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Adultery Meri biwi RUKHSAAR aur mere KHWAAB (COMPLETE)

Shikari_golu

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Nahi Bahi iske pehle sirf apki tarif kari ahi .. mera pana personal view hai End pasnad nahi aane ka aur uska apen hisab se reason dia..
aur main story mix bhi nah iakrta tabhi to likha ki ab intezar rahega Shart ke anjam ke agle upadte ka

aur haan apake reply ka bhi mere view par :)

Bilkul dost....apna view waisa hi dena chahiye jaisa dil ko sahi lage....bhale hi kisi ko sahi lage ya galat...so i appriciate dis...

Baki aapke comment ka reply to de diya....rahi shart ka anjaam....to wo jaldi hi pace pakdegi...ok...


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Shikari_golu

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Nice end bro.story ko story ki tarah lena chahiye sab ko.baki sab ki apni marzi hai kon kya sochta hai aur bolta hai.mere liye is story mai sab ke sab villen hi hain.shaan bhi.aur sabse bada chutiya ya agar isse bhi badi koi upadhi ho to usko milni chahiye.3 saal mai jo banda apni biwi ke pelne wale ka ghar nahi dekh paya tha usse kya hi dimag ki ummid kar sakte hain.aur is story mai kisi ko pyar nahi tha sab sex hi chahte the.jisko jaisa pasand tha waisa.bas ek chiz bahut hi shandaar thi is story wo ye jab rukhsaar ne shaan ke chere ko apne doodh ke bich mai liya shaan sab ko bhool gaya.isse ye sabit hota hai ki chuchi aur chut mai jabaan do dimag nahi🤣🤣.golu ko congrats story cmplt karne ke liye.

Hahaha......choot ke chakkat me badi-badi saltanate doob gai....to bechara shaan kya cheej hai.....

Waise shaan ne ki to galti hi hai....aur fir chutiya bhi bana...

Aur ye bhi sahi kaha ki yaha pyaar ki koi jagah nhi ...sab hawas ke shikaar hai....aur usi ke chakkar me aage bade.....

Waise ye real story hai to end badal nhi sakta tha....warna kuch aur bhi soch leta....but real me ab aisa hi chal raha hai...

Well....sabki apni soch hai...aur main sabki soch jaanne ke liye ready hu....dekhe kiun kya sochta hai....fir jawaab dene ki kosis karuga ...ok..


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Everything was fine and the story was great... But this ending was disappointed.. Its my opinion..

Hmm...so tell me....wht type of ending u was thinking....share it wid us...ok..

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Shikari_golu

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Kya likhto ho aap. Her update me ek twist... socha bi nahin tha ki jo hardcore cockold session hua wo ke dream tha; aur aapne story ko naya roop diya jis me kuch cheeze hoker bi nahin hue but padne walon do sab feel karwaya...

Ending achi lagi muje aur sotry tho aur bi mast lagi for below
1. shaaan aur rukhsaar saat hi aur apni life me kush hi..
2. Golu alag hua aur apni life me set hua kisi aur ladki ke saat; aur shaan aur rukhsaar ki family bani rahi
3. Rukhsaar ka salgiraha ka toofha shaan ke liye. Shaan jo itne time se chahata tha aur rukhsaar chahakar bi kar nahin pa rahi thi. Aur ek bada din choona jis se dono ko kushi mila.
4. Rukhsaar ka character.. gajab aur shaandar character hi.... pyar kiya shaan se, adulty pasand nahin tho mana kiya, then cheating kiya, then confess kiya, then dono ke saat alag alag enjoy kiya and then end me saat milke bi enjyoy kiya. Story pura rukhsaar hi chalayi hi...
5. Sabse best: aaplki itni lambi lambi updates.. Khas kar ke last ke kuch updates aur specially last wala; aisi lambi updates padne me maja aata hi.

Last ka sex aur lumba hona chahiye tho aur usme baate hi jyda hona chahiye tha... bus rukhsaar, shaan aur golu be beech 3 4 baate hui aur katam.. teeno ki feelings agar baaton me aur bahar aate tho maza aata..

Bura bi lagega kyuki story katam hoi gayi... Thanks again for such a wonderful story

Sahi kaha dost....abhi sex scene kuch aur likh sakta tha....but mujhe laga ki log ab sex se jyada end ke liye wait kar rahe hai.....aur fir sex to waisa hi chalta...ya to golu ke sath ya threesome....to main jyada nhi likha....

