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Horror Maut ka Aatank...!!!

Milan2010

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Are bhai koi to update normal de re bawa waise ye normal hi tha humare liye lekin aryan ke liye nahi wo to pagal hoke rahega
Aur jistarash se ghatnaye prastut ki gai ustarah se ye mahol samany na lag raha ye kisi aur hi taraf ishara kar rahe ye sarpanch ka to kam na lag rhaa
bhai yeh toh bas shuruwat hai, abhi toh aage aage dekhte jao ki yeh ho kya raha hai
 
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Milan2010

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Na tum hume chain se padhne bhi mat de
Aise aise scene likh rha imagine karna bhi na ban raha
Aisa bhi koi maut hoti hai kya fukkk
Sala jungle bada bhayankar hai ye kisi insan ka to kam na lag raha
Jo aryan ke sath ghata hai ye thik se dekha jaye to aryan ko bhi samjh jana chaiye tha
:thanks: THE FIGHTER bhai :dost:
thanks a ton bhai
jaankar bahut khushi hui ki aapko meri yeh story pasand aayi :hug:
aapke jese readers aur aapke itne pyare reviews ki vajah se hi hum writers ko likhne ka hosla milta hai
saath bane rahiye bhai :dost:
 
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Milan2010

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Kafi darawana update tha bhai aur ab tak ka best update bhi laga mujhe
Charo dost jungle me maze karne gaye the par mil gayi dardnak saza
dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
waiting for next update
:thanks: zopion bhai :dost:
bhai, yeh toh bas shuruwat hai
 
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Milan2010

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Update : 12 (Ajeeb sa PostMortem)

Kehte hai ki nayi subah naya savara ek nayi ummid ki kiran saath me leke aati hai, Par Aryan ki zindagi me har nayi subah uske liye logo ki maut ke samachar lekar aati hai
Subah ke 7 baje hi use yeh khabar mil chuki thi ke uss jungle me aur 4 logo ki maut hue hai, voh apni team ke saath uss jagah pahuch chukka tha jaha par Payal aur uske saathiyo ki maut hui thi

Vaha pahuch kar unn sabhi ke dimaag ghum jaate hai aur unki ruh tak hil jaati hai, kyunki unke samne raha voh manjaar tha hi kuch aisa tha
Samne unn sabhi ki laashe kuch iss tarah se padi thi, Payal ka sharir sabse niche tha, uske upar Rakesh ki dead body thi, aisa lag raha tha ki voh paid ki daali ke tukde ne unn dono ki laash ko apas me jode rakha tha, vahi dusri aur Neha ka sharir Payal se thode side me tha aur Sachin ka sharir payal ke pairo ke bich me

Aryan uss aur naa dekhte hue kehta hai “sabse pehle toh inn sabki laash par kapda lapeto” kyunki unn sabhi ke sharir par koi bhi kapda nahi tha

Aryan “aakhir yeh charo kar kya rahe the”

Sunil “dekhne se toh yahi lag raha hi ki yeh charo jungle me mangal karne aaye the, lekin inn bicharo ko kya pata ki unka yanha antim sanskar ho jaayega”

Aryan halka sa gusse me kehta hai “yeh sab yeh band kamre me bhi toh kar sakte the, kya jarurat thi inhe jungle me aane ki”

Sunil “kya kare yaar, aajki generation hi aisi hai ki inhe naye prayog karne hote hai”

Aryan “agar inki haalat iss tarah se hai, toh inke kapde bhi yahin kahi hone chahiye”

Sunil “patil vahi kar raha hai”

Aryan “shayad usi se pata chale ki yeh log kaun hai aur kaha se aaye hai”

Sunil “bhai, sach kahu iss tarah kaa manjaar maine aajtak nahi dekha”

Aryan “koi itna behreham kese ho sakta hai..?? I mean just look at them, kitna tadpe honge jab voh lakdi unn dono ke sharir ke aarpaar gayi hogi"

Tabtak patil vaha par aajata hai, use inn charo ke kapde alag alag jagah se mile the, aur unke kapdo ke andar se inn sabhi ke identy cards mile the jo voh Aryan ko dikhata hai
Aryan “ise scan karo, aur inki tasweer leke Mossurie jao ka pata karo ki yeh log kis hotel me thehre the”

Patil “ji sahab”

Aryan “chal bhai, ab yahan rukne ka koi fayda nahi hai, vese bhi voh sala doctor hume puri kahani chitthi suna hi dega”

Sunil “haa sahi kaha, chalkar thoda kaam hi kar lete hai” aur fir voh dono vaha se nikalkar Police Station aajate hai
Vese toh aaj Aryan ne socha tha ki voh Patil ki ladki se baat karega, par ab haalat ese ho gaye the usne aaj voh plan cancel kar liya aur Sunil ke saath milkar unn files ko dekhne laga

