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Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

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Main kiran ki taraf badha hi tha ki 5 bande meri taraf badhe, sayad mujhe rokne ke liye, ye lawde mujhe rokenge, ajji kaddu mera. Aur wo 5on mere paas aaye aur ek ne jaise hi hath pakdna chaha mera Maine uski taraf bina dekhe hath hataya aur waha se khade-khade hi uski neck pe kich maari , wo kati patang ki tarah niche gira aur uska ye haal dekhke waha khade har bande matlab har bande ke badan mein sursuri daud gayi kyuki maine bina uski taraf dekhe usey dodge kiya aur ek kick mein khatam, ye mera concentration tha main hawa ko feel kar paa raha tha aur sath sath har moving object ko.


Khair wo baki ke chaaro ne ek doosre ki taraf dekha aur meri taraf badh gaye.


Main:- aa jao bacho.


Aur itna bol ke main tezi se move hua aur wo charo bhi meri taraf bhaage lekin wo log still hindi film ke jaise ek ek kar ke aa rahe they kyuki ek to wo balcony ki chaudayi kam thi aur un bando mein koi cordination nahi tha.


Isliye pehle ek aaya usne mukka marna chaha mere muh pe ( ek to ye lawde muh pe hi kyu maarte hai) lekin main niche jhuka usko kamar se pakda aur ghuma ke zameen pe patak diya uska sir zameen mein baza aur wo wahi dher. main khada ho pata usse pehle teesre ne mujhe laat marni chahi lekin maine jhuke-2 uski laat pakdi aur apni taraf khicha lekin wo thoda heavy tha isliye nahi khicha ek hath se isliye maine usey dhaka de diya wo niche gira ab main uski taraf badha hi tha ki mujhe mere piche kuch mehsoos hua aur main ek dum se niche jhuk gaya aur ek danda thik mere sir ke upper se nikal gaya mein seconds mein palta aur piche dekha to ratan khada tha is time wo pagal to nahi tha for sure.



Abhay ko pata nahi kya sujha usne meri taraf ek knife fek diya, maine usey catch kiya aur apna hath piche le jaake piche se aate huye aadmi ke seene ke bicho bich ghop diya aur wo piche ko dhadam se gira aur knife mere hath mein reh gaya par usse khoon abhi bhi tapak raha tha. Ye scene dekh ke waha khadi sabhi ladies ki chikh nikal ( ruk jao abhi to khel suru hua, bina lund ke gaand fadunga tumhari)



Wo ratan bhi chaar kadam piche hua ye scene dekhke lekin main thoda sa aage bhada aur diwar pe ek pair rakhe ke piche jump maari aur piche se aate huye dono bando ke thobde pe kick di jisse wo dono side ko girey. Maine ek ka hath pakda aur usey khich ke khada kiya aur wo khada bhi hua lekin bich mein doosre hath se knife laa diya maine aur wo ghusa uski garden mein.


Wo abhi bhi jhuka hua tha kyuki ek hath pakda tha maine, mujhe knife nikalna tha isliye maine uski body pe maari laat aur wo us Thakur ke pairo mein gir gaya. Aur wo 5wa banda bhi utha uski fatti padi thi lekin ladna to tha hi usey isliye wo aage badha aur fir wo lawdo jaise muh pe mukka maarna chaha lekin is baar mein niche nahi jhuka balki uska hath pakad liya, uska hath kaamp raha tha aur fir wohi kampan uske body mein bhi hone lag gayi, uske aankho se aansoo aa gaye jaise wo bheekh maang raha ho jinda rehne ki aur ye sab dekh ke mujhe hasi aa gayi aur maine wo knife uske chest ke center mein dala aur khich ke niche ki taraf sarka diya.



Baaki ki tarah uski chikh bhi nahi nikli aur wo bhi piche ki taraf gir gaya. Ab maine pehle thakur family ko ghura jo mere samne khadi thi, wo log dare huye they main piche palta to dekha ratan aur kiran ek doosre ka hath pakad ke kaamp rahe they aur waise bhi victim to wo hi hai to main unki taraf badh gaya lekin fir 10 log aur bhagke us balcony mein aaye. Main bhi inka hi wait kar raha tha kyuki maana raat ko kam bande honge haweli pe lekin 5 itne kam nhi ab kariban 10 bande they to samjh gaya ki bas ye hi hai ab jo hai. Aur yaha se chikhne chillane ki awaz bhi koi nahi sunega kyuki is haweli ke aaspaas koi ghar nahi hai.



