Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

[AK 24]

UPDATE:-49​

"AK utho" "AK utho" "AK uth na"
Janvi mujhe utha rahi thi aur main ghode bech ke so raha tha ya behosh pada tha pata nahi lekin wo thodi loud thi isliye aankhe khul gayi meri.



Main:- kya hai yaar bhabhi sone do na.



Janvi:- MLA kidnap hua hai, puri delhi mein ye news aag ki tarah fail rakhi hai, 24 hours ki deadline di thi unhone bas 14 hours bache aur bhaishab ko aur sona hai.



Main:- pehle nahi bata sakti thi.


Aur main jhatke se bed pe se utha to sir bhari tha mera raat ka kuch jada yaad nahi tha thik se bas itna pata tha ki daru pani ki tarah pi thi, khair mein khada hoke bathroom ki taraf bhaga.



Janvi:- raat ko swati ka phone aaya to tha tab to baby sona bolne laga usey, ab kaise bhaag raha hai, jaldi se location pe pahuch aarav aur vivek wahi gaye hai.



Main:- thik hai aap nimbu pani banao mein 5 minute mein aaya.



Maine jaldi se thande pani ka shower liya to dimag ek dum khul gaya mera, maine bahar aake jaldi se kapde pehne gun paint mein dali aur bhaag ke niche aaya to janvi leke khadi thi glass maine jaldi se piya aur car mein baith ke haweli se nikla 2 minute hi chala ki dimag mein aaya "bhenchod jaana kaha hai" main car chalate huye aarav ko call lagaya.


Aarav:- uth gaye janab.



Main:- sun backchodi baad mein, jaldi se address bhej MLA ka aur ye apni party ka hai opposition.



Aarav:- opposition ka hai aur yaha raj bhi aaya hua hai to ignore kariyo usey, address send kar diya hai maine.



Main:- nice dude, ye raj kuch na kuch backchodi jaroor pelega.




Aarav:- surrender uncle ne kaha hai ki usey ignore karo aur yahi humey karna hai, waise bhi ye MLA uska jankar tha isliye aaya hua hai yaha.



Main:- pahuchta hu.



Call disconnected. Main mesaage mein address dekha to matha satak gaya mera aur iske 2 reason they ek to ye address preeti ke bilkul bagal wale ghar tha aur doosra ye ki mein is address ki opposite direction mein chal raha tha aur kaafi aage aa gaya tha, lekin ab kaam to karna hi tha isliye jaldi se maine U turn liya aur gadi pel di speed mein. 30 minute ke ander mein address pe pahucha to waha police khadi thi aur aditya bhi bahar hi khada tha...



Aditya:- aao aao.



Main:- kya scene hai yaha ka?



Aditya:- scene to madam ko pata hai,



Main:- tu ande dene ke liye khada hai kya, chal ye jitne bhi inki party ke log hai un sab ko nikal yaha se bas rishtedaar aur gharwalo ko chod de.



Aditya:- ji bhai.



Main ander aaya to opposition ke log khade they jo mujhe jante they as a " gunda of CM" isliye sab mujhe hi ghur rahe they lekin aditya ne un sab ko bahar nikala. Aarav, vivek, swati aur neha mere paas aaye.



Main:- kya scene hai.



Swati:- scene ek dum clear hai lekin itna bhi nahi, darasal ek gang hai yaha pe wo log security wagarh dete hai politician aur businessmen ko....



Main:- wait a second lekin security kisse dete hai.



Swati:- sun to lo pehle, ye security khudse hi dete hai matlab jab tak inke paas paise pahuchte rahenge tab tak samne wali party safe nahi to ye khud hi unpe attack ya ye kahu unki family pe attack kar dete hai.



Main:- to ye kaam usmaan ka hoga fir to.



Swati:- may be ho sakta hai, lekin surity nahi hai puri.



Main:-hmmm, ek baar inke family members se baat kar lu..



Vivek:- chal aaja, maal hai ek se ek.



Swati:- shut up vivek and be serious.



Main:- tum log ruko main hi baat karta hu.



Aarav:- chal main chalta hu.



Main aur aarav unke drawing room mein aaye to 4 ladies thi aur 4 gents they aur 4 ladkiya thi ek ladka tha lekin ander preeti priya aur uske parents they aur jo baki ke they wo MLA ki family se they. Mujhe yaha dekh ke preeti aur priya shock to huyi lekin itna nahi. Baaki sab bhi mujhe hi dekhne lage.


Main:- hello everyone, kya kuch sawal puch sakta hu.



Admi:- tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tum to surrender ke aadmi ho na.



Main:- wait a minute, pehli baat to ye main yaha koi party warty khelne nahi aaya, doosri baat ainda se soch samajh ke bolna.



Lady:- aap shant rahiye wo police ke sath hai dekho.



Ladka:- tum mere papa se aise kaise baat kar sakte ho, tameez nahi hai kya?



Main:- ooo bhai shanti ka daan de aur bado ke bich mein na bol to batao aap sab MLA ki kisi se dushmani thi kya ya fir ladayi jhagda.