Aryan “iss PM ke hisab se almost 373 logo ki maut hui hai, aur aaje 4 milakar total 377”

Sunil “aur hamare kal ki chaanbin ke hisab se karib 149 log ki maut hui hai”

Aryan “uhmm, par unmese kitne log hai jo natural death se mare hai”

Sunil “karib 65 log ese hai jinki maut naturally hui hai”

Aryan “aur baaki logo ke maut ki vajah kya hai”

Sunil “unknown reasons hai”

Aryan “thik hai, baaki bache 84 logo ke naam ki list taiyaar karo, PM report se kuch toh pata chalega” fir kuch sochkar kehta hai “yeh sab kitne din se chal raha hai..??”

Sunil “pata nahi bhai, mai aaya tab se toh 200 logo ki maut toh maine dekhi hai, uske pehle ke kya haal the muje nahi paata, aur jinhe pata tha unn mese ab koi zinda nahi bacha hai”

Aryan “par koi toh details hogi”

Sunil “nahi bhai, maine suna hai ki ek baar gaan me aaga lagi thi, usme hamare saare records jhal gaye the, kuch nahi bacha hai”

Aryan ko yeh thoda ajeeb lagta hai “yeh tuje ajeeb nahi lag raha..?? I mean inn sab ki maut ko chupaya jaana, aur aag lagna”

Sunil “bhai, ajeeb toh muje bhi lag raha tha, aur maine apni aur se puri koshish bhi ki, lekin koi muje koi lead nahi mili”

Aryan “bahut bada game khela jaa raha hai” fir voh log vapas unn files ko dekhne lage
karib 2 din me unn sabhi ne unn PM reports ko padh liye, aur har naam ke saath identify karke ek alag list bana diya, jo kaafi chaunkane vaala tha

Dusre din Doctor Verma ne bhi bula liya ki PM ho chukka hai, toh PM report dekhne ke liye Sunil aur Aryan dono hi uske pass chale jaate hai
Aryan “toh sahab, aaj kya dikhane vaale hai”

Verma thoda haste hue kehta hai “vahi jo akshar hota hai”

Aryan “matlab ke aaj fir aap muje ulti karwa kar hi rahenge”

Verma “are nahi nahi, aaj aisa kuch nahi hoga, kyunki yaha par maine jitney bhi laasho ke PM kiye usme yeh iss baar ki laashe muje ek dum mast haalat me mili thi” kehte hue voh muskura deta hai

Yeh sunkar Aryan kehta hai “acha, yeh achi hai, yeh sala Buddha sathiya gaya hai” fir voh doc se kehta hai “dhanya hai aap prabhu dhanya hai”

Verma “toh chaliye, aaj ka yeh karyakram shuru karte hai” kehte hue doc unn dono ko charo laasho ke pass le gaya, jo abhi alag alag strachers par rakhi hui thi

Verma sabse pehle Sachin ke pass jaakar uske sharir se kapda hata deta hai “dekhiye, jesa ki aap bhi dekh sakte hai, issko marne se pehle iske hotho ko nikal diya gaya tha, kyunki chehrea par khoon failne ke nishan hai, aur iske alawa iske muh me insaani chamdi ke tukde hai, jo ki iske naa hokar uss ladki ke hai” fir voh sharir ke niche ki aur aate hue kehta hai “ab aage ke toh kuch nahi tha, par back side se iss ladki ne joro se naakhun ko andar tak dayae hai” uske baaju vali ladki ki aur ishara karte hue kehta hai

Voh log ab Neha ke pass aate hai aur doctor uski laash ko dikhate hue kehta hai “ab iski haalat bhi kuch kuch uss ladke ke jese hi hai, iske muh me bhi insaani chamdi mili hai jo ki iss ladke ki hai” voh sachin ki aur ishara karte hue kehta hai “aur isne hi apne haatho se uss par vaar kiya tha, kyunki” voh neha ke haatho ko upar karte hue dikhata hai “iss ladki ke haatho me usska khoon laga hua hai, aur” kehte hue voh thoda side me aagaya

Aryan “aur kya doctor”

Voh ek plate lekar aaya jisme ek naakhun ka chota sa piece rakha hua tha “yeh naakhun muje uss ladke ki kamar se mila hai, jo ki voh iss ladki ka hai”

Aryan “aur kya hai”

Verma “jyada toh kuch nahi hai, inn dono ki laash se muje itna hi pata chala hai, baaki sab sahi hai”

Aryan “toh aapke kehne ke hisab se toh yeh lag raha hai inn dono ne hi apaas me ek-dusre ko khaaya hai, yeh kese possible ho sakta hai”