Maine abhay ko taraf dekha to wo samjh gaya kya karna hai, itne wo 10 aadmi meri taraf badhe lekin jaise hi unhone abhay ko cross kiya abhay ne piche se do bando ka gala pakda aur piche ki taraf khich ke patak diya aur pass pada danda utha ke pehle wale ke sir pe diya aur doosra wala khada ho pata usse pehle uske thobde pe ek laat di aur fir wo danda diya uske sir pe. Aur fir piche se un bache huye ki taraf ho liya, idhar abhay ne 2 bando ko khatam kiya itne mein wo sab bhi mere paas pahuch gaye lekin ab khelne ka mood bilkul bhi nahi tha mera, isliye main bhi unki taraf badha aur pehle wale ne mukka maara main niche jhuk ke aage nikal gaya aur doosre bande ke thighs mein pura knife ghop diya aur jhatke se nikal ke teesre bande ke gale mein aur fir chothe bande ke ando pe laat maari aur wo jhuka aur jhukte hi uski khopdi mein laat di itne mein wo pehla banda palat ke wapis aaya lekin maine bina uski taraf mudde wo knife uski garden mein daal diya hath ghuma ke. Ab maine dekha ki bas 4 bande hi pairo pe khade hai baki sab ya to mar gaye ya tadap rahe hai dard mein. Aur ye charo ko Maine itni jaldi maara tha ki sab ki gaand chok kha gayi mere reflexes aur speed dekh ke.



Ab un 4ro ki bhi gaand fat chuki thi unhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki mujhpe dhyan de ya abhay pe lekin main aur abhay nahi rukey hum dono aage badhe lekin unme se ek kuch jada hi bokhla gaya aur wo meri taraf bhaga chillate huye, maine wo knife fek ke maara jo sidha uski gale mein ghus gaya, aur ye dekh ke un teeno ka dhyan is taraf huya itne mein abhay ne piche se do bando ke gale mein danda fasa ke dabane lag gaya aur wo fadfadane.



Ab ye scene dekh ke wo aakhiri banda ghutno pe aa gaya aur hath jod ke rone laga ki usey chod, wo kuch nahi karega blah-blah.


Main:- ek shart pe chod dunga tujhe.


Wo:- manjoor hai.


Main:- is ratan ko maar de?


Aur maine wo knife uski taraf fek diya jo usne jhatt se utha liya.


Wo:- pakka chod doge na.


Main:- dimag ghumayega to teri gaand mein ye rampuri daal ke ghuma dunga.


Wo to jaise khus ho gaya


Wo:- ratan sahab maaf kar do, humey apni jaan pyari hai.


Ratan:- tune hamara namak khaya hai.


Main:- ooo bhsdk jada dialouge na maar, marja isse nahi to main maarne laga na to yahi narak ke darshan ho jayenge.


Itne wo Thakur aage aaya aur mere pairo mein gir gaya aur uske piche piche baaki family bhi, itne mein ratan ki chikh sunayi di aur sabne uski taraf dekh to wo niche pada fadfada raha tha. Sari Thakur family ke aankho mein aansoo aa gaye.


Thakur:- beta humey maaf kar do humse galti ho gayi.


Main:- galti to tumse huyi hai aur main aise hi maaf nahi kar dunga, mujhe keemat chahiye iski.


Thakur:- kitni.


Main:- 25 crore aur 4 automatic pistols with mags and ammo aur teri ye beti kiran.


Thakur:- bhagwan ke khatir chod do, paisa beshak doogna le lo.


Main:- sun budhau ab deal mein change aa gaya paisa 50cr ho gaya hai baaki same .


Ritesh:- humey manjoor hai.


Main:- to jaao aur jaldi se karo jugaad, aur ek cheez to reh gayi, wo black Fortuner aur le jaaunga main.


