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Romance Mentality [Completed]

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Good updates. Please don't leave the story in the midlle. One of the best plots here
Welcome Kingkhankar bhai on the story...Glad to know that you liked this story... Don't worry...Story will be updated on regular interval...As this story is already completed, there wont be much delay in between updates...Keep supporting.
 

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UPDATE 24


Cricket khelne ke baad shaam me Rahul apne flat me aa jaata hai....Uske chehre pe abhi bhi gussa tha....Wo apni beizzati wo bhi sabke saamne bardasht nahi kar paa raha tha....Bas ek majaak ke liye ladkiyo se na jaane kitni baat sunna pada....Aaj uske character par bhi sawaal uthaya gaya tha....Rahul ko uske khilaf koi kuch thoda sa bhi kahe ye bilkul pasand nahi tha lekin aaj uska itna beizzati wo seh nahi saka....

Jaldi se wo washroom me gaya aur apne gusse se laal chehra ko paani se dhone lagaa....Kuch der baad wo wapas apne room me aaya....Jab wo pareshaan aur gusse me hota to apne parents se baat karke apne man ka bhadaas nikalta tha....Lekin ye baat wo apne parents ko nahi keh sakta tha....Issi liye usne Raj ko phone kiya....

Raj:- Ha bhai....Kaisa hai tu....Aaj bahut din ke baad yaad kiya tune mujhe..

Rahul:- Bilkul bhi theek nahi hu

Raj:- Kya hua tujhe....Aur itna gussa me kyu hai???

Rahul:- Aaj ek Ladki ne sabke saamne meri izzat utaar di

Raj:- Izzat utaar diya....Wo bhi Ladki ne.....Kya bol raha hai???Kya kiya tune???Tu to ladkiyo se baat bhi karna chhod chuka tha....Ab kya huwa...

Rahul Raj ko shart se lekar thappad khaane ki baat bataa deta hai....Jab wo Raj ko bataa rahaa tha tab uske har shabd me gussa aur uss ladki ke liye nafrat jhalak raha tha....Har shabd ko usne daant chabaate huye kahaa....

Raj:- Oh! to ye baat hai..

Rahul:- Ha....Aur ye pehli Ladki hai jisne mujhe thappad maara hai....Aaj tak jisne bhi mujhe gussa dilaya hai kisi ko nahi chhoda maine....Har ek baar palatwaar kiya hai...Priya ko bhi vakt aane par sabak sikhaunga...Lekin aaj mai kuch nahi kar paaya....Sharm aa raha hai khud par...Agar wo ladki fir kabhi mili to chhodunga nahi usse...

Raj:- Rahul ....Tu bas uss ladki ki buraayi hi kiye jaa raha hai....Tujhe apna galti nahi dikh raha hai kya....Manaa ki uss ladki ko iss baat ke liye tujhe thappad nahi maarna chahiye tha....Lekin galti to pehle tune hi kiya tha....Ab fir se ek aur galti karne ka soch raha hai....Uss Ladki ko teri harkat se gussa aaya hoga aur gunda samajh ke thappad maar diya hoga....Har baat me badlaa lena jaruri nahi hai....Lekin tujhe to khud apni hi galti me badlaa lena hai....Itna egoistic kab se ho gaya???

Rahul iss baat ka koi jawaab nahi deta hai....Usne apni galti ke baare me socha hi nahi tha...Wo kuch der chup hi raha....Raj ne iss chuppi ko todte hue kaha....

Raj:- Waise kya karega tu??? Mera matlab kaise badlaa lega..

Rahul:- Wo abhi nahi sochaa....Jab wo ladki milegi tab sochunga....

Rahul ke iss baat pe Raj bhadak gaya.

Raj:- Abhi bhi tujhe apna galti nahi dikh raha aur badla lene ka soch raha hai.....Tujhe to samjhana bhi bekaar hai

Itna keh kar Raj ne phone cut kar diya.

