Incest Mera Pariwar or Mera Pyar

[Naughtyrishabh]

A short flashback

Family ya pariwar is shab ka arth aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ek insaan ki jindagi me iske kya mayne hote h par meri jindagi me aisa kuch nahi tha…..

Meri family me hum 4 log the mera bachpan bhi baaki bacho ki hi tarah tha apne pita ke sath ghumna maa ka mere liye pyar or badi behan ke saath khelna par shayad upar wale ne kuch or hi soch rakha tha …kuch hi samay baad hume pata laga ki maa ko koi bimari hai or vo ab jyada din nhi rahengi…us samay ye baat hum bacho se chupayi gayi par maa….inke liye to inki duniya mai hi tha vo mujhse bahut jyada pyar karti thi to kuch hi dino me unki aankhon me ek dar sa dikhne laga ki unke baad unke bacho ka kya hoga to unhone pita ji ko jabardasti apne bacho ka wasta dilwa kar apni behan ki shaadi pita ji se karwa di par ye shayad ab bahut kuch badalne wala tha or bas kuch hi dino me maa duniya chod kar chali gayi ab hum bikhar gaye the…..
Ab pita ji hum se kat se gaye the ab vo sirf apne kaam me dhyan dene lage or mausi jo ki humari maa ban gayi thi unhe to samjhna hi mushkil tha vo bas Ghar ka kaam kar diya karti thi isse jyada unhone hamare liye kuch kiya nahi tha lekin abhi shayad kuch or bhi bura hona baki tha….
Kuch samay me hi hamari nayi maa pregnant ho gayi to ab pita ji phir se pariwar se judne lage hume bhi laga ki shayad ab hamara pariwar ek baar phir sambhal jayega par……jab nayi maa ko bacha hua to vo ladka tha to pita ji ka dhyan to apne aap hi uski aur badh sa gaya tha vo usse jyada pyar karne lage ye shayad us aurat ke kaaran bhi tha kyuki jab maa chali gayi thi to unhone pita ji ko sambhala tha or humse door bhi kar diya tha….
Or bas kuch hi dino me nayi maa ko apne bete ke bhavishya ki chinta hui or unhone pita ji se na jaane kya kaha or achanak hi mujhe apne mama ke yaha bhej diya gaya jaha mere liye kuch nahi tha vo log mujhe naukar ki tarah rakha karte the ek din kuch aisa hua ki mujhe apne poore pariwar se hamesha ke liye door hona pada ab ye kya hua ye aage pata chal jayega aur phir maine ek naye naam ke saath ek nayi shuruaat ki ……
' Avinash ' duniya mujhe ab isi naam se jaanti hai

Ab flashback ko bich bich me jarurat padne par hi bataya jayega….



Character introduction

• Rajesh Sharma (46): ye mere pita hai inka textiles ka business hai jyada bada nahi hai par Shahar me naam h inka
• Anita (passed) : meri maa jo ki ab nahi rahi
• Pooja (42): ye meri sauteli maa hai
• Radhika (22): ye meri badi behan hai..ye mujhse bahut pyar karti hai or mujhe ghar se door bheja gaya tha to ye pita ji ke khilaf thi par unki baat kon sunta
• Sameer (20): ye Pooja maa ka beta hai ab iska intro bhi story me hi milega
• Ramesh (45): mere mama hai ye jinke yaha mujhe bheja gaya tha
• Madhu (43): ye meri maami hai inhone mujhe bahut pareshan kiya bachpan me
• Arti (22): ye mama ki badi beti h
• Rashmi (20): ye mama ki choti beti hai
• Karan (22): iska bachpan mere saath hi nikla h flashback me aa jayega ye bhi

• Avinash (22): yani ki mai ab mere baare me kahani me hi pata chale to jyada behtar rahega

(Abhi bas itna hi hai baaki log bhi jaise jaise aate jaenge unka intro aata jaega)

Flashback ke sath introduction achha raha bhai....

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

UPDATE 2

Abb tak:

Ab tak aapne padha ki mere Jaipur pahuchne ke baad mene kya kya kiya…

kaise mai apne naye college pahuncha or meri principal se kya baat Hui….

Ab aage:

'beta suno.. idhar ana zara…' ek aadmi jiski umar jyada nahi lag rahi thi usne ghar ke andar aate hue ek behad hi masson se chote bache ko apne pass bulaya…

uske piche piche uski badi behan bhi aa rahi thi vo bhi apne papa ki awaaz sun kar apne chote bhai ke piche piche chal di...

'beta tumhari padhai kaisi chal rahi hai….' papa ne pucha

Ladka : achi chal rahi hai papa or didi bhi mujhe padha deti hai to sab samajh aa jata hai….

Apni baat kehte hue ladka apne pita ke paas baith kar apna sar unki god me rakh deta hai…
Unki beti bhi unke pass aakar baith jaati hai...

Papa : beta tumhare mama tumhe bahut yaad kar rahe the….
Mai : haa is baar bahut dino se unse mila hi nahi mai.. kab aa rahe hai vo..

Papa : beta is baar vo nahi aa rahe hai…is baar tumhe jana hai waha…..

Ladki : Theek hai papa hum in chuttiyon me unke yaha ho ayenge…..

