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Very nice update bhai Lekin spelling mistakes bahut hai please thoda dhyan rakheUpdate 8
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi ti mai usse utye bina fresh hone chala gya fir Garden mai gya vaha dad exercise kar rehe te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bi muje kuch exercise dikya mai bi unki tarh karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulya hai sham tak aa jaaynge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir gar aa gye mom kitchen mai ti
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko uta do mai nasta lagti hu
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi ti
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe assa gya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad Scl jaane Ke tayri karne lage because aaj Scl javanu first day ta
Mom: scl ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko scl chod de
fir Mai and janvi car bet gaye and scl ke liye nikl gye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi ti
Fir scl aa gya scl bahoot bada ta
fir maine janvi ko uske class mail choda and Mai apne class ko dunda and as gya and last bench per bet gya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ask humre class mail ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke kadch ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai bet gya
mai class mail kisse se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padte gya iss tarh recess Ho gyi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch kya piya and wpis byy Bol Ke class mai chle gye
iss tarh scl time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap beta rahah ta lecture mai teacher aate gye padte gya
Baad mai and janvi car mai bet ke gar aa gye 3 baje ke aspass
gar aake
mom: so bachho scl kesa gya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch kaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana kaaya janvi bahoot kush ti
janvi NE jo bi scl mai kiya vo sab kuch batne lagi mai and mom sunn rehe te and has rehe te
iss trh time nikl gya dad 6 baje gar aa gye Te
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi ti
fir hum log bahr nikle and garden ki trf jaane lage
mai dad sent aage ta
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch btana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate kola
Fir hum andr chle gye vaha par ek aurat bi beti ui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi ta ab nai hai
Sabi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass spider ui ti
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne setup meri nind kuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar raha ta
uska gar bi hamra jese hi ta but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bi gya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning St karte hai sab so Pele 10 round lago iss medan ke 5 minutes
mai, to dekte hi chonk gya because medan bahoot bada ta
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikya ta and baad mai kuch pilya jo bahoot kadva ta but Baad takan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko Scl ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikana hai vo sika dehgi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai gar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bete hue te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pela din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko batata to vo mana karti and tension bi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum gar Mai aate gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko utya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono scl aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chul chal rehta ta sirf janvi ka sath baat kiya karta ta koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai ta so koi mujse baat karne nai ata ta
iss tarh aaj karva din bi scl Jaane smpt hua
gar pe aa Ke kuch kana Kaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo gar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila ta so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola ta ki sikna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi chku sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya kargi usse acha to idar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate kola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning St karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest ta
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke gar aa gya dad bi aati gye Te
Fir Sanne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and laptop leke jo sika ta usko ajmne laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekne Ke baad mai gai room mai baad mai kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
Awesome updatesUpdate 8
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi ti mai usse utye bina fresh hone chala gya fir Garden mai gya vaha dad exercise kar rehe te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bi muje kuch exercise dikya mai bi unki tarh karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulya hai sham tak aa jaaynge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir gar aa gye mom kitchen mai ti
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko uta do mai nasta lagti hu
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi ti
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe assa gya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad Scl jaane Ke tayri karne lage because aaj Scl javanu first day ta
Mom: scl ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko scl chod de
