Incest Meri Behen Ek STRIPPER (XForum Exclusive)

[Niks96]

UPDATE 42

Recap -

Mene peter ko apni pareshani batla di aur usne har sambhav madad karne ka wada mujse kiya.

Ab aage -

Peter ki dardnak kahani sunker aur fir use mili madad aur jankari mene Randhir Ahalawat tak poncha di, phele to usne doubt kiya ki kahi ye peter ki koi chal to nahi par mere aaswasan dene par wo man gaya.

Mene use ye bhi bata diya tha ki ab peter mujhe datacentre me entry ke liye madad karega jise sunker randhir khi bhi chinta kuch kam hui.

Ab sara scene set ho gaya tha, Aanchal ko mene apne plan jo randhir ke saath milker mene banaya tha wo ache se samjha diya, wo use sunker kafi ghabra gai par malum use bhi tha ki is plan ke alawa hamare paas koi chara nahi he kyuki wo ek key he aur club use kabhi bhi apni marzi se jane nahi dega. To darte-darte wo akhir maan gai.

Niti ko bhi mene apne plan ka batana chaha par usne use sunne se mana kar diy, bola ‘agar mujhe iske bare me kuch bhi pata chala aur agar mujhe unlogo ne pakad liya to ho sakta he wo mujse tumhara pata ugal wale torture karke ise acha he mujhe kuch malum na ho’. Wo hamare jane se behad khush thi aur saath hi usne behad sanjeeda leheze me bola ‘Aanchal ka dhyan rakhan, use ab koi dukh mat phochana wo phele hi kafi jhel chuki he’, me Niti ke is nischal tyaag se uska shagird ho gaya, ek bar bhi usne ye nahi kaha ki mujhe bhi yaha se nikal chalo. Mano usne apni kismat se samjhota kar liya ho.

Jab me Aanchal ko apna plan samjha raha tha to unse pucha bhi ki kya hum Niti ko saath lekar chal sakte he, me batana to nahi chata tha par Aanchal ko niti ke decision ke bare me na batakar me niti ke tyaag to yu jaya nahi jane dena chata tha isliye mene niti se hui sari bate Aanchal ko batla di yaha tak ki use malum he hum dono ek dusre se bhai-behen se badhkar pyaar karte he par mere samjhane ke bavjud wo yaha se nahi jana chati.

Aanchal meri baat sunker apne gardan ha me hila di shayad niti ke dukh aur uske faisale wo samaj sakti thi.

Kher scene set tha aaj sham ko RAKA ki entry thi club me us waqt jab sara club Jonny ka b’day celebrate kar raha hoga, peter ne mujse wada kar liya tha ki wo sham ko Randhir and team ke attack se phele mujhe datacentre me entry dila dega.

Peter ke ander ek jununiyat kafiyat shareek thi uske har ek sawal aur jawab me RAKA shamil hota, mano agar wo uske samne aa jaye to wo use kacha chaba jaye.

Aaj dopher se si Jonny ne mujhe apne saath rakha tha, mene bhi usme koi aetraaz nahi jataya kyuki agar ise aesi kuch bhi bhanak lag jati ki me aaj kuch alag behave kar raha hu to sara plan chopat ho jata. Sara din wo apne aap ko banata thanata raha sham ki party ke liye. Uska ek chela uske saath tha aur dusra kahi gaya hua tha kisi kaam se.

EXT. ROAD TO CLUB - EVENING

CHELA 1
Jonny bhai aaj to gajab lag rahe ho kasam se

Jonny uski baat sunker hasa.

CHELA 1
Wiaise jonny bhai party to sahi he par us chamiya ka kya hua, hamara plan tha na use maje lena ka aaj.

Chele ki baat sunker mere kaan khade ho gaye, mujhe malum tha ki ye log aanchal ki bat kar rahe he.

JONNY
Tu chinta na kar aaj us bulbul ke par katar ke hi rahenge hahaha

Jonny ne apni kamini hasi hai, aur idher mera khun khol raha tha.

CHELA 1
Maja aayega jonny bhai use rondh denge apne neeche hahaha
(fir kuch sochkar)
Waise ***(chela 2) ko apne kaha bheja he

JONNY
Are us bulbul ka maja lene ke liye mene use *** drug lene bheja he *** se, aaj dekhan kaise use nach nachate he
(tabhi usne gadi ek taraf modne ko bola)

Thodi der baad driver ne gadi ek jagah rok di, thode waqt baad chela 2 bhi waha aa gaya aur gadi me bethne ke saath ki jonny ko ek packet de diya.

CHELA 2
Ye lo jonny bhai bulbul ke liye jadibuti, me to keheta hu celebration se phele hi ek round mar le, bahut man kar raha he uski lene ke liye.
(aur ek kamini siski chhodi)

Dono chelo ne jid karni shuru kar di pehel jonny na me gardan hilata raha par fir ‘ha’ me gardan hila di.

JONNY
Theek he kamino mene socha tha celebration ke baad moj karenge par koi nahi ek do round pehele le lete he akhir hum shezade he us club ke itna to raub chalta he hamara hahaha

Jonny ki is baat se mera sar ghum gaya gusse se, agar ye log ye plan baad ka rakhte to us waqt tak me Aanchal ko lekar rafu chakar ho jata, par inka plan phele hone se mera sara plan chopat hone laga.

JONNY
Ruko tonny se bolke us bulbul ko apne secret aade pe bulata hu

Itna bolker jonny ne apna phone jeb se nikala aur contact list me number search karne laga. Par idher mere liye waqt mano tham gaya, aanchal ka wo masum chera meri aankho ke samne aa gaya, mujhe kisi bhi haal me use bachana tha chahe mere zammer par uske liye koi bhi daag lag jaye mujhe sab manjoor tha.

Udher jonny list scroll kar raha aur idher mere mathe par passene ki boonde ubhar aai, meri sanse tez chalne lagi waqt bilkul ruk gaya, un sabke shabd mujhe rukte malum pade, meri aankh ki putli fel gai jo front seat par bethe jonny ke phone ki screen ko dekh rahi thi.

Ki jaise hi jonny ek contact par click karne ja hi raha tha “dhickkiyau” ek awaz fiza me goong gai aur khoon se sane mans se tukde jonny ke sar ke peeche lage, jo ki chela1 ki sar ke tukde the jo ek goli ke aar paar hone se uchale the aur jo goli meri bandook se nikli thi.

Meri putliya fir dhere se ghumi aur is bar sar ka nishana tha chela2 jiske sar pe goli lagte hi uska bheja car ki side window par bhikar gaya. Eek ke baad eek goli chalne se jonny jo phone milane ja raha tha uske haath se phone chhut gaya aur jab tak driver ne gadi rok di aur wo apne bandook nikalne wala tha ki ek goli uske sar se bhi aar par hote hue samne wind shield ko tod di.

Eek ke baad eek teen lashe girte hi Jonny ke pran sukh gaye usne hairat se golio ke shrot ki aur dekha to uski herani 10 guna badh gai kyuki shrot me tha, usne khabo khayalo me bhi nahi socha tha ki jisne eek bar uski jaan bachai thi aaj wo hi uski jaan ke peeche he.

JONNY
Raj tu...
(hairani se bola)

Me jab tak lapak ke car ke bahar aa gaya aur jonny ke side wali aur poncha aur jhat se darwaza khol kar jonny ka gala pakad ke gun uske mathe se laga di.

ME
Hairain kyu he jonny ye kam to mujhe bahut pehele kar dena chahiya tha par kya karta majbor tha, par aaj tune wo galti kar di jo muafi ke kabil nahi
(men do pal thera)
Janta he aaj jiske tu maje lena cha raha tha wo kon he

Usne dar ke mare halke na me gardan hilai aur bola.

JONNY
Ko..kon he..

ME
Meri BEHEN

Aur isi ke saath mene trigger daba diya aur jonny ka bhi bhejha sadak par beekhar gaya. Eek ke baad eek char lase girane ke bavjud meri uper juniyat sawar thi, ki tabhi mere phone par Peter ka call ayya ye jane ko ki me kitne waqt me ponchuga.

Mene call utha kar use sara majre se awgat kara diya, peter ne mujhe jo hua use bhul jane aur apne mission par focus karrna ka bola aur saath hi bola un sabko wahi phek se gadi club le aao baki sab wo sambhal lega.

Peter ki baat mante hua me sab laso ko us sunsan sadak ke kinare phek kar gadi me club ki aur chal pada.