Uske baad Rahul uss ghatna aur Raj ki baaton ke baare me fir se sochne laga....Abb usse apna bhi galti ka ehsaas ho raha tha.....Lekin fir bhi apna beizzati usse achha nahi laga....Usne soch liya ki wo iss baat ko kabhi nahi bhulega....Nisha ne chhote se baat pe itna bada react kiya ye baat usse bilkul bhi achha nahi laga....Usse apna galti ka ehsaas hote hi badlaa lene ka khayaal dimaag se hata diya....Agar Nisha ne fir se koi galti kar di to sazaa de kar rahega....

Jab Rahul apne soch ka conclusion me pahuncha to usne fir se Raj ko phone laga kar baat kiya....Aur apne galti ko mehsus karne ki baat bhi bataya....Kuch der dono aise hi baat karte rahe....Raj ka gussa bhi khattam ho gaya....

Raj se baat karne ke baad Rahul soo gaya.....Next day jab wo college se aaya aur doston ke saath khelne gaya to usne dekha ki waha par sirf Aditya tha....Aditya ke paas pahunch kar

Rahul:- Are Aditya....Bas tu hi hai yaha par....Wo teeno kaha hai?

Aditya:- Unn sab ko kuch kaam tha ....To aaj wo log nahi aayenge khelne...

Aditya ne hi unn teeno ko apna kisi kaamke liye bhej diya tha taaki wo aaram se Rahul se baat kar sake aur Nisha ke khilaaf bhadka sake.....

Rahul:- To mai jaa raha hu....Waise bhi yaha reh kar kya karenge...

Aditya:- Itni bhi kya jaldi hai.....Chhal kuch der baat karte hai..

Fir Rahul bhi wahi pass ke ek bench par baith jaata hai....Fir wo log idhar udhar ki baat karte hai.....Kuch der baad Aditya Rahul se mudde ki baat karta hai....

Aditya:- Rahul....Kal tere saath jo kuch bhi hua....Wo mujhe bilkul nhi accha nahi laga....Saari galti uss ladki ka tha....

Aditya ki baat sun kar Rahul ko fir se kal ki baat yaad aa gaya aur fir se uske chehre pe gussa aa gaya....Rahul ke chehre ka gussa dekh kar Aditya ko bahut khushi huyi ....Usse apna plan successful hota dikhayi diya...

Rahul:- Chhod yaar....Ye kal ki baat ka yaad mat dilaa...Bahut gussa aa rahai hai soch soch kar....

Aditya:- Pata nahi yaar....Ye ladki apne aap ko kya samajhti hai....Apni khoobsurati ka itna ghamand.....Tera galti hi kya tha jo usne tujhe thappad maara....Agar usse tera love proposal acca nahi laga to reject kar deti .... Thappad maarke sabke saamne beizzat karne ki kya jarurat tha....

Rahul kuch nahi bola....Bas chup chap Aditya ki baat sunne laga.

Aditya:- Rahul aise ladki ko bilkul bhi nahi chhodna chahiye....Isse sabak sikhana hi hoga....Taaki usse zindagi bhar yaad rahe ki kisi se panga lene se pehle anjaam ke baare me jarur sochna chahiye...

Rahul:- Are nahi yaar....Kal jo bhi hua usme mera bhi galti tha...Mujhe usse koi sabak nahi sikhana.

Aditya uski iss baat se shocked ho gayaa....Fir bhi usne apna koshish jaari rakha...

Aditya:- Usme tera koi bhi galti nahi tha....Kya majaak karna koi galti hai....Usne tujhe sabke saamne beizzat kiya tha yaar.

Rahul:- Kal ki beizzati mere hi vajah se hua tha.....Maanta hu uski galti thi....Lekin suruwat maine kiya tha....Khud ki galti hote huye bhi badlaa lena achha nahi hai....

Aditya ko ab apna plan fail hota hua najar aane laga....Fir bhi usne antim koshish ki...

Aditya:- To tu usse aise hi jaane dega....Jisne tujhe sab ke saamne majaak bana kar rakh diya....Agar abhi bhi tune kuch nahi kiya to teri mardaangi mitti me mil jaayega....

Aditya ki baat sun kar Rahul ko bahut gussa aaya....Usne Aditya ko chillate hue kaha....