Papa : nahi beta Mera matlab hai ki ab amu wahi apne mama ke pass rahega or apni padhai bhi wahi se karega…

Ladki : nahi papa mera amu mere saath hi rahega…mai iska bahut ache se khayal rakhungi or dekhna ye padhai mai bhi sabse aage hoga

Papa : lekin beta tumhare pass to ek or chota bhai hai na…. uska dhyan kon rakhega…waha aarti bhi to hai na use bahut khusi hogi apne bhai ke sath reh kar…ise jaane do waha…
Ladka : ( apna sar utha kar apni behan ko le kar apne kamre ki or chal deta hai ) mai kahi nahi jaunga apni didi ko chodkar…chalo di andar…
Papa : ( thoda gusse me) beta Mai puch nahi Raha hu bata raha hu…tumhe Mai kal hi waha chod kar aaunga to apna samaan bandh lena…

Ladka apni behan ke saath apne kamre ke andar aa kar darwaza band kar deta hai aur apni behan ke sath chipak kar so jata hai….

Raat ko khane ke samay koi kisi se baat nahi karta par Pooja maa ke chahre par alag hi khusi jhalak rahi thi jaise unki koi muraad puri hone wali ho...

Khane ke baad sabhi apne room me chale jaate hai or ladka bhi apni behan ke saath hi firse let jata hai…un dono ke man me ek dar sa bana hua tha ki kal kya hone wala hai or yahi sab sochte hue ye dono gahri neend me kho jaate hai...

Agle din us ladke ko jabardasti apni behan alag kar ke aadmi apni car me apne bete ka saman rakh kar jabardasti apne bete ko le ke chal padta hai…..


' didiiiiii……' is cheekh ke sath hi meri neend khul jaati hai
meri saanse is waqt bahut tezi se chal rahi thi mene bagal me table par rakha pani piya aur dheere dheere apni saanso ko control kiya….

Mai kal raat khana kha kar jaldi so gaya tha aur aaj meri neend ek bahut hi bhayankar se sapne se khuli thi ye bhi meri unhi yaadon me se ek tha jise me bhoolna bhi chahta hu or yaad bhi rakhna chahta hu…

Ye mere sath aksar hota rehta tha to me bhi kuch hi der mai taiyar ho kar karan ke room ki aur chal diya or uske room ke bahar pahunch kar door knock kiya….

' Kaun hai…' andar se awaz aayi
Mai : me hu yrr…

Usne meri awaz sun kar gate khol diya aur kuch kaha ishare me or mai andar ki aur chal diya

andar pahuch kar maine dekha ki andar ek aur aadmi baitha hua tha jo shakal se thoda chalak lag raha tha

Karan : Avinash ye hai yaha ke jaane maane broker ye tumhe ek sasta sa ghar dikha denge to tum aaj hi shift kar lena..

Aadmi : jaisa aap theek samjhe sir me ise kamra deekha dunga….(meri or dekhkar ) chalo chalte hai tumhe room dikha kar mujhe aur bhi kaam hai chalo jaldi…..

Itna kekar vo aadmi bahar ki aur chal diya aur maine bhi karan ki aur dekh kar ek smile di aur chal diya apna naye safar ki aur…

Hum us aadmi ki car se kuch hi der me ek ghar ke saamne pahunch gaye jo jyada achi haalat me to nahi tha par itna bura bhi nahi tha isme ground floor tha fir ek first floor or fir chat bhi thi...

Hum andar ki aur chal diye aur us aadmi ne bell bajai kuch der baad kisi ne aakar darwaza khola or jaise hi darwaza khula

ek ladki jo dikhne ke bahut hi jyada masoom lag rahi thi usne is waqt salwar suit pehna hua tha or us normal se suit me bhi bahut pyari lag rahi thi…ye wahi ladki thi jisse me apni class me enter karte hue takra gaya tha….

Me to use dekh kar sab kuch bhul hi gaya tha ki me kon hu kaha hu or mera maqsad kya hai…mene apne aapko sambha or phir us aadmi ki taraf dekha jo apni gandi nazar se uski or dekh raha tha mujhe uspar gussa aya lekin shayad ye sahi samay nahi tha iske liye…

' namastey uncle…kaise ana hua…' usne meri or dekhte hue kaha…

Maine apni nazre turant fer li or aadmi ki aur dekhne laga kyuki agar me fir se uski aankhon me dekh leta to shayad me is baar apne hosh sambhal na pata…

' beta tumne kaha tha na ki upar wala floor Khali pada hua hai or kiraye par dena hai to mai ise lekar aya hu ab se ye yahi rahega…' aadmi ne kaha

Ladki : (meri or dekhkar) lekin uncle aapko to pata hi hai ki mujhe paiso ki jarurat hai bas isliye liye kirayedar chahiye tha…lekin kya ye kiraya de payega…(or mujhe upar se niche ki or dekha)

Aadmi : are beta mujhe achi tarah se pata hai ki kitni jimedariya hai tumhare sar par…or tum kiraye ki chinta mat karo mene 3 mahine ka advance bhi le liya hai to ab bas tum chabi de do mai ise upar wala kamra dikha deta hu…

Aur vo ladki ha me sar hila kar andar chali gayi or ek chabi la kar unhe de di…

Me us aadmi ke piche piche chal diya aur upar Ja kar dekha ek room ek kitchen or ek bathroom tha bas..maine ok kiya or vo aadmi chala gaya….maine uske jaate hi Karan ko phone laga diya

Karan : ha bhai dekh liya na ghar…koi problem ho to bata dena…
Mai : Abe meri problem chod aur bas is kameene ko yaha se door rakh….aaj me iska mooh pakka tod hi deta…kaise dekh raha tha yar wo jaise abhi us ladki ko kha hi jaega…

Karan : are tu tension na le yrr me dekhta hu ise…tu bas aaram kar or kuch chahiye ho to message kar dena..

