Incest Mera Pariwar or Mera Pyar

[akash.12]

Nice misunderstanding. Confess for Siya goes for mom let's see what's happened next

Thank you

 

[akash.12]

Bahut badhiya update tha Bhai agle update ka intzar rahega

Thank you Bhai

 

[A.A.G.]

Update 1

Aaj mere man me kuch sukoon sa mahsoos hua mujhe shayad ye wahi sukun tha jo bahut arso ke baad kisi apne se milne par hota hai aaj me apne shahar fir laut raha tha ,
Mujhe pure 12 saal ho gaye the ghar se door gaye hue ab ye kaise hua ye to aage waqt aane par pata chal hi jayega,
Me is waqt Jaipur airport par khada tha abhi abhi meri flight yaha pahunchi thi me na chahte hue fir se apni purani yaadon me kho sa gaya…..par abhi shayad ye sahi samay nahi hai in sab ke liye , yahi soch kar apni soch ko jhatakte hue me bahar pahunch gaya or taxi lekar hotel pahucha andar reception ke pass ki ek jaana pehchana chehra najar aya usne apna haath hila kar mujhe apni or bulaya me bhi uske pass pahuch kar gaya

"Good morning sir….aap akele…matlab vo driver.."

Use bich me rok kar muskurate hue ,"yrr bahut din hue akele bahar kahi gaya nahi tha na to socha aaj akele hi ghumte hue pahuch jau…vaise ab room ki keys milegi ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai…"
Usne muskurate hue apne pass khade ek aadmi ko kuch ishara kiya or mujhe uske saath Jane ko kaha , me bhi bas apna ek chota sa bag lekar peeche peeche chal diya , ye shayad manager lag raha tha yaha ka ab aapko lagega ki agar ye manager hai to vo kon tha to me bata du ki vo mere saath kaam karta h uska naam Karan hai,
Kuch der chalne ke baad hum ek room ke bahar khade the jispar 'Presidential Suite' likha hua tha, usne keys handover ki or
"enjoy your day sir" keh kar chala gaya me andar gaya or apna samman rakh kar fresh hua or fir Karan ko call karke apne room pe bula liya
" Aapne bulaya sir…"
" Ha yrr ab jaldi jaldi mujhe progress report do or batao kya chal raha hai yaha abhi…."
Usne bolna shuru kiya
"Sir jaisa ki aapne kaha tha apni companies ka yaha par expansion karne ke liye to ye almost pura ho hi gaya hai or ye sab mere hi naam se pata hai logo ko jaisa aap chahte h abhi tak sab vaisa hi chal raha hai or kal tak sab taiyar ho hi jayega….."
Itna bol kar vo ruk gaya or muskura kar meri or dekhne laga par mujhe is par bahut gussa aa raha tha kyuki me jo janna chah raha tha vo abhi tak isne bataya nahi tha to mujhe gusse me dekh kar usne serious ho kar bola " sir Rajesh Sharma ki companies tak ye baat pahuch chuki h ki hum yaha naya kaam shuru kar rahe hai to bas ab unke saamne aane ki der h…or Mrs Sharma bhi apne kuch NGO's me busy rehti hai weekends par apne friends ke saath night out par jaati h fir miss radhika Inka admission yahi apne college me ho rakha hai vo yaha se MBA kar rahi hai or Sameer bhi yahi college se MBA kar raha hai aur baki toh aapko pata chal hi jayega….aur aapka admission bhi miss radhika ki stream me ho gaya hai same batch me"
Itna kehkar vo chala gaya ab
mujhe thoda sukun mil raha tha jo na jaane mai kab se dhoond raha tha
Maine khana khaya or fir apna official kaam karne laga is din kuch jyada khas nahi hua ye Yuhi beet gaya,
Agle din mai subah jaldi utha aur suite me Bane hue gym me workout kiya fir taiyar ho kar bahar hotel me Bane cafeteria me pahuch gaya jaha Maine karan se kuch discuss Kiya or fir nikal gaya apne naye college ki or ye bahut se logo ki zindagi badalne ki or Mera pehla kadam hai…
Mai college pahuch kar andar jaa hi raha tha ki mera dhyan kuch awara baithe ladko par gaya jo abhi abhi college campus me ayi ek car ki or lagataar dekh rahe the , or jab maine waha dekha to meri najre wahi jam si gayi ye wahi aankhein thi jinki tasveer maine apne bachpan se lekar abhi tak apne dil me kaid kar ke rakhi thi uski aur dekhte hi mere dimag ne mera saath chod diya tha or mai bas apne bachpan me kho sa gaya tha

'amu chal na hame der ho rahi h yrr mummy daantegi agar der ho gayi to' ek behad sundar park me ek ladki jisne is waqt ek pyari si dress pehni hui thi aur usne ek ladke ka haath thama hua tha jo shayad abhi yaha se jaana nahi chahta tha ,
'ruko na di hum bas thodi der me chalte hai na…pata nahi ab kitne dino baad yaha aane ka mauka mile'
Ladki ' kyu me hu na tu kyu chinta karta hai..'

Achanak se mera dhyan tuta jo shayad kisi shor ke karan tha or mene khud par gaur kiya…meri aankhon me kuch pani ki bunde thi.. me unhe saaf karke aage badh gaya apni class ki taraf aur jaise hi mai class me enter hua hi tha ki ek behad pyari si ladki mujhe se takra gayi or bas swatah hi mere haatho ne uski kamar ko tham liya or meri aankhe uski ankho se mili or bas me unme doobta chala gaya lekin ladki jaldi hi sambhal gayi or sorry bol kar apni jagah Jaa kar baith gayi par in lamho me kuch to hua tha mere andar……
Ab me kya karta class me lagbhag sabhi seats par koi na koi baitha hua tha to mai jaise taise piche tak pahucha or ek jagah dekh kar baith gaya..
Kuch hi der me class me ek bahut hi khubsurat teacher aakar padhane lagi par mera saara dyan to ab us ladki par tha jisse mai takraya tha…abhi madam ko padhate kuch hi der Hui thi ki ek peon ne aakar madam se kuch kaha or chala gaya ' Avinash…'
Ye naam sunkar me khada ho gaya ' yes mam…'
Madam "new admission.."
Mai " yes mam "
Madam " okay…tumhe principal sir ne bulaya hai lecture ke baad unse mil lena"
Or me bhi apna sir ha me hila kar baitha gaya par ek Jodi aankhe mujh par hi tik gayi thi or ye thi radhika ki aankhe par abhi Maine is par gaur nahi kiya kyuki mere dimag me abhi kuch or hi plan tha…or lecture hote hi mai apne principal se milne uske cabin ke bahar pahunch gaya or knock kiya "come in " andar se awaz aayi or me andar ki aur badh gaya …principal ne mujhe dekha or apni seat se uth gaya or aage badh kar haath milaya
" Welcome sir mujhe aaj hi pata chala ki ab ye college aapke under hai or aap apni padhai bhi yahi se continue kar rahe hai…"