Rahul:- Chup...Bahut hua ....Jyaada mat bol.....Tujhe mardaangi ke baare me kya pata hai....Bas badla lena mardaangi nahi hota....Kabhi kabhi kuch baat ko ignore bhi karna padta hai...Aur tujhe uss Ladki se kya problem hai....Jo itna bol raha hai...Maine keh diya na mujhe iss baat se ab koi matlab nahi hai...To tu kyu itna uchhal raha hai..Usne mujhe beizzat kiya tha tujhe nahi....Tu apna kaam se matlab rakh

Iske baad Aditya ki bolti band ho gayi....Rahul itna bhadak jaayega usne socha nahi tah....Kya kehna hai kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha...Ab kuch aur bolta to shaayad uski saari sachhayi saamne aa sakta tha....Isi liye wo chup chap waha se nikal gaya.
 

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Rahul se baat karne ke baad Aditya sidha apna ghar chala gaya....Usse Rahul pe bahut jyaada gussa aa raha tha....Ek to Rahul ne uska baat nahi maana upar se use bahut kuch suna diya....Wo ab aage kya karna hai wo soch raha tha....Kuch der sochne ke baad usne Raju ko phone lagaya....

Raju:- Ha Aditya....Kaam ho gaya kya??? Rahul ne kya kaha Nisha se badla lene ke bare me.

Aditya:- Mana kar diya....Keh raha tha ki galti ka suruwat usi ne kiya tha....Issliye use koi badla nahi lena hai....Jab mai usse samjhane laga to mujh pe hi bhadak gaya....Mujhe to itna gussa aa raha tha ki use wahi par maar du....Lekin uss vakt agar kuch karta to saara khel bigad jaata....Mujhe Nisha aur Rahul dono se badla lena hai....

Raju:- Are yaar....Itna gussa kyu ho raha hai....Thande dimaag se kaam le....Rahul se itna choti baat ke liye kyu badla lega....Aur ek baat samajh me nahi aaya uss din Nisha ne tujhe kyu nahi pehchana??? Tu bhi to ham sab ke saath hi tha naa....

Aditya:- Usne mujhe uss din pehli baar dekha hai .....To kaise pehchaanegi....

Raju:- To fir kya baat hai jo tu use apna badla lena chahta hai jabki wo to tujhe pehchaanti tak nahi hai....Usne tera kya kaam bigaad diya jo tu use badlaa lena chahta hai....

Aditya:- Hai ek vajah....Wo baad me bataaunga....Aur Rahul se mai aaj k baat ke liye badlaa nahi lena chahta....Bahut pehle se jaanta hu mai use....

Raju:- Agar Nisha ki baat nahi batana hai to mat bataa....Lekin tu Rahul ko kabse jaanta hai ye to bata de yaar....

Aditya:- Vijay ko jaanta hai???

Raju:- Ha yaar....Usko kaise bhul sakta hu....Hamare gang ka head wahi to tha....Class 10 tak saath padhe the....Uske paise ke saath bahut majaa kiya tha....Lekin Vijay aur Rahul ka kya relation hai....

Aditya:- Dushmani ka relation....

Raju:- Are yaar baat ko itna kyu ghumaa raha hai....Achhe se bata na unn dono ke bich kya hai....Aur tu Rahul ko kab se jaanta hai...

Aditya:- Vijay ne mujhe Rahul ke bare me bahut pehle hi bataa diya tha....Jab Vijay 12 th me tha....Usne mujhe Rahul ka photo dikhaya tha....Tab se mai Rahul ko jaanta hu....Lekin Rahul mujhe engineering join karne ke baad se hi jaanta hai....Lekin abhi bhi hamaare galat kaam aur asli chehre ke bare me nahi jaanta....

Raju:- Lekin Rahul ne aisa kiya kya hai jot u use badlaa lena chahta hai....

Aditya:- Vijay se dushmani....Usne hostel me Vijay ko 2 baar buri tarah se peeta tha....Sabke saamne majaak bana diya tha....Bas yahi baat ka badlaa lena hai....

Raju:- To Vijay ne tujhse kaha hai badla lene ke liye....Aur Vijay jaanta hai ki Rahul ham logo ke saath engineering kar raha hai....

