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अरे भाई मैने अलविदा कहा ना। फिर क्यों बात को खींच कर बात का बतंगड़ कर रहा है। अगर इतना ही था तो एक अच्छे लेखक का कर्तव्य निभाते हुए तमीज़ से पेश आते हुए सिचुएसन को एक्सप्लेन करता। की भाई डीबी सिंह जो तुम्हें लग रहा है वो गलत है। जैसे बाकी लेखक एक्सप्लेन करते हैं। लेकिन नहीं तू तो रणभूमि में युद्ध करने उतर आया। आज तेरे को लिखते हुये काफी समय हो गया होगा तुझे हम पाठकगण की मन:स्थिति की परख होनी चाहिए। लेकिन तु समझाने के बजाय लड़ने पर आ गया। खैर,...

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Thodi der m deepika wash room jane ke bahane piche side aayi….

Dekha ravi ka door band h…or sunita ki kitchen ki khidki pe dekha uska sasur kahana ban raha h..to bhar se boli…


D:: kaka pranam…kaise ho aap…( hath jod ke sir m pallu rakhe hue)


K:: are namskar beta….thik hu..kab aaye …??? Suresh babu bhi aaye h kya????( Khus ho ke)


D:: nhi kaka wo main or kabbu aaye h…sunita kab aa rahi h….??( Ravi ke room ke door ko dekhte hue)


K:: kaha se ..aati h…kal Raat uski maa gujar gayi…phone ki hogi ..ravi babu ne nhi suna hoga ..to pata hi nhi chala subh 10 baje main yaha dukan pe gaya tha to puch ki kab aa rahi h ..tab pata chala mujhe ..

Abhi aa hi raha hu…aayegi ab ..1,2 din m…kya karte h..paisa bhi lag gaya…or nhi bachi….( Deepika ko dekh ke)


D: areeee…..accha……( bura feel karte hue)


K:: kya karte hain sab aisa hi h…or malik shaab ki tabiyat kaise h ab…ghar le aaye Keh rahe the ravi babu….( Thoda tension bhari awaz m)


D:: haan doctor ne mana kar diya kaha…ki jab tak hain .ghar m hi rakho…oxygen ghar m hi lagaya..h….aata h ek doctor dekhne ..sab aise hi h kaka….koi bharosa nhi…or shankar bhaiya ki tabiyat thi k….h???( Normal ho ke)


K:. Haan beta thik h .jata h ab khet ko thoda thoda chalte hue….tum logo ka bhut Ehsaan h beta…nhi kya karte hum log ..( dukhi ho ke)



D:: nhi kaka…aisa nhi h…kahan main bana dungi..kaka…( Kishan ko tokate hue)


K:: nhi nhi ,khichadi bana li bas…sunita or bacche hain nhi ..khichadi kha lete h….
Ravi babu ko aacha nhi lagta tha…ab kya kare aise hi…bna lete h….( Muskurate hue)



Deepika bas muskura gayi ..or ravi ke room ko dekh ke bas muskurane lagi…


D:: kaka .main sabji bna rahi hu…khana bhejungi..ruk jana…..( muskura ke washroom ko chale gayi…)


Deepika bhar aate time …or per dhoye…jisse usne apni saree thodi si upper utha li…..jisse deepika ki pindali..or payal dikhane lagi…wo to ravi ko soch ke muskura rahi thi...

romance-anushka
Tabhi usi time ravi bhi bhar nikala…thoda serious muh bna ke…
Sayad wash room ko ja raha tha…


Or jaise hi deepika ko saree ko ghutne se thoda sa niche tak uthaye dekha …

images-2-3
Usne gusse se pehle apni aankh band kar li…or fir sunita ke room ko dekh ki koi dekh to nhi raha h…


Deepika samj gayi or ghabra ke ek dam se saree niche chor di …


Ravi gusse se Apne jabde ko dabata hua..dusre washroom ghus gaya….


Deepika bechari dar ke uske muh ko dekhte reh gayi…jaise man hi man Keh rahi ho…


Wo jaan bujh ke nhi kiya…per dho rahi thi…..



Lekin ravi ne zor se darwaza band kiya…or Deepika bechari aage side chale gayi .


Deepika ke grah ulte disha m chal rahe the…jo kar rahi thi…wo hi galat ho raha tha…


Upper aayi to dekha kavita kahna bna rahi h to deepika boli..