fir Mai and janvi car bet gaye and scl ke liye nikl gye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi ti
Fir scl aa gya scl bahoot bada ta
fir maine janvi ko uske class mail choda and Mai apne class ko dunda and as gya and last bench per bet gya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ask humre class mail ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke kadch ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai bet gya
mai class mail kisse se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padte gya iss tarh recess Ho gyi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch kya piya and wpis byy Bol Ke class mai chle gye
iss tarh scl time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap beta rahah ta lecture mai teacher aate gye padte gya
Baad mai and janvi car mai bet ke gar aa gye 3 baje ke aspass
gar aake
mom: so bachho scl kesa gya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch kaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana kaaya janvi bahoot kush ti
janvi NE jo bi scl mai kiya vo sab kuch batne lagi mai and mom sunn rehe te and has rehe te
iss trh time nikl gya dad 6 baje gar aa gye Te
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi ti
fir hum log bahr nikle and garden ki trf jaane lage
mai dad sent aage ta
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch btana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate kola
Fir hum andr chle gye vaha par ek aurat bi beti ui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi ta ab nai hai
Sabi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass spider ui ti
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne setup meri nind kuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar raha ta
uska gar bi hamra jese hi ta but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bi gya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning St karte hai sab so Pele 10 round lago iss medan ke 5 minutes
mai, to dekte hi chonk gya because medan bahoot bada ta
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikya ta and baad mai kuch pilya jo bahoot kadva ta but Baad takan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko Scl ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikana hai vo sika dehgi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai gar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bete hue te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pela din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko batata to vo mana karti and tension bi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum gar Mai aate gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko utya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono scl aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chul chal rehta ta sirf janvi ka sath baat kiya karta ta koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai ta so koi mujse baat karne nai ata ta
iss tarh aaj karva din bi scl Jaane smpt hua
gar pe aa Ke kuch kana Kaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo gar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila ta so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola ta ki sikna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi chku sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya kargi usse acha to idar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate kola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning St karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest ta
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke gar aa gya dad bi aati gye Te
Fir Sanne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and laptop leke jo sika ta usko ajmne laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekne Ke baad mai gai room mai baad mai kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
Bas ek saal aur age badha dijiye hero ka tab xforum ke hisab se hero ki age 18 ki ho jayegi.......Update 9
Next day bi roj ki tarh bit gya
Delhi....... Vikram ke purane gar
Vikram ke jane Ke baad Kisi ko kuch bi farq nai pada sab Apne mai mast Te enjoy kar rahe te manhoosh chala gya ta Isliye
but didi(nisha didi) and Tiya gar valo Se narj Te Isliye vo unse jyada baat nai karte Te Bas kaam ki baat karte Te unka Ye bartaav dek Ke sab ko thoda shock laga ta liken kisne kuch kaha nai jesa chlta ta vesa chlta rehne diya
•••••••••>hero side
mera traning bi chalu ta mai bahoot jald sab kuch sik raha ta
iss tarh samy bitta gya
After 10 years..........
Ab mera 17 sal ka Ho gya hu mera body 6 pack hai and dekne mai 18 ka lagta Hu
aaj muje 1 sal ho gya ta USA Mai
aaj meri traing puri Ho gai ti
in 10 sal Mai Maine sabk fighting style and sabi weapons mai expert and computer hacking mai full expert ta
training completely puri karne ke Baad aaj wapis india jana ta
Mai flight Mai bet gya ta Soch raha ta ki 1 sal Mai sab kese hoge
fir mai so jata Hu
flight land karti hai mai Mumbai airport se bahr ata hu vaha par dad, mom and janvi merko receive karne aaye hue te
mai airport se bahr aate h janvi jese muje dekti hai doud ke ate h and merko rote hue gale lag jaati hai mai bi usko gale laga leta hu meri anko mai bi ansu te
me: kesi hai meri angel
janvi: mai tik hu bahiya
hmm
mom: hum se bi mil lo hum bi yahi hai
fir mai mom sent milta Hu
dad: aa gya mera sher
me: yes dad
fir hum gar aate hai and mai room mai fresh hone chla jata Hu
fir mai niche aata Hu
dining table pe sab mera intajar kar rehe te fir mai bi aa jata hu
for sab lunch karne lagte hai
janvi: bhai aaj muje apko shopping karne le jana hoga and abi tak apne muje apna gift bi nai diya hai
me: gift?