INT. CLUB - LATER

Me aur peter club me uske office me bethe the aur intzar kar rahe the sahi samay ka, udher randhir ki mutabik uski team ne sare ilake ko gher liya he aur bas mere signal ka wait kar rahe he. Jonny ke waha na hone se D’silva ne uske bare me peter se pucha to peter ne use ek jhuti kahani suna di ki wo kisi kaam me busy se aa jayega 1-2 ghante me par malum to hum dono ko tha ki jonny jaha par gaya he waha se kabhi lot kar nahi aayega aur uske na aane me hi sabhi bhalai he.

Udher Aanchal aur Niti apne roj ke routine me lagi thi, par dono ke mind me tension thi, Aanchal ko mere saath yaha se bhage ki aur Niti ko hamare yaha se shurakshit nikalne ki.

Kuch der ke baad datacentre ke gate khulne aur band hone ki awaz hui, aur peter ne nazre meri aur ki, uska signal milte hi hum dono uske office he bahar aa gaye, uske mujhe ander jane ki ishara kiya, me datacentre ke gate ki aur bada aur us key card se jo peter ne mujhe diya tha use socket me lagaya to gate ke khulne ki awaz hui. Gate khulte hi me peter ki aur dekha jisne aankho se kaha zaldi kar time nahi he hamare paas kyuki wo russian team kabhi bhi waha aa sakhti thi.

Me jhat se ander gaya aur aana-ke saath ki secure channel se randhir se baat ki, usne mujhe us pendrive jo unhone mujhe di thi use mainframe me lagane ko bola jise virus system takeover kar lega aur fir uski team remotely sab control karke surveilance band kar degi. Mene bilkul aesa hi kiya aur kuch waqt baad hi Randhir ki aur se conformation aa gaya ki unhe access mil gaya he, aur me plan ke mutabik theek 10 minute baad aanchal ko lekar us gate ki aur daud padu.

Mene hami bharke datacente ke bhar aa gaya par jaise hi bhar poncha to dekha samne se K-2 aaya raha tha uski nazar mujpe pad gai aur wo dodta hua mera aur lapka aur paas ponchkar mera gala tham liya.

K-2
How dare you entre the room?

Aur usne mera sar par gun laga di, meri aankhe uske tewar dekhakr fel gai, ki tabhi peeche se peter ne aaker use jakad liya aur kheechte hue side me apane office me le gaya.

Office ke ander aaker K-2 ne hairani se uski aur dekha aur fir uski tever budhi ne sab majra samaj liya.

K-2
Oh peter you too.. this is treachery

Aur apne woki-toki ki aur badha hi tha ki peter ne uske gardan tham li aur use sambhalne ka time na dete hue apne khanjer se uska gala ret diya aur pal bhar me K-2 ki lash waha padi thi. Lash girne ke saath hi hame neeche se talio ke awaz sunai di jaise koi aa gaya ho.

Peter use sunte hi meri aur dekha.

PETER
RAKA aa gaya

Raka ka naam sunte hi mere ander dar ki eek lehar doud padi na jane kyu uske naam se hi me kanp jata tha.

PETER
Ab dekh kya raha he jaldi kar use me dekh lunga BHAGGG

Uske bolte hi me neeche ki aur lapka aur samne hi mujhe Aanchal dikh gai jaha mene use bola tha khade hone ko usne bhi meri aur dekha dar uski aankho me saaf dikh raha tha.

Me dod kar uski aur lapka aur uski kalai tham li, kalai thamne ke saath hi baher ek jor dar dhamaka hua aur saath ki golio ki bocharo ki awaza aana shuru ho gai. mene ek pal RAKA ki aur dekha jo itafanak uski waqt meri aur ki dekh raha tha. Mene uska chera dekha to mere dimag me ek memory aa gai.

10 saal phele jab hamari family Poland gai thi to mere sar se meri hat neeche gir gai me use uthane ki liye aage badha hi tha ki kisi ne use mujse phele utha liya, mene us sakhs ki aur dekha to wo muskurate hue meri aur meri hat badha raha tha.

SHAKHS
Take care of your things or I might take them hahaha
(wo halka sa hasa)

Mene use thanks bola, aur wo shaks aur koi nahi RAKA hi tha, ji wohi RAKA jo mere samne khada he.

Us ek shan ke baad Raka ne gate ki aur dekha jaha se kuch log ander dhakil hone lage me aanchal ki kalai thame us gate ki aur bhaga to bhagte hue ek kone me meri nazar Niti ki aur padi jo dari hui par hame dekhte hue halke muskurati hui jate dekha rahi thi, mera saath-saath aanchal ne bhi use dekha liya.

Niti ke paas moka tha nikalne ka par wo apani jagah se ek inch bhi na hili bas hame jate dekhti rahi, par achanak Aachal ne apni kalai mujhe chhudai me hearan hoker peeche uski aur palta to wo dodti hui Niti ki aur ja ponchi aur uska haath tham liya.

AANCHAL
Chal niti chal hamre saath...hamne Sare dukh saath jhele he aage bhi jhel lege. CHAL

Niti jhijki par aanchal use kheech hi lai aur fir mere saath dono gate hi aur lapki, ki tabhi samne ek russian hmare samne ponch gaya wo gun nikalta use phele uski lash zameen par padi thi, mene goli ki shrot ki aur dekha to wo koi aur nahi Peter tha, wo zor se cheekha.

PETER
BHAGOOOOOO......

Aur uski ke saath ek zor ka dhamaka hua main gate par aur usme se mujhe Randhir aata najzar aaya, me sab kuch nazarandaaz karke gate ke paas ponch kar handle ghuma diya aur dono ladkio ke seedhio se neeche ki aur dhakela, sare club me lase aur afra tafri machi thi, neeche ki aur jate hue mene akhiri nazar peter ki aur dodai, jisne meri itni madad kari thi to paya uske daye per me goli lag gai he par wo langdata hua lagatar goliya chala raha tha, me cha kar bhi uski koi mada nahi kar pata aur sath hi mujhe malum tha ye meri akhiri mulakat he peter se me use man-hi-man dhaneyad bolta hua gate band kar liya.

Hum teeno sar par per rakhkar bhag rahe the, hum first corridor ke gate par ponche, mene dewar side me dhakel kar chabi se jhat darwaza khol diya, neeche seedhiya thi par vaha gup andhera tha me aage badhkar rasta banata hua dono ladkio ko lekar neeche wale cirridor pe poncha.

Waha kewal 2 light jal rahi thi wo bhi zero watt ki, isper dhyan na dete hue hum teeno us corridor ko par karte hue uske exit gate par ponche, mene chabi laga ke us gate ko kholna chaha, par chabi tale me ghum nahi rahi thi, mene kafi try kiya par result same tha, tension ke mare mere haath bhi kanp rahe the, ki achanak corridor ke side wale kamre se ek ladki ke hasne ki awaz aai.

Mene awaz ki aur dekha to samaj gaya wo Julie ki awaz thi par AAnchal aur Niti use dar gai, ki tabhi ek aur awaz aai ‘aese nahi khulega hihihi’, Julie ne ek bar aur bola, uski awaz se Aanchal aur Niti ka dar ke mare bura haal tha.

Na jane kya soch kar mene apne haath us darwaze ke gate par rakh diye ki achanak mujhe ahsaas hua ki dusri aur se kisi ne mere haath tham liye ho aur eeka-eek na jane kese mera jeevan mere ankho ke samne ghumta nazar aaya mano Julie meri life padh rahi ho, ki achanak uske bola ‘OKAY JAO hihihi’ aur dhadam se wo darwaza ukhad kar samne us gufa ke andhere me ja gira.

Dono ladkiya hairan rhe gai par mene samay na gavate hue dono ko mere peeche bhagne ko bola, kuch pal baad hum gufa par karne jungle me aa gaye jaha Randhir ke aadmio ne milne ka wada kiya tha, par waha koi nahi tha.

AANCHAL
Ab kya kare...

Aanchal ghabrate hue boli, samaj mujhe bhi nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare, me idher udher dekh hi raha tha ki samne mujhe do car ki headlight dikhi, mujhe laga wo randhir ke aadmi honge par achanak us car me bethe logo ne hamne goli chala di aur ek goli mere kaan ke paas se saye se nikal gaii.

Mujhe samajne me ek pal na laga ki ye randhir ke nahi balki Raka ke addmi he.

ME
BHAGOO...

Me chiktha hue dono ladkio se bola, hum teeno us andhere jungle me apni jaan bachathe bhag rahe the, hamare peeche hume logo ke bhagne ki awaze aa rahi thi jo pal pal paas aati ja rahi thi.

