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[Rambo_004]

Update 5

Fir dono ghar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai thi

uski khyal rakhne ke liye ek maid rakhi gai thi

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi thi wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha tha agr uske koi parents nahi honge to hum usse apne saath rakh lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: han sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha tha . kal subah hospital jaake usse milte hai

ab chalo so jate hain

Fir dono so jaate hai


next day.......

Ranvir and susmita jaldi tayar hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bhi hosh mai aa chuka tha jab mai khud ko Ek room mai dekha pehele to mai bhi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta apki (hste hue mujhe puchhne lage )


me: thik hun lekin aap log ???

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe the raaste mai aap zakhmi halath mai the to apko hospital le aaye

unko dekh ke mujhe pata nahi kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha tha

susmita : beta apki parents kaha hai mobile number do taa ki hum unse contact kar sake

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne mujhe gale laga liye
jissse mujhe bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

susmita : kya hua beta apki family nahi hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abhi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone apke saath bahoot bura kiya hai but aap chinta mat karo mai huna apke sath apki MAA

YEAH baat sun mujhe bahut khusi mili

mano mene apne samne mere hi maa(maid) ko dekh raha hun
Unki jesa lad ke sath sath pyaar bhi

SUSMITA - AUR INKO DEKHO YEAH HAI AB SE APKI DAD

MAIN - MOM....... DAD......

MOM ......
DAD....


Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya tha mujhe unke saath bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai (mene jab SARi bat bata raha tha tab apna naam bhi bata diya tha )


mere gaanv bhar gaye The ab tak

dad : ha abhi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai
and Mai unke saath unke ghar chala jata hun

waha pe janvi dining table pe bethi thi
ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye apke bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate layenge

mom : ha beta aap kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmiyat se mujhe puchne lagi

Janvi- kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai apki bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bhi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe beth ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko khilya
and usne mujhe

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gaye

and janvi muje uska room dikhane lagi

Baki next update mai..........

 

[Iron Man]

Update 2


So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki

Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga

kuch mahatvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabhi isse nafrat mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nafrat mila to Ye aap sab logo keliye bahoot bura hoga

Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabhi shok ho jaate hai

uske baad guruji chale jaate hai

Ye baat mom dad ghar Mai baki parivar wale ko bhi bata dete hai

Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikal jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bhi gaanv ke liye nikal jaate hai

ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rehti thi aur sab bhai behen bhi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte The and Din nikal jaate hai.

Didi Ke alva abhi baki sb School Jaane Start Kar diye the

Es tarah 1 saal nikal jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nuksan hua tha

but Kisne jyaada dhyan nahi diya

mai bhi 1 saal ka hogya tha

but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samajh aane lagi thi

Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai

us din uncle thoda drink karke

raat ko aate hai
or mujh chhote bacche per iljam lagate hai

Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh ke vajah se hua hai

kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai

papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch

iss tarh papa sabko Sant karate hain and sab dinner karne ke Baad sone chale jaat hai

sab ko Lagne laga tha ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu

mom ko bhi thoda thoda esa lagne laga tha but vo jyada react nahi kiye

thode samay Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bhi hame mana jata hai


Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh ke vajah se

ab sab mujhe kari khoti Sunate hai

mujhe kya Ganta hi fark padne vala tha hamko kuch jyada Samajh mai aaye to farak pade na

AB to mom bi hamse jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabhi bhai behene and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage The

Didi and dad ko jyada kuch fark nahi pada

iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko samajh sake utna samajh mai aane laga

iss dauran mom pregnant thi

mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya

jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol chha gya

dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale The

uske baad ek din Baad naamkaran ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gaya

mom mujhse jyada meri pari ke pas jyada nahi Jaane dete The so Mai jab vi uske pass koi nahi hote tab mai uske pass jaaKe kelta tha

thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya

jisme unke death bhi ho gai jiska shrey mujko diya gaya

gift mai mujhe bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila

tab bhi didi and dad mujhe utna kuch nai kaha unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti

iss tarh kuch mahine bit gaye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera khayal rakna hi chhod diya tha

