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Jaan kar accha laga ki aapko story itna pasand aaya...Updates regular aate rahenge...Keep supporting.
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UPDATE 16
Ajay:- Yarr tu thik to hai naa.....Ye kaisa baat kar raha hai....Kuchh der tak to bahut udaas tha....Abb tu achanak aisa baat kar raha hai....
Rahul:- Bilkul theek hu.....Aur jo bhi keh raha hun ekdum sahi keh raha hoon...Haa mai kal raat tak bahut udaas tha ki Priya ne mujhe dhokha diya...Kuch der tak issi baat ko sochne ke baad ye conclusion me pahuncha ki logon ne mera achhayi ka faayeda uthaya hai....Meri achhayi ko meri kamjori samajh liya...
Vijay aur Priya ne mere saath accha khel khela....Mera feelings ke baare me bilkul bhi parwaah nahi kiya....Unn logon ne socha hoga ki mujhe iss tarah se dhokha dene ke baad mai toot jaaunga aur tadapte hu mar jaaunga.....Lekin unn logon ne mujhe achhi tarah se pehchana nahi hai...Mera gussa aur uss gusse ka junoon ko pehchana nahi hai....Mai gusse me kya kya kar sakta hu ye kisi ko bhi pata nahi hai...
Aaj se jo bhi log mujhe dabane ke koshish karega unn logon ko bilkul bhi nahi chhodunga...Itt ka jawaab patthar se dunga....
Ajay:- Jab tu koi bhi baat karne ka soch leta hai to kisi ka bhi nahi sunta hai....Jo dil me aaye wo kar lekin galat raaste aur sangat me mat jaana.....Aur apne Parents ka izzat aur expectations ka bhi khayaal rakhna....Aur ha koi bhi cheez me jaldbaazi mat karna....
Rahul ne Ajay ka baat ka koi jawaab nahi diya...Wo abb kuchh sochne lagta hai aur ek plan bana leta hai ki aage ka jindage ko kis tarah se jeena hai....
Issi tarah 1 week beet jaata hai....Rahul ka dhyaan abb iss duniya se hat kar virtual world(Internet) aur apna sochh ki taraf chala jaata hai....Uska gussa pehle se bahut badh chuka tha aur chehre me hamesha ek fraustration rehta tha....Abb wo logon se jyaada baat bhi nahi karta hai sirf kaam ki baat karta hai....
Abb uska 12 ka final exam aane me bas 2 months baaki the...Uska dimaag padhaayi se hat kar internet aur apni virtual world ke taraf chala gaya tha....Usne 12 class me bahut acche se padhaayi ki thi....80% marks ka expectation tha usko khud se lekin abb fail bhi ho jaaye to koi parwaah nahi....Bas apni tarah se jeena chahta hai.....
Ajay Rahul ka iss tarah se behave karne se bahut pareshaan tha aur Rahul ke future ke baare me soch kar dar raha tha ki uska kya hoga lekin Rahul ko rokne ki himmat usme bhi nahi thi kyuki Rahul apne upar kisi ka bhi comment par bhadak jaata tha....
Iss 1 week me Rahul Priya ko jab bhi yaad karta tha uske dil aur dimaag Priya ke liye nafrat se bhar jaata tha .....Wo abb lunch time Canteen me spend karta tha....Kabhi bhi park ki taraf nahi jaata tha....
Aaj Sunday hai....Rahul abhi hostel ke kitchen se lunch karke just apne kamre me aaya hai....Tabhi uske mobile me Raj ka phone aata hai....Rahul phone uthata hai....
Raj:- Kya hu Rahul tujhe???1 Hafta se phone bhi nahi kiya mujhe....Tu thik to hai naa???
Rahul:- Ha bhaiya theek hun.....Mera breakup ho gaya tha iss liye pareshaan tha...Aur aapko batana bhul gaya...
Rahul ke baat karne ka tarika dekh kar Raj shocked reh jaata hai....Kyuki wo apna break up ka baat itni aasani se kaise keh sakta hai.....Raj ko Rahul ke liye chinta hone lagti hai kyunki wo bhi iss daur se gujar chuka tha...
Raj:- Bhai main abhi tera hostel pahunchta hun....Warden se baat kar le
Uske baad Raj phone rakh deta hai....Rahul bhi warden se baat kar leta hai ki Raj kuch der ke liye uska hostel me aa raha hai baat karne ke liye....Warden ne bhi permission de diya...
Kuch der ke baad Raj Rahul ke saath uska room me jaata hai....Kuch der baithne ke baad Raj Rahul se puchhta hai...
Raj:- Bhai break up ki vajah kya tha????Galti kis ka tha???
Rahul:- Priya ka galti tha....Usne achanak se bewafaayi kar diya mere saath....Wo mere saath Pyaar ka naatak kar rahi thi....
