Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )

[Vik@03]

★ INDEX ★




♡ Family Introduction ♡


Update 01. Update 16
Update 02. Update 17
Update 03
Update 04
Update 05
Update 06
Update 07
Update 08
Update 09
Update 10
Update 11
Update 12
Update 13
Update 14
Update 15

 

[K B]

Update 3

iss tarh din nikl gai roj merko maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nfrt hone lage ti

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya ta dono mere Scl Mai admission ke liye MA ne dad sent baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta ta and mera body bi kuch esa hi ta koi bi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


for ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari Scl Mai karva diya

Mai baki sare bhai behen ke badi private Scl mai padte Te

Mai morning Mai Scl jaata and baad mai gar aake kana khta Apne room mai and Baad mai jo sab Sab Jo kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha

kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakte To Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte isase Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torcher bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha ta ek ko Dek liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai ti

Main Apne pari Ke saath कभी-कभी Chupke Chupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko date pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Rah aur FIR Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz setup kuli to maine Chupke Se bahr ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava


Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rkne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh setup chutkara bi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH hum bi yahi kaehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalt Mai nai ta

maine Socha nai ta ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya ta ki mai kal Scl ke Baad bagh jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chal jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai ti puro raat mai jaagta ta raha

next day
morning Mai

Mai : MA merko kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nai fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study relate

MA : Ohk

uss din to mera din hi karb ta

Mai room se nikl ke jaa raha ta ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole

Amit bhai : kutte dek Ke nai chl sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab gar wale bi aati gai

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot maar

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere Scl ki tarf chala gya

but scl nai gya

merko bahoot gussa aa raha ta maine Ye taan liya ta ki mai iss pariwar par isa grahn laganga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai Scl na jaake Railway Station chal gya waha pe Ek train chlne ki tyri mai ti so Mai bi beth gya

ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya

Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Gaon itni jaldi Kaise bar Jaate hain lekin Mere Gaon Sara jaldi bar gaite

vo train chlne lage iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abi tak gar Mai aaya

mom: are wah kya kbr sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kai mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idr aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna ta haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamra gar surkashit Ho gya

Ye sab baate bhar kadi Didi sun rahi ti AB unko bi gussa aa gya and Andrew aake boli

aap kya bolu rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum bhai or Tera vo kutta ta and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samji

AB to vo nai aayga Kai mar gya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai ta maine or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai ti vo bi amber lagti thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi : usko dekte Rona band krte hai and bolte hai nai sweeti mai Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiy kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu vo chala gya vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamra bhai

pari : Didi Amit bahi and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to nokr ta Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo nokr nai ta vo Hamra saga bhai ta

pari: kya would saga Bhai ta Ye bolte hue vo aur rone lagti hai

kunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta ta and uske saath kelta ta Kisi pata nai ta iss baare Mai

pari : didi about bhai kabi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nai vo aayga Kabi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh setup hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa hunko marte rehte Te Mai ab Kabi baa nai karunga

did: Mai bi sweet

gar ke andr mai chala gya iski kbr sunte hi sab kush ho jaate and ek badi party rakte hai

In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki ti mai bi utar gya waha pe board deka to pta chal ki mai mumbai mai aa gay ta

maine jo ma ke pass se paise liye Te usse kuch khna liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui

Baad mai wha setup chlte gya chlte hue main bhoot dur aa gya ta road bi sumsan ta

at home......

MA ne bi muje dudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nai chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti ti pari bi thoda bahoot ese karti ti

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe te

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai ti main bi sumsaan sadk pe chl raha ta tabi ek car udr piche se aati and muje uda deti hai jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu



Baaki next update mai........

Nice update bro

 

[Chinturocky]

Lagta hai Ab hero ko Achchha ghar MIL jayega.

 

[Sweetkaran]

Marvelous jabardast update bro

 

[parkas]

Update 2


So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki

Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga

Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai

uske baad guruji chale jaate hai

Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai

Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai

ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.

Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta

Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya

mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti

Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai

us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai

Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai

kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai

papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch

iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai

sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu

mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya

thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai


Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se

ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai

merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na

AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te

Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada

iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te

iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya

dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te

uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya

mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta

thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya

gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila

tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti

iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta

Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya

(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai

Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )

Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua

tab unko bahoot gussa aaya

vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage

dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan

Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana

naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai

Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune

mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai

sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha

ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte

jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu

sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.

Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te

but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.

Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.

iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai

vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta

naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa

Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta

Mai : boliye Didi

itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli

Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola

mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin

Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya

tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage

itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua

Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta

Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom

mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta

merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta

mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin

mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye

tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya

maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne

mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola

maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu

(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta

1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te

2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te

3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta


4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye

chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai

Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )

mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta

mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole

didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi

maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai

Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal

( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )


AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............

Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Dark.King]

Nice Update

 

[Naik]

Introduction

Dadaji: Thakur PrtapSingh
Age 80 years hai healthy hai Gaanv mai sab ijjat karte because gaanv ke Thakur hai and dayavaan hai.

Dadiji: MayaSingh
Age 77 hai Ye bi healthy hai husband se and unke baccho se bahoot pyar karte hai. Dyyalu hai and kisi se nafrt nai karte.


Prtapsingh and Mayadevi ke 4 Bacche hai 1 lardki and 3 ladke

1) Bade papa : Thakur ArvindSingh
Age 48 hai but abi bi healthy hai lalchi kism ke inssn hai . Paiso ke Lover hai . Bade businessman hai india Ke top 10 ameer mai enka name hai.

.Bade Mummy : NitaSingh Ye ArvindSingh Ke patni hai.
Age 40 hai abi bi koi deke to Bol nai sakta Ye 40 age Ke hai
Apne pati se pyaar karti unke jese lalchi kism ke hai.

Inke 4 bacche hai 3 larki and 1 beta

1) Bada Beta : AmitSingh
Age 25 hai Ammer baap ki bigdi hui aulaad hai. Paiso ka gmand hai . Baki age deknge hai.

2) Dusri Beti : NainaSingh
Age 23 hai. Iss be paiso ka gmand hai. Hamesa party and friends mai rehti hai dusro ko kuch bi nai samjti. Dusra age deknge.

3) Dusra Beta : RohanSingh
Age 22 hai Ye bi Apne badi behen and bhai ke tarh hai.

4) Dusri Beti : RiyaSingh
Age 22 Ye Rohan and Riya dono Judwa hai. But Riya baki sabse alg hai. Sabko pyar and respect deti hai paiso ka gmand nai hai.

Ye sabi abi college Mai hai. Delhi ke and Des ke sabse no1 college mai hai.
College name M.V. College (Iss Story mai jo bi name and dusri jagh ke name Bas kalpnik hai)

2) Dusre Bade Papa : KamalSingh
Age 45 Hai Ye bi bade BHAI ke tarh lalchi insaan hai apne bevi baccho se pyaar karte hai Apne bade bhai ke saath company chalte hai.

2) Bade mummy : NainaSingh
Age 40 hai Kamal SINGH ke patni hai Ye Achi and Melissa aurat hai apne bacho se pyar karti hai.

Inke 2 bacche hai 2 larki hai

PyalSingh And PriyaSingh Dono Judwa hai. Age 21 hai right now Abi apne bade bhai behen Ke saath college mai hai


3) Papa: SherSingh Age 40 hai but abi 25 lagte hai
Gar Mai sabse Chote hai but hosiyar hai sabse jyaada sabse pyaar karte hai but Ek se nfrt jo age pata chelga
inki Ek alg company hai jo india top 10 mai hai.

3) Mummy : NehaSingh Age 35 hai
Sabi se pyar karti sivya Ek. Baki ache aurt hai koi lalch nai man Mai.


Inke 3 bace hai 2 larki 1 ladka

1) Badi Beti : NishaSingh
Age 20 hai abse pyaar karte hai sivya Ek () jo age pata chelga.