Mai " Mr Sharma aap ye baat ab sirf apne tak hi rakhe..ye baat kisi ko pata nahi lagni chahiye or yaad rahe me yaha ek aam student hu…dhyan rakhiyega.."
Or mai bahar ki or chal diya ab mujhe hotel pahuchna tha kyuki Mai yaha jis liye aya tha uski shuruaat aaj ho chuki thi…

Or mai apne hotel pahuch kar aaram karne chal diya……




( Dosto ye bas starting hai aage ke updates dheere dheere bade honge...kahani ki shuruaat kaisi lagi ye jaroor batana….or aapke suggestions ka bhi mai khule dil se swagat karta hu aap apne suggestions jaroor dijiyega….
Dhanyawad...)

nice start..!!

 

[akash.12]

bahut khub

Thank you bhai

 

[A.A.G.]

A short flashback

Family ya pariwar is shab ka arth aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ek insaan ki jindagi me iske kya mayne hote h par meri jindagi me aisa kuch nahi tha…..

Meri family me hum 4 log the mera bachpan bhi baaki bacho ki hi tarah tha apne pita ke sath ghumna maa ka mere liye pyar or badi behan ke saath khelna par shayad upar wale ne kuch or hi soch rakha tha …kuch hi samay baad hume pata laga ki maa ko koi bimari hai or vo ab jyada din nhi rahengi…us samay ye baat hum bacho se chupayi gayi par maa….inke liye to inki duniya mai hi tha vo mujhse bahut jyada pyar karti thi to kuch hi dino me unki aankhon me ek dar sa dikhne laga ki unke baad unke bacho ka kya hoga to unhone pita ji ko jabardasti apne bacho ka wasta dilwa kar apni behan ki shaadi pita ji se karwa di par ye shayad ab bahut kuch badalne wala tha or bas kuch hi dino me maa duniya chod kar chali gayi ab hum bikhar gaye the…..
Ab pita ji hum se kat se gaye the ab vo sirf apne kaam me dhyan dene lage or mausi jo ki humari maa ban gayi thi unhe to samjhna hi mushkil tha vo bas Ghar ka kaam kar diya karti thi isse jyada unhone hamare liye kuch kiya nahi tha lekin abhi shayad kuch or bhi bura hona baki tha….
Kuch samay me hi hamari nayi maa pregnant ho gayi to ab pita ji phir se pariwar se judne lage hume bhi laga ki shayad ab hamara pariwar ek baar phir sambhal jayega par……jab nayi maa ko bacha hua to vo ladka tha to pita ji ka dhyan to apne aap hi uski aur badh sa gaya tha vo usse jyada pyar karne lage ye shayad us aurat ke kaaran bhi tha kyuki jab maa chali gayi thi to unhone pita ji ko sambhala tha or humse door bhi kar diya tha….
Or bas kuch hi dino me nayi maa ko apne bete ke bhavishya ki chinta hui or unhone pita ji se na jaane kya kaha or achanak hi mujhe apne mama ke yaha bhej diya gaya jaha mere liye kuch nahi tha vo log mujhe naukar ki tarah rakha karte the ek din kuch aisa hua ki mujhe apne poore pariwar se hamesha ke liye door hona pada ab ye kya hua ye aage pata chal jayega aur phir maine ek naye naam ke saath ek nayi shuruaat ki ……
' Avinash ' duniya mujhe ab isi naam se jaanti hai

Ab flashback ko bich bich me jarurat padne par hi bataya jayega….



Character introduction

• Rajesh Sharma (46): ye mere pita hai inka textiles ka business hai jyada bada nahi hai par Shahar me naam h inka
• Anita (passed) : meri maa jo ki ab nahi rahi
• Pooja (42): ye meri sauteli maa hai
• Radhika (22): ye meri badi behan hai..ye mujhse bahut pyar karti hai or mujhe ghar se door bheja gaya tha to ye pita ji ke khilaf thi par unki baat kon sunta
• Sameer (20): ye Pooja maa ka beta hai ab iska intro bhi story me hi milega
• Ramesh (45): mere mama hai ye jinke yaha mujhe bheja gaya tha
• Madhu (43): ye meri maami hai inhone mujhe bahut pareshan kiya bachpan me
• Arti (22): ye mama ki badi beti h
• Rashmi (20): ye mama ki choti beti hai
• Karan (22): iska bachpan mere saath hi nikla h flashback me aa jayega ye bhi

• Avinash (22): yani ki mai ab mere baare me kahani me hi pata chale to jyada behtar rahega

(Abhi bas itna hi hai baaki log bhi jaise jaise aate jaenge unka intro aata jaega)

nice update..!!
bhai avinash aur radhika dono judwa hai kya..??

 

[akash.12]

nice update..!!
bhai avinash aur radhika dono judwa hai kya..??

sahi pakde hai bhai....
Ye dono judwa hai.... lekin hero kuch minutes baad duniya me aaya hai....

tabhi to radhika iski or khichi chali ayi.....or inki bonding bhi itna jaldi hone ka kaaran bhi yahi hai....kyuki Radhika ko Avinash ke saath apnapan sa lagta hai.....

Thank you Bhai
Keep supporting

 

[A.A.G.]

UPDATE 2

Abb tak:

Ab tak aapne padha ki mere Jaipur pahuchne ke baad mene kya kya kiya…

kaise mai apne naye college pahuncha or meri principal se kya baat Hui….

