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"Sita o Sita bahu... " Jamna kaki lgatar awaj de rhi thi pr ghar to lagta tha jese dakuo ne loot liya ho

"Kaha thi Sita, kabse awaj de rhi hu, kano me rui thoos li kya" is baar jab Sita aati dikhi to Jamna kaki kheej kr boli

"Aai kaki, kya hua, kyu utavali ho rhi ho, konsa pahad toot pda" Kaki ki unchi awaj sunkar Sita andr se bhag kr aai.

"pahad hi toot pda smjho, pr tumhe fursat ho tb pta chale na" Kaki ne bhi tana mara

"ab kya btau kaki, subah se sham bs bhagdod me nikal jati h, ye to subah hi mandi chale gye the, fir Shamu ki roti bnayi, wo khet gya to kapde dhone beth gyi, ab nha ke sindur lga rhi thi ki aapki awaj suni to bhagkar aai hu" Sita ne apna dukhda gaya

"wo to thik h bahu pr shringar me itna bhi kya magan hona ki duniya ki sudh hi na rhe" Kisi darsnik ki bhanti kaki boli

"ye lo kaki, kya aap bhi, konsa shringar, bas nhakar kapde pahne Or baal bnakar sindur lgaya h, ab meri umer thode h shringar krne ki"

"bdai krwani h to ese hi bol de, char gaanv me pooch le ki kon h jo viswasundri ko maat dede, tera hi naam lenge nikkame, umer ghatti ja rhi h teri, pta nhi kya khati h" Kaki muskurake boli, or Sita bhi ye janti thi ki jo kaki ne bola wo sach tha pr sidhi sadhi Sita ke paas ghamand khatakta bhi nhi tha......
Bhadhaai💐💐. Suruvaat mast hai. Lage raho.
 

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11 Aug 2023

Dayalpur gaanv ki ek kuch nyi Or ek kuch purani in dono bahuo me bda prem h,
maa beti jesa pyar hi smjho. Jaha Sita 38 savan dekh chuki thi, wahi Jamna kaki
50 se 2 kam. Pr suru se hi kaki kahi jati rahi thi jamna.
Ek dusre ke ghar me aana jana hota rhta h, agar Sita ke ladke shamu ko ghar



bna khana na pasand aaye to wo jamna kaki ke yaha kha aata h, or agar jamna ki
ldki Leela ko apni maa ke hath ka khana na acha lage to Sita ke paas aa jati h.
Wese to doodh makkhan ki koi kami nhi h, pasu h, khet h pure 2 marbe ( 1 marbe
me 25 beegha jameen hoti h) pr fir bhi bacho ka kya h kabhi kahenge bahut acha
khana bna h kabhi kahenge maa ne loki bnayi to mrne jesi halat ho gyi.

"Wo sab chhodo kaki, ye btao aaj itni utavali kyu ho rhi thi"
"Ab kya btau, Leela ko dekhne jo ladke wale aaye the unhe Leela bahut pasand
aayi h, Yaha to kahke gye the ki ghar jakar jwab denge, subah hi bichola (rista
krwane wala) aaya tha, usne hi btaya"
"Bdhai ho kaki, ab jaldi moo mitha krwade, bahut achi khabar sunai subah
subah, pr isme itni hadbdahat wali konsi baat h? "
"Khabar to achi h bahu pr wo kah rhe h ki shadi 2 saal se pahle nhi krenge, ab
itna lmba rista rkhna mere mn me bhay peda kr rha h, ldki ki umer pahle hi
shadi ki ho chuki h, kahi oonch neech ho gyi to" Chintit swar me kaki boli.
"Bahut chinta krti ho kaki, tum befikra rho, bhagwan sab thik krega, or wese
bhi aajkal jyada umer me hi shadiya ho rhi h, wo jmane gye jab pet se nikalte
hi doli me betha di jati thi" Kaki ko dilasa dete Sita ne kaha.
"Thik h bahu, agar esa h to m haa bol deti hu, tera dhanyawad mera man halka
krne ke liye"
"Are nhi kaki, dhanyavaad kesa, Leela meri bhi beti jesi h, aap jaiye or aram
kijiye"
"Thik h bahu m chalti hu, khyal rakhna"
Kaki ke jate hi Sita ne kiwad bheda Or ghar ke kamo me lag gyi, use pta tha
uska ladka bhukha hoga, to sabse pahle khana hi bnane lagi, Shamu ka baap
Harish to sham se pahle aata nhi tha, ab mandi me aaddat ki dukan ka yahi dukh
h, pese to h pr samay nhi milta. Uper se jaat priwar jisme pdhai likhai ka utna
chaw nhi tha.
Rajasthan ke ganganar jile ke jato me pdhai likhai ko kam or kheti ko jyada
ahmiyat milti h. Indira gandhi nahar ka pani or uper se laal or kali mitti ki
jameen, achi khasi sarkari nokri ko maat dene me saksham. Ganganagar kisi bhi
surat me Rajasthan ka jila lagta hi nhi. Esa lagta h haryana me aa gye ho.
Usi Indira gandhi nahar ka pani lgakar Shamu paani ki vaari se farigh ho chuka
tha, par khet jane ki adat use roj apne khet khinch lati h. July bitne wali h,
kapas ki fasal or uske lambe podhe. Har jagah hari chadar bichi hui thi. Par ye
podhe kitne bhi lambe kyu na ho jaye, Hmare Shamu ka pura chehra kahi se bhi
dekha ja skta tha. Bhagwan ne 6.2 foot lambi kaya jo di thi. Apne baap se pure
4 inch lmba tha. Sita to muskil se Shamu ke sine tk aati thi. Pr jaha Sita
thodi si moti thi wahi Harish ka pet bahar nikla hua tha pr baal abhi bhi apne
per jmaye huye the. Or agar baat shamu ki ki jaye to ye smjh lo ki ek traju me
ek taraf maa baap dono ko betha do ek taraf shamu ko, fir bhi shamu ka palda
bhari pdega, mota nhi tha pr ek to itna lmba oont jesa uper se haddiya bhari.
Kumbhkaran ka bhai lagta tha. Aajkal ese jwan kam hi dekhne ko milte h. Agar
tabiyat se thappad maar de to aadmi mr hi jaye.
Lekin kitna bhi tgda kyu na ho, apni maa ke aage bhigi billi tha, agar koi
galti kr de to maa ke dar se paseene chhutne lgte.
Sita jaha galti krne pr pitne me bhi sharm nhi krti wahi apne bete pr jaan
chhidkati h. Hotho pr ek hi baat rhti, sher jna h mene.
Nice update. Accha likh rahe ho.
 

