Fantasy MAYAJAAL (SciFi Paranormal)

[Hunterrrr69]

Bahut hi bhdia update hai anandsngh12 Bhai

 

[Naina]

Wow, Anand ji... kya starting hai story ki...
bechare hero ko to koi bhi Santi se jine hi nahi deta... ghar me ho ya school me.
Aur dost bhi aise ki dusman ki jarurat hi nahi.
sayed ish ke nashedi dosto ne ishe kuch jyada hi nasha karwa diya. isliye suitcase ko laptop samajh raha hai.
waise ye ramu bahot hi bhola hai . Har kisi ki baat ko bishwash kar leta hai....
Brilliant update.... keep it up.

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai start badiya kiya hai... Hero bahut hii bhola hai abhi bhi

 

[John Cena]

Super duper update tha bhai shurwat boht achi ha yar

 

[KOHINOOR]

Wonderful update
Great starting
Hero bahut bhola h
Samantar Rekhaye..Striling..hahahahaha
Kahani ke start me hi mast comedy
Bechara Laptop ke dhoke m suitcase khol ke padh raha h...hehehehe
Jabardast shuruwat bhai

 

[Sendbobsandvegana]

Comedy update tha bhai......u proved u r the best

#BIGGEST FAN

 

[shahnaz123]

What a Mind Blowing Start...Just Awesome...!!
Bahut hi shandar aur Attractive shuruwat hai kahani ki.
Aisa laga jaise main Chamatkar ka 2nd part read kar rahi hu.
Ramu ka character bahut hi sidha sada aur bhole pan se bhara h
Usko koi bhi asani se apne vishwash me lapet leta h
Bechara suitcase ko hi laptop samajh liya
Superb and Interesting Start
Wtng Nxt One....

 

[John Cena]

Waiting for next

 

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[Nothing]

Congratulations bro for new story