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Adultery Meri biwi RUKHSAAR aur mere KHWAAB (COMPLETE)

DARK WOLFKING

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golu ke biwi ke saath shaan ka koi matter banta hi nahi hai kyunki reason kahani me sabko pata chal hi gaya hoga 🤣🤣🤣..
golu puri tarah khush rakhta hoga uski biwi ko aur uska koi sapna bhi nahi hai ...

ruksar chud rahi hai golu se kyunki usko aadat lag chuki hai golu ki ,,aur pyar bhi ...
 
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Shikari_golu

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Golu ji yeh to aap ne sixer mara hai. I was not expecting this happy ending.
Acha laga pad ke.
Bahut se new writers aap ko role model hai.
So please future me aap ke stories me cuckold na padne ko mile.yeh Mera request hai.
By the way Aaj se mein aap ke stories ka critic hoon. So don't mind.
Jo muje lagta hai wo mein review doonga.
Keep it up and keep rocking 😉

Last ball par sixer maar sakta tha...tabhi to baar-baar bol raha tha...ki end jaroor read karna...

Well...personaly i m not a big fan of cuckold stuff...but its happend before in reality....dats why i put dat scene...

Well....i hope u like d rest part of story....nd ending too...

So...may b i'll c u on my other story...


Aur mujhe aise critic pasand hai jo story ki buraai ya kami batate hai...so..keep ur good work.....ok


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Shikari_golu

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Bro i think shaan deserves better
But if u want you can continue this story and end it on a good note
Bro please it was a good story end it on a good note
Just because your name is golu u r doing it
Just one update for shaan
I was hoping for a good update but it is not the ending wht i was expecting
Thank you
Hoping for the update

Dost...ye story koi man ki baat nhi...balki sacchai hai kisi ki....

Ab ant me jo bhi real me hai...wahi maine story me likha....to ab ye sahi hai ya galat....ye main nhi janta...but haa....is senario se golu, shaan aur rukhsaar khush hai aur unki life aage bad rahi hai.....

I know aapko end sahi nhi laga...but shaan ko ye sab sahi lagta hai...aur wo isse khysh hai....but kab tak rahega...ye koi nhi janta...

And its not abt my name only....if shaan nd rukhsaar r happy wid dat...so i hav no problem...

kyoki ye to fact hi hai na...ki dusre ki biwi chodne ko mile...to koi mard use nhi chhodega.....right...

Baki kya bolu...hope meri other story ka end aapko pasand aaye...c u thr...


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Shikari_golu

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Hi

Aapne story ka end kar dia ... Gif aap dalnege par i think oi fyada nahi as story pad chuke..
Personally mujhe Story ka End pasnad nahi aaya.. pehli bar negetive comnent de raha hun
1) Saalgirah par hi dono se ek sath chudna aur usko as suprise dena ..... agar Ruksar sach mein Shaan se pyar karti to aisa kabhi nahi karti .. salgirah khaas hoti hai asbhi ke liye
2) Golu ke to kai ke sath riste aur wo sabhi ko randi hi samjhta tha to phir rukar ko biwi aur itni parwah kyun.. aapne reason dene ki kosih kari par wo hajam nahi hui
3) Hajam isliye nahi hui kyunki Golu ko Germany mein kisi aur se pyar ho gaya aur shadi kar li.. means aapke liye pyar ek halwa hai aur sex hi sab kuch hai..
aur agar sex hi sab kuch ahi to ruksar se sahdi kyun ki aise hi karta to ye contradict karta hai apki soch ko
4) Jamal aur Jahira k cuckold session.. usko to Golu ne hi banaya tha na aur aapne kahan padosiyon ko pata chal gaya tha Ruksar aur Golu ke bar emein to Jamal ko kaise pata nahi chala ye bat
5) Golu ki wife ko in riston ke bar emein pata tha ya nahi.. agar haan to wo kaise maan aur kyun maan gayi aur nahi to ye to gollu ne usko dhoka de dia

In sab mein mujeh Golu hi galat dikh raha hai jo ki main nahi chahta tha isliye mujhe pasnad nahi aaya end.

Khair aapki kahani thi aap ne apni tarike se end kari aur aapka haq bhi banta hai.. bas mujhe jo kamiya lagi wo bata di.