Aditya:- Nahi Vijay ne badlaa lene ki koi baat nahi kaha hai....Ha wo jaanta hai ki Rahul hamaare saath padh raha hai...Kuch din pehle hi maine bataya tha use....

Raju:- To kya kaha Vijay ne???

Aditya:- Kuch react nahi kiya....

Raju:- Agar Vijay ko use koi matlab nahi aur usne tujhe badlaa lene ko nahi kaha to tu kyu bekaar me uss Rahul se panga le raha hai...

Aditya:- Kyu ki mai Vijay ko surprise dena chahta hu.....Vijay ne mujhe bahut pehle kaha tha ki wo Rahul ko haraa hua dekhna chahta hai....Bas iss baar Vijay ko bina bataye hi mai apna game khelunga....Rahul ko apne hi najar me gira dunga aur Nisha se apna badla lunga....Tab jaake mera badla pura hoga....Bas tu mera saath dena....

Raju:- Jarur dunga yaar....Aaj tak hamesha se tera saath diya hai....Aage bhi dunga....Lekin tu karega kya ...Ye to bataa de.

Aditya:- Ye to abhi ache se socha nahi hai....Bas hame Rahul ke karib jaana hoga...Usse apne doshti ke jaal me phasakar Nisha ke khilaaf bhadkaana hai....Tab Rahul uske saath badlaa jarur lega....Baad me jab use sachhai pata chalega ki hamne use Nisha ke khilaaf istemaal kiya hai tab w khud ki najar me gir jaayega....Tab jaake hamaara jeet hoga.....Bas tu itna dhyaan rakh ki Risabh aur Arjun ko hamaare plan ke bare me pata nahi chale....

Raju:- Thik hai....Unn dono ko pata nahi chalega....Lekin Nisha ko kya sazaa dilwaye Rahul ke haath se....

Aditya:- Wo to abhi socha nahi.....Lekin bahut buraa sazaa dilwaunga....

Raju:- Thik hai yaar....Lekin yaad rakhna ki Rahul ka istemaal bahut acche se karna hai....Wo bahut jaldi gussa ho jaata hai....Kahi kuchh galat na karde...

Aditya:- Wo to mai kar lungaa....Ek baar ache se dosti ho jaaye....Uska gussa uski kamjori aur hamara taakat hai....

Itna kehne ke baad Aditya apna phone cut kar deta hai....Aur Rahul ko call lagakar sorry keh deta hai....Rahul bhi use maaf kar deta hai.....Dono me acchi doshti hone lagta hai....Rahul abb Aditya par aankh band kar ke vishwaas karne lagta hai....Wo Aditya ke plan se anjaan uski plan me fasta hi jaa raha tha....Usse khud iss baat ka ehsaas nahi tha ki wo abb aane wale din me kitni buri tarah se fasne waala hai aur kya kaand karne waala hai....Khud galat naa ho kar bhi galat kaam me saath dene waala hai.


2 YEARS LATER
 
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2 YEARS LATER​

Badalte Vakt ke saath bahut kuch badal jaata hai....Insaan ki soch aur swabhaaw me bhi kuch badlaaw aate hai....Koi vakt ke saath accha hote jaate hai to koi bigadte hi jaate hai....Uski jeene ke tarika aur dusron se baat karne ke tarika me bhi thoda badlaaw aata hai....Jisne vakt ka acche se istemaal kiya uska jindagi acche se bitne lagta hai to jisne vakt ka misuse kiya uski jindagi mai mushkilon ka pahaad toot padta hai....

Rahul ki jindagi mai bhi vakt ka thoda sa asar pad gaya tha.....Abb uska dosti Aditya se dhire dhire bahut gehri hoti jaa rahi thi....Rahul Aditya ko apna bahut hi acche dost maane lagta hai.....Aditya ka jhoota dosti ka asar Rahul pe iss kadar pad gaya ki Rahul abb apne sabhi secrets ko Aditya se share karne laga....Abb Aditya Rahul ki life mai Ajay ka jagah le raha tha....Aisa nahi tha ki Rahul Ajay ko bhul gaya tha.....Phone me baat hoti rehti thi aur kabhi kabhi dono milte bhi thhe....Aaj bhi unki doshti bahut gehri thi...