Mene use ek simple bike or kuch ghar ka saman bhijwane ko kaha jisme ek mattress (gadda) or kuch kapde or daily routine ka samaan tha….khane ka jugad me tiffin se karne ka soch raha tha….

mai is ghar ke baare me bata du ki upar aane ke liye bahar se bhi seedhiyan banayi gayi thi or niche andar se seedhiyan sidhe chat par jaati hai bich me ek darwaja hai jis se mere room me aya ja sakta hai par vo andar se band tha…

Kuch der me niche ek chota sa truck aa gaya tha jisme vo saman tha jo maine karan se mangwaya tha saman tha to mene sara saman upar rakhwa liya or jab last me me upar aa raha tha or ek aunty ne mujhe bulaya jo ki andar se aa rahi thi….ye shayad us ladki ki maa thi…

Mai : namastey aunty..
Aunty : namastey beta…tumhi vo naye kirayedar ho na ho upar shift hua hai…

Mai : ha aunty me Delhi se aya hu yaha apni padhai karne….

Aunty : achi baat hai beta…. tumhare ghar me kon kon hai…

Mai : mai akela hi hu aunty…..maa baap to bahut pehle chale gaye the…ab bas padhai complete ho jaye fir apna future banana hai…

Aunty : sorry beta tumhare maa baap ke bare me jaan kar bura laga…bhagwan tumhara hamesha saath de…to ab yaha akele rahoge ya koi hai tumhare sath…
Mai : nahi aunty me yaha akele hi hu abhi to..
Aunty : theek hai beta vaise tumne naam kya bataya apna..
Mai : ji Avinash naam hai mera
Aunty : theek hai beta kuch jarurat ho to jarur batana…
Vaise mera naam Suman hai
Or meri beti se to tum mil hi chuke ho Siya naam hai uska abhi ye bhi yahi se MBA kar rahi hai or ek choti beti aur hai vo abhi pata nahi kaha khel rahi hogi…chalo me chalti hu Ghar me bahut kaam hai…

Or me bhi upar aakar baith gaya ghar pura set ho hi gaya tha bas apne kapde or kuch bathroom ka saman jagah par rakhna tha…vo bhi rakh diya or khana order karke mangwa liya or kha kar so gaya ye din bhi bas inhi sab me nikal gaya tha…

Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai…



New Characters

• Suman (44) : mai jis ghar me rehta hu ye inhi ka hai...inke pati bahut pehle hi is duniya ko chod kar Jaa chuke hai...dikhne me ye jyada umra ki nahi lagti hai shayad uski wajah bhi yahi hai ki inhone bahut mehnat karke apne bacho ko pala hai ye paise kamane ke liye kapde silne kaa kaam kiya karti hai...
• Siya (21) : ye Suman ji ki badi beti hai or ye dikhne me kaisi hai ye shayad batane ki jarurat nahi hai...inke masoom se chehre par duniya bhar ka dukh dikhai deta hai ye is kaaran hai ki ab pure ghar ki jimmedari inhi ke kandho par aa chuki hai....ab ye bas apni padhai puri kar ke apni maa or choti behan ko ek khushhal jindagi dena chahti hai..
• Rishi (passed away): ye siya ka chota bhai tha...jo choti Umar me kahi chala gaya tha or abhi tak pata nahi chal paya hai ki iske saath kya hua tha... ghar me sabhi ko iski bahut yaad aati hai par kehte hai na waqt kisi ke liye nahi rukta to bas ab sab ke Jahan me kuch dhondhli yaade hi bachi hai iski
• NIkita (15): yeis pariwar ki sabse choti sadasya hai inhe ghar me sabhi pyar se choti ya gudiya hi bulate hai ghar me sabhi inse bahut pyar karte hai or inki wajah se hi inke Ghar me raunak rehti hai...

(Update kaisa laga ye zaroor batayega…or like or comment karna na bhule )

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

 

[akash.12]

Update-9

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Mujhe bas ab lagne laga ki ye mera last din hai yaha….

Unhone mujhe unke pass baithne ko kaha aur mere samne kuch aisi cheez rakh di jise dekhkar me shock ho gaya tha….


Ab aage…

Mai is waqt aunty ke bagal me bistar par baitha tha or aunty ke pass unke ghar ke documents the….
Mujhe dar is baat ka nahi tha ki unhe documents mil gaye the…. mujhe dar kisi aur baat ka tha…..

( Ab vo wajah aage pata chal jayegi to bas dhairya banaye rakhe )

"To ab baaki baatein baad me hogi….mai tumse in documents ke liye nahi puchungi….

Mujhe bas ye batana ki tum kaha gaye the or us message ka matlab kya tha ...." Aunty ne bade aram se un paper's ko side rakhte hue kaha….

Ab itna bada chutiyapa kiya tha…or aunty meri gaand yu hi baksh de ye ho hi nahi sakta….

" Vo…vo…aunty actually…mmm…." Mujhe kuch sujhe to bahana banaya jaye na…..yahan main aya tha mere pariwar se badla lene..or yahan sab log mujhe hi ghere baithe hai batao yrr….

"Beta ya to saaf saaf batado varna mai tumhe maaf karne se rahi….jo tumne kiya hai na….ab ek baar ko mai bhulne ki soch bhi lu to wajah to pata chale na mujhe…."aunty badi shanti se baat kar rahi thi….