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Kapas ke dindo ko dekhta, kabhi ek adhe dinde ko kholkar dekhta Shamu ghoom rha tha apni mehnat se bdi hui fasal ke andar. Lal keedo ki bimari kapas me aam baat hoti h. Shamu ke chehre pr chinta ke badal chhaye huye the.
"Agar spray nhi ki to maa chud jayegi" Apne man me, apni fasal ki chinta ke sath gali ko milakar Shamu khud ko sambhal rha tha.
"Benchod ye panga har saal hi hone lga h, pta nhi in laal kido ka kya ilaz kru, kal ganganagar jakar lani pdegi spray"
Dheere dheere apni fasal ka muaayna krte krte apne khet me bani dhani ( khet me bna chhota ghar) me aa jata h. Fir apne payjame ke nade ke sath bni andar ki jeb se theli nikalta h Or usme se amal ka thoda sa dose kha leta h.
Wese to use extra takat ko jrurat nhi pdti thi, pr shokiya taur pr ye amal paas rkhta tha.
Dressing sense bhi kafi achi h Shamu ko. Kabhi payjama kurta to kabhi urban dressing.
"Oye Budhram oye, m ghar ja rha hu, kal spray krenge, wo spray wali dholki Rakesh leke gya tha, le aaiyo usse"

Apne chauthiye ( jisko khet me sambhal ke liye kamai ka chautha hissa diya jata h) ko shamu ne awaj mari jo thodi door pani ke nale se ghas ukhad rha tha.
"Ji bhai g, aap jao, m le aauga"
Shamu ne bhi koi uttar na dete huy apni bullet ki kick mari or chal pda apne ghar apni maa ke paas. Gaanv me kisi se jyada bolchal uska swabhav nhi tha. Bas 1 2 dost the. Shamu ka manna tha ki 40 dost rkhne se acha h 1 2 dost ho jo jrurat pdne pr kaam aaye ya jinko jrurat pdne pr kaam aaya ja ske.
Ghar phucha to koi baba khade they bheekh mang rhe the, pr ghar bda hone ke karan sayad Sita ko awaj nhi aa rhi thi. Usne washing machine bhi on kr rkhi thi.
"Aap rukiye baba, m lakar deta hu"
Ghar ke bahar kafi khula aangan tha, jise vehda bola jata h, or vehde ke ant me beecho beech unke ghar ka mukhya dwar tha. Fir unka ghar or ghar ke side me usi vehde me bna hua bda godam type kamra. Jisme fasal, tractor ke liye tel, psuo ke liye chara aadi rkha jata tha.
Usi kamre me bikhariyo ke liye gehu rkhi jati h. Shamu ne ek bda sa katora bhra or bhagkar us baba ki jholi bhar di.
"Bahut nek dil ho beta, bhagwan umer lambi kre tumhari"
Itna bolkar baba chla gya, or Shamu ghar ke andar.
Ghar ke andar jate hi ek gallery jaha sidiya thi, or samne do kamre, ek taraf rasoi or toilet bathroom bahar vehde me ek kone me bne huye the. Dono kamro ke beech me bhi ek gallery thi jo piche vehde me mil jati thi. Jaha pr dono kamro se sati hui lohe ki shed thi, usi shed ke niche ek taraf kone me chulha, kuch lakdiya jalane ke liye or dusri taraf charpayi pdi rhti thi, usi charpai pr Sita bethi thi dusri taraf mooh krke darwaje ke liye paydan bun rhi thi. Kapde dhul rhe the. Khana wo pahle hi bna chuki thi. Ghar ki saaf safai baap bete ke uthne se pahle hi kr leti thi.
Shamu, Sita ke paas jata h Or kandhe pr hath rkhkar beth jata h.
"Aa gya beta" Sita paydan ko ek taraf rakhkar pyar se shamu ke gal pr hath rkhkar puchti h
"Haa maa, bdi bhookh lgi h" Shamu apni maa ke kandhe pr sir rkhkar bolta h.
"Itni mehnat krta h, ab to jrurat bhi nhi h khet jane ki fir bhi jata h, aaja gwarfali ki sabji bnayi h khale"
"Tu chal maa m aaya" Itna bolkar shamu khda hua or washbasin pr mooh dhone lag gya, fir jab andar gya to Sita rsoi me apne bete ke liye khana daal rhi thi. Shamu ne jakar piche se Sita ko baho me le liya.
"Mahak to achi aa rhi h, ghee kam hi dalna maa"
"Tujhe ghee khila khila ke hi itna jwan kiya h, or ab Tu mehnat bhi jyada krta h, ghee nhi khayega to kamjor ho jayega, shadi me kamzor ladke bahut ajeeb lagte h"
Khana lgate muskurate huye Sita boli.
"Abhi kesi shadi maa, jab hogi tb ki tb dekhege"
Apni maa ke hath se thali lekar aangan me pdi charpai pr bethta hua Shamu bola.
"Waqt ka pta bhi nhi chalta bete, dekh lena wo din kitni jaldi aayega"
Itna bolkar Sita apne kapde sambhalne chali gyi or Shamu khana khane lagaa.
Nice update👍👍
 