Wo ritesh samajhdaar laga mujhe usne apni family ko bachana jada important samjha aur waise bhi main inhe to nahi maarta. Wo ritesh jaane laga to maine abhay ko uske sath bhej diya aur kiran ki taraf mud gaya, wo samajh gayi ki wo marne wali hai isliye wo rone lagi lekin main jaise hi uske paas pahucha to manisha mere samne aa gayi aur rote huye naa mein garden hillane lagi.


Main:- nahi marunga isey, lekin kuch baat karni hai mujhe isse.


Manisha ne haa mein mundi hillayi aur aage se hatt gayi, Maine kiran ka hath pakda aur usey uske room mein leke gaya aur bahar se darwaza band kiya.


Kiran:- please mat maaro mujhe,


Main:- dekh pehle ek cheez clear kar du ki tu mujhe koi pyar wyar nahi karti tu bas apni hawas mitane mujhe yaha laayi hai.


Kiran kuch na boli bas niche dekh ke subakne lagi


Main:- tujhe jinda chod dunga lekin badle mein mere liye kaam karna hoga tujhe marte dum tak.


Kiran:- mujhe manjoor hai.


Main:- then pack your bags.


Main bahar aaya room se to wo ratan mar chuka tha aur wo aadmi bhaag chuka tha, abhay ne bhi ek bag aur ek suitcase le rakha tha.


Main:- manisha apna saman pack karo.


Aur wo jaise hi gayi main gaya thakur ke samne aur ghuma ke punch diya uske thobde pe.


Main:- ye tha mujhe utha ke yaha laane ke liye. Aur sun us rajpoot ko ya jo bhi hai wo usey ache se samjha diyo ki, wo aur tu mere piche na aaye nahi to aisi halat kar dunga ki tu aur wo rajpoot redlight area mein bhikh maangoge aur plan banao to aisa banana ki main mar jau, kyuki main jinda bacha to tum logo ko marne nahi dunga, jinda rakhke hi itna dard dunga ki tum din raat maroge.


Aur ye bolke main apne room mein aaya aur nahaya kyuki khoon lag rakha tha, main bahar aaya aur wo pajama t-shirt utar ke khud ke kapde pehene aur pehnte hi bed pe gir gaya aur behosh.


Meri aankh khuli to maine ek rahat ki saas li lekin samne abhay baitha tha aur uske paas ek bag tha aur ek suitcase. Actually mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha ki kya kaand kiya hai maine aur ye baat abhay ko bhi pata thi isliye usne mujhe sab kuch bataya aur uski baate sunke mujhe shock laga kyuki kiran ko kyu chod diya usne aur apne sath le jaa raha hai. Lekin thodi tassali bhi thi ki usne family ko chod diya.


Main:- bc ye guns ka kya karenge humey to chalani nahi aati.


Abhay:- tujhe nahi aati to kya hua usey to aati hai na.


Main:- usey sab kuch aata hai par wo itni aasani se kyu gaya.


Abhay:- uska kaam khatam to gaya aur wo tere jaisa backchod to hai nahi.


Main:- waise jo bhi ho thakur ki gaand faad di :D


Abhay:- abey thakur ki chod usne meri bhi faad hi di thi.


Main:- chal acha hai ab yaha se to nikale.


Abhay:- ab MLA ka kya karna hai.


Main:- abey maa chudaye MLA humey paise mil gaye humey kya chahiye kyu uske piche time waste kiya.


Abhay:- to ab kya karna hai.


Main:- ab Delhi settle honge lekin pehle school se documents laane honge.


Abhay:- yaar MLA ko tapka dete hai tera drugs bhi mil jayega aur wo baad mein dikkat bhi nahi dega.


Main:- chal to fir tapka hi dete hai isey bhi.


Aur fir hum kuch aur baat karte usse pehle kiran aur manisha aa gayi bag leke hum chaaro niche aaye us ritesh ne mujhe keys di car ki aur hum sab ne bag usme dala aur main aaya driving seat pe aur abhay mere bagal mein, manisha aur kiran piche ki seat pe baithe. Maine location set ki delhi ki aur hum nikal pade apni manzil ki aur.






