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Update : 11 (Khoon ka Khel)

Patil “ji saaab, mai kal use apne saath lete aaunga”

Aryan “thik hai” fir kuch der baad kehta hai “par dhyaan rahe, uss waqt sunil yaanha naa ho”

Patil “thik hai saab”

Aur fir uske baad voh dono hi apne apne ghar chale jaate hai

Ab aage…..


Aaj ki raat Aryan ki aaram se kat jaati hai, pure din ki bhagadaudi se voh kaafi had tak thak chukka tha, toh palang pe girte hi so gaya, aur vese hi gaanv me bhi sabhi log apne apne gharo me sao chuke the

Lekin jungle ke kisi kone me kuch ajeeb se halchal ho rahi thi, karib 4 log jungle ke raste kahi jaa rahe the, dikhne unn sabki ki umar karib 24-25 saal ki hogi
voh log 2-2 ke pair me the, shayad couples lag rahe the kyunki unke saath me rahi dono ladkiyo ne apne-apne saathi ke haath pakad rakhe the
Pehla ladka “bhai, yaar tune toh thaka hi diya aaj, abhi aur kitna chalayega” voh laathe ke sahare chalte hue apne saathi se kehta hai

Dusra ladka jo thoda aage chal raha tha voh kehta hai “haa bhai, thaakan toh ho rahi hai, par yaar humne maje bhi toh kiye na”

Pehla ladka “haa yaar, sach me maja toh bahut aaya”


Tabhi pehli vali ladki kehti hai “rakesh, baby muje bahut thakaan ho rahi hai, thodi der yanhi par rukte hai”

Rakesh “ha bhai, Payal sahi keh rahi hai, thodi der yahin par aaram kar lete hai”

Toh voh dusra ladka kuch sochte hue kehta hai “mai soch raha hu ki abhi almost raat ke 11 baj rahe hai, aur hum log mussoorie kab tak pahuchenge iska pata nahi, toh kyu naa aaj raat hum yahin par ruk jaaye”

Rakesh “idea acha hai”

Toh Payal halke gusse me bolti hai “nahi nahi nahi nahi, mai yanha nahi rukungi”

Toh unke saath rahi duri ladki kehti hai “kyu baby, abhi toh tu keh rahi thi yanha aaram karte hai”

Payal “neha, maine thodi der rukne ke liye kaha tha, raat bitane ke liye nahi kaha”

Neha thoda chidate hue kehti hai “acha toh baby ko darr lag raha hai” aur voh hasne lagti hai

Payal “pagal mat ban neha, dekh na charo aur kitna andhera hai, aur upar se yeh jungle, agar koi jaanwaar aagaya toh..??” voh darte hue apne charo aur dekhte hue bolti hai

Neha ispar joro se hasne lagti hai, toh payal halki si chidte hue kehti hai “rakesh, please na baby, hume yanha nahi rukna chahiye”

Rakesh ko apne dost Sachin ki baat sahi lagti hai, toh voh payal ko samjate hue kehta hai “are baby, mai huna tumhare saath, aur vese bhi darne ki koi baat nahi hai, dekho hum aaj subah se hi jungle me ghum rahe hai, par hume abhi tak koi bhi jaanwaar nahi dikha”

Payal bhi kuch sochte hue kehti hai “haa baby, par fir bhi muje dar lag raha hai” voh rakesh ka haath pakad leti hai

Toh rakesh usko pyaar se gaal par kiss karte hue kehta hai “baby kuch nahi hoga, aur vese bhi mai tumhe raat ko sone thodina dunga”

Payal ispar halka sharmate hue pyaar se rakesh ke sine par ghusa marte hue bolti hai “tu na sach me pagal hai pura”

Rakesh “ab jiski girlfriend itni hot hogi toh pagal toh koyi bhi hoga” kehte hue voh payal ke hoth par apne hoth rakh deta hai

Yeh dekhkar Neha “yeh lo, yeh dono toh abhi se shuru ho gaye”