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"Na bhai, abki baar bhaw kaha h, na kapas ka na narme ka, Tu ek kaam krle, bhaw ka intzar krega to ghata hi hoga, jo bhaw mile usi me bech le, wese bhi jo bhaw waqt pe mil jaye wahi acha hota h" Apne samne bethe bachpan ke dost, jo spray wgerah lene aaya tha mandi me, se harish bola.
"Baat to shi h bhai g, pr 3 saal ho gye, kabhi saude ka mja nhi aaya, abki baar intzar krte h, kya pta 4000 paar chla jaye"
"Dekh le chal Tu, or bta, fasal kesi h"
"Kya btau harish bhai g, har saal ka tamasha ho gya h, fanke ki bimari, laal keedo ki bimari, benchod gand le rkhi h"
Galiya sunkar harish ko hasi aa gyi
"Ab jo h wo h bhai, spray krde, shamu bhi kah rha tha fanke ka to, keedo ka pta nhi"
"Bolde use bhi spray krne ko, acha thik h bhai m chalta hu"
"Arey chai to pija" Harish ne pucha
"Nhi bhai fir kabhi, late hojauga, ram ram"
"Ram ram bhai"

Dost ke chale jane ke baad harish ne phone nikala Or apne ek pdosi mahender godara ko phone milaya.
"Hello, haa, harish bhai g"
"Hello mahender bhai, ram ram"
"Ram ram bhai g, bolo kya hukm h"
"Yaar shamu se baat krni thi"
"Abhi krwata hu bhai g, 1 mint"
Mahender harish ke ghar jata h.
"Shamu, o shamu"
Mahender chacha ki awaj sunkar shamu bahar aaya.
"Haa chacha, kya hua"
"Le, tere bapu ka phone h, baat krle"
Mahender ke hath se phone leta h
"Haa papa"
"Haa beta, Tu spray ka bol rha tha, aaj aa jata lene"
"Mene to kal ka socha tha papa, chalo m aaj hi aata hu"
"Haa or sun, ye phone ki roj ki hi samasya ho gyi h, esa kr 2 phone bhi le aana, ek tere liye or ek ghar ke liye, yu baar baar tere chacha ko kahna pdta h"
"Haa papa le aauga, ye to m aapse kahne hi wala tha"
"Chal thik h fir, kab tk aa jayega"
"Bas thodi der me nikalta hu"
"Thik h to aram se aana, or motorcycle jyada tez mat chlana, helmet le lena sath me" Kisi aam baap ki tarah chinta krte huye harish ne kaha
"M tez nhi chlata papa, chalo thik h papa, aata hu m"
Kahke shamu ne phone kaat diya.
"Kya kah rhe the bhai g? " Mahender ne pucha.
"Spray ka bol rhe the, aaj ja rha hu, or chacha mobile bhi leke aauga" Shamu ke chehre pr mobile naam se muskurahat aa gyi thi. Aati bhi kyu nhi 10-12 saal pahle mobile utna aam nhi tha jitna aaj h.
"Aaye haye, kya baat h, fir to moj ho jayegi teri"
"Or aapko preshani se chhutkara" Shamu ne mjak me kaha
"Are nahi nahi, preshani wali konsi baat h, or haa yaar spray to mene bhi dalni h fasal me"
"To aap bhi chaliye, le aate h"
"Chal to m nha leta hu, fir chalte h"
"Thik h chacha, jaldi krna, m wait kr rha hu aapka"
"Bas abhi dekh"
Mahender apne ghar chla gya. Or shamu firse apni maa ke paas
"Maa o maa"
"Haa beta, aayi bs"
Shamu charpai pr beth gya or akhbar pdhne lga. Kuch hi der me Sita aangan me aa gyi.
"Haa, kya hua"
"Hona kya tha, m bazar ja rha hu"
"Aaj bazar, kese"
"Spray lane, mahender chacha bhi ja rhe h, or sath me 2 mobile bhi lauga" Shamu bahut khush tha mobile ke bare me sochke hi
"Mobile?, mobile ka kya krega, h to shi tere papa ke paas"
"Are wo to unka ha, or wese unhone hi kaha tha, mene nhi manga"
"To tujhe kon rokta h, pr Tu mangta hi nhi h kuch, tbhi to tera itna laad rkhte h tere papa, or bacho me or tujhme yhi to fark h" Shamu ke bagal me bethte huye Sita boli
"Pr 2 mobile ka kya krega"
"Are dono mere liye nhi, ek tere liye h" Shamu ne apni maa kr bholepan pr muskurake kaha.
"Mere liye nhi, ghar ke liye kaha hoga, mere liye kuch kahte h wo kabhi, huu" Sita ne jhutha mutha gussa dikhake kaha
Shamu ko hasi aa gyi
"Nhi maa, tere liye hi bola, baar baar pdosiyo ko presan krna acha nhi lagta unhe, or kya pta waha bethe teri yaad aati ho unko" Shamu haste huye mjak me bhagkar door khda ho gya
"Haye raam, dekho to murkh ko" Sita bhagkar uske piche gyi to halki si chapat lga di, gussa nhi tha, pr sharam jrur thi
"Chal Tu ja ab, apni fatfatiya saf krle, or aram se jana, sadak pr sadhan bahut ho gye h"
"Haa aram se hi jauga" Kahkar shamu apni bullet saaf krne lag gya, thodi der me mahender bhi aa gya or dono bazar chale gye.
Badhiya update.
 