D:: are main bnati hu na…behto tummm.( Zaldi se kitchen m aake)


K:: banane do mami..bas mujhe batate. Jao…ab to banan hi padega….mummy Keh rahi thi…mami se sikh lena sab….anshul ki mummy bhut tez h mami….dar lagta h unko dekh ke…anshul Keh bhi rahe the….khana bana sikh lena .( Serious ho ke)


D: are sab aa jata h…. tension mat karo…chalo bano m baati hu…( smile karke kahde ho gayi)



K:: mami kha h wo???( Dhere se bhar ko dekh ke)


M:: niche the….( Thoda dukhi ho ke apne mangalsutra ko dekh ke)


K:: bola kya???( Dhare se )


M:: nhi ….( Bilkul rone wale muh se)


K:: mummy ko na bol de….yar…mummy to kha jayegi mujhe….( Tension m)


Deepika man m sochne lagi…


Mummy kya khayengi…ye hi kaha jayenge mujhe ab….



Aise hi dono kahna banne lage…deepika roti banate lagi Kishan or shankar ke liye….

Ravi padhne laga…lekin gusse se…



Kavita bachi hui roti banne lagi…to deepika ne zaladi se sunita ke sasur or pati ke liye…kahan lagaya or jane lagi dene..


D::tum banao haan …main de aati hu Kishan kaka logo ko .bechare.. khichadi kha rahe the….( Plate dhak ke le jate hue)



Deepika ne sir m pallu rakha or chale gayi kahana dene….


Kahna dene ke baad himmat karke .sher ki gufa ke tarf gayi…bakri….



Deepika ne dhere se room khatkhataya…


Ravi ne socha kavita hogi…

Or uth ke door khola ..to samne deepika thi….



Ravi ne ek bar ko usko dekha…..sach m khubsurat to bhut thi….or ab to or bhi zaida….


Tabhi Deepika boli…


D:: kahana kah lo….( Jaise hi bol rahi thi..Kishan bhar aaya to usko dekh ke sir pe pallu rakh ke)


Ravi kuch nhi bola ..bas bhar nikal gaya….

Deepika usko dekhne lagi..wo hath dho raha tha…
Or fir aaya…deepika uske door pe kahde rahi….


Ravi ne usko ignore kiya..or hath poch ke room se bhar aa gay..or door band kar diya…


Deepika usko manne ko Wahi pe kahde hue usko dekh ke muskura rahi thi…or kabhi nazar hata deti..

anushka-face-1


Ravi ne gusse wala muh banaya tha.. deepika ko dekha bhi nhi or chala gya..aage side…


Piche piche deepika…

Ravi upper gaya dekha kavita roti banne m lagi thi….

Roti to bna leti thi..thodi thodi….

Ravi usse bhi nhi bola kyonki gussa us pe bhi tha ki wo mobile m kyon baat kar rahi thi…or mobile kaha se aaya…



Deepika ne uske liya kahana lagaya….ravi ne dekha bhi nhi usko .bas tv ko dekhte raha..jabki deepika bas usko dekh rahi thi….us 100 watt ke bulb ki roshani main..

romance-anushka-5

To be continued
 
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Thodi der m deepika wash room jane ke bahane piche side aayi….

Dekha ravi ka door band h…or sunita ki kitchen ki khidki pe dekha uska sasur kahana ban raha h..to bhar se boli…


D:: kaka pranam…kaise ho aap…( hath jod ke sir m pallu rakhe hue)


K:: are namskar beta….thik hu..kab aaye …??? Suresh babu bhi aaye h kya????( Khus ho ke)


D:: nhi kaka wo main or kabbu aaye h…sunita kab aa rahi h….??( Ravi ke room ke door ko dekhte hue)


K:: kaha se ..aati h…kal Raat uski maa gujar gayi…phone ki hogi ..ravi babu ne nhi suna hoga ..to pata hi nhi chala subh 10 baje main yaha dukan pe gaya tha to puch ki kab aa rahi h ..tab pata chala mujhe ..