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Bhai ghadar macha diya lekin zara ek baat bataye saale itne bade dabang thakur aur kisi ne itni maar kaat dekh kar ek goli tak nahi chalaye yah baat hazam na hoyi. Jonlog firoti me guns de de unke pass khud guns nahi hogi aur inhone is maar kaat pe aur apne baccho ke marne pe koi goli nahi chalaye.
Ab dekhna hain ki jo kaam kiran aur AK ke beech reh gaya thaa kia woh aage pura hoga ya nahi.
 

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UPDATE:-21 (It's AK :roll: )



Maine abhay ke liye aa rahe khayalo ko dimag se jhatka aur car ko us jungle ki taraf badha diya jo ki ek ghante ki duri pe tha lekin main aram se jaa raha tha kuch sochte huye, khair ek jungle aaya aur maine car ko us jungle mein utar diya ek kache raste pe aur thodi dur jaane ke baad wo kacha rasta bhi khatam ho gaya matlab ab paidal jana tha.


Hum teeno car se utre aur us aadmi ki maine guddi pakdi aur apne aage leke chalne laga, thodi dur pagdandi pe chalne ke baad hum ek khandar mein pahuche aur us khandar mein ghusne ke baad bhi humne ek room ka gate khola jaha do kankal pade huye they aur ek kankal to katta hua pada tha. Aur waha bhayanak badbu aa rahi thi.


Us aadmi ki to gaand fat gayi ander ka haal dekhte hi.


Aadmi:- mujhe chod do main sab bata dunga.


Main:- wo to tu batayega hi lekin main tujhe ek dardnaak maut dena chahta hu bhut hi dardnaak, teri rooh tak kaamp jayegi, ab tu sochega ki tune to kuch kiya hi nahi to itni buri maut kyu? To sun beta meri marzi.


AbhaY:- abey uski gaand mat faad let me deal with him.


Main:- lekin main usey maarna chahta hu aur mera mann kar raha hai.


Abhay ne kuch nahi bola bas apni gun us aadmi ki khopdi pe taani.


Aadmi:- sahab wo is waqt MLA sahab ki band padi factory mein milega 5 admiyo ke sath.


Main:- jisey log bhootiya factory bolte hai.


Aadmi:- haa sahab


Aur uske itna bolte hi uski khopdi mein abhay ne bullet utar di aur uski khopdi tarbooz ki tarah khil gayi jiske chitte mujhpe bhi pade.


Main:-Ewww lawda.


Abhay:- chal dharte hai Rajesh ko.


Main:- plan to bana le lawde.


Abhay:- sun factory hai sunsaan area mein aur waha bas 5 aadmi honge aur main baat mein gun use karunga, tu bas dekhta jaiyo.


Main:- aur postmortem mein bullets ka pata laga to.


Abhay:- nahi lagega, black mein unregistered bullets hai saari.


Main:- okk! Then lets hunt him.


Abhay kuch nahi bola bas waha se chal diya, main bhi muskuraya aur us niche padi deady body pe laat maari jo kamre mein ho gayi maine gate band kiya aur ciggrete jalake.


Muh mein daali aur chal diya bhaar ki taraf. Main thoda nervous tha aaj kyuki bc bina plan ke aise ghusna mujhe theek nahi lag raha tha lekin koi nahi dekhte hai.


Main car ke paas aaya to abhay already baitha hua tha maine bhi bina kuch bole driving seat pe baith gaya aur car start kar ke pel di full speed mein like crazy speed wo bhi kache raste mein. Abhay ki bhi gaand fat gayi aur wo tight hoke baith gaya.


Abhay:- abey lawde pagal hai kya aram se chala na.


Main:- kyu fati gand ab?


Iske baad maine car normal ki meri normal speed bhi 90-100 jaa rahi thi.


2 ghante baad hum dono us factory ke thodi der pehle utre aur waha se paidal ho liye. Is waqt andhera ho chuka tha.


Maine apni gun nikali usey reload ki aur aage badh gaya.


Abhay:- tu gun use karega.


Main:- haa soch raha hu kar lu try, aise hi chalani aa jayegi.


Abhay:- sahi hai bc.


Hum dono baat karte huye us factory ke paas pahuche.


Abhay:- sun mujhe lead karne de ye wala


Main:- okk babe.


