Incest Mera Pariwar or Mera Pyar

[Tiger 786]

A short flashback

Family ya pariwar is shab ka arth aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ek insaan ki jindagi me iske kya mayne hote h par meri jindagi me aisa kuch nahi tha…..

Meri family me hum 4 log the mera bachpan bhi baaki bacho ki hi tarah tha apne pita ke sath ghumna maa ka mere liye pyar or badi behan ke saath khelna par shayad upar wale ne kuch or hi soch rakha tha …kuch hi samay baad hume pata laga ki maa ko koi bimari hai or vo ab jyada din nhi rahengi…us samay ye baat hum bacho se chupayi gayi par maa….inke liye to inki duniya mai hi tha vo mujhse bahut jyada pyar karti thi to kuch hi dino me unki aankhon me ek dar sa dikhne laga ki unke baad unke bacho ka kya hoga to unhone pita ji ko jabardasti apne bacho ka wasta dilwa kar apni behan ki shaadi pita ji se karwa di par ye shayad ab bahut kuch badalne wala tha or bas kuch hi dino me maa duniya chod kar chali gayi ab hum bikhar gaye the…..
Ab pita ji hum se kat se gaye the ab vo sirf apne kaam me dhyan dene lage or mausi jo ki humari maa ban gayi thi unhe to samjhna hi mushkil tha vo bas Ghar ka kaam kar diya karti thi isse jyada unhone hamare liye kuch kiya nahi tha lekin abhi shayad kuch or bhi bura hona baki tha….
Kuch samay me hi hamari nayi maa pregnant ho gayi to ab pita ji phir se pariwar se judne lage hume bhi laga ki shayad ab hamara pariwar ek baar phir sambhal jayega par……jab nayi maa ko bacha hua to vo ladka tha to pita ji ka dhyan to apne aap hi uski aur badh sa gaya tha vo usse jyada pyar karne lage ye shayad us aurat ke kaaran bhi tha kyuki jab maa chali gayi thi to unhone pita ji ko sambhala tha or humse door bhi kar diya tha….
Or bas kuch hi dino me nayi maa ko apne bete ke bhavishya ki chinta hui or unhone pita ji se na jaane kya kaha or achanak hi mujhe apne mama ke yaha bhej diya gaya jaha mere liye kuch nahi tha vo log mujhe naukar ki tarah rakha karte the ek din kuch aisa hua ki mujhe apne poore pariwar se hamesha ke liye door hona pada ab ye kya hua ye aage pata chal jayega aur phir maine ek naye naam ke saath ek nayi shuruaat ki ……
' Avinash ' duniya mujhe ab isi naam se jaanti hai

Ab flashback ko bich bich me jarurat padne par hi bataya jayega….



Character introduction

• Rajesh Sharma (46): ye mere pita hai inka textiles ka business hai jyada bada nahi hai par Shahar me naam h inka
• Anita (passed) : meri maa jo ki ab nahi rahi
• Pooja (42): ye meri sauteli maa hai
• Radhika (22): ye meri badi behan hai..ye mujhse bahut pyar karti hai or mujhe ghar se door bheja gaya tha to ye pita ji ke khilaf thi par unki baat kon sunta
• Sameer (20): ye Pooja maa ka beta hai ab iska intro bhi story me hi milega
• Ramesh (45): mere mama hai ye jinke yaha mujhe bheja gaya tha
• Madhu (43): ye meri maami hai inhone mujhe bahut pareshan kiya bachpan me
• Arti (22): ye mama ki badi beti h
• Rashmi (20): ye mama ki choti beti hai
• Karan (22): iska bachpan mere saath hi nikla h flashback me aa jayega ye bhi

• Avinash (22): yani ki mai ab mere baare me kahani me hi pata chale to jyada behtar rahega

(Abhi bas itna hi hai baaki log bhi jaise jaise aate jaenge unka intro aata jaega)

Akhas bhai yeh radhika age 22 or avinash ki age bi 22 to radhika badi behan kaise hui.kya is par thora roshni dalenge

 

[Tiger 786]

UPDATE 2

Abb tak:

Ab tak aapne padha ki mere Jaipur pahuchne ke baad mene kya kya kiya…

kaise mai apne naye college pahuncha or meri principal se kya baat Hui….

Ab aage:

'beta suno.. idhar ana zara…' ek aadmi jiski umar jyada nahi lag rahi thi usne ghar ke andar aate hue ek behad hi masson se chote bache ko apne pass bulaya…

uske piche piche uski badi behan bhi aa rahi thi vo bhi apne papa ki awaaz sun kar apne chote bhai ke piche piche chal di...

'beta tumhari padhai kaisi chal rahi hai….' papa ne pucha

Ladka : achi chal rahi hai papa or didi bhi mujhe padha deti hai to sab samajh aa jata hai….

Apni baat kehte hue ladka apne pita ke paas baith kar apna sar unki god me rakh deta hai…
Unki beti bhi unke pass aakar baith jaati hai...

Papa : beta tumhare mama tumhe bahut yaad kar rahe the….
Mai : haa is baar bahut dino se unse mila hi nahi mai.. kab aa rahe hai vo..

Papa : beta is baar vo nahi aa rahe hai…is baar tumhe jana hai waha…..

Ladki : Theek hai papa hum in chuttiyon me unke yaha ho ayenge…..

Papa : nahi beta Mera matlab hai ki ab amu wahi apne mama ke pass rahega or apni padhai bhi wahi se karega…

Ladki : nahi papa mera amu mere saath hi rahega…mai iska bahut ache se khayal rakhungi or dekhna ye padhai mai bhi sabse aage hoga

Papa : lekin beta tumhare pass to ek or chota bhai hai na…. uska dhyan kon rakhega…waha aarti bhi to hai na use bahut khusi hogi apne bhai ke sath reh kar…ise jaane do waha…
Ladka : ( apna sar utha kar apni behan ko le kar apne kamre ki or chal deta hai ) mai kahi nahi jaunga apni didi ko chodkar…chalo di andar…
Papa : ( thoda gusse me) beta Mai puch nahi Raha hu bata raha hu…tumhe Mai kal hi waha chod kar aaunga to apna samaan bandh lena…

Ladka apni behan ke saath apne kamre ke andar aa kar darwaza band kar deta hai aur apni behan ke sath chipak kar so jata hai….

Raat ko khane ke samay koi kisi se baat nahi karta par Pooja maa ke chahre par alag hi khusi jhalak rahi thi jaise unki koi muraad puri hone wali ho...

Khane ke baad sabhi apne room me chale jaate hai or ladka bhi apni behan ke saath hi firse let jata hai…un dono ke man me ek dar sa bana hua tha ki kal kya hone wala hai or yahi sab sochte hue ye dono gahri neend me kho jaate hai...

Agle din us ladke ko jabardasti apni behan alag kar ke aadmi apni car me apne bete ka saman rakh kar jabardasti apne bete ko le ke chal padta hai…..


' didiiiiii……' is cheekh ke sath hi meri neend khul jaati hai
meri saanse is waqt bahut tezi se chal rahi thi mene bagal me table par rakha pani piya aur dheere dheere apni saanso ko control kiya….

Mai kal raat khana kha kar jaldi so gaya tha aur aaj meri neend ek bahut hi bhayankar se sapne se khuli thi ye bhi meri unhi yaadon me se ek tha jise me bhoolna bhi chahta hu or yaad bhi rakhna chahta hu…

Ye mere sath aksar hota rehta tha to me bhi kuch hi der mai taiyar ho kar karan ke room ki aur chal diya or uske room ke bahar pahunch kar door knock kiya….

' Kaun hai…' andar se awaz aayi
Mai : me hu yrr…

Usne meri awaz sun kar gate khol diya aur kuch kaha ishare me or mai andar ki aur chal diya

andar pahuch kar maine dekha ki andar ek aur aadmi baitha hua tha jo shakal se thoda chalak lag raha tha

Karan : Avinash ye hai yaha ke jaane maane broker ye tumhe ek sasta sa ghar dikha denge to tum aaj hi shift kar lena..

Aadmi : jaisa aap theek samjhe sir me ise kamra deekha dunga….(meri or dekhkar ) chalo chalte hai tumhe room dikha kar mujhe aur bhi kaam hai chalo jaldi…..

Itna kekar vo aadmi bahar ki aur chal diya aur maine bhi karan ki aur dekh kar ek smile di aur chal diya apna naye safar ki aur…

Hum us aadmi ki car se kuch hi der me ek ghar ke saamne pahunch gaye jo jyada achi haalat me to nahi tha par itna bura bhi nahi tha isme ground floor tha fir ek first floor or fir chat bhi thi...

Hum andar ki aur chal diye aur us aadmi ne bell bajai kuch der baad kisi ne aakar darwaza khola or jaise hi darwaza khula

ek ladki jo dikhne ke bahut hi jyada masoom lag rahi thi usne is waqt salwar suit pehna hua tha or us normal se suit me bhi bahut pyari lag rahi thi…ye wahi ladki thi jisse me apni class me enter karte hue takra gaya tha….

Me to use dekh kar sab kuch bhul hi gaya tha ki me kon hu kaha hu or mera maqsad kya hai…mene apne aapko sambha or phir us aadmi ki taraf dekha jo apni gandi nazar se uski or dekh raha tha mujhe uspar gussa aya lekin shayad ye sahi samay nahi tha iske liye…

' namastey uncle…kaise ana hua…' usne meri or dekhte hue kaha…

Maine apni nazre turant fer li or aadmi ki aur dekhne laga kyuki agar me fir se uski aankhon me dekh leta to shayad me is baar apne hosh sambhal na pata…

' beta tumne kaha tha na ki upar wala floor Khali pada hua hai or kiraye par dena hai to mai ise lekar aya hu ab se ye yahi rahega…' aadmi ne kaha

Ladki : (meri or dekhkar) lekin uncle aapko to pata hi hai ki mujhe paiso ki jarurat hai bas isliye liye kirayedar chahiye tha…lekin kya ye kiraya de payega…(or mujhe upar se niche ki or dekha)

Aadmi : are beta mujhe achi tarah se pata hai ki kitni jimedariya hai tumhare sar par…or tum kiraye ki chinta mat karo mene 3 mahine ka advance bhi le liya hai to ab bas tum chabi de do mai ise upar wala kamra dikha deta hu…

Aur vo ladki ha me sar hila kar andar chali gayi or ek chabi la kar unhe de di…

Me us aadmi ke piche piche chal diya aur upar Ja kar dekha ek room ek kitchen or ek bathroom tha bas..maine ok kiya or vo aadmi chala gaya….maine uske jaate hi Karan ko phone laga diya

Karan : ha bhai dekh liya na ghar…koi problem ho to bata dena…
Mai : Abe meri problem chod aur bas is kameene ko yaha se door rakh….aaj me iska mooh pakka tod hi deta…kaise dekh raha tha yar wo jaise abhi us ladki ko kha hi jaega…

Karan : are tu tension na le yrr me dekhta hu ise…tu bas aaram kar or kuch chahiye ho to message kar dena..

Mene use ek simple bike or kuch ghar ka saman bhijwane ko kaha jisme ek mattress (gadda) or kuch kapde or daily routine ka samaan tha….khane ka jugad me tiffin se karne ka soch raha tha….

mai is ghar ke baare me bata du ki upar aane ke liye bahar se bhi seedhiyan banayi gayi thi or niche andar se seedhiyan sidhe chat par jaati hai bich me ek darwaja hai jis se mere room me aya ja sakta hai par vo andar se band tha…

Kuch der me niche ek chota sa truck aa gaya tha jisme vo saman tha jo maine karan se mangwaya tha saman tha to mene sara saman upar rakhwa liya or jab last me me upar aa raha tha or ek aunty ne mujhe bulaya jo ki andar se aa rahi thi….ye shayad us ladki ki maa thi…

Mai : namastey aunty..
Aunty : namastey beta…tumhi vo naye kirayedar ho na ho upar shift hua hai…

Mai : ha aunty me Delhi se aya hu yaha apni padhai karne….