Mujhe lagne laga tha ki shayad ab hum nahi bachne wale, is khyal ke aate hi mene aachal ka haath tham liya, us andhere me uski sehemi motio jaisi aankho ne meri aur dekha, shayad use bhi aabhas ho gaya tha aur us aankho me ek shama thi mere liye.

Ki achanak Niti ke per ek theni se uljha aur wo gir padi uske girte hi aanchal uski aur lapki

AANCHAL
Tu theek he Niti

Niti dard se karha rahi thi.

NITI
Nahi lagta he meri par me moch aa gayi aahhh

Saath hi wo log behad kareeb aa gaye the, usne heavy russian accent saaf sunai de rahe the.

Ki tabhi mere muh par kisi ka haath aagaya jisne meri awaaz daba di, ye abhas hote hi Aanchal ke halak se cheekh nikalne wali thi ki us shaks ka dusra haath aanchal ke muh par tha, “Me hu bache ghabra mat”, ye awaz me bakhubhi phechanta tha, ye Ismile chahcha ki awaz thi.

ME
Ismile chahcha aap yaha

Mene chokte hue pucha. ye janker wo koi dushman nahi he Aanchal bhi chup ho gai.

ISMILE
Ha mujhe Peter ne bata diya tha ki kuch lafda hone wala he aur mene bataya tha tujhe jab tujhe meri sabse zada zarurat pade mujhe bata dena par tune nahi bataya, wo to bhala ho jo peter ne iska sanket kar diya, abhi aur kuch mat pucho mere saath aao zaldi.

Ismile chahcha Niti ko godi me lekar tej tej aage badh gaye aur me Aanchal ka haath thame unki aur chal pada, kuch duri par wo hame ek pather ki oot me betha diye aur chup hone ka ishara kiya.

ISMILE
Abhi kuch der yahi betho wo log jab chale jaye fir aage chalenge
(dhere se fusfusaye)

Sab chup bethe rahe kuch waqt tak hi logo ke chalne ki awaaz aai fir sab shant ho gaya. Shant hote hi me bola.

ME
Lekin peter ne aapko...

Wo meri baat shayad samaj gaye.

ISMILE
Ha me peter ki dardnaak kahani janta hu, yaha me hi uska khaas tha isliye kaal usne bola ki uska jo zindagi maksad tha wo aaj pura ho jayega aur saath hi tumhara dhyaan rakhe ko kaha tha, par eek baat se me naraj hu tumne itni badi musibaat ki baat mujse chupai, thoda to aetbaar karte apne chahcha par

Wo thode dhukhi hote hue bole.

ME
Bas chahca halat hi aese ban gaye the ki kuch batanane ka moka nahi mila.

Unhone situation samjhi aur fir hum log aage bad chale, ki tabhi peeche se aawaz fir aai, hum fir chup gaye, par isbaar awaz hamare peeche se bhi aa rahi thi shayad unhone backup bula liya tha.

Ab mere saath-saath ismile chahcha ke bhi chere par tension tha, kadam paas aate ja rahe the, unhone ek pal meri aur dekha, aur fir ek gun mere haath me thama di.

ISMILE
Umeed he mere sikhaye shabak ache se yaad hoga tujhe.

Me na samajate hue unki aur dekha.

ISMILE
Ab chahca ka sahi farz nibhane ka waqt aa gaya he bache, dhyan rakhan apna, meri seekh par pani na firne dena hahaha

Aur Niti ko meri aur badha diya aur dusri bandook lekar dushmano ki aur badh gaye. Me mazra samaj gaya.

ME
Nahi chahcha aesa nahi karna...

Ghabrat me me bol gaya.

ISMILE
Bache meni apni zindagi ji li he sari umr ghunaho ke raste par chala hu aaj kuch karz utarne ki bari aai utar lene de, aur tujme kuch apna sa he agar aesi moke par teri madad n kar paya fir kya fayeda aese zindagi ka, ye le gadi ki chabhi seedha mere ghar ja aur kuch din udher ther fir mamla shant hote hi aage nikal jana, jaldi kar time nahi he

Ye bolte hue unhone mujhe chabi dekar car ki direction bata di aur meri sar par haath fer diya, mene Niti ko baho me bhara aur Aanchal ke saath us aur badh gaya.

Ek akhiri bar mene us andhere me peeche mudkar dekha to ismile chahcha ko apni aur dekhta paya, fir wo andhere me unlogo ki aur bhag pade aur ek do firing ki awaze aai disha bhatkane ko, mujhe malum tha ye me akhiri baar ismile chahcha ko dekh raha tha, is mission ne mujhe ek bahut badi kurbani ismile chahcha ke roop me le thi.

To be Continued...
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UPDATE 43

Recap -

Ek akhiri bar mene us andhere me peeche mudkar dekha to ismile chahcha ko apni aur dekhta paya, fir wo andhere me unlogo ki aur bhag pade aur ek do firing ki awaze aai disha bhatkane ko, mujhe malum tha ye me akhiri baar ismile chahcha ko dekh raha tha, is mission ne mujhe ek bahut badi kurbani ismile chahcha ke roop me le thi.

Ab aage -

Me car raftar se road par bhaga raha tha peeche Aanchal Niti ko sambhale hui thi.

AANCHAL
Hame kisi docter ke paas chalna hoga raj, Niti ki halat kharab he

Me bhi ye baat janta tha, par use kaha le jau kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha, ki Niti ki awaz aai.

NITI
Nahi aese halat me docter ke paas nahi ja sakte, me theek hu, aur raj
(mujhe dekha)
Mujhe lagta he hame us admi ke batayi jagah par bhi nahi jane chahiye kya pata wo log use us jagah ka pata ujalwale

ME
Nahi ismile chahcha kabhi nahi batayenge

NITI
Situation ko samjho raj wo log behad khatarnaak he kuch bhi kar gujrenge, meri mano hame kahi aur chalna chahiye.

Niti ki baat mujhe bhi theek jan padi par ab samasya ye thi thi ab jaye to jaye kaha jiske bare me Raka ke log anuman na laga sake, par shayad niti meri pareshi samaj gai.

NITI
Kyu na hum Jasmeet se madada mage.

Rana ki baat sunte hi meri bati jali.

ME
Par kya wo hamari madad karenga.

NITI
Eek bar kosis karne me to koi harz nahi, ruk me phone karti hu use

Niti ne use phone milaya jo usne turat utha liya, Niti ne behad saaf lafzo me use sari baat bata di, mujhe laga tha wo apne aap ko is musibat ka hissa nahi banayega, par shayad use bhi Niti se mohobbat ho gai thi, wo turant madad karne ko tayar ho gaya, aur hame seedha uske ghar aane ko bol diya.

Mujhe uske ghar ka rasta Manoj ke saath wali Goa trip se malum tha, to mene uske ghar ki aur gadi mod di.

Kuch der ke baad hum Rana ki ghar ke gate ke samne the, waha Rana apne kuch logo ke saath mojud tha, gate khulte hi wo Niti ki aur lapka aur use ek behad zununi aashiq ki tarah apni baho me bharke ander le chala, me aur aanchal bhi uske peeche chal pade.

Niti ko room me litakar wo meri aur mukhatib hua aur meri haal-chaal poocha, Niti use mamala samjah chuki thi to wo use aaram karne ko bolker bahar nikal aaya, aanchal ne uske paas rukne ko bolo to me bhi bahar aa gaya.

Bahar Rana ne ek docter ko phone kara diya aane ko, aur me aur wo docter ke intzar me drawing eoom me beth gaye.

RANA
Itni badi baat ho gai Raj aur tune mujhe bataya nahi, agar bata deta to me har sambhav madad karta teri

Usne behad apnepan se kaha. To mene bhi apni mazbooria use baya kar di, sari baate janker use bhi dukh hua aur mere decison ko sahi thera diya.

Kher kuch der baad docter aa gaya, Niti ke per me severe moch hi tha to docter ne uspe garam patti kar di aur fir chala gaya. Kuch der baad hamne khana khaya. Khane ke doran Rana bol pada.

RANA
Me pata kraya he, sheher ke halat behad kharab he, CRPF ki tukdia seher me aa rahi he. Mujhe lagta he hame yaha se nikal jana chahia kahi dur.

Hum uski baat sunker pareshan ho gaye.

NITI
Lekin ham kaha jayenge?

Rana kuch der socha.