" Vo aunty ab me pehle jaha rehta tha waha ki yaad aane lagi thi…..aur yaha par mera koi apna hai bhi nahi na to thoda dukhi ho gaya tha …." Maine socha emotional jawab dunga to theek ho jayega….par….ab dekho aage….

"Acha to tumhe mera bhi khayal nahi aya…."maine jaise hi apni baat kahi Suman aunty ne ek aur sawal daag diya…

" Sorry aunty….. us samay bas mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha tha…or me khud ko sambhal nahi paya to chala gaya…. lekin fir aapke pyar ne fir yaha aane par majboor kar diya…." Ab ye maine keh to diya lekin….maine ye normally kaha tha…..
Par aunty ko laga ki ye baat maine unke liye hi kahi hai….

" Chalo abhi tum aram kar lo… hum baad me aaram se baat karenge…" itna kehkar aunty apne kaam me lag gayi…..

Mai abhi apne room me pahucha hi tha ki samne bistar par kisi shakhs ko dekh kar me chowk hi gaya….
Samne bistar par siya baithe hue mujhe hi dekh rahi thi….

Ab sala mai ghar lock ache se karunga…..yaha koi bhi jab chahe aa jaata hai….

Me jaa kar baith gaya uske paas hi…usko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise ab uske chehre par thoda noor aa gaya tha…jo mujhe pehle nahi dikh raha tha….

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho…kisi ne dekh liya to…."maine hi baat shuru karne ke liye kaha….

"Ye sab chodo aur pehle ye batao…kaha gaye the…."siya ne pucha…

"Bas office ke hi kaam se gaya tha na….tumhe pata to hai…"maine bhi normal jawab diya aur sidha hi let gaya…..

"Sach bata do na ki kaha gaye the…..varna…" siya ne bade aram se phir se pucha….

"Are bataya to yrr…. office work tha….or ye varna kya hai…dhamki de rahi ho kya…"itna kehkar me hasne laga….

Lekin aaj shayad abhi bahut kuch dekhna tha mujhe…. achanak aisa kuch hua ki meri saanse hi ruk si gayi…
Siya achanak se mere upar aa gayi….uska phul jaisa makhmali badan mere sharir ke upar aa gaya tha….

"Nahi bataoge…..kaha gaye the…." Kehte hue siya apni daye hath ki ungli ko mere gaal per phirane lagi …….

Meri sanse achanak se tez ho gayi thi…to kuch der saaso ko sambhal kar mene jawab dene ki koshish ki….

" Y..y..ye tum kya kar rahi ho…hato upar se…."maine kaha..

"Kya mai itni bhari hu kya….bolo na…."itna keh kar wo meri gardan me saase chodne lagi….

Jaise jaise mujhe uski garam saas apni gardan par mehsoos ho rahi thi…. waise waise mera wajood mujhse door jata jaa raha tha….

Meri aankhe kab band hui mujhe pata hi nahi chala….mere haath apne aap uski kamar par chale gaye or kamar se hote hue peeth tak pahunch gaye….or me bas use apni baahon me simete kisi or hi duniya me ja chuka tha….

Safar ki thakan fir yaha aane par itna dimag lagane par me waise bhi thak gaya tha ….or ab is abhutpurva ehsaas ne mere tan or man me jaise jaan hi na chodi thi….

Uske sharir se aati vo madak or adbhut khushbu mere andar jaise jaise jaa rahi thi….vaise vaise mai is duniya se door jaata ja raha tha….

Ye ehsaas mujhe bahut hi jyada acha lag raha tha….aaj mujhe esa lag raha tha ki kahi jannat hai to vo inhi baahon mein hai….mai bewajah logo se badla lene me laga hua tha….

Mujhe bas aaj apne purn hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha….or isi ehsaas ke sath me ek meethi or gehri neend me khota chala gaya…..

Ye neend shayad mere jeevan mein ab tak ki sabse meethi or aramdayak neend thi….

Kuch der baad siya wahi mujhse alag ho kar mujhe dekhne lagi….mujhe is waqt dekhna use acha lag raha tha… vo mere baalon me apna haath ghumane lagi…..

Or bas ye ek or sama tha jab mai or gehri neend me chala gaya……

Mujhe ache se abhi tak bhi meri maa ka vo sparsh yaad hai….jab mai soya rehta tha to maa mere baalon ko sahlati thi….unhe pata tha ki mujhe isse bahut aaram milta hai ….

Bas aaj bhi bahut dino baad esa hua tha jab siya mere baalon ko sahlane lagi thi ….. mujhe apni maa ka sa ehsas hua or mai siya se fir lipat gaya…

Ab siya or mai sath me soye hue the …

Jab mai utha tab dopahar dhal chuki thi….or shaam apne parvaan chad rahi thi….

Uthne ke baad me jab tak fresh hokar aaya tab tak siya chai le kar aa gayi thi….abhi hum bas ek dusre ki aankhon me hi ek dusre ko dekh kar apni baat keh rahe the…

"Siya sorry vo mai thoda thak gaya tha…..to neend aa gayi thi…" maine hi baat ki shuruaat ki…kyuki ab ye chupi kisi ko todni hi thi….