Raj:- Bhai puri baat detail me bata ....Hua kya hai.....
Rahul Raj ko pura baat details me bata deta hai....
Raj:- Bhai jo bhi huaa...Accha nahi hua....Wo Vijay kaha hain...Mere saamne laakar khada kar use....Aisa sabak sikhaunga ki jindagi bhar kisi ke saath aisa karne ka himmat nahi karega.....
Aur aajkal Breakup bhi fashion ho gaya hai...Saala true love ka existence hi nahi....Apne faidaa ke liye kisi ko bhi dhokha do aur kisi aur ke saath set ho jaao....Sab khudgarz ho gaye hai..."Pyaar" shabd ka majaak banake rakh diya hai....Ek ladki ne bhi mere saath aisa hi kiya tha....
Rahul:- Bhaiya....Uss Vijay ko to mai bhi sabak sikha sakta hun...Bas uss din chhod diya tha...Kyunki uss din kuchh karne ke haalat me nahi tha...Aur uss din ke baad wo mere saamne nah aaya hai...Agar ab wo mil jaaye to bataunga usse.....
Aur aap baar baar apne Breakup ke baare me kehte rehte hai lekin detail me kabhi batate nahi....Aakhir Vajah kya thi....
Raj:- Koi khaas vajah nahi hai...Ek normal breakup story hai....Aaj tak tujhseshare karne ki himmat nahi tha...Fir bhi aaj tujhe batata hu......
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Raj:- Baat tab ki hai....Jab mai 10 class me padhta tha....Ek ladki ne mere class me new admission liya tha..Dekhne me achhi thi...Mujhe uska baat karne ka tarika aur uska simple nature bahut pasand tha....Padhne me bhi intelligent thiSabhi ke saath acche se baat karti thi....Ghamand usme bilkul bhi nahi tha....Shaayad hi uss me koi kami ho....
Mujhe uss ladki se pyaar ho gaya tha....Hamesha uske aas pass rehta tha....Jab bhi mauka mile baat karne se pichhe nahi hat ta tha...Uske liye deewana ban gaya tha....Kai baaar uss ladki ko dekhte hue mera class me mai lectures pe dhyaan nahi de paata tha....Mujhe khud samajh nahi aaya tha ki mai kaise itni jaldi uss se pyaar kar baitha.
Ek din school chutti hone ke baad uss ladki ne mujhe thodi der class me rukne ke liye bola....Main bhi chup chap wahi class pe baith gaya....Jab sab students apne apne ghar chale gaye to ussne mujhe propose kar diya...Main bahut khush ho gaya....Kyuki mai bhi usse pyaar karta tha lekin kabhi kehne ka himmat nahi hua....Jab pata chala ki wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai....Tab mera khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi raha....Maine turant hi accept kar liya.
Uss din ke baad ham dono ka silent love journey shuru ho gaya....Gaaw me padhte the agar kisi ko bhi pata chal jaata to pure gaaw me badnaami ka dar tha....Bas kabhi kabhi baat kar lete the....Bas class 10 khatam hone ka intejaar tha....Kyuki uske baad ham dono ko Science padhne ke liye pass ke town me jaana tha....Gaaw me Science padhaayi nahi hoti thi.....Kisi tarah se ham dono ne class 10 complete kar liya aur 11 class me pass ke town me rehne laga.....Wo bhi wahi town me rehne lagi....
Dono ka different college me admission hua....Ham dono ne apne liye ek mobile kharid liya....Phone pe baat roj hoti thi....Kabhi kabhi weekends pe ham dono koi park ya fir kisi jagah pe milte the....Mera pyaar dhire dhire badh raha tha.... Bilkul true love thi....Kabhi bhi lust ki najar se nahi dekha tha uske taraf.
Lekin mujhe lagne laga tha ki wo ladki abb mere saath rehna nahi chahti....Uss ka baat karne ka tarika aur mere saath jaise behave kar rahi thi aisa lagta ki wo mujhe avoid kar rahi hai...Phone bhi kam uthati thi aur baat bhi achhe se nahi karti thi....Jab maine ek din use ek park me bulakar puccha ki baat kya hai....Kyu mujhe avoid kar rahi ho.....Tab usne reply diya ki abb wo mujhse pyaar nahi karti....Wo abb apne college ke ek ladke se pyaar karti hai...Abb usse mujhse koi matlab nahi hai...Aur usne keh diya ki abb mai usse phone nahi karu aur usse bhul jaau.
Bhulna to mushkil tha kyuki usse sachhe dil se pyaar kiya tha....Lekin usse baat karna chhod diya....Ussne bhi uske baad mujh se koi baat nahi kiya....Mera dil ka haalat kya tha wo mai hi jaanta tha.....Dil me dard aur uss ladki ke liye nafrat ke feelings aane lagi....Jaise taise khud ko sambhala...Mai iss town me padhne ke liye aaya tha....Apne parents ka sapna pura karne aaya tha....Issi liye khud ko sambhala aur padhne pe dhyaan diya.