RANA
Shimla ke pass mera ek khufia farm house he wahi chale jate he jab tak halat sahi nahi ho jate

Me aur Niti ne bhi isme apni razamandi gatai. To Rana ne hame waha ka pata batay aur fir apne kisi admi ko phone karke farmhouse ready karne ko bola. Khana khakar sabne sone ka faisla kiya ur subha-subha 4 baje waha ke liye nikalne ka plan kar liya.
Abhi me khane ki table se kahda hoya hi tha ki meri watch jo randhir ne mujhe di thi uspe beep baji, sabka dhyan uski aur gaya, mene turant wo call utha li, me guuse me tha ki akhir randhir me apna wada pura kyu nahi kiya.

Call ki us aur Vikram (randhir subordinate) tha, usne bataya ki unke anuman ke vipreet Raka ne zada tayari ki hui thi to Raka ke logo ka jwab unki apeksha se zada teevr tha, unhone Raka ke zadatar logo ko to mar giraya par Raka unke hato se nikal gaya, ye sunte hi mere haath kanpne lage, fir usne bola ki in sab ghatnakarm me Randhir behad ghayal ho gaya jiske chalte unhe apna mission abort karna pada, lekin jab Raka ko usne log waha se bachakar le ja rahe the to tumhare us jankar ne usper hamla bol diya, usne Raka ke lagbhag mar hi giraya tha par use pehele hi Raka ke logo ne use golio se chalni kar diya, me samaj gaya tha wo peter ki baat kar raha he.

Saath ki vikram ne bola ki kaise bhi kar ke me kisi safe jagah chupa rahu wo log jald hi meri madad ke liye apni team bhejenge jaise hi Randhir ko hosh aa gata he, ye bolker usne call cut kardi.

Mere saath ye baate bakio ne bhi sun li, sabhi ye baat sunker tension me aa gaye, jise kam karne ke liye Rana bola.

RANA
Tum log fikr na karo aaram se so jao abhi, subha-subha hi hum log apne farmhouse nikal chalenge.

Mene uski bato me hami bhari aur Aanchal ko bhi aankho se aaswasan diya.

Kher Aanchal ne Niti ke saath sone ka bola aur mene bhi usi kamre me sofe par sona theek samjha. Rana hame ek bar aur sab theek ho jayega ka aaswasan dekar aur Niti se pyaar bhari do bate bolker sone chala gaya.

Kuch der baad mujhe aasas hua ki koi sofe ke sirhane khada he mene mud kar dekha to wo aanchal thi, use dekhte hi me beth gaya aur wo bhi mere paas aakar beth gai, usne apna sir mere kandho par rakh liya.

ME
Kya hua aanchu neend nahi aa rahi?

AANCHAL
Tujhe bhi to nahi aa rahi..

Dono hi jante the ki aese halat me neend aana behad muskil he.

ME
Hame thoda himat se kaam lena hoga aanchu, ek bar hum is musibat se nikal jaye fir apne sapno ki duniya banayenge tu dekh lena

Usne ek choti aur pyari si muskan di aur mere gaal par ek pappi kar li aur mere sar par pyaar se haath ferakar wapas Niti ke paas bed par let gai.

INT. SOMEWHERE

Ek admi ke chere ke dai taraf pati bandhi thi aur wo andhere kamre me wine pe raha tha, tabhi room ka darwaza khula aur ek admi ander aaya.

ADMI
Sir, do keys kam he?

Wo betha hua admi us admi ke aur dekha apni ek aankh se aur gusse me apna glass patak diya.

ADMI
(betha hua)
Me itni dur harne nahi aaya hu Kanha, sare seher ho aag laga do mujhe kaise bhi wo dono chahiye

Khade hue admi ne hami me gardan hila di.

ADMI
Jo aap chate he waissa hi hoga RAKA sir

Na jane raat ke kon se peher meri aankh lag gai aur khuli tab jab bahar se ek zordar aawaz aai, aur us aawaz ke saath hi golio ki ek bochar si ho gau, is awaz ne dono ladkio ko bhi jaga diya, me turant khada ho gaya ki tabhi room me dodta hua Rana aa gaya.

RANA
Hame bhagna hoga un logo ne ghar pa r attack kar diya, zaldi mere peeche

Me Niti ko apni goud me utha liya aur Rana ke peeche lagbhag dod pada, aanchal bhi mere peeche thi, Rana bhagta hua peeche wale darwaze ki aur badha waha ek car mojood thi, mene jhat se Niti ko peeche wali seat par betha diya aur aanchal ko bhi bethna ka ishara kar diya, wo bhi jhat se beth gai.

Rana ne mujhe driving seat par beth kar tayar rehene ko bola aur wo ghar ke ander ki aur dod gaya, ye dekhakr hum teeno ghabra gaye ki is waqt ise kya kaam aa gaya, tabhi Rana aata najar aaya uske haath me eek automatic gun thi aur wo ek aur lagatar goliya chala raha tha.

RANA
Car start car Raj

Ye bolker Rana ne peeche wali seat par Aanchal ke paas ek map fek diya, jo shayad us farmhouse tak jane ka rasta tha.

Mene turant car start kar di aur gate se bhar nikal kar dhera chalata hua Rana ka intzar karne laga, ki tabhi Rana hame bahar aata najar aaya wo dodta hua car ki aur aa raha tha. Me back mirrior se uski aur dekha raha tha ki jaise hi wo side ka darwaza kholne ko hua ki achanak peeche se goli chalne ki awaz aai jo shayad Rana ki kamar par lagi, aur goli lagte ho dham se zameen par gir pada aur uske halak se bas ek hi awaz nikli. “BHAGO YAHA SE” aur saath hi Niti ki cheekh use halak se nikal gai “JASMEET...”

Ye sunte hi me samaj gaya ab mere paas use bachane ka koi rasta nahi he mene car doda di, ek pal peeche dekha to kuch log Rana ke nazdeek aakaer use golio se bhun rahe the aur Niti peche wali window se wo marmik drashye dekh rahi he.

Mujhe apne upar behad gilani thi, ki behcare Rana bin maut hamare liye mara gaya, us udassenta ko lekar mene car farmhouse ki aur doda thi, jo hamare bachne ki akhiri umeed thi RAKA se.

To be Continued...
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UPDATE 44

Recap -

Mujhe apne upar behad gilani thi, ki behchara Rana bin maut hamare liye mara gaya, us udassenta ko lekar mene car farmhouse ki aur doda thi, jo hamare bachne ki akhiri umeed thi RAKA se.

Ab aage -

Hum bina ruke ded din tak car chalate rahe, rukna bas itna hota jab car me petrol dalwana ho, is ded din me Niti kuch na boli, Aanchal sare raste use dilasa deti rahi jo wo bas “hu” ‘ha’ me tal deti, uski aankhe kahi suniye me khoi hui thi.

Jab hum log Himachal ki seema me gus gaye to mene dono se kuch khane ka bola, par iske jawab me Niti kuch na boli aur bas Aanchal ne razamandi di, mene car ek dhabe ke samne roki aur teeno ke khane ke lekar kuch le aaya, Me bahar khada kha raha aur ander Aanchal Niti ko khane ko bol rahi thi par usne mana kar diya, Rana ki maut ne use behad ghera sadma diya tha shayad zindagi se haari niti kahi na kahi Rana ke saath apni berang zindagi me raang bharna chati thi, par Rana ki maut se wo sapne kanch ke mahel ki tarah tut gaye.

Kher jab Niti ne nahi khaya to aanchal ne use pani Kasam dila kar apne haatho se thoda bahut khila diya aur khud bhi kha liya. Thoda bahut kahne ke baad hum fir se apni manzil ki aur neekal pade aur kuch ghanto ki drive ke baad Rana ke farmhouse ke gate par aa ponche.

Car ki awaz aate hi waha ek budha sa aadmi aaker darwaza khol diya, car ko gate se ander aate hi mene dekha wo ek behad khubsurat haveli numa ghar tha. Hum teeno thake hue gadi ke neeche utre to us admi ne Rana ke bare me pucha, ab kya batate use, me abhi use sach batane ko hua hi tha ki Niti beech me bol padi.

NITI
Use kuch kaam aa gaya to wo nahi aa payega, me uski mangetar hu

Mene uski aur herani se dekha to uski ankho me atha dukh tha par saath ki ye iltza bhi thi ki me sach na batau. Mene bhi halato ko madhenajar rakhte hue chup rehene theek samja.

Kher hamare jwaab se santust hoker us admi ne hame ander aane ko kaha wo hame hamare room dikha diye, har koi itne lambe safar se aur 2 din ki ghatnao se thaka hua tha to kuch der aaram karne ki thani.