Abhay mujhe factory ke piche leke aaya aur waha se ek lakdi ki siddi se upper chadhe aur window se kud ke ander aaye aur ander aate hi 2 logo ne humpe gun taani aur unke gun taante hi abhay ne ek maathe me goli maari aur doore ke ando pe laat maari jisse usey gaand faad dard huye itne mein abhay ko time mil gaya aur usne uski bhi khopdi khol di.


I must say abhay is fast bhenchod, abhay ne meri taraf dekha aur smile di, ab saaf tha ki bas 4 bande bache hai jinme se ek rajesh hai lekin wo log jaan gaye honge gun ki awaz se ki koi aa gaya hai. Aur factory mein andhera tha to kuch saaf saaf nahi dikh raha tha.


Khair abhay aage badha aur main uske piche piche tabhi mujhe ek bullet ki sound aayi aur ek banda dham se niche gira, bhenchod mujhe dikh bhi nahi raha tha aur ye abhay pele jaa raha tha.


Khair abhi do bande aur Rajesh bacha tha bas,
Ab main abhay ke sath hi chal raha tha aur hum niche wale floor pe aaye aur abhay ne sidiyo se utrte hi bina dekhe right side mein hath karke fire kiya aur dham se body giri niche.


Main:- bhenchod ye kaise kiya tune?


Abhay:- sound sense! Arey wo raha ek aur.

abhay bhut tez bhaga samne mujhe kuch clear dikh nahi raha tha aur thodi der mein waha ki light on huyi to waha hall mein rajesh khada tha usne abhay ke galle pe ek knife laga rakha tha aur abhay ki pistol apne doosre hath mein pakad rakhi thi.


Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya ki ye kaise ho gaya, abhay ko aise kaise pakad liya, Tabhi wo aakhri banda hall mein aaya, sayad isi ne light on ki thi lekin wo hall mein aaya hi tha ki us rajesh ne khud usey goli maar di.


Rajesh:- ooo sun chokre aage na badhiyo nahi to tere dost ka gala kaat dunga.


Lekin maine apni gun uspe taan di aur uski taraf badhne laga.


Rajesh:- dekh aage mat badh main isey maar dunga.


Main:- maar de.


Rajesh:- abey tera dost hai wo.


Main:- lawda mera,


aur ek bullet nikli gun se aur sidha us rajesh ke sir mein aur wo piche ko girne laga lekin itne mein abhay ne uske hath se apni gun li aur mujhpe taan di, main bhi uske bilkul kareeb pahuch chuka tha aur meri gun uske sir pe aur uski gun mere sir pe thi aur dono hi muskura rahe they.


Abhay:- nishana lagana kaha se sikha.


Main:- batana jaroori nahi samjhta.


Abhay:- to ho jaye 1v1 fight aaj, and i promise i will kill you very badly.


Main:- maar to tu pehle bhi sakta tha moke bhi bhut they fir kyu nahi maara.


Abhay:- kyuki agar tu us waar se bach jaata to tu mujhe nahi chodta.


Main:- chalo pata to hai mere baare mein.


Abhay:- waise tujhe kaise pata laga, us randi kiran ne muh khol diya hoga.


Main:- beta tu beshak fight mere se 1% aage ho lekin dimag mein tu mera 1% bhi nahi hai. Tujhe kya laga Kiran tum logo ke sath mili huyi hai, ajji lund mera, tujhe kya laga AK ko kidnap kar lenge, ajji lund mera, tujhe kya laga tu is rajesh ke sath milke mujhe maar dega aur MLA ko dhoka deke aur sab paise leke ud jaoge yaha se, ajji lund mera.


Abhay ki aankhe badi ho gayi kyuki maine uska plan pura khol ke rakh diya tha.


Abhay:- How ? Kaise?


Main:- chal tere ko suspense mein nahi marunga.


Abhay:- marega tu.