Aunty : achi baat hai beta…. tumhare ghar me kon kon hai…

Mai : mai akela hi hu aunty…..maa baap to bahut pehle chale gaye the…ab bas padhai complete ho jaye fir apna future banana hai…

Aunty : sorry beta tumhare maa baap ke bare me jaan kar bura laga…bhagwan tumhara hamesha saath de…to ab yaha akele rahoge ya koi hai tumhare sath…
Mai : nahi aunty me yaha akele hi hu abhi to..
Aunty : theek hai beta vaise tumne naam kya bataya apna..
Mai : ji Avinash naam hai mera
Aunty : theek hai beta kuch jarurat ho to jarur batana…
Vaise mera naam Suman hai
Or meri beti se to tum mil hi chuke ho Siya naam hai uska abhi ye bhi yahi se MBA kar rahi hai or ek choti beti aur hai vo abhi pata nahi kaha khel rahi hogi…chalo me chalti hu Ghar me bahut kaam hai…

Or me bhi upar aakar baith gaya ghar pura set ho hi gaya tha bas apne kapde or kuch bathroom ka saman jagah par rakhna tha…vo bhi rakh diya or khana order karke mangwa liya or kha kar so gaya ye din bhi bas inhi sab me nikal gaya tha…

Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai…



New Characters

• Suman (44) : mai jis ghar me rehta hu ye inhi ka hai...inke pati bahut pehle hi is duniya ko chod kar Jaa chuke hai...dikhne me ye jyada umra ki nahi lagti hai shayad uski wajah bhi yahi hai ki inhone bahut mehnat karke apne bacho ko pala hai ye paise kamane ke liye kapde silne kaa kaam kiya karti hai...
• Siya (21) : ye Suman ji ki badi beti hai or ye dikhne me kaisi hai ye shayad batane ki jarurat nahi hai...inke masoom se chehre par duniya bhar ka dukh dikhai deta hai ye is kaaran hai ki ab pure ghar ki jimmedari inhi ke kandho par aa chuki hai....ab ye bas apni padhai puri kar ke apni maa or choti behan ko ek khushhal jindagi dena chahti hai..
• Rishi (passed away): ye siya ka chota bhai tha...jo choti Umar me kahi chala gaya tha or abhi tak pata nahi chal paya hai ki iske saath kya hua tha... ghar me sabhi ko iski bahut yaad aati hai par kehte hai na waqt kisi ke liye nahi rukta to bas ab sab ke Jahan me kuch dhondhli yaade hi bachi hai iski
• NIkita (15): yeis pariwar ki sabse choti sadasya hai inhe ghar me sabhi pyar se choti ya gudiya hi bulate hai ghar me sabhi inse bahut pyar karte hai or inki wajah se hi inke Ghar me raunak rehti hai...

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Lazwaab update

 

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Akhas bhai yeh radhika age 22 or avinash ki age bi 22 to radhika badi behan kaise hui.kya is par thora roshni dalenge

Bhai dono judwa hai...bas kuch hi der ka antar hai.... isliye bada chota kon hai ye inhone aapas me hi tay kar rakha hai...

Thank you for reading..
Keep supporting brother

 

[Tiger 786]

Update-3

Or me bhi upar aakar baith gaya ghar pura set ho hi gaya tha bas apne kapde or kuch bathroom ka saman jagah par rakhna tha…vo bhi rakh diya or khana order karke mangwa liya or kha kar so gaya ye din bhi bas inhi sab me nikal gaya tha…

Ab aage :

Kal din bhar thaka dene wala tha to khana khate hi nind jaldi aa gayi thi…

Aaj subah meri nind jaldi khul gayi kyuki ye hotel to tha nahi to ab aadat padne me time lagne wala tha…

Mai uth kar chat par chal diya socha kuch der exercise kar lu par upar to gazab ka mahol bana hua tha…

Mai jaise hi chat par pahucha to koi waha pehle se maujood tha vo shayad kapde sukhane ayi thi chat par uska muh dusri taraf tha....usne is waqt ek neele rang ki saree pehni hui thi jo uske shareer par jach rahi thi…

Mai abhi bhi wahi khada use nihar raha tha usne apne baalo ko ek taraf baandha hua tha jo shayad geele the…

Uska shareer ke kuch hisse jo subah ki halki dhoop me roshni se chamaak rahe the woh adbhut lag rahe the….

unse nazar hatane ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi uski kamar se hoti hui kuch Pani ki boonde niche ko jaati dikhi to mere muh se achanak hi ek 'aah…' si nikal gayi

Or us waqt mujhe laga ki mujhse khushnaseeb to vo paani ki boond hai jo is doodh se gore or mulayam badan par reng rahi thi kuch aisa hi nazara uski surahidar gardan or dudh si komal peeth par bhi tha…..

Mai na jaane kab tak yu hi khoya raha us nazare me ki mujhe hosh hi nahi raha ki mai kaha khada hu…. achanak se vo sundari palat gayi or meri or dekha….

Uske palat te hi mujhe jhatka laga mai is waqt kuch bolne ki halat me hi nahi tha….

"are Avinash beta tum jaldi uth gaye or meri dono nalayak betiya abhi tak bistar chodne ka naam hi nahi le rahi.." ye Suman aunty thi jinhe me itni der se dekh kar aah bhar raha tha..sach me inke is avtar se to inki umra ka andaja lagana lagbhag namumkin sa tha…

"ji aunty bas abhi utha tha to socha thodi kasrat hi kar lu…" mai apni nazro ko sambhalte hue baat kar raha tha..

"Sahi hai… waise shareer acha banaya hua hai..." unhone ye baat keh kar apne baal sukhane shuru kar diye jo ki abhi tak towel me bandhe hue the….

Unke baal unki kamar tak pahuch rahe the….vo ghane kaale baal jo abhi bhi bheege hue the vo is halki sunmbah wali dhoop me chamak rahe the…

Aunty : acha vaise konse college me admission liya hai..

Mai : wahi aunty MBA ke liye jo yaha top private college hai na usi me liya hai…uske placements bhi ache hai…

Aunty : acha matlab tum siya ke hi college me ho…chalo acha hai ab mujhe chinta nahi rahegi is ladki ki…

Mai : ji aunty…


mai unse baat karte hue apni kasrat karne laga tha….or aunty bhi lagatar ek taktaki lagaye meri muscles ko dekh rahi thi…maine is waqt sirf ek trouser pehna hua tha or upar se t-shirt nikal kar chat ki deewar par rakh diya tha…

Aunty : acha tumhare khane ka kya karoge…

Mai : aunty filhal to shayad tiffin lagwane ka soch raha hu…

Aunty : are iske liye itna pareshan hone ki kya baat hai me hu na….

Mai : matlab….( Or me unki or dekhne laga)

Aunty : are matlab chodo or aaj se tumhara khana bhi hamare yaha banega bas….

Mai : are nahi aunty iski koi jarurat nahi hai mai dekh lunga kuch…

Aunty : tum bhi to mere bete jaise hi to ho na to ab bas Maine kah diya to aa jana… chalo tum karo apna ye taamjham…mujhe niche kuch kaam hai…..or samay se aa jaana khane ke liye..

Ye aakhri baat unhone meri taraf dekh kar jab kahi to unki aankho me ek akelapan saaf jhalak raha tha…

Or shayad ye sach hi to tha kyuki inke pati ka inki jindagi se tu chale jaana… or fir apne ladle bete ko is duniya ki bheed me kahi kho dena koi choti baat nahi thi…..
Shayad ye aaj bhi ye aas lagaye baithi hai ki inka beta firse laut aayega or unke gale lag kar inki saari pareshaniya samapt kar dega…

Par….par ab kon bataye is maa ko ki inka beta shayad ab is duniya me tha hi nahi or ye kaise hua ye aage pata chal hi jaega….

Mai bhi kuch der kasrat karke apne room me chala gaya fresh hone…ab ye college tha school nahi…to classes 10 baje se hoti thi abhi kaafi waqt tha…

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Wahi dusri or jab Suman niche pahuchi to uska man kaafi bhara hua sa lag raha tha ye uske bete ki yaadon ke kaaran tha shayad kyuki ek beta hamesha apni maa ka ladla hi rehta hai chahe vo usse kitna bhi door ho….

Lekin ye shayad inke saath bahut baar ho chuka hai to ye saari baato ko apne dil me samet kar ghar ke kaamo me lag jaati hai or Nikita ko bhi school bhej deti hai….
Nikita yaha se school aksar school bus me jaya karti thi…or siya bus se college jaati thi....

Siya bhi jaldi hi naha kar apni maa ke sath milkar ghar ke kaam me lag jaati hai....or phir college chali jaati hai...

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Mai taiyar ho kar karan ko call laga diya..

Karan : Good morning Bhai..

Mai : Good morning Bhai…acha vo kaam hua jo maine bataya tha…

Karan : ha bhai sab ho gaya hai maine apne tareeke se us ghar ke documents niklawa liye hai or unhe Suman ji ke naam bhi karwa diye hai…ab bas tu dekh tujhe aage kya karna hai…

Mai : thank you bhai… chal theek hai yaha office ko ache se sambhal me bhi kuch dino me aata hua waha…

Or kuch or choti choti baat karne call rakh diya or apne aap se hi baate karne laga…

Mai : (khud se) bas aaj se badlav shuru hone wala hai…ye har us cheez ke liye hoga jiske liye me itne din tarsta raha hu ....taiyaar rehna dad aajse aapki kismat badane wali hai...

Or kuch der me taiyar ho kar mai niche pahuch gaya….maine doorbell bajayi to andar se aunty ne darwaza khola….

Is waqt vo shayad kitchen me kuch kaam kar rahi thi...
unki saari ko unhone apne kamar me kas rakha tha or unke chehre par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha jo shayad unki sundarta kam karne ki jagah or badha hi raha tha…

Aunty : ab dekhte hi rahoge ya andar bhi aoge…vaise badi der kardi aane me…

Jab unhone darwaza khola to mere shabd mere muh me hi rah gaye the to aunty ne andar jaate hue ye sab kaha tha…

" ji aunty ab ye mere liye nayi jagah hai na to saman sahi karne me fir nahane me samay lag gaya or aaj to shayad Mai late bhi hu…" itna kehkar me wahi rakhe sofe par baith gaya…

Aunty : acha koi baat nahi….nayi jagah thoda samay lag hi jata hai…or agar tum na bhi aate to mai aane hi wali thi…

Phir wo jaldi jaldi plate me kuch aalo ke parathe dahi ke sath le kar aa gayi….paratho se khushbu badi achi aa rahi thi aaj bahut dino baad ek maa ke haath se bana kuch khane Jaa raha tha mai varna in 5 star hotels ke khane me bhi vo baat kaha jo ek maa ki haatho ke bani mamuli paratho me thi…

Maine khana shuru kiya to pehle hi niwale ho kha kar mujhe meri behan ki or maa ki kuch kuch yaad aane lagi kyuki bachpan me pehle meri maa fir meri behan inhone hi to Mera dhyan rakha tha….

Mai : aunty aap ke haatho Mai to jaado hai…itne ache parathe shayad hi maine kabhi khaye ho

Aunty : (muskura kar) ab jyada maska mat lagao jaldi se kha lo tumhe college ke liye bhi late ho raha hai na…

Phir maine jaldi se khana khatam kiya to aunty ne raat ko time se aane ko kaha or ek tiffin bhi laga diya ki agar bhook lage to kha lu…

Mai waha se nikal kar hotel pahuch gaya or Suman ji ke ghar ke kagaz le liye or karan ko vo tifin de diya…..
Kyuki hum saath hi bade hue the…iska bachpan bhi mere hi saath guzra tha…. to usne bhi ghar ka khana nahi khaya tha meri tarah….

