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Thriller Muhabbat Ho Gai Hai Tum Se
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jesa k mein ne btaya tha k meri walida ki aankhon ka operation hua tha tou un ko time dena tha jis ki wajah se yahan update nai de paya sath hi gaun main rishtedar ki death ho gai tou wahan jana para humarey haan 40 din tuk soug manaya jata hai jis ki wajah se mein update nai de paya lekin ab wapis aa gya hn
jitna update ab post krun ga utna hi mila karey ga lekin haftey main 3 din thodi mashroofiat ab bhi hai
jitna update ab post krun ga utna hi mila karey ga lekin haftey main 3 din thodi mashroofiat ab bhi hai
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Update#9
Safeer ne jab deikha tou us ne apni taang se chaku nikala aur Massod ki khopri ka nishana laga k pheinka lekin es sey pehley k who Masood k sir se aar paar hota us ne Ak47 ki aadhi magzine chala di thi Masood tou mar gya lekin Safeer ko bhi 4 Goliyan lageen jis sey who neechay gir gya.
Mawra: (neend se uth k rotey huey) Nahiiiiiii.
Qasim: (uthtey huey) Kia hua rou kiun rahi ho.
Mawra: (rotey huey) Mera Betu usey kch hua hai who who usey goli lagi hai.
Qasim: (Mawra ko galey laga k) Sapna deikh rahi ho gi aesa kch nai hua hai chalo chup ho jao.
Mawra: Aap achi trhah se jantey hn k Betu ko le k meri six sense bht taiz hai kch tou hua hai us k sath mujhey bht ghabrahat ho rahi hai plzz baba ko phone karein na mujhey betu se baat krni hai.
Qasim: Theek hai mein krta hn tum chup ho jao.
Zain, Awais, Mohsin, Taniya, Aliza Pakistan Hotel pounchey tou wahan ka nazara deikh k tou shocked hi ho gaey purey hotel ka naqsa hi badal gya tha Aag lagi thi aur hotel malbey main tabdeel ho chuka tha yeh deikhtey hi un ko Zulfi aur Ana ki chinta honey lagi unhey tou aesa lagney laga tha k who bhi es malbey main kaheen dafan na ho gaey hoon.
Zain: What the Fuck.
Mohsin: Yeh sab kia hai.
Awais: (wahan kisi aadmi se) Yeh sab kesay hua aap bata saktey hn.
Us aadmi ne pehley sab ko uper se neechay tuk deikha kiun k un ka hulya bhi sahi nai tha kaprey phatey huey they es sey pehley k who aadmi jawab deta k un ko awaz sunai di.
Awaz: Whats up boys and girls.
Unho ne awaz ki traf deikha tou wahan Zulfi sahi salamat khada tha who sab dour k us k pass gaey.
Zain: Tu sahi salamat hai thnx *** yeh sab hua kesay.
Zulfi: Lambi kahani hai phr bataun ga (idher udher deikh k) Safeer nai dikh raha.
Awais: Who abhi waheen hai kch problem ho gi thi tou us ne humein bheij dia.
Zulfi: WTF Akela shod aaye usey.
Mohsin: Us ne order dia tha aur tujhey maloom hai k us k liey Army protocol dosti se kaheen berh k hai.
Aliza: Ana nai dikh rahi.
Zulfi: Yaheen hai chalo tum logon ko bhi treatment ki zaroorat hai.
Waheen pe ek mini type hospital bana dia gya tha jis main un ka Ana ne elaj kia ab who Safeer ka intezaar kr rahey they us ki nazer border k gate pe thi lekin raat se subah hui Safeer nai aaya ab unhey bhi tention honey lagi.
Zain: Mein ja raha hoon.
Awais: Hum sab jaen gey Zulfi aur Ana tum yaheen humara wait kro.
Who sab dubara Afghanistan ki traf berney lagey k unhey ek jeep aati hui dikhayee di jo k thi tou American army ki lekin usey chala koi ladki rahi thi lekin us ka Chehra dhakka hua tha mask se who jeep se neechay utri aur jeep k peechay gai aur derwaza khol k kisi ko sahara de k jeep se nikla.
Zain ne jesay hi usey deikha us ne usey apney kandhey pe uthaya aur mini hospital ki traf dour laga di aur ja k usey ek bed pe litaya aur Ana ko bulaya Ana ne us bed ko perdey se cover kia aur oxygen mask pehnaya.
Zain: (Ana se) Safeer ko kch nai hona chaiey.
Ana: Tum Helicopter mangwa lo mein goliyan nikalti hn us k baad us ka elaj hospital main hi ho ga aur sab bahir jao yahan koi na aaye.