.Lekin Aditya uske bahut pass tha aur hamesha uske saath hone ka dikhawa karta tha aur apna chaalbaazi se usne Rahul ki jindagi me ek alag jagah banaa liya tha....Abb Aditya ko Rahul ki har taakat aur kamjori ke baare me pata tha....Abb Rahul puri tarah s uska control me tha.....Usne inn 2 saalon me kabhi bhi Rahul se Nisha ke baare me baat nahi kiya...Usse dar tha ki kahi Rahul ko kuchh shak na ho jaaye...Isi liye intazaar karna hi usse behtar laga....

Rahul ka jindagi inn 2 years me ek routine ki tarah ho gaya tha....Subah uthna, College jaana, College se flat me wapaas aana, 2 ghante doston ke saath cricket khelna aur raat me acche se padhna....Abb wo padhne me bhi jyaada dhyaan deta tha....Talent to usme pehle se tha lekin abb mehnat bhi karne se uska padhaayi bahut achha ho gaya tha....Usne pichhle semester me college top bhi kiya tha...

.Lekin inn sab ke bich me jo abb tak nahi badla tha wo tha Rahul ka gussa aur ego....Wo apne gussa aur ego ke kaaran aaj bhi Nisha ko nahi bhula tha....Inn 2 saalon me uska Nisha se fir kabhi mulakaat to nahi hua fir bhi wo Nisha ko bhula nahi paaya....Aaj bhi uss din ke thappad ko yaad karte vakt uske dil me Nisha ke liye ek nafrat paidaa hota hai....Bhale hi usne Nisha se badla lene ka khayaal usne apne dimaag se hata diya tha lekin apne nafrat ko nahi mita paaya tha....

Aise hi ek din Rahul ko apne flat me kuch problem ho jaata hai....Aur wo apna flat change karne ki baat apne parents se karta hai....Uske Papa ne uska baat apne ek dost Raghav se karwaya.... Raghav ne Rahul ko ek nayi jagah pe ek flat dilwaya....Wo jagah pehli ki jagah se jyaada dur nahi tha....Jab Rahul aur Raghav apne new flat me pahunch gaye tab....


Raghav: Rahul ye hai tumhaara new flat aur ye flat ki chaabhi.

Rahul:- Thanks Uncle

Raghav:- Aur Rahul ek baat tumhe bataana tha....Yaha acche se rehna....Koi shor sharaba mat karna aur Nashe ki cheej bhi lena yaha mana hai....Ek achhe bacche ki tarah rehna

Rahul ko to Raghav ke baat se bahut jyaada gussa aaya....Koi uske baare me bura asoche ya bura baat kare ye usse bilkul bardaasht nahi tha....Lekin Rahav uske papa ka dost tha isiliye usne apne gusse ko chuppate huye kaha...

Rahul:- Ji Uncle....Aap fikar mat kariye.....Mai acche se rahunga....Aapko koi shikaayat nahi sunni padegi...

Iske baad dono apne flat ke andar chale jaate hai....Wo building 2 floor ka tha....Rahul ka flat first floor me tha....Jaha pe 3 rooms aur ek kitchen aur ek bathroom tha....

Rahul:- Uncle...Ye 1st floor me koi rehta hai yaa fir khaali hai....

Raghav:- Ek ladki rehti hai....Wo abhi MBBS kar rahi hai....

Rahul ko Raghav ki baat sun kar thoda aascharya jarur hua....Usne socha kaun hai ye ladki jo akele hi ek flat me reh rahi hai....Bahut hi himmat hogi usme ....Rahul uss Ladki ko ek baar dekhna chahta tha....

Kuchh der baad Raghav waha se chale gaye....Rahul apna flat me apna samaan milane laga....Aur jab Shaam huyi tab tak usne apna flat acche se taiyaar kar liya....Jab Shaam me wo Ladki college se flat me aayi to uska aur Rahul ka aamna saamna ho gaya....

Rahul ki chehra aur aankh gusse se pura laal ho gaya tha....Kyunki wo ladki Nisha thi....2 saalon ka gussa aur nafrat aaj uske chehre pe dikhne lagi thi....Nisha bhi usse dekh kar shocked ho gayi thi....

