nice update..!!Update- 5
Mai : acha ye to sahi hai lekin ab mai bhi kuch karna chahta hu yrr to please mana mat karna…
Radhika: acha jo man kare kar lena…par kal pakka aana hai theek hai na…
Mai: ok theek hai yrr chalo theek hai kal milte hai….
Aabb aaage :
Radhika se baat hone ke kuch der baad hi chutti ka samay ho gaya tha to me parking me jaa kar bike le kar aa gaya or siya ka wait karne laga….
Kuch hi der me siya aa gayi vo aaj chup thi…. shayad vo mujhse bahas nahi karna chahti thi….
lekin uski chuppi mujhe pareshan kar rahi thi….raste me maine try ki baat karne ki par koi response nahi aaya….to maine bhi use pareshan nahi kiya or hum ghar pahunch gaye…. ghar pahunch kar hum dono apne apne raste chal diye….
Me apne room me aakar nahane chala gaya kyuki thoda thak gaya tha socha iske baad thoda so lunga….
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Wahi dusri or aaj maine abhi khana khane nahi khaya tha to Suman ne siya se pucha…lekin siya abhi gussa thi to usne sirf itna bol diya ki mai thak gaya hu to khana nahi khana mujhe…..
Lekin Suman ko meri chinta thi to vo khana lekar upar pahuch gayi upar....aakhir beta jo maana tha usne to jaise hi vo upar pahuchi usne dekha ki darwaza khula hua hai….
Lekin fir bhi usne awaaz di….magar Mai to bathroom me tha to awaaz aane se rahi…
Suman ne thoda intezaar kiya par ab use meri chinta hone lagi…. aakhir beta jo maanti thi vo…lekin jab vo andar aayi to me use bahar nahi dikha to usne khana table par rakh diya….
Maine nahane jaane se pehle kapde nikal kar apne bed par rakh diye the or mai andar sirf towel le kar gaya tha…
Jaise hi Suman bed ke kinare pahuchi tabhi bathroom ka darwaza khula…. lekin ye kya suman shayad phas chuki thi….
Kyon Ki ek to vo bina puche andar aa gayi thi…lekin ye bhi choti baat hi thi…
Abhi Suman pareshan isliye thi kyunki usne bed par rakhe mere kapde dekh liye the….ab aap samjh hi sakte hai ki abhi me sirf towel me tha ye soch kar hi vo dar gayi thi ki pata nahi Avinash ko kaisa Lagega…
Wahi jaise hi mai bathroom se bahar aya to ye unhi kuch kapdo se mel kha raha tha jo aksar siya pehna karti thi….
Ab itna to saaf tha ki siya mujhe ek hi nazar me bha gayi thi…. matlab love at first site….uska vo masoom chehra uski vo kaali ananke mujhe apni or kheechte rehti hai….
Maine tay kar liya tha ki ab shayad mujhe ek kadam aage badha dena chahiye nahi to shayad siya mujhe galat samjhne lage…..
Vo is waqt salwar neele rang ka salwar suit pehne hue thi…uske baal saleeke se ek taraf karke bandhe hue the….
Mai dheere dheere aage badhne laga…or shayad use bhi ehsaas ho gaya tha…. dheere dheere mujhe uske sharir se aati khushbu ka bhi ehsaas hone laga ye bahut hi adbhut anubhav tha…..mai shayad aaj kuch bada karne kaa soch chuka tha…
Mai jaise hi uske kareeb pahucha….is waqt meri saanson me to thehrav tha lekin uski saason ki awaaj mujhe saaf saaf sunai dene lagi thi…..
Or uske itne kareeb hone par mujhse bhi ruka nahi gaya or maine apne haatho ko badha kar uski kamar ke ird gird lapet liya or apne muh ko uske ek taraf ki nangi padi gardan par halka sa tika diya….
Lekin itne se hi Suman ki bolti band ho gayi thi….vo kehna chahti thi lekin uske muh me bas ek siski nikli "iii ssshhhh…."
Jo ko is baat ki gawah thi ki uske sharir par uski gardan uske liye ek behan hi samvedansheel hissa tha….or shayad uske pass awaaz bachi hi nahi thi is waqt ke liye ….
Vahi mujhe jab uski itni mulayam gardan ka ehsaas apne hothon ke itne kareeb hua to meri aakhe to swatah hi band ho gayi thi …. shayad uska bhi yahi haal tha ……hum dono ke sharir me thartharahat hone lagi thi….
Lekin fir kuch hi der me himmat juta kar shayad vo kuch kehne wali hi thi ki maine apna ek jo abhi tak uski kamar par tha use uske hothon par rakh diya…..
Mai: shhhh…. please abhi kuch na kehna….
Suman: …………………
Mai : I love you….. I love you yrr…maine jab se tumhe pehli baar dekha hai tabhi se mai apna dil tumhare naam kar chuka hu….
Or ye kehte hue ek haath jo uski kamar par tha usse thoda thoda hila kar uske pet par sehlane laga…..
ye ehsaas mujhe or romachit kar raha tha….or achanak hi maine uske gardan par ek kiss kar di jo shayad itne araam se ki thi ki uski komal skin mere hotho me malai ki tarah feel Hui….