Niti aur Aanchal ek room me aa gai aur me dusre me chala aaya, do din ki bhaga dodi me kuch sochne ka moka nahi mila tha, par jab bister par leta to aankho ke samne un logo ki tasveer ter gai jo meri aanchal ko bachane ki zid ke khatir kurban hogaye. Peter, Ismile chahca aur Rana teeno meri zid ke khatir mare gaye, ye sochte hue aankhe kuch num ho chali, par honi ko koi kaise tal sakta tha, jo ho chuka use badla nahi ja sakta yehi sab sochte hue meri aankh lag gai.

Abhi soye hue kuch waqt hi beeta hoga ki kuch naram sa mere labo ko chuha. Us narmahat ko paker meri aankh khul gai, samne aanchal thi jo mujpe jhuki mere adhro ko behad komalta ke saath pyaar se chum rahi thi, uski is masum si harkat par mene dhere se apne haath uske balo me ghuma diye, is aabhas se wo seedhi beth gai aur pyaar bhari aankho se meri aur muskurai.

ME
Neend nahi aa rahi

Usne dhere se na me gardan hila di aur fir mere bagal me let gai, haath usne meri chati par theeka diya aur vaha dheere se shelane lagi.

AANCHAL
Kya soch raha he
(mujse puchi)


Me uper chat to tak raha tha, to uska swal mujhe sunai nahi diya usne ek bar aur mujse pucha to meri tandra tuti.

ME
Kuch nahi bas aesi hi soch raha hu, ki abhi kuch din phele mene wada kiya tha tujse ki hamari aane wali zindagi behad khusnuma hogi par ab lagta he..

Usne baat puri hone se phele hi haath mere hotho par rakh diye.

AANCHAL
Malum he hamara raste behad katheen he par wo mohobbat parwa kaha chadti he jisme kathinai na ho, Kyu?, Aur aage halat kuch bhi ho mene tere saath jo lamhe bhi bitaye he yo meri zindagi ke sabse yaadgar pal he isliye apne uper kisi bhi tarah ka boj na rakha mere khitir

Ye bolker wo uper ko uthi ko dhere se mera matha, fir nakk aur fir lab chum liye, mene bhi uski kiss ka respond kiya aur fir usi tarah dhere-dhere chumte hue hum kab so gaye malum na chala.

Neend hamari jab tuti jab kisi ne kuch bola, dono behad neend me the to kuch saaf nahi suna par jab kuch hosh sambhala to paya Niti hamare bed ke nazdeek kahdi thi.

NITI
Are ab uth bhi jao lela-majnu kab tak souge, aur aesi hi sona he to darwaza band kar liya karo bechara budha uncle tumhari raas liya dekhkar sharma gaya hihihi

Me uski baat par muskura diya par aanchal use yaha dekhkar sakpaka gai, malum to use tha ki niti ko hamre riste ka pata he aur usme uski razamandi he, par use yu nazdeek dekhakar wo ashez mehsus kar rahi thi.

Wo turant utkar bahar jane ke liye mudi to mene uski bah tham li, usne mujhe iltaza bhari nighao se dekha mano keh rahi ho abhi jane do Niti ke samne nahi na please.

Uski is ilataza bhari nighaye niti bhi samaj chuki thi. Wo halka langdate hue aanchal ke kareeb aai aur apne hatho se uske dono kandhe tham kar uski aankho me dekha.

NITI
Jo kisi se aese tut kar mohabbat kare aesa shaks behad kam milte he aanchal, aur tu khusnaseeb he tujhe aesa shaks Raj ke rup me mila he, aur jab kisi ko aesa shaks milta he to use yu jane nahi diya jata balki use jakad ke apne aagos me rakha jata he

Niti ki bato ka matlab aur sanjeedgi aanchal bakhubi samaj rahi thi, usne dhere se gardan hila di.

NITI
To ab soch kya rahi he, aesa shaks agar aas paas ho to use turat jakad lena chahiye, nahi to kya pata koi aur jakad le

Ye bolte hue niti sharat se meri aur mudi, par use phele hi aachal mere uper lagbhag kud gai aur behad kas ke mujhe gale laga liya.

AANCHAL
No madam iska reservation mere naam par ho chuka he hihihi

Usne shararat se bola. Aanchal ki is shararat par me aur Niti muska diye, halaki Niti muska rahi thi par uske dard ko hum bakhubhi samaj rahe the, par yehi to khaas baat thi Niti ki apne dard ko peekar dusro ki khushi me shareek hone ka hunar use bakhubhi aata tha.

Fir aanchal mujper se uthi aur Niti ko gale laga liya.

AANCHAL
Mujhe behad khushi he Niti ki teri jaisi dost mere jeevan me aai, Thank You

Niti uski baat par muskai aur dhere se uske galo par chapat laga di.

NITI
Chal pagal...ab tum dono chalke khana kha lo, bechare budhe uncle ko fir na aane pade, aaye the meri kamre me behad sharma rahe the ki Kya aap un dono ko utha dengi, shayad tumhari raas-lela dekh li hihihi

Uski baat par hum dono bhi muska diye.

Kher kuch din yu hi beet gaye, in dino hamara dhyan zadatar news par rehta tha, news se hi hame malum pada tha ki CRPF police ka Panji me aana ka reason government ka pata chalna tha ki international criminal Raka India aa gaya he, par fir do-din me hi news se Raka ka naam aese gayab ho gaya mano gadhe ke sar se seengh, shayad Raka ke ponch kafi uper tak thi.

In sab ke beech me, mein Randhir ya uski ki team ki call ka wait karta raha par udher se koi information nahi aai, in dino Niti bhi Jasmeet ki maut ke jhatke se kuch sambhli thi, aur mere aur Aanchal ke beech bhi nazdeekiya badhi thi.

Har din ke beet-te hamari tension bhi bad rahi thi kyuki hum hamesha ke liye to yaha nahi chup sakte, kabhi-na-kabhi to Raka ko hamre theekane ka pata chal jayega aur ye lagbhag sure hi tha ki use ab tak har hal me malum chal gaya hoga ki 2 distributed keys Niti aur Aanchal ke roop me Club se gayab he, aur jitna me Raka ko jan paya hu wo inti dur apni jaan ko jokhim me daalkar khali haath to nahi jayega.

Ek din me aur Niti bhahar drawing room me bethe aage ka kuch soch rahe the ki uski nazar side me ek chote se darwaze par padi

NITI
Is chote darwaze ke peeche kya hoga?

Uski baat par me bhi us aur muda aur kandhe uchka kar jalta diye mujhe kya malum.

Niti ne fir budhe noker ko bulaya aur use pucha, jo kuch din se hame aese ghur raha tha mano hamne uski kidney mang li ho, usne ek do baar pucha bhi ki shaab kab aayenge or aap ka wapsi ka kya plan he, par har bar Niti use ghudki dekar chup kara deti.

BUDHA
Ji ye shaab ka personel room he udher jane ki izazat kisi ko nahi

Niti ne ek bar aur use Rana ke naam se daraya aur do din minute me hi usne ek chabi laker hame de di, Niti ne wo chabi li aur meri aur badha di aur ishara kiya ki chalke dekhte he.

Halaki Niti puri tarah theek nahi hui thi par dhere-dhere chal leti thi. Me use lekar darwaza khola aur darwaza khulte hi samne hame ek basement dikha jisme jane ke liye seedhiya mojood thi, me aur Niti dhere-dhere chalte hue neeche basement me ponch gaye, mene hath markar side se light on kar di, aur samne ka nazara dekhte hi hamare hosh ud gaye, waha ek se bahdkar ek guns thi, aur kuch hand grenade rakhe the, Niti aur me hake bake wo dekh rahe the.

NITI
Raj ye sab?

Me janta to tha ki Rana kuch illegal business me involve he par is kadar me nahi janta tha. Mene Niti ko apna andaza suna diya jise sunker usne bhi gardan hilai.

Kher hum samaj gaye the Rana ne isme jane ki izazat kyu kisi ko nahi di thi aur kyu ye farmhouse usne secret rakaha tha. Kuch der idher-udher dekhne ke baad hum uper aa gaye.

Aese hi kuch din aur beet gaye par kahi se koi information nahi mili, ek din me, Aanchu aur Niti farmouse ke peeche khade vadio ka nazare le rahe the ki meri wrist watch vibrate hui, mene wo call turant pick kar li, udher se Randhir ki awaz aai.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj tu theek he na?

Mene apni kushalta use batla di aur sath hi apni narazgi bhi jalta di ki inte dino usne hamari koi khoj khabar kyu nahi li.

Jiske jwab me Randhir ne phele Vikram ki batai hui majboori baya ki aur fir apne ghayal hone ki, par akhiri me usne ek bomb fod diya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raka ne apni ponch ka istemal karke meri team ko dismiss kara diya, lekin tum fikar na karo officially nahi to use unofficially marunga, tum apni location batao me apni team ke saath ponchkar tumhe ek surakshit jagah poncha dunga.