Use tiffin de kar mai college pahuch gaya to waha class chalu thi to socha canteen mai chala jaye….me waha Jaa kar baith gaya or apne mobile me kuch kaam karne laga….

Kuch hi de baad ek ladki ki awaz se mera dhyan tuta…

Ladki : hii....tum Avinash ho na.... new admission…

Mai : yes…so...

Ladki : I am radhika…radhika Sharma your classmate…

Mai : okay…nice to meet you…

Radhika : May I sit here…vo actually mai bhi late hu na or class bhi start ho gayi hai…

Mai : yeah sure….

Or phir me apne mobile me lag gaya ya shayad ye jatane ki koshish karne laga ki mujhe uski maujoodgi se koi farq nahi padta…

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad achanak se usne kaha…

Radhika : So kya hum dost ban sakte hai….

Mai : sure why not…par mai to aapko janta hi nahi na..

Radhika : are vo to dosti ke baad jaan pehchaan to ho hi jayenge na…

Mai : (apna haath bada kar) Okay then we are friends now..

Phir kuch der mai bas college campus ke baare Mai baat karne laga or yuhi baat karte hue lunch break ho gaya…maine aaj bahut dino baad kisi ajnabi se itni baat ki thi….halanki ye mere liye ajnabi nahi thi lakin abhi mai unhe kuch batane wala nahi tha kyunki maire plans alag the…

Phir classes hui or chuti ke samay me college se bike leke nikalne laga to dekha siya bahar hi khadi thi to socha thoda iske maze le liye jaye…

To me pahunch gaya bike le kar uske saamne….

Mai : hii…

Siya: hi…tum yaha kya kar rahe ho…

Mai : sach tumhe nahi pata ya natak kar rahi ho…

Siya : matlab…kehna kya chahte ho....maine kya kiya…or tum apne kaam se kaam rakho aur rasta chodo mera…

Mai : are yaar mera matlab tha ki aunty ne hi subah kaha tha ki aate waqt tumhe bhi lete aau….

Siya : kya matlab…. chalo chodo tum jao yaha se me pahuch jaungi tum tension mat lo….

Mai : are jaldi baitho na yaar dekho kitni garmi hai yaha….ab baitho nahi to utha lunga tumhe yaha se…

Ye kahkar Mai bike se utarne laga to vo ghabra gayi…

Siya : acha theek hai…lekin kal se mai khud chali jaungi aur mai maa se baat kar lungi…

Or ye keh kar vo mere piche baith gayi….aur maine bhi bike start kiya or chal diye hum…

Vaise college se siya ka ghar kuch 20 minutes ki doori par tha…to mai bhi thodi chedkhani karte hue use ghar tak le aaya….

Par yaha to situation hi alag thi…. aunty or Nikita bahar hi baithe hue the to unhone dekh liya hume….


Ab aage kya hoga Avinash ke sath or vo aunty ko kya jawab dega….ye sab agle update me

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Update-4

Par yaha to situation hi alag thi…. aunty or Nikita bahar hi baithe hue the to unhone dekh liya tha hume….

Ab aage :

Siya ko to ab tak ye hi pata tha na ki uski maa ne hi permission di hai use laane ke liye…. par

Par…ab meri to gaand hi phat gayi thi….ab me kya karu ye samajhna mere bas ka to nahi tha… lekin ab marta kya na karta….

jana to tha hi andar to mene bike bike andar park ki or siya mere sang sang hi andar ki or chal padi…

Aunty : aao beta aao…vaise acha kiya jo siya ko bhi lete aye ho warna to ye aane me bahut der laga deti thi….

Mai : are aunty isme shukriya kaisa…

Or me aunty ke bagal me hi baith gaya…or siya ko shayad samajh aana baaki tha ki maine uske saath mazak Kiya hai…lekin abhi vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki mai bol pada…

Mai : vaise bhi mai idhar aa hi raha tha to siya ne lift ke liye puch liya… to maine socha bechari pareshan ho jayegi bas me to le aya saath….

Aur ye bol kar mene siya ki or dekha uska reaction dekhkar mujhe hasi aa rahi thi….aur ab vo mujhe lagatar gusse se ghoor rahi thi….

Aunty : acha kiya chalo tum baitho mai chai lekar aati…. vaise tumhe chai chalegi ya kuch or loge…jaise coffee..

Nikita : are wah ma aajtak humse to na pucha ki kya loge or ye kal hi aye or aapko pata bhi liya…

Aunty : tu na sudhar ja…beta tum chodo isko ye esi hi hai…

Or aunty mere liye coffee or apne liye chai banane andar chali gai…..or yaha rah gaye hum teen log… . Mai , siya or Nikita….

Nikita: acha to didi ne aapse lift maangi hai aaj…

Ye sunkar mai siya ki taraf dekh kar muskurane laga….siya kafi gusse me lag rahi thi par ab kya hi kar sakte hai jo ho gaya tha use sambhalna bhi to tha…

Mai : ha…vaise mai kisi ladki ko baithata nahi…lekin…tumhari di ne itne pyar se kaha ki maine maan hi liya…

Siya : acha…
Itna kehkar vo mujhe aakhe dikhane lagi..

Mai : or nahi to kya…warna Mai aise hi kisi ko thodi lift de deta vo to siya ke pyar ka asar hua to baitha liya …

Nikita anpi didi ke pass ja kar use chedte huye kehti hai ,
" Acha itne pyar se kaha tha kya…" or hasne lagi…

Siya : choti tujhe bada maza aa raha hai na….or tum tumhe to baad me dekhti hu pata nahi kis manhoos ghadi me yaha aye the…

Nikita : vaise di hamare samne bhi dekh sakte ho hum rok thodi rahe hai…..

Itna kehkar vo mere piche aa jaati or hum dono hasne lagte hai….or siya mujhe ishare karte hue andar chali jaati hai….

Thodi der baad coffee aa jaati hai or Nikita or aunty se baat karke mai phir se hotel pahuch jata hu waha karan pehle se mera wait kar raha tha….

Me kuch hi der me taiyar ho gaya or fir Karan or mai pahuch gaye hamare naye office me…

Me andar ja kar apne room me baith gaya yaha keval karan aa sakta tha….or theek mere saamne wale room me aaj ek khel shuru hone wala tha…us room me CCTV cameras lagwa diye gaye the jinka sidha view mai is room me dekh or sun sakta tha….

Thodi der intezar karne ke baad karan or….. Mr Rajesh Sharma andar aate hue dikhai dete hai…

Mai yaha par baith kar Bluetooth se karan se juda hua tha kyunki aaj ek deal hone wali thi or mujhe isme kisi tarah ki galti nahi chahiye thi isliye mai khud ise manage karne wala tha Bluetooth se…

In meeting room,
(isme karan jo bhi kahega vo mere shabd honge)

Karan: welcome Mr Sharma….aap ka yaha swagat hai…

Rajesh: thank you sir…aaj itni badi company ke saath Mai deal karne jaa raha hu ye mere liye bahut badi baat hai…

Karan: chaliye fir ye rahe documents ache se padh kar sign kar dijiye or bas deal aap ki hui…

Rajesh: nek kaam me deri kaisi sir… vaise payment jaldi ho jati to acha hota….hum manufacturing jaldi start kar paate…

Karan: ji Mr Rajesh ye lijiye check pure 10 crores ka hai…. or baaki 50% kaam hone ke baad…

Itne paise dekhkar Rajesh ki dhadkan badh jaati hai….isi beech karan bhi vo documents le kar rakh leta hai or apni seat par baith jaata hai…

Karan : Vaise aap itne bade order ko poora kar denge to or bhi order aapke paas aa hi jaenge..

Rajesh : (khush hokar) ha sir ab to hamara saath hu hi bana rahega …

Karan : ha ye to hai par yaad rakhiye ga ki agar order time se poora na hua to…..

Rajesh : (serious ho kar) haa sar mujhe pata hai mujhe poore order ka 3 guna dena hoga…lekin market isi par to tika hua hai sir agar risk nahi lenge to business kaise chalega…

Ye sunkar karan or maire chehre par ek hasi ka bhav aa gaya tha…

Karan : ha sahi kaha aapne…to chaliye ab bas order poora kariye or documents ki copy aapke office bhi pahuch jaegi….ek baar aur dekh
lijiye ga…

Bas thodi der aur baat hui deal ko lekar….or fir thodi der baad Rajesh chala gaya uske jaate hi Karan andar aa kar mere gale lag gaya kyon ki use pata tha ki aaj hum is jagah par kis tarah pahuche hai…. vo bhookh se tadapti raatein aur vo beraham duniya me apna jeevan jeene ke liye sangharsh….

Karan: bhai ab vo din door nahi…

Mai : ha bhai ab bas kuch din or fir sab apni muthi me hoga…itni asani se saza de di jaaye to shayad unhe ehsaas bhi na ho ki unki wajah se meri jindagi kaisi ho gayi thi…

Karan : chal aaja yrr aaj hum sath khana khayenge….

Or bas ye sunte hi meri hasi gayab ho gayi…

Mai : bhai mai to bhul hi kya…

Karan : Abe kya hua ab… kuch batayega bhi…

Mai : Abe vo Suman ji ne kaha tha ki me unke yaha khana khaunga or ab bas time ho hi gaya yaar….chal bye yaar Mai chalta hu….

Or use bye bol kar waha se nikal pada ab mujhe jaldi se jaldi ghar pahuncha tha…. thodi hi der me mai ghar pahunch gaya tha…shukar hai ki me time se pahunch gaya tha….

Mai pehle apne room me gaya or change karke niche pahuch gaya….maine jaa kar doorbell bajai…. lekin aaj shayad meri kismat bahut achi thi yu kahu ki jo chah raha tha wahi hua…. darwaza kholne siya hi ayi thi…

Siya : ab kya lene aaye ho yaha…jee nahi bhara kya abhi tak…

"Are tumse kon Milne aane laga yrr…. me to tumhari maa se milne aaya hu…" itna kehkar maine use side kiya or andar ki or chal diya….
Siya is baat par hairan ho kar wahi khadi mujhe andar ki aur jaate dekhti rahi …

Me andar jaa kar sofe par baith gaya….tabhi ander se aunty nikal kar aayi shayad unhe pata tha ki me hi aya hu…

Aunty : acha hua beta hum aa gaye warna Mai abhi siya ko bhejne hi wali thi…

Mai : are nahi aunty ab aapne bulaya tha to aana hi pada…or aapke haath se bane khane ko to koi na keh hi nahi sakta…

Aunty : samajh rahi hu beta tum bas aise hi tareef kar rahe ho chalo ab haath dho kar table par aa jao Mai khana laga deti hu…

Mai uth kar haath dhone chala gaya or haath dho kar table par aa gaya par siya abhi bhi mujhe thode ukhde tareeke se dekh rahi thi…shayad din ka gussa tha…lekin ab use kya batau..use yu pareshan karne me bhi ek alag hi maza aane laga tha….

Aunty : chalo lag gaya khana ab shuru ho jao…

Aunty ne bahut hi lajwab khana banaya tha…to mai bhi maze se khane laga par abhi mujhe kuch aur bhi kaam karna tha….

Mai : waise aunty agar aap ko bura na lage to ek baat puchna tha…..

Aunty: are beta kaisi baatein karte ho…mai bhi to tumhari maa jaisi hi hu na…bolo kya kehna chahte ho….

Mai : aunty aaj jab siya college se nikal kar bahar jaa rahi thi to maine kuch dekha waha par….

Mere itna kehte hi siya khaasne lagi….

Aunty: (siya ki or dekhte hue) kya dekha beta batao…

Mai : are aisa kuch nahi hai aunty bas gate par bahut se awara ladke aane jaane wali ladkiyo ko chedte rehte hai…ise pareshani hoti hogi na..