Ab aage:

'beta suno.. idhar ana zara…' ek aadmi jiski umar jyada nahi lag rahi thi usne ghar ke andar aate hue ek behad hi masson se chote bache ko apne pass bulaya…

uske piche piche uski badi behan bhi aa rahi thi vo bhi apne papa ki awaaz sun kar apne chote bhai ke piche piche chal di...

'beta tumhari padhai kaisi chal rahi hai….' papa ne pucha

Ladka : achi chal rahi hai papa or didi bhi mujhe padha deti hai to sab samajh aa jata hai….

Apni baat kehte hue ladka apne pita ke paas baith kar apna sar unki god me rakh deta hai…
Unki beti bhi unke pass aakar baith jaati hai...

Papa : beta tumhare mama tumhe bahut yaad kar rahe the….
Mai : haa is baar bahut dino se unse mila hi nahi mai.. kab aa rahe hai vo..

Papa : beta is baar vo nahi aa rahe hai…is baar tumhe jana hai waha…..

Ladki : Theek hai papa hum in chuttiyon me unke yaha ho ayenge…..

Papa : nahi beta Mera matlab hai ki ab amu wahi apne mama ke pass rahega or apni padhai bhi wahi se karega…

Ladki : nahi papa mera amu mere saath hi rahega…mai iska bahut ache se khayal rakhungi or dekhna ye padhai mai bhi sabse aage hoga

Papa : lekin beta tumhare pass to ek or chota bhai hai na…. uska dhyan kon rakhega…waha aarti bhi to hai na use bahut khusi hogi apne bhai ke sath reh kar…ise jaane do waha…
Ladka : ( apna sar utha kar apni behan ko le kar apne kamre ki or chal deta hai ) mai kahi nahi jaunga apni didi ko chodkar…chalo di andar…
Papa : ( thoda gusse me) beta Mai puch nahi Raha hu bata raha hu…tumhe Mai kal hi waha chod kar aaunga to apna samaan bandh lena…

Ladka apni behan ke saath apne kamre ke andar aa kar darwaza band kar deta hai aur apni behan ke sath chipak kar so jata hai….

Raat ko khane ke samay koi kisi se baat nahi karta par Pooja maa ke chahre par alag hi khusi jhalak rahi thi jaise unki koi muraad puri hone wali ho...

Khane ke baad sabhi apne room me chale jaate hai or ladka bhi apni behan ke saath hi firse let jata hai…un dono ke man me ek dar sa bana hua tha ki kal kya hone wala hai or yahi sab sochte hue ye dono gahri neend me kho jaate hai...

Agle din us ladke ko jabardasti apni behan alag kar ke aadmi apni car me apne bete ka saman rakh kar jabardasti apne bete ko le ke chal padta hai…..


' didiiiiii……' is cheekh ke sath hi meri neend khul jaati hai
meri saanse is waqt bahut tezi se chal rahi thi mene bagal me table par rakha pani piya aur dheere dheere apni saanso ko control kiya….

Mai kal raat khana kha kar jaldi so gaya tha aur aaj meri neend ek bahut hi bhayankar se sapne se khuli thi ye bhi meri unhi yaadon me se ek tha jise me bhoolna bhi chahta hu or yaad bhi rakhna chahta hu…

Ye mere sath aksar hota rehta tha to me bhi kuch hi der mai taiyar ho kar karan ke room ki aur chal diya or uske room ke bahar pahunch kar door knock kiya….

' Kaun hai…' andar se awaz aayi
Mai : me hu yrr…

Usne meri awaz sun kar gate khol diya aur kuch kaha ishare me or mai andar ki aur chal diya

andar pahuch kar maine dekha ki andar ek aur aadmi baitha hua tha jo shakal se thoda chalak lag raha tha

Karan : Avinash ye hai yaha ke jaane maane broker ye tumhe ek sasta sa ghar dikha denge to tum aaj hi shift kar lena..

Aadmi : jaisa aap theek samjhe sir me ise kamra deekha dunga….(meri or dekhkar ) chalo chalte hai tumhe room dikha kar mujhe aur bhi kaam hai chalo jaldi…..

Itna kekar vo aadmi bahar ki aur chal diya aur maine bhi karan ki aur dekh kar ek smile di aur chal diya apna naye safar ki aur…

Hum us aadmi ki car se kuch hi der me ek ghar ke saamne pahunch gaye jo jyada achi haalat me to nahi tha par itna bura bhi nahi tha isme ground floor tha fir ek first floor or fir chat bhi thi...

Hum andar ki aur chal diye aur us aadmi ne bell bajai kuch der baad kisi ne aakar darwaza khola or jaise hi darwaza khula

ek ladki jo dikhne ke bahut hi jyada masoom lag rahi thi usne is waqt salwar suit pehna hua tha or us normal se suit me bhi bahut pyari lag rahi thi…ye wahi ladki thi jisse me apni class me enter karte hue takra gaya tha….

Me to use dekh kar sab kuch bhul hi gaya tha ki me kon hu kaha hu or mera maqsad kya hai…mene apne aapko sambha or phir us aadmi ki taraf dekha jo apni gandi nazar se uski or dekh raha tha mujhe uspar gussa aya lekin shayad ye sahi samay nahi tha iske liye…

' namastey uncle…kaise ana hua…' usne meri or dekhte hue kaha…

Maine apni nazre turant fer li or aadmi ki aur dekhne laga kyuki agar me fir se uski aankhon me dekh leta to shayad me is baar apne hosh sambhal na pata…

' beta tumne kaha tha na ki upar wala floor Khali pada hua hai or kiraye par dena hai to mai ise lekar aya hu ab se ye yahi rahega…' aadmi ne kaha

Ladki : (meri or dekhkar) lekin uncle aapko to pata hi hai ki mujhe paiso ki jarurat hai bas isliye liye kirayedar chahiye tha…lekin kya ye kiraya de payega…(or mujhe upar se niche ki or dekha)

Aadmi : are beta mujhe achi tarah se pata hai ki kitni jimedariya hai tumhare sar par…or tum kiraye ki chinta mat karo mene 3 mahine ka advance bhi le liya hai to ab bas tum chabi de do mai ise upar wala kamra dikha deta hu…

Aur vo ladki ha me sar hila kar andar chali gayi or ek chabi la kar unhe de di…

Me us aadmi ke piche piche chal diya aur upar Ja kar dekha ek room ek kitchen or ek bathroom tha bas..maine ok kiya or vo aadmi chala gaya….maine uske jaate hi Karan ko phone laga diya

Karan : ha bhai dekh liya na ghar…koi problem ho to bata dena…
Mai : Abe meri problem chod aur bas is kameene ko yaha se door rakh….aaj me iska mooh pakka tod hi deta…kaise dekh raha tha yar wo jaise abhi us ladki ko kha hi jaega…

Karan : are tu tension na le yrr me dekhta hu ise…tu bas aaram kar or kuch chahiye ho to message kar dena..