2) Hero(Killer) : VikramSingh
Age 19 hai six pack body hai baki age pta chelga


3)Choti Behen : TiyaSingh
Age 16 hai . Hero ki jaan hai. isko pta nai ki iska Ek saga bada bhai hai buhoot cute hai and natkat hai sabki ladli hai


Dono bade papa ki company ka name hai "SINGH GROUPS OF COMPANY "

Mere papa ki company ka name hai TSS GROUPS OF COMPANY (TSS= THAKUR SHER SINGH)


4) Bua : Smita Roy
Age 40 hai Achi aurat hai apne sab ko pyar karti hai.

Fufa : Vilas Roy
Age 45 Hai india Ke jaane maane Doctor hai.

Enki 1 larki hai

name hai Khushi Roy hero Ke age ki hai. Delhi Mai rehte hai Apne cousins Ke saath college mai hai.

Ye Sab abi Delhi mai rehte hai sivya Dada and Dadi With Joint family

END OF INTRODUCTION

Nayi kahani k liye mubarak baad
Badhiya introduction

 

[Smith_15]

 

[johnsamuri]

Update 3

iss tarh din nikl gai roj merko maar padti and Mai rota rehta

ab muje bi unse nfrt hone lage ti

AB mai 5 saal ka Ho gya ta dono mere Scl Mai admission ke liye MA ne dad sent baat ki to unohne mana kar diya

But Mai 7,8 saal jitne baccho jitna samj sakta ta and mera body bi kuch esa hi ta koi bi deke to yahi lagta ki 8 sal ka hu


for ma jese tese Kar Ke mera admission ek sarkari Scl Mai karva diya

Mai baki sare bhai behen ke badi private Scl mai padte Te

Mai morning Mai Scl jaata and baad mai gar aake kana khta Apne room mai and Baad mai jo sab Sab Jo kam karne ke liye bolate the vah kam Karta Tha

kam ke liye Mana bhi nahin kar sakte To Agar kam ke liye Mana Karta to maar padte isase Achcha To fir kam karna hi tha isliye main chupchap kam kar Leta tha aur Unka torcher bhi Sahan Karta Tha

Is Tarah Din nikalte Koi ab main 7 Sal ho gaya tha

mai study Mai kafi Acha ta ek ko Dek liya aur padh liya usko wapis padhne ki jarrurat nai ti

Main Apne pari Ke saath कभी-कभी Chupke Chupke se khel liya Karta Tha usko pata hi nahin tha ki main uska bhai hun

Ek Din sham ko date pata nahin ki dad Sharab pikar aaya tha Aur Main unke Samne a Gaya to FIR unhone mujhe bahut Mara main bhi Maar Khata Rah aur FIR Kuchh Kar Bhi Nahin Sakta tha bad Mein Chala Gaya to raat ko meri Nind Bahar se aati Kuchh Awaaz setup kuli to maine Chupke Se bahr ake sunne Laga to deka ki Mere Sab Parivar wale baat kar rahe the Mere Bhai Bahan ke alava


Arvind SINGH : bhai mai bol raha hu ki ab iss kutte ko yaha rkne ka koi matlab nai iss Acha to hum Isko maar dete hai

Dad : ha baat to sahi Teri iss manhoosh setup chutkara bi mil jaayga

Mom : Mai bi Yahi kehti Hu ji

NitaSingh and Naina SINGH hum bi yahi kaehte hai

Jyda nuksan Ho usse acha to yahi hai ki maar daale kutte ko

mai to Ye sab sunne Ke baad hi kuch bolne ki haalt Mai nai ta

maine Socha nai ta ki ye log itna nicche gir sakte hai Maine Soch liya ta ki mai kal Scl ke Baad bagh jaunga Kai dur

Ye log bi baat karke Sone ke liye chal jaate hai

meri nind kosho dur chali gai ti puro raat mai jaagta ta raha

next day
morning Mai

Mai : MA merko kuch rupees de do kuch kaam hai

MA : ha Ye le waise Kabi paise to tune mange nai fir aaj kyu

mai : kuch samn lena hai study relate

MA : Ohk

uss din to mera din hi karb ta

Mai room se nikl ke jaa raha ta ki Amit bhai se takra gya jisse unhone muje maara aur bole