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"yaar shamu, agar isi tarah har saal kheti pr itna kharcha hone lga na to esi tesi ho jayegi, bhaw h nhi, or har mhine ye 5-10 hjar ka kharcha alag" Bazar se aate waqt raste me mahender shamu se bola
Samay 2 baj chuke the, or garam hwaye chal rhi thi, sadak pr traffic kam hi tha, itni garmi me kon bahar nikle.
"Ab kya kr skte h chacha, kharcha to krna hi pdega, or kisano ka yhi haal h, jyada chinta na kro" Shamu ne uttar diya
"Bencho tere jesa bda jimmedar kyu krega chinta, mujhe to krni pdti h beta, bacha h Tu abhi, nhi smjhega"
"Sab smjhta hu chacha, chalo chhodo, ye btao, beer pioge? " Shamu aaj poore mood me tha.
"Kya yaar, beer se kya hoga, bottle lele"
"Bencho chacha mujhe apni gand nhi mrwani daru pike, maa peet peet ke bhoot bna degi, beer pite h aram se ghar jayege tb tk smell bhi chali jayegi, bolo"
"Chal to rok le kahi, aaj mera bhi mood h, garmi ne le rakhi h" Mahender bhi khush hota hua bola "or isi bhane tere mobile ki party bhi ho jayegi"
Dono hanste huye chale ja rhe the, gaanv se kuch duri pahle hi ek dhaba hai, waha beer, daru sab milti h, chhota baar jesa. Shamu ne bike roki or dono andar chale gye.
"Or Shera, kesa h bhai" Dhabe ka malik Shera, Shamu ka dost h.
"Bdhiya bhai, bde din baad aaya, kaha busy rhta h aajkal? " Shera, Shamu ko acha dost manta h, dhaba set krane me Shamu ne bahut sath diya tha. Shamu ka khata bhi chalta h yaha, mhine me 5-6 baar beer, daru pine ya apni kisi saheli ko le aata tha yaha, garam khoon h to ubaal bhi marta rhta h.
"Kya btau yaar, khetibadi me hi time nhi milta"
"Ram ram mahender chacha" Shera ko dhyan aaya ki mahender bhi shamu ke sath aaya h
"Ram ram beta, or kesa chal rha h dhandha pani"
"Sab bdhiya h chacha, aap btaiye"
"Apna bhi thik hi h bhai, timepass ho rha h bas"
"Haa ab bta shamu kya adesh h bhai ke liye" Shera samajh chuka tha ki Shamu ka mood h aaj party ka
"Adesh wadesh kya h yaar, bas beer pini h"
"To bta, hmesa wala kamra lega ya piche chhapar ke niche"
"Aaj kamre ka kya kruga yaar, Tu ek kaam kr salad, namkeen or tuborg ki 2 chilled bottle bhej de jaldi, kuch time bethenge, or agar man hua to or mngwa lunga"
"Bhai tera hi dhaba h, jitna mn kre utna beth, Tu chal m bhejta hu chhote ko
" Aajao chacha" Shamu ne mahender ko kaha or dono dhabe ke piche bne chhappar me jakar beth gye, kahne ko chhapar tha pr beer pine ke liye best jagah thi. Piche kheto me fasal or pani ki khusboo. Thodi der baat ki tb tk unka saman bhi aa gya. Dhakan ukhada or pine lage dono.
Sath me salad or namkeen, dahi ka ek katora jisme bikaneri bhujiya mili huyi thi.
20-25 minute me dono ko thoda surur chadhne lag gya or mahender ek dam mast ho gya.
Shamu ko to 2 3 bottle se pahle kuch hota hi nhi.
"Waah shamu, mja aa gya, bda dildar bnda h yaar tu"
"Bas chacha kripa h ram ki" Shamu ko andaja tha ki mahender ko thoda surur chadh chuka tha.
"Acha ye bta, ye Shera konse wale kamre ki baat kr rha tha"
Kamre ki baat sunkar Shamu ke chehre pr muskurahat ter gyi.
"Bas chacha, zindagi ke mje le rha hu, bencho mujhse nhi ji jati boring life"
"Bhencho khul ke bta na, kya kahani h ye kamre wali"
"Kahani kya honi h chacha, saheli ko le aata hu kabhi kabhi" Kahkar shamu hasne lga
"Kya baat krta h yaar, mje h tere to, kitni set kr rkhi h"
"Jyada nhi h chacha, bs 3 h"
Shamu or mahender sage chacha bhatija nhi the, pr gaanv me ese hi hota h, pdosiyo ko chacha, tau, bhai g, dada aadi namo se umer ke anusar sambodhit kiya jata h.
Mahnder or shamu chacha bhatija ke sath sath dost bhi the.
"Kya baat kr rha h, kon h ye tino? "
"Ab aapse kya chhupana chacha, ek to pawan ki wife h"
"Pawan ye rampratap ka ladka? "
"Haa wahi, dusri wo rukmani chachi"
"Kya baat kr rha h yaar, wo set h terese?, wo to bhenchod ghas bhi nhi dalti kisi ko" Achambhe se mahender ka mooh khula tha, "acha tisri konsi h? "
"Tisri nhi bta skta chacha, thoda private matter h"
"Chal koi na shamu beta, 2 bta di wahi bahut h, aaj tere sath aake kaam to galat hi ho gya wese"
"Kyu chacha, kya hua, koi kami rah gyi kya party me" Shamu ne baat ko thoda seriously pucha
"Are nhi yaar, Tu party de to kami kesi, mera matlab in bato se mood bn gya h, teri chachi ko tang krna pdega jake"
"Hahaha, kya chacha, to konsa bhagaa kr laye ho chachi ko, ghar pr hi h, or wese bhi samasya to ham jese kuaro ko aati h, jiski shadi ho jaye use kesi samasya"
"Tu bacha h abhi beta, roj ek hi ek sabji khakar dekh, banda oob jata h yaar, khud to sale ne 3-3 fasa rakhi h, or kahta h mere mje h, mje to tere h" Mahnder ne mjak ke lahje me kaha pr shamu ne socha ki kah to mahnder chacha shi rhe h, agar shadi ho jaye to life ka adha enjoyment khatam hi ho jata h, pr ek fayda ye bhi h ki sareer ki garmi nikalne ke liye bhatakna nhi pdta, shamu ko yaad aata h ki kitne papad belne pdte h is chhoti si chut ke liye.
"Pr chacha fir bhi, ek baat kahu bura na mano to"
"Arey yaar kesa bura manna, tu bol jo bolna h, tere mahender chacha teri baat ka bura nhi man skta kabhi, jaan h tu meri" Beer ka nasha sar chadhkar bol rha tha, pr Shamu ko utna surur nhi tha, thoda sa jrur tha pr usne apni samajh nhi khoyi thi abhi tk, use pta tha agar or bottle mngwa li to sham ho jayegi or use ghar bhi jana h