Mene use ek simple bike or kuch ghar ka saman bhijwane ko kaha jisme ek mattress (gadda) or kuch kapde or daily routine ka samaan tha….khane ka jugad me tiffin se karne ka soch raha tha….

mai is ghar ke baare me bata du ki upar aane ke liye bahar se bhi seedhiyan banayi gayi thi or niche andar se seedhiyan sidhe chat par jaati hai bich me ek darwaja hai jis se mere room me aya ja sakta hai par vo andar se band tha…

Kuch der me niche ek chota sa truck aa gaya tha jisme vo saman tha jo maine karan se mangwaya tha saman tha to mene sara saman upar rakhwa liya or jab last me me upar aa raha tha or ek aunty ne mujhe bulaya jo ki andar se aa rahi thi….ye shayad us ladki ki maa thi…

Mai : namastey aunty..
Aunty : namastey beta…tumhi vo naye kirayedar ho na ho upar shift hua hai…

Mai : ha aunty me Delhi se aya hu yaha apni padhai karne….

Aunty : achi baat hai beta…. tumhare ghar me kon kon hai…

Mai : mai akela hi hu aunty…..maa baap to bahut pehle chale gaye the…ab bas padhai complete ho jaye fir apna future banana hai…

Aunty : sorry beta tumhare maa baap ke bare me jaan kar bura laga…bhagwan tumhara hamesha saath de…to ab yaha akele rahoge ya koi hai tumhare sath…
Mai : nahi aunty me yaha akele hi hu abhi to..
Aunty : theek hai beta vaise tumne naam kya bataya apna..
Mai : ji Avinash naam hai mera
Aunty : theek hai beta kuch jarurat ho to jarur batana…
Vaise mera naam Suman hai
Or meri beti se to tum mil hi chuke ho Siya naam hai uska abhi ye bhi yahi se MBA kar rahi hai or ek choti beti aur hai vo abhi pata nahi kaha khel rahi hogi…chalo me chalti hu Ghar me bahut kaam hai…

Or me bhi upar aakar baith gaya ghar pura set ho hi gaya tha bas apne kapde or kuch bathroom ka saman jagah par rakhna tha…vo bhi rakh diya or khana order karke mangwa liya or kha kar so gaya ye din bhi bas inhi sab me nikal gaya tha…

Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai…



New Characters

• Suman (44) : mai jis ghar me rehta hu ye inhi ka hai...inke pati bahut pehle hi is duniya ko chod kar Jaa chuke hai...dikhne me ye jyada umra ki nahi lagti hai shayad uski wajah bhi yahi hai ki inhone bahut mehnat karke apne bacho ko pala hai ye paise kamane ke liye kapde silne kaa kaam kiya karti hai...
• Siya (21) : ye Suman ji ki badi beti hai or ye dikhne me kaisi hai ye shayad batane ki jarurat nahi hai...inke masoom se chehre par duniya bhar ka dukh dikhai deta hai ye is kaaran hai ki ab pure ghar ki jimmedari inhi ke kandho par aa chuki hai....ab ye bas apni padhai puri kar ke apni maa or choti behan ko ek khushhal jindagi dena chahti hai..
• Rishi (passed away): ye siya ka chota bhai tha...jo choti Umar me kahi chala gaya tha or abhi tak pata nahi chal paya hai ki iske saath kya hua tha... ghar me sabhi ko iski bahut yaad aati hai par kehte hai na waqt kisi ke liye nahi rukta to bas ab sab ke Jahan me kuch dhondhli yaade hi bachi hai iski
• NIkita (15): yeis pariwar ki sabse choti sadasya hai inhe ghar me sabhi pyar se choti ya gudiya hi bulate hai ghar me sabhi inse bahut pyar karte hai or inki wajah se hi inke Ghar me raunak rehti hai...

(Update kaisa laga ye zaroor batayega…or like or comment karna na bhule )

nice update..!!

 

[A.A.G.]

Update-3

Or me bhi upar aakar baith gaya ghar pura set ho hi gaya tha bas apne kapde or kuch bathroom ka saman jagah par rakhna tha…vo bhi rakh diya or khana order karke mangwa liya or kha kar so gaya ye din bhi bas inhi sab me nikal gaya tha…

Ab aage :

Kal din bhar thaka dene wala tha to khana khate hi nind jaldi aa gayi thi…

Aaj subah meri nind jaldi khul gayi kyuki ye hotel to tha nahi to ab aadat padne me time lagne wala tha…

Mai uth kar chat par chal diya socha kuch der exercise kar lu par upar to gazab ka mahol bana hua tha…

Mai jaise hi chat par pahucha to koi waha pehle se maujood tha vo shayad kapde sukhane ayi thi chat par uska muh dusri taraf tha....usne is waqt ek neele rang ki saree pehni hui thi jo uske shareer par jach rahi thi…

Mai abhi bhi wahi khada use nihar raha tha usne apne baalo ko ek taraf baandha hua tha jo shayad geele the…

Uska shareer ke kuch hisse jo subah ki halki dhoop me roshni se chamaak rahe the woh adbhut lag rahe the….

unse nazar hatane ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi uski kamar se hoti hui kuch Pani ki boonde niche ko jaati dikhi to mere muh se achanak hi ek 'aah…' si nikal gayi

Or us waqt mujhe laga ki mujhse khushnaseeb to vo paani ki boond hai jo is doodh se gore or mulayam badan par reng rahi thi kuch aisa hi nazara uski surahidar gardan or dudh si komal peeth par bhi tha…..