"Koi baat nahi…" siya itna kehkar fir chup ho gayi…

" Vo…vo mujhe kuch kehna hai…" maine kaha…

"Ha kaho na…." Siya ne kaha…

"Maine jo us sham ko kaha is ke liye sorry….. mujhe aise nahi bolna chahiye tha na….ab mai tumhe bilkul pareshan nahi karunga….. agar tum chaho to me yaha se chala bhi jaunga…" maine ye keh hi diya kyon ki shayad mai us din overreact kar gaya tha….

Aaj jo hua tha usse itna to saaf tha ki siya ke man ki baat siya bata nahi paa rahi hai ..bas isiliye maine ye sab keh diya…or iska asar bhi hua…

"Tumhe jo thapad lagaye the unme koi kami reh gayi kya…." Usne bada masoom sa chehra bana kar pucha…

Mujhe jaise hi subah wale thappad yaad aye mere hath apne aap mere gaalo par chale gaye….

" Matlab …" maine darte hue pucha….

"Ye kya laga rakha hai tumne ki aapko pareshan nahi karunga…. nahi karunga…..tumhe samajh nahi aata kya….ki mai tumse pareshan nahi hu pagal…

Or ye kaha gaye the tum…. mujhe to laga tha tum pyar kerte ho mujhse…. par tum to chod kar hi chale gaye…."siya ne kaha….

"Mai pyar karta hu tumse….pehle din se karta hu….jab tumhari in aankhon mein pehli baar dekha tha tab se hi…..or shayad ab ye kabhi khatam bhi nahi ho sakta par….par mai tumhe majboor to nahi kar sakta na.." maine kaha..

"Acha tumhe kya lagta hai…tum aise hi yaha chale aaoge…. or mujhe apne pyar mein phasa kar chale jaoge…." Siya ne ye kaha or mera haath tham liya….

"Are mein kyu karunga aisa kuch……..ek minute…..abhi abhi tumne kya kaha…do…do you love….me…" mai thoda pareshan ho kar jawab de raha tha lekin jab mujhe ehsaas hua ki abhi usne kya kaha hai to maine baat badal di…

Mere itna puchne par bas usne apne hath se mere hatho ko aur kas kar pakad liya….

Ab isko me jaise hi samajh pata itne me Nikita aa gayi or le gayi siya ko….. mujhe to bas abhi bhi siya ki baate sunai de rahi thi….

Bas isi tarah mein khoya hua tha ki karan ka call aa gaya…

"Kaisa hai bhai…."karan ne pucha….

"Bas badiya hu yrr…tu meri tension na le ..tu bata sab sahi hai na…."maine kaha..

"Bas sab badhiya hai Bhai….apne plan ka second phase shuru ho gaya hai…to socha tujhe bata du…."karan ne kaha….

"Acha hai bhai ab bas kuch din aur phir hum humara khel shuru kar denge…"mai itna keh kar muskurane laga….

"Chal theek hai free ho to yaha aa jana ek baar…"karan ne itna kaha or call cut kar diya….

Jab shaam hui to thoda aaram karke mai neeche chala aya….

Mujhe Nikita bahar hi mil gayi…mai usi se baat karne baith gaya ….

Baat karte hue khane ka time ho gaya….hum sab ne mil kar khana khaya or jab sab chale gaye…..tab mai bahar tehlne nikal gaya….kuch saman chahiye tha mujhe…..

Jab mai lota to mere darwaze par ek note tha " 11 pm - Terrace.."bas itna hi likha tha….

Ab mai room mein aakar aram karne kaga…..or jab time ho gaya to mein pahunch gaya chat par……

Chat par is samay bilkul andhera tha…agar is samay koi mere samne aa jata to mujhe bas uska aks dikhai deta abhi….

Mere kuch hi der intezar karne par koi chat par aa gaya….

Ab mujhe siya to mujhse raha nahi gaya mujhe abhi siya ko bas apni baahon mai lene ko jee kar raha tha….
Maine aage badh kar use gale laga liya….

Mai : aa gayi tum….mai kitna tadap raha tha kab se…..jab se laut kar aya hu…tabse bas tumhe apni baahon mein rakhne ko jee kar raha hai ..

Ab mai jaise hi samne khade shaqs ke gale lagaya to mujhe bahut sukun milne laga….or

My bad luck…fir se yaha par Suman hi thi…

Par mujhe andaza nahi hua…mai kuch jyada hi utsahit ho raha tha….

Dheere dheere vatavaran garmane laga…mera muh maine uski gardan par laga diya ….

Or bas yahi vo kamjor pal paida hua jisme Suman ka shareer bhi pighalne laga….use ab apna man bagawat karte hue nazar aane laga tha…..

Mai apne hotho ko uski gardan par phirane laga…kabhi uski gardan par chumta kabhi uski gardan ko muh me bhar leta….or phir dheere dheere me uske kaan se hote hue uske gaalo par pahuch gaya…..

Uske gal itne mulayam lag rahe the ki mai pagal ho kar unhe apne hotho me bhar kar chusne laga….ab maine kabhi ye sab na hi kiya tha na hi iske baare me kabhi socha tha…..

Par aaj bas bahut kuch apne aap hota chala ja raha tha…

Ab mere hoth uske gulab se nazuk hotho tak pahunch gaye the…..mujhe uske hothon par ek thirkan si mehsoos ho rahi thi…maine dheere dheere uske hotho ko kiss karna shuru kar diya or achanak hi uske hotho ko chusna shuru kar diya….

Samne se koi response nahi aa raha tha….par ab mujhe kon samjhata mai to bas apne kaam mein laga hua tha…..