Nisha:- Kaun ho tum....Aur yaha kya kar rahe ho???

Rahul koi jawaab nahi deta hai....Bas usse gusse ki najar se dekh raha tha...

Nisha:- Jawaab kyu nahi de rahe ho???Aur mujhe ghur kyu rahe ho???

Iss baar Nisha ne jor se kahaa to Rahul ne bhi jawaab diya....

Rahul:- Mai iss flat me rehne aaya hu aaj se....Aur mujhse tej awaaj me baat mat karna.

Nisha Rahul ki baat sun kar shocked reh gayi....Usse Rahul ka iss flat me rehna bilkul pasand nahi tha .... Lekin wo kuch kar bhi nahi sakti thi....

Nisha:- Accha to tum hi ho jo iss flat me rehne aane walaa tha....Aur tum ho kaun jo mai tumse tej awaaj me baat na karu???

Rahul:- Bahut jald pata chal jaayega kaun hu mai....Aur haa mujhse jyaada panga mat lena....Uss din ka thappad mai abhi bhi bhula nahi hoon....Agar jyaada gussa dilaaya to bardaasht nahi kar paaunga...

Nisha:- To abhi bhi tumhe wo scene yaad hai....Mai bhi nahi bhula paayi hu...Bahut majaa aaya tha uss din ek awara lada ko first time thapppad maarne me.....

Rahul:- Itni jaldi kaise bhulaa paaunga....Meri life ka sabse bada beizzati tha wo....Sambhal kar rehna....

Itna keh kar Rahul apne kamre me chalaa jaata hai....Agar kuch der aur waha rehta to usse apne gussa par kaabu kar paana mushkil hota...Aaj usse bahut gussa aa raha tha....Upar se Nisha ke chehre pe jo hansi tha wo usse aur gussa se paagal banaa raha tha....

Abb Rahul aur Nisha ke itane pass aajaane se aur ek dusre se naftat.... Aditya ka dono se badla lene ka irada....Abb iss khel ka anjaam kya hoga ye to vakt ko hi pataa hai....Rahul ka Nisha ke prati gussa aur Nafrat...Aditya ki chaalbaazi aur Rahul ka uske upar biswaas aur doshti.....Aditya ki Nisha ki khilaaf saazishaur badle ki feelings....Jab ye saari baat ek din saamne aayega tab kuch na kuch dhamaka to tay hai.....Iss khel se teeno ka jindagi me asar padna to tay hai....Dekhte hai iss khel me bhi Pyaar ka shuruwat kaise hota hai aur iss ghatne ke baad Rahul ke "Mentality" me kya kya changes aati hai..
 
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bahut jabardast twist............................ aur wo bhi ek sath
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rahul ki dosti aditya se....................aur aditya vijay ka dost.....vijay ke liye rahul se badla lena chahta hai
aditya ki dushmani nisha se............aur aditya rahul ke through nisha se badla lena chahta hai
actually aditya.................nisha aur rahul ko apas mein bhidakar donon se badla lena chahta hai

idhar rahul ko bhi nisha se apni beijjati ka badla lena hai
aur kismat se ..............ab dono ek sath ek hi makan mein rah rahe hain

dekhte hain kitne dhamake honge.......................
 
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Badalte Vakt ke saath bahut kuch badal jaata hai....Insaan ki soch aur swabhaaw me bhi kuch badlaaw aate hai....Koi vakt ke saath accha hote jaate hai to koi bigadte hi jaate hai....Uski jeene ke tarika aur dusron se baat karne ke tarika me bhi thoda badlaaw aata hai....Jisne vakt ka acche se istemaal kiya uska jindagi acche se bitne lagta hai to jisne vakt ka misuse kiya uski jindagi mai mushkilon ka pahaad toot padta hai....