Admi:- nahi papa ji ka kisi se ladayi jhagda nahi tha wo to bhut shant insan they aur tumhari party mein bhi unki itni hi izzat hai, lekin ek call aata tha unhe jinse unke face pe tension aa jaati thi.



Main:- kuch pata hai is baare mein aapko.



Admi:- nahi ji.



Main:- thanks, main puri kosis karunga unko sahi salamat wapis laane ki.



Preeti:- please AK dadu ko thik thak wapis le aao, dekho taniya ne kya haal bana rakha hai apna.



Maine bas aankho ke ishare se bharosa jataya aur us taniya ki taraf dekha to wo ro rahi thi lekin us ke jaisi hi ladki phone chala rahi thi "asanskari peoples"



Main aur aarav bahar aaye aur maine swati se pucha.



Main:- swati ab batao MLA ka kidnap kaise, kab aur kaha hua hai, aur deadline kya hai.




Swati:- see MLA ka kidnap MG Road ki red light pe hua, lekin dekhne wali baat ye hai ki kidnapping se just ek din pehle hi CCTV kharab hua, kidnap raat ke time hua jab MLA sir office se ghar aa rahe they aur security ke liye ek car bhi thi unke sath par jaise hi red light aane ko huyi to unki security ki car ki hawa nikal gayi wo thoda piche huye aur itne time mein kaand ho gaya aur deadline sirf 24 ghante ki hai dhundh sako to dhundh lo nahi to dead body ki home delivery kar denge.



Main:- nice dude nice sahi khel rahe hai wo, chalo koi nahi, tum ek kaam karo unke driver ko bulao station.



Uske baad hum sab station ke liye nikle kyuki ab yaha koi kaam bacha hi nahi tha hamara. Maine raste mein aakash ko call karke keh diya ki station aa jaaye apna saman leke.



Aakash:- bol bhai kya karna hai.



Main:- sun buddhe ki call details nikal aur jo number doubtful lage uski janam patri bhi nikal aur access tujhe yaha se mil hi jaayega to lag jaa kaam pe.



Vivek:- tum dono kaam karo hum lunch karte hai.



Main:- waah bc maine bhi kuch nahi khaya hai lekin tum log khaao khana.



Wo log khana khaane lage aur main sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye mere liye MLA jaroori nahi tha mujhe to wo kidnapper chahiye tha, main akela baitha soche jaa raha tha aur pata nahi kitna time ho gaya tha mujhe mere dimag mein ek dum se ek baat hit huyi to main khada hoke team ke paas gaya to waha wo driver baitha tha.



Main:- ye kon hai.



Aarav:- driver hai.



Main:- haa to driver sahab kya hua tha raat ko.



Driver:- pata nahi sahab humne to car redlight pe roki thi, sunsaan road tha isliye hawa khane ke liye window niche kiya hi tha ki piche se ek hath hamare muh pe aaya aur uske baad hume kuch pata nahi hum to hospital mein they subah.



Swati:- he is right, test hua tha iska chloroform diya tha isey.



Main:- okkk isey bhej do, waise bhi ye kaam ka nahi ab kaam ki baat suno.


Neha:- yaa bolo.



Main:- time kitna bacha hai?



Aarav:- almost 6 hours.



Main:- chalo achi baat hai ab neha ek kaam karo MLA ke office ki aur uske ghar ke bahar ki 2 din ki Cctv footage mangwa lo.



Vivek:- ab uska kya karega.


Main:- abey murkh, unhone itna acha plan banaya hai aur wo bhi ek reputated MLA ko kidnap karne ke liye to unhone MLA ko follow to kiya hi hoga na, mujhe lagta hai ki kuch to jaroor milega usme.



Swati:- aur nahi mila to.



Main:- hmmm, to bhi acha hi hai buddhe ki dead body aayegi tab pakad lenge kidnaper ko


Swati:- tumhe unki jaan ki fikar nahi hai balki tum us kidnaper ki jada fikar hai.



Aarav :- arey majak kar raha hai wo, tum jaldi mangwao ye.



Uske baad swati aur aarav chale gaye footage laane aur hum sab gaye aakash ke paas.



Main:- oyyy lodu kuch mila ya nahi.



Aakash:- mila hai.


Vivek:- to betichod bol na muh mein loda fasa hai kya.



Neha:- hey main bhi hu yaha to aisi language use na karo.



ViveK:- haa dekha hai tujhe swati nahi hoti jab kitni gandi galiya deti hai tu.



Main:- tumhara ho gaya ho to kaam ki baat kare.



Aakash:- bhai MLA ke paas javed naam ke bande ke bhut se call hai aur maine hi is javed ka number check kiya to ye bhi band aa raha hai jabse MLA kidnap hua hai, aur ye javed ka number track bhi nahi ho paa raha kuch issues ke chalte lekin iska crime record dekha hai maine bhut jada cases hai ispe lekin ye kaha hai kisi ko pata nahi.