Aunty : acha….siya tumne bataya nahi kabhi…

Siya : are maa vo bas kuch manchale hai kuch raees baap ki aulad hai to unhe dar nahi hai kisika…. lekin aap pareshan mat hona me sambhal sakti hu itna ho…

Aunty : are lekin kabhi kuch ho gaya to…. nahi nahi me risk nahi le sakti….(or meri or dekhkar) Avinash…beta agar tumhe koi pareshani na ho to kya tum siya ko apne sath le ja kar laa sakte ho kya….

Aunty ke itna kehte hi siya or Nikita ko khasi aane lagi…

Siya: (khaste hue)Pani..Pani….
(Pani peekar) maa aap chinta Naa karo na…itna to mai sambhal sakti hu…

Aunty: tu to chup hi reh ab…pata nahi waha kaise kaise log milte honge roj…. Avinash beta tumhe koi pareshani hai to bata do….

Mai: ( siya ki aur dekhkar) nahi aunty ab aapne kah diya na to mujhe kya problem hogi….bas aap isi tarah apne haath ka khana khilati rehna baaki aapki sabhi problem meri…

Aunty : tum kitne ache ho beta or dekho kehne ko meri do do betiya hai par kaam ki ek bhi nahi …

Nikita or siya saath me : maaa

Aunty : acha chalo chodo ab khane par dhyan do….

Fir jaise hi khana ho gaya to me waha se apne room me aa gaya or padhne laga aur kuch kaam bhi kiya apne ghar walo ke liye…..

Lagbhag 11 baje mujhe kuch awaaz ayi…shayad koi chat par jaa raha tha….to mai bhi chup chap chal diya chat ki aur….

Chat par dekha to waha Suman thi vo chat par ghum Rahi thi…

Suman: are tum soye nahi abhi tak….

Mai : nahi aunty mai itni jaldi nahi sota aur fir aaj thoda jyada bhi kha liya tha..to socha thoda ghum lu…..

Aunty : acha kiya…

Or bas isi tarah idhar udhar ki baat karte hue hum ghumne lage….

Tabhi achanak se maire muh se kuch nikal gaya jo shayad nahi nikalna chaiye tha…lekin fir sambhal liya

Mai : vaise aap is saree me achi lag rahi hai…

Aunty : acha bachu mujhe line maar rahe ho….

Mai: are nahi aunty mai to aap ko pehli baar dekh kar ladki hi samjh raha tha par fir pata laga aap siya ki maa ho…

Aunty : (haste hue) acha chalo theek hai…mai jaati hu bahut der ho rahi hai….

Or fir aunty good night bol kar chali gayi….

Mai bhi kuch der or chat par ruka fir neend aane lagi to room Mai aakar so gaya…

Agle din mai time se taiyar ho gaya kyuki aaj siya ko apne sath lekar jana tha to mai late nahi hona chahta tha…
Niche pahuch kar maine sabke saath thodi hasi mazak ke sath nashata pura kiya or fir mai or siya chal diye college…..

College pahuch kar hum dono class mai pahuch gaye or classes chalu ho gayi….

Classes ke baad break me mai bhi canteen pahuch gaya…. Or ek side baith kar nashta karne laga….abhi mujhe kuch hi der hui thi ki mere samne siya aakar baith gayi….

Siya : kon ho tum…..aakhir chahte kya ho….pehle mere ghar aana or phir meri maa ko apni side kar liya….kyu kar rahe ho ye….

Mai : are aisa kuch nahi hai yrr vo to bas aise hi ho gaya sab….ab bhala mujhe tumse kya matlab….

Siya : matlab hona bhi nahi chahiye…. aage se agar kuch kiya na to dekh lena…

Mai : acha theek hai yrr abse mai dhyan rakhunga…

Itna keh kar diya chali gayi or saamne radhika aa kar baith gayi….ye shayad kuch der se bahar khadi ho kar mujhe or siya ko hi dekh rahi thi…

Radhika: kya kar rahi thi vo yaha…tum use jaante ho kya…

To maine use bata diya ki mai unke yaha hi ruka hua hu….

Radhika: acha chalo koi baat nahi…. vaise mai kuch batane ayi thi…

Mai : ha ha batao na …

Radhika: kal mera birthday hai or tumhe mai specially invite kar rahi hu…. samajh gaye na….

Mai : acha to kal tumhara birthday hai …vaise party kaha hai

Radhika: or kaha yrr itna bada ghar hai hamara kal aaoge na tab dekh lena…

Mai : acha ye to sahi hai lekin ab mai bhi kuch karna chahta hu yrr to please mana mat karna…

Radhika: acha jo man kare kar lena…par kal pakka aana hai theek hai na…

Mai: ok theek hai yrr chalo theek hai kal milte hai….






Ab aage kya hoga ye agle update me dekhne milega…. Avinash apne ghar jaa kar kya karega or vo kya surprise dega….ye sab jaan ne ke liye mere saath bane rahiye ga….


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Mind-blowing update

 

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Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya dosto...
mai koi writer nahi hu aur ye mera pehla pryas hai....
mai is kahani ko sahi disha me banaye rakhne ki puri koshish karunga dosto.....
aap sab bhi apna sahyog yu hi banaye rakhiyega

Thank you for your support and love for the story

Akash bhai apne kaha ki apka pehla paryas hai or aap writer nahi ho.
Par apki lekhne ko dekh kar koi nahi kahega ki aap new ho.
Aap ke lekhni ko mai 100 mai se 100 no dunga❤❤❤

 

[Tiger 786]

Update- 5

Mai : acha ye to sahi hai lekin ab mai bhi kuch karna chahta hu yrr to please mana mat karna…

Radhika: acha jo man kare kar lena…par kal pakka aana hai theek hai na…

Mai: ok theek hai yrr chalo theek hai kal milte hai….


Aabb aaage :

Radhika se baat hone ke kuch der baad hi chutti ka samay ho gaya tha to me parking me jaa kar bike le kar aa gaya or siya ka wait karne laga….

Kuch hi der me siya aa gayi vo aaj chup thi…. shayad vo mujhse bahas nahi karna chahti thi….

lekin uski chuppi mujhe pareshan kar rahi thi….raste me maine try ki baat karne ki par koi response nahi aaya….to maine bhi use pareshan nahi kiya or hum ghar pahunch gaye…. ghar pahunch kar hum dono apne apne raste chal diye….

Me apne room me aakar nahane chala gaya kyuki thoda thak gaya tha socha iske baad thoda so lunga….
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Wahi dusri or aaj maine abhi khana khane nahi khaya tha to Suman ne siya se pucha…lekin siya abhi gussa thi to usne sirf itna bol diya ki mai thak gaya hu to khana nahi khana mujhe…..

Lekin Suman ko meri chinta thi to vo khana lekar upar pahuch gayi upar....aakhir beta jo maana tha usne to jaise hi vo upar pahuchi usne dekha ki darwaza khula hua hai….

Lekin fir bhi usne awaaz di….magar Mai to bathroom me tha to awaaz aane se rahi…

Suman ne thoda intezaar kiya par ab use meri chinta hone lagi…. aakhir beta jo maanti thi vo…lekin jab vo andar aayi to me use bahar nahi dikha to usne khana table par rakh diya….

Maine nahane jaane se pehle kapde nikal kar apne bed par rakh diye the or mai andar sirf towel le kar gaya tha…

Jaise hi Suman bed ke kinare pahuchi tabhi bathroom ka darwaza khula…. lekin ye kya suman shayad phas chuki thi….
Kyon Ki ek to vo bina puche andar aa gayi thi…lekin ye bhi choti baat hi thi…

Abhi Suman pareshan isliye thi kyunki usne bed par rakhe mere kapde dekh liye the….ab aap samjh hi sakte hai ki abhi me sirf towel me tha ye soch kar hi vo dar gayi thi ki pata nahi Avinash ko kaisa Lagega…

Wahi jaise hi mai bathroom se bahar aya to ye unhi kuch kapdo se mel kha raha tha jo aksar siya pehna karti thi….

Ab itna to saaf tha ki siya mujhe ek hi nazar me bha gayi thi…. matlab love at first site….uska vo masoom chehra uski vo kaali ananke mujhe apni or kheechte rehti hai….

Maine tay kar liya tha ki ab shayad mujhe ek kadam aage badha dena chahiye nahi to shayad siya mujhe galat samjhne lage…..

Vo is waqt salwar neele rang ka salwar suit pehne hue thi…uske baal saleeke se ek taraf karke bandhe hue the….

Mai dheere dheere aage badhne laga…or shayad use bhi ehsaas ho gaya tha…. dheere dheere mujhe uske sharir se aati khushbu ka bhi ehsaas hone laga ye bahut hi adbhut anubhav tha…..mai shayad aaj kuch bada karne kaa soch chuka tha…

Mai jaise hi uske kareeb pahucha….is waqt meri saanson me to thehrav tha lekin uski saason ki awaaj mujhe saaf saaf sunai dene lagi thi…..

Or uske itne kareeb hone par mujhse bhi ruka nahi gaya or maine apne haatho ko badha kar uski kamar ke ird gird lapet liya or apne muh ko uske ek taraf ki nangi padi gardan par halka sa tika diya….

Lekin itne se hi Suman ki bolti band ho gayi thi….vo kehna chahti thi lekin uske muh me bas ek siski nikli "iii ssshhhh…."
Jo ko is baat ki gawah thi ki uske sharir par uski gardan uske liye ek behan hi samvedansheel hissa tha….or shayad uske pass awaaz bachi hi nahi thi is waqt ke liye ….

Vahi mujhe jab uski itni mulayam gardan ka ehsaas apne hothon ke itne kareeb hua to meri aakhe to swatah hi band ho gayi thi …. shayad uska bhi yahi haal tha ……hum dono ke sharir me thartharahat hone lagi thi….

Lekin fir kuch hi der me himmat juta kar shayad vo kuch kehne wali hi thi ki maine apna ek jo abhi tak uski kamar par tha use uske hothon par rakh diya…..

Mai: shhhh…. please abhi kuch na kehna….

Suman: …………………

Mai : I love you….. I love you yrr…maine jab se tumhe pehli baar dekha hai tabhi se mai apna dil tumhare naam kar chuka hu….

Or ye kehte hue ek haath jo uski kamar par tha usse thoda thoda hila kar uske pet par sehlane laga…..
ye ehsaas mujhe or romachit kar raha tha….or achanak hi maine uske gardan par ek kiss kar di jo shayad itne araam se ki thi ki uski komal skin mere hotho me malai ki tarah feel Hui….
Or jis haath ko uske hothon par rakha tha use waha se hata kar uski gardan par rakh kar sehlane laga…..

Suman : aaahhhhh…

Mai: tum mujhe galat mat samjhna mai jab bhi tumhare pass hota hu to mai sab kuch bhool kar bas tumme hi khoya rehta hu…. bahut sukoon milta hai tumhare pass aa kar….or shayad isi liye tumhare pass aane ke bahane khojta rehta hu….. bachpan se mai akela hi raha hu na to kisi ne pyar diya or na hi mujhe koi aisa mila ki jise mai pyar kar saku…..

Suman: ...(ek dum khamoshi se bas is lamhe ko mahsoos kar rahi thi kyunki ye alag tha….ye vo ehsaas tha jo shayad ise apne pati ke sath bhi mehsoos nahi hua tha…..or pati sharabi tha to jaldhi apni buri aadato ke bhet bhi Chad Gaya…..

Lekin fir…fir uska ye pariwar to toot gaya tha na….us waqt bhi Suman ne himmat nahi haari or jee Jaan laga kar mehnat karne lagi apne bacho ko palne ke liye…

or isi beech usne apna eklauta beta bhi kho diya tha…. lekin use pata tha ki agar vo haari to shayad uski betiya jo ki us waqt bahut choti aur nasamjh thi….duniya inka fayda uthane me der nahi karti…

Is pure sangharsh bhare safar ke dauran ek aur karan tha jisne ise kabhi tootne nahi diya….vo tha pyar…..