Bas yahi thi meri kahani....Uss ladki se abhi bhi nafrat karta hu....Ussne attraction ko love samajh liya....Ussne mujhse pyaar kabhi kiya hi nahi tha....Bas mujhse attract ho gayi thi aur jab ussko mujhse bhi achaa koi ladka mil gaya to uske taraf attract ho gayi....Ussne apne faaidaa ke liye mera parwaah bilkul bhi nahi kiya....Mera dil tod diya...Pyaar me to log apne liye nahi apne pyaar ke baare me sochte hai....Khud ko takleef dekar bhi apne pyaar ki hifazaat karte hai....Lekin uss ne to mere pyaar ka majaak bana kar rakh diya.
Itna kehne ke baad Raj chup ho jaata hai aur pass me rakhe hue paani ke bottle utha kar paani peene lagta hai.....Kuchh der tak waha khamoshi ka mahaul tha ....Fir iss mahaul ko todkar Rahul ne kaha....
Rahul:- Aapne apni puri baat keh di....Lekin ek baar bhi uss ladki ka naam nahi bataya....
Raj:- Mujhe uss se aur uss ke naam se nafrat hai....Uss ka naam mai apni mooh pe nahi laana chahta....Ghin aati hai uske naam se....
Uske baad Rahul bhi chup ho jaata hai .... Fir kuchh der ke baad Raj Rahul se kehta hai....
Raj:- Rahul...Tujhe yaad hai jab maine tujhe yahi city ke park me bulayaa tha....
Rahul:- Haa yaad hai....Ha Karib 8 ya 9 months pehle.....Itni jaldi kaise bhul sakta hu.....Baat kya hai???
Raj:- Uss din ham dono ke bich me bahas ho gayi thi....Pyaar ke topis me....Uss din tu majaak kar raha tha pyaar ke baare me....Break up aur kuch mahino ke relations inn sab ke baare me....Jab tune ye baat kahi to mujhe wahi baat yaad aa gaya tha....Issi liye mujhe tujh par gussa aa gaya aur tujhe bahut baat sunaya...Mujhe bilkul bhi bardaast nahi hota hai ki koi pyaar ka majaak udaaye...Attraction ko Love ka naam de kar pyaar ka matlab hi badal de....
Rahul:- Sorry bhaiya....Mujhe aapke haalat baare me pata nahi tha....Aapne bhi bataya nahi tha...Mai to bas majaak kar raha tha....
Rahul abhi aur kehna chahta tha....Lekin Raj ne uske baat ko kaat te hue kaha.....
Raj:- Chal chhod puraani baatein yaad karke koi faaidaa nahi...Mai to tujhse baat karne aaya tha lekin apne hi baaton me ulajh gaya aur tum dono ko kahani suna baitha....
Raj ne itna hi kaha tha ki Rahul ke room ka gate par koi knock karta hai.....
Ajay jaake gate kholta hai....Jaise hi gate khula Ajay gusse se kehta hai....
Ajay:- Vijay kya hua??? Kyun aaya hai yahan???
Vijay ka naam sunke Rahul ke chehre pe gussa ki lakeer aa jaata hai....
Vijay:- Kya mai andar aa sakta hu....Kuchh batana hai tujhe.....
Ajay:- ( Na chahte hue bhi) Aa jaa.....Aur jaldi se keh kar chala jaa....
Vijayroom me enter karta hai....Jab uski najar Rahul pe padtaa hai to wo Rahul ko ek muskaan pass kar deta hai....Rahul ke chehre se abb gussa kuchh kam ho jaata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki aaj wo Vijay ko sabak sikha kar hi rahega....
Vijay:- Ajay aaj mera birth day hai....Hostel me aaj sab ne mujhe wish kar diya hai....Bas yahi room ke log baaki hai mujhe wish karne ke liye???
Ajay:- (Na chahte hue bhi)Happy Birthday....
Vijay:- Gift nahi doge kya????Waise bhi jarurat nah hai kyuki 1 hafte pehle hi mujhe mera favourite gift mil chuka hai....
Itna keh kar wo Ajay ko apne mobile se Rahul ka uss din ka rone wala photo dikhata hai....
Ajay ne jaise hi photo dekha usska gussa bardaast se baahar ho gaya....Jaise hi wo kuch kehne wala tha Rahul ne chuup rehne ka ishaara kar diya....
Rahul apne man me yahi soch raha tha ki bas ek mauka mil jaaye wo Vijay ko aisa gift dega ki aaj ke baad wo kisi ko pareshaan karne se pehle jarur ek baar fir se sochega.