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Fantasy Milan ya Punah Milan
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Pati aur bete ke aese vichar pe koun patni ya maa garv nhi karegi...Jaha ek taraf sameer ki mom apni betiyon muh se school wale baatein sun dil hi dil mein garv kar rahi thi apne pati aur bete ke vichar aur karya se...
Wohi dusri taraf negative kirdaaro ne entry le liya hai story mein... ab ye koun hai... thakur aur unke pariwar ke dusman hi honge jo sameer ko target karne wala hai Shahar mein...
Pata nahi kyun kuch bure log hote hi jo dusro ki khushi unnati nahi dekh sakte... update ke antim bhaag mein jis negative kirdaar ne entry Mara hai wo un chaalbaaz, laalchi logo mein se hai...
jo ladki sameer ko pyar karti hai wo Shweta hi hai.. Aur ye baat confirm hai...
Khair.... Bahot hi dilchasp update tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..... lagta hai kahani mein kahani mein romance,thrill, suspense suru hone wali hai bahot jald...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Jab tak burai na ho achchhai ka pta hi nhi chalta hain..
Koun kise pyar karta hain ye to aage pta chalega...
Jaldi hi milati hoon agale update me sath
Aaj milega aur jald milega
Update 9
Teeno jab ghar pahuche the darwaje pe hi Nisha khadi thi.
NIsha in teeno ke dekhar - Aap teeno hath muh dhokar sidhe rasoi ghar me aa jayiye maa sabka khana nikal rhi hain main bus aap logo ka intezar kar rhi thi.
Manav - Thik hain didi fir wo apne dono badon ke sath kuye taraf chal diya.
Teeno ek sath jab rasoighar me pahuche to unhe pta chala thakur Sabah khana khakar ja chuke hain.
Sushila ji ne bhi apna bhojan bachchhon ke sath nikal liya tha sab ne baithkar khana khaya. Khana khane ke bad.
Shweta: achchha amma ji ham dono chalate hain.
Sushila- Thik hain bachchon magar yahan bhi aa jaya kar ye bhi tera ghar.
Sushila ki bat sunkar Shweta Sharma gayi aur Nisha muskura uthi.
Nisha- ha maa main bhi ye samajhati hoon ise magar ye nhi samajhati.
Nisha ki bat sunakar to jaise Shweta ko dar sa lga.
Shweta- ab main samajh gayi aab roj aaya karugi sabse milane.
Nisha- Sabse milane ya apne..... Ammaji se.
Nisha ka bolate samay rukane par Shweta ki halat kharab ho gayi magar wo apne manobhav ko apne dil dabakar muskurati hui. Bhai ke sath sabko for aane ka bol kar nikal gayi.
Agle din usi shahar ek dusare gaon me. Ek bahut shandar haweli me akhbar me topper student ki photo dekhate huye.
Ek Ladki - ye to wo hain lekin itna bda ho gaya. Are magar main bhi to itani badi hogayi. Kitna sunder aur sajila Ha n iski ankhe dekho hay Sameer tum to aur khubsurat ho gaye ho magar tumhe sab yaad hoga tumse mile bhi to kai sal bit gaye. Manav ke janam par mile ab to teen sal beet gaye us baton ka pta nhi tumhe sab yaad bhi hoga ki nhi wo chhoti ghatna jisane mere dil ke tar hila diye.
Us ghatna ke time to main janti bhi nhi tumhara mera rishta kya aur kar baithi chhoti se umar me pyar magar Manav ke janam pe pta chala tum koun ho tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi kyoki maine kul devi ko sakshi mankar tumhe apna sab kuch man chuki. Ye samaj nhi samajhega aur hamara rishta bhi to aesa hain.
Lekin jo bhi mere man Mandir ki tumhi devta ho tumhara sthan ab koi nhi le sakta. Ye sharir ab tumhari parchayi ke liye rahega tumhara adhikar hain ab isme chahe mujhe jo karna pade.
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Bhawanipur ke ek ghar me.
EK aurat - lo bhaiya aa gaya tumhara behnoi mujhe lene sale kuch hota nhi hain aur mujhe maje se jine nhi deta.
Adami - are bahana kuch din aur fir teri jindagi sab safedi rangin ho jayegi. Maine nasbandi na karayi hoti to ye bhi hame nhi karna padta magar jaldi sab shi ho jayega.
Aurat- ha bhaiya ab to usi ka sahara hain kyoki wo hi hain jo iska galat fayeda nhi uthayega magar uske sath to wo Abhishek bhi ayega.