Uske baad usne javed ki photo dikhayi to koi 40-45 ke lagbhag ka aadmi tha hatta- katta sa, maine wo pic li aur aditya ko send ki aur usko bola ki puri delhi mein iska search warrant nikalwa koi dikkat hoti hai to commissioner ko bol wo kar denge solve.


Ye kaam khatam hua hi tha ki cctv footage aa gayi aur hum sab se unhe play kiya aur shanti se dekhne lage bilkul dead silence mein, humne dono place ki ek din ki recording 2 baar dekhi to kuch nahi mila fir humne kidnapping wale din ki video bhi 3 baar dekhi to humey kuch nahi mila. Ab hamare paas time bhi sirf 2 hours bache they aur mila kuch bhi nahi isliye sab log ek ek karke uthke bahar ko chale gaye, lekin main still us office wali recording ko dekhe jaa raha tha fast forward mein sayad kuch mil hi jaaye. Aur aise 10 baar aur dekhi hogi ki Main ek dum se chilla pada.



Main:- i got him! I got him! I got him!



Mere aise chillane se sab ander aaye aur mere ko dekhne laga.


Vivek:- pagal ho gaya hai kya chutiye, jo chilla raha hai.



Main:- shut the fuck up bitch, maine dhundh liye is rickshaw wale ko dekh ye subah yaha aaya aur office ki side hi muh karke baitha raha jab tak MLA nahi aa gaya, aur fir ye lunch ke time fir wapis aaya aur pura din wahi baitha raha, iske paas sawariya bhi aa rahi hai lekin ye un sabko mana kar raha hai wo bhi jhagad ke iske expression se saaf pata lag raha hai ye dara dhamka ke mana kar raha hai lekin jaise hi raat huyi sab rickshaw wale chale gaye lekin ye still khada raha aur jaise hi MLA nikla to ye bhi nikal gaya, matlab isne kidnap nahi kiya lekin isey pata jaroor hoga.



Vivek:- shabas mere ladke.



Aakash:- lekin problem ye hai ki isko dhundhe kaha aur hamare paas 1:30 hour hai.



Main:- aarav iski sakal to dekheli lag rahi haina


Aarav ne usey gaur se dekha aur fir bola.



Aarav:- arey ye to wahi hai





TO BE CONTINUED

 

[AK 24]

Waiting for next update...

अपडेट कब आएगा

Waiting bhai ji

WAITING FOR UPDATE BHAI

Intezaar rhega

Waiting

Update posted guys
I know main update dene mein laparwahi kar raha hu lekin busy hu thoda in dono
Ab next update lene ke liye review do
Dher saare review aate hi update aa jayega chahe ek din hai kyu na hua ho

 

[¥HYDRA¥]

Update posted guys
I know main update dene mein laparwahi kar raha hu lekin busy hu thoda in dono
Ab next update lene ke liye review do
Dher saare review aate hi update aa jayega chahe ek din hai kyu na hua ho

 

[bd sharkar]

Nice update but not satisfactory... please give regular update or increase the updates size ....

 

[Johnboy11]

Nice update.
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Dher saara review.
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Sirji aapki wo warewolf wo bhi young wale ka dusra part kha h ya kab tak aayega.
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Vaise iss update mai kya hi basad machai h launde ne lekin last mai kaam kr hi diya.
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Ye launda kiran ko kab dhudhega.
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Keep writing.
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Keep posting.
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[Rohit1988]

UPDATE:-49​

"AK utho" "AK utho" "AK uth na"
Janvi mujhe utha rahi thi aur main ghode bech ke so raha tha ya behosh pada tha pata nahi lekin wo thodi loud thi isliye aankhe khul gayi meri.



Main:- kya hai yaar bhabhi sone do na.



Janvi:- MLA kidnap hua hai, puri delhi mein ye news aag ki tarah fail rakhi hai, 24 hours ki deadline di thi unhone bas 14 hours bache aur bhaishab ko aur sona hai.



Main:- pehle nahi bata sakti thi.


Aur main jhatke se bed pe se utha to sir bhari tha mera raat ka kuch jada yaad nahi tha thik se bas itna pata tha ki daru pani ki tarah pi thi, khair mein khada hoke bathroom ki taraf bhaga.



Janvi:- raat ko swati ka phone aaya to tha tab to baby sona bolne laga usey, ab kaise bhaag raha hai, jaldi se location pe pahuch aarav aur vivek wahi gaye hai.



Main:- thik hai aap nimbu pani banao mein 5 minute mein aaya.



Maine jaldi se thande pani ka shower liya to dimag ek dum khul gaya mera, maine bahar aake jaldi se kapde pehne gun paint mein dali aur bhaag ke niche aaya to janvi leke khadi thi glass maine jaldi se piya aur car mein baith ke haweli se nikla 2 minute hi chala ki dimag mein aaya "bhenchod jaana kaha hai" main car chalate huye aarav ko call lagaya.


Aarav:- uth gaye janab.