Kuch der baad…. uske hothon ko apne hotho se pine ke baad mai apne muh ko uske kaan tak lekar pahuch gaya…..

"I love you…i love you siya…."..maine kaha….

Abhi tak jo kuch hua usse Suman lagbhag pighal hi gayi thi….par jab usne siya ka naam suna….to use samajh aane laga …ki ab tak jo hua vo kiske liye tha….par

Par abhi agar Suman kuch bhi bolti to usko sharminda hona padta…..akhir vo is samay Avinash ki baaho mein jo simti hui thi….or ab tak usne jara bhi virodh nahi dikhaya tha…..

Achanak mujhe apne kandhe par kuch geela pan mehsoos hua….ye shayad aansu ki kuch booond thi….

Mai jhat se alag ho kar chehra tatolne laga….or khushkismati se mere senses ne kaam karna shuru kar diya tha….

Mujhe ab samjhte der nahi lagi ke ye siya nahi koi aur hai….
Or me furti se alag ho kar khada ho gaya ….

Aunty phataphat neeche chali gayi…aur main bhi kuch der ruk kar apne kamre me chala gaya…

Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe toka kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."

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[akash.12]

Jabardast update bhai.....plz next update jldi dena

Lajwab update bhai

Nice update

Ek alag hi andaj me shuru ki h aapne is kahani ko....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Nice update bro

Zabardast fantastic update

Nice update..!!
Lagta hai radhika apne bhai ki yaad me tadap rahi hai..lekin lagta usse malum nahi hai uske bhai ke sath kitna galat huva hai..aur woh sabka badla lene wala hai..!! Siya aur suman dono maa beti avinash ke pyaar me pagal ho gayi hai..siya ne toh avinash ko accept kar liya lekin suman aur avinash ka pyaar kaise aage badhega..!! Lagta hai suman avinash ko ghar ke papers ke bare me puchh rahi hai..ab avinash ko sach bata dena chahiye kyunki suman ka haq hai sach janane ka..!!

Waiting for next update..!!

Awesome update

bahut khub

Bole to Jhakaas update

very nice update

Nice update

Awesome update

Superb update

Akhir karan ke sandesh ne use aaina dikhaya or laut ke buddhu rishi ke ghar aaya Chalo 4 chate khane ke baad sia maan to gyi filhal ke liye pr Suman ji ko Kon mnayega Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Nice update bhai!

Awesome update

Bhai next update kb tak aaega

Siya n sahi kia ek do or padne chahiye thai
Ab dekhte h aunty ji kia leker bethi h avi k samne kia raaj khulne wala h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Waiting for next update

Flashback ke sath introduction achha raha bhai....

New update posted friends

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

good one

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update-9

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Mujhe bas ab lagne laga ki ye mera last din hai yaha….

Unhone mujhe unke pass baithne ko kaha aur mere samne kuch aisi cheez rakh di jise dekhkar me shock ho gaya tha….


Ab aage…

Mai is waqt aunty ke bagal me bistar par baitha tha or aunty ke pass unke ghar ke documents the….
Mujhe dar is baat ka nahi tha ki unhe documents mil gaye the…. mujhe dar kisi aur baat ka tha…..

( Ab vo wajah aage pata chal jayegi to bas dhairya banaye rakhe )

"To ab baaki baatein baad me hogi….mai tumse in documents ke liye nahi puchungi….

Mujhe bas ye batana ki tum kaha gaye the or us message ka matlab kya tha ...." Aunty ne bade aram se un paper's ko side rakhte hue kaha….

Ab itna bada chutiyapa kiya tha…or aunty meri gaand yu hi baksh de ye ho hi nahi sakta….

" Vo…vo…aunty actually…mmm…." Mujhe kuch sujhe to bahana banaya jaye na…..yahan main aya tha mere pariwar se badla lene..or yahan sab log mujhe hi ghere baithe hai batao yrr….

"Beta ya to saaf saaf batado varna mai tumhe maaf karne se rahi….jo tumne kiya hai na….ab ek baar ko mai bhulne ki soch bhi lu to wajah to pata chale na mujhe…."aunty badi shanti se baat kar rahi thi….

" Vo aunty ab me pehle jaha rehta tha waha ki yaad aane lagi thi…..aur yaha par mera koi apna hai bhi nahi na to thoda dukhi ho gaya tha …." Maine socha emotional jawab dunga to theek ho jayega….par….ab dekho aage….

"Acha to tumhe mera bhi khayal nahi aya…."maine jaise hi apni baat kahi Suman aunty ne ek aur sawal daag diya…

" Sorry aunty….. us samay bas mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha tha…or me khud ko sambhal nahi paya to chala gaya…. lekin fir aapke pyar ne fir yaha aane par majboor kar diya…." Ab ye maine keh to diya lekin….maine ye normally kaha tha…..
Par aunty ko laga ki ye baat maine unke liye hi kahi hai….

" Chalo abhi tum aram kar lo… hum baad me aaram se baat karenge…" itna kehkar aunty apne kaam me lag gayi…..

Mai abhi apne room me pahucha hi tha ki samne bistar par kisi shakhs ko dekh kar me chowk hi gaya….
Samne bistar par siya baithe hue mujhe hi dekh rahi thi….

Ab sala mai ghar lock ache se karunga…..yaha koi bhi jab chahe aa jaata hai….

Me jaa kar baith gaya uske paas hi…usko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise ab uske chehre par thoda noor aa gaya tha…jo mujhe pehle nahi dikh raha tha….

