Fantasy MAYAJAAL (SciFi Paranormal)

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[anandsngh12]

MAYAJAAL
(CHAMATKAR-PART II)
UPDATE- 2​

Rajesh fresh hone ke baad jaise hi uske room ke samne se gujra to dekh kar vahi ruk gaya aur phir andar aa gaya.

Rajesh (jor se)—ye kya kar raha hai...? aaj phir pi kar aaya hai kya….?

Ramu –nnn…nahi papa….main to padhayi kar raha hu.

Rajesh—padhayi kar raha hai….? To ye suit case khol kar kyo baitha hai….?

Ramu (chounk kar mann me)—maine to laptop khola tha….ye suitcase kaise ban gaya….?

Ab Aage……

Rajesh—piya nahi hai to tere room se itni smell kyo aa rahi hai….?

Ramu—pata nahi..papa

Rajesh (paas aa kar gusse me)—achcha pata nahi…chattaaakkkkk……nalayak gaanja peene ke baad ab jhuth bolna bhi sikh liya…..ruk aaj main teri khal udhedta hu.

Nirmala—kya hai, aap to aate hi bechare ke piche pad gaye….?

Rajesh—dekho janki, tum na beech me mat bola karo…..ye gadha kisi kaam ka nahi hai…gadha to phir bhi theek hai kam se kam vajan to uthane ke kaam aata hai, par ye nalayak to usse bhi gaya gujra hai.

Nirmala—main usko samjha dungi…aap chalo khana kha lo.

Rajesh—tumne hi sar me chadha kar bigada hai isko…ek din pachhtaogi….har hafte iski school se principal aur math ke teacher ke calls aate hain ki iska naam kaat denge…math me bilkul zero hai, faltu me mera paisa barbad karwa raha hai.

Janki—aaj bhi ye murga bana tha papa.

Rajesh—sun liya tumne….do do baar fail hone ke baad bhi koi sharam nahi hai….har mahine test me math me isko zero milte hain….naak katwa kar rakh di hai isne meri.

Nirmala—haan sun liya….sab ke sab jab dekho uske hi piche pade rahte ho.

Ye koi aaj ka kriya kalap nahi tha…..yah to lagbhag har roj hi hota tha ramu ke sath….har baar test me zero milne par uski ghar me jam kar pitayi hoti thi.

Pahle school me agrawal sir ne uska dimag khaya aur ab ghar me uske papa ne bhurta banaya…ramu apne gaal sahlata hua chup chaap math ki kitab nikal kar padhne baith gaya lekin jab juch samajh me aaye tab to padhe…phir bhi sab ko dikhane ke liye kitab me bani aadi tirchhi rekhao ke chitra hi dekhne laga.

Lekin ramu ke andar ek vishesh gun bhi tha….vo chitrakari bahut achchi karta tha….ek baar usne jo dekh liya uska aisa chitra banata tha .

Chitra dekh kar aisa mahsoos hota tha jaise ki vo sajeev ho aur abhi haqiqat ka roop le kar jeevant ho uthega….

Agle din subah maa ke uthane par uski need khuli to vo fresh hone bathroom chala gaya….unke ghar me ek hi bathroom tha…kisi ke liye seperate to tha nahi.

Bathroom me brush karte huye achanak uske dimag me kya kida bul bulaya ki vo vaha se nikal kar sidhe apne room me ja kar teen char colour ke marker le kar phir se bathroom me ghus gaya aur darwaja andar se band kar liya.

Bathroom me bijli ke socket ke upar hi usne chitrakari shuru kar di…iss douran uske papa usko baar baar jaldi bahar nikalne ke liye awaz dete rahe…..lagbhag aadhe ghante me hi usne uss socket par karina kapoor ka bilkul sajeev lagne jaisa ek jeeta jagta khubsurat chitra bana dala….

Rajesh (chillate huye)—nalayak andar hi so gaya kya….? Jaldi bahar nikal, mujhe dukan bhi jana hai.

Ab ki baar rajesh ke kuch jyada hi jor se chillane se ramu ki tandra toot gayi….usne ek baar chitra ko dhyan se dekha ki kahi koi kami to nahi hai.

Chitra me koi kami nahi thi….balki uss chitra ki khubsurti aur satik colour ke aage ye tak malum nahi chal raha tha ki ye chitra socket ke upar aarekhit hai.

Vo jaldi se bahar nikal kar room me bhag gaya…ki kahi pitayi na ho jaye…..rajesh badbadate huye fresh hone bathroom me chala gaya….

Rajesh (badbadate huye)—pata nahi itni der tak kya karta raha hai….?

Rajesh jaise hi bathroom me enter hua to samne deewar ko dekhte hi chounk gaya….usko sara mazra samajh aa gaya.

Lekin chitra dekhte hi vo bhi uski khubsurti me kho gaye…karina kapoor ke surkh lal lal hotho ko dekh kar rajesh ma mann lalcha gaya aur vo khud ko uske inn hotho ka ras pine se nahi rok paya…usne apne hotho ko karina ke hotho se mila diye.