Ana ne Safeer k sarey kaprey keinchi se phad diey siwaye underwear k us k baad us ne yahan yahan goli lagi thi who nikali aur us k baad us k jakham saaf kiey Ana ne check kia tou Safeer ki heartbeat slow thi Helicopter bhi aa gya Safeer ko Army hospital main admit kia gya.
Wahan pe Army k sarey High member mojud they COAS bhi sath hi Safeer k dost bhi they itney main Zain ko zor dar thapper para aur thapper usi ladki ne mara tha jo Safeer ko Afghanistan se le k aaye thi.
Ladki: (gussey main) Manah kia tha na k Safeer ko kabhi bhi akela mat shodna phr bhi akela shod aaye 4 golian lagi hn us ko us ki DD maa ko kia jawab doon gi mein tum achi trhah se jantey ho k Safeer un k liey kia hai phr bhi.
Zain: Tum bhi achi trhah janti ho k Safeer k liey Army Protocol uski jaan se berh k hai us ne order dia hum aa gaey.
Ladki: (gussay main) Army Protocol my foot Mawra DD ka gussa tum nai jantey ho who Safeer ko le k bht possessive hn tumhari boti bhi nai miley gi ager Safeer ko kch hua tou.
COAS: Yeh sab kia ho raha hai yahan yeh Hospital hai koi jung ka medan nai abhi Safeer k liey dua kro baad main lad lena.
Ladki: (Zain se) Tum Qasim bhai ko phone kro un ko kaho k Safeer raat ko Waleema attend karey ga yeh baat Mawra DD ko bata dein.
Masood: Daad deni parey gi k mujhey marney k liey akeley hi aa gaey.
Safeer: Sheir akela hi shikaar krta hai lekin tum jesay kutey jhund main.
Masood ne AK47 hath main pakdi Safeer ne jab deikha tou us ne apni taang se chaku nikala aur Massod ki khopri ka nishana laga k pheinka lekin es sey pehley k who Masood k sir se aar paar hota us ne Ak47 ki aadhi magzine chala di thi Masood tou mar gya lekin Safeer ko bhi 4 Goliyan lageen jis sey who ghutno k bal beith gya.
Masood ka ek bhi Fire nai laga Safeer ko Safeer ne idher udher deikha tou usey gadiyon ki traf se khud ko deikhti hui 2 aankhein nazer aaye jin ko who shaid pehchanta tha.
Safeer: (uthtey huey) Nooooooooooo.
Safeer ki awaz sun k COAS, who ladki aur Safeer ki team room main gai tou Safeer apni shirt utar raha tha jo k usey pehnayee gai thi yeh deikh k sab heran they k Safeer kr kia raha hai Safeer shirt utar k room main lagey miror k samney khada ho gya aur apney jism pe deikhney laga.
COAS: Safeer yeh kia kr rahey ho you should rest 4 goliyan lagi hn tumhey.
Zain: (Safeer k pass ja k) Chal bed pe beith.
Safeer: Merey jism pe deikh aur bata kia ajeeb laga tujhey.
Zain: Kch bhi nai aur tu yeh sab baatein kiun kr raha hai chal bed pe.
Safeer: Ghour se deikh Zain.
Zain: (Safeer k jism ko deikhtey huey) 4 goliyan lagi hn tujhey aur kch nai ek min (ghour se deikhtey huey) Yeh 4 goliyan waheen lagi hn yahan pehley lagi theen bilkul usi point pe na ek inch kam na zyada per yeh kesay mumkin hai.
Safeer: Yeh sab wohi kr sakta hai jis ne pehley bhi kia ho.
Zain: (shocked) Kia matlab hai tumhara tum tou Masood se pehli baar aamney samney huey na tou.
Safeer: Us ki ek goli bhi mujhey nai lagi koi aur bhi tha wahan us ki aankhein deikhi hn mein ne aur mein who aankhein kabhi bhool nai sakta.
Zain: (sari baat samjhtey huey) Deikh tujhey ghalat fehmi hui ho gi yeh sab itefaaq bhi ho sakta hai.
Safeer: Na yeh itefaaq nai hai tu janta hai usey, sharp shooter hai who mujh se hi training li hai us ne.
COAS: Yeh sab kia batein kr rahey ho aur kis ki.
Safeer: (gussay main) Ayesha.
Mawra: (Akbar ko galey lagaey huey) Baba jani Betu kahan hai abhi tuk aaya kiun nai mera dill ghabra raha hai plz usey bulayen na.
Akbar: Mera bacha kch nai hua terey betu ko who aa jaey ga tu fiqr na kr who mera sheir beta hai tu bas Waleema ki tyaari kr.
Mawra: (Akbar se alag hotey huey) Nai baba jani mujhey bilkul bhi acha nai lag raha mujhey abhi betu se milna hai.