Rahul ki jindagi mai bhi vakt ka thoda sa asar pad gaya tha.....Abb uska dosti Aditya se dhire dhire bahut gehri hoti jaa rahi thi....Rahul Aditya ko apna bahut hi acche dost maane lagta hai.....Aditya ka jhoota dosti ka asar Rahul pe iss kadar pad gaya ki Rahul abb apne sabhi secrets ko Aditya se share karne laga....Abb Aditya Rahul ki life mai Ajay ka jagah le raha tha....Aisa nahi tha ki Rahul Ajay ko bhul gaya tha.....Phone me baat hoti rehti thi aur kabhi kabhi dono milte bhi thhe....Aaj bhi unki doshti bahut gehri thi...

.Lekin Aditya uske bahut pass tha aur hamesha uske saath hone ka dikhawa karta tha aur apna chaalbaazi se usne Rahul ki jindagi me ek alag jagah banaa liya tha....Abb Aditya ko Rahul ki har taakat aur kamjori ke baare me pata tha....Abb Rahul puri tarah s uska control me tha.....Usne inn 2 saalon me kabhi bhi Rahul se Nisha ke baare me baat nahi kiya...Usse dar tha ki kahi Rahul ko kuchh shak na ho jaaye...Isi liye intazaar karna hi usse behtar laga....

Rahul ka jindagi inn 2 years me ek routine ki tarah ho gaya tha....Subah uthna, College jaana, College se flat me wapaas aana, 2 ghante doston ke saath cricket khelna aur raat me acche se padhna....Abb wo padhne me bhi jyaada dhyaan deta tha....Talent to usme pehle se tha lekin abb mehnat bhi karne se uska padhaayi bahut achha ho gaya tha....Usne pichhle semester me college top bhi kiya tha...

.Lekin inn sab ke bich me jo abb tak nahi badla tha wo tha Rahul ka gussa aur ego....Wo apne gussa aur ego ke kaaran aaj bhi Nisha ko nahi bhula tha....Inn 2 saalon me uska Nisha se fir kabhi mulakaat to nahi hua fir bhi wo Nisha ko bhula nahi paaya....Aaj bhi uss din ke thappad ko yaad karte vakt uske dil me Nisha ke liye ek nafrat paidaa hota hai....Bhale hi usne Nisha se badla lene ka khayaal usne apne dimaag se hata diya tha lekin apne nafrat ko nahi mita paaya tha....

Aise hi ek din Rahul ko apne flat me kuch problem ho jaata hai....Aur wo apna flat change karne ki baat apne parents se karta hai....Uske Papa ne uska baat apne ek dost Raghav se karwaya.... Raghav ne Rahul ko ek nayi jagah pe ek flat dilwaya....Wo jagah pehli ki jagah se jyaada dur nahi tha....Jab Rahul aur Raghav apne new flat me pahunch gaye tab....


Raghav: Rahul ye hai tumhaara new flat aur ye flat ki chaabhi.

Rahul:- Thanks Uncle

Raghav:- Aur Rahul ek baat tumhe bataana tha....Yaha acche se rehna....Koi shor sharaba mat karna aur Nashe ki cheej bhi lena yaha mana hai....Ek achhe bacche ki tarah rehna

Rahul ko to Raghav ke baat se bahut jyaada gussa aaya....Koi uske baare me bura asoche ya bura baat kare ye usse bilkul bardaasht nahi tha....Lekin Rahav uske papa ka dost tha isiliye usne apne gusse ko chuppate huye kaha...

Rahul:- Ji Uncle....Aap fikar mat kariye.....Mai acche se rahunga....Aapko koi shikaayat nahi sunni padegi...

Iske baad dono apne flat ke andar chale jaate hai....Wo building 2 floor ka tha....Rahul ka flat first floor me tha....Jaha pe 3 rooms aur ek kitchen aur ek bathroom tha....

Rahul:- Uncle...Ye 1st floor me koi rehta hai yaa fir khaali hai....

Raghav:- Ek ladki rehti hai....Wo abhi MBBS kar rahi hai....

Rahul ko Raghav ki baat sun kar thoda aascharya jarur hua....Usne socha kaun hai ye ladki jo akele hi ek flat me reh rahi hai....Bahut hi himmat hogi usme ....Rahul uss Ladki ko ek baar dekhna chahta tha....