Rakeh aur Payal ko kiss karte dekhkar Sachin bhi neha ke pass aata hai aur voh Neha ko piche se pakad uske gale ko chumne laga
Uske baad fir Rakesh aur Payal dono ek paid ke piche chale jaate hai aur vahi dusri aur Neha aur sachin bhi thode se dur ho gaye
Alag hone se pehla Payal kehti hai “neha, jyada dur nahi jaana” jispar neha haa mein apna sar hila deti hai

Ab scene kuch aisa tha ki dono hi couples alag alag jagaho par the, raat bhi apni charam seema par pahuch chuki thi, aur asmaan me bhi dheere dheere badal aane shuru ho chuke the, aur isi bich dono hi couples ki raas-leela chal rahi thi

“aaahhh, aahhhhh baby I love you” kehte hue payal jadd jaati hai, aur Rakesh bhi Payal ke upar gir jaata hai
Kuch der baad dono hi aasmaan ki aur dekh rahe the, Payal Rakesh ki baanho me laite hue Rakesh ki aur dekhte hue kehti hai “baby, sach me, khule asmaan ki niche sex karne ka maja hi alag hai”

Rakesh uske hontho ko chumte hue kehta hai “kanha tha na maine, yeh trip tumhare liye yadgaar bana dunga” fir Payal bina kuch rakesh ke sine par sar rakhkar lait jaati hai

“yyyyyyyaaaaaaaddddddddgaaaaaarrrr” ek bhari bharkham awaaz bina shor ke payal ke kaano me gunjti hai, jise sunkar payal apni aankhe khol deti hai
Voh charo aur dekhti hai par use koi nahi dikhta toh voh thodi dari hui awaaz me kehti hai “baby, voh awaaz kesi thi”

Shayad rakesh ki baat sach thi, Payal ke liye yeh trip yadgaar hone vali thi, Rakesh ki aur se koi jawab naa paakar Payal rakesh ki aur mudna chahti thi..lekin Payal aisa nahi kar paayi, use mehsus hone laga ki Rakesh use bahut joro se apne baanho me samet raha hai

Payal ek pal ke liye toh sab kuch bhul jaati hai, par ekak uske kamar me dard hone lagta hai “baby, please chodo na, muje dard ho raha hai” par rakesh apni pakad ko dheeli nahi karta balki aur majbooti se payal ko jakad leta hai jisse payal ke muh se dard bhari awaaz nikal padti hai “aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”

Payal ki chikh sunkar Rakesh apne baanhe khol deta hai aur kehta hai “sorry baby, voh kuch jyada hi jor se jakad liya”

Payal bhi rakesh ki awaaz sunkar turant uski aur dekhne lagti hai “pagal hai tu sach me” aur kehte hue voh uske hontho ko chum kar khadi hokar apne kapde pehen ne lagi

Yeh dekh Rakesh bhi khada ho jaata hai “kya baby, itni jaldi kapde pehen rahi, abhi toh puri raat baaki hai” kehte hue voh thik payal ke pass aa gaya

Payal bina uski aur dekhe kehti hai “bilkul bhi nahi ab, aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai”

“sirf aaj ki hi raat hai, huhuhuhuhu” ki awaaz firse payal ke kaano me padti hai

“kyaa kaha” kehte hue voh piche mudte hi joro se uski cheekh nikal gayi “rrrrrrraaakkkkkkkkkeeeeeesssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”

Vahi dsuri aur, Neha aur Sachin ka bhi kuch kuch yahi haal tha, Neha aur Sachin bhi nagna awath me baithe ekdusre ko pyaar kar rahe the, par yeh kya, yanha ke haalat toh kuch aur hi hai

Janha Payal aur Rakesh tha vaha ka mausam thodi thik tha, lekin yaha par vatavaran me ekdum se palat aagaya tha, jo badal dheere dheere asmaan me ghera bana rahe the voh ab chand ko puri tarah se apne kabje me liye tha, ab roshni ke naam par vanha par kuch bhi nahi tha