Yeh kehtey huey Mawra ko chakker aaye aur who girney lagi tou Qasim ne usey pakad lia aur usey room main le ja k bed pe lita dia jab us ka hath Mawra k mathey ko chua tou Mawra ko bht taiz bukhar tha.
Es waqt Qasim k ghar per hi Safeer ki sari family majud thi sab preshan they k Mawra ko achanak kia hua hai.
Raheela: Kia hua meri bachi ko.
Qasim: Bukhar hai bht taiz shaid usi wajah se behosh hui hai ab jab tuk Safeer us k samney nai aaye ga who theek nai ho gi.
Akbar ne COAS ko phone kia.
COAS: Safeer tumharey baba ka phone hai.
Safeer: (call attend kr k) Baba Jani aap DD maa ka khyaal rakho mein aa raha hn.
Ladki: Abhi tum puri trhah se theek nai huey ho.
Safeer: Tum? Tum yahan kia kr rahi ho.
Zain: Yehi tou tujhey Afghanistan se le k aaye hai.
Safeer: What the Fuck.
Raheela: (rotey huey) Bukhar tou kam ho gya lekin abhi tuk hosh nai aaya usey.
Awaz: Kahan hn DD maa.
Awaz ki traf jab sab ne deikha tou wahan Safeer khada tha lekin usey bandage lagi theen sab bht khush huey Raheela dour k Safeer k pass gai aur usey hulkey se galey laga lia takeh Safeer ko dard na ho.
Raheela: Aa gya mera bacha deikh na teri DD maa behosh hai hosh hi nai aa raha usey.
Safeer alag ho k seedha apni DD maa k kamrey main chala gya us ne deikha k Mawra bed pe laiti hui hai Safeer ja k us k paun k pass bed pe beith gya aur apna sir Mawra k paun pe rakh dia Safeer ki aankhon se aansu nikal k Mawra k paun pe jab girey tou Mawra ki aankhein khul gaen.
Mawra: (bed pe beithtey huey) Betu.
Safeer Mawra ki baat sun k jaldi se utha aur us k pass ja k usey galey se laga lia Mawra bhi khushi k aansu liey k us ka betu sahi salamat us k pass hai safeer ko galey lagaey sakoon se beithi thi.
Safeer: Mujhey maaf kr do DD maa hamesha aap ko takleef deita hn.
Mawra: Tu tou meri jaan hai pata hai jab se subhah sapney main deikha k tujhey 4 goliyan lagi hn tou aesa laga kisi ne merey jism se ruh hi nikal li hai.
Safeer: (Mawra k muh pe hath rakhtey huey) Na DD maa aesa na bolo, ab yeh batao k ab kesa feel ho raha hai.
Mawra: Tu aa gya na ab theek hn.
Qasim: Aur bhai kia baatein ho rahi hn.
Safeer: Bhai waleema ka kia bana.
Qasim: Raat ka program hai sab Mehmanon ko bata dia hai.
Safeer: Perfect acha aap aur DD maa tyaar ho mein bhi ghar se tyaar ho k aata hoon.
Mawra: Tu kaheen nai ja raha mein ne terey liey Dress le rakha hai Waleema ka who pehn le yaheen.
Safeer: Phir bhi jana ho ga aap k liey gift le k rakha hai who bhi lana hai.
Mawra: Mujhey nai lena koi gift ya phr kisi aur ko bheij de.
Safeer: DD maa who merey locker main hai aur locker main kch secret file bhi hn aap samjho na mein ne kaha na a jaun ga jaldi hi.
Mawra: (udaas hotey huey) Mujhey bilkul bhi acha nai lag raha.
Safeer: (Mawra ko galey lagatey huey) DD maa kaha na aa jaun ga who gift mein ne aap k liey bht hi pyaar se lia hai plz samjho na bas yun gya aur yun aaya.
Mawra: (Safeer se alag ho k usey three piece suit detey huey) Yehi pehnna theek hai.
Safeer: G DD maa.
Safeer wahan se bahir aaya aur Akbar se gadi ki chabi le k ghar ki traf rawana ho gya ghar ja k sab se pehley nahaya aur phr Suit pehna jo us ki DD maa ne usey dia tha us k baad us ne apney room ki ek deewar ki khaas jagah pe apna hath ka panja rakha jis sey deewar main se red line ne purey hath ko scan kia us k baad Safeer ne apni aankh aagey ki us ka scan hua us k baad who light Safeer k sir pe pari aur Dimagh ka scan krney lagi Safeer ne Dimagh main ek lafz bola jis sey who red light green ho gai.
Awaz: Welcome Death Reaper.