Mai na jaane kab tak yu hi khoya raha us nazare me ki mujhe hosh hi nahi raha ki mai kaha khada hu…. achanak se vo sundari palat gayi or meri or dekha….

Uske palat te hi mujhe jhatka laga mai is waqt kuch bolne ki halat me hi nahi tha….

"are Avinash beta tum jaldi uth gaye or meri dono nalayak betiya abhi tak bistar chodne ka naam hi nahi le rahi.." ye Suman aunty thi jinhe me itni der se dekh kar aah bhar raha tha..sach me inke is avtar se to inki umra ka andaja lagana lagbhag namumkin sa tha…

"ji aunty bas abhi utha tha to socha thodi kasrat hi kar lu…" mai apni nazro ko sambhalte hue baat kar raha tha..

"Sahi hai… waise shareer acha banaya hua hai..." unhone ye baat keh kar apne baal sukhane shuru kar diye jo ki abhi tak towel me bandhe hue the….

Unke baal unki kamar tak pahuch rahe the….vo ghane kaale baal jo abhi bhi bheege hue the vo is halki sunmbah wali dhoop me chamak rahe the…

Aunty : acha vaise konse college me admission liya hai..

Mai : wahi aunty MBA ke liye jo yaha top private college hai na usi me liya hai…uske placements bhi ache hai…

Aunty : acha matlab tum siya ke hi college me ho…chalo acha hai ab mujhe chinta nahi rahegi is ladki ki…

Mai : ji aunty…


mai unse baat karte hue apni kasrat karne laga tha….or aunty bhi lagatar ek taktaki lagaye meri muscles ko dekh rahi thi…maine is waqt sirf ek trouser pehna hua tha or upar se t-shirt nikal kar chat ki deewar par rakh diya tha…

Aunty : acha tumhare khane ka kya karoge…

Mai : aunty filhal to shayad tiffin lagwane ka soch raha hu…

Aunty : are iske liye itna pareshan hone ki kya baat hai me hu na….

Mai : matlab….( Or me unki or dekhne laga)

Aunty : are matlab chodo or aaj se tumhara khana bhi hamare yaha banega bas….

Mai : are nahi aunty iski koi jarurat nahi hai mai dekh lunga kuch…

Aunty : tum bhi to mere bete jaise hi to ho na to ab bas Maine kah diya to aa jana… chalo tum karo apna ye taamjham…mujhe niche kuch kaam hai…..or samay se aa jaana khane ke liye..

Ye aakhri baat unhone meri taraf dekh kar jab kahi to unki aankho me ek akelapan saaf jhalak raha tha…

Or shayad ye sach hi to tha kyuki inke pati ka inki jindagi se tu chale jaana… or fir apne ladle bete ko is duniya ki bheed me kahi kho dena koi choti baat nahi thi…..
Shayad ye aaj bhi ye aas lagaye baithi hai ki inka beta firse laut aayega or unke gale lag kar inki saari pareshaniya samapt kar dega…

Par….par ab kon bataye is maa ko ki inka beta shayad ab is duniya me tha hi nahi or ye kaise hua ye aage pata chal hi jaega….

Mai bhi kuch der kasrat karke apne room me chala gaya fresh hone…ab ye college tha school nahi…to classes 10 baje se hoti thi abhi kaafi waqt tha…

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Wahi dusri or jab Suman niche pahuchi to uska man kaafi bhara hua sa lag raha tha ye uske bete ki yaadon ke kaaran tha shayad kyuki ek beta hamesha apni maa ka ladla hi rehta hai chahe vo usse kitna bhi door ho….

Lekin ye shayad inke saath bahut baar ho chuka hai to ye saari baato ko apne dil me samet kar ghar ke kaamo me lag jaati hai or Nikita ko bhi school bhej deti hai….
Nikita yaha se school aksar school bus me jaya karti thi…or siya bus se college jaati thi....

Siya bhi jaldi hi naha kar apni maa ke sath milkar ghar ke kaam me lag jaati hai....or phir college chali jaati hai...

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Mai taiyar ho kar karan ko call laga diya..

Karan : Good morning Bhai..

Mai : Good morning Bhai…acha vo kaam hua jo maine bataya tha…

Karan : ha bhai sab ho gaya hai maine apne tareeke se us ghar ke documents niklawa liye hai or unhe Suman ji ke naam bhi karwa diye hai…ab bas tu dekh tujhe aage kya karna hai…

Mai : thank you bhai… chal theek hai yaha office ko ache se sambhal me bhi kuch dino me aata hua waha…

Or kuch or choti choti baat karne call rakh diya or apne aap se hi baate karne laga…

Mai : (khud se) bas aaj se badlav shuru hone wala hai…ye har us cheez ke liye hoga jiske liye me itne din tarsta raha hu ....taiyaar rehna dad aajse aapki kismat badane wali hai...

Or kuch der me taiyar ho kar mai niche pahuch gaya….maine doorbell bajayi to andar se aunty ne darwaza khola….

Is waqt vo shayad kitchen me kuch kaam kar rahi thi...
unki saari ko unhone apne kamar me kas rakha tha or unke chehre par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha jo shayad unki sundarta kam karne ki jagah or badha hi raha tha…

Aunty : ab dekhte hi rahoge ya andar bhi aoge…vaise badi der kardi aane me…

Jab unhone darwaza khola to mere shabd mere muh me hi rah gaye the to aunty ne andar jaate hue ye sab kaha tha…

" ji aunty ab ye mere liye nayi jagah hai na to saman sahi karne me fir nahane me samay lag gaya or aaj to shayad Mai late bhi hu…" itna kehkar me wahi rakhe sofe par baith gaya…

Aunty : acha koi baat nahi….nayi jagah thoda samay lag hi jata hai…or agar tum na bhi aate to mai aane hi wali thi…

Phir wo jaldi jaldi plate me kuch aalo ke parathe dahi ke sath le kar aa gayi….paratho se khushbu badi achi aa rahi thi aaj bahut dino baad ek maa ke haath se bana kuch khane Jaa raha tha mai varna in 5 star hotels ke khane me bhi vo baat kaha jo ek maa ki haatho ke bani mamuli paratho me thi…

Maine khana shuru kiya to pehle hi niwale ho kha kar mujhe meri behan ki or maa ki kuch kuch yaad aane lagi kyuki bachpan me pehle meri maa fir meri behan inhone hi to Mera dhyan rakha tha….