"M to ye kahna chahta hu chacha ki or bande bhale hi bore ho jaye apni wife se pr aap kese ho skte ho, bencho chachi kya kam h kisi se" Shamu ke hotho pr muskurahat thi
"Haa yaar, teri chachi h to bahut khubsurat, pta nhi mere jese chutiye ko kese mil gyi"
is baat pr dono jor se hansne lag gye, fir mahnder bola
"Bencho, aaj ye tu teri chachi ki baat kese kr rha h, bhai meri gharwali ko baksh dena yaar, mere paas ek hi h"
is baat pr dono fir se hase.
Isi tarah kafi der tk dono bate krte rhe or waqt gujarta chala gya, mahender ko thodi chadh gyi thi pr shamu abhi bhi hosh me tha, use khyal aata h ki kafi der ho gyi h unhe bethe huye
"Chalo chacha, ab chalte h, ghar bhi jana h"
Dono uthe, Shera ko bola or chal pde ghar ki or. Bottle ko khali huye kafi samay beet chuka tha, or kafi der bate bhi ki thi unhone, to beer ki smell ghar pahuchte pahuchte bhut kam ho gyi thi, fir bhi shamu ne gaanv ki ek dukan se ilaichi khayi or mahender ko ghar chhod diya, fir apne ghar ke andar chla gya, bike khadi ki or aangan Me jake beth gya.
"Maa, m aagya"
Sita us waqt chulhe pr apne liye chay bna rhi thi. Use gas chulhe ki bni chize utni pasand nhi thi.
"Haa aayi beta, chay bn jaye bas"
Awaj sunkar Shamu ne apni jeb se nya mobile nikala or use set krne me lag gya, us waqt samsung ka champ phone nya launch hua tha, or shamu ne wahi 2 khareede the.
Chay bante hi Sita ne 2 katoriyo me dali or aangan Me aa gyi. Chay ko ek side pr rkha or Shamu ke hath se mobile le liya.
"Are maa, chlane de to"
"Pahle chay pile, fir chlate rahiyo"
Shamu ne bahas na krna thik samajh kr chay uthai or dono bate krte huye pine lge.
"Kitne ka kharcha kr aaya aaj"
"Kuch khas nhi maa, yhi koi 25000"
"Haye ram, or tu kuch khas nhi bol rha h, chal jo lagne h wo to lagenge hi"
Chay khatam hui to Shamu ne firse phone utha liya, or apni maa ke kandhe pr hath rakhkar photo khinchne lga. Sita 10 tk pdhi thi, use andaja tha ki Shamu photo khinch rha h. Wo muskura uthi.
"Ye dekh maa" Photo apni maa ko dikhate huye shamu ne kaha. Sita mobile hath me lekar beth gyi.
Tabtk shamu ne paas pdi bazar se lai gyi thelio me se ek chhota dibba nikala Or apni maa ka hath pkda Or uspr rakh diya.
"Ye kya h? "
"Khol ke dekh"
Sita ne dibba khola to usme ek nathni thi (nathni naak ka ek aabhusan hota h)
Sita gadgad ho gyi. Use pta tha Shamu usse kitna pyar krta h. Wo muskura uthi. Or common sense se dekhe to or kiske liye layega shamu.
"Bhut sunder h, mehngi hogi bahut"
"Kya maa, bhagwan ne itna kuch de rkha h, pichle kai mahino me papa ne tujhe kuch lakar nhi diya, shadi byah ke liye kapde wgerah bhi tu khud hi lati h"
Sita ka wajood hil gya, use apne bete pr bahut pyar aaya, baanhe aapne aap uthi or shamu ko kas kar apni chhati se lga liya.
"M to bhool hi jati hu ki mera beta kitna pyar krta h mujhse"
"Chal maa pahankar dikha"
"Haa abhi dekh" Kahke Sita khadi hui or bhagkar andar se chhota sisha le aayi.
"Pakad ise" Apne bete ko sisha thmakar pahni hui nosepin ko utarne lgi, lekin ye kya, nosepin atak gyi thi, khul nhi rhi thi.
"Ye muyi nosepin nhi khul rhi, dekh jra"
Shamu ne sisha niche rkha or nosepin kholne lga. Uski pin thodi tedhi hokar atki hui thi, Shamu orto ke har ek ang or har ek abhusan se wakif tha, khiladi jo thahra, use pta tha agar jor ka prayog kiya to dard hoga. Isliye wo nakhun se us pin ko sidha krne lga. Is doran Sita ne apna chehra thoda uper utha rkha tha. Sar par dali hui chunni ka pallu pahle thoda sarka, fir thoda sarka or ant me Sita ke reshmi balo se fisalta hua kandho pr ja gira.
Shamu ke dono hatho ki ungliyo ke beech se Sita ka chehra dikh rha tha, tarike se bne huye eyebrows, fir bdi ankhe, talwar ki dhar jesi tikhi nak, or fir laal surkh lipstick se saje hoth. Suraj ki sham ki lalima se Sita ka chehra chamak rha tha. Sir uthaye rakhne ki wajah se gardan me thoda dard suru ho gye tha. Pin sidhi hone me sawdhani bartni thi, nhi to uski maa ko dard ho skta tha, is sawdhani me samay lag rha tha, or gardan ke dard ke karan Sita ke hoth kamp rhe the.
Dharti palat gyi, asman fat gya, duniya me visfot hua jab pahli baar Shamu ka dhyan apni maa ke laal surkh hotho pr gya. Kamkampate hoth itne kamuk lag rhe the ki swarg ki apsra bhi maat kha jye. Shamu ka man kr rha tha ki waqt yhi tham jaye, or wo apni maa ke hoth dekhta rhe.
Apni 20 saal ki zindagi me wo hmesa umer se aage rha h. Kam umer se hi orto ne use apni or aakarshit kiya h. Sunder to Shamu bhi bahut tha. Apni muskurahat or hasne bolne ki kala se usne na jane kitni sundriyo ko lubhaya tha.
Par aaj pasa palat chuka tha. Itne kamuk hoth usne kabhi nhi dekhe the.
Hotho ka laal hona ek baat thi, pr hotho ka kampna dusri baat. Is tarah hoth tabhi kampte h jab kisi anchhui or kuari ladki ko pahli baar koi mard ka saparsh mile.
Shamu ka man kiya ki abhi ke abhi wo in hotho ko choos le, inka sara ras pi jaye, nichod de in hotho ko. Taki fir dobara ye hoth shamu ka dhyan na bhang kr ske.
"Kya kr rha h, jaldi kr, meri gardan dukh rhi h" Sita ne jhunjhlakar kaha.
Shamu ko hosh aya or uska nakhun us pin tk pahucha. Kisi tgde ghode ko bhi apni bajuo pr uthale ese shamu ke aage wo chhoti si pin kya cheez thi. Nakhun ka sparsh hua or pin sidhi ho gyi.......
Superb update❤❤.
 