Us awaz k baad who deewar side ho gai aur Safeer us k ander chala gya aur neechay ki traf janey laga jesay jesay us k qadam aagey berh rahey they light on hoti ja rahi thi neechay uterney k baad ek Derwaza aur aaya jo k ek aesay metal ka bana tha jo k bullet proof, bomb proof aur her us cheez se proof tha jo nuqsaan pouncha sakti hai.
Awaz: Welcome Death Reaper put your blood sample.
Awaz aaney k baad derwazey se ek chip bahir nikli jis k side main choti si sui(needle) lagi hui thi Safeer ne us sui pe apni ungli dabai aur blood ka ka ek qatra us chip pe dala.
Awaz: Hold on for a moment.
Thodi deir k analysis k baad phr se awaz aaye.
Awaz: Access Granted.
Us k sath hi derwaza open hua aur Safeer ek hall numa kamrey main daakhil hua hall numa kamra kaafi bada tha aur main kayee kamrey type portion baney they aur deewarein glass ki theen aur ek side computer system tha who puri deewar screen thi aur us k sath hi seesha ka bana hua baqi ka portion tha jesa k keyboard wagheira.
Safeer ek side gya yahan ek chota sa locker para tha Safeer ne us pe apna thumb rakha aur password dala jis se who box khul gya us main se ek box aur ek khaki rung ka envelope uthaya aur locker band kr dia us k baad who wahan se nikal gya us k nikltey hi sab phr se secure pehley jesay ho gya who apney room main aaya hi tha k phone ring hua.
Safeer: G bhai.
Qasim: Kahan hai bhai teri DD maa gussay main hai tu aaya nai abhi tuk mehmaan bhi sarey aa chukey hn.
Safeer: Petrol khatam ho gya tha bas who dalwa raha hn rash bht hai aap DD maa ko bata do mein bas aa raha hn.
Qasim: Theek hai jaldi aana.
Waleema Qasim k ghar main hi rakha gya tha us k lawn main kafi bada ha Mehmaan sab aa gaey they ek jagah Ladies theen aur ek jagah Gent tabhi wahan 4 gadiyan aa k rukeen aur us main se gun man utrey aur ek gadi ka derwaza khola us main se ek ladka nikla who ladka wahan se seedha ladies side pe gya sath main us k gun man bhi they us ne ladies side jatey hi ek ladki ka hath pakad lia.
Ladki: How dare you Waleed tumhari himmat kesay hui mera hath pakadney ki aur tum yahan kia kr rahey ho tumhey tou kisi ne nai bulaya.
Waleed: Tumhey dhoondta hua aaya hn jaanu bas bht ho gya tum ko time dia tha k aaj mujhey tumhari haan chaiey nai tou utha k le jaun ga.
Who aagey kch bolta usey ek thapper para jis se who thoda ladkhadaya us ne gussay main thaper marney waley ko deikha us k gun man ne Mawra pe gun taan deen yeh sab deikh k Safeer k ghar waley ghabra gaey.
Mawra: (gussay main) Tumhari himmat kesay hui meri behan ka hath pakadney ki ager mera Betu aa gya na teri boti bhi nai miley gi.
Waleed: Mujhey kon rokey ga mein Home minister ka beta hn chahun tou abhi merey guards sari ki sari goliyan tumharey ander daal dein gey (unchi awaz main) mujhey thapper marney ki himmat kesay ki tu ne.
Tabhi Waleed k sarey guards neechay gid gaey kisi ko kch samjh nai aaye k kia hua hai aur phr achanak hi Waleed zameen se 2 foot uper tha aur us k galey main kisi ka hath tha jis sey usey saans leney main takleef ho rahi thi Waleed ne jab gala pakadney waley ko deikha tou usey do laal aankhein nazer aayen.
Safeer: APNI AKAD KO ZARA LAGAM DE WERNA HUMAREY HAAN BELAGAM KI GERDAN UDA DI JATI HAI.
Yeh keh k Safeer ne us ka gala shod dia aur who zameen pe gira aur apna saans darust krney laga us k baad kahada ho gya.
Waleed: Tu mujhey janta nai mein Home Minister ka beta hn wesay Dialogue acha maar leta hai tu.
Safeer: Mein Banda bhi badi bedardi se marta hn I'M A MAN WHO SLAUGHT THE MAN WITH HIS HAND mujhey hathyaar ki zaroorat nai aur mujhey koi farq nai perta tu kis ki najaiz aulaad hai ager tu yahan se 1 min k ander ander nai gya na tou terey ghar ki aurton ko yahan la k nachaun ga tu aur tera baap kch nai kr pao gey chal dafa ho ja.
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O teri ki story ma boht suspense or thrill or violence bhara hoa ha keep it up bro
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