Mai : aunty aap ke haatho Mai to jaado hai…itne ache parathe shayad hi maine kabhi khaye ho

Aunty : (muskura kar) ab jyada maska mat lagao jaldi se kha lo tumhe college ke liye bhi late ho raha hai na…

Phir maine jaldi se khana khatam kiya to aunty ne raat ko time se aane ko kaha or ek tiffin bhi laga diya ki agar bhook lage to kha lu…

Mai waha se nikal kar hotel pahuch gaya or Suman ji ke ghar ke kagaz le liye or karan ko vo tifin de diya…..
Kyuki hum saath hi bade hue the…iska bachpan bhi mere hi saath guzra tha…. to usne bhi ghar ka khana nahi khaya tha meri tarah….

Use tiffin de kar mai college pahuch gaya to waha class chalu thi to socha canteen mai chala jaye….me waha Jaa kar baith gaya or apne mobile me kuch kaam karne laga….

Kuch hi de baad ek ladki ki awaz se mera dhyan tuta…

Ladki : hii....tum Avinash ho na.... new admission…

Mai : yes…so...

Ladki : I am radhika…radhika Sharma your classmate…

Mai : okay…nice to meet you…

Radhika : May I sit here…vo actually mai bhi late hu na or class bhi start ho gayi hai…

Mai : yeah sure….

Or phir me apne mobile me lag gaya ya shayad ye jatane ki koshish karne laga ki mujhe uski maujoodgi se koi farq nahi padta…

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad achanak se usne kaha…

Radhika : So kya hum dost ban sakte hai….

Mai : sure why not…par mai to aapko janta hi nahi na..

Radhika : are vo to dosti ke baad jaan pehchaan to ho hi jayenge na…

Mai : (apna haath bada kar) Okay then we are friends now..

Phir kuch der mai bas college campus ke baare Mai baat karne laga or yuhi baat karte hue lunch break ho gaya…maine aaj bahut dino baad kisi ajnabi se itni baat ki thi….halanki ye mere liye ajnabi nahi thi lakin abhi mai unhe kuch batane wala nahi tha kyunki maire plans alag the…

Phir classes hui or chuti ke samay me college se bike leke nikalne laga to dekha siya bahar hi khadi thi to socha thoda iske maze le liye jaye…

To me pahunch gaya bike le kar uske saamne….

Mai : hii…

Siya: hi…tum yaha kya kar rahe ho…

Mai : sach tumhe nahi pata ya natak kar rahi ho…

Siya : matlab…kehna kya chahte ho....maine kya kiya…or tum apne kaam se kaam rakho aur rasta chodo mera…

Mai : are yaar mera matlab tha ki aunty ne hi subah kaha tha ki aate waqt tumhe bhi lete aau….

Siya : kya matlab…. chalo chodo tum jao yaha se me pahuch jaungi tum tension mat lo….

Mai : are jaldi baitho na yaar dekho kitni garmi hai yaha….ab baitho nahi to utha lunga tumhe yaha se…

Ye kahkar Mai bike se utarne laga to vo ghabra gayi…

Siya : acha theek hai…lekin kal se mai khud chali jaungi aur mai maa se baat kar lungi…

Or ye keh kar vo mere piche baith gayi….aur maine bhi bike start kiya or chal diye hum…

Vaise college se siya ka ghar kuch 20 minutes ki doori par tha…to mai bhi thodi chedkhani karte hue use ghar tak le aaya….

Par yaha to situation hi alag thi…. aunty or Nikita bahar hi baithe hue the to unhone dekh liya hume….


Ab aage kya hoga Avinash ke sath or vo aunty ko kya jawab dega….ye sab agle update me

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nice update..!!
suman ke family me bhi bahot dukh hai..lekin ab avinash inn dukho ko khatm kar dega..radhika ko shayad shak hogaya hai avinash pe ki woh uska bhai hai..!! siya aur avinash ek sath padhte hai toh ghar sath aana toh banta hai..!!

 

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Par yaha to situation hi alag thi…. aunty or Nikita bahar hi baithe hue the to unhone dekh liya tha hume….

Ab aage :

Siya ko to ab tak ye hi pata tha na ki uski maa ne hi permission di hai use laane ke liye…. par

Par…ab meri to gaand hi phat gayi thi….ab me kya karu ye samajhna mere bas ka to nahi tha… lekin ab marta kya na karta….

jana to tha hi andar to mene bike bike andar park ki or siya mere sang sang hi andar ki or chal padi…

Aunty : aao beta aao…vaise acha kiya jo siya ko bhi lete aye ho warna to ye aane me bahut der laga deti thi….

Mai : are aunty isme shukriya kaisa…

Or me aunty ke bagal me hi baith gaya…or siya ko shayad samajh aana baaki tha ki maine uske saath mazak Kiya hai…lekin abhi vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki mai bol pada…

Mai : vaise bhi mai idhar aa hi raha tha to siya ne lift ke liye puch liya… to maine socha bechari pareshan ho jayegi bas me to le aya saath….

Aur ye bol kar mene siya ki or dekha uska reaction dekhkar mujhe hasi aa rahi thi….aur ab vo mujhe lagatar gusse se ghoor rahi thi….

Aunty : acha kiya chalo tum baitho mai chai lekar aati…. vaise tumhe chai chalegi ya kuch or loge…jaise coffee..

Nikita : are wah ma aajtak humse to na pucha ki kya loge or ye kal hi aye or aapko pata bhi liya…

Aunty : tu na sudhar ja…beta tum chodo isko ye esi hi hai…

Or aunty mere liye coffee or apne liye chai banane andar chali gai…..or yaha rah gaye hum teen log… . Mai , siya or Nikita….

