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Incest Mera Pariwar or Mera Pyar

How should Avinash take the revenge

  • Physical assault

    Votes: 51 59.3%
  • Mentally disturb

    Votes: 27 31.4%
  • Abuse in front of society

    Votes: 16 18.6%
  • Or anything different

    Votes: 20 23.3%

  • Total voters
    86

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe toka kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."



Abb aage…..

Yaha ab teen logo ki zindagi aaj kuch had tak badal gayi thi….

Ek aur jaha siya aaj bahut khush thi….kyunki use uska pyar mil gaya tha….abhi kuch din pehle Avinash ke chale jaane se siya ka pyar Avinash ke liye or badh gaya tha….aur ab vo kisi bhi keemat par Avinash ko khona nahi chahti thi….. lekin….

Lekin kehte hai na ki pyar insaan ko pagal banane lagta hai…. theek usi tarah ab siya ke man me ek sawal aa gaya tha….ab ye sawal kya hai or iska jawab siya ko kis se milega ye pata chal jaega….

Or dusri taraf Suman ko bechari bahut pareshan thi….usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki jeevan ke is padav par aa kar use aisi situation ka samna karna padega…..
Aakhir Suman itne saalo se khud ke man or jism ko sambhalti aa rahi thi….par ab kuch kuch halat badal chuke the….
Avinash ne jab us din apne room mein Suman ko apni baahon me bhara hua tha vo drishya reh reh kar use yaad aa raha tha…
fir Suman ko vo bhi yaad aane laga ki kaise uska shareer ko jab Avinash ne apne aagosh me liya hua tha tab Suman ka shareer andar se pighalne laga tha….

Or fir bhi…..fir bhi Suman ne khud ko abhi tak sambhala hi hua tha…..par aaj jo hua vo in sabse pare tha…vo apne mulayam rasile hontho par abhi reh reh kar Avinash ke garam hotho ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi…. Suman ki yoni se behte kaamras ne use samjha Diya tha ki ab Avinash ki jaroorat hai Suman ko….

Par jab usne siya ka naam sina…..to uske sare vichar usko kahi dhumil se hote nazar aane lage….. lekin ab apne man mein uthe is bavandar ko bhi filhaal sambhalna mushkil ho raha tha…ab Suman ne sab kuch waqt ke hawale kar diya or gehri neend me khone lagi…..

Mujhe apne aap par sharam aa rahi thi…..mai siya se pyar karta hu aur ab yaha aunty ke sath hua hadsa mujhe andar se jala raha tha…..
Maine faisla kar liya tha ki ab mai aunty se duri banakar rakhunga….. lekin….

Lekin kuch sawalo ke jawab mujhe bhi chahiye the….ki jab maine aunty ke labon ko apne muh me lekar choosa tha…to unke sharir ki pratikriya mere is kaam ka saath dene wali thi …mujhe Zara bhi nahi laga ki aunty dur ho rahi ho ….
To kya kuch aisa hai jo mujhe nahi pata hai…sawal bahut hai or jawab sirf aunty ke hi pas hai….

Mai subah utha or apni exercise karke nahane chala gaya….fir taiyar ho kar niche pahuch gaya…darwaza knock kiya…
Is baar darwaza Suman aunty ne khola tha….
Hamari nazre mili or fir vo andar chali gayi….. mujhe ek baar fir kal ka hadsa yaad aa gaya tha….

"Bhaiya andar aa jao na…kab tak bahar hi khade rahoge…."Nikita ki baat ko sun kar me vartman me lauta or andar ja kar dining table par baith gaya sabke sath….

Siya naashta paros rahi thi….or ye kya…..are ye aunty to mujhe hi ghoor rahi hai…maine jaldi se apni nazre niche ki aur nashte par dhyan laga liya…..

Yaha Suman bas mujhe or siya ko hi dekh rahi thi…vo bhi bade gaur se…. mujhe ek pal ko esa laga jaise aunty siya se jal rahi ho….par apni gandi or Kam akal soch ko yahi dafna kar mai fir nashta karne laga ….

Nashte ke baad mai or siya meri wali bike par baith kar college ki aur nikal gaye….is poore samay me aunty ki nazar mere or siya ki hi taraf thi…..

Kuch door jaate hi siya ne apne haatho ko faila kar mujhe piche se apni baahon me le liya….or apna sar meri peeth par tika liya….

Iske aage bas duniya ka koi mol nahi reh gaya tha ab….meri premika ka mujhe is kadar apni baahon me jakda hua hona hi mujhe ek anokha sukh pradan kar raha tha…
Is waqt siya ka upari sharir pura meri peeth se laga hua tha …
na vo kuch keh rahi thi…na mai kuch sun na chahta tha…..ye khamoshi hum dono ke beech bahut sukun de rahi thi…

Kuch hi der me hum college pahuch gaye….mai nira chutiya ho chala tha ab….mai radhika ko bhi bhul gaya tha….
Jab hum college pahuche to radhika bhi abhi apni car se utar hi rhi thi…..hamari nazre mili or jab usne siya ko mere itne pass dekha to nazre fer kar canteen ki or chali gayi…..

"Are tum kaha chale…class ka time ho hi gaya hai…." Siya ne mujhe canteen ki or jaate hue dekh kar kaha….

"Bas kuch der me aa jaunga…ek dost se milna hai…." Maine itna kaha to usne ishare me gardan hila kar haa kaha or aag badh gayi…
Or mai canteen ki or bhag kar pahucha…

" Hi radhika…"Maine radhika se kaha uske samne padi chair par baithte hue…

"Hi…" itna javab de kar vo apne phone me kuch karne lagi….

"Kaisi ho yrr…bahut dino baad dekha…"maine baat ko badhane ke uddeshya se kaha…

Usne meri or dekha or muskura kar kaha "bas bahut jyada busy thi na…to time hi nahi Mila…"

Mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki ye ab taana maar rahi hai….
"Are tumhe pata to chal hi gaya hoga na…ki company ke kaam se bahar gaya tha…fir bhi…gussa ho kya…"maine use manane ke purpose se kaha…

"Ha to…..yu achanak chale gaye the…kam se kam ek message hi kar dete…."radhika me thodi narazgi dikhate hue kaha…

"Acha ab to mai aa gaya hu na…ab se dhyan rakhunga…..vaise tum ne boss par itna gussa karne ki kya jarurat thi….vo keh rahe the ki naukri se nikal bhi sakte hai…"mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki abhi iska gussa shant karna hai to topic change karna padega…. isliye maine karan ko beech me ghasit liya….

"Tumhare boss ki to….maine us se kitni baar pucha tum kaha gaye ho bata de…par usne saaf mana kar diya….or tum chod kyu nahi dete us jagah ko…"radhika ne shikayat bhare lehze me kaha…

"Are ab agar kaam nahi karunga to khaunga kya…or abhi filhal yehi job mil sakti thi…"maine kaha..

"Tumhe bas job se matlab hai na…"usne kaha…

Maine haa me gardan hila diya..

"Theek hai aaj se tum hamari company me kaam karoge….ab mana mat kar dena…"usne kaha aur meri jaan ka intezar karne lagi…

"Par tumhare papa kuch kahenge nahi kya…mera matlab kisi anjaan ko is tarah se job par rakhna…" maine use kaha…

"Tum na ab maar khaoge….tum koi dusre thodi na ho….or bas ab tum hamare yaha hi kaam karoge ye final ho gaya…mai papa ko bol dungi…."usne kaha..

"Theek hai chalo dekhte hai kya karna hai…chalo class chalte hai…."maine kaha aur uska hath pakad kar chal diya….