Main:- sun backchodi baad mein, jaldi se address bhej MLA ka aur ye apni party ka hai opposition.



Aarav:- opposition ka hai aur yaha raj bhi aaya hua hai to ignore kariyo usey, address send kar diya hai maine.



Main:- nice dude, ye raj kuch na kuch backchodi jaroor pelega.




Aarav:- surrender uncle ne kaha hai ki usey ignore karo aur yahi humey karna hai, waise bhi ye MLA uska jankar tha isliye aaya hua hai yaha.



Main:- pahuchta hu.



Call disconnected. Main mesaage mein address dekha to matha satak gaya mera aur iske 2 reason they ek to ye address preeti ke bilkul bagal wale ghar tha aur doosra ye ki mein is address ki opposite direction mein chal raha tha aur kaafi aage aa gaya tha, lekin ab kaam to karna hi tha isliye jaldi se maine U turn liya aur gadi pel di speed mein. 30 minute ke ander mein address pe pahucha to waha police khadi thi aur aditya bhi bahar hi khada tha...



Aditya:- aao aao.



Main:- kya scene hai yaha ka?



Aditya:- scene to madam ko pata hai,



Main:- tu ande dene ke liye khada hai kya, chal ye jitne bhi inki party ke log hai un sab ko nikal yaha se bas rishtedaar aur gharwalo ko chod de.



Aditya:- ji bhai.



Main ander aaya to opposition ke log khade they jo mujhe jante they as a " gunda of CM" isliye sab mujhe hi ghur rahe they lekin aditya ne un sab ko bahar nikala. Aarav, vivek, swati aur neha mere paas aaye.



Main:- kya scene hai.



Swati:- scene ek dum clear hai lekin itna bhi nahi, darasal ek gang hai yaha pe wo log security wagarh dete hai politician aur businessmen ko....



Main:- wait a second lekin security kisse dete hai.



Swati:- sun to lo pehle, ye security khudse hi dete hai matlab jab tak inke paas paise pahuchte rahenge tab tak samne wali party safe nahi to ye khud hi unpe attack ya ye kahu unki family pe attack kar dete hai.



Main:- to ye kaam usmaan ka hoga fir to.



Swati:- may be ho sakta hai, lekin surity nahi hai puri.



Main:-hmmm, ek baar inke family members se baat kar lu..



Vivek:- chal aaja, maal hai ek se ek.



Swati:- shut up vivek and be serious.



Main:- tum log ruko main hi baat karta hu.



Aarav:- chal main chalta hu.



Main aur aarav unke drawing room mein aaye to 4 ladies thi aur 4 gents they aur 4 ladkiya thi ek ladka tha lekin ander preeti priya aur uske parents they aur jo baki ke they wo MLA ki family se they. Mujhe yaha dekh ke preeti aur priya shock to huyi lekin itna nahi. Baaki sab bhi mujhe hi dekhne lage.


Main:- hello everyone, kya kuch sawal puch sakta hu.



Admi:- tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tum to surrender ke aadmi ho na.



Main:- wait a minute, pehli baat to ye main yaha koi party warty khelne nahi aaya, doosri baat ainda se soch samajh ke bolna.



Lady:- aap shant rahiye wo police ke sath hai dekho.



Ladka:- tum mere papa se aise kaise baat kar sakte ho, tameez nahi hai kya?



Main:- ooo bhai shanti ka daan de aur bado ke bich mein na bol to batao aap sab MLA ki kisi se dushmani thi kya ya fir ladayi jhagda.




Admi:- nahi papa ji ka kisi se ladayi jhagda nahi tha wo to bhut shant insan they aur tumhari party mein bhi unki itni hi izzat hai, lekin ek call aata tha unhe jinse unke face pe tension aa jaati thi.



Main:- kuch pata hai is baare mein aapko.



Admi:- nahi ji.



Main:- thanks, main puri kosis karunga unko sahi salamat wapis laane ki.



Preeti:- please AK dadu ko thik thak wapis le aao, dekho taniya ne kya haal bana rakha hai apna.



Maine bas aankho ke ishare se bharosa jataya aur us taniya ki taraf dekha to wo ro rahi thi lekin us ke jaisi hi ladki phone chala rahi thi "asanskari peoples"



Main aur aarav bahar aaye aur maine swati se pucha.



Main:- swati ab batao MLA ka kidnap kaise, kab aur kaha hua hai, aur deadline kya hai.




Swati:- see MLA ka kidnap MG Road ki red light pe hua, lekin dekhne wali baat ye hai ki kidnapping se just ek din pehle hi CCTV kharab hua, kidnap raat ke time hua jab MLA sir office se ghar aa rahe they aur security ke liye ek car bhi thi unke sath par jaise hi red light aane ko huyi to unki security ki car ki hawa nikal gayi wo thoda piche huye aur itne time mein kaand ho gaya aur deadline sirf 24 ghante ki hai dhundh sako to dhundh lo nahi to dead body ki home delivery kar denge.