Nikita: acha to didi ne aapse lift maangi hai aaj…

Ye sunkar mai siya ki taraf dekh kar muskurane laga….siya kafi gusse me lag rahi thi par ab kya hi kar sakte hai jo ho gaya tha use sambhalna bhi to tha…

Mai : ha…vaise mai kisi ladki ko baithata nahi…lekin…tumhari di ne itne pyar se kaha ki maine maan hi liya…

Siya : acha…
Itna kehkar vo mujhe aakhe dikhane lagi..

Mai : or nahi to kya…warna Mai aise hi kisi ko thodi lift de deta vo to siya ke pyar ka asar hua to baitha liya …

Nikita anpi didi ke pass ja kar use chedte huye kehti hai ,
" Acha itne pyar se kaha tha kya…" or hasne lagi…

Siya : choti tujhe bada maza aa raha hai na….or tum tumhe to baad me dekhti hu pata nahi kis manhoos ghadi me yaha aye the…

Nikita : vaise di hamare samne bhi dekh sakte ho hum rok thodi rahe hai…..

Itna kehkar vo mere piche aa jaati or hum dono hasne lagte hai….or siya mujhe ishare karte hue andar chali jaati hai….

Thodi der baad coffee aa jaati hai or Nikita or aunty se baat karke mai phir se hotel pahuch jata hu waha karan pehle se mera wait kar raha tha….

Me kuch hi der me taiyar ho gaya or fir Karan or mai pahuch gaye hamare naye office me…

Me andar ja kar apne room me baith gaya yaha keval karan aa sakta tha….or theek mere saamne wale room me aaj ek khel shuru hone wala tha…us room me CCTV cameras lagwa diye gaye the jinka sidha view mai is room me dekh or sun sakta tha….

Thodi der intezar karne ke baad karan or….. Mr Rajesh Sharma andar aate hue dikhai dete hai…

Mai yaha par baith kar Bluetooth se karan se juda hua tha kyunki aaj ek deal hone wali thi or mujhe isme kisi tarah ki galti nahi chahiye thi isliye mai khud ise manage karne wala tha Bluetooth se…

In meeting room,
(isme karan jo bhi kahega vo mere shabd honge)

Karan: welcome Mr Sharma….aap ka yaha swagat hai…

Rajesh: thank you sir…aaj itni badi company ke saath Mai deal karne jaa raha hu ye mere liye bahut badi baat hai…

Karan: chaliye fir ye rahe documents ache se padh kar sign kar dijiye or bas deal aap ki hui…

Rajesh: nek kaam me deri kaisi sir… vaise payment jaldi ho jati to acha hota….hum manufacturing jaldi start kar paate…

Karan: ji Mr Rajesh ye lijiye check pure 10 crores ka hai…. or baaki 50% kaam hone ke baad…

Itne paise dekhkar Rajesh ki dhadkan badh jaati hai….isi beech karan bhi vo documents le kar rakh leta hai or apni seat par baith jaata hai…

Karan : Vaise aap itne bade order ko poora kar denge to or bhi order aapke paas aa hi jaenge..

Rajesh : (khush hokar) ha sir ab to hamara saath hu hi bana rahega …

Karan : ha ye to hai par yaad rakhiye ga ki agar order time se poora na hua to…..

Rajesh : (serious ho kar) haa sar mujhe pata hai mujhe poore order ka 3 guna dena hoga…lekin market isi par to tika hua hai sir agar risk nahi lenge to business kaise chalega…

Ye sunkar karan or maire chehre par ek hasi ka bhav aa gaya tha…

Karan : ha sahi kaha aapne…to chaliye ab bas order poora kariye or documents ki copy aapke office bhi pahuch jaegi….ek baar aur dekh
lijiye ga…

Bas thodi der aur baat hui deal ko lekar….or fir thodi der baad Rajesh chala gaya uske jaate hi Karan andar aa kar mere gale lag gaya kyon ki use pata tha ki aaj hum is jagah par kis tarah pahuche hai…. vo bhookh se tadapti raatein aur vo beraham duniya me apna jeevan jeene ke liye sangharsh….

Karan: bhai ab vo din door nahi…

Mai : ha bhai ab bas kuch din or fir sab apni muthi me hoga…itni asani se saza de di jaaye to shayad unhe ehsaas bhi na ho ki unki wajah se meri jindagi kaisi ho gayi thi…

Karan : chal aaja yrr aaj hum sath khana khayenge….

Or bas ye sunte hi meri hasi gayab ho gayi…

Mai : bhai mai to bhul hi kya…

Karan : Abe kya hua ab… kuch batayega bhi…

Mai : Abe vo Suman ji ne kaha tha ki me unke yaha khana khaunga or ab bas time ho hi gaya yaar….chal bye yaar Mai chalta hu….

Or use bye bol kar waha se nikal pada ab mujhe jaldi se jaldi ghar pahuncha tha…. thodi hi der me mai ghar pahunch gaya tha…shukar hai ki me time se pahunch gaya tha….

Mai pehle apne room me gaya or change karke niche pahuch gaya….maine jaa kar doorbell bajai…. lekin aaj shayad meri kismat bahut achi thi yu kahu ki jo chah raha tha wahi hua…. darwaza kholne siya hi ayi thi…

Siya : ab kya lene aaye ho yaha…jee nahi bhara kya abhi tak…

"Are tumse kon Milne aane laga yrr…. me to tumhari maa se milne aaya hu…" itna kehkar maine use side kiya or andar ki or chal diya….
Siya is baat par hairan ho kar wahi khadi mujhe andar ki aur jaate dekhti rahi …

Me andar jaa kar sofe par baith gaya….tabhi ander se aunty nikal kar aayi shayad unhe pata tha ki me hi aya hu…

Aunty : acha hua beta hum aa gaye warna Mai abhi siya ko bhejne hi wali thi…

Mai : are nahi aunty ab aapne bulaya tha to aana hi pada…or aapke haath se bane khane ko to koi na keh hi nahi sakta…

Aunty : samajh rahi hu beta tum bas aise hi tareef kar rahe ho chalo ab haath dho kar table par aa jao Mai khana laga deti hu…

Mai uth kar haath dhone chala gaya or haath dho kar table par aa gaya par siya abhi bhi mujhe thode ukhde tareeke se dekh rahi thi…shayad din ka gussa tha…lekin ab use kya batau..use yu pareshan karne me bhi ek alag hi maza aane laga tha….