Amit bhai : kutte dek Ke nai chl sakta kya

wo bahoot Jor se chillya jisse sab gar wale bi aati gai

jab unko baat ka pta cha unhone bi bahoot maar

meri haalt bahoot buri Ho gai ti

maar Khaane Ke baad dhere dhere Scl ki tarf chala gya

but scl nai gya

merko bahoot gussa aa raha ta maine Ye taan liya ta ki mai iss pariwar par isa grahn laganga ki inki rooh kaanp uthe

Mai Scl na jaake Railway Station chal gya waha pe Ek train chlne ki tyri mai ti so Mai bi beth gya

ek dibbe ke Kone Mein jakar chupchap baith Gaya

Meri Halat bahut Buri Thi lekin jaldi se Meri Halat theek ho gai yah To Mujhko Bhi Nahin Pata Tha ki Mere Gaon itni jaldi Kaise bar Jaate hain lekin Mere Gaon Sara jaldi bar gaite

vo train chlne lage iss tarh raat Ho gai

At home......

jab Mai gar nai pouncha tab sirf MA and didi ko bahoot tension Ho gya

MA : malkin vikram abi tak gar Mai aaya

mom: are wah kya kbr sunai hai wo Naa aaye to Acha Kai mar jaay to Acha hai
Agr Idr aa jaata to wese bi aaj usko marna ta haaaaa

Ye bol Ke hasne lagti hai

mom : acha hua manhoosh chala gya Hamra gar surkashit Ho gya

Ye sab baate bhar kadi Didi sun rahi ti AB unko bi gussa aa gya and Andrew aake boli

aap kya bolu rehi ho mom wo mera bhai and apka beta ta

mom: kya bol rahi hai tum bhai or Tera vo kutta ta and bhai to Tera amit ,rohan hai Samji

AB to vo nai aayga Kai mar gya hoga haaa

ab koi rasta nai ta maine or Didi chali jaati hai didi room mai jaake rone lagi

tab room mai pari aa gai

vo 4 saal ki Ho gai ti vo bi amber lagti thodi bahoot baate

pari(Tiya ): kya hua Didi aap ro Kyu rahi hai

didi : usko dekte Rona band krte hai and bolte hai nai sweeti mai Kaha ro rahi Hu

pari : didi juth mat boliye batyiy kya hua please didi Ye bol Ke vo bi rone lagti hai

didi: rote hue bolti hai betu vo chala gya vo chala gya

pari : kon chala gya didi

didi: bhai chala gya Hamra bhai

pari : Didi Amit bahi and rohan bhai to yahi hai

Didi : vo nai Hamra saga bhai Vikram

pari : kya Didi vo Hamra bhai kintu vo to nokr ta Na

didi: nahi sweetu vo nokr nai ta vo Hamra saga bhai ta

pari: kya would saga Bhai ta Ye bolte hue vo aur rone lagti hai

kunki mai hamesa uske ko chocolate deta ta and uske saath kelta ta Kisi pata nai ta iss baare Mai

pari : didi about bhai kabi wapis nai aaynge kya

Didi : nai vo aayga Kabi to usse hamri yaad wapis leke aayga

Ye sab mom dad and baki sabki wajh setup hua hai

pari : ha didi sahi kaha apne hamesa hunko marte rehte Te Mai ab Kabi baa nai karunga

did: Mai bi sweet

gar ke andr mai chala gya iski kbr sunte hi sab kush ho jaate and ek badi party rakte hai

In train....

ab kafi raat Ho chuki ti

train Mai kafi sannta ta.

mai bi chupchap so gya bhook to bahoot lagi but ab kar bi kya sakte hai

Next day....

Train ek platform par ruki ti mai bi utar gya waha pe board deka to pta chal ki mai mumbai mai aa gay ta

maine jo ma ke pass se paise liye Te usse kuch khna liya and kha liya jisse thodi bhook sant hui

Baad mai wha setup chlte gya chlte hue main bhoot dur aa gya ta road bi sumsan ta

at home......