Abhi aa hi raha hu…aayegi ab ..1,2 din m…kya karte h..paisa bhi lag gaya…or nhi bachi….( Deepika ko dekh ke)


D: areeee…..accha……( bura feel karte hue)


K:: kya karte hain sab aisa hi h…or malik shaab ki tabiyat kaise h ab…ghar le aaye Keh rahe the ravi babu….( Thoda tension bhari awaz m)


D:: haan doctor ne mana kar diya kaha…ki jab tak hain .ghar m hi rakho…oxygen ghar m hi lagaya..h….aata h ek doctor dekhne ..sab aise hi h kaka….koi bharosa nhi…or shankar bhaiya ki tabiyat thi k….h???( Normal ho ke)


K:. Haan beta thik h .jata h ab khet ko thoda thoda chalte hue….tum logo ka bhut Ehsaan h beta…nhi kya karte hum log ..( dukhi ho ke)



D:: nhi kaka…aisa nhi h…kahan main bana dungi..kaka…( Kishan ko tokate hue)


K:: nhi nhi ,khichadi bana li bas…sunita or bacche hain nhi ..khichadi kha lete h….
Ravi babu ko aacha nhi lagta tha…ab kya kare aise hi…bna lete h….( Muskurate hue)



Deepika bas muskura gayi ..or ravi ke room ko dekh ke bas muskurane lagi…


D:: kaka .main sabji bna rahi hu…khana bhejungi..ruk jana…..( muskura ke washroom ko chale gayi…)


Deepika bhar aate time …or per dhoye…jisse usne apni saree thodi si upper utha li…..jisse deepika ki pindali..or payal dikhane lagi…wo to ravi ko soch ke muskura rahi thi...

romance-anushka
Tabhi usi time ravi bhi bhar nikala…thoda serious muh bna ke…
Sayad wash room ko ja raha tha…


Or jaise hi deepika ko saree ko ghutne se thoda sa niche tak uthaye dekha …

images-2-3
Usne gusse se pehle apni aankh band kar li…or fir sunita ke room ko dekh ki koi dekh to nhi raha h…


Deepika samj gayi or ghabra ke ek dam se saree niche chor di …


Ravi gusse se Apne jabde ko dabata hua..dusre washroom ghus gaya….


Deepika bechari dar ke uske muh ko dekhte reh gayi…jaise man hi man Keh rahi ho…


Wo jaan bujh ke nhi kiya…per dho rahi thi…..



Lekin ravi ne zor se darwaza band kiya…or Deepika bechari aage side chale gayi .


Deepika ke grah ulte disha m chal rahe the…jo kar rahi thi…wo hi galat ho raha tha…


Upper aayi to dekha kavita kahna bna rahi h to deepika boli..


D:: are main bnati hu na…behto tummm.( Zaldi se kitchen m aake)


K:: banane do mami..bas mujhe batate. Jao…ab to banan hi padega….mummy Keh rahi thi…mami se sikh lena sab….anshul ki mummy bhut tez h mami….dar lagta h unko dekh ke…anshul Keh bhi rahe the….khana bana sikh lena .( Serious ho ke)


D: are sab aa jata h…. tension mat karo…chalo bano m baati hu…( smile karke kahde ho gayi)



K:: mami kha h wo???( Dhere se bhar ko dekh ke)


M:: niche the….( Thoda dukhi ho ke apne mangalsutra ko dekh ke)


K:: bola kya???( Dhare se )


M:: nhi ….( Bilkul rone wale muh se)


K:: mummy ko na bol de….yar…mummy to kha jayegi mujhe….( Tension m)


Deepika man m sochne lagi…


Mummy kya khayengi…ye hi kaha jayenge mujhe ab….



Aise hi dono kahna banne lage…deepika roti banate lagi Kishan or shankar ke liye….

Ravi padhne laga…lekin gusse se…



Kavita bachi hui roti banne lagi…to deepika ne zaladi se sunita ke sasur or pati ke liye…kahan lagaya or jane lagi dene..


D::tum banao haan …main de aati hu Kishan kaka logo ko .bechare.. khichadi kha rahe the….( Plate dhak ke le jate hue)



Deepika ne sir m pallu rakha or chale gayi kahana dene….


Kahna dene ke baad himmat karke .sher ki gufa ke tarf gayi…bakri….



Deepika ne dhere se room khatkhataya…


Ravi ne socha kavita hogi…

Or uth ke door khola ..to samne deepika thi….



Ravi ne ek bar ko usko dekha…..sach m khubsurat to bhut thi….or ab to or bhi zaida….


Tabhi Deepika boli…


D:: kahana kah lo….( Jaise hi bol rahi thi..Kishan bhar aaya to usko dekh ke sir pe pallu rakh ke)


Ravi kuch nhi bola ..bas bhar nikal gaya….