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho…kisi ne dekh liya to…."maine hi baat shuru karne ke liye kaha….

"Ye sab chodo aur pehle ye batao…kaha gaye the…."siya ne pucha…

"Bas office ke hi kaam se gaya tha na….tumhe pata to hai…"maine bhi normal jawab diya aur sidha hi let gaya…..

"Sach bata do na ki kaha gaye the…..varna…" siya ne bade aram se phir se pucha….

"Are bataya to yrr…. office work tha….or ye varna kya hai…dhamki de rahi ho kya…"itna kehkar me hasne laga….

Lekin aaj shayad abhi bahut kuch dekhna tha mujhe…. achanak aisa kuch hua ki meri saanse hi ruk si gayi…
Siya achanak se mere upar aa gayi….uska phul jaisa makhmali badan mere sharir ke upar aa gaya tha….

"Nahi bataoge…..kaha gaye the…." Kehte hue siya apni daye hath ki ungli ko mere gaal per phirane lagi …….

Meri sanse achanak se tez ho gayi thi…to kuch der saaso ko sambhal kar mene jawab dene ki koshish ki….

" Y..y..ye tum kya kar rahi ho…hato upar se…."maine kaha..

"Kya mai itni bhari hu kya….bolo na…."itna keh kar wo meri gardan me saase chodne lagi….

Jaise jaise mujhe uski garam saas apni gardan par mehsoos ho rahi thi…. waise waise mera wajood mujhse door jata jaa raha tha….

Meri aankhe kab band hui mujhe pata hi nahi chala….mere haath apne aap uski kamar par chale gaye or kamar se hote hue peeth tak pahunch gaye….or me bas use apni baahon me simete kisi or hi duniya me ja chuka tha….

Safar ki thakan fir yaha aane par itna dimag lagane par me waise bhi thak gaya tha ….or ab is abhutpurva ehsaas ne mere tan or man me jaise jaan hi na chodi thi….

Uske sharir se aati vo madak or adbhut khushbu mere andar jaise jaise jaa rahi thi….vaise vaise mai is duniya se door jaata ja raha tha….

Ye ehsaas mujhe bahut hi jyada acha lag raha tha….aaj mujhe esa lag raha tha ki kahi jannat hai to vo inhi baahon mein hai….mai bewajah logo se badla lene me laga hua tha….

Mujhe bas aaj apne purn hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha….or isi ehsaas ke sath me ek meethi or gehri neend me khota chala gaya…..

Ye neend shayad mere jeevan mein ab tak ki sabse meethi or aramdayak neend thi….

Kuch der baad siya wahi mujhse alag ho kar mujhe dekhne lagi….mujhe is waqt dekhna use acha lag raha tha… vo mere baalon me apna haath ghumane lagi…..

Or bas ye ek or sama tha jab mai or gehri neend me chala gaya……

Mujhe ache se abhi tak bhi meri maa ka vo sparsh yaad hai….jab mai soya rehta tha to maa mere baalon ko sahlati thi….unhe pata tha ki mujhe isse bahut aaram milta hai ….

Bas aaj bhi bahut dino baad esa hua tha jab siya mere baalon ko sahlane lagi thi ….. mujhe apni maa ka sa ehsas hua or mai siya se fir lipat gaya…

Ab siya or mai sath me soye hue the …

Jab mai utha tab dopahar dhal chuki thi….or shaam apne parvaan chad rahi thi….

Uthne ke baad me jab tak fresh hokar aaya tab tak siya chai le kar aa gayi thi….abhi hum bas ek dusre ki aankhon me hi ek dusre ko dekh kar apni baat keh rahe the…

"Siya sorry vo mai thoda thak gaya tha…..to neend aa gayi thi…" maine hi baat ki shuruaat ki…kyuki ab ye chupi kisi ko todni hi thi….

"Koi baat nahi…" siya itna kehkar fir chup ho gayi…

" Vo…vo mujhe kuch kehna hai…" maine kaha…

"Ha kaho na…." Siya ne kaha…

"Maine jo us sham ko kaha is ke liye sorry….. mujhe aise nahi bolna chahiye tha na….ab mai tumhe bilkul pareshan nahi karunga….. agar tum chaho to me yaha se chala bhi jaunga…" maine ye keh hi diya kyon ki shayad mai us din overreact kar gaya tha….

Aaj jo hua tha usse itna to saaf tha ki siya ke man ki baat siya bata nahi paa rahi hai ..bas isiliye maine ye sab keh diya…or iska asar bhi hua…

"Tumhe jo thapad lagaye the unme koi kami reh gayi kya…." Usne bada masoom sa chehra bana kar pucha…

Mujhe jaise hi subah wale thappad yaad aye mere hath apne aap mere gaalo par chale gaye….

" Matlab …" maine darte hue pucha….

"Ye kya laga rakha hai tumne ki aapko pareshan nahi karunga…. nahi karunga…..tumhe samajh nahi aata kya….ki mai tumse pareshan nahi hu pagal…

Or ye kaha gaye the tum…. mujhe to laga tha tum pya kerte ho mujhse…. par tum to chod kar hi chale gaye…."siya ne kaha….

"Mai pyar karta hu tumse….pehle din se karta hu….jab tumhari in aankhon mein pehli baar dekha tha tab se hi…..or shayad ab ye kabhi khatam bhi nahi ho sakta par….par mai tumhe majboor to nahi kar sakta na.." maine kaha..