Mene use apni location bata di.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Aur ha raj ek dhukhad khaber he, Raka ko malum chal gaya tha ki tumhari behen ek KEY he to tumhara pata nikalwane ke liye usne har sambhav prayas kiya aur isme Dr. Sandhu aur unse noker ko bhi unhone Jalandhar me maut ke ghat utar diya.

Randhir ki baat par me shock reh gaya, matlab Raka kisi bhi keemat par Aanchu aur Niti ko pana chata tha. Fir Randhir ne mujhe hosla diya aur zald se zald mere paas ponchne ka wada kiya.

INT. SOMEWHERE

ADMI
Sir, we cracked the communication channel and found the location.

Ye sunte hi uske boss ne uske haath se ek slip li aur tez kadmo se chalta hua ek room me aa gaya.

ADMI
Raka sir unlogo ka pata chal gaya he

Ye sunte hi Raka jo aankh band kiye betha tha apni bai aankh khol di aur us admi ke aur dekha aur khada hoker apna coat pehene laga.

ADMI
Sir iski zaroorat nahi he hum unhe laker apne kadmo me fek denge

Raka ne coat pehen liya.

RAKA
Kuch kaam khud hi karne padte he kanha tabhi kaamyaab hote he, sabko tyaar karo, is baar sari takat lagi deni he.

EXT. FARMHOUSE - HIMACHAL

Randhir ki baat mene dono ladkio ko batai jise unhe bhi kuch himat mili, kher wo din bhi aese hi bato me guzar gaya.

Raat ko me apne room me leta khayalo me gum tha ki darwaza khula aur waha Aanchal ek behad sexy si nighty pehene khadi thi, baal uske khule the aur chere par halka makeup, uska ye roop dekhkar me dang reh gaya.

Wo madham-madham chalte hue mere nazdeek aai aur mujhe halka sa dakha dekar bethe hue se bister par leta diya, aur khud ek aada ke saath apne baal ek aur kiye aur mera bazu le let kar apna sar apni khonio par rakh liya aur mere chere to takne lagi jo haka baka use dekh raha tha.

AANCHAL
Kya hua Mr. Raj kuch bol nahi nikal rahe hihihi

Wakai uska ye roop dekhar mere totte ud gaye the, me kuch bolna chaha par bas hawa ki nikli muh se par fir sari himat jod kar bola.

ME
Aanchu..ye ye sab kya..mera matlab kyu..matlab

AANCHAL
Shhh
(mere hotho par ungli)
Matlab watlab chhodo aaj ki raat pyaar karne ki raat he

Aur aanchal ne meri shirt ke button kholne shuru kiya aur saath ki uske nazuk adhro ne mere chere ke har sambhav hisse par papiya li, me uske is ati kamukh rawaiye se behekne laga aur na jane kab usne meri shirt ke sare button khol kar apne haath meri chatio par firane lagi.

Fir uske haath rengte hue meri jeans ke button ki aur badhe, aur khat se meri jeans ka button khol diya aur hato ko na rokte hue wo meri zip neeche karne lagi, par jaisi hi usne zip neeche karni chahi mene apne haath uske hato par rakh diye.

Usne ascharye se meri aur dekha.

ME
Aanchu me samajta hu tere mann ki baat aur mere mann me bhi aesi bhavnaye uthti he, par me ye sab hamari shadi ke baad karna chata hu.

Meri baat sunker uske chere par heraniya aur badh gai aur saath ki aankho me pani ke kuch katre ter gaye. Usne haath waha se hataye aur behad kas kar mere gale lag gai.

AANCHAL
(rote hue)
Kya wakai tu mujhe shadi karega?

Mene dheme se uske baal shelaye.

ME
Jis din meri shadi tere saath hogi wo meri zindagi ka sabse acha din sabit hoga.

Meri baat sunker wo aur jor se mujse lipat gai.

ME
Aur ha mujse tujse do bache chahiye ek ladki aur ek ladka, aur dono teri tarah bahut cute hone chahiye hahaha

Meri baat par usne meri aankho me dekha aur fir laza vash apna chera meri chati me chupa liya, kamal ki hoti he aurat, pal me pani pal me pathar, abhi kuch der phele kaise mere uper chad aai thi aur ab aese sharma rahi thi jaise usne aesa kuch kabhi socha bhi na ho, bevkuf Aanchu.

Kher Aanchal ka program cancel ho gaya aur hum dono haato me haath dale aane wali zindagi ke sukhad sapne bunne lage aur bunte-bunte neend ki wadio ke kho gaye.

To be Continued...
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UPDATE 45 (LAST UPDATE)

Recap -

Kher Aanchal ka program cancel ho gaya aur hum dono haato me haath dale aane wali zindagi ke sukhad sapne bunne lage aur bunte-bunte neend ki wadio ke kho gaye.

Ab aage -

Raat ke ek peher behad tevr shoor se meri aankh khul gai, mere saath aanchal ki bhi neend tut gai, dhyan se sune par mehsus hua wo ek helicopter ki awaz thi, mujhe laga Randhir ki team hamare rescue ke liye ponch gai he, me aur Aanchu bhagte hue Niti ke room me ponche jaha Niti light band karke khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi, hamre aane ka aabhas hote hi unse chup rehene ka ishara kiya aur hame nazdeek aane ko bola.

ME
Niti lagta he Randhir ki team aa gai hame bachane
(me dhere se fusfusaya)

Niti ne meri aur dekha.

NITI
Nahi Raj mujhe to kuch gadbad lagti he, mene abhi dekha bahut se logo ne ghar ko charo aur se gherna shuru kar diya aur aesa koi bachane wala to nahi karega.

Niti ki baat sunker me ghabra gaya, agar ye Randhir and company nahi to...zarur RAKA hoga.

Niti aur meri nazre char hui.

NITI
Ye zarur Raka he, use malum pad gaya hamara pata

Mene bhi sehmati me gardan hilai.

ME
To hame bhagna hoga

NITI
Kaise? Car samne khadi he jaha uske log mozood he, hame chupna hoga turant.

Mene sehmati jatlai aur fir Niti ke sujhav ke mutabeek ghar me sabse safe jagah ek hi thi wo KAMRA. Me aur Aanchal ne Niti ko shara dekar us kamre ki aur bad chale, abhi hum living room adha hi cross kiye the ki, baher se us budhe uncle ki ek tezz awaz aai “Kon ho tum?” Aur fir ek goli ki ziske baad us budhe uncle ki koi awaz nahi aai.

Hum ab sure ho gaye ye Raka ke log he, hum log tezi se neeche basement me ponche aur uska door band kar liya, basement ka door kafi mazboot tha jo aasani se nahi tutta.

Basement ka gate band hote hi hame ghar ka main gate tutne ki aawaz aai aur fir bahut sare juto ki mano bahut sare log ander dakhil ho gaye ho, hum log abhi aur kuch karte ya sochte ki meri wrist watch eek bar aur vibrate hui, mene dekha is baar call dusre number se thi, mujhe Randhir ne mana kiya tha ki kabhi bhi kisi dusre number call na uthau, par apni instict par barosa karke mene is baar call utha li.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj sukr he tumne call utha li, wo phele wala communication channel Raka ke logo ne crack Kar liya, udher sab theek to hena hame kuch helicopter udher aate dikai diye?

Mene sara ghatna karm use bata diya jiske baad wo bhi tension me aa gaya,

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj tum logo ko waha se nikalna hoga kaise bhi, hume waha tak ponchne ke kuch time lagega aur mujhe doubt he itni der tak wo darwaza tumhe nahi bacha payega

Randhir ki baat ne ghabrahat aur badha di.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Me ek map tumhari watch par send kar raha hu. Ise kaise bhi follow karke waha aa jao waha hamari reach he aur ham tum logo ko rescue kar sakte he

Randhir ne apna sujhav to de diya par ab jo bhi karna tha hame hi karna tha. Mene use bola ki hum kosis karte he ab zindagi par to hamari bani thi to himat bhi hame hi karni thi.

Ye baate mere saath dono ladkiya bhi sun rahi thi, mene bari bari dono ki aur dekha, Aanchal ke chere ki hawaiya udi thi wahi Niti ka chera ek dum sapat tha.

Mere dekhane ke baad Niti ne charo aur room me nazar dodai.

NITI
Ye khidki bahar bhagne ke kaam aa sakti he

Mene us aur nazar dali to waha ek choti si khidki thi jo peeche lawn me nikalti thi.