Kintu agle hi pal bathroom se uske jor se chillane ki awaz aane lagi…jabki haqiqat me hua ye tha ki rajesh ne iss baat par dhyan diye bina ki ye chitra bijli ke socket ke upar bana hai, jaise hi usne apne hoth karina ke hotho ke upar rakhe…..usko tez bijli ka jhatka laga aur uska kiss karne ka bukhar hawa ho gaya.

Rajesh (jor se)—aaaaahhhhh….marrr gayaaaa.

Nirmala—kya hua…aise kyo chilla rahe ho….?

Rajesh (muh me hath rakh gusse se)—kaha hai vo nalayak…..? aaj uska chitrakari ka bhoot utarta hu.

Bas phir kya tha..ho gayi bechare ramu ki bina sabun pani ke dhulayi shuru….ramu ko to pitayi ki asli vajah bhi samajh nahi aayi.

Nirmala—ab chhodo bhi…maar hi daloge kya mere bete ko…?

Rajesh (jor se)—math me zero aur chitrakar banega….? Agar aaj se teri koi bhi shikayat math me aayi to samajh lena.

Rajesh uski pitayi karne ke baad bina nahaye hi dukan chala gaya…ramu kuch der tak bistar me leta raha chupchap aur phir taiyyar ho ke school chala gaya.

Parantu aaj ka uska din hi kharab tha….school aane ke baad bhi usko koi rahat nahi mili….ulta agrawal sir ke puche sawalo ka aaj bhi galat jawab dene par usko saza hi mili.

Sadak par paaydal marte huye ram kumar urf ramu aaj kuch jyada hi vichlit tha…usko ehsaas ho gaya tha ki math jeevan bhar uske palle nahi padegi…aur math ke bina jeevan hi bekar tha…yahi sabak uske maa baap aur teachers diya karte the.

So usne apna jeevan samapt karne ka nishchay kiya…uske raste me ek chota sa jungle padta tha…uske andar ek gahra talab hai..ye bhi usko pata tha.

Usne apni cycle sadak se niche utar di….ab vah uss gahre talab ki oor ja raha tha…chunki usne tairna sikha nahi tha, isliye vah aasani se doob kar mar jayega…yahi vichar aaya uske mann me.

Jaldi hi uski cycle talab ke kinare pahuch gayi….usne speed tez kar di…uski speed dekh kar aisa laga jaise ki vo cycle ke sath hi pani me ghus jana chahta tha.

Achanak usko laga ki piche se kisi ne uski cycle rok li hai….usne ghum kar dekhna chaha, lekin ussi samay uski gardan bhi kisi ne pakad li…..koi uski gardan daba raha tha….dhire dhire uss par behoshi chha gayi.

 

[anandsngh12]

Bahut hi bhdia update hai anandsngh12 Bhai

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Wow, Anand ji... kya starting hai story ki...
bechare hero ko to koi bhi Santi se jine hi nahi deta... ghar me ho ya school me.
Aur dost bhi aise ki dusman ki jarurat hi nahi.
sayed ish ke nashedi dosto ne ishe kuch jyada hi nasha karwa diya. isliye suitcase ko laptop samajh raha hai.
waise ye ramu bahot hi bhola hai . Har kisi ki baat ko bishwash kar leta hai....
Brilliant update.... keep it up.

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Shukriya naina ji for liking the update
Aapne sahi kaha...hero me bholapan hai abhi
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Bhai update kafi mast tha par abhi tak sirf 2 hi update hue hai lekin inn 2 update padhkar hi lagta hai story kafi interesting hai so plz yaha par ho sake itna jaldi update kare

 

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Mast update bhai start badiya kiya hai... Hero bahut hii bhola hai abhi bhi

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Bhai update kafi mast tha par abhi tak sirf 2 hi update hue hai lekin inn 2 update padhkar hi lagta hai story kafi interesting hai so plz yaha par ho sake itna jaldi update kare

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Ye chamatkar ka second part hai
First part end hone ke karib hi hai, uske end hote hi ye daily running me aa jayegi bhai
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Ye chamatkar ka second part hai
First part end hone ke karib hi hai, uske end hote hi ye daily running me aa jayegi bhai
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[Naina]


hansh, hansh ke pet me dard karne lagi hai.. uff..
ramu ko kalakari karne ke liye bathroom ki bijli socket hi mila tha kya , jo ushi pe painting kar dali ...
aur ye rajesh bhi kam nahi... khud to apne bete ke realistic painting ki taraf akarshit hoke kissi karne lag gya. par jab bijli ka jhatka laga to apni baat chupane ke liye bechare ramu ko hi pit diya...
ye kya... ye ramu kya karne ja raha tha.. mathematics me zero hai to kya bas isliye marne ja raha tha... ye to galat baat hai na . aur usko piche kisne pakad liya ab.I think, story me suspense aane wali hai..
Brilliant update Anand ji... Keep it up.