Mai shayad bhul gaya tha kuch…lekin ab kya hi kar sakte hai…

Mai siya ko bhul gaya tha….ki agar usne ab hume saath dekha to mera kya hoga…

Hum jaise hi class me enter hue to meri or siya ki nazar takrayi or firne usne mera haath dekha Radhika ke haath me….or mujhe gusse se ghurne lagi…

Idhar radhika mera hath pakad kar mujhe piche le ja kar mere sath baith gayi…ab maine ek lambi saans li ki haash bach gaye…. lekin….siya bhi ab mere bagal me hi aakar baith gayi…

Ab mai dono side se radhika or siya se ghira hua tha…
Radhika ne mera haath jise thama hua use siya ke aage kar ke dikhane lagi….
Or fir siya ne bhi mera dusra haath pakad liya…

Undono me ek race shuru ho gayi thi…par me to fas chuka tha….ab mujhe kuch na sujha to maine bathroom ka bahana banaya aur bahar aa gaya…

Mere class se jaane ke baad…
Radhika: hi siya…kaisi ho…

Siya : achi hu ab tak to…

Radhika: ye mai kab se dekh rahi thi tumne Avinash ka haath pakda hua tha….

Siya : ha to…aur mujhe bhi yahi puchna tha….tumne Avinash ka haath kyu pakda hua tha…

Radhika : ooo madam….hum ache dost hai ..aur tum kyu puch rahi ho ye…

Siya : vo mera bhi dost hai…or tumse jyada samay vo mere sath rehta hai…to tum uss se thoda dur raho….samjhi….

Itna keh kar siya aage chali gayi or yaha radhika ke dimag me alag hi khurafati shuru ho gayi….

Mai jab class me aya to waha sirf radhika thi….maine chain ki saans li or uske bagal me jaa kar baith gaya…..

"Suno aaj college ke baad mere ghar aana hai tumhe theek hai na…. aur koi bahana banaya to kher nahi…."siya ne itna kaha or college se chali gayi….

Mujhe samjh nahi aya ki aakhir kya hone wala hai…

Wahi college ka time khatam hote hi mai or siya ghar ki aur nikal gaye….

"Tum radhika ko kaise jante ho…" siya ne achanak se ye sawal mujhse puch liya…

"Actually hamari bas friendship hui thi or ab vo mujhe naukri bhi dene wali hai…to bas isliye sath me the hum…”maine safai di ..

"Chalo koi baat nahi bas us se door rehne ki koshish karna..ye bade ghar ki ladkiya badi bigdi hui hoti hai…"siya ne mujhe samjhate hue kaha…

Maine bhi haa me gardan hila di….

Hum ghar pahuche aur saath me khana khaya or fir me kuch der aram karne room me aa gaya….

Abhi mujhe kuch hi samay hua tha aram karte hue ki mera mobile bajne laga…
Radhika ka call aya tha….

"Ha yrr kaha reh gaye tum…mai kab se intezar kar rahi hu…."mere phone uthate hi usne shikayat karna shuru kar diya….

"Are thoda ruk jao yrr….mai bas nikal hi raha hu…. bhook lagi thi to kuch khane baith gaya tha na.." maine kaha…..

Fir bas mai bik utha kar Radhika ke ghar ke liye nikal gaya….
Waha pahuch kar bike bahar hi park par di…or aram se chalte hue andar jaane lag…

Mai jaise jaise andar ki aur badh raha tha…mujhe mera bachpan yaad aa raha tha….meri maa ka pyar….hamara hasta khelta pariwar nazar aane laga….

Mai abhi andar jaa hi raha tha ki mujhe andar se ek aadmi aata hua dikhai diye….ye or koi nahi Mera baap tha…..

"Kaho kis se milna hai….vaise maine shayad tumhe kahin dekha hai…."Rajesh ne kaha..

Or mai jab tak jawab deta tab tak radhika andar se aa kar mere bagal me khadi ho gayi thi….




Ab aage kya hoga ye agle update me dekhne milega…

Aapke kuch sawalo ke jawab is update mil gaye honge…aage bahut kuch hone wala hai
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(Update kaisa laga ye zaroor batayega…or like or comment karna na bhule 🙏🙏)
Awesome update
 

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A short flashback

Family
ya pariwar is shab ka arth aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ek insaan ki jindagi me iske kya mayne hote h par meri jindagi me aisa kuch nahi tha…..

Meri family me hum 4 log the mera bachpan bhi baaki bacho ki hi tarah tha apne pita ke sath ghumna maa ka mere liye pyar or badi behan ke saath khelna par shayad upar wale ne kuch or hi soch rakha tha …kuch hi samay baad hume pata laga ki maa ko koi bimari hai or vo ab jyada din nhi rahengi…us samay ye baat hum bacho se chupayi gayi par maa….inke liye to inki duniya mai hi tha vo mujhse bahut jyada pyar karti thi to kuch hi dino me unki aankhon me ek dar sa dikhne laga ki unke baad unke bacho ka kya hoga to unhone pita ji ko jabardasti apne bacho ka wasta dilwa kar apni behan ki shaadi pita ji se karwa di par ye shayad ab bahut kuch badalne wala tha or bas kuch hi dino me maa duniya chod kar chali gayi ab hum bikhar gaye the…..
Ab pita ji hum se kat se gaye the ab vo sirf apne kaam me dhyan dene lage or mausi jo ki humari maa ban gayi thi unhe to samjhna hi mushkil tha vo bas Ghar ka kaam kar diya karti thi isse jyada unhone hamare liye kuch kiya nahi tha lekin abhi shayad kuch or bhi bura hona baki tha….
Kuch samay me hi hamari nayi maa pregnant ho gayi to ab pita ji phir se pariwar se judne lage hume bhi laga ki shayad ab hamara pariwar ek baar phir sambhal jayega par……jab nayi maa ko bacha hua to vo ladka tha to pita ji ka dhyan to apne aap hi uski aur badh sa gaya tha vo usse jyada pyar karne lage ye shayad us aurat ke kaaran bhi tha kyuki jab maa chali gayi thi to unhone pita ji ko sambhala tha or humse door bhi kar diya tha….
Or bas kuch hi dino me nayi maa ko apne bete ke bhavishya ki chinta hui or unhone pita ji se na jaane kya kaha or achanak hi mujhe apne mama ke yaha bhej diya gaya jaha mere liye kuch nahi tha vo log mujhe naukar ki tarah rakha karte the ek din kuch aisa hua ki mujhe apne poore pariwar se hamesha ke liye door hona pada ab ye kya hua ye aage pata chal jayega aur phir maine ek naye naam ke saath ek nayi shuruaat ki ……
' Avinash ' duniya mujhe ab isi naam se jaanti hai

Ab flashback ko bich bich me jarurat padne par hi bataya jayega….



Character introduction

  • Rajesh Sharma (46): ye mere pita hai inka textiles ka business hai jyada bada nahi hai par Shahar me naam h inka
  • Anita (passed) : meri maa jo ki ab nahi rahi
  • Pooja (42): ye meri sauteli maa hai
  • Radhika (22): ye meri badi behan hai..ye mujhse bahut pyar karti hai or mujhe ghar se door bheja gaya tha to ye pita ji ke khilaf thi par unki baat kon sunta
  • Sameer (20): ye Pooja maa ka beta hai ab iska intro bhi story me hi milega
  • Ramesh (45): mere mama hai ye jinke yaha mujhe bheja gaya tha
  • Madhu (43): ye meri maami hai inhone mujhe bahut pareshan kiya bachpan me
  • Arti (22): ye mama ki badi beti h
  • Rashmi (20): ye mama ki choti beti hai
  • Karan (22): iska bachpan mere saath hi nikla h flashback me aa jayega ye bhi


  • Avinash (22): yani ki mai ab mere baare me kahani me hi pata chale to jyada behtar rahega

(Abhi bas itna hi hai baaki log bhi jaise jaise aate jaenge unka intro aata jaega)
Wonderful introduction :applause:
 

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Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe toka kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."