Well....ab dusro story par milte hai....aur aapke comment ka wait karuga....ok...


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Shikari_golu

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Kuch log story ko story le bol rahe hai age gyan bhi re rahe hai ki shaan gadha hai chutiya hai gandu hai. Jab hum itni badi story padhte hai to sirf sex scene ke liye nahi padhte agar waisa hota to itna intazar karne se achha koi dusari choti story padh lete. Itna hum story se character se writer se lagav ki wajah se karte hai. Agar kisi character ke sath na insafi hui hai to hame bolne ka pura haq hai. Main beech beech me isliye comment nahi karta qunki age ka kuch pata na ho to pahle hi writer ko kuch bolna galat hai. Isliye last 3 updates achhe na lagne ke bawajood kuch comment nahi kiya kyunki mujhe laga last me story thik ho jayegi. Lekin aisa hua nahi. Aur to aur golu bhai apne ek dum we sabh badal diya
1) jo rukhsar golu ke pyaar ke liye ya kahe apne hawas ke liye door nahi reh sakti thi wo 10 month kaise rahi gayi. Kya golu use apne kisi dost se mila kar gaya tha jo uski gair maujood gi me rukhsar ki hawas mitaye. Kyunki shaan to napunsak tha uske liye.
2)Golu ki shadi ke liye wo kaise razi ho gayi apne to rukhsar aur golu ko 2 jism 1 jaan portrait kiya to fir achanak se badal kaise gayi.
3) golu ki nayi biwi ko iske baare me pata hai ya golu ne use rukhsar ke sath lesbian bana kar pata liya.
4)Aur rukhsar golu ke friend family se party me mili to nayi wali ke ane se rukhsar ka as a rajni character ka kya hua ya golu sabko yahi bol raha meri 2 biwi hai.
5) Apne isme sirf shaan ko uski galati ki saza di golu aur rukhsar ko kis khushi me chod diya apka naam golu hai isliye. Mere khayal me shaan golu aur rukhsar ko mila kar divorce le leta aur nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karta to acha end hota. Abhi jo end hai usme koi izzat nahi shaan ke neighbour aur friends jaan gaye ki wo ek rakhel ka pati hai isse acha wo mar jata. Aur jab inka baccha bada ho ga aur puchega to kya rukhsar uska lund sehla kar doodh muh me dal kar safayi degi. Shaan ne apni biwi ko behosh kar ke golu ko saup diya to rukhsar ne bhi shaan ko behosh kar ke golu ko saup diya balki wo to pahle hi uski randi ban chuki thi to saza sirf shaan ko hi kyun. Kya uska naam golu nahi hai isliye.

Are dost....gussa nhi...sabka apna view hai....so leave it....

Chalo aapke sawaal dekhte hai.....jo kafi valid hai.....

1- nhi..golu ne kisi dost ko nhi bola tha...balki shaan ne uski hawas mitaai...tab to baccha hua.....kyoki shaan ab kafi kuch seekh chuka tha...jisse rukhsaar ko itna maza to de hi deta tha ki use kisi aur ki jaroorat na pade....aur rukhsaar koi randi nhi thi....wo sirf golu ke liye open thi aur uski fikr bhi karti hai...tabhi to usne badi aasaani se golu ko jane diya...ki wo apna kaam khatm kar sake......aur use shaan ze pyaar bhi hai...tabhi usne golu ke na hone par shaan ka baccha pet me dala....

waise bhi aourat apni hawas ko bilkul kaabu me rakh sakti hai.....jaisa aapne dr.chutiya ki kahani me padha hoga....to jab ek randi sudhar sakti hai to rukhsaar kyo nhi....use to bas ek hi mard ko bhoolna tha....haa...

2- waqt ne badla....10 mahine ki doori aur bacche ne badla....aur ye fact hai ki aourat baccha hone ke baad hawas ke pichhe nhi jati...aur fir jab bapis hawas jagi...tab tak golu ki saadi ko kafi time nikal chuka tha.....

Aur rukhsaar saadi ko kyo nhi raji hoti.....wo ye to janti hi thi ki jab wo shaan ko nhi chhod rahi to aaj nhi to kal golu sadi jaroor karega...kyoki is relationship ke sath wo puri jindigi nhi nikaal sakta....aur golu ne baat ki hogi....jo mention nhi kiya....