Main:- okk dekhte hai ab sun, sun jab tu yaha aaya to mujhe tu thoda awkward sa laga pehle wala abhay nahi laga jo ki mujhe normal nahi laga lekin fir maine socha chodo hogi koi baat, lekin ek din main raat ko mutne ke liye utha aur tu kisi se phone pe baat kar raha tha ki AK ko maar denge aur fir MLA ko maar denge aur fir saare paise leke desh chod denge, lekin mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki tu kisse baat kar raha hai, aur aise hi mujhe kiran pe pehle hi din shakk ho gaya tha matlab wo noob thi bilkul noob she don't know about anything ek din usey lapete mein liya aur usey Patti padhayi ki mera sath de tab usne mujhe bataya ki uske baap thakur aur MLA ne mil ke mujhe kidnap karke waha leke jaane ka plan banaya jisme tu unka sath dega aur usne bataya ki tune unhe manisha k baare mein bataya aur manisha ko uthwa diya aur uske pariwar ko marwa diya aur usey bola ki usey shadi karne ke liye uthaya hai, pehle to main kidnap nahi hota lekin manisha ko waha se nikalana tha isliye kidnap hua main, nahi to wo lawde mujhe kidnap kar lete kya ajji lund mera, aur tu saale noob tujhe kya laga wo bahar aa gaya hai waha, bhsdk wo waha bahar aa jaata na to un bando ke sath sath pure thakur family ko maar deta aur sath mein tujhe bhi aur manisha ko bhi aur wo koi deal nahi karta paiso ki, sab acting thi beta lekin is plan mein kiran ko shamil nahi kiya maine isliye wo dar rahi thi itna, aur maine isiliye uske bete raman ko nahi maara kyuki mujhe kisi thakur ke khoon se hath nahi rangne they mujhe wo to bas tujhe darane ke liye acting ki thi aur aaj tera mood kharab pata hai kyu tha kyuki main waha se jinda bach gaya aur kiran ne tera sath dene se mana kar diya tha Delhi mein aur isliye tune rajesh ko phone milaya aur uske sath milke ek quick plan banaya usey city entrance pe dikhne ke liye bola taaki tu mujhe aaj hi maar sake, abey lawde pagal lagta hu kya tujhe jo kuch bhi maan lunga, kyuki rajesh aise open mein ghoom hi nahi sakta aur wo bhi tab jab usey pata hai ki uski jaan khatre mein hai, aur wo bhi hamare jaate hi goli ho gaya, lekin yaha tak to theek tha tune us khander mein us bande ke khopdi mein goli maarke mujhe darana chaha aur fir factory mein andha push karne ke liye bola, piche lakdi ki siddi kon rakhta hai wo bhi band factory mein aur fir window se chadte hi tune 10 second mein un dono bando ko maar diya matlab tujhe pata hai ki bande kaha hai air ye bande bhi MLA ke they to no problem aur waise bhi tera aur rajesh ka plan MLA ko maar ke uske paise udane ka tha to uske bande marwane ke kiye tumne unhe aisi jagah pe khada kiya jo bhut achi thi lekin tujhe pehle se pata thi, aur mujhe maar ke tu manisha ko marta aur fir wi paise bhi le leta aur fir tune andhere mein ek aur ko maara aur fir sidhiyo mein ek ko bina dekhe maar diya aur bolta hai sound sense, bhsdk pubg khel raha hai kya aur fir wo lawda rajesh kya socha ki tujhpe gun taanne se main apni gun fek dunga.
Abey pagal lawde tere jaise londe bhut dekhe hai maine AK naam hai mera aise hi koi chutiya nahi bana sakta mujhe.



Abhay ek dum blank ho chuka tha usey process karne mein time lag raha tha kyuki jisey wo khud ka game samajh rahe they wo actual mein mera game tha, main inhe dikha raha tha ki ye log jeet rahe hai, ajii lawda AK se jitenge ye log.


Main:- ab bol bhsdk.


Abhay:- tu beshak tez hai lekin fight mein mujhse nahi Jeet paayega.


Mere face pe smile aa gayi Aur hum dono ne apni gun waha se thodi dur pe ek table pe rakhi aur aamne samne khade huye.


Main:- dekh tujhe lagta hai tu mujhse tez hai aur mujhe lagta hai tu mere barabar hai isliye aise to haar jeet muskil hai isliye jo un gun ke paas pehle pahuch ke doosre ko shoot kar dega ye maidan uska aur wo yaha ka khiladi.