Isliye dad ne jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya

(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai

Mai abhi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )

Iss tarh 1 saal nikal gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya tha ek din dad ko business Mai bahoot bada loss hua

tab unko bahoot gussa aaya

vo ghar Mai drink karke aaye The bolne lage

dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh ke vajah se hua Itna nuksan

Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha tha Aapne nai mana

naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaa manhoosh hai

Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tumne

mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kehtae hue bhi saram aate hai

sab mere bhai behen sun rehe the dad mere ko maar rehe the mai rote jaa raha

ab unka roj ka Ho gya tha jab man kare mereko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte

jo mana karta to maar kam padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bhi nai pata ki mai iss ghar ka naukar nai larka Hu

sirf didi and maa Ek hi the Jo mujse ab baat karte The and achi tarh rakhte The mai bi sirf Inke sath hi khelta tha and kabhi kabhi chupke se pari se milne chala jata.

Agr galti se bhi mai mere bhai behen ke pass khelne ke liye chal gya to vo mereko bahoot marte and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte The

but Kisne Ye chij notice nai kiya ki mere chot bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.

Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue the. Sab khelte rehe the mai dur se Dekh raha tha.
gar ka hall bahoot bada ta.

iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha pot giraa diya jisme daraar aa gai jisse vo thodi dar gaye lekin mereko dekhne Ke baad wo logon ke face par shetani muskaan aa gai

vo pot unonhe Ek chote se table par rakh diya uske pass hi sofa tha

naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa

Mai unke pass gya because mere alva wahan aur kon tha

Mai : boliye Didi

itna bolte hi mere gaal par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli

Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hun Samjha malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thappad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola

mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche se ball nikal
mai : ji malkin

Mai niche se ball nikl raha tha tab mera hath table ko halka sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka pot niche gir gya and tut gya

tab Naina Didi chilai kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya pot tod diya Ye bolte mujhko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage

itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua

Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta

Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite pot tod diya tune
YEAH dekh mom mujhko Marne lagi

mom: saale harami kutte Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite pot tod diya jo mene jermany se mangwai thi 75lakh ki thi yeah . kitna mengha tha Kabhi dekhe bhi hai 75lakh rupay

mujhko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai mujhko Didi ne Kaha tha

mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin

mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye

tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai mujhko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya

maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne

mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola

maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu

(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4 floor The total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen tha and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta

1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idhr tha meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte thi baaki room khali The

2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms The

3rd floor : idhar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche khel sakte itne sabi games The but idhar ab merko nai ane diya jata tha


4th floor : idar gym bana rakha hai exercise karne ke liye

chhat bhi ek dam badiya hai whaa par bethne ke liye apke sab kuch hai

Ghar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gjar ke just bagal Mai Ek bada sa garage hai ghar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )

mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard tha

mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chale gaye TAB Didi rote hue aaye and bole

didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi

maine unko manaya ki mujhe jyada nahi laga hai

Baad mai maa NE merko lep lagaye and Aaram karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal

( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lep = Dava vegera )


AB aage next update mai dekhte hai kya hoga?.............

Shaandar jabardast Romanchak Update

 

[ARTICUNO]

Update 5

Fir dono ghar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai thi

uski khyal rakhne ke liye ek maid rakhi gai thi

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi thi wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha tha agr uske koi parents nahi honge to hum usse apne saath rakh lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: han sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha tha . kal subah hospital jaake usse milte hai

ab chalo so jate hain

Fir dono so jaate hai


next day.......

Ranvir and susmita jaldi tayar hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bhi hosh mai aa chuka tha jab mai khud ko Ek room mai dekha pehele to mai bhi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta apki (hste hue mujhe puchhne lage )

me: thik hun lekin aap log ???