MA ne bi muje dudne ki koshi ki lekin kuch pta nai chala

didi bi sabse bahot kam baate karti ti pari bi thoda bahoot ese karti ti

baki sab to kushiya mana rahe te

back to me......

ab raat Ho gai ti main bi sumsaan sadk pe chl raha ta tabi ek car udr piche se aati and muje uda deti hai jisse muje bahoot chot lagti hai Mai dur jaake gir ta hu



Baaki next update mai........

Good update
Update 4 give as soon as possible

 

[Naik]

Iss story pe jo bi jagh Ke name hoge sabh kalpnik hai.

Update 1

Thakur Pratap SINGH Rajasthan ke Rampur gaanv ke Thakur hai. Unke pardada raja mahraja ke vansh Te Isliye unke pass kafi paisa and kafi Jamine hai. Gaanv Mai sabi log dadaji ke ijjat karte hai vo hamesa sabki madad karte hai.

Baad mai Prtap Singh ki Shadi MayaDevi se ho gai jiss mai Baad mai unko 3 bete or 1 beti peda Hui.

Name and baki sab introduction mai dek lai.

sab bade hone Ke baad sabki shadi karva di gai

jismai sab business karne lage so iske chalte Prtap SINGH and Maya SINGH ke siva tino bhai delhi sift ho gye

Teno bhaio me delhi mai Ek bada bunglo Ya fir yu kahu ke mahl because mahal jesa ta.

yaha par samy Age badta gya jis Mai teno bhai ke bache ka janm bi Ho gya ta dono bade chacha and meri badi bahn ka bi janm ho chuka ta. Ye sab bade hote gay sab mai bahoot pyar ta.

yha par dono bade chacha and papa ka business bi achi tarh chal raha ta.

Dadaji and dadi bi sabi baccho ko milne aaya karte Te sabi bacche bi gaanv bi jaaya karta Te.

lekin iss samy papa ka business dono chacha Ke business se bi bahoot adik aage nikl gya ta jiss se unko thodi jlan bi Ho rahi ti.

Thode smay baad.....

Raat Ke smay ek bade hospital Ke Ek room mai Ek aurat chik rahi ti botany pregnant ti
baahr Ek admi chkr kaat raha ta bahoot tension mai ta

Bahr mossam bi bahoot bayank ta Andrei raat ti bhoot tezi se baaris Ho rahi ti

Thode samy baad aurat ek bahoot hi Pyaare bacche ko janm deti hai jiski aanke ek dam nili ti and bahoot hi massom dik raha.

bacche ke rone Ke avaj sune Ke baad bhar vala admi bahoot kush ho jata hai
thodi der baad doctor bahr aata hai and bolta hai congratulations Thakur SherSingh apko beta hua hai. Itna sunne Ke baad Vo noto ki gaadi niklte hai Dr ko dete hai and bolte mitiye baanta pure hospital mai Ye bolte hue vo room mai enter karte hai and bolte hai Neha aaj Tumne hamko bahoot kusiya di hai kitna pyaara beta hai.

(ji haa dosto Ye dono or koi nai balki mere mummy or papa hai )

Jiss smay bacche ka janm hua usi samy kai dur swarg mai Ek Sevk God se bolta hai akir kaar uska janm ho hi gya. Uski baat sunte hi God muskrate hai.

Chaliye chalte hai dhrti pe vapis....

Mere janm hone Ke baad mummy papa dono gar aa jaate hai

(Ab third person ki jubaani)


SherSingh And NehaSingh Apne bacche ko leke gar Mai aate jaha unka swagat hota hai.

bacche ki janm ki kbr gaanv bi paoonch gai ti vo bi delhi ke liye nikl jaate hai.

ab wapis delhi chalte hai....

waha gar pe Ek larki hoti hai jo bacche ko Dek rahi ti and bahoot kush ho rahi ti...

ab donon ladki donon bacche ko ek ladki ka Hath Mein Dete Hain Jo ladke ko dekh kar kahati hai ki mamma yah Mera Bhai hai na

Aurat use ladki se kahati hai ki han beta yah Tera Bhai hai

Ladki kahati Hai mai isse bahoot pyar karongi mera beti...

uski baat sunne Ke baad sabi haste hai

sab bacche and bade bi bahoot kush te

dada and Dadi bi dusre din aa gye

unke guruji ko inform kar diya gya ta naamkarn Ke liye

dusre din naamkarn ka program raka jaata hai.