ME
Lekin agar hum ise tod ke bahar niklenge to un logo ko pata chal jayega

Meri baat sunker Niti hole se muskai.

NITI
Hum sab ise bahar nahi niklenge...

Mene chok kar uski aur dekha aur yehi pratikriya Aanchal ki bhi thi.

ME
Matalb...
(wo chalti hui un guns aur hand grenade ke paas ponchi)
Tum log niklo unhe me dekhlungi

Uski baat ko hum samaj gaye, aur Aanchal turant lapak kar uski aur badhi.

AANCHAL
Nahi Niti me aesa nahi karne dugi

Niti ne muskurate hue uski aur dekha aur fir hola sa Aanchal ke dono gal apni hatelio me tham liye.

NITI
Aanchal meri jaan pyaar kurbani ka naam he, aur tum dono ke pyaar ke liye ye kurbani meri hogi hihihi

Niti ne has kar use bola, par uske is pavitr tyaag ki baat sunker Aanchal ka rona fut pada.

AANCHAL
Nahi na Niti please aesa mat bol, me tujhe nahi kho sakti
(rote hue boli)

Niti ne pyaar se uske aansu ponche.

NITI
Aanchal emotional nahi practical hoke soch, agar hum teeno yaha se sahi salamet nikal bhi gaye to me chal nahi pati tum log mujhe kaha tak khichoge
(fir se ek bar aanchal ke aansu ponche)
Aur apni maut ka mujhe koi dukh nahi he, dukh mujhe is baat ka hoga ki tum dono ka pyaar parwa nahi chad paya, aur ye dukh me nahi jhel paungi

Muskurate hue Niti boli.

NITI
Aur tum dono ke liye agar mujse meri jaan mangi ja rahi re to tum logo ki jaan ke samne is jaan ki keemat kuch nahi
(fir dhere se muskai)
Aur wese bhi is zindagi me mene jo kiya use mujhe dukh hi mila, aaj kuch karne agar mujhe kuch khusi mil rahi he to mujhe kar lene de please.

Aanchal bas aansu bahate hue use sunyta me ghure ja rahi thi.

Aanchal se mukhabit hoker Niti, Aanchal ka haath thame meri aur badhi aur mera hath apne hato me lekar, Aanchal ka haath mere hato me rakh diya.

NITI
Iska dhyan rakhna, kabhi dukh mat phochana, ab jao dono

Me achraz se Niti ko dekhti raha, kitni aasani se apni jaan hamper kurban karne ko wo tyaar ho gai, me samjha tha ki shayad me Niti ko jaan gaya hu par aaj malum pada me use jitna janta wo utni gheri hoti chali jati, Niti ke is nischal tyaag ne mera sar uske pere me jhuka diya, Niti ne mujhe neeche jhukne se roka aur pyaar se mere gaal shela kar mujhe zald nikalne ka ishara kar diya.

Aur khud mudker do hand grenade apne ek haath me le liye aur aur dusre haath me ek automatic gun. Tabhi basement ke darwaza zor se bajne laga.

NITI
Niklo tum dono...

Niti zor se chilai aur langdate hue seedhiya chadker basement ke darwaze par ponch gai, dusri aur Raka ke log darwaza todne ki puri kosis kar rahe the, mene bhi side me padi ek kursi se wo kanch ki khidki tod di, aur Aanchal ko uthakar use bahar nikal diya, jate-jate bhi Aanchal ki nazre Niti ko dekh rahi thi jo muskan liye Anchal ko aankho se alvida bol rahi thi.

Fir me bhi us khidki par chad gaya aur ek akhiri baar Niti ko dekha, aur mere mann me bas yehi khyaal tha ki me tumhe kabhi nahi bhulunga Niti, Niti ne pata nahi mere mann ki baat padi ya nahi par palko ko jhuka-kar apni razamandi aur alvida ek saath bol diya aur me khidki se bahar aa gaya, aur Aanchal ka haath thaame Randhir ke batayi jagah ki aur dod pada.

Peeche room me do pal baad ek zordar dhamaka hua jo is baat ka sabut tha Niti ne apni dosti ka farz ada kar diya.

INT. FARMHOUSE - AFTER BLAST

Ek admi dodta hue ek shaks ke paas poncha.

ADMI
Raka sir aap theek he

Raka jo blast se phele gate ke paas tha blast ke baad ud kar dur ja gira. Uska baya haath fat gaya tha aur khoon betasha beh raha tha.

Admi ke haal chaal puchne par wo kuch sambhala aur uth kar kahada ho gaya.

RAKA
Me theek hu ander jake dekho kon-kon bacha he

Jiske baad wo admi apne saath kuch zinda bache logo ko lekar basement me dakheel hua, waha jaker wo marza samaj gaya aur bahar aaker Raka ko report di.

ADMI
Sir waha hame ek ki hi lash ke cheethde mili baki do shayad peeche ki khidki se bhag nikle

Ye sunker Raka ka gussa seema lang gaya usne apne sahi haath se uska gala tham liya aur fir use peeche dhakel kar apni bandook se use chalni kar diya.

RAKA
Kanha, agar wo chethde ek key he to uska barcode dhundo abhi

Kanha unki baat sunker ander gaya jaha Niti ke jism ke tukde fela hue the, vaha use ek taraf Niti ka ek haath pada mila jisper barcode sahi salamt tha, Kanha ki direction ke mutabik unhone wo hath Nitogen container me rakh diya jise uske cell freeze hoker dead na ho aur wo use lock kholne me kaam la sake.

Vapas aaker Kanha ne sari baat Raka ko bata di.

RAKA
Matlab bas ek key bachi he dhundne ko, zaldi chalo zada dur nahi nikle honge wo log

EXT. SOMEWHERE IN JUNGLE - LATER

Me Aanchal ka haath thama betasha Randhir ki batai location ki aur bhag raha tha, raat ke bheeshm andhere me aage kuch nahi dikahi pad raha par jaan bachane ke kahtir bahage ja rahe the, tabhi watch par ek call ayaa.

Mene bhagte-bhagte wo pick kiya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Kaha ho raj tum?

Mene use bata diya ki hum log uski batai jagah ki aur aa rahe he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Theek he waha hamre kuch log tumhe milenge, me bhi apni team ke saath farmhouse par ponchane wala hu, tum zaldi waha poncho.

Uski baat sunker mene call cut kar di aur fir bhagne laga, kafi der dodne ke baad hame jungle ke dusri aur ek sadak dikhi jiske dusri aur ek khai thi waha se halki-halki roshni aa rahi thi jise malum ho raha tha ki suraj nikalne wala he aur waha kuch log khade the, shayad wo log Randhir ke admi the, unhe dekhkar hamari khusi ki koi intaha nahi thi.

Ham us jungle ke akhiri ped ko par karke bahar aaye hi thi Aanchal ke muh se ek dardnaak cheenkh nikli, mene uski aur dekha to wo zameen par girne wali thi, dhyaan dene par pata chala ki uski kamar se khun aa raha tha, abhi me uska karan soch raha tha ki ek goli saye se karti hui meri side wale ped par lagi, me mamla samaj gaya ki Raka ke log ponch chuke he Aanchal ke liye.

Ye baat mene hi nahi Randhir ke un aadmio ne bhi dekh li thi wo hame bachane hamari aur lapke, aur me waqt na javate hue Aanchal ko baho me bharke Randhir ke aadmio ki aur bhaga.

Do pal ke baad Randhir ke aadmio ne position le li aur ek admi ne hame uske saath aane ko bola, bakio ne hame cover fire di, golio ki bochare dono aur se bhayanak ho rahi thi.

Us admi ne hame ek car me betha diya aur bola ki yaha se na nikle, Aanchal dard me karha rahi thi uske uper ek behoshi si cha gai thi, aur meri aankho se Aanchu ki ye halat dekhkar pani behene laga tha, me bas pararthana kar raha tha ki please Aanchu ko kuch na ho.

Meri soch ko viram ek awaz ne di meni car ki khidki ki aur dekha to jo admi hame abhi betha ke gaya tha uska bheza ab car ki window par fel gaya, ye dekhkar mere praan sukh gaye, fir kuch palo ke baad sari gola bari band ho gai, mene iska karan jane ke liye window se bahar dekha to mujhe Raka apne admio ke saath us jungle se aata nazar aaya.

Wo seedha hamari car ki aur hi aa raah tha, aur me use stabdh sa dekh raha tha kuch hi palo ke baad wo car ke paas tha, usne ishare se ek admi ko kuch bola to us admi ne car ka darwaza ek jhatke me khol diya aur gun seedha mujpe tan di. Fir dusri aur se car ka darwaza khula aur ek admi ne mujhe bahar kheech liya aur mujhe ghutno par betha kar gun mere sar par laga di.