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Pin sidhi hote hi nosepin bahar aa gyi. Shamu use hath me leke khada rha.
"Le ab Tu hi pahna de" Muskurate huye Sita ne shamu se kaha.
Shamu ektak Sita ke chehre ko dekh rha tha. Hosh sambhalte huye usne Sita ke hath se nathni paKdi Or pahnane lga. Nathni panate waqt fir use Sita ke hoth dikh rhe the wo bhi bahut paas se. Dheere se or komalta se usne apni maa ko nathni pahna di. Jise pahankar Sita ke chehre pr char chand lag gye.
Shamu kho sa gya apni maa ki sunderta me. Sita sharma gyi use yu dekhta.
"Kya dekh rha h" Sita ne ajeeb najro se dekhte shamu ko pucha.
Swal puchne se shamu hadbda gya. Fir sambhalte huye bola
"Maa, Tu bahut sunder lag rhi h" Anayas hi uske moo se ye bol chhoot pde.
Sita ki sharam dohri ho gyi.
"Sach me? "
"Haa maa, ye nathni bahut jach rhi h"
Bete dwara kahe gye bol uske kano me sahad gholne lag gye.
"Laya to tu hi h, achi pasand h teri" Sita ne khush hote huye kaha.
"Chal Tu nha le, m bhi kaam kr leti hu, sham ko khet jayega? "
"Nhi maa, bahut thak gya hu, aram kruga thodi der"
"Thik h, to fir nha le jaldi se, fir khana bna dungi" Itna bolkar Sita firse aangan ko paar krke ghar ke piche chali gyi or apna paydan bunne lagi.
Paydan bunte waqt wo khud ko muskurate huye nhi rok pa rhi thi. Apne bete dwara kahe gye tarif ke sabd rah rahke uske kano me gunj rhe the. Usne abhi tk nathni nhi utari thi.
Harish ne to kabhi uski tarif ki hi nhi thi.
Ye bde sahro me jese pati apni patni ki tarif krte h, bahar ghumane le jate h, wese ganv me kam hi hota h. Par aaj bete ke moo se apne liye pyar or tarif ke bol sunkar wo gadgad ho uthi thi. Uska man kiya ko wo sari umer is nathni ko pahanke rakhe.
Udhar shamu ka haal bhi ajeeb tha. Zindagi me pahli baar wo kisi ki sunderta me itna kho gya tha. Wo abhi apni maa ki. Wo yahi soch rha tha ki usne kabhi dhyan nhi diya pr uski maa bahut khoobsurat h. Jald hi usne apne dimag ko jhatka or apne kamre me jake let gya. Apne nye mobile se chhedkhani krne lga or kuch hi der me uski aankh lag gyi.
"Shamu, beta shamu" Sita ne shamu ko hila ke jagaya.
"Haa, haa maa" Aankhe malta hua shamu utha.
"Time kya hua h maa? "
"6 bje h, uthja jaldi, m chay bnati hu" Kahkar Sita bahar chali gyi, or shamu bhi bahar aakar apna chehra dhone lag gya.
Chehra dhokar wo charpai pr beth gya. Tabtak uski maa ne chay bna di thi. Firse 2 katoriyo me chay dalke wo shamu ke paas aakar beth gyi.
"Bahut thak gya kya aaj"
"Nhi to, kyu"
"3 bje soya tha, abhi utha h, raat ko kya jagaran lgayega"
Apni maa ki baat se shamu ko hasi aa gyi.
"Nhi maa, itna bhi kaha soya, bas thakawat ho gyi thi thodi"
Chay khatam krke shamu ne pucha.
"Tera mobile kaha h maa? "
"Wahi pda h aangan me, mene abhi tk hilaya bhi nhi use"
Shamu baat sunte hi dodke gya or dusra mobile utha laya.
"Maa, aaj tujhe m mobile chlana sikhata hu"
"Na baba na, mujhe nhi sikhna ye kabaad"
"Are maa, kabaad nhi h, bahut kaam ki cheez h, dekh isse baat kr skte h, photo khinch skte h, filme dekh skte h"
"Pr m is umer me mobile sikhke krugi kya ye bta, sara din ghar ke kamo me nikal jata h, agar waqt mil bhi jaye to kuch na kuch bunti rahti hu, 2 suit bhi pde h silne ko"
"Kya umer maa, meri bdi bahan lagti h Tu, or wese bhi kabhi jrurat ho to mujhe phone to kr hi skti h" Shamu ne tark diya.
"Thik h, Tu kahta h to bta de" Sita ne bete ki khwahish ke aage haar manke kaha
"Haa to dekh, ye jo phone ki tarah dikh rha h, ise dbate hi number niklenge"
Sita ne shamu ke sir pr halki si chapat lgai
