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Ye Kahani aapko pasand aa rahi hai?

  • Ha

    Votes: 120 94.5%
  • Na

    Votes: 7 5.5%

  • Total voters
    127
  • Poll closed .

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UPDATE 45 (LAST UPDATE)

Recap -

Kher Aanchal ka program cancel ho gaya aur hum dono haato me haath dale aane wali zindagi ke sukhad sapne bunne lage aur bunte-bunte neend ki wadio ke kho gaye.


Ab aage -

Raat ke ek peher behad tevr shoor se meri aankh khul gai, mere saath aanchal ki bhi neend tut gai, dhyan se sune par mehsus hua wo ek helicopter ki awaz thi, mujhe laga Randhir ki team hamare rescue ke liye ponch gai he, me aur Aanchu bhagte hue Niti ke room me ponche jaha Niti light band karke khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi, hamre aane ka aabhas hote hi unse chup rehene ka ishara kiya aur hame nazdeek aane ko bola.

ME
Niti lagta he Randhir ki team aa gai hame bachane
(me dhere se fusfusaya)

Niti ne meri aur dekha.

NITI
Nahi Raj mujhe to kuch gadbad lagti he, mene abhi dekha bahut se logo ne ghar ko charo aur se gherna shuru kar diya aur aesa koi bachane wala to nahi karega.

Niti ki baat sunker me ghabra gaya, agar ye Randhir and company nahi to...zarur RAKA hoga.

Niti aur meri nazre char hui.

NITI
Ye zarur Raka he, use malum pad gaya hamara pata

Mene bhi sehmati me gardan hilai.

ME
To hame bhagna hoga

NITI
Kaise? Car samne khadi he jaha uske log mozood he, hame chupna hoga turant.

Mene sehmati jatlai aur fir Niti ke sujhav ke mutabeek ghar me sabse safe jagah ek hi thi wo KAMRA. Me aur Aanchal ne Niti ko shara dekar us kamre ki aur bad chale, abhi hum living room adha hi cross kiye the ki, baher se us budhe uncle ki ek tezz awaz aai “Kon ho tum?” Aur fir ek goli ki ziske baad us budhe uncle ki koi awaz nahi aai.

Hum ab sure ho gaye ye Raka ke log he, hum log tezi se neeche basement me ponche aur uska door band kar liya, basement ka door kafi mazboot tha jo aasani se nahi tutta.

Basement ka gate band hote hi hame ghar ka main gate tutne ki aawaz aai aur fir bahut sare juto ki mano bahut sare log ander dakhil ho gaye ho, hum log abhi aur kuch karte ya sochte ki meri wrist watch eek bar aur vibrate hui, mene dekha is baar call dusre number se thi, mujhe Randhir ne mana kiya tha ki kabhi bhi kisi dusre number call na uthau, par apni instict par barosa karke mene is baar call utha li.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj sukr he tumne call utha li, wo phele wala communication channel Raka ke logo ne crack Kar liya, udher sab theek to hena hame kuch helicopter udher aate dikai diye?

Mene sara ghatna karm use bata diya jiske baad wo bhi tension me aa gaya,

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj tum logo ko waha se nikalna hoga kaise bhi, hume waha tak ponchne ke kuch time lagega aur mujhe doubt he itni der tak wo darwaza tumhe nahi bacha payega

Randhir ki baat ne ghabrahat aur badha di.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Me ek map tumhari watch par send kar raha hu. Ise kaise bhi follow karke waha aa jao waha hamari reach he aur ham tum logo ko rescue kar sakte he

Randhir ne apna sujhav to de diya par ab jo bhi karna tha hame hi karna tha. Mene use bola ki hum kosis karte he ab zindagi par to hamari bani thi to himat bhi hame hi karni thi.

Ye baate mere saath dono ladkiya bhi sun rahi thi, mene bari bari dono ki aur dekha, Aanchal ke chere ki hawaiya udi thi wahi Niti ka chera ek dum sapat tha.

Mere dekhane ke baad Niti ne charo aur room me nazar dodai.

NITI
Ye khidki bahar bhagne ke kaam aa sakti he

Mene us aur nazar dali to waha ek choti si khidki thi jo peeche lawn me nikalti thi.

ME
Lekin agar hum ise tod ke bahar niklenge to un logo ko pata chal jayega

Meri baat sunker Niti hole se muskai.

NITI
Hum sab ise bahar nahi niklenge...

Mene chok kar uski aur dekha aur yehi pratikriya Aanchal ki bhi thi.