Or jis haath ko uske hothon par rakha tha use waha se hata kar uski gardan par rakh kar sehlane laga…..
Suman : aaahhhhh…
Mai: tum mujhe galat mat samjhna mai jab bhi tumhare pass hota hu to mai sab kuch bhool kar bas tumme hi khoya rehta hu…. bahut sukoon milta hai tumhare pass aa kar….or shayad isi liye tumhare pass aane ke bahane khojta rehta hu….. bachpan se mai akela hi raha hu na to kisi ne pyar diya or na hi mujhe koi aisa mila ki jise mai pyar kar saku…..
Suman: ...(ek dum khamoshi se bas is lamhe ko mahsoos kar rahi thi kyunki ye alag tha….ye vo ehsaas tha jo shayad ise apne pati ke sath bhi mehsoos nahi hua tha…..or pati sharabi tha to jaldhi apni buri aadato ke bhet bhi Chad Gaya…..
Lekin fir…fir uska ye pariwar to toot gaya tha na….us waqt bhi Suman ne himmat nahi haari or jee Jaan laga kar mehnat karne lagi apne bacho ko palne ke liye…
or isi beech usne apna eklauta beta bhi kho diya tha…. lekin use pata tha ki agar vo haari to shayad uski betiya jo ki us waqt bahut choti aur nasamjh thi….duniya inka fayda uthane me der nahi karti…
Is pure sangharsh bhare safar ke dauran ek aur karan tha jisne ise kabhi tootne nahi diya….vo tha pyar…..
Lekin vo ye pyar tha jo use iske pati se mila tha….jiski wajah se iske dil me pyar shabd ke liye ek galat chavi ban gayi thi….
Or bas yahi kaaran tha ki siya aur Nikita ke jyada dost nahi the na hi kisi se jyada mel jol tha….kyunki unki maa ki saari takleef unhone bhi mehsoos ki thi…
Lekin jab Avinash Suman ke ghar aya to Suman apne aap iske kareeb aati gayi….uska karan tha ki ye Avinash me apna beta dhoondhti thi….jo shayad ab inke pariwar me khushiyan firse la sakta tha…..
Lekin dil me ek soft corner banne ki wajah hi thi ki aaj use Avinash ki saari baate buri nahi lag rahi thi….. shayad uske andar kahi na kahi ek chingari jal uthi thi…. chingari thi us pyar ko paane ki jo use abhi tak naseeb na hua tha….
Or iska sabse bada saboot tha Suman ki khamoshi…uski saason me thehrav…. shayad Suman bhi is pal me utna hi kho chuki thi jitna Avinash..)
Mai siya ki khamoshi ko samjh nahi pa raha tha kyuki ek ladki Kan padhna is duniya ka sabse jatil kaam hai shayad…..
Siya ki taraf se koi pratikriya na hone par maine use apne alingan se azaan kar diya….
Or mud kar dusri or muh kar liya….
Mai: mai jaanta hu shayad tumhe ye ajeeb lag raha hoga….yu achanak se kisi ka apni jindagi me yu ana….or is tarah se baat karna….par mai bhi kya karu apne dil par kabu hi nahi mera….
Tum chaho to jaa sakti ho ab pyar jabardasti to ho nahi sakta…par ha ab is dil par sirf tumhara hi haq hai ye bhi yaad rakhna….
Itna keh kar me ek baar fir bathroom me chala gaya kyuki ab mujhe apna dil bahut bhari sa lag raha tha….
Mujhe sabse jyada dar is baat ka tha ki kahi is galti ke chalte me apne us kaam ko pura nahi kar paaya to kya hoga….ye meri zindagi ke kuch sabse jaroori kaamo me se ek tha….me kisi ke ehsaano tale daba hua tha….
Or ab ek baar phir mai apni purani yaadon me kho gaya….. kuch der baad me bahar aya to room khali tha….
Maine apne kapde pehne or bahar ki or jaane laga…tabhi meri nazar us khane ki thali par padi jo vo mere liye layi thi….or na jaane meri wajah se abhi kya haal hoga uska….
Maine apni soch ko yahi roka aur jaldi se khana kha kar Nikita ke ko bula kar thali bhijwa di…..
Raat ka khana bhi Nikita hi lekar aa gayi thi…. mujhe thoda ajeeb laga kyuki Suman aunty college se aane ke baad se mujhe mili nahi thi or abhi khana bhi Nikita lekar aayi…..ab mujhe thoda dar lagne laga ki shayad siya ne Suman aunty ko sab kuch bata diya hai ….
Yuhi raat kat gayi or agli subah jab me taiyar hua to fir nashta aa chuka tha….socha chalo theek hai ab galti ki hai to saza bhi bhugatni hi padegi….
Me neeche pahucha do dekha Nikita school bus ki aur jaa rahi thi or siya bahar khadi thi…. shayad mera hi intezar kar rahi thi…..