Or hanske boli
"Teri maa itni bhi bholi nhi h, 10 pdhi hu, bta to ese rha h jese dadi ho samne"
Apni maa ki baat sunke shamu ko jor se hasi aa gyi.
"Acha chalo dekho to, ye phone h, ese krke sara menu dekh lena, or ye camera h, mene mera number save kr diya h"
"Thik h thik h, mujhe de" Sita ne shamu ke hath se phone lete huye kaha.
"Tu dekh maa, m abhi aaya" Kahke shamu chhat ki taraf gya. 2010 me ek website chalti thi orkut. Bilkul Facebook ki tarah. Shamu ne ek I'd apni bnayi thi or ek apni maa ke phone me apne hi naam se bna di thi. Wo bahut excited tha phone milne ke karan.
Sanyog se Sita ne bhi browser khol rkha tha. Wo phone ke basic feature samjhti thi. Bhale hi uske pati harish ke paas keypad phone tha. Pr uske mayke me thode mahnge phone bhi the us waqt. Sita ko kuch khas ruchi nhi thi phones me. Phir bhi apne bete ke kahne pr wo use dekhne lagi.
Tabhi dheere speed ke internet se orkut chla Or orkut chalte hi shamu ne msg send kr diya.
"Hello maa"
Sita sochne lagi ye kya bala h. Use pta tha shamu ne hi bheja h. Darasal shamu apne excitement me sita ko ye batana chah rha tha ki mobile kitne kaam ki cheez h.
Sita ne msg pr click kiya or chat open ho gyi.
"Shamu, o shamu, ye kya bala h ab? " Sita ne jor se shamu ko awaj lgai.
Shamu ko hasi aa rhi thi apni maa ko technology me fase dekh kr.
Wo niche aaya or apni maa ke paas jakar beth gya.
"Kya hua maa, tu to kah rhi thi ki tujhe sab aata h" Shamu hasne lga
Sita ne shamu ke kandhe pr chapat lgai
"Mere kahne ka matlab tha ye phone wgerah krna m janti hu, pr ye jo tune bheja h iska kya kru"
"Are maa, ye kuch nhi h, isse aap baat kr skte ho kisi se bhi, chahe wo duniya me kahi bhi rahe"
"Acha, kya naam h iska? "
"Ise orkut kahte h, isse chat ki jati h" Itna bolkar shamu ne dono mobile hath me liye, or apni maa ko dikhane lga
"Dekh, ye mene is mobile me msg type kiya, 'meri maa bahut pyari h', or ye dekh ye tere mobile me aa gya"
Shamu ki baat se Sita muskura di.
"Acha, ye to jadu jesa lag rha h"
"Jadu hi samjho maa, aane wale salo me dekhna log kese kese ek dusre se baat krenge" Shamu kisi technology expert ki bhanti bola.
"To mujhe bhi to bta m jwab kese du? " Sita ne bhi janna chaha. Use ruchi nhi thi pr ye chat wala hissa use Acha lga.
"Ye dekh, ispe angutha lagte hi ye keypad khul gya, ab ye button dba Or type kr"
Sita ne mobile hath me liya or letters press krne lgi. Shi words type nhi kr rhi thi bs unhe press kr krke dekh rhi thi.
"Ese nhi maa, chal Tu apna naam likh"
"Likhu kese? " Sita ne jhunjhlakar kaha.
"Ye dekh, SITA, ese"
"Acha, ab samjhi" Fir kya tha, Sita swabhav ki bholi thi, pr dimag bahut tez tha, use samjhte der na lagi, or wo dheere dheere type krne lagi.
"Ab ye send button h, ispe click krde bs" Shamu ne akhiri instruction diya.
Jese hi send kiya shamu ke mobile pr notification aa gya.
"Dekh, ye mil gya mujhe msg"
Shamu ke mobile or apna type kiya msg dekh kr Sita khush ho gyi.
"Dekh, sikh gyi m, ab khush h Tu?? "
"Haa, meri maa mobile chlana jo sikh gyi" Shamu has diya.
Sita bhi khush ho gyi. Kuch der or mobile ke sath mathapachai ki or shamu bahar chla gya.
Sita bhi ghar ke kamo me wyasth ho gyi. Raat ho chuki thi, or shamu usi dukan jaha se usne ilaichi li thi, pr betha tha.
Wo apna mobile dikha rha tha apne dost ko. Tabhi ek notification aaya. Usne click kiya to orkut chat open ho gyi
"Khana ban gya h, kab tk aayega" Sita ka msg tha.
Shamu khush ho gya. Or apne ghar ki taraf nikal liya....
Bhout hi bholepan ka update hai👍👍
 