ME
Matalb...
(wo chalti hui un guns aur hand grenade ke paas ponchi)
Tum log niklo unhe me dekhlungi

Uski baat ko hum samaj gaye, aur Aanchal turant lapak kar uski aur badhi.

AANCHAL
Nahi Niti me aesa nahi karne dugi

Niti ne muskurate hue uski aur dekha aur fir hola sa Aanchal ke dono gal apni hatelio me tham liye.

NITI
Aanchal meri jaan pyaar kurbani ka naam he, aur tum dono ke pyaar ke liye ye kurbani meri hogi hihihi

Niti ne has kar use bola, par uske is pavitr tyaag ki baat sunker Aanchal ka rona fut pada.

AANCHAL
Nahi na Niti please aesa mat bol, me tujhe nahi kho sakti
(rote hue boli)

Niti ne pyaar se uske aansu ponche.

NITI
Aanchal emotional nahi practical hoke soch, agar hum teeno yaha se sahi salamet nikal bhi gaye to me chal nahi pati tum log mujhe kaha tak khichoge
(fir se ek bar aanchal ke aansu ponche)
Aur apni maut ka mujhe koi dukh nahi he, dukh mujhe is baat ka hoga ki tum dono ka pyaar parwa nahi chad paya, aur ye dukh me nahi jhel paungi

Muskurate hue Niti boli.

NITI
Aur tum dono ke liye agar mujse meri jaan mangi ja rahi re to tum logo ki jaan ke samne is jaan ki keemat kuch nahi
(fir dhere se muskai)
Aur wese bhi is zindagi me mene jo kiya use mujhe dukh hi mila, aaj kuch karne agar mujhe kuch khusi mil rahi he to mujhe kar lene de please.

Aanchal bas aansu bahate hue use sunyta me ghure ja rahi thi.

Aanchal se mukhabit hoker Niti, Aanchal ka haath thame meri aur badhi aur mera hath apne hato me lekar, Aanchal ka haath mere hato me rakh diya.

NITI
Iska dhyan rakhna, kabhi dukh mat phochana, ab jao dono

Me achraz se Niti ko dekhti raha, kitni aasani se apni jaan hamper kurban karne ko wo tyaar ho gai, me samjha tha ki shayad me Niti ko jaan gaya hu par aaj malum pada me use jitna janta wo utni gheri hoti chali jati, Niti ke is nischal tyaag ne mera sar uske pere me jhuka diya, Niti ne mujhe neeche jhukne se roka aur pyaar se mere gaal shela kar mujhe zald nikalne ka ishara kar diya.

Aur khud mudker do hand grenade apne ek haath me le liye aur aur dusre haath me ek automatic gun. Tabhi basement ke darwaza zor se bajne laga.

NITI
Niklo tum dono...

Niti zor se chilai aur langdate hue seedhiya chadker basement ke darwaze par ponch gai, dusri aur Raka ke log darwaza todne ki puri kosis kar rahe the, mene bhi side me padi ek kursi se wo kanch ki khidki tod di, aur Aanchal ko uthakar use bahar nikal diya, jate-jate bhi Aanchal ki nazre Niti ko dekh rahi thi jo muskan liye Anchal ko aankho se alvida bol rahi thi.

Fir me bhi us khidki par chad gaya aur ek akhiri baar Niti ko dekha, aur mere mann me bas yehi khyaal tha ki me tumhe kabhi nahi bhulunga Niti, Niti ne pata nahi mere mann ki baat padi ya nahi par palko ko jhuka-kar apni razamandi aur alvida ek saath bol diya aur me khidki se bahar aa gaya, aur Aanchal ka haath thaame Randhir ke batayi jagah ki aur dod pada.

Peeche room me do pal baad ek zordar dhamaka hua jo is baat ka sabut tha Niti ne apni dosti ka farz ada kar diya.

INT. FARMHOUSE - AFTER BLAST

Ek admi dodta hue ek shaks ke paas poncha.

ADMI
Raka sir aap theek he

Raka jo blast se phele gate ke paas tha blast ke baad ud kar dur ja gira. Uska baya haath fat gaya tha aur khoon betasha beh raha tha.

Admi ke haal chaal puchne par wo kuch sambhala aur uth kar kahada ho gaya.

RAKA
Me theek hu ander jake dekho kon-kon bacha he

Jiske baad wo admi apne saath kuch zinda bache logo ko lekar basement me dakheel hua, waha jaker wo marza samaj gaya aur bahar aaker Raka ko report di.