Lekin vo ye pyar tha jo use iske pati se mila tha….jiski wajah se iske dil me pyar shabd ke liye ek galat chavi ban gayi thi….

Or bas yahi kaaran tha ki siya aur Nikita ke jyada dost nahi the na hi kisi se jyada mel jol tha….kyunki unki maa ki saari takleef unhone bhi mehsoos ki thi…

Lekin jab Avinash Suman ke ghar aya to Suman apne aap iske kareeb aati gayi….uska karan tha ki ye Avinash me apna beta dhoondhti thi….jo shayad ab inke pariwar me khushiyan firse la sakta tha…..

Lekin dil me ek soft corner banne ki wajah hi thi ki aaj use Avinash ki saari baate buri nahi lag rahi thi….. shayad uske andar kahi na kahi ek chingari jal uthi thi…. chingari thi us pyar ko paane ki jo use abhi tak naseeb na hua tha….

Or iska sabse bada saboot tha Suman ki khamoshi…uski saason me thehrav…. shayad Suman bhi is pal me utna hi kho chuki thi jitna Avinash..)

Mai siya ki khamoshi ko samjh nahi pa raha tha kyuki ek ladki Kan padhna is duniya ka sabse jatil kaam hai shayad…..

Siya ki taraf se koi pratikriya na hone par maine use apne alingan se azaan kar diya….
Or mud kar dusri or muh kar liya….

Mai: mai jaanta hu shayad tumhe ye ajeeb lag raha hoga….yu achanak se kisi ka apni jindagi me yu ana….or is tarah se baat karna….par mai bhi kya karu apne dil par kabu hi nahi mera….
Tum chaho to jaa sakti ho ab pyar jabardasti to ho nahi sakta…par ha ab is dil par sirf tumhara hi haq hai ye bhi yaad rakhna….

Itna keh kar me ek baar fir bathroom me chala gaya kyuki ab mujhe apna dil bahut bhari sa lag raha tha….
Mujhe sabse jyada dar is baat ka tha ki kahi is galti ke chalte me apne us kaam ko pura nahi kar paaya to kya hoga….ye meri zindagi ke kuch sabse jaroori kaamo me se ek tha….me kisi ke ehsaano tale daba hua tha….

Or ab ek baar phir mai apni purani yaadon me kho gaya….. kuch der baad me bahar aya to room khali tha….

Maine apne kapde pehne or bahar ki or jaane laga…tabhi meri nazar us khane ki thali par padi jo vo mere liye layi thi….or na jaane meri wajah se abhi kya haal hoga uska….

Maine apni soch ko yahi roka aur jaldi se khana kha kar Nikita ke ko bula kar thali bhijwa di…..

Raat ka khana bhi Nikita hi lekar aa gayi thi…. mujhe thoda ajeeb laga kyuki Suman aunty college se aane ke baad se mujhe mili nahi thi or abhi khana bhi Nikita lekar aayi…..ab mujhe thoda dar lagne laga ki shayad siya ne Suman aunty ko sab kuch bata diya hai ….

Yuhi raat kat gayi or agli subah jab me taiyar hua to fir nashta aa chuka tha….socha chalo theek hai ab galti ki hai to saza bhi bhugatni hi padegi….

Me neeche pahucha do dekha Nikita school bus ki aur jaa rahi thi or siya bahar khadi thi…. shayad mera hi intezar kar rahi thi…..

Ab mujhe thodi rahat mehsoos hone lagi or me chup chap bike nikalne laga…..bike start karke maine siya taraf dekha to vo chup chap apna bag le kar aa gayi aur piche baith gayi….

Hum college pahuche to radhika ki car gate par hi dikhai de gayi…par mera man kahi or tha to use ignore karke bike parking me lagayi….tab tak siya andar jaa chuki thi….

Mai jaise hi class ki taraf badha radhika dodte hue ayi or mera haath pakad liya…..

Radhika: kaha chale janab….

Mai : matlab…..

Radhika: are aaj kya hai bhul gaye kya…

Maine apne dimag par jor daala tb jaake yaad aya ki aaj to iska birthday hai or mujhe Jo planing karni thi vo bhi gayi paani me…
Ab samay bhi nahi tha…..

Mai: happy birthday yrr…..vo late ho gaya tha to jaldi jaldi karte hue dimag se nikal hi Gaya tha….

Radhika: vaise sach bol rahe ho na….ya fir kahi iska kaaran siya to nahi….

Mai: are nahi yaar aisa kuch nahi hai…tumhe to pata hi hai sab…

Radhika: are me bas mazak kar rahi thi…chalo abhi hume der ho rahi hai aao mere sath….

Itna keh kar vo mujhe apni car ki aur lekar jaane lagi…

Mai: are lekin abhi to class hai na….

Radhika: aaj koi class nahi hai samjhe…or abhi mujhe bahut si shopping bhi karni hai to chup chap chalo….

Mai: par vo siya…

Radhika: are no tension yaar…. chutti tak aa jayenge na….

Mai bhi chup chap aage baith gaya or usne gaadi ko shahar ke sabse bade mall ki taraf dauda diya….

Hum mall pahuche or utar kar andar chale gaye….mai aaj pehli baar kisi ladki ke saath shopping par aaya tha….

Radhika: chalo yaar tum to ladkiyo jaise dheere dheere chal rahe ho aise to hame yahi shaam ho jayegi…

Hum dono bahut der tak mall me ghumte rahe…yaha anginat brands ke showroom the….kabhi isme to kabhi usme aise hi karte hue usne sirf 2 dress select ki…mai sach me hairan tha isne mujhe aaj itna ghumaya tha ki mujhe laga ye aaj bahut shopping karegi …par yaha to alag hi ho raha tha do dress itni der me or usme bhi usne meri choice puchi thi….

Ab ye mat sochna ki usne meri pasand ki dress li hogi….isne meri pasand ki gayi sabhi dresses ko side me rakh diya tha…

Hume yahi ghumte hue kafi waqt ho chuka tha to humne wahi bane ache se restaurant me jaakar kuch khaya or coffee pi…

Fir hum waha se pahuche jewelry shop par ab in sabki nazar me mai ek middle class banda tha….to mai bas chup chap dekhta raha….

Waha se nikalte hue bahut der ho chuki thi….maine jaise hi ghadi me time dekha to mera dimag hi hil gaya…. yaha yahi sab karte hue 3 baj gaye the…

Ab mujhe siya ki chinta hone lagi…kya soch rahi hogi vo…
Maine radhika ko kaha ki jaldi se mujhe college chod de mujhe kuch jaruri kaam hai….

Usne bhi bina kuch kahe mujhe college choda aur jate hue apna address de diya…..me bike utha kar ghar pahucha ….waha ek dum shaant tha sab…dopahar ka waqt tha to shayad sab aaram karne lage honge….

Mai bhi room me rest karne chale gaya….shaam ko me waha se nikal kar hotel chala gaya…yaha maine Suman aunty or radhika sabko yahi bataya tha ki mai part time job karta hu….to bas isi ka bahana banakar nikal gaya aur bola ki aaj mera khana na banaye….

Kuch waqt karan ke sath baith kar mai nikal gaya hotel se or pahuch gaya apne asli ghar matlab is waqt mai apne purane ghar ke saamne khada tha jo is waqt ek bade se aalishan ghar me badal chuka tha….

Party kabki khatam ho gayi thi aur abhi 12 bajne me kuch hi der thi…Maine radhika ko message kiya aur bahar bulaya….

Abhi kuch hi der hui thi ki radhika ek simple si night dress me ghar ke darwaje par aa khadi hui…..



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Update-6

Party kabki khatam ho gayi thi aur abhi 12 bajne me kuch hi der thi…Maine radhika ko message kiya aur bahar bulaya….

Abhi kuch hi der hui thi ki radhika ek simple si night dress me ghar ke darwaje par aa khadi hui…..

Abb aage :

Radhika : hi Avinash….kaise aana hua itni raat yaha…

Mujhe samjh aa gaya ki ye gussa hai ab kar bhi kya sakte the……mai siya ko lekar pehle hi bahut pareshan tha to yaha party me aakar kya hi karta…..or mujhe aaj jo taiyari karni thi surprise ke liye vo bhi nahi hui thi….

Mai : please suno to…vo…

Radhika : ha ha batao na kya hua……kya kaam tha….

Mai : yaar please pehle puri baat to sun lo….mai din bhar tumhare sath tha to party me na aane ka to soch bhi nahi sakta tha na…

Radhika: to aye kyu nahi….

Mai : are maine tumhe bataya tha na ki mai part time job karta hu apna kharcha chalane ke liye….to bas ab urgently unhone bula liya….or bas abhi choda hai….

Radhika : tum sach keh rahe ho na….ya sirf….

Mai : are yaar mai ek dum sach keh raha hu…. dekhlo abhi tak dinner bhi nahi kiya hai….vo bhi ab karna hai…..

Mere itna kehte hi uske expression badal gaye…

Radhika: acha matlab abhi tum dinner karoge fir ghar jaoge….

Mai : ha yaar…ab to maaf kar do..

Radhika : aise nahi….meri ek shart hai….

Mai : acha to batao kya chahiye tumhe…

Radhika: bas thoda sa sath….mera matlab hai ki abhi mai bhi tumhare sath chalungi….isi bahane mera night out bhi ho jaega….

Mai: acha theek hai….vaise night dress me to jaane se rahi….to jaldi aao yaar bahut bhook lagi hai…

Mere itna kehte hi vo andar chali gayi…. mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki isko handle kaise karu….. mujhe laga nahi tha ki ye itni aasani se dost ban payegi…par yaha to dosti bhi ho gayi thi or isne mujhe hi pagal kar diya tha….

Thodi hi der me vo aa gayi aur hum uski car me baith kar waha se nikal gaye…. thodi hi door jaane par mujhe itna to samjh aa gaya tha ki hum kaha Jaa rahe hai….

Mai: idhar kaha Jaa rahe hai hum…yaha to bahut mehenge restaurante hai na….

Radhika to shayad sunne ke mood me hi nahi thi….vo bas meri taraf dekh kar muskurai or driving karne lagi….

Or ab meri kismat hi dekh lo…..ye wahi hotel tha jaha mai or karan milte the matlab ye jagah bhi hamari hotel ka hi tha….

Jab tak hum parking me pahuche tab tak me karan ko message kar chuka tha ki koi gadbad na ho jaye……

Radhika: kya soch rahe ho yaar….ab tum party me nahi aaye the na…or birthday girl bhi mai hu to treat bhi meri or se…

Mai: lekin…..

Radhika: ab chalo andar chup chap….

Raat jyada nahi hui thi….or is samay humare hi jaise or bhi log yaha maujood the….par ek farak tha….hum dono to dost hi the lekin mujhe yaha sirf couples hi dikhai de rahe the…

Hum andar gaye or ek table le kar baith gaye…. waiter aya to radhika ne hi khane ka order diya or apne liye kuch snacks or coffee mangva Li…

Mai : yaar itna kharcha kyu kar rahi ho…hum kahi normal si jagah par bhi jaa sakte the na….

Radhika: are aise kaise….mera birthday roj to aata nahi na…to ab chup chap treat enjoy karo bas…

Maine bhi soch liya ki ab thoda sambhalna padega…. to bas me bhi chup ho gaya…. kuch der baad mai apna dinner kar chuka tha or bill bhi radhika ne hi pay kiya tha….

Phir bas yu hi baate karte hue hum uske ghar pahuche jaha se maine apni bike uthai or ghar pahuch kar so gaya…..

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Wahi jab se Suman mere room se gayi thi…vo kuch bechain hi ho gayi thi…. shayad use ummid nahi thi ki mai ye karunga ya fir umra ke is padav par bhi koi uske sath is tarah ki harkat kar sakta hai…

Wahi jab raat ko sone ka samay hua to vo apna sab kaam karke apne room me lage ek mirror ke samne khadi ho gayi….