Verma “PM reports toh yahi keh rahi hai”

Sunil “bhai, iska faisla hum baad me karte hai ki kisne kisko khaaya hai, filhaal unn dono ko bhi toh dekh le”

Aryan “thik hai bhai”

Verma “ab darasal inn dono ki laash muje kaafi ajeeb lagi hai” voh rakesh ke pass jaakar kehta hai “iski body me jyada toh kuch nahi mila, bas iski dono aankhe nahi hai” fir voh uss lakdi ke tukde ki aur ishara karte hue kehta hai “aur voh jo lakdi, aisa lag raha hai ki ek aankh uss lakdi ki vajah se fut gayi hai, kyunki voh lakdi iske sar ke piche se aar-paar nikli hui thi”

Aryan kuch soch raha tha, par usne iss waqt kuch naa bolkar Verma ki baat ko sunn neka faisla karta hai, verma apni baat aage sonata hai “aur iski jo dusri aankh thi, ussko khich kar nikala gaya hai, aur uss aankh ke kuch kann muje rakesh ke muh se milte hai”

Aryan yeh sunkar apna muh thoda bigadte hue kehta hai “yaaakkkkkk, koi apni aankh bhala kyu khaayega..??”

Verma haste hue kehta hai “hehehe ab voh toh mai nahi bata sakta na, mai toh vahi bata sakta hu jo maine study kiya hai”

Aryan “thik hai thik hai, aage kya hai”

Verma “bas, filhaal to hiss ke sharir me yahi tha, par ab jo mai aapko sunane vala hu, voh kaafi ajeeb hai”

Sunil “chaliye toh ab voh bhi sunn hi lete hai”

Verma fir chalkar Payal ki laash ke pass aata hai aur usko dekhte hi Aryan vahi par ulti kar deta hai

Jise dekhkar Verma hasne lagta hai “are are sambhaliye sahab, abhi toh shuru hua hai”

Yeh sunkar Aryan gusse me Verma ki aur dekhta hai aur apne mann me use bahut si gaaliya sunata hai, jise dekh Verma toh samaj jaata hai, toh voh turant hi fir apni baat kehna chalu kar deta hai

Verma “jesa ki aap dekh sakti hai, iss sundar kanya ki haalat kitni achi hai”

Aryan uski baat ko bich me se kaat te hue “sundar..?? aur achi, yeh kaha se tumhe achi lag rahi hai”

Verma “are mera matlab tha ki yeh dikhne me sundar thi, kyunki uska chehra acha tha, aur achi isliye kaha kyunki isne inn baaki tino ki tarah kuch bhi nahi khaaya”

Yeh sunkar toh sunil aur Aryan dono hi usko gusse se ghurne lagte hai, toh verma haste hue kehta hai “dekhiye, asal me isne toh kisi ko nahi khaaya, par inn toh ne hi iski yeh haalat ki hai”

Sunil “matlab ki inn tino ne iss ladke ke maas ko khaaya hai..??”

Verma “are vaah, badi jaldi samaj gaye” fir voh rukkar Payal ke sar ko dikhata hai “baal ki vajah se muje kuch saaf nahi dikh raha tha toh maine hi ise ganji kiya tha, tab muje dikha yeh sar uss ladki ne khaaya hai” voh payal ke sar ki aur ishara karta hai, jo puri tarah se sad chukka tha aur andar ka bhejaa saaf dikhayi de raha tha, fir voh payal ki back side dikhata hai “iski kamar ko uss ladke ne khaaya tha” voh rakesh ki aur ishara karta hai “aur pairo ko..”

Sunil uski baat ko pura karte hue “uss ladkne, bhai samaj gaye hum, har ek ki details dene ki jarurat nahi hai”

Verma haste hue “are bas, mai toh apna kaam kar raha hu” voh Aryan ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai “khair, aur toh kuch hai nahi, toh hum meri cabin me jaakar baat karte hai”

Sunil “haa, yahi sahi rehaga, vese bhi ab mera dum ghutne laga hai yanha par” fir voh teeno hi verma ki cabin me aajate hai, aur Aryan fresh hone chala jaata hai

Thodi der baad jab Aryan fresh hokar aata hai, toh voh verma se sawal karta hai “toh doctor, ab aur bhi kuch batana reh gaya hai ya hum jaaye”

Verma “haa, muje ek baat pata chali hai, kuch aisa hai jo mere samaj me nahi aa raha”

Sunil “aisa toh kya hai jo aapke samaj me nahi aa raha..??”

Iske baad jo baat Verma ne inn dono ko batayi voh sunkar Aryan aur Sunil dono hi chaunk jaate hai

To be continued…….
 

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mast update bhai ji
 
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