Dekho dost...ye to main pahle hi bata chuka tha ki ye story reality par based hai....but story purpose se aapke qus ka ans de raha hu....

1 - saalgirah ka din rukhsaar ne chuna....saayad wo khud chahti thi ki shaan ko ye feel ho ki uski biwi ab sirf uski nhi rahi......isme golu ka koi lena-dena nhi tha....

2- rukhsaar ki parwaah kyo....iske liye aapko ek fact batata hu....

waise to real me golu ko rukhsaar easily mil gai thi...but stiry me rukhsaar ek behad sareef aourat thi....jo gair mard ka sochti bhi nhi thi aur sirf apne souhar par yakeen karti thi....

but jab kisi aourat ko ye samjh aa jaaye ki khud uska hubby hi use gair mard ke neeche dalna chahta hai...to uska bharosa tootna jaayaj hai...

jab golu aaditya naam se rukhsaar se mila....us waqt rukhsaar ka apne souhar se yakeen toot chuka tha....wo apne aapko unsafe mahsoos kar rahi thi....aur isi baat ka fayda golu ne uthaya...

golu ne rukhsaar ko pyaar dikha kar saadi tak kar li....taki rukhsaar use dil se apna maan sake...

kyoki ye fact hai...ki kai aourten bistar par to aa jati hai...par dil se nhi....aur agar dil se aa gai...to fir khul kar maza deti hai.....


Ab ye fact bhi aapko hajam na ho....to kisi aourat se jaroor puchhna....ki sirf jishm se kisi ka ho kar jyada maza aata hai....ya dil se....aapka doubt clear ho jayga....

3- Golu germany kyo gaya....use pyaar hua...saadi hui....??

Ye sab sach to sirf golu hi janta hai....to uske baare me koi clearification nhi de sakta....kya pata usne sirf rukhsaar se doori banane ko ye sab kiya ho....ho sakta hai na....kyoki golu jaisa banda sirf ek aourat tak nhi atka rahta.....

Aur aap mujhe qus mat kijiye....maine apni biopic nhi likhi....bas ek intresting incident likha...

TO mere liye pyaar aur hawas ke kya maayne hai....is baare me koi baat nhi....

bit is incident me pyaar tha...par sirf hawas ko pura karne tK....

4 - johar air jamaal ko sab pata hai....use mention karna maine jaroori nhi samjha tha...but ab mistake sudhaar li hai....jo new readers ke liye theek hoga...

5 - Golu ki wife...ye bhi pakka nhi ki hai bhi ki nhi....to aage kuch kahna theek nhi banta...

Aur haa.....meri kahani hai iska matlab ye nhi ki main golu ko sahi bol du....

Golu sach me kameena hai....but sirf aourton ke maamle me....lekin kabhi jabran sex nhi karta....bas patane ki kosis karta hai aur pat gai to maza maarta hai...

Baki mujhe khyshi hai ki readers meri kamiya batate hai.....aur ye aapka haq hai...aur isi tarah se to main aage apni mistake sahi kar ke aur accha likh sakuga...

Ye fact hai ki readers hi writter ko banate hai...so i always respect my readers nd his view.....

I hope meri other stories par bhi aapke aise comment milege....c u thr...

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Shikari_golu

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Golu bhai man to nahi kar raha kuch bolu kyunki story jaise end hui kuch bolne ka matlab hi nahi. Lekin kyun ki ye story itne dino se man se padhi to apne aap ko rok nhi sakta, story ka naam pehle to galat hai isaka naam hona chahiye tha ki kaise meri ek galti ne meri biwi ko banaya randi ya rakkhel kyunki wo wahi hai story kaha shaan ke sapne se ruksar ki hawas me badal gayi usne bata diye ki aurat ko paisa aur bada lund mil jaye to pyar ki koi aukat nahi shaan ki ek fantasy thi jise bhadakane me uske aas pass ke logo ne madad ki ruksar ne full maze kiye. jab shan ne use behos kar ke golu ko saupa to wo usi wakt shaan ko chod kar golu ke sath ho sakti thi par usne wo chupaye rakha sayad wo sochti thi agar golu ne age use chod diya to wo kahi ki nahi rahegi isliye usne shaan ko as 2nd option rakha aage baar baar shaan ko uska sapna yaad dila uska lund sahla kar apni baat manvayi. app stoy golu ya rukhsar ke jubani likte to zyada bura nahi lagta padh kar kyunki story me shaan ki ek galati dikha kar dusre ki sex story dikhayi gayi age bahut kehana hai lekin man nahi. story bas rukhsar ke randipan ke ird gird hai shaan ke character ke sath insaaf nahi hua. bas time waste kiya maine padhakar aap to dr chutiya se bhi aage nikle waha kajal apni hawas ko badle ka naam lekar mitati hai aur yaha to rukhsar ne parmanent solution nikal liya ab to lgta hai sania ka bhi yahi haal hoga sorry to say ab age main wo story nahi padhunga