Neha sachin ko pagalo ki tarah kiss kiye jaa rahi thi, jisse ab Sachin ko kaafi takleef hone lagi thi, voh naa toh thik se saans le paa raha tha aur naa hi hi kuch kar paa raha tha
Thand itni jyada badh gayi thi ki ab dheere dheere uska sharir bhi akadne laga tha, jabki aisa lag raha tha ki Neha ko iss thand ka koi asar hi naa ho

Sachin kaafi der se apne haath pair maar raha tha, lekin uska Neha par koi asar nahi ho raha tha, toh Sachin ne puri takaat ke saath Neha ko khud se alag kiya
Iss baar voh Neha ko khud se alag karne me kamiyaab toh ho gaya, par neha kea lag hote hi uski ek dardnaak chikh pure jungle me gunj uthi
Neha jab sachin se alag hui toh saath me usne Sachin ke niche vale hoth ko bhi apne saath ukhad liya, apna hoth alag hone se Sachin dard ke maare me chillane laga aur khoon paani ki tarah behne laga tha

Sachin badi hi dardnak awaz me kehta hai “kya kar rahi hai tu” par voh neha ko nahi dekh paa raha tha, uske baal puri tarah se uske chehre par aachuke the, aur uske mooh se khoon gir raha tha

Tabhi sachin ke kaano me Neha ki bhari awaaz padhti hai “ab kya hua tuje..?? le ne, chaat ne muje, hihihihi”

Awaz itni bhaari aur itni darwani thi ki kisi bhi insaan ki rooh tak kaamp uthe, Sachin dari hui halat me ardh khuli aankho se Neha ki aur dekhta hai
Neha abhi tak Sachin ke upar hi baithi hui thi, usne jor se apne sar ko jatak diye jisse saare baal hawa me lehrane lage, uski aankhe..aankhe puri tarah se sujkar laal ho chuki thi, aur fir uske daant ko ke bich Sachin ka hath abhi bhi fasa hua tha, voh fir dheere se uss hoth ko apne muh me leti hai aur use bade hi aaram se chaba kar khaa jaati hai

Yeh dekhkar Sachin ko ulti aajati hai aur voh sidhe Neha ke sharir par kar deta hai, apne upar Ulti hue dekhkar Neha bahut hi jyada gusse me aajati hai aur voh apna daaya haath upar uthati hai
Haath ki naashe puri tarah se ful chuki thi..aur voh abhi bhi lagatar flute jaa rahi thi..aisa lag raha tha maano abhi vaha se khoon ke funvare nikalne lagenge, aur hath ke naakhun..naakhun achanak se badhne lage, lekin sirf itna kaafi nahi tha, badhne ke saath saath ekdum se nukile ho rahe the aur teji se Neha ne usi haath se Sachin par vaar kiya aur pura haath usne sachin ki kamar ke andar ghusa diya aur isi ke saath sachin ki dardnak cheekh uss pure jungle me gunj uthi

Dusri aur Rakesh ko dekhkar payal bahut jyada dari hui thi, kyunki Rakesh harkate hi kuch esi kar raha tha, usne payal ke samne hi apne haath se apni aankh ko bahar nikal diya aur fir use chaba kar khaane laga
Payal yeh dekh nahi paati hai aur voh joro se rone lagi, toh rakesh fir chalte hue uske pass aaya aur apni adhi khaayi hui aankh Payal ko dene laga
Payal yeh bardasht nahi kar paati, apne pass Rakesh ko dekhkar voh Rakesh ko dhakka marti hai toh Rakesh piche ki aur chale jaata hai
Par halat kuch alag the, Payal ne jesi hi Rakesh ko dhakka maara toh voh hawa me udte hue piche ki aur jaane laga, Payal ko kuch bhi samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki yeh kya ho raha hai, voh bad rakesh ko ese hawa me piche jaate hue dekh rahi thi ki achanak se Rakesh piche ek paid se takra jaata hai