Me dekh raha tha do log car se behosh ho chuki Aanchal ko utha kar ek dusri car me rakh rahe the, meri aankho ke samne wo meri zindagi ko le jane wale the, ye khayal aate hi mere jism me ek bizli si kondh gai aur akasmat mera dhyan mere sar par gun rakhe admi ki belt par pada jaha usne ek dusri gun rakhi thi.

Agle hi pal us admi ki laash zameen par padi thi, goli chalte he Raka ne palat kar meri aur dekha aur agle hi pal mene Raka par goli chala di par uski kismat achi thi kyuki uske side me khade admi se use apni aur kheech liya aur goli uske daye taraf chati par lagi.

Ye dekhte hi Raka ke paas kahde admi ne meri aur goli chalai par tab tab me car ka cover ke chuka tha, ab ek taraf wo admi Raka ko sambhalte hue goliya mujpe chala raha tha aur ek taraf me car ka cover liye usper goliya chala raha tha, achanak se meri gun jam ho gai, me car ke peeche hoker use sahi kar hi raha tha ki kisi ne peeche se ek zordar laat meri kamar par mari aur me car ki oot se bahar aa gira, peecha mudker dekha to wo khun se latpat Raka tha.

RAKA
Bahut ho gaya

Ye bolte hi usne gun meri aur tan di.

Meri nazro ke samne bas ek chera ter raha tha bas Aanchu ka aur wo wada kano me gunj raha tha jo mene Niti se kiya tha Aanchal ka khyal rakhne ka. Par shayad kainaat ko ye manzoor nahi tha ki hamara milan is jeevan me ho, me ye sab sochker apni gardan jhuka li aur man me bas yehi bola “I’M SOORY AANCHU”.

Ki tabhi teen goliya chali aur jab tak me gardan utha kar dekhat ek saya mera sar ke uper se kudta hua Raka ke uper jhapta, me turant khada hoker isthiti ka jayeja liya to paya Randhir apni team ke saath aa poncha aur uske logo ne Raka ke admio ko golio se hamesha ke liye sula diya aur Randhir Raka ke uper rakshas ki tarah tut pada.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Pechana Raka

Mene Raka ke chere ki aur dekha uske chere ki hawaiya udi hui thi, jise saaf zahir tha ki wo bakhubhi Randhir ko jante he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Mene kaha tha na hamara hisab chukta nahi hua abhi, hum wapas milenge aur ye akhiri mulakat he

Isi ke saath Randhir ne magzine ki sari goliya Raka ke jism ke dal di aur Raka ka chapter hamesha-hamesha ke liye khatam kar diya.

Ye sab dekhakar mujhe Aanchu ka khyal aaya to me uski aur lapka wo behosh padi thi, aur khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Ye dekhakr me zor se cheeka aur madad ki guhar lagai. Jise sunker Randhir mere nazddek aaya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Ise turant hospital lekar chalna hoga gadi me betho

Me aanchu ko godi me uthakar Randhir ke saath gadi me beth gaya.

INT. HOSPITAL - EVENING

DOCTER
Patient khatre se bahar he par..

Me chonk gaya.

ME
Par kya?

DOCTER
Bullet unki reed ki haddi me lagi thi to shayad wo chal nahi payengi

Ye sunte hi me dham se zameen par beth gaya, “Akhir kyu hua ye meri Aanchu ke saath?”. Randhir ne mujhe hosla diya.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Himat se kaam lo Raj medical science ne bahut tareeki ki he abhi nahi chal payegi iska matlab ye nahi kabhi nahi chal payegi

Uske hosle se me thodda sambhala aur hami me gardan hila di.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Aur raj tumhe ek aur batani thi agar tum ab theek ho to
(sanjeeda hoker Randhir bolo)


Mene ascharye se uski aur dekha ki na jane ab Randhir ko aese sanjeeda leheze ka kya kehena he.

RANDHIR AHLAWAT
Raj apne aap ko sambhalna par
(wo ruka aur ek thandi saans chodi)
Tumhare Maa-Baap ab nahi rahe, Raka ne tum logo ko dhudne ke chaker me unhe bhi...

Ye bolker Randhir ruk gaya aur meri aankhe shock ke fel gai, mana meri aur Aanchal ki unse kabhi nahi bani par fir bhi the to ve mera maa-baap hi, me unki maut ki khaber sunker gum-sum ka beth gaya, na jane kitne waqt me waha betha raha aur meri tandra jab tuti jab nurse ne Aanchal ke hosh me aane ki baat batai aur me chere par aanchal ke khatir ek muskan liye uski aur badh nikala.

AANCHAL
Raj me yaha kaise?

Mene muskura ke use bataya ki sab sahi he aur hame darne ki zaroorat nahi, ye sunker uska chera bhi khil gaya, usne bethne ka prayaas kiya par beth nahi pai kaise beth-ti bechari.

Usne herani se meri aur dekhkar iska reason jana chaha, mene sar jhuka liya, usne mera haath thaam liya.

AANCHAL
Jo bhi mujhe hua he sach-sach batao raj

Mene aankho me aansu laye use uski chhot ka bata diya, kuch pal wo chup rahe gai par fir meri aur dekhte hue feki si muskan di.

AANCHAL
Agar mere per chale gaye to kaya hua tum hone mere sabse bade sahare ab, mujhe unki zaroorat nahi ab

Mene uske mathe ko pyaar se chum liya aur uska haath thame uski aankho me dekhta raha.

EXT. CANADA - THREE MONTHS LATER

Ek gadi ruki jisme se ek nojavan utra aur ghumker car ka dusra darwaza khol diya, jisme ek ladki dulhan ka joda phene apne hato ka haar us nojavan ke gale me peero diya, us nojavan ne us ladki ko apni goud me behad payaar se utha liya aur use lekar mandir ki seedhiya chadne laga.

Mandhir me pujari unki raha dekh raha tha, aur bhi kuch log the jo dono ko aata dekhkar muskura rahe the.

Pujari ne kuch mantar padhe

PUJARI
Ab aap dono fero ke liye khade ho jayiye

Nojavan ne us ladki ko fir se apni goud me utha liya aur use lekar 7 fere agni ke charo aur liye.

PUJARI
Ab aap beth sakte he

Par wo ladka nahi ruka aur ek akhiri 8va fera liya.

LADKI
Ye kyu?

LADKA
Hamari mohabbat ke naam

Uski baat par ladki muskura di.

Pujari ke khane par Ladke ne mangalsutr ladki ke gale me pehenaya.

PUJARI
Mubarakho aaj se aap dono pati-patni hue Raj and Aanchal

Aur wo ladka (Raj) jaise uski Ladki(Aanchal) ko laya tha waise hi use wapis mandir se le gaya.

INT. RAJ & AANCHAL’S HOUSE - 15 YEARS LATER

Ek choti si ladki ek kamre me aai.

LADKI
Dad be quick! we will be late for the school.

Raj ne us ladki ki aur dekha jo uski beti “Suhani” thi aur use dekhkar ek bar dhere se muskuraya aur fir apni dairy (jo aap logo ne is kahani ke madhyam se padhi) ko band kiya aur us ladki ka haath thamte hue neeche aa gaya.

Neeche jaha uski behen-uski mohobbat-uski biwi-uski Aanchu, uske ladke “Rakshit” ko nasta kara rahi thi, Raj ko dekhkar wo muskai aur fir sabne milker nasta kiya, naste ke baad Raj apne beti aur bete ko lekar gate ki aur chala aur jate-jate ek nazar dinning table ke paas haar se sazi NITI ki tasveer par dali.

DONO BACHE
(gate par ponch kar)
Bye, Mom Love youuu!!!

Ye sunker Aanchal “chalti” hui kitchen se bahar aai aur dono bacho ke gal par ek-ek pappi ki aur fir Raj ke hotho par ek chota sa chumban kiya aur dhere se boli “Jaldi Aana”.

Raj uski baat par muskura diya aur dono bacho ko car se lekar apne kaam par nikal gaya aur Aanchal darwaze par khadi apne naye sansar ko dekhti rahi.


THE END

Isi ke saath Raj aur Aanchal ki Is Kahani ko me veeram deta hu, Aasha he aap sabko ye kahani achi lago hogi, fir milunga kabhi kisi aur kahani ke saath, jab tak apna dhyan rakhe aur ho sake to apni kahanio ko shabd dekar amar banaye.

Aapka Apna,
Niks96​

 

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