Abhay:- manjoor hai.



Fir kya tha hum dono bhad gaye ek doosre ki taraf




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360 degree kahani mod di jo ki aapki stories me zadatar hota hain kahi se bhi kahi le aatey ho. Lekin solid gaand faad updaye hai. Maza aa gaya solid.
 

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UPDATE:-25 (New Turns)




Main jaldi se khada hua aur kapde badal ke gun ke pant mein daali kyuki kabhi bhi kaam aa sakti hai aur key uthake niche bhaga, niche manisha mil gayi.


Manisha:- kaha jaa rahe ho.


Main:- aake baat karta hu.


Manisha:- atleast bata do.


Main:- arey ek baar bola na aake baat karta hu, samajh nahi aata.


Ye baat maine bhut tez gusse mein boli thi aur manisha bhi itni tez awaz sun ke dar gayi aur chup ho gayi, mujhe bhi uspe chillana bura laga lekin abhi waqt nahi tha usey manane ka, isliye main bhaag ke bahar aaya aur bike start karke nikal gaya.


Main bhut tez bike chala raha tha matlab bhut tez aur isi karan mein bhut jaldi hospital pahucha aur bhaag ke reception pe pahucha.


Main:- hello! Baldev Chaudhary ki family konse room mein hain.


Receptionist:- 402.


Maine fir jada time waste na karte huye bhaga upper ki taraf bhenchod aise time pe lift bhi nahi mili isliye stairs se hi daud lagani padi aur bhaag ke 404 room ke saamne aaya aur jaise hi ander ghusa mere kadam apne aap ruk jiske 2 karan they.


Pehal to ye tha ki mere samne 3 laashe padi thi safed kapde mein lipti huyi. Aur doosra ye ki waha wo aurat khadi thi jisse main sabse jada nafrat karta hu. Lekin dadaji ne mujhe ander aane ka ishara kiya aur main dheere dheere unke paas pahucha aur waha rakhi teeno lasho mein se jo sabse choti laash thi uske chere par se wo kapda hataya to mereko pehli baar aisa laga ki meri aankho mein sachi wale aansoo aa rahe hai aur aisa ho bhi raha tha pata nahi kyu par meri aankho mein aansoo aa gaye lekin maine jaldi se apni aankhe pochi aur monu ke face pe hath fera, abhi bhi uske chere ki masoomiyat croro mein ek thi. Lekin is samay wo hamare bich mein nahi tha, mujhe mere baap aur apni sauteli maa ki maut ka jara sa bhi dukh nahi tha lekin monu ko dekh ke ander se kaleja fate jaa raha tha aur gussa bhi itna aa raha tha ki pucho mat.


Main:- kya hua inhe.


Dadaji:- ye log ghumne gaye they kal waha pe in teeno ko goli maar di gayi aaj subah inki laash baramad huyi hai aur maine tujhe bula liya.


Main kuch nahi bola kyuki kya bolu kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha, Itni der mein meri maa jisse mujhe nafrat wo mere paas aayi.


Maa:- beta.


Main:- dadaji is aurat ko kisne bulaya hai, isey boliye nikal jaaye yaha se.


Dadaji:- beta aaj aaj shaant ho jaa.


Main:- kyu shaant ho jaau ye aayi hi kyu hai chali gayi thi itne saal pehle mujhe chod ke to ab kya wo zhakam jo mujhe mile hai unpe namak chidakne aayi hai.


Maa:- beta mujhe maaf karde aur tu mere sath delhi chal, waha main, tu, tera bhai, teri behen aur tere papa sukh se rahenge.


Main to hang ho gaya ye sun ke ki isne shaadi karli doosri, lekin kar sakti hai isme main kuch nahi bol sakta kyuki zindagi mein aage badhne ka haq sabko hai..


Main:- kabhi nahi main akela hu aur akela hi rahunga, mujhe nahi chahiye koi family, now just get out.


Main meri maa pe chillaya to piche se ek bouncer type banda mujhe maarne aaya sayad meri maa ka bodyguard hoga, lagta hai ameer aadmi se shaadi kar li.


Khair wo bouncer mujhe maarne aaya aur meri maa usey mana karne lagi lekin wo sayad apni madam ko khush karna chahta tha ki wo kitna vafadaar hai.