Abb aage…..

Yaha ab teen logo ki zindagi aaj kuch had tak badal gayi thi….

Ek aur jaha siya aaj bahut khush thi….kyunki use uska pyar mil gaya tha….abhi kuch din pehle Avinash ke chale jaane se siya ka pyar Avinash ke liye or badh gaya tha….aur ab vo kisi bhi keemat par Avinash ko khona nahi chahti thi….. lekin….

Lekin kehte hai na ki pyar insaan ko pagal banane lagta hai…. theek usi tarah ab siya ke man me ek sawal aa gaya tha….ab ye sawal kya hai or iska jawab siya ko kis se milega ye pata chal jaega….

Or dusri taraf Suman ko bechari bahut pareshan thi….usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki jeevan ke is padav par aa kar use aisi situation ka samna karna padega…..
Aakhir Suman itne saalo se khud ke man or jism ko sambhalti aa rahi thi….par ab kuch kuch halat badal chuke the….
Avinash ne jab us din apne room mein Suman ko apni baahon me bhara hua tha vo drishya reh reh kar use yaad aa raha tha…
fir Suman ko vo bhi yaad aane laga ki kaise uska shareer ko jab Avinash ne apne aagosh me liya hua tha tab Suman ka shareer andar se pighalne laga tha….

Or fir bhi…..fir bhi Suman ne khud ko abhi tak sambhala hi hua tha…..par aaj jo hua vo in sabse pare tha…vo apne mulayam rasile hontho par abhi reh reh kar Avinash ke garam hotho ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi…. Suman ki yoni se behte kaamras ne use samjha Diya tha ki ab Avinash ki jaroorat hai Suman ko….

Par jab usne siya ka naam sina…..to uske sare vichar usko kahi dhumil se hote nazar aane lage….. lekin ab apne man mein uthe is bavandar ko bhi filhaal sambhalna mushkil ho raha tha…ab Suman ne sab kuch waqt ke hawale kar diya or gehri neend me khone lagi…..

Mujhe apne aap par sharam aa rahi thi…..mai siya se pyar karta hu aur ab yaha aunty ke sath hua hadsa mujhe andar se jala raha tha…..
Maine faisla kar liya tha ki ab mai aunty se duri banakar rakhunga….. lekin….

Lekin kuch sawalo ke jawab mujhe bhi chahiye the….ki jab maine aunty ke labon ko apne muh me lekar choosa tha…to unke sharir ki pratikriya mere is kaam ka saath dene wali thi …mujhe Zara bhi nahi laga ki aunty dur ho rahi ho ….
To kya kuch aisa hai jo mujhe nahi pata hai…sawal bahut hai or jawab sirf aunty ke hi pas hai….

Mai subah utha or apni exercise karke nahane chala gaya….fir taiyar ho kar niche pahuch gaya…darwaza knock kiya…
Is baar darwaza Suman aunty ne khola tha….
Hamari nazre mili or fir vo andar chali gayi….. mujhe ek baar fir kal ka hadsa yaad aa gaya tha….

"Bhaiya andar aa jao na…kab tak bahar hi khade rahoge…."Nikita ki baat ko sun kar me vartman me lauta or andar ja kar dining table par baith gaya sabke sath….

Siya naashta paros rahi thi….or ye kya…..are ye aunty to mujhe hi ghoor rahi hai…maine jaldi se apni nazre niche ki aur nashte par dhyan laga liya…..

Yaha Suman bas mujhe or siya ko hi dekh rahi thi…vo bhi bade gaur se…. mujhe ek pal ko esa laga jaise aunty siya se jal rahi ho….par apni gandi or Kam akal soch ko yahi dafna kar mai fir nashta karne laga ….

Nashte ke baad mai or siya meri wali bike par baith kar college ki aur nikal gaye….is poore samay me aunty ki nazar mere or siya ki hi taraf thi…..

Kuch door jaate hi siya ne apne haatho ko faila kar mujhe piche se apni baahon me le liya….or apna sar meri peeth par tika liya….

Iske aage bas duniya ka koi mol nahi reh gaya tha ab….meri premika ka mujhe is kadar apni baahon me jakda hua hona hi mujhe ek anokha sukh pradan kar raha tha…
Is waqt siya ka upari sharir pura meri peeth se laga hua tha …
na vo kuch keh rahi thi…na mai kuch sun na chahta tha…..ye khamoshi hum dono ke beech bahut sukun de rahi thi…

Kuch hi der me hum college pahuch gaye….mai nira chutiya ho chala tha ab….mai radhika ko bhi bhul gaya tha….
Jab hum college pahuche to radhika bhi abhi apni car se utar hi rhi thi…..hamari nazre mili or jab usne siya ko mere itne pass dekha to nazre fer kar canteen ki or chali gayi…..

"Are tum kaha chale…class ka time ho hi gaya hai…." Siya ne mujhe canteen ki or jaate hue dekh kar kaha….

"Bas kuch der me aa jaunga…ek dost se milna hai…." Maine itna kaha to usne ishare me gardan hila kar haa kaha or aag badh gayi…
Or mai canteen ki or bhag kar pahucha…

" Hi radhika…"Maine radhika se kaha uske samne padi chair par baithte hue…

"Hi…" itna javab de kar vo apne phone me kuch karne lagi….

"Kaisi ho yrr…bahut dino baad dekha…"maine baat ko badhane ke uddeshya se kaha…

Usne meri or dekha or muskura kar kaha "bas bahut jyada busy thi na…to time hi nahi Mila…"

Mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki ye ab taana maar rahi hai….
"Are tumhe pata to chal hi gaya hoga na…ki company ke kaam se bahar gaya tha…fir bhi…gussa ho kya…"maine use manane ke purpose se kaha…

"Ha to…..yu achanak chale gaye the…kam se kam ek message hi kar dete…."radhika me thodi narazgi dikhate hue kaha…

"Acha ab to mai aa gaya hu na…ab se dhyan rakhunga…..vaise tum ne boss par itna gussa karne ki kya jarurat thi….vo keh rahe the ki naukri se nikal bhi sakte hai…"mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki abhi iska gussa shant karna hai to topic change karna padega…. isliye maine karan ko beech me ghasit liya….

"Tumhare boss ki to….maine us se kitni baar pucha tum kaha gaye ho bata de…par usne saaf mana kar diya….or tum chod kyu nahi dete us jagah ko…"radhika ne shikayat bhare lehze me kaha…

"Are ab agar kaam nahi karunga to khaunga kya…or abhi filhal yehi job mil sakti thi…"maine kaha..

"Tumhe bas job se matlab hai na…"usne kaha…

Maine haa me gardan hila diya..

"Theek hai aaj se tum hamari company me kaam karoge….ab mana mat kar dena…"usne kaha aur meri jaan ka intezar karne lagi…

"Par tumhare papa kuch kahenge nahi kya…mera matlab kisi anjaan ko is tarah se job par rakhna…" maine use kaha…

"Tum na ab maar khaoge….tum koi dusre thodi na ho….or bas ab tum hamare yaha hi kaam karoge ye final ho gaya…mai papa ko bol dungi…."usne kaha..

"Theek hai chalo dekhte hai kya karna hai…chalo class chalte hai…."maine kaha aur uska hath pakad kar chal diya….