ADMI
Sir waha hame ek ki hi lash ke cheethde mili baki do shayad peeche ki khidki se bhag nikle

Ye sunker Raka ka gussa seema lang gaya usne apne sahi haath se uska gala tham liya aur fir use peeche dhakel kar apni bandook se use chalni kar diya.

RAKA
Kanha, agar wo chethde ek key he to uska barcode dhundo abhi

Kanha unki baat sunker ander gaya jaha Niti ke jism ke tukde fela hue the, vaha use ek taraf Niti ka ek haath pada mila jisper barcode sahi salamt tha, Kanha ki direction ke mutabik unhone wo hath Nitogen container me rakh diya jise uske cell freeze hoker dead na ho aur wo use lock kholne me kaam la sake.

Vapas aaker Kanha ne sari baat Raka ko bata di.

RAKA
Matlab bas ek key bachi he dhundne ko, zaldi chalo zada dur nahi nikle honge wo log

EXT. SOMEWHERE IN JUNGLE - LATER

Me Aanchal ka haath thama betasha Randhir ki batai location ki aur bhag raha tha, raat ke bheeshm andhere me aage kuch nahi dikahi pad raha par jaan bachane ke kahtir bahage ja rahe the, tabhi watch par ek call ayaa.

Mene bhagte-bhagte wo pick kiya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Kaha ho raj tum?

Mene use bata diya ki hum log uski batai jagah ki aur aa rahe he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Theek he waha hamre kuch log tumhe milenge, me bhi apni team ke saath farmhouse par ponchane wala hu, tum zaldi waha poncho.

Uski baat sunker mene call cut kar di aur fir bhagne laga, kafi der dodne ke baad hame jungle ke dusri aur ek sadak dikhi jiske dusri aur ek khai thi waha se halki-halki roshni aa rahi thi jise malum ho raha tha ki suraj nikalne wala he aur waha kuch log khade the, shayad wo log Randhir ke admi the, unhe dekhkar hamari khusi ki koi intaha nahi thi.

Ham us jungle ke akhiri ped ko par karke bahar aaye hi thi Aanchal ke muh se ek dardnaak cheenkh nikli, mene uski aur dekha to wo zameen par girne wali thi, dhyaan dene par pata chala ki uski kamar se khun aa raha tha, abhi me uska karan soch raha tha ki ek goli saye se karti hui meri side wale ped par lagi, me mamla samaj gaya ki Raka ke log ponch chuke he Aanchal ke liye.

Ye baat mene hi nahi Randhir ke un aadmio ne bhi dekh li thi wo hame bachane hamari aur lapke, aur me waqt na javate hue Aanchal ko baho me bharke Randhir ke aadmio ki aur bhaga.

Do pal ke baad Randhir ke aadmio ne position le li aur ek admi ne hame uske saath aane ko bola, bakio ne hame cover fire di, golio ki bochare dono aur se bhayanak ho rahi thi.

Us admi ne hame ek car me betha diya aur bola ki yaha se na nikle, Aanchal dard me karha rahi thi uske uper ek behoshi si cha gai thi, aur meri aankho se Aanchu ki ye halat dekhkar pani behene laga tha, me bas pararthana kar raha tha ki please Aanchu ko kuch na ho.

Meri soch ko viram ek awaz ne di meni car ki khidki ki aur dekha to jo admi hame abhi betha ke gaya tha uska bheza ab car ki window par fel gaya, ye dekhkar mere praan sukh gaye, fir kuch palo ke baad sari gola bari band ho gai, mene iska karan jane ke liye window se bahar dekha to mujhe Raka apne admio ke saath us jungle se aata nazar aaya.

Wo seedha hamari car ki aur hi aa raah tha, aur me use stabdh sa dekh raha tha kuch hi palo ke baad wo car ke paas tha, usne ishare se ek admi ko kuch bola to us admi ne car ka darwaza ek jhatke me khol diya aur gun seedha mujpe tan di. Fir dusri aur se car ka darwaza khula aur ek admi ne mujhe bahar kheech liya aur mujhe ghutno par betha kar gun mere sar par laga di.

Me dekh raha tha do log car se behosh ho chuki Aanchal ko utha kar ek dusri car me rakh rahe the, meri aankho ke samne wo meri zindagi ko le jane wale the, ye khayal aate hi mere jism me ek bizli si kondh gai aur akasmat mera dhyan mere sar par gun rakhe admi ki belt par pada jaha usne ek dusri gun rakhi thi.