Kuchh der baad Raghav waha se chale gaye....Rahul apna flat me apna samaan milane laga....Aur jab Shaam huyi tab tak usne apna flat acche se taiyaar kar liya....Jab Shaam me wo Ladki college se flat me aayi to uska aur Rahul ka aamna saamna ho gaya....

Rahul ki chehra aur aankh gusse se pura laal ho gaya tha....Kyunki wo ladki Nisha thi....2 saalon ka gussa aur nafrat aaj uske chehre pe dikhne lagi thi....Nisha bhi usse dekh kar shocked ho gayi thi....

Nisha:- Kaun ho tum....Aur yaha kya kar rahe ho???

Rahul koi jawaab nahi deta hai....Bas usse gusse ki najar se dekh raha tha...

Nisha:- Jawaab kyu nahi de rahe ho???Aur mujhe ghur kyu rahe ho???

Iss baar Nisha ne jor se kahaa to Rahul ne bhi jawaab diya....

Rahul:- Mai iss flat me rehne aaya hu aaj se....Aur mujhse tej awaaj me baat mat karna.

Nisha Rahul ki baat sun kar shocked reh gayi....Usse Rahul ka iss flat me rehna bilkul pasand nahi tha .... Lekin wo kuch kar bhi nahi sakti thi....

Nisha:- Accha to tum hi ho jo iss flat me rehne aane walaa tha....Aur tum ho kaun jo mai tumse tej awaaj me baat na karu???

Rahul:- Bahut jald pata chal jaayega kaun hu mai....Aur haa mujhse jyaada panga mat lena....Uss din ka thappad mai abhi bhi bhula nahi hoon....Agar jyaada gussa dilaaya to bardaasht nahi kar paaunga...

Nisha:- To abhi bhi tumhe wo scene yaad hai....Mai bhi nahi bhula paayi hu...Bahut majaa aaya tha uss din ek awara lada ko first time thapppad maarne me.....

Rahul:- Itni jaldi kaise bhulaa paaunga....Meri life ka sabse bada beizzati tha wo....Sambhal kar rehna....

Itna keh kar Rahul apne kamre me chalaa jaata hai....Agar kuch der aur waha rehta to usse apne gussa par kaabu kar paana mushkil hota...Aaj usse bahut gussa aa raha tha....Upar se Nisha ke chehre pe jo hansi tha wo usse aur gussa se paagal banaa raha tha....

Abb Rahul aur Nisha ke itane pass aajaane se aur ek dusre se naftat.... Aditya ka dono se badla lene ka irada....Abb iss khel ka anjaam kya hoga ye to vakt ko hi pataa hai....Rahul ka Nisha ke prati gussa aur Nafrat...Aditya ki chaalbaazi aur Rahul ka uske upar biswaas aur doshti.....Aditya ki Nisha ki khilaaf saazishaur badle ki feelings....Jab ye saari baat ek din saamne aayega tab kuch na kuch dhamaka to tay hai.....Iss khel se teeno ka jindagi me asar padna to tay hai....Dekhte hai iss khel me bhi Pyaar ka shuruwat kaise hota hai aur iss ghatne ke baad Rahul ke "Mentality" me kya kya changes aati hai..
Interesting twist. Loved it.
 
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bahut jabardast twist............................ aur wo bhi ek sath
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rahul ki dosti aditya se....................aur aditya vijay ka dost.....vijay ke liye rahul se badla lena chahta hai
aditya ki dushmani nisha se............aur aditya rahul ke through nisha se badla lena chahta hai
actually aditya.................nisha aur rahul ko apas mein bhidakar donon se badla lena chahta hai

idhar rahul ko bhi nisha se apni beijjati ka badla lena hai
aur kismat se ..............ab dono ek sath ek hi makan mein rah rahe hain

dekhte hain kitne dhamake honge.......................
Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and review...Maahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki Rahul aur Nisha ko apna duahman ke baare mein hi pata nahi...Ye aur bhi khatarnaak hai dono ke liye...Aise naajuk paristhiti mein dono ke kahani kaise aage badhega aane wale updates ke saath pata chal jaayega...Keep supporting.
 
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Interesting twist. Loved it.
Thanks Kingkhankar bhai for your support and comment...Keep supporting.
 
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