Mai shayad bhul gaya tha kuch…lekin ab kya hi kar sakte hai…

Mai siya ko bhul gaya tha….ki agar usne ab hume saath dekha to mera kya hoga…

Hum jaise hi class me enter hue to meri or siya ki nazar takrayi or firne usne mera haath dekha Radhika ke haath me….or mujhe gusse se ghurne lagi…

Idhar radhika mera hath pakad kar mujhe piche le ja kar mere sath baith gayi…ab maine ek lambi saans li ki haash bach gaye…. lekin….siya bhi ab mere bagal me hi aakar baith gayi…

Ab mai dono side se radhika or siya se ghira hua tha…
Radhika ne mera haath jise thama hua use siya ke aage kar ke dikhane lagi….
Or fir siya ne bhi mera dusra haath pakad liya…

Undono me ek race shuru ho gayi thi…par me to fas chuka tha….ab mujhe kuch na sujha to maine bathroom ka bahana banaya aur bahar aa gaya…

Mere class se jaane ke baad…
Radhika: hi siya…kaisi ho…

Siya : achi hu ab tak to…

Radhika: ye mai kab se dekh rahi thi tumne Avinash ka haath pakda hua tha….

Siya : ha to…aur mujhe bhi yahi puchna tha….tumne Avinash ka haath kyu pakda hua tha…

Radhika : ooo madam….hum ache dost hai ..aur tum kyu puch rahi ho ye…

Siya : vo mera bhi dost hai…or tumse jyada samay vo mere sath rehta hai…to tum uss se thoda dur raho….samjhi….

Itna keh kar siya aage chali gayi or yaha radhika ke dimag me alag hi khurafati shuru ho gayi….

Mai jab class me aya to waha sirf radhika thi….maine chain ki saans li or uske bagal me jaa kar baith gaya…..

"Suno aaj college ke baad mere ghar aana hai tumhe theek hai na…. aur koi bahana banaya to kher nahi…."siya ne itna kaha or college se chali gayi….

Mujhe samjh nahi aya ki aakhir kya hone wala hai…

Wahi college ka time khatam hote hi mai or siya ghar ki aur nikal gaye….

"Tum radhika ko kaise jante ho…" siya ne achanak se ye sawal mujhse puch liya…

"Actually hamari bas friendship hui thi or ab vo mujhe naukri bhi dene wali hai…to bas isliye sath me the hum…”maine safai di ..

"Chalo koi baat nahi bas us se door rehne ki koshish karna..ye bade ghar ki ladkiya badi bigdi hui hoti hai…"siya ne mujhe samjhate hue kaha…

Maine bhi haa me gardan hila di….

Hum ghar pahuche aur saath me khana khaya or fir me kuch der aram karne room me aa gaya….

Abhi mujhe kuch hi samay hua tha aram karte hue ki mera mobile bajne laga…
Radhika ka call aya tha….

"Ha yrr kaha reh gaye tum…mai kab se intezar kar rahi hu…."mere phone uthate hi usne shikayat karna shuru kar diya….

"Are thoda ruk jao yrr….mai bas nikal hi raha hu…. bhook lagi thi to kuch khane baith gaya tha na.." maine kaha…..

Fir bas mai bik utha kar Radhika ke ghar ke liye nikal gaya….
Waha pahuch kar bike bahar hi park par di…or aram se chalte hue andar jaane lag…

Mai jaise jaise andar ki aur badh raha tha…mujhe mera bachpan yaad aa raha tha….meri maa ka pyar….hamara hasta khelta pariwar nazar aane laga….

Mai abhi andar jaa hi raha tha ki mujhe andar se ek aadmi aata hua dikhai diye….ye or koi nahi Mera baap tha…..

"Kaho kis se milna hai….vaise maine shayad tumhe kahin dekha hai…."Rajesh ne kaha..

Or mai jab tak jawab deta tab tak radhika andar se aa kar mere bagal me khadi ho gayi thi….




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Party kabki khatam ho gayi thi aur abhi 12 bajne me kuch hi der thi…Maine radhika ko message kiya aur bahar bulaya….

Abhi kuch hi der hui thi ki radhika ek simple si night dress me ghar ke darwaje par aa khadi hui…..


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Radhika : hi Avinash….kaise aana hua itni raat yaha…

Mujhe samjh aa gaya ki ye gussa hai ab kar bhi kya sakte the……mai siya ko lekar pehle hi bahut pareshan tha to yaha party me aakar kya hi karta…..or mujhe aaj jo taiyari karni thi surprise ke liye vo bhi nahi hui thi….

Mai : please suno to…vo…

Radhika : ha ha batao na kya hua……kya kaam tha….

Mai : yaar please pehle puri baat to sun lo….mai din bhar tumhare sath tha to party me na aane ka to soch bhi nahi sakta tha na…

Radhika: to aye kyu nahi….

Mai : are maine tumhe bataya tha na ki mai part time job karta hu apna kharcha chalane ke liye….to bas ab urgently unhone bula liya….or bas abhi choda hai….

Radhika : tum sach keh rahe ho na….ya sirf….

Mai : are yaar mai ek dum sach keh raha hu…. dekhlo abhi tak dinner bhi nahi kiya hai….vo bhi ab karna hai…..

Mere itna kehte hi uske expression badal gaye…

Radhika: acha matlab abhi tum dinner karoge fir ghar jaoge….

Mai : ha yaar…ab to maaf kar do..

Radhika : aise nahi….meri ek shart hai….

Mai : acha to batao kya chahiye tumhe…

Radhika: bas thoda sa sath….mera matlab hai ki abhi mai bhi tumhare sath chalungi….isi bahane mera night out bhi ho jaega….

Mai: acha theek hai….vaise night dress me to jaane se rahi….to jaldi aao yaar bahut bhook lagi hai…

Mere itna kehte hi vo andar chali gayi…. mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki isko handle kaise karu….. mujhe laga nahi tha ki ye itni aasani se dost ban payegi…par yaha to dosti bhi ho gayi thi or isne mujhe hi pagal kar diya tha….

Thodi hi der me vo aa gayi aur hum uski car me baith kar waha se nikal gaye…. thodi hi door jaane par mujhe itna to samjh aa gaya tha ki hum kaha Jaa rahe hai….

Mai: idhar kaha Jaa rahe hai hum…yaha to bahut mehenge restaurante hai na….

Radhika to shayad sunne ke mood me hi nahi thi….vo bas meri taraf dekh kar muskurai or driving karne lagi….

Or ab meri kismat hi dekh lo…..ye wahi hotel tha jaha mai or karan milte the matlab ye jagah bhi hamari hotel ka hi tha….

Jab tak hum parking me pahuche tab tak me karan ko message kar chuka tha ki koi gadbad na ho jaye……

Radhika: kya soch rahe ho yaar….ab tum party me nahi aaye the na…or birthday girl bhi mai hu to treat bhi meri or se…

Mai: lekin…..

Radhika: ab chalo andar chup chap….

Raat jyada nahi hui thi….or is samay humare hi jaise or bhi log yaha maujood the….par ek farak tha….hum dono to dost hi the lekin mujhe yaha sirf couples hi dikhai de rahe the…

Hum andar gaye or ek table le kar baith gaye…. waiter aya to radhika ne hi khane ka order diya or apne liye kuch snacks or coffee mangva Li…

Mai : yaar itna kharcha kyu kar rahi ho…hum kahi normal si jagah par bhi jaa sakte the na….

Radhika: are aise kaise….mera birthday roj to aata nahi na…to ab chup chap treat enjoy karo bas…

Maine bhi soch liya ki ab thoda sambhalna padega…. to bas me bhi chup ho gaya…. kuch der baad mai apna dinner kar chuka tha or bill bhi radhika ne hi pay kiya tha….

Phir bas yu hi baate karte hue hum uske ghar pahuche jaha se maine apni bike uthai or ghar pahuch kar so gaya…..