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Pta nhi kahani ko koi pdhta h bhi ya nhi, update regular de rha hu, fir bhi na kisi ka comment or na kisi ka like, kahani achi h buri h ye bhi nhi btate, bas 2-4 jane h jo har update pr comment krte h, unka thanks. Pr ab is tarah kahani ko aage kese bdhau. Meri kahani pr views bhut dikha rha h pr comment 1 ya 2. Man nhi krta ese aage bdhne ko.
Fir bhi jo 2 ya teen jane comment kr rhe h m unke liye likhuga, jrur likhuga.
Thankyou bhai ham jese kadardano ke liye socha yehi bhout hai.
 

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Mitha pani 8

Aaj andhera kam hi tha. Purnima aane wali h, to chand bhi apne shabab pr h. Harish gadi bhaga rha tha. Wese to bahut dheere chlata h pr raat hote hote bhukh jor pakad leti h. Ghar pahucha Or gate ke aage rukkar horn maar diya

"Shamu gate khol to, tere papa aa gye" Sita ne apne bete ko awaj mari.

Pr shamu kaha se sune. Earphones lgakar gane sun rha tha. Jab koi jwab nhi aaya to Sita khud chali gyi gate kholne.

Gadi vehde me khadi ki or andar aa gya harish.

"Nhayenge ya khana lga du" Sita ne pucha.

"Naha hi leta hu, garmi se bura haal ho gya h" Kahkr harish ne apne kapde uthaye or bathroom ki or chal pda.

Sita bhi shamu ke room ki or gyi to andar aate hi dekhti h ki maharaj mobile chlane me wyasth h.

"Tabhi m kahu ye sun kyu nhi rha"

Apni maa ko yu achanak kamre me aaya dekh shamu uthkar beth jata h.

"Kya hua maa? "

"Thoos liye kano me ye, tujhe awaj lgai thi, tere papa aa gye h"

"Wo maa dhyan hi nhi rha" Shamu ne sir khujlate kaha.

Sita ko hasi aa gyi.

"Isiliye m is mobile ko kabaad kahti hu, duniya ki koi sudh hi nhi rhne deta, ab chhod ise, gadi godam me khadi krde, m khana lga deti hu unka"

"Haa maa, aap chalo"

Sita bahar jati h or khana lgane lagti h, shamu bhi gadi godam me khadi kr deta h. Harish tb tk naha leta h, or khana khane beth jata h usi charpai pr, garmi thi to cooler chala rkha tha.

Khana khakar kuch der apne bete se batchit ki or sone chla gya. Kaam se itna thaka jata h harish ki neend jaldi hi bulane lagti h.

Sita ne bhi kaam samet liya. Gilas me dudh bhara or apne bete ko dene chali gyi uske kamre me. Shamu naha liya tha. Raat ko baniyan hi pahne rahta tha, or niche payjama.

Sishe ke samne baal bna rha tha jab sita kamre me aayi.

"Shamu, dudh pile, thanda ho jayega"

"Rakhdo maa, pi lunga"

Sita mudne hi lagi thi ki

"Maa tu type krna sikh gyi?? "

"Huu, ye kya hota h ab" Sita ne thuddi ko hath lgakar pucha

"Are tune mujhe bheja tha na jab m bahar gya hua tha"

"Acha wo, haa to usme kya h, kaha na m itni bhi bholi nhi hu" Adaa ke sath sita boli

Apni maa ka ye andaj dekhkar shamu bahut khush hua.

"Thik h to fir aaj ke baad tu mujhe ese hi bulana" Sham muskurakar bola

"Na baba na, bda okha(kathin) kaam h, m to tujhe phone hi kr diya krugi"

Shamu ko hasi aa gyi. Wo sita ke paas aaya or uski dono bajuo ko pakadkar bola,
"maa, kabhi kabhi jindagi me nyi chizo ka aana jruri hota h, wrna jivan niras ho jata h" Kahkar shamu ne ankh mari or muskura diya. Sita ke chehre pr sharm ki lali aa gyi. Usne dheere se shamu ke hath pr chapat mari or jhuthe gusse se ankhe dikhai

"Besharm, ab soja, kal bahut kaam h tujhe"

"Thik h maa, sota hu, subah jaldi utha dena"

Fir sita rasoi ka baki ka kaam sambhalne chali gyi. Pr shamu ki aankho se neend gayab thi. Aaj hui ghatna ke bare me soch soch kr uska dimag ghoom rha tha. Usne kabhi dhyan hi nhi diya tha ki uski maa itni sunder h. Sochte sochte or nye nye khyali pulaw pakate wo neend ki aagosh me chla gya.
Nice update.
 
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