(So guys ab story mere yani hero Ke point of view se chelgi and sabi charcter Ke name or usse rista ki issab se chalge <Apko lag raha hoga itna chota bachan gai to kese but iss point of view se story acchi tarh samj aayga>)


Naamkarm ke din.....

Didi mere saath so rahi ti mere haath pakd ke jese muje koi utke le jaaye
fir mumny usko utati and vo merko dekti hi bolte hai

Nisha Didi : kitna pyaara betu hai na mummy

mummy : ha beta Tera betu bahoot pyaara hai.

Fir sab tyar hote hai hall Mai aate hall bi bahoot bada ta dada, Dadi, dono bade mummy and papa and mere saare bade BHAI behen sab tyaar Te and dusre bi bahoot memhan aaye hue te

mere sare bahi behen mere saath kel rehe te

(Guys yaha Mai dono bade mummy, papa ko name likunga)


NitaSingh : kitna pyaara bacha hai

NainaSingh : Ha sahi kaha apne bahoot hi pyaara hai.

Thodi der Mai guruji bi aa jaate hai

tab guruji bolte hai bacche ke mummy papa idar aa Ke bet jaaye

Mom merko unki goad Mai leke beti hai and dad unke pass Mai
fir pooja start hoti hai bahoot lambe smay ke Baad pooja smapt hoti hai
Tabi guruji bolte

Guruji : bacche ko merko dijiye

guruji bacche ko lene ke baad usko dekte hai and usme h ko jaate hai
Baad mai guruji dyyan lagte hai and bahoot achambit hote hai unko passena aa jaata hai.

Ye dek Ke sabi ko jatka lagta hai

thodi der baad guruji bolte hai

Guruji : Ye baccha bahoot hi baagysali hoga and jo bi karya karega usme vijay hoga Jo bi isse dushmani karega uska Ye sarvanaas karega Isliye iska naam hoga VikramSingh

so guys mera name hai VIKRAMSINGH

uske baad guruji dada, Dadi and mom, dad ko ek dusre room mai bulate hai and bolte hai

Guruji : aap sabko ek mathva purn baat batani hai

sab ko unki baat sunne Ke baad shok laga


(Aisa kya bta diya guruji NE Ye next update mai dekte hai)

Badhiya shaandaar shuruwat
Hero ka naam Vikram rakkha gaya h guru ji saare bate achchi batayi lekin aisi or kia baat huwi jo akele maa baap dada dadi ko hi bulaya aisa kia h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h

 

[Naik]

Update 2


So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki

Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga

Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai

uske baad guruji chale jaate hai

Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai

Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai

ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.

Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta

Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya

mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti

Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai

us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai

Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai

kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai

papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch

iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai

sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu

mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya

thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai


Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se

ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai

merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na

AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te

Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada

iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te

iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya

dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te

uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya

mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta

thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya

gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila

tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti

iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta

Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya

(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai

Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )

Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua

tab unko bahoot gussa aaya

vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage

dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan

Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana

naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai

Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune

mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai

sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha

ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte

jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu

sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.

Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te

but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.

Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.

iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai

vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta

naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa

Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta

Mai : boliye Didi

itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli

Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola

mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin

Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya

tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage

itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua

Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta

Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom

mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta

merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta

mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin

mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye

tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya

maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne

mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola

maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu

(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta

1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te

2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te

3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta


4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye

chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai

Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )

mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta

mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole

didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi

maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai

Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal

( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )


AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............

Apne sage beta se koyi aisa kerta h business m nuksaan ho jaye ya fir kisi ka accident ho jaye tow woh ek masoom se bachche ki wajah se ho gaya or keh do ki woh manhoos h ager aisa tha tow jab guru n bataya tab hi use kahi chhod deta ya maar dete lekin aiasa sulook
Baherhal dekhte h kab tak Vikram k saath aisa hota rahega
Badhiya update