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Wahi jab se Suman mere room se gayi thi…vo kuch bechain hi ho gayi thi…. shayad use ummid nahi thi ki mai ye karunga ya fir umra ke is padav par bhi koi uske sath is tarah ki harkat kar sakta hai…

Wahi jab raat ko sone ka samay hua to vo apna sab kaam karke apne room me lage ek mirror ke samne khadi ho gayi….

Or ye sochne lagi ki Avinash uske bete ki umar ka hai….vo kaise ye sab soch sakta hai…

Is waqt usne ek normal si saree pehni hui thi jo Suman sote samay pehana karti thi…

Usne aaine me khud ko ek nazar upar se neeche tak dekha or fir sone chali gayi….

Aaj Suman jab subah uthi to use ek dar sa lag raha tha…. ki ab vo Avinash ka saamna kaise karegi…. kyuki kal jo kuch hua tha uske baad Suman ye faisla nahi kar pa rahi thi ki use kya karna chahiye…..

Bas isi wajah se usne ye tay kiya ki abse nashta or khana vo Nikita ke haath hi bhijwa diya karegi….
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Mai agle utha or taiyar hone laga…thodi der me nashta bhi aa gaya tha…mai nashta kar ke niche pahucha to dekha siya bhi shayad nikal hi rahi thi….

Maine jaldi se bike start ki or uske saamne pahuch gaya….

Lekin aaj vo baithi nahi….

Mai: are jaldi baitho na…college nahi jana kya…

Siya: tum jao me pahuch jaungi….

Mai: are ab baitho bhi yaar…kal achanak se office Jana pada….bas isliye bata bhi nahi paya or samay se pahuch bhi nahi paya….

Siya fir bina kuch kahe hi baith gayi or hum college pahuch gaye…..


Fir bas din yuhi guzarne lage….or ek hafta hu hi beet gaya tha…..

Is beech jyada kuch khaas nahi hua par siya ka mujhse baat karna ab badh chuka tha….ab saath aate the to laazmi hai ki kuch time rehta tha….
To ab mai or siya kuch had tak dost ban chuke the….siya abhi haal filhaal mujhse jyada open nahi thi….

Wahi dusri or na jaane kyu radhika hi mere piche pad gayi thi…..waise mai bhi chahta to yahi tha lekin uske birthday par jo chance tha vo miss ho chuka tha……or sabse badi baat uske man me shayad feelings aane lagi thi….

Ab pyaar ka kya hi kehna…. kyunki in sab ke bich bas Suman hi thi jo abhi bhi kuch kuch pareshan hi rehti thi….
Agar kabhi Avinash saamne aa jaya karta to vo ab apne aap ko ek kishori ki tarah samajh kar idhar udhar ho jaya karti thi….

Kahi na kahi vo chahti thi ki Avinash usse aakar fir se baat kare par ab uske man me Avinash ke prati alag bhavnaye bhi jag chuki thi…..

Wahi apna hero Avinash jise is haalat ka kuch pata hi nahi tha….ki usne kya hi kar liya hai….
Ab jab Avinash or siya baat karne lage the….. to Avinash bas yehi socha karta ki kab siya us baare me baat karegi…..akhir kabhi na kabhi to sochegi hi mere baare me….

Par….par sabse badi baat to ye thi na ki kisi or ka paigam kisi or ko pahunch chuka tha…..
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Bas isi tarah ek din shaam ko siya chat par aayi thi tehlne ke liye….aur sanyog se Avinash bhi chat par pahunch gaya tha…..mausam abhi karwat badal raha tha to thandi hawayein chal rahi thi….

Jab usne siya ko aankhe band kiye hue chat par dekha…to usne man hi man soch liya ki ek baar or apni kismat ajma hi li jaye…..

Aur bas uske bagal me jaa kar khada ho gaya….usne mujhe dekha or fir aasman ki aur dekhne lagi….mere dil me bechaini badh rahi thi ….

Mai: siya…..

Vo : hmm…( bina meri or dekhe)

Mai : t..t..tumne….kuch socha…

Vo : kis bare me…(or meri or dekhne lagi)

Ab meri fatne lagi…. kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha kya bolu….

Mai : vo…mai tumhe pasand karta hu bataya tha na….

Maine jaise hi ye bola usne meri or dekha jaise vo meri aankhon me kuch dekhna chahti ho aur fir…..

Vo: hahahahahaa……kya kaha tum…tum mujhe…. hahaha…

Mai : ha to…ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai…

Ye kehte hue meri aankhon mein paani aane laga….. uski hasi mere dil par chubhne si lagi thi….

Vo : ye tumne socha bhi kaise….or agar tumhari jagah koi or hota to shayad ek baar ko soch bhi leti….

Mai bas uske chehre ko dekhe jaa raha tha….uske chehre ki masoomiyat mujhe abhi bhi bahut pyaari lag rahi thi….
Jab usne ye kaha or dusri taraf muh karke muskurane lagi to mujhse or raha nahi gaya….

Or me apne room me chala aya…..me bas ab akele rehna chahta tha….kahi dur…yaha se bas mujhe kahin door jana tha…

Mene apna bag uthaya or usme apna saman rakhna or waha se nikal kar sidha hotel pahuch gaya….karan ko bol kar flight ki tickets book karwai or pahuch gaya haridwar…..

Haridwar ek sadhuo ki bhumi hai….yaha me aksar aata rehta hu kyuki ghar se chale aane ke baad me yahi pala tha…inhi logo ke bich….

Mai wahi par bane ek aashram pahuch gaya or room le kar saman rakh kar nahane chala gaya…..jab laut kar dekha to phone par Suman aunty ke message the….

Maine unhe message kar diya ki ab me waha nahi rahunga….mai ab apne kisi dost ke sath rehne wala hu….or jo saman hai vo mai kuch time baad le jaunga….

Or bas phone switched off kar diya….

Raat ka samay tha or mausam bhi suhana tha….mai khana kha kar pahuch gaya wahi bane ek ghat par or apne pairo ko paani me karke wahi kinare let gaya……

Mujhe wahi lete hue kab neend aayi kuch pata hi nahi chala or me apni kuch purani yadon me fir se kahi gum ho gaya…..

Pata nahi aksar jab bhi me pareshan hota hu.. mujhe ye purani yadein gher leti hai…or mujhe bahut dard dekar chali jaati hai….
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Ek sunsan raat me ek ladka jiski umar jyada nahi lag rahi thi vo ek sunsan raste par chala Jaa raha tha….
Use dekh kar lag raha tha shayad bahut waqt se bhuka tha vo…. Kuch der baad jaise jaise uske kadam aage ki aur badh rahe the uski aankho me andhera or gehrane laga….
Or thodi hi door jaa kar vo gir pada…..

Use jab hosh aya to vo ek choti si jagah par tha aas paas dekha to paya laga ye koi sunsan sadak ka footpath tha….par….par sawal ye tha ki use yaha laya kon….usne uth kar apne pass baithe do uski hi ham umar ladko ko dekha……

Ladka: kon ho tum…or me yaha…

Ladka 1: ham laye h tumhe yaha…tum sadak ke bicho bich pade the…

Ladka 2: rehte kaha ho…tum ananth to nahi lagte….

Ladka : ab shakal se kaha pata chalta hai bhai….ab kismat hai to bhogni to padegi…

Ladka 1 : mai Karan or ye Rishi hai…agar tum chaho to yaha reh sakte ho….

Ladka : shukriya dost….

Aur vo ladka bhi unke sath hi ghul mil gaya….or inme ek gehra rishta ban gaya jo shayad khun ke rishte se bhi majboot tha….
Ye tino rooj roj kisi na kisi kaam ki talash me nikalte or laut aate….inke khane ka intezam philhal ek mandir me tha jaha ek bade sant aaye hue the.…

Rishi or karan yaha ke nahi the inko kisi or jagah se kisi giroh ne agua kar liya tha or jab inhe yaha laya gaya….to badi hi chalaki se ye dono waha se bach nikle the….