Deepika usko dekhne lagi..wo hath dho raha tha…
Or fir aaya…deepika uske door pe kahde rahi….


Ravi ne usko ignore kiya..or hath poch ke room se bhar aa gay..or door band kar diya…


Deepika usko manne ko Wahi pe kahde hue usko dekh ke muskura rahi thi…or kabhi nazar hata deti..

anushka-face-1


Ravi ne gusse wala muh banaya tha.. deepika ko dekha bhi nhi or chala gya..aage side…


Piche piche deepika…

Ravi upper gaya dekha kavita roti banne m lagi thi….

Roti to bna leti thi..thodi thodi….

Ravi usse bhi nhi bola kyonki gussa us pe bhi tha ki wo mobile m kyon baat kar rahi thi…or mobile kaha se aaya…



Deepika ne uske liya kahana lagaya….ravi ne dekha bhi nhi usko .bas tv ko dekhte raha..jabki deepika bas usko dekh rahi thi….us 100 watt ke bulb ki roshani main..

romance-anushka-5

To be continued
Nice update bro.yeh Ravi ko deepika se aram se bat karke sort out kar lena chaiye ,aise hi bechari ko tadapa raha hai aur galat fehmi alag se pal rakha hai.
 

Ajay chauhan

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Thodi der m deepika wash room jane ke bahane piche side aayi….

Dekha ravi ka door band h…or sunita ki kitchen ki khidki pe dekha uska sasur kahana ban raha h..to bhar se boli…


D:: kaka pranam…kaise ho aap…( hath jod ke sir m pallu rakhe hue)


K:: are namskar beta….thik hu..kab aaye …??? Suresh babu bhi aaye h kya????( Khus ho ke)


D:: nhi kaka wo main or kabbu aaye h…sunita kab aa rahi h….??( Ravi ke room ke door ko dekhte hue)


K:: kaha se ..aati h…kal Raat uski maa gujar gayi…phone ki hogi ..ravi babu ne nhi suna hoga ..to pata hi nhi chala subh 10 baje main yaha dukan pe gaya tha to puch ki kab aa rahi h ..tab pata chala mujhe ..

Abhi aa hi raha hu…aayegi ab ..1,2 din m…kya karte h..paisa bhi lag gaya…or nhi bachi….( Deepika ko dekh ke)


D: areeee…..accha……( bura feel karte hue)


K:: kya karte hain sab aisa hi h…or malik shaab ki tabiyat kaise h ab…ghar le aaye Keh rahe the ravi babu….( Thoda tension bhari awaz m)


D:: haan doctor ne mana kar diya kaha…ki jab tak hain .ghar m hi rakho…oxygen ghar m hi lagaya..h….aata h ek doctor dekhne ..sab aise hi h kaka….koi bharosa nhi…or shankar bhaiya ki tabiyat thi k….h???( Normal ho ke)


K:. Haan beta thik h .jata h ab khet ko thoda thoda chalte hue….tum logo ka bhut Ehsaan h beta…nhi kya karte hum log ..( dukhi ho ke)



D:: nhi kaka…aisa nhi h…kahan main bana dungi..kaka…( Kishan ko tokate hue)


K:: nhi nhi ,khichadi bana li bas…sunita or bacche hain nhi ..khichadi kha lete h….
Ravi babu ko aacha nhi lagta tha…ab kya kare aise hi…bna lete h….( Muskurate hue)



Deepika bas muskura gayi ..or ravi ke room ko dekh ke bas muskurane lagi…


D:: kaka .main sabji bna rahi hu…khana bhejungi..ruk jana…..( muskura ke washroom ko chale gayi…)


Deepika bhar aate time …or per dhoye…jisse usne apni saree thodi si upper utha li…..jisse deepika ki pindali..or payal dikhane lagi…wo to ravi ko soch ke muskura rahi thi...

romance-anushka
Tabhi usi time ravi bhi bhar nikala…thoda serious muh bna ke…
Sayad wash room ko ja raha tha…


Or jaise hi deepika ko saree ko ghutne se thoda sa niche tak uthaye dekha …

images-2-3
Usne gusse se pehle apni aankh band kar li…or fir sunita ke room ko dekh ki koi dekh to nhi raha h…


Deepika samj gayi or ghabra ke ek dam se saree niche chor di …


Ravi gusse se Apne jabde ko dabata hua..dusre washroom ghus gaya….