3- golu ne sadi ki bhi hai ki nhi...ya ye bhi koi rakhel hai....iska hi nhi pata....to aage kya bolu....haha ..

4- bilkul yahi bolega..agar use logo se milwayga to...ki rajni se alag ho chuka hu aur ye dusri hai.....but ye sab is story ke liye jaroori nhi samjha to mention nhi kiya....

5- shaan agar rukhsaar se alag ho bhi jata to uska kuch nhi hota....rukhsaar to jati hi.....uske khwaab bhi pure nhi hote....isliye wo sath hai....aur rukhsaar bhi use chhodna to nhi chahti thi.......

aur ijjat ki use fikr hoti to golu ke sath rahne aata hi nhi....saayad apne khwaabo ke chakkar me sab kuch bhool gaya wo....baki kya bolu....

Aur haa...yaha sareef koi nhi...sab matlabi hai.....aur sab apni hawas ko pura kar rahe hai....

Golu ka kya bolu....wo to pahle bhi aisa tha...matlabi...hawsi...dusron ki biwiyon ko chodne wala....aur wo aage bhi aisa hi rahne wala hai....hahaha....

Aur rahi bacche ki baat...to jab tak wo sabkuch samjhne laayak hoga ...tab tak to saayad bahut kuch badal jaaye....to uski fikr mat karo.....jaroorat hi nhi hogi use samjhane ki....ok

Aur saza shaan ko isliye mili kyoki sabkuch usi ki wajah se hua.....baki to sabne mouke par chouka hi mara...to saza bhi wahi bhugte...

waise use saza kaha mili....uske liye to ye maza hi hai...aur use afsoos bhi nhi.....right...



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Shikari_golu

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Mere hisab se Bhai jaise golu Shan ki biwi ko chodta hai waise hi golu bhi apni biwi Shan ko chodne ko de . tabhi sahi Mayne me Shan k sat insaf hoga.

Hisaab se duniya nhi chalti dost.....

Golu jaise mard ke hote huye uski biwi kisi aur ke paas kyo jaygi......are unki biwiyan gair mard dekhti hai...jinke souhar me dam hi nhi hota theek se chodne ka....

Shaan sala cuckold hai....use apni biwi ki chudaai dekhne me maza aata hai....to aise insaan ke sath yahi insaaf hua....ki use biwi chhod kar nhi gai....


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Shikari_golu

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bhai kahani ka to pta nhi
uske bare me kya bole
pr
ak word h jo mai dil se bolna chahuna

U R THE BEST EVER BRO
ap jysa likte ho
vysa koi nhi bro

ayse hi story likha kro

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Shikari_golu

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Bhai yeh nahi ho sakta kyunki writer ne shaan ko napunsak aur sirf one women man dikhaya hai. Jiski biwi bhale rakhel ho lekin wo uska gulam hai matlab pyar karta hai to wo aisa nhi kar sakta. Aur golu the HE MAN aisa kaise hone dega kyunki golu bhai ki story me sirf golu ke pass hi iska license hai ki wo dusro ki biwi ko chod sakta matlab ki pyar kar sakta hai. Aur kya pata golu ki biwi bhi rukhsaar jaisi randi ho to uska shaan ke chote lund se kya hi hoga

Hahaha....golu ki biwi golu se khush hai dost.....baahar wo chude jo apne mard se khush na ho....

Aur golu to kitno ki biwiyon ko khush kar chuka....to apni biwi ko to dher saari khushi dega na....


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Golubhai apki jitni completed story he usme se one of the best story ye hai... kyun ki esme reality show ho rahi he... limited log the aur sochne par bilkul real life based lagti he.... Johra ke husband ka jo hal huva us part me kafi logo ko pasend nhi aaya tha aisa apne kaha to wo chiz ko apne end me bahot acche se cover kar lia... ye hoti he ek acche writer ki khasiyat... main kafi salo se story padh raha hun... story starting se leke end tak hold karna har kisi ke bas ki bat nahi hoti.... apne starting se leke end tak maza aur suspence bana ke rakha aur story ka jo ending he wo one of the best laga mujhe... you have amazing writing skill.

Golubhai... Thank You So Much For This Wonderful Story.


Thanks to u..for ur time dost.....

Aur haa.....ye real incident hi hai....isliye end to real hi rakha....nhi to kuch aur bhi dekh leta....

well...i hope u'll like to read my other story too...so c u thr...


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