"Acha tumhe kya lagta hai…tum aise hi yaha chale aaoge…. or mujhe apne pyar mein phasa kar chale jaoge…." Siya ne ye kaha or mera haath tham liya….

"Are mein kyu karunga aisa kuch……..ek minute…..abhi abhi tumne kya kaha…do…do you love….me…" mai thoda pareshan ho kar jawab de raha tha lekin jab mujhe ehsaas hua ki abhi usne kya kaha hai to maine baat badal di…

Mere itna puchne par bas usne apne hath se mere hatho ko aur kas kar pakad liya….

Ab isko me jaise hi samajh pata itne me Nikita aa gayi or le gayi siya ko….. mujhe to bas abhi bhi siya ki baate sunai de rahi thi….

Bas isi tarah mein khoya hua tha ki karan ka call aa gaya…

"Kaisa hai bhai…."karan ne pucha….

"Bas badiya hu yrr…tu meri tension na le ..tu bata sab sahi hai na…."maine kaha..

"Bas sab badhiya hai Bhai….apne plan ka second phase shuru ho gaya hai…to socha tujhe bata du…."karan ne kaha….

"Acha hai bhai ab bas kuch din aur phir hum humara khel shuru kar denge…"mai itna keh kar muskurane laga….

"Chal theek hai free ho to yaha aa jana ek baar…"karan ne itna kaha or call cut kar diya….

Jab shaam hui to thoda aaram karke mai neeche chala aya….

Mujhe Nikita bahar hi mil gayi…mai usi se baat karne baith gaya ….

Baat karte hue khane ka time ho gaya….hum sab ne mil kar khana khaya or jab sab chale gaye…..tab mai bahar tehlne nikal gaya….kuch saman chahiye tha mujhe…..

Jab mai lota to mere darwaze par ek note tha " 11 pm - Terrace.."bas itna hi likha tha….

Ab mai room mein aakar aram karne kaga…..or jab time ho gaya to mein pahunch gaya chat par……

Chat par is samay bilkul andhera tha…agar is samay koi mere samne aa jata to mujhe bas uska aks dikhai deta abhi….

Mere kuch hi der intezar karne par koi chat par aa gaya….

Ab mujhe siya to mujhse raha nahi gaya mujhe abhi siya ko bas apni baahon mai lene ko jee kar raha tha….
Maine aage badh kar use gale laga liya….

Mai : aa gayi tum….mai kitna tadap raha tha kab se…..jab se laut kar aya hu…tabse bas tumhe apni baahon mein rakhne ko jee kar raha hai ..

Ab mai jaise hi samne khade shaqs ke gale lagaya to mujhe bahut sukun milne laga….or

My bad luck…fir se yaha par Suman hi thi…

Par mujhe andaza nahi hua…mai kuch jyada hi utsahit ho raha tha….

Dheere dheere vatavaran garmane laga…mera muh maine uski gardan par laga diya ….

Or bas yahi vo kamjor pal paida hua jisme Suman ka shareer bhi pighalne laga….use ab apna man bagawat karte hue nazar aane laga tha…..

Mai apne hotho ko uski gardan par phirane laga…kabhi uski gardan par chumta kabhi uski gardan ko muh me bhar leta….or phir dheere dheere me uske kaan se hote hue uske gaalo par pahuch gaya…..

Uske gal itne mulayam lag rahe the ki mai pagal ho kar unhe apne hotho me bhar kar chusne laga….ab maine kabhi ye sab na hi kiya tha na hi iske baare me kabhi socha tha…..

Par aaj bas bahut kuch apne aap hota chala ja raha tha…

Ab mere hoth uske gulab se nazuk hotho tak pahunch gaye the…..mujhe uske hothon par ek thirkan si mehsoos ho rahi thi…maine dheere dheere uske hotho ko kiss karna shuru kar diya or achanak hi uske hotho ko chusna shuru kar diya….

Samne se koi response nahi aa raha tha….par ab mujhe kon samjhata mai to bas apne kaam mein laga hua tha…..

Kuch der baad…. uske hothon ko apne hotho se pine ke baad mai apne muh ko uske kaan tak lekar pahuch gaya…..

"I love you…i love you siya…."..maine kaha….

Abhi tak jo kuch hua usse Suman lagbhag pighal hi gayi thi….par jab usne siya ka naam suna….to use samajh aane laga …ki ab tak jo hua vo kiske liye tha….par

Par abhi agar Suman kuch bhi bolti to usko sharminda hona padta…..akhir vo is samay Avinash ki baaho mein jo simti hui thi….or ab tak usne jara bhi virodh nahi dikhaya tha…..

Achanak mujhe apne kandhe par kuch geela pan mehsoos hua….ye shayad aansu ki kuch booond thi….

Mai jhat se alag ho kar chehra tatolne laga….or khushkismati se mere senses ne kaam karna shuru kar diya tha….

Mujhe ab samjhte der nahi lagi ke ye siya nahi koi aur hai….
Or me furti se alag ho kar khada ho gaya ….

Aunty phataphat neeche chali gayi…aur main bhi kuch der ruk kar apne kamre me chala gaya…

Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe tika kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."

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Awesome update

 

[rakesh12]

Ek number

 

[akash.12]

good one

Thank you bhai
Keep supporting

 

[akash.12]

Awesome update

Thank you bhai
keep supporting

 

[akash.12]

Ek number

Thank you bhai
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