Fir vo ladka inki jindagi me aya or teeno bhai ki tarah rehne lage the….par shayad abhi bhi inke sath bahut kuch hona baaki tha….or ek din….

Roj ki tarah kaam ki talash karke jab ye mandir me Prasad lene pahuche to ek aadmi ki nazar us ladke par pad gayi or usne uska picha kiya to dekha ki vo log Prasad lekar mandir ke piche Jaa rahe hai….

Us aadmi ki aankho me ye saaf jhalak raha tha ki us ladke ko vo jaanta hai….

Jab teeno piche pahuch kar Prasad kha rahe the to achanak se us ladke ki nazar kahi Jaa kar thahar jaati hai….or vo us aadmi ki or dekhne lagta hai….

Aadmi : to tu yaha hai…akhir kaha kaha nahi dhundha tujhe…

Vo ladka or Karan or Rishi bas chup the…. vo samjh nahi pa rahe the ki ye ho kya raha hai…ki tabhi..

Aadmi : chalo koi baat nahi adhura kaam ab ho jaega…..

Itna keh kar usne apne paas rakhi pistol nikal kar chala di….

Or bas do awaaz gunj gayi

Ladka : mamaa….

Karan : Rishi……

Ladke ne dekha ki uske dost ne bich me aakar uske liye chalai hui goli ko apne sine me le liya or lehrata hua niche gir pada….. awaaz inti jor ki thi ki log piche aa gaye …. lekin tab tak vo aadmi gayab ho chuka tha …

Rishi ki saase abhi tak chal rahi thi….to karan or vo ladka Rishi ko utha kar bahar ki or bhaagne lage….

Rishi : k…karan..tu apna or mere bhai ka dhyan rakhna yrr….

Karan: bhai kuch nahi hoga tujhe….bas kuch der ruk jaa…

Rishi : b..bhai …..ab shayad me or na hi pau…. agar tumhe kabhi mauka mile to meri maa ko mil aana…. bahut yaad karti ho…..

Bas ye akhri shabd the Rishi ke…



"Rishiiiii….." mai cheekhte hue uth gaya tha…..






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Bahut achhe.
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Mujhe bas ab lagne laga ki ye mera last din hai yaha….

Unhone mujhe unke pass baithne ko kaha aur mere samne kuch aisi cheez rakh di jise dekhkar me shock ho gaya tha….



Ab aage…

Mai is waqt aunty ke bagal me bistar par baitha tha or aunty ke pass unke ghar ke documents the….
Mujhe dar is baat ka nahi tha ki unhe documents mil gaye the…. mujhe dar kisi aur baat ka tha…..

( Ab vo wajah aage pata chal jayegi to bas dhairya banaye rakhe )

"To ab baaki baatein baad me hogi….mai tumse in documents ke liye nahi puchungi….

Mujhe bas ye batana ki tum kaha gaye the or us message ka matlab kya tha ...." Aunty ne bade aram se un paper's ko side rakhte hue kaha….

Ab itna bada chutiyapa kiya tha…or aunty meri gaand yu hi baksh de ye ho hi nahi sakta….

" Vo…vo…aunty actually…mmm…." Mujhe kuch sujhe to bahana banaya jaye na…..yahan main aya tha mere pariwar se badla lene..or yahan sab log mujhe hi ghere baithe hai batao yrr….

"Beta ya to saaf saaf batado varna mai tumhe maaf karne se rahi….jo tumne kiya hai na….ab ek baar ko mai bhulne ki soch bhi lu to wajah to pata chale na mujhe…."aunty badi shanti se baat kar rahi thi….

" Vo aunty ab me pehle jaha rehta tha waha ki yaad aane lagi thi…..aur yaha par mera koi apna hai bhi nahi na to thoda dukhi ho gaya tha …." Maine socha emotional jawab dunga to theek ho jayega….par….ab dekho aage….

"Acha to tumhe mera bhi khayal nahi aya…."maine jaise hi apni baat kahi Suman aunty ne ek aur sawal daag diya…

" Sorry aunty….. us samay bas mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha tha…or me khud ko sambhal nahi paya to chala gaya…. lekin fir aapke pyar ne fir yaha aane par majboor kar diya…." Ab ye maine keh to diya lekin….maine ye normally kaha tha…..
Par aunty ko laga ki ye baat maine unke liye hi kahi hai….

" Chalo abhi tum aram kar lo… hum baad me aaram se baat karenge…" itna kehkar aunty apne kaam me lag gayi…..

Mai abhi apne room me pahucha hi tha ki samne bistar par kisi shakhs ko dekh kar me chowk hi gaya….
Samne bistar par siya baithe hue mujhe hi dekh rahi thi….

Ab sala mai ghar lock ache se karunga…..yaha koi bhi jab chahe aa jaata hai….

Me jaa kar baith gaya uske paas hi…usko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise ab uske chehre par thoda noor aa gaya tha…jo mujhe pehle nahi dikh raha tha….

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho…kisi ne dekh liya to…."maine hi baat shuru karne ke liye kaha….

"Ye sab chodo aur pehle ye batao…kaha gaye the…."siya ne pucha…

"Bas office ke hi kaam se gaya tha na….tumhe pata to hai…"maine bhi normal jawab diya aur sidha hi let gaya…..

"Sach bata do na ki kaha gaye the…..varna…" siya ne bade aram se phir se pucha….

"Are bataya to yrr…. office work tha….or ye varna kya hai…dhamki de rahi ho kya…"itna kehkar me hasne laga….

Lekin aaj shayad abhi bahut kuch dekhna tha mujhe…. achanak aisa kuch hua ki meri saanse hi ruk si gayi…
Siya achanak se mere upar aa gayi….uska phul jaisa makhmali badan mere sharir ke upar aa gaya tha….

"Nahi bataoge…..kaha gaye the…." Kehte hue siya apni daye hath ki ungli ko mere gaal per phirane lagi …….

Meri sanse achanak se tez ho gayi thi…to kuch der saaso ko sambhal kar mene jawab dene ki koshish ki….

" Y..y..ye tum kya kar rahi ho…hato upar se…."maine kaha..

"Kya mai itni bhari hu kya….bolo na…."itna keh kar wo meri gardan me saase chodne lagi….

Jaise jaise mujhe uski garam saas apni gardan par mehsoos ho rahi thi…. waise waise mera wajood mujhse door jata jaa raha tha….

Meri aankhe kab band hui mujhe pata hi nahi chala….mere haath apne aap uski kamar par chale gaye or kamar se hote hue peeth tak pahunch gaye….or me bas use apni baahon me simete kisi or hi duniya me ja chuka tha….

Safar ki thakan fir yaha aane par itna dimag lagane par me waise bhi thak gaya tha ….or ab is abhutpurva ehsaas ne mere tan or man me jaise jaan hi na chodi thi….

Uske sharir se aati vo madak or adbhut khushbu mere andar jaise jaise jaa rahi thi….vaise vaise mai is duniya se door jaata ja raha tha….

Ye ehsaas mujhe bahut hi jyada acha lag raha tha….aaj mujhe esa lag raha tha ki kahi jannat hai to vo inhi baahon mein hai….mai bewajah logo se badla lene me laga hua tha….

Mujhe bas aaj apne purn hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha….or isi ehsaas ke sath me ek meethi or gehri neend me khota chala gaya…..

Ye neend shayad mere jeevan mein ab tak ki sabse meethi or aramdayak neend thi….

Kuch der baad siya wahi mujhse alag ho kar mujhe dekhne lagi….mujhe is waqt dekhna use acha lag raha tha… vo mere baalon me apna haath ghumane lagi…..