Main:- nice dude nice sahi khel rahe hai wo, chalo koi nahi, tum ek kaam karo unke driver ko bulao station.



Uske baad hum sab station ke liye nikle kyuki ab yaha koi kaam bacha hi nahi tha hamara. Maine raste mein aakash ko call karke keh diya ki station aa jaaye apna saman leke.



Aakash:- bol bhai kya karna hai.



Main:- sun buddhe ki call details nikal aur jo number doubtful lage uski janam patri bhi nikal aur access tujhe yaha se mil hi jaayega to lag jaa kaam pe.



Vivek:- tum dono kaam karo hum lunch karte hai.



Main:- waah bc maine bhi kuch nahi khaya hai lekin tum log khaao khana.



Wo log khana khaane lage aur main sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye mere liye MLA jaroori nahi tha mujhe to wo kidnapper chahiye tha, main akela baitha soche jaa raha tha aur pata nahi kitna time ho gaya tha mujhe mere dimag mein ek dum se ek baat hit huyi to main khada hoke team ke paas gaya to waha wo driver baitha tha.



Main:- ye kon hai.



Aarav:- driver hai.



Main:- haa to driver sahab kya hua tha raat ko.



Driver:- pata nahi sahab humne to car redlight pe roki thi, sunsaan road tha isliye hawa khane ke liye window niche kiya hi tha ki piche se ek hath hamare muh pe aaya aur uske baad hume kuch pata nahi hum to hospital mein they subah.



Swati:- he is right, test hua tha iska chloroform diya tha isey.



Main:- okkk isey bhej do, waise bhi ye kaam ka nahi ab kaam ki baat suno.


Neha:- yaa bolo.



Main:- time kitna bacha hai?



Aarav:- almost 6 hours.



Main:- chalo achi baat hai ab neha ek kaam karo MLA ke office ki aur uske ghar ke bahar ki 2 din ki Cctv footage mangwa lo.



Vivek:- ab uska kya karega.


Main:- abey murkh, unhone itna acha plan banaya hai aur wo bhi ek reputated MLA ko kidnap karne ke liye to unhone MLA ko follow to kiya hi hoga na, mujhe lagta hai ki kuch to jaroor milega usme.



Swati:- aur nahi mila to.



Main:- hmmm, to bhi acha hi hai buddhe ki dead body aayegi tab pakad lenge kidnaper ko


Swati:- tumhe unki jaan ki fikar nahi hai balki tum us kidnaper ki jada fikar hai.



Aarav :- arey majak kar raha hai wo, tum jaldi mangwao ye.



Uske baad swati aur aarav chale gaye footage laane aur hum sab gaye aakash ke paas.



Main:- oyyy lodu kuch mila ya nahi.



Aakash:- mila hai.


Vivek:- to betichod bol na muh mein loda fasa hai kya.



Neha:- hey main bhi hu yaha to aisi language use na karo.



ViveK:- haa dekha hai tujhe swati nahi hoti jab kitni gandi galiya deti hai tu.



Main:- tumhara ho gaya ho to kaam ki baat kare.



Aakash:- bhai MLA ke paas javed naam ke bande ke bhut se call hai aur maine hi is javed ka number check kiya to ye bhi band aa raha hai jabse MLA kidnap hua hai, aur ye javed ka number track bhi nahi ho paa raha kuch issues ke chalte lekin iska crime record dekha hai maine bhut jada cases hai ispe lekin ye kaha hai kisi ko pata nahi.



Uske baad usne javed ki photo dikhayi to koi 40-45 ke lagbhag ka aadmi tha hatta- katta sa, maine wo pic li aur aditya ko send ki aur usko bola ki puri delhi mein iska search warrant nikalwa koi dikkat hoti hai to commissioner ko bol wo kar denge solve.


Ye kaam khatam hua hi tha ki cctv footage aa gayi aur hum sab se unhe play kiya aur shanti se dekhne lage bilkul dead silence mein, humne dono place ki ek din ki recording 2 baar dekhi to kuch nahi mila fir humne kidnapping wale din ki video bhi 3 baar dekhi to humey kuch nahi mila. Ab hamare paas time bhi sirf 2 hours bache they aur mila kuch bhi nahi isliye sab log ek ek karke uthke bahar ko chale gaye, lekin main still us office wali recording ko dekhe jaa raha tha fast forward mein sayad kuch mil hi jaaye. Aur aise 10 baar aur dekhi hogi ki Main ek dum se chilla pada.



Main:- i got him! I got him! I got him!



Mere aise chillane se sab ander aaye aur mere ko dekhne laga.


Vivek:- pagal ho gaya hai kya chutiye, jo chilla raha hai.