Hahaha.....aapne title to accha bola....but mujhe lagta hai ki is story me rukhsaar aur shaan ke khwaab hi sabkuch the....are usi se to story bani.....jara socho...khwaab ma hota to aisa kuch hota....nhi na...to title theek hi hai....

Ab aapki baat par aate hai...aapne kaha ki rukhsaar ko shaan ko chhod dena chahiye tha....par kaise chhod deti.....golu koun sa use shaan ki tarah rakhne wala tha.....aur ye baat rukhsaar janti thi...ki kisi gair ki biwi chodne wala use rakgel bana sakta hai...but wo humsafar nhi jo saari jindgi usi ke sath nikaal de...



Aur end ki baat ye hai...ki ye real incident hai aur isme end aisa hi hai...aaj bhi rukhsaar apne souhar ke sath hai aur golu kabhi-kabhi maze le leta hai.....to main end nhi badal sakta tha....


Aapne kaha ki shaan ke sath insaaf nhi hua....but uske sath insaaf hoga kyo....galti uski hi hai....wo chahta to golu ke sath rukhsaar ko aage badne se rok sakta tha.....but usne try hi nhi kiya...kyoki wo chahta hi yahi tha..

aur haa...wo chahta to apna ghar chhod kar kahi aur rah sakta tha...but usne golu ke sath rahna theek samjha...taki apne khwaab ko roj pura kar sake....to wo sahi hua...mujhe nhi lagta ki uske sath koi insaaf hona chahiye...


Dost....agar jad nhi lagaoge to fal nhi milege....to imp jad hoti hai....fal nhi.....
aur jab jad lag jaaye....to fal kaise bhi ho...use jad nhi rok sakti....

saayad aap samjh gaye hoge ki yaha jad koun aur fal kya hai....ok...

Baki rahi drchutiya ki baat....to wo insaan hi alag hai....unki story me affair nhi hote....balki aourat puri randi hoti hai...jo har kahi bas chudti rahti hai....aur fir uska pati use khule dil se maaf bhi kar deta hai...

To khyd socho dost....ek mard jab apni biwi ka randipan bhool sakta hai....to kya dusra ye nhi sah sakta...ki uski biwi sirf ek se hi chudi hai....

But is bahas koi matlab nhi...na drchutiya badalne wale aur na hi golu.....so ise rahne dete hai...

Lekin aapko aur bhi koi kamiyan dikhe to jaroor bataye....

Aur ek baat....meri story same nhi hoti....souhar bechare soch hai....ye reality thi.....

Souhar bechare ka end pasand na aaye...ye ho hi nhi sakta...but usme kafi time hai abhi....i hope end dekhna jaroor chahege.....

Jab end hogi...to aapke bichaar jaanuga....ok

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Also to add+
1) Ab agar beta ho gaya hai au ruske rehne par bhi golu se chudwa rahi to aage kya hoga.. beta kya sochengea aur karega
2) Appne uski saheli Jhui ka bhi clear nai kia ...uske liye kuch special plan kia tha golu aur ruksar ne.. par kya hua uska


shuru emin sab shai tha par end jaise aapne kia usko pyar nahi kehte usko randipana kehte hai

Hmm..jab tak beta samjhne ke laayak hoga...tab tak koi solution dekh hi lene teeno mil kar.....dont worry....jab tak garam hogi...tab tak rukhsaar chudegi....

Juhi ko sahar se baahar bhej diya tha....tab sirf itna likha tha ki...ghar jao tera souhar sab bata dega....