Rakesh jab paid se takraya toh voh paid sukha tha, toh uski ek daali uske mathe se aarpaar ho jaati hai, voh daali Rakesh ki bachi hui aankh se nikalkar bahar aajati hai

Payal yeh dekhkar joro se apni aankhe band kar deti hai aur apni puri takaat se chilla uthi hai

Payal aur Sachin dono hi ek hi waqt par chillate hai, lekin unn dono ki hi awaaz ek dusre tak nahi pahuchti
Payal turant hi vaha se Neha ko pukarte hue daudti hai, voh baar-baar piche mudkar dekh rahi thi, kyunki uske piche piche Rakesh bhi daudte hue aa raha tha, aur uska darr sabse jyada uss nukili padi ki daali ko dekhkar ho raha tha kyunki voh abhi bhi Rakesh ke sar me fasi hui thi

Payal daudte hue Neha ke pass aajati hai, aur Neha aur Sachin ko dekhkar usko gussa bhi bahut aata hai, kyunki voh itni jor se chillayi thi uske baad bhi uski madad ke liye yeh dono nahi aaye the, aur ulta yeh dono abhi ek dusre ko kiss karne me lage hue hai
Payal daudkar Neha ke pass chali gayi aur usne unn dono ko alag karne ki koshish ki, par Payal unn dono ko alag nahi kar paati aur niche gir jaati hai

Jab usne dhyaan se dekha toh voh dekhkar dang rah jaati hai, uski aankho se aansu bhi behne lage the, kyunki samne ka najara hi kuch aisa tha, usne dekha ki Neha aur Sachin kiss nahi kar rahe the, balki ek dusre ka maans kha rahe the
Payal apne saar par haath rakhkar ek aur baar chillato hai “naaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhiiiiiii” jise sunkar Sachin aur Neha dono hi Payal ki aur haste hue dekhne lagte hai

Unn dono ke moonh se khoon ke funvaare nikal rahe the, ek side ke chehre par toh maans bilkul bhi nahi tha, yanha tak ki chehre ki haddiya tak dikhayi de rahi thi
Payal kuch samaj paati uske pehle hi Rakesh uske pass aajata hai, voh apni bhari awaaz se kehta hai “hihihih ssshhhhh” aur voh jor jor se saanse lene lagta hai “hihihihi tera jism..chahiye muje, muje dena tuje” kehte hue voh hasne laga

Vahi payal rote hue apne haath jodkar kehti hai “please…please jaane do muje” aur vooh joro se rone lagi

Payal ki yeh haalat dekhar voh teeno hi bhari awaaz se hasne lage the, fir pata nahi Payal ko achanak se kese himmat aagayi voh fauran vaanha se daudkar jaane lagi, par shayad aaj uska ant hona tay tha
Voh teeno ne ek saath Payal ke upar chalang lagayi aur voh charo hi gir gaye

Girne ke saath Neha ne apne daant ko uske sar par gada diye, Sachine ane uske pairo me aur Rakesh ne usi nokili lakdi ke saath uski kamar me
Voh ladki ab Rakesh ke shar se hote hue uski aankh se nikalkar Payal ki kamar ke aarpaar ho chuki thi
Voh teeno hi log Payal ko jeena hi chabane lage, aur payal bas dard ke maare jitna ho sake utna jor se chillane lagi, lekin uski madad karne vala aaj koyi bhi nahi tha

Payal ki ek aakhri dard bhari cheekh uss pure jungle me gunj uthi, jiski awaaz se asmaan me pakshiya tak fadfadane lagi
Dekhadekh iss ghatne ke baad asmaan bhi apne aap saaf hota chala gaya aur jungle ke andhere par chand ki roshni ne kabja kar liya

To be Continued..
Kafi darawana update tha bhai aur ab tak ka best update bhi laga mujhe
Charo dost jungle me maze karne gaye the par mil gayi dardnak saza
dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
waiting for next update
 