Main:- shut the fuck up bitch, maine dhundh liye is rickshaw wale ko dekh ye subah yaha aaya aur office ki side hi muh karke baitha raha jab tak MLA nahi aa gaya, aur fir ye lunch ke time fir wapis aaya aur pura din wahi baitha raha, iske paas sawariya bhi aa rahi hai lekin ye un sabko mana kar raha hai wo bhi jhagad ke iske expression se saaf pata lag raha hai ye dara dhamka ke mana kar raha hai lekin jaise hi raat huyi sab rickshaw wale chale gaye lekin ye still khada raha aur jaise hi MLA nikla to ye bhi nikal gaya, matlab isne kidnap nahi kiya lekin isey pata jaroor hoga.



Vivek:- shabas mere ladke.



Aakash:- lekin problem ye hai ki isko dhundhe kaha aur hamare paas 1:30 hour hai.



Main:- aarav iski sakal to dekheli lag rahi haina


Aarav ne usey gaur se dekha aur fir bola.



Aarav:- arey ye to wahi hai





TO BE CONTINUED

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[RAAZ]

To thoda story ke baare mein bata du...

1. Ye meri baaki stories se different hone wali hai
2. Its a long story, isme kam se kam 200 updates honge aur sayad 250 bhi. Aur agar bhut jyada pyar mila to next part bhi jaldi hi likh dunga
3. Ye ek aise ladke ki kahani hogi jo kuch nahi bhut saari intentions leke aaya hai, aur is ladke ka character kaafi different hoga, i mean rude, cruel, phsyco, pathetic, drug addicted, I don't give a fuck wala . Aur ye change nahi hoga, i mean ye kamjor nahi padega. Aur is story mein romance ki thodi si jagah hai, Brutality aur suspense hi main hoga isme aur na koi supernatural powers hogi isme. Comedy hogi adultery hogi, action hoga family drama bhut kam hoga.
4. UPDATE bhi daily ek dunga aur kuch jaroori kaam aa gaya to keh nahi sakta .
5. Main baat rebu dena padega sabko chahe chota do.
6. Aur ye story first person mein chalegi to backchodi bhi khoob hogi...

To milte hai kal 1st UPDATE ke sath......

Bhai aaj shuru kar raha hoon aapki yah story aur dekhtay hai kaisa rahega yah safar waisay lifafa (Envelope) bata raha hai ki mazmoon (topic) zabardast hoga dekhtey hain.

 

[ZK 21]

Thanks bhidu aur aaj update dena ka koi mood aur time nahi tha update kal deta lekin likh diya aaj hi

Thanks bhiduuuu

 

[RAAZ]

UPDATE:-1 ( The beginning and intro)




Hello logis, to ye kahani suru hoti hai mere janam se.

(Tension na lo pakaunga nahi Bollywood mafik 1update mein bada ho jaunga aur story start ho jayegi.)


Firstly ye batadu mera janam haryana ke ek gaon mein hua, gaon pehle tha ab to ek well developed gaon ho chuka hai like a town.
Mere dadaji sarpanch reh chuke hai gaon ke kayi dafa to paisa bhi thik thak hai unki nazar mein, meri nazar mein to mai gareeb hi tha. Mera baap ek number ka kamina insaan hai aur wahi meri mummy bilkul sidhi simple lekin gusse wali.


Mera baapu ko do kaam aate they ek daaru pina aur fir nashe mein meri maa ko maarna, us samay mein bhi bhut chota tha to itni samajh nahi thi ki ye kyu ho raha hai main to bas apni mummy ko pitta dekhke rone lag jata tha. Aur ye sab dekh ke bada hone laga to mere dil mein ek dar ne jagah bana li aur main ek dum fattu kism ka insaan banta jaa raha tha.


Main jab 7 saal ka hua to mere ko ek chota bhai mil gaya. Main bhut khush hua lekin ye khushi jyada din chalne wali thodi thi kyuki bhagwan ne meri kismat kisi gadhe ke lund se jo likhi thi 8 9 saal ka hua to papa mummy ki ladaiya badhne lagi aur nobat yaha tak aa gayi ki undono ka divorce ho gaya. Ab divorce to ho gaya lekin meri mummy mujhe yahi mere sharabi baap aur budhe ho chuke dada dadi ke paas chod gayi.


Mere bhai ko sath le gayi aur mujhe chod gayi ye baat mujhe hazam nahi ho rahi thi. Us time mera chota dimag yahi sochta tha ki mummy mujhse pyar nahi karti. Ya fir main unka beta nahi hu, mandir se to na laaye mujhe uthake.


Itni backchodi ka ek matlab hai ki mera bachpan bilkul acha nahi guzra. Ab din bitne lage mera baap bawla ho gaya meri mummy ke jaane se ab uski maar mujhe khani padti thi, dada dadi bhi bich mein nahi aate they kyuki unhe dar laga rehta tha ki kahi unka suputra unhe bhi na lapet le aur mere pujiniye chacha chachi ji to hamse duri bana ke rakhte they.


Mere dada bhi pure dhitt they apni izzat bachane ke liye apne pote ko pitte huye dekhte they. Agar wo chahte to mere baap ko jail mein dalwa sakte they itni chalti thi unki lekin nahi unko to apni izzat pyari hai baki sab gaand marao.