Or ye sochne lagi ki Avinash uske bete ki umar ka hai….vo kaise ye sab soch sakta hai…

Is waqt usne ek normal si saree pehni hui thi jo Suman sote samay pehana karti thi…

Usne aaine me khud ko ek nazar upar se neeche tak dekha or fir sone chali gayi….

Aaj Suman jab subah uthi to use ek dar sa lag raha tha…. ki ab vo Avinash ka saamna kaise karegi…. kyuki kal jo kuch hua tha uske baad Suman ye faisla nahi kar pa rahi thi ki use kya karna chahiye…..

Bas isi wajah se usne ye tay kiya ki abse nashta or khana vo Nikita ke haath hi bhijwa diya karegi….
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Mai agle utha or taiyar hone laga…thodi der me nashta bhi aa gaya tha…mai nashta kar ke niche pahucha to dekha siya bhi shayad nikal hi rahi thi….

Maine jaldi se bike start ki or uske saamne pahuch gaya….

Lekin aaj vo baithi nahi….

Mai: are jaldi baitho na…college nahi jana kya…

Siya: tum jao me pahuch jaungi….

Mai: are ab baitho bhi yaar…kal achanak se office Jana pada….bas isliye bata bhi nahi paya or samay se pahuch bhi nahi paya….

Siya fir bina kuch kahe hi baith gayi or hum college pahuch gaye…..


Fir bas din yuhi guzarne lage….or ek hafta hu hi beet gaya tha…..

Is beech jyada kuch khaas nahi hua par siya ka mujhse baat karna ab badh chuka tha….ab saath aate the to laazmi hai ki kuch time rehta tha….
To ab mai or siya kuch had tak dost ban chuke the….siya abhi haal filhaal mujhse jyada open nahi thi….

Wahi dusri or na jaane kyu radhika hi mere piche pad gayi thi…..waise mai bhi chahta to yahi tha lekin uske birthday par jo chance tha vo miss ho chuka tha……or sabse badi baat uske man me shayad feelings aane lagi thi….

Ab pyaar ka kya hi kehna…. kyunki in sab ke bich bas Suman hi thi jo abhi bhi kuch kuch pareshan hi rehti thi….
Agar kabhi Avinash saamne aa jaya karta to vo ab apne aap ko ek kishori ki tarah samajh kar idhar udhar ho jaya karti thi….

Kahi na kahi vo chahti thi ki Avinash usse aakar fir se baat kare par ab uske man me Avinash ke prati alag bhavnaye bhi jag chuki thi…..

Wahi apna hero Avinash jise is haalat ka kuch pata hi nahi tha….ki usne kya hi kar liya hai….
Ab jab Avinash or siya baat karne lage the….. to Avinash bas yehi socha karta ki kab siya us baare me baat karegi…..akhir kabhi na kabhi to sochegi hi mere baare me….

Par….par sabse badi baat to ye thi na ki kisi or ka paigam kisi or ko pahunch chuka tha…..
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Bas isi tarah ek din shaam ko siya chat par aayi thi tehlne ke liye….aur sanyog se Avinash bhi chat par pahunch gaya tha…..mausam abhi karwat badal raha tha to thandi hawayein chal rahi thi….

Jab usne siya ko aankhe band kiye hue chat par dekha…to usne man hi man soch liya ki ek baar or apni kismat ajma hi li jaye…..

Aur bas uske bagal me jaa kar khada ho gaya….usne mujhe dekha or fir aasman ki aur dekhne lagi….mere dil me bechaini badh rahi thi ….

Mai: siya…..

Vo : hmm…( bina meri or dekhe)

Mai : t..t..tumne….kuch socha…

Vo : kis bare me…(or meri or dekhne lagi)

Ab meri fatne lagi…. kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha kya bolu….

Mai : vo…mai tumhe pasand karta hu bataya tha na….

Maine jaise hi ye bola usne meri or dekha jaise vo meri aankhon me kuch dekhna chahti ho aur fir…..

Vo: hahahahahaa……kya kaha tum…tum mujhe…. hahaha…

Mai : ha to…ab isme hasne ki kya baat hai…

Ye kehte hue meri aankhon mein paani aane laga….. uski hasi mere dil par chubhne si lagi thi….

Vo : ye tumne socha bhi kaise….or agar tumhari jagah koi or hota to shayad ek baar ko soch bhi leti….

Mai bas uske chehre ko dekhe jaa raha tha….uske chehre ki masoomiyat mujhe abhi bhi bahut pyaari lag rahi thi….
Jab usne ye kaha or dusri taraf muh karke muskurane lagi to mujhse or raha nahi gaya….

Or me apne room me chala aya…..me bas ab akele rehna chahta tha….kahi dur…yaha se bas mujhe kahin door jana tha…

Mene apna bag uthaya or usme apna saman rakhna or waha se nikal kar sidha hotel pahuch gaya….karan ko bol kar flight ki tickets book karwai or pahuch gaya haridwar…..

Haridwar ek sadhuo ki bhumi hai….yaha me aksar aata rehta hu kyuki ghar se chale aane ke baad me yahi pala tha…inhi logo ke bich….

Mai wahi par bane ek aashram pahuch gaya or room le kar saman rakh kar nahane chala gaya…..jab laut kar dekha to phone par Suman aunty ke message the….

Maine unhe message kar diya ki ab me waha nahi rahunga….mai ab apne kisi dost ke sath rehne wala hu….or jo saman hai vo mai kuch time baad le jaunga….

Or bas phone switched off kar diya….

Raat ka samay tha or mausam bhi suhana tha….mai khana kha kar pahuch gaya wahi bane ek ghat par or apne pairo ko paani me karke wahi kinare let gaya……

Mujhe wahi lete hue kab neend aayi kuch pata hi nahi chala or me apni kuch purani yadon me fir se kahi gum ho gaya…..

Pata nahi aksar jab bhi me pareshan hota hu.. mujhe ye purani yadein gher leti hai…or mujhe bahut dard dekar chali jaati hai….
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Ek sunsan raat me ek ladka jiski umar jyada nahi lag rahi thi vo ek sunsan raste par chala Jaa raha tha….
Use dekh kar lag raha tha shayad bahut waqt se bhuka tha vo…. Kuch der baad jaise jaise uske kadam aage ki aur badh rahe the uski aankho me andhera or gehrane laga….
Or thodi hi door jaa kar vo gir pada…..

Use jab hosh aya to vo ek choti si jagah par tha aas paas dekha to paya laga ye koi sunsan sadak ka footpath tha….par….par sawal ye tha ki use yaha laya kon….usne uth kar apne pass baithe do uski hi ham umar ladko ko dekha……

Ladka: kon ho tum…or me yaha…

Ladka 1: ham laye h tumhe yaha…tum sadak ke bicho bich pade the…

Ladka 2: rehte kaha ho…tum ananth to nahi lagte….

Ladka : ab shakal se kaha pata chalta hai bhai….ab kismat hai to bhogni to padegi…

Ladka 1 : mai Karan or ye Rishi hai…agar tum chaho to yaha reh sakte ho….

Ladka : shukriya dost….

Aur vo ladka bhi unke sath hi ghul mil gaya….or inme ek gehra rishta ban gaya jo shayad khun ke rishte se bhi majboot tha….
Ye tino rooj roj kisi na kisi kaam ki talash me nikalte or laut aate….inke khane ka intezam philhal ek mandir me tha jaha ek bade sant aaye hue the.…

Rishi or karan yaha ke nahi the inko kisi or jagah se kisi giroh ne agua kar liya tha or jab inhe yaha laya gaya….to badi hi chalaki se ye dono waha se bach nikle the….

Fir vo ladka inki jindagi me aya or teeno bhai ki tarah rehne lage the….par shayad abhi bhi inke sath bahut kuch hona baaki tha….or ek din….

Roj ki tarah kaam ki talash karke jab ye mandir me Prasad lene pahuche to ek aadmi ki nazar us ladke par pad gayi or usne uska picha kiya to dekha ki vo log Prasad lekar mandir ke piche Jaa rahe hai….

Us aadmi ki aankho me ye saaf jhalak raha tha ki us ladke ko vo jaanta hai….

Jab teeno piche pahuch kar Prasad kha rahe the to achanak se us ladke ki nazar kahi Jaa kar thahar jaati hai….or vo us aadmi ki or dekhne lagta hai….

Aadmi : to tu yaha hai…akhir kaha kaha nahi dhundha tujhe…

Vo ladka or Karan or Rishi bas chup the…. vo samjh nahi pa rahe the ki ye ho kya raha hai…ki tabhi..

Aadmi : chalo koi baat nahi adhura kaam ab ho jaega…..

Itna keh kar usne apne paas rakhi pistol nikal kar chala di….

Or bas do awaaz gunj gayi

Ladka : mamaa….

Karan : Rishi……

Ladke ne dekha ki uske dost ne bich me aakar uske liye chalai hui goli ko apne sine me le liya or lehrata hua niche gir pada….. awaaz inti jor ki thi ki log piche aa gaye …. lekin tab tak vo aadmi gayab ho chuka tha …

Rishi ki saase abhi tak chal rahi thi….to karan or vo ladka Rishi ko utha kar bahar ki or bhaagne lage….

Rishi : k…karan..tu apna or mere bhai ka dhyan rakhna yrr….

Karan: bhai kuch nahi hoga tujhe….bas kuch der ruk jaa…

Rishi : b..bhai …..ab shayad me or na hi pau…. agar tumhe kabhi mauka mile to meri maa ko mil aana…. bahut yaad karti ho…..

Bas ye akhri shabd the Rishi ke…



"Rishiiiii….." mai cheekhte hue uth gaya tha…..





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Update-10​

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Mai abhi apne bed par sone ke liye let gaya tha…. lekin mere Jehan me bas ek hi sawal tha….

"Aunty ne mujhe toka kyu nahi tha…..aakhir itni der maine vo sab kiya phir bhi….phir bhi vo vaise hi khadi thi vaha…."


Abb aage…..

Yaha ab teen logo ki zindagi aaj kuch had tak badal gayi thi….

Ek aur jaha siya aaj bahut khush thi….kyunki use uska pyar mil gaya tha….abhi kuch din pehle Avinash ke chale jaane se siya ka pyar Avinash ke liye or badh gaya tha….aur ab vo kisi bhi keemat par Avinash ko khona nahi chahti thi….. lekin….

Lekin kehte hai na ki pyar insaan ko pagal banane lagta hai…. theek usi tarah ab siya ke man me ek sawal aa gaya tha….ab ye sawal kya hai or iska jawab siya ko kis se milega ye pata chal jaega….

Or dusri taraf Suman ko bechari bahut pareshan thi….usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki jeevan ke is padav par aa kar use aisi situation ka samna karna padega…..
Aakhir Suman itne saalo se khud ke man or jism ko sambhalti aa rahi thi….par ab kuch kuch halat badal chuke the….
Avinash ne jab us din apne room mein Suman ko apni baahon me bhara hua tha vo drishya reh reh kar use yaad aa raha tha…
fir Suman ko vo bhi yaad aane laga ki kaise uska shareer ko jab Avinash ne apne aagosh me liya hua tha tab Suman ka shareer andar se pighalne laga tha….

Or fir bhi…..fir bhi Suman ne khud ko abhi tak sambhala hi hua tha…..par aaj jo hua vo in sabse pare tha…vo apne mulayam rasile hontho par abhi reh reh kar Avinash ke garam hotho ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi…. Suman ki yoni se behte kaamras ne use samjha Diya tha ki ab Avinash ki jaroorat hai Suman ko….

Par jab usne siya ka naam sina…..to uske sare vichar usko kahi dhumil se hote nazar aane lage….. lekin ab apne man mein uthe is bavandar ko bhi filhaal sambhalna mushkil ho raha tha…ab Suman ne sab kuch waqt ke hawale kar diya or gehri neend me khone lagi…..