Deepika bechari dar ke uske muh ko dekhte reh gayi…jaise man hi man Keh rahi ho…


Wo jaan bujh ke nhi kiya…per dho rahi thi…..



Lekin ravi ne zor se darwaza band kiya…or Deepika bechari aage side chale gayi .


Deepika ke grah ulte disha m chal rahe the…jo kar rahi thi…wo hi galat ho raha tha…


Upper aayi to dekha kavita kahna bna rahi h to deepika boli..


D:: are main bnati hu na…behto tummm.( Zaldi se kitchen m aake)


K:: banane do mami..bas mujhe batate. Jao…ab to banan hi padega….mummy Keh rahi thi…mami se sikh lena sab….anshul ki mummy bhut tez h mami….dar lagta h unko dekh ke…anshul Keh bhi rahe the….khana bana sikh lena .( Serious ho ke)


D: are sab aa jata h…. tension mat karo…chalo bano m baati hu…( smile karke kahde ho gayi)



K:: mami kha h wo???( Dhere se bhar ko dekh ke)


M:: niche the….( Thoda dukhi ho ke apne mangalsutra ko dekh ke)


K:: bola kya???( Dhare se )


M:: nhi ….( Bilkul rone wale muh se)


K:: mummy ko na bol de….yar…mummy to kha jayegi mujhe….( Tension m)


Deepika man m sochne lagi…


Mummy kya khayengi…ye hi kaha jayenge mujhe ab….



Aise hi dono kahna banne lage…deepika roti banate lagi Kishan or shankar ke liye….

Ravi padhne laga…lekin gusse se…



Kavita bachi hui roti banne lagi…to deepika ne zaladi se sunita ke sasur or pati ke liye…kahan lagaya or jane lagi dene..


D::tum banao haan …main de aati hu Kishan kaka logo ko .bechare.. khichadi kha rahe the….( Plate dhak ke le jate hue)



Deepika ne sir m pallu rakha or chale gayi kahana dene….


Kahna dene ke baad himmat karke .sher ki gufa ke tarf gayi…bakri….



Deepika ne dhere se room khatkhataya…


Ravi ne socha kavita hogi…

Or uth ke door khola ..to samne deepika thi….



Ravi ne ek bar ko usko dekha…..sach m khubsurat to bhut thi….or ab to or bhi zaida….


Tabhi Deepika boli…


D:: kahana kah lo….( Jaise hi bol rahi thi..Kishan bhar aaya to usko dekh ke sir pe pallu rakh ke)


Ravi kuch nhi bola ..bas bhar nikal gaya….

Deepika usko dekhne lagi..wo hath dho raha tha…
Or fir aaya…deepika uske door pe kahde rahi….


Ravi ne usko ignore kiya..or hath poch ke room se bhar aa gay..or door band kar diya…


Deepika usko manne ko Wahi pe kahde hue usko dekh ke muskura rahi thi…or kabhi nazar hata deti..

anushka-face-1


Ravi ne gusse wala muh banaya tha.. deepika ko dekha bhi nhi or chala gya..aage side…


Piche piche deepika…

Ravi upper gaya dekha kavita roti banne m lagi thi….

Roti to bna leti thi..thodi thodi….

Ravi usse bhi nhi bola kyonki gussa us pe bhi tha ki wo mobile m kyon baat kar rahi thi…or mobile kaha se aaya…



Deepika ne uske liya kahana lagaya….ravi ne dekha bhi nhi usko .bas tv ko dekhte raha..jabki deepika bas usko dekh rahi thi….us 100 watt ke bulb ki roshani main..

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To be continued
Bhai kya hi update tha yaar maza aagya

Lagta hai humri deepu ko sher ke muh main haath dena hi hoga or kavita bechari wo bhi kya kare thodi galti uski bhi thi

Har wqat apne fiance se phone pe baat karna sahi to nahi haina khass kar aise mouko par
 

Rekha rani

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Both update awesome , ravi ne sheet yudh ched rkha hai, deepika ke hath nakshatr hi kharab ho chale hai, ab ravi ka gussa kab futta hai, aur deepika pr kya asar hota hai, kya deepika sambhal payegi ya ravi ki bato ka asar deepika pr ulta hoga, kahi. Dono me jhagda jyada na bad jaye, vaise hi deepika ki halat kabutar jaisi hai jo billi ko dekhte hi aankh band kr leta hai
 

Sunilgupta

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Superb update
 
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