Agle hi pal us admi ki laash zameen par padi thi, goli chalte he Raka ne palat kar meri aur dekha aur agle hi pal mene Raka par goli chala di par uski kismat achi thi kyuki uske side me khade admi se use apni aur kheech liya aur goli uske daye taraf chati par lagi.

Ye dekhte hi Raka ke paas kahde admi ne meri aur goli chalai par tab tab me car ka cover ke chuka tha, ab ek taraf wo admi Raka ko sambhalte hue goliya mujpe chala raha tha aur ek taraf me car ka cover liye usper goliya chala raha tha, achanak se meri gun jam ho gai, me car ke peeche hoker use sahi kar hi raha tha ki kisi ne peeche se ek zordar laat meri kamar par mari aur me car ki oot se bahar aa gira, peecha mudker dekha to wo khun se latpat Raka tha.

RAKA
Bahut ho gaya

Ye bolte hi usne gun meri aur tan di.

Meri nazro ke samne bas ek chera ter raha tha bas Aanchu ka aur wo wada kano me gunj raha tha jo mene Niti se kiya tha Aanchal ka khyal rakhne ka. Par shayad kainaat ko ye manzoor nahi tha ki hamara milan is jeevan me ho, me ye sab sochker apni gardan jhuka li aur man me bas yehi bola “I’M SOORY AANCHU”.

Ki tabhi teen goliya chali aur jab tak me gardan utha kar dekhat ek saya mera sar ke uper se kudta hua Raka ke uper jhapta, me turant khada hoker isthiti ka jayeja liya to paya Randhir apni team ke saath aa poncha aur uske logo ne Raka ke admio ko golio se hamesha ke liye sula diya aur Randhir Raka ke uper rakshas ki tarah tut pada.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Pechana Raka

Mene Raka ke chere ki aur dekha uske chere ki hawaiya udi hui thi, jise saaf zahir tha ki wo bakhubhi Randhir ko jante he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Mene kaha tha na hamara hisab chukta nahi hua abhi, hum wapas milenge aur ye akhiri mulakat he

Isi ke saath Randhir ne magzine ki sari goliya Raka ke jism ke dal di aur Raka ka chapter hamesha-hamesha ke liye khatam kar diya.

Ye sab dekhakar mujhe Aanchu ka khyal aaya to me uski aur lapka wo behosh padi thi, aur khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Ye dekhakr me zor se cheeka aur madad ki guhar lagai. Jise sunker Randhir mere nazddek aaya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Ise turant hospital lekar chalna hoga gadi me betho

Me aanchu ko godi me uthakar Randhir ke saath gadi me beth gaya.

INT. HOSPITAL - EVENING

DOCTER
Patient khatre se bahar he par..

Me chonk gaya.

ME
Par kya?

DOCTER
Bullet unki reed ki haddi me lagi thi to shayad wo chal nahi payengi

Ye sunte hi me dham se zameen par beth gaya, “Akhir kyu hua ye meri Aanchu ke saath?”. Randhir ne mujhe hosla diya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Himat se kaam lo Raj medical science ne bahut tareeki ki he abhi nahi chal payegi iska matlab ye nahi kabhi nahi chal payegi

Uske hosle se me thodda sambhala aur hami me gardan hila di.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Aur raj tumhe ek aur batani thi agar tum ab theek ho to
(sanjeeda hoker Randhir bolo)


Mene ascharye se uski aur dekha ki na jane ab Randhir ko aese sanjeeda leheze ka kya kehena he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj apne aap ko sambhalna par
(wo ruka aur ek thandi saans chodi)
Tumhare Maa-Baap ab nahi rahe, Raka ne tum logo ko dhudne ke chaker me unhe bhi...

Ye bolker Randhir ruk gaya aur meri aankhe shock ke fel gai, mana meri aur Aanchal ki unse kabhi nahi bani par fir bhi the to ve mera maa-baap hi, me unki maut ki khaber sunker gum-sum ka beth gaya, na jane kitne waqt me waha betha raha aur meri tandra jab tuti jab nurse ne Aanchal ke hosh me aane ki baat batai aur me chere par aanchal ke khatir ek muskan liye uski aur badh nikala.

AANCHAL
Raj me yaha kaise?

Mene muskura ke use bataya ki sab sahi he aur hame darne ki zaroorat nahi, ye sunker uska chera bhi khil gaya, usne bethne ka prayaas kiya par beth nahi pai kaise beth-ti bechari.

Usne herani se meri aur dekhkar iska reason jana chaha, mene sar jhuka liya, usne mera haath thaam liya.