Dheere dheere main bada hone laga aur mere ander ka dar bhi badhne laga lekin ab dar ke sath sath nafrat pagalpan aur bhi kayi cheezo ne jagah le li thi. Ab meri condition ye thi ki mujhe pata rehta tha ki mere sath kya hone wala hai bole to bilkul expected hota tha ki ab is time mera baap ghar se jayega is time main padhunga is time wo wapis aayega daaru pike aur is time wo mujhe pelega aur fir main rounga aur fir so jaunga.



Sala mera baap itna marta tha ki dheere dheere body me pain hona bhi band ho gaya aur body bhi mujhe apni thodi majboot lagne lagi ab iske fayde mujhe 10th class mein pata lage jab sir hume marte aur mere akele ko jyada dard nahi hota main to bas acting karta tha chillane ki taki master ki gaand fate aur wo jaldi chod de. Ab school mein bhi sab mujhe chidate they ki teri maa bhag gayi, fattu wagarh bolte they marte bhi they galiya bhi dete they aur main sun leta tha. Ab kya kare sunni to padegi bc unka lawda kuch nahi ukhad sakta tha main.

Ab dheere dheere ghar ki halat thodi down jaane lagi economy ke mamle main, aisa mujhe lagta tha mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki mere dada ne paisa daba rakha hai apne niche.


Mujhe dukhi bhi bhut hota tha festivals wagarh pe jab sab bacho ko enjoy karte dekhta, apne parents ke sath khusiya manate huye. To is baat ke mere upar do reaction hote ek to main chhup ke rota doosra mujhe nafrat si hone lagi thi in relationship se aur mummy papa se bhi ki bas paida karke chod diya karo jo Karna hai ab.


Dukh takleef aur gussa to is baat se aata tha ki meri maa ne mujhe ek baar phone bhi nahi kiya jaane ke baad maine kitna try kiya apne mama ke pass bhi but kisi ne phone nahi uthaya bc. Mujhe sabse jyada gussa is baat ka tha bc main apne bhai ke sath nahi reh saka wo kaisa hoga, kya main usey yaad bhi hounga?
(Lawde kaise yaad rahega tu usey wo us time do dhai saal ka tha, kuch bhi bolta hai chutiya.)

Tutne laga tha main bas ab dil sirf do jagah lagta tha school main aur cricket mein.


School main bhi isliye lagta tha kyuki waha ek ladki thi manisha naam ki jo mera pehla crush thi. Keh sakte ho ki wo pehla pyar thi lekin main bhenchod fattu darta tha ki kahi ye bhi meri maa jaisi nikli to aur ye khayal aate hi main fallback kar leta tha.


Main 10th pass ache marks se ki kyuki mera dimag bachpan se hi tez tha aur ye koi supernatural power nahi thi ye bas tha bc.


Aur ab apun ki pilayi bhi mere baapu ne badha di thi mera sarir dekhke ke kyuki bada hone laga tha main lekin mujhe lawda fark nahi padta tha ab uski maar se. Wo sarabi admi sarab pike ander se khatam hone ko tha lekin hatta katta tha abhi bhi.


Main chahta to pel sakta tha usey lekin bc dar lagta tha aur ab to dar itna badh gaya tha ki wo dar ab peak pe tha mere.


Ab 10th class paas ki to mere dada ne mujhe ek mobile laa diya bc. Jo unhone life mein pehli cheez achi ki thi. Ab bc mobile aa gaya to main social media se judne laga aur bahar ke logo aur lifestyle ko bhi janne laga, janta to bc pehle se tha tv bhut dekhta tha isliye.


Lekin ab mujhe ek alag hi chaska chad gaya tha ladna sikhne ka ab yaha pe koi sikhane wala to tha nahi isliye main youtube pe video dekh ke practice karne laga aur subah running karne laga aur iska fark mujhe pata lagne laga tha.



Ab in sab ke bich ek mast ghatna ghati ya kahu ye meri life ki pehli sahi ghatna thi jisse mujhe khusi huyi thi kaafi dino baad.

Hua ye ki mere baap ne achanak se sarab chod di bc ye possible nahi hai koi nahi chod sakta aise par mere baap ko pata nahi aisa kya ho gaya tha ki usne ek dum se sarab chod di kahi pyar wyar to nahi ho gaya. ( Lawde kuch bhi mat bol)


Ab sarab chod di to iske kayi side effects huye ek to ye ki ab mere baap ne meri pilayi band kar di aur mere se baat karni bhi band kar di aur ye sab to fir bhi thik usne to meri galtiyo pe bhi daatna band kar diya. Aur mere baap ke aise raviye se mujhme ek alag level ka confidence aane lag gaya tha. Ab tak jo bacha dar ke bhigi billi ban ke rehta tha uske par nikalne lage they. Ek to phone mil jana doosra ab kisi ka dar na rehna ye 2 cheez kaafi hoti hai bigadne ke liye. Ab 11th class ke ander main harami hone lag gaya tha, jo ladka bas padhayi se matlab rakhta wo bc muth marne lag gaya tha school ke ander jiski gaali sunke fat jaati thi wo khud doosro ki maa- behen ek karne lag gaya tha. Jo pit- pit ke bada hua tha wo doosre londo ko pelne lag gaya tha. Matlab itne changes aane lag gaye they mere ander ki mere dosto ke sath- sath mere gharwale bhi thode se hairan they.


