranvir and susmita ka and janvi KA room hai

3rd floor par gym bana rakha hai chhota sa

Bahar Garden hai chhota saa ghar ke aspas
And ek garage hai
)
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End of home tour <===
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Update 4

Car se takkar hone Ke baad mai dur jaa gira
images


Muje bahoot chote lagi ti

Mai road pe gira hua ta car wale nikal gya full speed mai
mujhe koi hosh nai tha

Kafi der baad waha se Ek car nikli car Mai Ek aurat and admi ta

Jese us aurat ki najar mujh pe padi wo boli dekho ranvir waha pe koi gira hua hai jaldi gadi roko

Ji haa us admi ka name Ranvir hai

Ranvir : ha rokta hu Susmita

Aurat ka name Susmita hai

Baad mai ranvir gadi rokta hai

(New intro

Ranvir Roy : age 44 hai CBI head hai mumbai Ke
wese fit hai nek
Dil insan hai sabki madad karte hai

Susmita Roy : age 40 hai good looking hai
Ye bi ek achi sabka kyal rakte hai

Janvi Roy : 5 age hai ranvir Roy and susmita ki beti hai
Bahoot chulbuli and natkat hai abhi just scl join kiya hai )

Car rukte hi Susmita bahr nikli and mere pass aye

Susmita : Ye to koi Bacha hai bahoot chot lagi jaldi se isse hospital le chlte hai
images


Ranvir ne muje uthake car mai raka and hospital ki aur le gaye

Hospital mai jaldi le gai
images


Hospital wale Ranvir ko jante The Isliye jaldi treatment Start ho gya
images


Thodi der baad Dr baahr aaya

Susmita : Dr ab wo Bacha Kesa hai

Dr: wo AB khatre se bahar hai abhi hosh nahi aaya hai

Ranvir : kab tak hosh ayga Dr?
images

Dr: subh tak hosh aa jayga

Ranvir & susmita : Ohk Dr

Ranvir : chalo ab hum gar chalte hain susmita subhah wapis aayenge ghar par janvi akeli hai

Susmita : ha chalo

Fir wo dono gar chale jaate hai


===>( tour of home

Ek banglow hai 3 Floor hai

Door se enter karte hi right side Ek bada kitchen hai and baaki guest room hai

First floor par ranvir and susmita ka and janvi KA room hai

3rd floor par gym bana rakha hai chhota sa

Bahar Garden hai chhota saa ghar ke aspas
And ek garage hai
)
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End of home tour <===
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