Adami - behna chinta kyo karti hain. Main hoon Na ja taiyari kar nikalane ki main kuch kuch kar ke use tere ghar rukane vyastha kara duga aage tu sambhal lena.
Aurat- are bhaiay aurat ki triya charit ko koun Jan saka hain aap chinta mat karu aap apna kaam karu baki ka main sambhal loogi.
Uske wo aurat bag lekar bahar aayi jahan gadi me uska pati uska intejar kar rha tha. Uske sath wo shahar 1 ke liye nikal gayi.
Thakur Sahab apne baithak me baithe the tabhi kuch stri aur purush unse milane aaye.
Teeno jab ghar pahuche the darwaje pe hi Nisha khadi thi.
NIsha in teeno ke dekhar - Aap teeno hath muh dhokar sidhe rasoi ghar me aa jayiye maa sabka khana nikal rhi hain main bus aap logo ka intezar kar rhi thi.
Manav - Thik hain didi fir wo apne dono badon ke sath kuye taraf chal diya.
Teeno ek sath jab rasoighar me pahuche to unhe pta chala thakur Sabah khana khakar ja chuke hain.
Sushila ji ne bhi apna bhojan bachchhon ke sath nikal liya tha sab ne baithkar khana khaya. Khana khane ke bad.
Shweta: achchha amma ji ham dono chalate hain.
Sushila- Thik hain bachchon magar yahan bhi aa jaya kar ye bhi tera ghar.
Sushila ki bat sunkar Shweta Sharma gayi aur Nisha muskura uthi.
Nisha- ha maa main bhi ye samajhati hoon ise magar ye nhi samajhati.
Nisha ki bat sunakar to jaise Shweta ko dar sa lga.
Shweta- ab main samajh gayi aab roj aaya karugi sabse milane.
Nisha- Sabse milane ya apne..... Ammaji se.
Nisha ka bolate samay rukane par Shweta ki halat kharab ho gayi magar wo apne manobhav ko apne dil dabakar muskurati hui. Bhai ke sath sabko for aane ka bol kar nikal gayi.
Agle din usi shahar ek dusare gaon me. Ek bahut shandar haweli me akhbar me topper student ki photo dekhate huye.
Ek Ladki - ye to wo hain lekin itna bda ho gaya. Are magar main bhi to itani badi hogayi. Kitna sunder aur sajila Ha n iski ankhe dekho hay Sameer tum to aur khubsurat ho gaye ho magar tumhe sab yaad hoga tumse mile bhi to kai sal bit gaye. Manav ke janam par mile ab to teen sal beet gaye us baton ka pta nhi tumhe sab yaad bhi hoga ki nhi wo chhoti ghatna jisane mere dil ke tar hila diye.
Us ghatna ke time to main janti bhi nhi tumhara mera rishta kya aur kar baithi chhoti se umar me pyar magar Manav ke janam pe pta chala tum koun ho tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi kyoki maine kul devi ko sakshi mankar tumhe apna sab kuch man chuki. Ye samaj nhi samajhega aur hamara rishta bhi to aesa hain.
Lekin jo bhi mere man Mandir ki tumhi devta ho tumhara sthan ab koi nhi le sakta. Ye sharir ab tumhari parchayi ke liye rahega tumhara adhikar hain ab isme chahe mujhe jo karna pade.
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Bhawanipur ke ek ghar me.
EK aurat - lo bhaiya aa gaya tumhara behnoi mujhe lene sale kuch hota nhi hain aur mujhe maje se jine nhi deta.
Adami - are bahana kuch din aur fir teri jindagi sab safedi rangin ho jayegi. Maine nasbandi na karayi hoti to ye bhi hame nhi karna padta magar jaldi sab shi ho jayega.
Aurat- ha bhaiya ab to usi ka sahara hain kyoki wo hi hain jo iska galat fayeda nhi uthayega magar uske sath to wo Abhishek bhi ayega.
Adami - behna chinta kyo karti hain. Main hoon Na ja taiyari kar nikalane ki main kuch kuch kar ke use tere ghar rukane vyastha kara duga aage tu sambhal lena.
Aurat- are bhaiay aurat ki triya charit ko koun Jan saka hain aap chinta mat karu aap apna kaam karu baki ka main sambhal loogi.
Uske wo aurat bag lekar bahar aayi jahan gadi me uska pati uska intejar kar rha tha. Uske sath wo shahar 1 ke liye nikal gayi.
Thakur Sahab apne baithak me baithe the tabhi kuch stri aur purush unse milane aaye.
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Nice Update Ruby, Story gathering momentum now. Pahli ball pe hi sixer, WOW. Keep it up.
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