Milan2010

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Bhayanak update
Kaha ye charo ne socha tha jungle mein mangal krnege or kya se kya ho gya inke sath bht hi dardnak maut nasib hui in charo ko.lekin sawal ab bhi wahi hai akhir in sbka raaz kya hai or kyu aise haadse ho rhe h logo ke sath
:thanks: Kirti.s ji :dost:
yeh sawal ka jawab toh aryan bhi dhund raha hai, agar aapko pata chal jaaye toh aryan ki madad kar dijiyega
 
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Milan2010

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DAR JARURI HAI
SAHI KAHA DAR WO HAI JISME INSAN KI ROOH TAK KAMPE
MAST LIKHELA HAI DAR AUR DIL KE BAREME
RIGHT SHANT CHIJE SABSE KHATARNAK HOTI HAI
SCENE ACCHA CREATE KIYELA HAI
UE COPULE KI DAR RAHE HAI
DARKO BHAGANE KE LIYE SONG LAGAYA AUR MAJAK MASTI ME GHUS GAYE TRUCK ME
DO LOG THE LASH EK HAI WO BHI SADI HUI KANKAL WALI EK DIN ME AISI HALAT NA HOGI YE DUSRI CASE TO NA HAI HAI TO WO COUPLE KA KYA HUWA
AREA KHATARNAK PRATRUT KIYA HAI
AUR WO LADKA KYA KEHNA CAHTA THA
KYA HAI IS JUNGLE ME UTSUKTA BADH GAI HAI RE BAWA
:thanks: fighter bhai :dost:
jaankar acha laga ki aapko meri story pasand aayi :dost:
 

Milan2010

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Abe kya tha ye bas kankal bacha thik hai lekin mas ko nakhuno se nikala gaya hai :o
Mast likh raha hai bhai har chij ko importance dekar introduce kar raha hai jisse area ka haal pata chal raha
Aur jungle ki hawaniyat
:thanks: fighter bhai :dost:
bhai, pehli baar koshish kar raha hu horror story likhne ki
agar koi galti ho jaaye toh plsz batayega
 

Milan2010

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Kya hai kyun hai ye kaise hai ye sab samjh se pare hai aryan bade dil wala hai jo iski teh tak jana chahta hai
Aur sab inspectors ki maut ko kyu chupaya ja raha hai ye kya ye bahooooooot hi badi sajish hai ya kuch aur
Ye bhi hai agar body ped ke pass lai gai hai to blood kyu na hai
Ye bada dardnak area hai re babuwa
Ab ye shurwat kaha jakar rukti hai dekhne me maja ayega
:thanks: fighter bhai :dost:
bhai, aryan ko kuch bahtu bada jhol laga, isiliye shayad voh iss case ki jadd tak jaana chahta hai
haa bhai sajish toh bahut hi badi h
dekhte h ab aage kya hita h
 

Milan2010

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Are bhai kyu dara raha hai
Jhakkas hai re bhai
Aryan mahashay ped ke bareme bol kar fas gaye kya
Bhai imagin karke dar lag raha scene create karke
Soch agar ye sach me hojaye to kya hoga
Aur agar aise hi sunsan area me raat ke 12 baje akela gum rahe ho aur achanak ye update yaad aye phir to hogaya tumhara kam tamam:afraid::hinthint2::hinthint2::hinthint2::hinthint2::hinthint2:
Mast update tha bhidu :applause::applause::claps::claps:
hahaha, are bhai, darr ka maja toh tab hi aayega jab aap iss story ko raat me padhoge
bhai, usne toh vahi bola h jo usne dekha tha :stupidp:
bhai, aisa ha toh saath me chalisa lekejaane ka :smarty:
 

Milan2010

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Ab jo aryan ne dekha aur mehsus kiya
Kya wo usse jyada kaam ka natija samjhega ya seriously lega
Bhai par mast film chalai tune best aryan jab se jeep me betha aur gir kya scene hai wah sach me hojaye aisa to heart fail hojaye
bhai ab agar aryan samjdar raha toh voh samaj jaega ki kuch jhol h
varna toh :daru: peekar aish karega
shukhirya bhai aapko update pasand aaya
 
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