mai ese react karta hu jese muje shock laga Ho
mom: kya hua beta
me: mom darsal vo mai sweetie ka gift lana bhul gya hu
itna sunte hi sweetie rone lagti hai apne room mai chali jati hai
mom : beta ab jaa usko uska gift de de muje malum hai tu majk kar raha hai
dad: kya tu majk kar raha hai
maine half mai gardn hilla di
dad: merko to laga tu sach mai uske liye gift nai laya
me: are ese kese bhul jau aap dono ke liye bi gift laya hu
thodi der baad bell bajta hai mai darwaja kolta Hu and gift leta hu jo bahoot bada ta
(Ye gift maine USA mai karida ta and delivery ke liye Bol diya ta)
mai fir jaldi gift leke sweetie ke room mai jata Hu vo abi bi ro rahi ti bed pe lete hue
mai uske pass Jake
me: kya hua meri angel ko
janvi : aap bahoot gande ho mere liye gift nai laaye
me: are kisne kaha mai gift nai laya ye deko gift
mai usko gift dikata hu
gift ka name sunn Ke h vo ek dum uth jaati hai and gift ko dekti hai jo maine side mai raka hua ta
vo bed set utr ke gift kolne lagti hai
gift kulne ke Baad gift dekti h vo bahoot kush ho jati hai and chikti hui and nachti hue mere gale lag jati hai
gift mai ek pink bada sa teddy ta
janvi: thanku thanku bhiya I love you bhai
me: I love you 2 my angel
fir vo mom dad ko gift dikane lagti hai
mai mom dad ko bi unka gift deta hu
mom gift kolti hai usme bahoot h sundr necklace ta and dad ke gift mai ek bahoot kimti watch ti
fir iss tarh sham hone lagti hai
sham ko mai and janvi shopping pe jate hai car leke
car Mai
me: aaj ka kya plan hai my angel
janvi : bhai sabse pele movie deknge fir shopping and dinner
me: Ohk. Let's go
fir hum mall aa jate hai and movie ki tickets leke movie dekne lagte hai
movie Ke baad shopping karne lagte hai mai thodi bahoot apne shopping karta hu because thode din baad scl bi st hone vala ta
dad ne mera admission 12th mai karva diya ta and sweetie 9th mai
shopping Ke baad hum dinner karte hai
tab tak 10 baj gye Te mom ko pele h bol diya ta maine
fir hum gar aa jate hai and mom dad sent thodi bahoot baat karke so jate hai sweetie mere sath soie hui ti
subh mai 4 baje ut jata Hu mai sweetie ko side mai karke uth jata Hu and gar ke bahr aake jogging karta hu and exercise karta hu
(Jack and Maria traning dene Ke baad wapis lout gye Te)
mai 7 bje tak exercise vgra karta hu wapis gar aata Hu vaha garden mai dad exercise kar rehe te nai unke pass jata Hu
Me: gm dad
dad: GM beta
dad: traning kesi ti
me: good
dad: hmm. Breakfast ke Baad mere sath ana kuch kaam hai
me: ohk dad muje pta hai kya kaam hai
dad: Tuje kese pata hai
me: Baad mai bta dunga
dad: hmm.chalo AB
Fir hum gar mai aata jate hai mai room mai jaake dekta Hu to sweetie abi tak so rahi ti
mai usko forehead pe kisa karke uta ta hu vo uth ke merko gaal pe kiss karti hai
me: good morning my angel
janvi: gm my sweet Bhai
me: chl ab jaldi fresh hone jaa fir breakfast karna hai
for vo chali jati hai Apne room mai
mai bi fresh ho jata hu and niche jata Hu and mom ko GM wish karta hu vo bi gm wish karte hai
iss tarh breakfasht Ke baad mai room mai ake change karta hu and niche aata Hu vaha pe dad bi ready go chuke Te
me: chle dad
dad: ha chalo
mom: kaha jaa rehe ho aal log
dad: are kahi nai bas mai isse le jaa raha hu kuch kaam hai
Janvi: KYa kaam hai Dad
dad: are kuch nai office jaa raha hu ese scl mai kuch kaam hai to Maine kaha mai chod dunga (juth)
momhk
fir mom and janvi ko byy bol Ke hum nikl jate hai
dad ki office CBI head quarter
vaha pauchne ke Baad dad Apne cabin mai jate hue
dad: sab jaldi dek lene ke baad cabin mai ana
me: ohk
Mai to dek raha ta sab kese work karte hai vagara
fir thodi der baad mai cabin mai jata hu and chair pe bet jata Hu
chair pe bet ke
me: so mujse kisko baat karni hai mere dad ko ya Raw chief ko
meri baat sunne Ke baad dad ko jese shock laga Ho
because dad Raw chief Ye baat kuch logo ko hi malum ta merko nai btya ta
dad: Ye baat tumko kisne btya
me: vimram ko pta nai hoga but "Killer"
Ko to pta hoga na dad
meri baat jesi hi puri hui dad ko firse jatka lga
dad: means USA mai underword ka safaya karne vala killer or koi nai mera beta vikram hai
maine ha mai mundi hila di
dad ko firse jatka lga
dad ne pani piya and thodi der baad bole tum killer kese
me: uske liye apko 1 sal piche jana hoga jab Mai usa gya ta
baki next update mai....................