Ab mujhe thodi rahat mehsoos hone lagi or me chup chap bike nikalne laga…..bike start karke maine siya taraf dekha to vo chup chap apna bag le kar aa gayi aur piche baith gayi….
Hum college pahuche to radhika ki car gate par hi dikhai de gayi…par mera man kahi or tha to use ignore karke bike parking me lagayi….tab tak siya andar jaa chuki thi….
Mai jaise hi class ki taraf badha radhika dodte hue ayi or mera haath pakad liya…..
Radhika: kaha chale janab….
Mai : matlab…..
Radhika: are aaj kya hai bhul gaye kya…
Maine apne dimag par jor daala tb jaake yaad aya ki aaj to iska birthday hai or mujhe Jo planing karni thi vo bhi gayi paani me…
Ab samay bhi nahi tha…..
Mai: happy birthday yrr…..vo late ho gaya tha to jaldi jaldi karte hue dimag se nikal hi Gaya tha….
Radhika: vaise sach bol rahe ho na….ya fir kahi iska kaaran siya to nahi….
Mai: are nahi yaar aisa kuch nahi hai…tumhe to pata hi hai sab…
Radhika: are me bas mazak kar rahi thi…chalo abhi hume der ho rahi hai aao mere sath….
Itna keh kar vo mujhe apni car ki aur lekar jaane lagi…
Mai: are lekin abhi to class hai na….
Radhika: aaj koi class nahi hai samjhe…or abhi mujhe bahut si shopping bhi karni hai to chup chap chalo….
Mai: par vo siya…
Radhika: are no tension yaar…. chutti tak aa jayenge na….
Mai bhi chup chap aage baith gaya or usne gaadi ko shahar ke sabse bade mall ki taraf dauda diya….
Hum mall pahuche or utar kar andar chale gaye….mai aaj pehli baar kisi ladki ke saath shopping par aaya tha….
Radhika: chalo yaar tum to ladkiyo jaise dheere dheere chal rahe ho aise to hame yahi shaam ho jayegi…
Hum dono bahut der tak mall me ghumte rahe…yaha anginat brands ke showroom the….kabhi isme to kabhi usme aise hi karte hue usne sirf 2 dress select ki…mai sach me hairan tha isne mujhe aaj itna ghumaya tha ki mujhe laga ye aaj bahut shopping karegi …par yaha to alag hi ho raha tha do dress itni der me or usme bhi usne meri choice puchi thi….
Ab ye mat sochna ki usne meri pasand ki dress li hogi….isne meri pasand ki gayi sabhi dresses ko side me rakh diya tha…
Hume yahi ghumte hue kafi waqt ho chuka tha to humne wahi bane ache se restaurant me jaakar kuch khaya or coffee pi…
Fir hum waha se pahuche jewelry shop par ab in sabki nazar me mai ek middle class banda tha….to mai bas chup chap dekhta raha….
Waha se nikalte hue bahut der ho chuki thi….maine jaise hi ghadi me time dekha to mera dimag hi hil gaya…. yaha yahi sab karte hue 3 baj gaye the…
Ab mujhe siya ki chinta hone lagi…kya soch rahi hogi vo…
Maine radhika ko kaha ki jaldi se mujhe college chod de mujhe kuch jaruri kaam hai….
Usne bhi bina kuch kahe mujhe college choda aur jate hue apna address de diya…..me bike utha kar ghar pahucha ….waha ek dum shaant tha sab…dopahar ka waqt tha to shayad sab aaram karne lage honge….
Mai bhi room me rest karne chale gaya….shaam ko me waha se nikal kar hotel chala gaya…yaha maine Suman aunty or radhika sabko yahi bataya tha ki mai part time job karta hu….to bas isi ka bahana banakar nikal gaya aur bola ki aaj mera khana na banaye….
Kuch waqt karan ke sath baith kar mai nikal gaya hotel se or pahuch gaya apne asli ghar matlab is waqt mai apne purane ghar ke saamne khada tha jo is waqt ek bade se aalishan ghar me badal chuka tha….
Party kabki khatam ho gayi thi aur abhi 12 bajne me kuch hi der thi…Maine radhika ko message kiya aur bahar bulaya….
Abhi kuch hi der hui thi ki radhika ek simple si night dress me ghar ke darwaje par aa khadi hui…..
Ab aage kya hoga ye agle update me dekhne milega…
Aapke Bahut se sawalo ke jawab bhi agle updates me aane shuru ho jayenge…
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(Update kaisa laga ye zaroor batayega…or like or comment karna na bhule)
bhai yeh bada confusing update tha..kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya ki avinash ne kisko propose kiya siya ko ya suman ko..kyunki aap bich me bolte ho suman ko apne pati se aisa pyaar nahi mila fir bich me siya ka naam lete ho..toh avinash ne propose kiya toh kiya kisko..!! aur radhika 2 din mile ladke ke sath itna frank kaise ho gayi hai..bhale usse woh apne bhai jaisa lag raha ho lekin fir bhi koi itna kaise frank ho sakta hai..!! aur suman ko propose kiya toh siya kyun shaant hogayi..!!