AANCHAL
Jo bhi mujhe hua he sach-sach batao raj

Mene aankho me aansu laye use uski chhot ka bata diya, kuch pal wo chup rahe gai par fir meri aur dekhte hue feki si muskan di.

AANCHAL
Agar mere per chale gaye to kaya hua tum hone mere sabse bade sahare ab, mujhe unki zaroorat nahi ab

Mene uske mathe ko pyaar se chum liya aur uska haath thame uski aankho me dekhta raha.

EXT. CANADA - THREE MONTHS LATER

Ek gadi ruki jisme se ek nojavan utra aur ghumker car ka dusra darwaza khol diya, jisme ek ladki dulhan ka joda phene apne hato ka haar us nojavan ke gale me peero diya, us nojavan ne us ladki ko apni goud me behad payaar se utha liya aur use lekar mandir ki seedhiya chadne laga.

Mandhir me pujari unki raha dekh raha tha, aur bhi kuch log the jo dono ko aata dekhkar muskura rahe the.

Pujari ne kuch mantar padhe

PUJARI
Ab aap dono fero ke liye khade ho jayiye

Nojavan ne us ladki ko fir se apni goud me utha liya aur use lekar 7 fere agni ke charo aur liye.

PUJARI
Ab aap beth sakte he

Par wo ladka nahi ruka aur ek akhiri 8va fera liya.

LADKI
Ye kyu?

LADKA
Hamari mohabbat ke naam

Uski baat par ladki muskura di.

Pujari ke khane par Ladke ne mangalsutr ladki ke gale me pehenaya.

PUJARI
Mubarakho aaj se aap dono pati-patni hue Raj and Aanchal

Aur wo ladka (Raj) jaise uski Ladki(Aanchal) ko laya tha waise hi use wapis mandir se le gaya.

INT. RAJ & AANCHAL’S HOUSE - 15 YEARS LATER

Ek choti si ladki ek kamre me aai.

LADKI
Dad be quick! we will be late for the school.

Raj ne us ladki ki aur dekha jo uski beti “Suhani” thi aur use dekhkar ek bar dhere se muskuraya aur fir apni dairy (
jo aap logo ne is kahani ke madhyam se padhi) ko band kiya aur us ladki ka haath thamte hue neeche aa gaya.

Neeche jaha uski behen-uski mohobbat-uski biwi-uski Aanchu, uske ladke “Rakshit” ko nasta kara rahi thi, Raj ko dekhkar wo muskai aur fir sabne milker nasta kiya, naste ke baad Raj apne beti aur bete ko lekar gate ki aur chala aur jate-jate ek nazar dinning table ke paas haar se sazi NITI ki tasveer par dali.

DONO BACHE
(gate par ponch kar)
Bye, Mom Love youuu!!!

Ye sunker Aanchal “chalti” hui kitchen se bahar aai aur dono bacho ke gal par ek-ek pappi ki aur fir Raj ke hotho par ek chota sa chumban kiya aur dhere se boli “Jaldi Aana”.

Raj uski baat par muskura diya aur dono bacho ko car se lekar apne kaam par nikal gaya aur Aanchal darwaze par khadi apne naye sansar ko dekhti rahi.



THE END :)

Isi ke saath Raj aur Aanchal ki Is Kahani ko me veeram deta hu, Aasha he aap sabko ye kahani achi lago hogi, fir milunga kabhi kisi aur kahani ke saath, jab tak apna dhyan rakhe aur ho sake to apni kahanio ko shabd dekar amar banaye.

Aapka Apna,
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Bahut hi sunder aur jabardast story thi bro with full of emotions.jahan humne raj aur aanchu(aanchal) ka jununiyat wala pyar dekhne ko mila wahin niti ka apne dost ke liye tyag aur balidan usse mar ne ke baad bhi amar kara diya,fir mehren,peter,smile chacha ka character bahut hi umda tha.....thanks for writing a beautiful story 👍❤️
 
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Bahut hi sunder aur jabardast story thi bro with full of emotions.jahan humne raj aur aanchu(aanchal) ka jununiyat wala pyar dekhne ko mila wahin niti ka apne dost ke liye tyag aur balidan usse mar ne ke baad bhi amar kara diya,fir mehren,peter,smile chacha ka character bahut hi umda tha.....thanks for writing a beautiful story 👍
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Behad hi shanadar or zabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next update.....
 
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Behad hi shanadar or zabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next update.....
Thanks Dear, but the story has been Completed, there's no further Updates. BTW comment on stories which you read, don't make commenting as a side hobby in this site, many writers cry over comments on this site BUT I am not one of them. Although, thanks for the comment.
 
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