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe the raaste mai aap zakhmi halath mai the to apko hospital le aaye

unko dekh ke mujhe pata nahi kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha tha

susmita : beta apki parents kaha hai mobile number do taa ki hum unse contact kar sake

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne mujhe gale laga liye

jissse mujhe bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

susmita : kya hua beta apki family nahi hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abhi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone apke saath bahoot bura kiya hai but aap chinta mat karo mai huna apke sath apki MAA

YEAH baat sun mujhe bahut khusi mili

mano mene apne samne mere hi maa(maid) ko dekh raha hun
Unki jesa lad ke sath sath pyaar bhi

SUSMITA - AUR INKO DEKHO YEAH HAI AB SE APKI DAD

MAIN - MOM....... DAD......

MOM ......
DAD....


Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya tha mujhe unke saath bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai (mene jab SARi bat bata raha tha tab apna naam bhi bata diya tha )


mere gaanv bhar gaye The ab tak

dad : ha abhi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai

and Mai unke saath unke ghar chala jata hun

waha pe janvi dining table pe bethi thi

ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye apke bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate layenge

mom : ha beta aap kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmiyat se mujhe puchne lagi

Janvi- kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai apki bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bhi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe beth ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko khilya

and usne mujhe

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gaye

and janvi muje uska room dikhane lagi

Baki next update mai..........

Mast update hai bhai... Finally ab Vikram ko apna naye Ghar mil gya hai ab dekhta hai ki Vikram kya karega aage Jake aur haa apna pariwar walo acha sbak sikhaya bas apni didi aur maa ko chor kar jo maid thi

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice and fantastic update bhai

 

[Riky007]

Good twist

Bhai ji, pics hata lo iss update se, under age pics allowed nahi hai

 

[Bangla Choti Reader]

Nice update

 

[sam_41]

Lovely

 

[Naik]

Update 5

Fir dono ghar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai thi

uski khyal rakhne ke liye ek maid rakhi gai thi

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi thi wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha tha agr uske koi parents nahi honge to hum usse apne saath rakh lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: han sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha tha . kal subah hospital jaake usse milte hai

ab chalo so jate hain

Fir dono so jaate hai


next day.......

Ranvir and susmita jaldi tayar hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bhi hosh mai aa chuka tha jab mai khud ko Ek room mai dekha pehele to mai bhi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta apki (hste hue mujhe puchhne lage )

me: thik hun lekin aap log ???

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe the raaste mai aap zakhmi halath mai the to apko hospital le aaye

unko dekh ke mujhe pata nahi kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha tha

susmita : beta apki parents kaha hai mobile number do taa ki hum unse contact kar sake

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne mujhe gale laga liye

jissse mujhe bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

susmita : kya hua beta apki family nahi hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abhi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone apke saath bahoot bura kiya hai but aap chinta mat karo mai huna apke sath apki MAA

YEAH baat sun mujhe bahut khusi mili

mano mene apne samne mere hi maa(maid) ko dekh raha hun
Unki jesa lad ke sath sath pyaar bhi

SUSMITA - AUR INKO DEKHO YEAH HAI AB SE APKI DAD

MAIN - MOM....... DAD......

MOM ......
DAD....


Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya tha mujhe unke saath bahoot sukoon mil raha tha

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai (mene jab SARi bat bata raha tha tab apna naam bhi bata diya tha )


mere gaanv bhar gaye The ab tak

dad : ha abhi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai

and Mai unke saath unke ghar chala jata hun

waha pe janvi dining table pe bethi thi

ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye apke bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate layenge

mom : ha beta aap kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmiyat se mujhe puchne lagi

Janvi- kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai apki bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bhi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe beth ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko khilya

and usne mujhe

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gaye

and janvi muje uska room dikhane lagi

Baki next update mai..........

Bahot achcha huwa Jo Vikram ne Sushmita or Ranveer ko apna maa baap accept ker lia Jo uske liye bahot zaroori tha or saath me ek cute si bahen bhi mil gayi
Ab dekhte h yaha se Vikram ki life kia Naya mod leker aati h
Behtareen shaandar update

 

[Smith_15]

Update 6

 

[Rambo_004]

Good twist

Bhai ji, pics hata lo iss update se, under age pics allowed nahi hai

pics hata diye