Ab main kayi cheeze start kar di thi, jinse mujhe kabhi nafrat thi like ciggrete pina,daaru pina, ladna, gaali dena, ladkiya tadna ye sab ab main karne laga tha. Lekin jo cheez mere ander nahi badli thi wo thi logo ke bich ke relationship jinse mujhe nafrat thi aur rahegi. Haa ladkiya tadne alag tha lekin sirf chodne ke liye pyar ke liye nahi kyuki ye pyar wyar hamare liye to na bane they.


Ab ye sab to bata diya maine apne 11th tak ka safar ab baat kar lete hai apni family ke baare mein jinka jyada role to rakhunga nahi lekin aage aa jaaye kya pata.


Dadaji:- baldev Chaudhary. Ye hamare gaon ke 3 baar sarpanch reh chuke hai, gaon ke log inki izzat bhi karte hai aur nafrat bhi. Lekin ye itne bade dhitt hai ki inko apni izzat ke alawa kuch nahi chahiye..


Dadi ji:- sawitri Chaudhary. Ye meri life mein ek aisi mahila hai jinki main respect bhi karta hu aur pyar bhi inke baare mein aaj tak kuch galat nahi socha matlab nafrat nahi ki Maine ( galat na soch lena bc tum log). Ye bhut hi sweet aur pativarta type ki hai.


Papa, pita, baap (jo bhi hai) :- Rajesh Chaudhary. Ek number ka kamina, aiyash aur sarabi aadmi abhi filhal sudhre hai par dekhte hai aage kya gul khilate hai.

Mummy:- Sunita Chaudhary. Ye kehne ko to maa hai par mujhe na lagta inki wajah se hi duniya se nafrat kar baitha aur duniya ki maa chod di aage jaake.

Vishal Chaudhary:- ye saga bhai hai mera isse bhut pyar karta hu main, aage role aayega iska story mein lekin filhal to ye mujhe janta bhi na hoga.

Chacha- chachi aur unka ek beta hai ravi


Ravi:- waise to ye bhi mera bhai hai lekin ye mere se ek saal bada bhi hai par gawar meri class mein padhta hai, mereko to ye kuch samjhta hi nahi tha suru mein lekin dheere dheere apun le aaya line pe isko.


Mere do mama aur do mami bhi hai aur ye charo bade chodu log hai bc, mujhe to ye nahi pasand waise inka role na hai to maa chudaye apni apni


Manish:- mere bade mama ka ladka, mere se 2 saal bada hai ek no ka harami aur tharki hai betichod. Is bhadwe ne bachpan mein bhut mara hai mujhe, lekin iska number bhi aayega l


Karan:- ye manish ka chota bhai hai saga, ye mere se 1 saal bada hai par ye hai apne bhai jaisa.


Simran:- ye hai meri ek loti behen, mere chote mama ki ladki iska character mysterious hai thoda.


Dekho bhailog ye jo bhi characters main bataye hai ye itne important na hai ye to isliye bata diye kyuki ye so called family members hai. Lekin main character bhut saare hai jo aage aate jayenge aur unke baare mein batate jayenge.


Ab thoda apne baare mein bhi batadu

Maine 11 th paas kar li thi ab bc problem ye aa gayi thi ki hamare school ka principal mar gaya aur ab uske family main koi tha nahi jo school chala sake to unhone school band kar diya aur aisa karne se hume addmision lena pada doosre school mein ab yaha to acha school tha nahi to maine addmision le liya hamare gaon se 10 km dur ek city hai uske school mein. Maine akele ne nahi almost hamari school ke adhiktar bacho me wahi addmision le liya tha.


Ankit kumar Chaudhary (pyar se AK bulate hai sab):- hero or vilain jo bhi bol lo mujhe fark nahi padta abhi abhi 12th main aaya hu body bhi achi khasi hai hai kheto mein kaam karne aur ghee, doodh khane se, smart bhi hu dikhne mein ladkiya pyar to karti hai mujhse lekin apun hate love stories. Mere baare mein aage pata chalega baki sab

(Ek lawde ko to bhool hi gaya)


Vivek Chaudhary:- dost hai he mera like brother from another mother mere jaisa hi backchod hai ek number ka bilkul hatta katta gora munda,ladkiyo ke aage bhut hawabaazi dikhata hai, bas ek yahi hai jo mere sath aage tak tikega.



Writer note:- on public demand aaj hi de diya . so guys kal se starting ho jayegi properly to sath bane rahe.





TO BE CONTINUED ??

Nice starting ab dekhna hai ki puck up kaisa rehta hai story ka magar plot to accha ban raha hai

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Awesome update.