Mujhe apne aap par sharam aa rahi thi…..mai siya se pyar karta hu aur ab yaha aunty ke sath hua hadsa mujhe andar se jala raha tha…..
Maine faisla kar liya tha ki ab mai aunty se duri banakar rakhunga….. lekin….

Lekin kuch sawalo ke jawab mujhe bhi chahiye the….ki jab maine aunty ke labon ko apne muh me lekar choosa tha…to unke sharir ki pratikriya mere is kaam ka saath dene wali thi …mujhe Zara bhi nahi laga ki aunty dur ho rahi ho ….
To kya kuch aisa hai jo mujhe nahi pata hai…sawal bahut hai or jawab sirf aunty ke hi pas hai….

Mai subah utha or apni exercise karke nahane chala gaya….fir taiyar ho kar niche pahuch gaya…darwaza knock kiya…
Is baar darwaza Suman aunty ne khola tha….
Hamari nazre mili or fir vo andar chali gayi….. mujhe ek baar fir kal ka hadsa yaad aa gaya tha….

"Bhaiya andar aa jao na…kab tak bahar hi khade rahoge…."Nikita ki baat ko sun kar me vartman me lauta or andar ja kar dining table par baith gaya sabke sath….

Siya naashta paros rahi thi….or ye kya…..are ye aunty to mujhe hi ghoor rahi hai…maine jaldi se apni nazre niche ki aur nashte par dhyan laga liya…..

Yaha Suman bas mujhe or siya ko hi dekh rahi thi…vo bhi bade gaur se…. mujhe ek pal ko esa laga jaise aunty siya se jal rahi ho….par apni gandi or Kam akal soch ko yahi dafna kar mai fir nashta karne laga ….

Nashte ke baad mai or siya meri wali bike par baith kar college ki aur nikal gaye….is poore samay me aunty ki nazar mere or siya ki hi taraf thi…..

Kuch door jaate hi siya ne apne haatho ko faila kar mujhe piche se apni baahon me le liya….or apna sar meri peeth par tika liya….

Iske aage bas duniya ka koi mol nahi reh gaya tha ab….meri premika ka mujhe is kadar apni baahon me jakda hua hona hi mujhe ek anokha sukh pradan kar raha tha…
Is waqt siya ka upari sharir pura meri peeth se laga hua tha …
na vo kuch keh rahi thi…na mai kuch sun na chahta tha…..ye khamoshi hum dono ke beech bahut sukun de rahi thi…

Kuch hi der me hum college pahuch gaye….mai nira chutiya ho chala tha ab….mai radhika ko bhi bhul gaya tha….
Jab hum college pahuche to radhika bhi abhi apni car se utar hi rhi thi…..hamari nazre mili or jab usne siya ko mere itne pass dekha to nazre fer kar canteen ki or chali gayi…..

"Are tum kaha chale…class ka time ho hi gaya hai…." Siya ne mujhe canteen ki or jaate hue dekh kar kaha….

"Bas kuch der me aa jaunga…ek dost se milna hai…." Maine itna kaha to usne ishare me gardan hila kar haa kaha or aag badh gayi…
Or mai canteen ki or bhag kar pahucha…

" Hi radhika…"Maine radhika se kaha uske samne padi chair par baithte hue…

"Hi…" itna javab de kar vo apne phone me kuch karne lagi….

"Kaisi ho yrr…bahut dino baad dekha…"maine baat ko badhane ke uddeshya se kaha…

Usne meri or dekha or muskura kar kaha "bas bahut jyada busy thi na…to time hi nahi Mila…"

Mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki ye ab taana maar rahi hai….
"Are tumhe pata to chal hi gaya hoga na…ki company ke kaam se bahar gaya tha…fir bhi…gussa ho kya…"maine use manane ke purpose se kaha…

"Ha to…..yu achanak chale gaye the…kam se kam ek message hi kar dete…."radhika me thodi narazgi dikhate hue kaha…

"Acha ab to mai aa gaya hu na…ab se dhyan rakhunga…..vaise tum ne boss par itna gussa karne ki kya jarurat thi….vo keh rahe the ki naukri se nikal bhi sakte hai…"mujhe samjh aa gaya tha ki abhi iska gussa shant karna hai to topic change karna padega…. isliye maine karan ko beech me ghasit liya….

"Tumhare boss ki to….maine us se kitni baar pucha tum kaha gaye ho bata de…par usne saaf mana kar diya….or tum chod kyu nahi dete us jagah ko…"radhika ne shikayat bhare lehze me kaha…

"Are ab agar kaam nahi karunga to khaunga kya…or abhi filhal yehi job mil sakti thi…"maine kaha..

"Tumhe bas job se matlab hai na…"usne kaha…

Maine haa me gardan hila diya..

"Theek hai aaj se tum hamari company me kaam karoge….ab mana mat kar dena…"usne kaha aur meri jaan ka intezar karne lagi…

"Par tumhare papa kuch kahenge nahi kya…mera matlab kisi anjaan ko is tarah se job par rakhna…" maine use kaha…

"Tum na ab maar khaoge….tum koi dusre thodi na ho….or bas ab tum hamare yaha hi kaam karoge ye final ho gaya…mai papa ko bol dungi…."usne kaha..

"Theek hai chalo dekhte hai kya karna hai…chalo class chalte hai…."maine kaha aur uska hath pakad kar chal diya….

Mai shayad bhul gaya tha kuch…lekin ab kya hi kar sakte hai…

Mai siya ko bhul gaya tha….ki agar usne ab hume saath dekha to mera kya hoga…

Hum jaise hi class me enter hue to meri or siya ki nazar takrayi or firne usne mera haath dekha Radhika ke haath me….or mujhe gusse se ghurne lagi…

Idhar radhika mera hath pakad kar mujhe piche le ja kar mere sath baith gayi…ab maine ek lambi saans li ki haash bach gaye…. lekin….siya bhi ab mere bagal me hi aakar baith gayi…

Ab mai dono side se radhika or siya se ghira hua tha…
Radhika ne mera haath jise thama hua use siya ke aage kar ke dikhane lagi….
Or fir siya ne bhi mera dusra haath pakad liya…

Undono me ek race shuru ho gayi thi…par me to fas chuka tha….ab mujhe kuch na sujha to maine bathroom ka bahana banaya aur bahar aa gaya…

Mere class se jaane ke baad…
Radhika: hi siya…kaisi ho…

Siya : achi hu ab tak to…

Radhika: ye mai kab se dekh rahi thi tumne Avinash ka haath pakda hua tha….

Siya : ha to…aur mujhe bhi yahi puchna tha….tumne Avinash ka haath kyu pakda hua tha…

Radhika : ooo madam….hum ache dost hai ..aur tum kyu puch rahi ho ye…

Siya : vo mera bhi dost hai…or tumse jyada samay vo mere sath rehta hai…to tum uss se thoda dur raho….samjhi….

Itna keh kar siya aage chali gayi or yaha radhika ke dimag me alag hi khurafati shuru ho gayi….

Mai jab class me aya to waha sirf radhika thi….maine chain ki saans li or uske bagal me jaa kar baith gaya…..

"Suno aaj college ke baad mere ghar aana hai tumhe theek hai na…. aur koi bahana banaya to kher nahi…."siya ne itna kaha or college se chali gayi….

Mujhe samjh nahi aya ki aakhir kya hone wala hai…

Wahi college ka time khatam hote hi mai or siya ghar ki aur nikal gaye….

"Tum radhika ko kaise jante ho…" siya ne achanak se ye sawal mujhse puch liya…

"Actually hamari bas friendship hui thi or ab vo mujhe naukri bhi dene wali hai…to bas isliye sath me the hum…”maine safai di ..

"Chalo koi baat nahi bas us se door rehne ki koshish karna..ye bade ghar ki ladkiya badi bigdi hui hoti hai…"siya ne mujhe samjhate hue kaha…

Maine bhi haa me gardan hila di….

Hum ghar pahuche aur saath me khana khaya or fir me kuch der aram karne room me aa gaya….

Abhi mujhe kuch hi samay hua tha aram karte hue ki mera mobile bajne laga…
Radhika ka call aya tha….

"Ha yrr kaha reh gaye tum…mai kab se intezar kar rahi hu…."mere phone uthate hi usne shikayat karna shuru kar diya….

"Are thoda ruk jao yrr….mai bas nikal hi raha hu…. bhook lagi thi to kuch khane baith gaya tha na.." maine kaha…..

Fir bas mai bik utha kar Radhika ke ghar ke liye nikal gaya….
Waha pahuch kar bike bahar hi park par di…or aram se chalte hue andar jaane lag…

Mai jaise jaise andar ki aur badh raha tha…mujhe mera bachpan yaad aa raha tha….meri maa ka pyar….hamara hasta khelta pariwar nazar aane laga….

Mai abhi andar jaa hi raha tha ki mujhe andar se ek aadmi aata hua dikhai diye….ye or koi nahi Mera baap tha…..

"Kaho kis se milna hai….vaise maine shayad tumhe kahin dekha hai…."Rajesh ne kaha..

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Rishi : b..bhai …..ab shayad me or na hi pau…. agar tumhe kabhi mauka mile to meri maa ko mil aana…. bahut yaad karti ho…..

Bas ye akhri shabd the Rishi ke…



"Rishiiiii….." mai cheekhte hue uth gaya tha…..


Ab aage….

Sahi kehte hai log ki aksar apno se jyada rishte gair nibha jate hai….mai bachpan se ab tak bahut si mushkile…. bahut se dard jhel chuka tha…

Par….par ek aisi ghatna jo jab bhi yaad aati thi…dil me ek tees si uthne lagti thi…..

Rishi , mai or karan un dino kuch hi samay me bahut pass aa chuke the….hum bhaiyon ki tarah rehne lage…..par….

Kismat badi hi bewafaa hoti hai….jab apni ne saath chod diya tha….duniya bojh ki nazar se dekhne lagi thi or mai shayad jab sabse jyada lachar tha….tab ye hi do the jinhone mujhe thama tha ….

Lekin fir achanak sab badal gaya….

Rishi ke jaane ke baad jab waha bheed ikatha hui….to waha mandir me jo sant aye the un tak bhi ye baat pahuch gayi thi….vo apna sabhi kaam chod kar bahar aye or hamare saath khade hue….

Unhe sab baba hi kehte the…
Us waqt unhone Rishi ke liye ek baap ka farj nibha kar ek sandesh diya ki duniya me sab apne hi hai…
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Raat ko us bhayankar manzar ko apne sapne me dekhne ke baad mai ek baar fir wahi ghat par let kar sone ka prayas karne laga….
Mujhe pata tha ki jo sukun mujhe yaha milta hai vo shayad ashram ki us chat diwari me bhi nahi milta…..

Subah kisi ke uthane par me utha…or uthane wale ka chehra dekhkar meri aankhon me paani or hothon par muskan apne aap hi aa gayi…..

"Baba…."maine uthte hue us shaqs ko dekhkar kaha

"Ha avi…mujhe jaise hi pata chala ki tum ashram aye ho to me tumse milne tumhare kamre tak aaya tha….par raat ko jab tum laute hi nahi to mai bhi yahi chala aaya bhor me…."baba ne kaha

Mai aage badh kar baba ke gale lag gaya aakhir mere liye apne pita se bhi badhkar the ye….

Ham ashram laute aur mai naha dho kar baba ke sath nashta karna chal diya….
Kuch hi der me baba or mai ek dusre ke saamne baithe naashta kar rahe the…

"Kya hua hai….tum bujhe bujhe se pratit ho rahe ho…." Baba meri hi or dekh rahe the nashta karte hue..

"Hmm..nahi baba sab theek hai….bas waha dill ghabrane laga tha….to yaha chala aaya…" mai bhi ab sambhal chuka tha….

"Mujhe pata hai….tum apni pareshani mujhe nahi bataoge…mujhe bas tumhari chinta hoti hai….apna khayal rakhna…"baba thode chintit ho gaye the mujhe yu paresha dekhkar….