Aunty : chalo lag gaya khana ab shuru ho jao…

Aunty ne bahut hi lajwab khana banaya tha…to mai bhi maze se khane laga par abhi mujhe kuch aur bhi kaam karna tha….

Mai : waise aunty agar aap ko bura na lage to ek baat puchna tha…..

Aunty: are beta kaisi baatein karte ho…mai bhi to tumhari maa jaisi hi hu na…bolo kya kehna chahte ho….

Mai : aunty aaj jab siya college se nikal kar bahar jaa rahi thi to maine kuch dekha waha par….

Mere itna kehte hi siya khaasne lagi….

Aunty: (siya ki or dekhte hue) kya dekha beta batao…

Mai : are aisa kuch nahi hai aunty bas gate par bahut se awara ladke aane jaane wali ladkiyo ko chedte rehte hai…ise pareshani hoti hogi na..

Aunty : acha….siya tumne bataya nahi kabhi…

Siya : are maa vo bas kuch manchale hai kuch raees baap ki aulad hai to unhe dar nahi hai kisika…. lekin aap pareshan mat hona me sambhal sakti hu itna ho…

Aunty : are lekin kabhi kuch ho gaya to…. nahi nahi me risk nahi le sakti….(or meri or dekhkar) Avinash…beta agar tumhe koi pareshani na ho to kya tum siya ko apne sath le ja kar laa sakte ho kya….

Aunty ke itna kehte hi siya or Nikita ko khasi aane lagi…

Siya: (khaste hue)Pani..Pani….
(Pani peekar) maa aap chinta Naa karo na…itna to mai sambhal sakti hu…

Aunty: tu to chup hi reh ab…pata nahi waha kaise kaise log milte honge roj…. Avinash beta tumhe koi pareshani hai to bata do….

Mai: ( siya ki aur dekhkar) nahi aunty ab aapne kah diya na to mujhe kya problem hogi….bas aap isi tarah apne haath ka khana khilati rehna baaki aapki sabhi problem meri…

Aunty : tum kitne ache ho beta or dekho kehne ko meri do do betiya hai par kaam ki ek bhi nahi …

Nikita or siya saath me : maaa

Aunty : acha chalo chodo ab khane par dhyan do….

Fir jaise hi khana ho gaya to me waha se apne room me aa gaya or padhne laga aur kuch kaam bhi kiya apne ghar walo ke liye…..

Lagbhag 11 baje mujhe kuch awaaz ayi…shayad koi chat par jaa raha tha….to mai bhi chup chap chal diya chat ki aur….

Chat par dekha to waha Suman thi vo chat par ghum Rahi thi…

Suman: are tum soye nahi abhi tak….

Mai : nahi aunty mai itni jaldi nahi sota aur fir aaj thoda jyada bhi kha liya tha..to socha thoda ghum lu…..

Aunty : acha kiya…

Or bas isi tarah idhar udhar ki baat karte hue hum ghumne lage….

Tabhi achanak se maire muh se kuch nikal gaya jo shayad nahi nikalna chaiye tha…lekin fir sambhal liya

Mai : vaise aap is saree me achi lag rahi hai…

Aunty : acha bachu mujhe line maar rahe ho….

Mai: are nahi aunty mai to aap ko pehli baar dekh kar ladki hi samjh raha tha par fir pata laga aap siya ki maa ho…

Aunty : (haste hue) acha chalo theek hai…mai jaati hu bahut der ho rahi hai….

Or fir aunty good night bol kar chali gayi….

Mai bhi kuch der or chat par ruka fir neend aane lagi to room Mai aakar so gaya…

Agle din mai time se taiyar ho gaya kyuki aaj siya ko apne sath lekar jana tha to mai late nahi hona chahta tha…
Niche pahuch kar maine sabke saath thodi hasi mazak ke sath nashata pura kiya or fir mai or siya chal diye college…..

College pahuch kar hum dono class mai pahuch gaye or classes chalu ho gayi….

Classes ke baad break me mai bhi canteen pahuch gaya…. Or ek side baith kar nashta karne laga….abhi mujhe kuch hi der hui thi ki mere samne siya aakar baith gayi….

Siya : kon ho tum…..aakhir chahte kya ho….pehle mere ghar aana or phir meri maa ko apni side kar liya….kyu kar rahe ho ye….

Mai : are aisa kuch nahi hai yrr vo to bas aise hi ho gaya sab….ab bhala mujhe tumse kya matlab….

Siya : matlab hona bhi nahi chahiye…. aage se agar kuch kiya na to dekh lena…

Mai : acha theek hai yrr abse mai dhyan rakhunga…

Itna keh kar diya chali gayi or saamne radhika aa kar baith gayi….ye shayad kuch der se bahar khadi ho kar mujhe or siya ko hi dekh rahi thi…

Radhika: kya kar rahi thi vo yaha…tum use jaante ho kya…

To maine use bata diya ki mai unke yaha hi ruka hua hu….

Radhika: acha chalo koi baat nahi…. vaise mai kuch batane ayi thi…

Mai : ha ha batao na …

Radhika: kal mera birthday hai or tumhe mai specially invite kar rahi hu…. samajh gaye na….

Mai : acha to kal tumhara birthday hai …vaise party kaha hai

Radhika: or kaha yrr itna bada ghar hai hamara kal aaoge na tab dekh lena…

Mai : acha ye to sahi hai lekin ab mai bhi kuch karna chahta hu yrr to please mana mat karna…

Radhika: acha jo man kare kar lena…par kal pakka aana hai theek hai na…

Mai: ok theek hai yrr chalo theek hai kal milte hai….






Ab aage kya hoga ye agle update me dekhne milega…. Avinash apne ghar jaa kar kya karega or vo kya surprise dega….ye sab jaan ne ke liye mere saath bane rahiye ga….


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nice update..!!
avinash pe siya doubt kar rahi hai lekin uska bhi doubt karna banta hai kyunki usne zindagi me bahot dukh dekhe hai toh woh aise kisi pe bharosa toh nahi karegi..!! rajesh aur uski biwi ko aisi saja milni chahiye ki uski rooh bhi kamp jaye..!! ab radhika birthday pe bula rahi hai toh jana toh padega hi..!!

 

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very nice