Or bas ye ek or sama tha jab mai or gehri neend me chala gaya……

Mujhe ache se abhi tak bhi meri maa ka vo sparsh yaad hai….jab mai soya rehta tha to maa mere baalon ko sahlati thi….unhe pata tha ki mujhe isse bahut aaram milta hai ….

Bas aaj bhi bahut dino baad esa hua tha jab siya mere baalon ko sahlane lagi thi ….. mujhe apni maa ka sa ehsas hua or mai siya se fir lipat gaya…

Ab siya or mai sath me soye hue the …

Jab mai utha tab dopahar dhal chuki thi….or shaam apne parvaan chad rahi thi….

Uthne ke baad me jab tak fresh hokar aaya tab tak siya chai le kar aa gayi thi….abhi hum bas ek dusre ki aankhon me hi ek dusre ko dekh kar apni baat keh rahe the…

"Siya sorry vo mai thoda thak gaya tha…..to neend aa gayi thi…" maine hi baat ki shuruaat ki…kyuki ab ye chupi kisi ko todni hi thi….

"Koi baat nahi…" siya itna kehkar fir chup ho gayi…

" Vo…vo mujhe kuch kehna hai…" maine kaha…

"Ha kaho na…." Siya ne kaha…

"Maine jo us sham ko kaha is ke liye sorry….. mujhe aise nahi bolna chahiye tha na….ab mai tumhe bilkul pareshan nahi karunga….. agar tum chaho to me yaha se chala bhi jaunga…" maine ye keh hi diya kyon ki shayad mai us din overreact kar gaya tha….

Aaj jo hua tha usse itna to saaf tha ki siya ke man ki baat siya bata nahi paa rahi hai ..bas isiliye maine ye sab keh diya…or iska asar bhi hua…

"Tumhe jo thapad lagaye the unme koi kami reh gayi kya…." Usne bada masoom sa chehra bana kar pucha…

Mujhe jaise hi subah wale thappad yaad aye mere hath apne aap mere gaalo par chale gaye….

" Matlab …" maine darte hue pucha….

"Ye kya laga rakha hai tumne ki aapko pareshan nahi karunga…. nahi karunga…..tumhe samajh nahi aata kya….ki mai tumse pareshan nahi hu pagal…

Or ye kaha gaye the tum…. mujhe to laga tha tum pyar kerte ho mujhse…. par tum to chod kar hi chale gaye…."siya ne kaha….

"Mai pyar karta hu tumse….pehle din se karta hu….jab tumhari in aankhon mein pehli baar dekha tha tab se hi…..or shayad ab ye kabhi khatam bhi nahi ho sakta par….par mai tumhe majboor to nahi kar sakta na.." maine kaha..

"Acha tumhe kya lagta hai…tum aise hi yaha chale aaoge…. or mujhe apne pyar mein phasa kar chale jaoge…." Siya ne ye kaha or mera haath tham liya….

"Are mein kyu karunga aisa kuch……..ek minute…..abhi abhi tumne kya kaha…do…do you love….me…" mai thoda pareshan ho kar jawab de raha tha lekin jab mujhe ehsaas hua ki abhi usne kya kaha hai to maine baat badal di…

Mere itna puchne par bas usne apne hath se mere hatho ko aur kas kar pakad liya….

Ab isko me jaise hi samajh pata itne me Nikita aa gayi or le gayi siya ko….. mujhe to bas abhi bhi siya ki baate sunai de rahi thi….

Bas isi tarah mein khoya hua tha ki karan ka call aa gaya…

"Kaisa hai bhai…."karan ne pucha….

"Bas badiya hu yrr…tu meri tension na le ..tu bata sab sahi hai na…."maine kaha..

"Bas sab badhiya hai Bhai….apne plan ka second phase shuru ho gaya hai…to socha tujhe bata du…."karan ne kaha….

"Acha hai bhai ab bas kuch din aur phir hum humara khel shuru kar denge…"mai itna keh kar muskurane laga….

"Chal theek hai free ho to yaha aa jana ek baar…"karan ne itna kaha or call cut kar diya….

Jab shaam hui to thoda aaram karke mai neeche chala aya….

Mujhe Nikita bahar hi mil gayi…mai usi se baat karne baith gaya ….

Baat karte hue khane ka time ho gaya….hum sab ne mil kar khana khaya or jab sab chale gaye…..tab mai bahar tehlne nikal gaya….kuch saman chahiye tha mujhe…..

Jab mai lota to mere darwaze par ek note tha " 11 pm - Terrace.."bas itna hi likha tha….

Ab mai room mein aakar aram karne kaga…..or jab time ho gaya to mein pahunch gaya chat par……

Chat par is samay bilkul andhera tha…agar is samay koi mere samne aa jata to mujhe bas uska aks dikhai deta abhi….

Mere kuch hi der intezar karne par koi chat par aa gaya….

Ab mujhe siya to mujhse raha nahi gaya mujhe abhi siya ko bas apni baahon mai lene ko jee kar raha tha….
Maine aage badh kar use gale laga liya….

Mai : aa gayi tum….mai kitna tadap raha tha kab se…..jab se laut kar aya hu…tabse bas tumhe apni baahon mein rakhne ko jee kar raha hai ..

Ab mai jaise hi samne khade shaqs ke gale lagaya to mujhe bahut sukun milne laga….or

My bad luck…fir se yaha par Suman hi thi…

Par mujhe andaza nahi hua…mai kuch jyada hi utsahit ho raha tha….

Dheere dheere vatavaran garmane laga…mera muh maine uski gardan par laga diya ….

Or bas yahi vo kamjor pal paida hua jisme Suman ka shareer bhi pighalne laga….use ab apna man bagawat karte hue nazar aane laga tha…..

Mai apne hotho ko uski gardan par phirane laga…kabhi uski gardan par chumta kabhi uski gardan ko muh me bhar leta….or phir dheere dheere me uske kaan se hote hue uske gaalo par pahuch gaya…..

Uske gal itne mulayam lag rahe the ki mai pagal ho kar unhe apne hotho me bhar kar chusne laga….ab maine kabhi ye sab na hi kiya tha na hi iske baare me kabhi socha tha…..

Par aaj bas bahut kuch apne aap hota chala ja raha tha…

Ab mere hoth uske gulab se nazuk hotho tak pahunch gaye the…..mujhe uske hothon par ek thirkan si mehsoos ho rahi thi…maine dheere dheere uske hotho ko kiss karna shuru kar diya or achanak hi uske hotho ko chusna shuru kar diya….

Samne se koi response nahi aa raha tha….par ab mujhe kon samjhata mai to bas apne kaam mein laga hua tha…..

Kuch der baad…. uske hothon ko apne hotho se pine ke baad mai apne muh ko uske kaan tak lekar pahuch gaya…..

"I love you…i love you siya…."..maine kaha….

Abhi tak jo kuch hua usse Suman lagbhag pighal hi gayi thi….par jab usne siya ka naam suna….to use samajh aane laga …ki ab tak jo hua vo kiske liye tha….par

Par abhi agar Suman kuch bhi bolti to usko sharminda hona padta…..akhir vo is samay Avinash ki baaho mein jo simti hui thi….or ab tak usne jara bhi virodh nahi dikhaya tha…..

Achanak mujhe apne kandhe par kuch geela pan mehsoos hua….ye shayad aansu ki kuch booond thi….

Mai jhat se alag ho kar chehra tatolne laga….or khushkismati se mere senses ne kaam karna shuru kar diya tha….

Mujhe ab samjhte der nahi lagi ke ye siya nahi koi aur hai….
Or me furti se alag ho kar khada ho gaya ….

Aunty phataphat neeche chali gayi…aur main bhi kuch der ruk kar apne kamre me chala gaya…

Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe toka kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."