" Mai bas itne dino baad apne shahar gaya tha….to purani yadein gher rahi thi mujhe.." mujhe laga abhi yahi kehna theek hai …

" Beta tum mere sabse kareeb rahe ho…maine tumhe zindagi ke sabhi path padhaye hai…bas unhi ka anusaran karo tumhari saari pareshaniya door hoti jaengi….or rahi baat yaadon ki to bas abhi ke liye itna samjh lo ki yaadein insan ke paida hote hi banna shuru ho jaani hai…or maran ke pashchat hi hum isse nijat paa sakte hai…"baba ne mujhe samjhate hue kaha….or uth kar chale gaye….abhi unki sadhna ka samay ho chala tha….

Bas isi tarah Mera ye din nikal gaya….maine yaha aate hue karan ko sab bata diya tha….use dukh hua…. par ab kya kar sakta hai vo bechara….

Maine yaha pahuchte hi apna no. band kar diya tha….
Or mai yahi aashram ke kaam or subah or shaam ghat par baith kar bitane laga…..
Ab mere man me phir se sthirta aane lagi thi….isi beech ab baba ke kahe anusar maine bhi dhyan lagana shuru kar diya tha…..

Such pucho to mai yaha aakar duniya ko bhul hi chuka tha….ab acha lag raha tha mujhe…
Or isi tarah din beetne lage…

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Wahi dusri or jab mai waha se nikla chuka tha….tab mera message dekh kar Suman ghabra gayi thi….ki achanak se Avinash ko kya ho gaya hai….

Jab raat ko sabhi khane par aye… to siya ne dekha ki uski maa ka dhyan kahi aur hai….

" Maa…." Siya ne ye kehte hue apni maa ke kande par jaise hi hath rakha waise hi Suman ka dhyan toota….

" H..haa…kya hua…. chalo jaldi se khane ke liye baitho…ami bas abhi ayi…" Suman apni baat keh kar kitchen me chali gayi or khana lagane lagi….

Kuch der baad sabhi khana kha rahe the tabhi …
" Maa bhaiya ko khana bhijwa diya kya…. agar nahi bhijwaya hai to me chali jaati hu…isi bahane chat par ghum aaungi thoda…."Nikita ne apni maa se khana khate hue kaha…

Achaanak is baat se siya ko kuch aya to usne bich me kaha.."nahi choti tu aise hi ghoom aa mai le jaati hu khana…mujhe college ka kuch kaam bhi hai…"

" Ye kya laga rakha hai tumne mai jaungi..mai jaungi….chup karke khaana Khao or apna apna kaam karo" achanak se Suman irritate ho kar bol padti hai….

" Par maa vo bhaiya…"Nikita bi abhi itna kaha hi tha ki Suman beech me hi bol padi…

" Chala gaya vo yaha se…pata nahi ek to kuch bataya bhi nahi or ab…..chalo chodo" Suman ke itna kehne se Nikita or siya samajh chuki thi…ki unki maa ka mood kharab hai….

Fir sab khana kha kar apne kamre me chale gaye….wahi Suman ka jee nahi lag raha tha…itne din Avinash ke sath use jo apnapan lagne laga tha uske kaaran…..ab Avinash ki kami use khal Rahi thi….rasoi me khane ke baad bartan sahi se rakhte hue ab vo khud se baate kar rahi thi….

"Kahi Avinash meri wajah se….nahi nahi vaise bhi itne din se to vo normal hi lag raha tha….. lekin kahi vo mera intezar kar raha ho….or mere jawab na dene ke kaaran…..chii mai bhi pata nahi kya kya sochne lagi hu…."

" Maa…." Achanak siya rasoi me aati hui apni maa ko aawaz deti hai…

" Ha bol siya …tu sone nahi gayi abhi tak…"Suman apna kaam karte hue siya se puchti hai…

" Mai to bas ye puch rahi thi ki Avinash kab tak aane ka keh ke gaya hai…"siya apni maa ke bagal me khadi ho kar apni maa se puchti hai..

"Naam mat le ab uska…na jaane khudko kya samajhta hai…. achanak se koi is tarah jaata hai bhala…hmm…bata mujhe…par nahi use kya farak padta hai…."bas isi ki deri thi yaha…jaise hi siya ne pucha vaise hi Suman ka gussa bahar aane laga…jo jaane anjaane vo khud ke man me shaam se dabaye baithi thi….

" Us nalayak ne jara bhi nahi socha mer…matlab hamare baare me…. araam se bata sakta tha na kyu jaa raha hai…lekin na kuch kehna na kuch sunna …bas ek message.. or furr…shaam ko message aaya tha sahab jaade ka…."

Suman ke itna kehte hi siya ki haalat kharab hone lagi…use abhas hone laga ki uske jaane ke piche kya karan ho sakta hai….
" Par maa shaam ko hum sath the chat par…use dekh kar laga nahi tha ki use kahi jaana hoga…"siya itna keh kar paani pine chali gayi bahar….

Lekin….lekin Suman ke hath jinme kuch saman thame hui thi vo achanak se girte girte bacha….vo jhat se bahar bhagi…or jaha siya baith kar paani pi rahi thi vo bhi uske bagal me baith gayi….

" Kya hua tha shaam ko….tum dono ke bich kuch hua tha kya…." Suman ne achanak se sawal siya se kar diya….asal me Suman ye soch soch kar dar rahi thi ki sab usi ki wajah se hua hai….vo samjha bhi sakti thi Avinash ko…. lekin lekin ab halaat uske haq se bahar hote nazar aane lage the use….

"Aakhuuu…aakhir…"siyako achanak se khasi aane lagi..

"Are aram se beta…."Suman itna kehkar siya ki peeth par apne haath se sehlane lagi….

Asal me Suman ke sawal se siya dar gayi thi aur pani pine ke samay pani naak me chala gaya to use khasi aane lagi…siya ko bahut dar lagne laga tha ki kahi maa ko sab pata to nahi chal gaya….or siya ab man hi man apni bewakoofi bhari baat par pachtaane lagi….

" Nahi maa vo to normal lag raha tha…bas isliye mai aap se puchne aayi thi….waise message kya kiya hai usne…." Siya ke itna kehte hi Suman fir se khud ko apradhi samajhne lagi thi …

" Beta tu hi dehle mere phone me hai …chal mujhe kaam karna hai mai jaati hu…." Itna keh kar Suman waha se firse rasoi me jaa kar apna kaam karne lagi ..

Or fir jhat se siya ne phone utha liya or message khol kar padhna shuru kiya…"aunty me kuch dino ke liye bahar jaa raha hu….vaise shayad ab me waha nahi aa paunga…me ab apne dost ke sath rehne wala hu….
yaha bada akelapan sa lagne laga hai indino to soch raha tha ki dost ke pass jane se shayad problem solve ho jaye….mera saman rehne dena vo kuch dino me kisi se mangwa lunga waha se…. Thank you aunty mujhe itna pyar dene ke liye…."
Bas itna hi likha tha waha par….

Par itna padhte hue kab siya ki aankho se asruo ki dhara behne lagi ye use bhi pata na chala…

Apne aansuon ko apne gaalo par mehsoos hote hi vo jhat se apne room me chali gayi apna mobile wahi rakh kar….

Ye raat in teen logo ke liye bahut hi lambi ho gayi thi…waha Avinash jo apne bhut or vartman me uski zindagi me hui uthal puthal se khud ko sambhalne ke liye ashram pahunch chuka tha…
Or yaha Suman ke man bhi na jaane reh reh kar kaise kaise khayal aane lage the….
Vo ab khud se hi puchne lagi thi ki aakhir use hua kya hai…
Vo apna kaam jaise taise nipta kar nahane chali gayi thi…kyunki ab uska man asant ho raha tha….use is samay bas ek jawab ka intezar tha ki kya iski wajah uski chuppi thi ya kuch or….

Siya apne room me jaakar apna kamra band karke apna bistar pakad kar let gayi….abhi tak uski aankho ke kinaro se pani ki bunde ris kar uske surkh gaalo se hote hue uske bistar par gire jaa rahi thi ….

Lekin usne in par abhi dhyan dena behtar nahi samjha…. kyuki use sab pata chal chuka tha ki karan wahi hai jo bewakoofi usne chat par ki thi….

Aakhir achanak se Avinash ka tu sidhe kehne se vo ek baar ko chowk gayi thi….fir is baat ko bhi Avinash ke unhi ek mazak me jo ki vo aksar karta tha shamil kar diya tha….

Par ab to jo hona tha vo ho chuka tha….ab shayad vo chala na jaye is dar se siya ki jaan nikali jaa rahi thi….
Siya to bas use pareshan karna chahti thi lekin uska mazak us paar hi itna bhari pad jayega iski umeed na thi siya ko….

" Akhir kya samajhte ho khud ko….bas ek mazak hi to tha na…lekin tum kaha samjhoge…bas galat soch liya mujhe aur nikal gaye….
tumhe meri aankhon me meri muhabbat nazar hi nahi ayi kya….meri bhi galti hai….kitna haseen mausam tha us samay…bechare be kaise mushkil se kaha tha….or me pagal has rahi thi…. please avi….bas ek baar….ek baar mujhse mil lo wada hai mera ki tumhari saari shikayat dur ho jayegi….."
Itna kehte hue apna muh takiye me daba kar siya chup chap rone lagi….akhir kar bhi kya sakti thi……

Abhi raat ke 12 baj rahe the….siya rote hue so gayi thi or apni Nikita ko in sab halat ka kuch pata hi nahi tha…
Wahi Suman karwat badal badal kar pareshan ho gayi thi….to akhir kar usne chat par jaane ka tay kiya…..ek baar sabhi ka room dekhkar Suman chup chap chat ki or chali gayi….

Chat par jaate hue use achanak Avinash ke room me jaane ka vichar aaya….yu bina kisi ki agya ke uski gair upasthiti me kisi ke room me jana galat tha….par ab Suman ko kuch nahi sujha to vo badh chali udhar….. lekin yaha to tala tha….
Uska chehra ye dekh kar utar gaya tha….par jald hi use yaad aya ki is taale ki ek or chabi hai….isne wahi rakhe gamle ke niche dungha to use vo waha mil gayi…..

Suman ne andar ja kar andar se darwaza laga liya…or bedroom ki or chaldi…. bedroom me pahunchte hi use vo din yaad aa gaya….jab vo sab hua tha……

Or na chahte hue bhi Suman ki aakhe apne aap hi band ho gayi… or use waha wahi sugandh aane lagi jo us din Avinash ke jism se pure room me fail rahi thi…..
Dheere dheere Suman ki saase tej ho gayi use lag raha tha ki uski makhmali gardan par abhi bhi Avinash apne hoth tikaye apni saas chod raha hai….

Thodi hi der me bahar kuch awaz ayi to Suman apne khayalo se bahar aa gayi….or Avinash ki almari ki or kadam badha diye….vo is pal shayad Avinash ki kami ko door karne ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Us din jo hua us haadse ki wajah se Suman ka sharir ek baar fir pyar mangne laga tha…..akhir unke shareer ki bhi kya galti…

ab usne itne saalo baad ye mehsoos kiya tha to khud kar kaabi rakhna mushkil ho raha tha use….
lekin jab aaj achanak se Avinash chala gaya to use samajh aa chuka tha ki ab shayad Suman ko bhi pehal karni hi padegi… warna vo aise hi tadapte hue hi mar jayegi….

Suman Avinash ki almari me rakhe uske kapdo ko chukar dekh rahi thi….ab use thodi rahat mehsoos ho rahi thi…..

Lekin achanak….Suman ko kuch dikha….
Suman ne dekha us almari me kuch kagaz rakhe the….jinpar Suman ka naam likha hua tha….aage padhne par use pata chal gaya ki ye uske hi ghar ke kagaz hai…..






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