Asal me juhi ki saza thi golu se judaai....aur golu ne juhi ko uske sahar ke sath dusre sahar bhej diya...apne office ki other branch me....

Dost...jaha pyaar hota hai....waha aisi hawas nhi hoti...ye pyaar nhi ek jaroorat thi....rukhsaar ki...golu ki...aur shaan ki....bas...


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Par Haan ek baat ke liye apki tarif jaroor karunaga ..
aap kahani ko accha likhte ho start se alost last tak bahot behtareen mode aur justifiaction de rahe the..
aur aapke jitna bada aur regular update mujhe nahi lagta koi aur de sakta hai
he heh.. i will will folllw ur new story Shart ka anjam .... hope wahan last tak sab accha rahe..

Dost...ye real incident tha...to main ending nhi badal saka....par meri dusri stories sirf stories hai....jinka end pahle hi clear hai.....

SO dont worry....uska end aapko niraash nhi karega....like my previous stories....ok


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Sir Ji aap ne end me jo jo Excuse dilvaye hai rukshar aur golu se shan ko ki kyo unhone bina bataye shadi ki aur name change kiya aur shan bhi happy ho jata hai ki uski wife randi nhi bni lekin uske khud ke jankar rishtedaar padosiyon sabko malum tha ki rukshar kya bn gyi hai ye to sirf golu aur uski family ki safity huyi, ab golu ne dusri shadi kr li aur rukshar akeli shan ke sath Benglow me rhegi to Rajni ke roop me ab wo kya banegi, jo log usko golu ki wife kee roop me jante hai wo ab usko kya samjhnge, aur shan itna chutiya kaise ho gya ki usko ye nhi samjh aaya ki uske dream pure krne kee nam pr uski Biwi ne uske shouhar hone ka haq hi chhin liya new name se wo ab sirf golu ki wife thi aur wo unka dost, mujhe lag rha hai ki happy ending ke chakkr me aapne shan ke views thik tarike se rkhe nhi, uski ichha thi ki ek bar apni wife ko bahar sex krte dekhe, lekin uske liye itna Secrifie rukshar bar bar Hint de rhi thi ki wo ab ruk nhi sakti golu ke bina nhi rah sakti, iska to matlab ye tha ki wo shan ko chhod sakti hai agar usko roka gya to, rukshar agar samjh rhi thi ki golu uski ijjat krta tha payar krta tha to ab usne kyo nhi uski dusri shadi pr objection uthaya, kyo nhi puchha ki unko flat se benglow me lekr aaya, bahut kuchh missing hai is end me,

Ek baat aapne bilkul theek kahi.....ki agar shaan ab rukhsaar ko rokta...to saayad use hamesha ke liye kho deta...isliye shaan ne golu ke sath hi rahna theek samjha....taki wife bhi na khoye aur khwaab bhi pure kar sake....

Aisa nhi hai ki happy ending ke chakkar me maine kuch galat likh diya....asal me end aisa hi hua hai...to wahi likha...

Ab baat karte hai rukhsaar ka golu ki biwi hona....to jabse golu germany gaya...tabse kisi ne rukhsaar ko golu ke sath nhi dekha....aur bapis aa kar bhi nhi....to ho sakta hai golu ne apne divorce ki story nana di ho...but fir bhi mujhe clear karna chahiye tha...jo rah gaya...

Aur rukhsaar ka shaan ke sath rahna safe hai...kyoki golu aur rukhsaar ko miya-biwi maanne wale gaurds aur noukar the.....jo ab waga nhi...aur wo golu se sawaal bhi nhi kar sakte.....right...

Aur rahi baat samaaj ki...to ab golu ke milne wale shaan se to milege nhi...aur banglow ke aas-paas ke logo ne jabse rukhsaar ko permanent waha dekha ..to tabhi se shaan ko bhi dekha....to jyada problem hona mumkin hi nhi tha....

Fir bhi maine kuch baaten mention nhi ki...wo galat hua....but ab kar duga...taki new readers ko doubt na rahe....

Aur aapke comment ke liye dil se thanks....ki aapne kamiyan batai...aur mujhe aise readers hi encourage karte hai ki main kam se kam galtiyon ke sath story likh saku...but fir bhi ho jati hai...

I hope other story me saare point pahle hi clear kar duga....ok...


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