Ab aage kya hoga ye agle update me dekhne milega…

Aapke kuch sawalo ke jawab is update mil gaye honge…aage bahut kuch hone wala hai
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(Update kaisa laga ye zaroor batayega…or like or comment karna na bhule 🙏🙏)
Zabardast fantastic update
 

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Aaj mere man me kuch sukoon sa mahsoos hua mujhe shayad ye wahi sukun tha jo bahut arso ke baad kisi apne se milne par hota hai aaj me apne shahar fir laut raha tha ,
Mujhe pure 12 saal ho gaye the ghar se door gaye hue ab ye kaise hua ye to aage waqt aane par pata chal hi jayega,
Me is waqt Jaipur airport par khada tha abhi abhi meri flight yaha pahunchi thi me na chahte hue fir se apni purani yaadon me kho sa gaya…..par abhi shayad ye sahi samay nahi hai in sab ke liye , yahi soch kar apni soch ko jhatakte hue me bahar pahunch gaya or taxi lekar hotel pahucha andar reception ke pass ki ek jaana pehchana chehra najar aya usne apna haath hila kar mujhe apni or bulaya me bhi uske pass pahuch kar gaya

"Good morning sir….aap akele…matlab vo driver.."

Use bich me rok kar muskurate hue ,"yrr bahut din hue akele bahar kahi gaya nahi tha na to socha aaj akele hi ghumte hue pahuch jau…vaise ab room ki keys milegi ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai…"
Usne muskurate hue apne pass khade ek aadmi ko kuch ishara kiya or mujhe uske saath Jane ko kaha , me bhi bas apna ek chota sa bag lekar peeche peeche chal diya , ye shayad manager lag raha tha yaha ka ab aapko lagega ki agar ye manager hai to vo kon tha to me bata du ki vo mere saath kaam karta h uska naam Karan hai,
Kuch der chalne ke baad hum ek room ke bahar khade the jispar 'Presidential Suite' likha hua tha, usne keys handover ki or
"enjoy your day sir" keh kar chala gaya me andar gaya or apna samman rakh kar fresh hua or fir Karan ko call karke apne room pe bula liya
" Aapne bulaya sir…"
" Ha yrr ab jaldi jaldi mujhe progress report do or batao kya chal raha hai yaha abhi…."
Usne bolna shuru kiya
"Sir jaisa ki aapne kaha tha apni companies ka yaha par expansion karne ke liye to ye almost pura ho hi gaya hai or ye sab mere hi naam se pata hai logo ko jaisa aap chahte h abhi tak sab vaisa hi chal raha hai or kal tak sab taiyar ho hi jayega….."
Itna bol kar vo ruk gaya or muskura kar meri or dekhne laga par mujhe is par bahut gussa aa raha tha kyuki me jo janna chah raha tha vo abhi tak isne bataya nahi tha to mujhe gusse me dekh kar usne serious ho kar bola " sir Rajesh Sharma ki companies tak ye baat pahuch chuki h ki hum yaha naya kaam shuru kar rahe hai to bas ab unke saamne aane ki der h…or Mrs Sharma bhi apne kuch NGO's me busy rehti hai weekends par apne friends ke saath night out par jaati h fir miss radhika Inka admission yahi apne college me ho rakha hai vo yaha se MBA kar rahi hai or Sameer bhi yahi college se MBA kar raha hai aur baki toh aapko pata chal hi jayega….aur aapka admission bhi miss radhika ki stream me ho gaya hai same batch me"
Itna kehkar vo chala gaya ab
mujhe thoda sukun mil raha tha jo na jaane mai kab se dhoond raha tha
Maine khana khaya or fir apna official kaam karne laga is din kuch jyada khas nahi hua ye Yuhi beet gaya,
Agle din mai subah jaldi utha aur suite me Bane hue gym me workout kiya fir taiyar ho kar bahar hotel me Bane cafeteria me pahuch gaya jaha Maine karan se kuch discuss Kiya or fir nikal gaya apne naye college ki or ye bahut se logo ki zindagi badalne ki or Mera pehla kadam hai…
Mai college pahuch kar andar jaa hi raha tha ki mera dhyan kuch awara baithe ladko par gaya jo abhi abhi college campus me ayi ek car ki or lagataar dekh rahe the , or jab maine waha dekha to meri najre wahi jam si gayi ye wahi aankhein thi jinki tasveer maine apne bachpan se lekar abhi tak apne dil me kaid kar ke rakhi thi uski aur dekhte hi mere dimag ne mera saath chod diya tha or mai bas apne bachpan me kho sa gaya tha

'amu chal na hame der ho rahi h yrr mummy daantegi agar der ho gayi to' ek behad sundar park me ek ladki jisne is waqt ek pyari si dress pehni hui thi aur usne ek ladke ka haath thama hua tha jo shayad abhi yaha se jaana nahi chahta tha ,
'ruko na di hum bas thodi der me chalte hai na…pata nahi ab kitne dino baad yaha aane ka mauka mile'
Ladki ' kyu me hu na tu kyu chinta karta hai..'

Achanak se mera dhyan tuta jo shayad kisi shor ke karan tha or mene khud par gaur kiya…meri aankhon me kuch pani ki bunde thi.. me unhe saaf karke aage badh gaya apni class ki taraf aur jaise hi mai class me enter hua hi tha ki ek behad pyari si ladki mujhe se takra gayi or bas swatah hi mere haatho ne uski kamar ko tham liya or meri aankhe uski ankho se mili or bas me unme doobta chala gaya lekin ladki jaldi hi sambhal gayi or sorry bol kar apni jagah Jaa kar baith gayi par in lamho me kuch to hua tha mere andar……
Ab me kya karta class me lagbhag sabhi seats par koi na koi baitha hua tha to mai jaise taise piche tak pahucha or ek jagah dekh kar baith gaya..
Kuch hi der me class me ek bahut hi khubsurat teacher aakar padhane lagi par mera saara dyan to ab us ladki par tha jisse mai takraya tha…abhi madam ko padhate kuch hi der Hui thi ki ek peon ne aakar madam se kuch kaha or chala gaya ' Avinash…'
Ye naam sunkar me khada ho gaya ' yes mam…'
Madam "new admission.."
Mai " yes mam "
Madam " okay…tumhe principal sir ne bulaya hai lecture ke baad unse mil lena"
Or me bhi apna sir ha me hila kar baitha gaya par ek Jodi aankhe mujh par hi tik gayi thi or ye thi radhika ki aankhe par abhi Maine is par gaur nahi kiya kyuki mere dimag me abhi kuch or hi plan tha…or lecture hote hi mai apne principal se milne uske cabin ke bahar pahunch gaya or knock kiya "come in " andar se awaz aayi or me andar ki aur badh gaya …principal ne mujhe dekha or apni seat se uth gaya or aage badh kar haath milaya
" Welcome sir mujhe aaj hi pata chala ki ab ye college aapke under hai or aap apni padhai bhi yahi se continue kar rahe hai…"

Mai " Mr Sharma aap ye baat ab sirf apne tak hi rakhe..ye baat kisi ko pata nahi lagni chahiye or yaad rahe me yaha ek aam student hu…dhyan rakhiyega.."
Or mai bahar ki or chal diya ab mujhe hotel pahuchna tha kyuki Mai yaha jis liye aya tha uski shuruaat aaj ho chuki thi…

Or mai apne hotel pahuch kar aaram karne chal diya……




( Dosto ye bas starting hai aage ke updates dheere dheere bade honge...kahani ki shuruaat kaisi lagi ye jaroor batana….or aapke suggestions ka bhi mai khule dil se swagat karta hu aap apne suggestions jaroor dijiyega….
Dhanyawad...🙏🙏)
Great start Bro👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
 
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