Main bhi usko apni taraf aate huye dekh kar khada ho gaya kyuki bacha to hu nahi main ki uski body language na samjhu.

Aur wo mere jaise hi paas aaya main full khich ke uske ando pe laat maari, ye uske liye unexpected tha usey laga hoga ki wo mujhe thoda darayega dhamkayega aur main chupchap sun lunga, lekin ho gaya uska ulta kyuki it's AK :roll: .


Ando pe laat lagte hi wo jhuka aur jhukne se uska jo sir mere samne jhuk gaya tha uspe maine ghutna diya aur ghutna niche se maara tha isliye wo khada hua aur khade hote hi maine uski chahti main laat di jisse wo piche ki diwar se takra ke niche gira aur fir nahi utha .


Main:- aage se thoda acha banda lana.


Maa:- iski taraf se main maafi mangti hu aur tum please maan jaao beta main tumhare hath jodti hu.


Main kuch bolta usse pehle 3 police wale bhi us room mein enter huye.


Main us inspector ki wardi pe naam dekha jo ki suresh singh tha aur wo sakal se hi MLA ka paltu kutta lag raha tha.


Suresh:- aap sab log bahar jaao, inka Postmortam hoga.


Main:- wo to hum log chale jayenge, lekin ye kiya kisne hai.


Suresh:- aeee ladke tez awaz mein baat nahi karne ka.


Maa:- inspector tumhari himmat kaise huyi mere bete se aise baat karne ki.


Bhenchod ye kya family drama chal raha hai, yaha 3 log mar gaye hai aur ye log alag hi khichdi paka rahe hai.


Itne mein simran enter huyi bc iski hi kami thi aur sath mein vivek bhi ab mujhe itne log dekhke thodi ghutan si mehsoos hone lagi thi.


Lekin ab us inspector ki awaz aur bhi tez ho gayi .


Inspector:- sun be aurat tu jo koi bhi hai is tere bete ko itna maarunga ki agla pichla sab bhula dunga.


Meri maa ab bhi itni bholi hai ya nahi ye to pata nahi par wo us inspector se thoda dar gayi. Lekin mere dimag mein alag hi backchodi huyi maine simran ko apne paas bulaya aur chupke se apni gun nikal ke usko thama di aur us inspector ke samne jaa ke khada ho gaya.


Main:- waise aap ye sab chodo ye batao ki inhe kisne goli maari ya marwayi aur kyu?


Inspector:- wo sab hum dekh lenge humey tu hamara kaam mat sikha. Aur tujhe pata hai to tu bata de.


Main:- MLA ne marwaya hai inhe go and arrest him.


Us inspector ko pata nahi kya hua MLA ka naam sunke usne mere thobde pe punch diya ye mere liye bilkul unexpected tha isliye piche ho gaya lekin wo ek aur maarta isse pehle uske hawaldaaro ne usey pakad liya aur mujhe hathkadi pehna di, maine bhi haste huye pehen li kyuki mujhe pata tha ye 30 minute bhi ander nahi rakh paayega mujhe.


Maa:- inspector tum ye thik nahi kar rhe ho.


Inspector:- chup randi.


Ab waise to mujhe fark nahi padna chahiye lekin ye word sunke mujhe bhut ghussa aaya aur maine us inspector ki chahti mein laat maari aur fir kya hona tha un do hawaldaaro ne mujhe do do mukke maare aur bitha ke le gaye jeep mein.


Ab mere dimag mein sirf do baate chal rahi thi ki inko goli kisne maari aur uska jawab tha MLA ke admiyo ne. Aur doosri baat ye thi ki main ye baat prove kaise karu lekin prove karne se koi fayda nahi hai government hi uski hai aur ye saale mujhe hi na fasa de is case mein, kya karu? Kya karu? Lawda samajh nahi aa rha.


Itne mein police station aa gaya aur wo log mujhe station mein le gaye aur jaake lockup mein daal diya. Aur wo inspector mujhe ghoor ke bahar ko chal diya.


Hawaldar:- beta ab bhut pitega tu sir se.


Main:- abey jaa be pakka mat.


Maine usko ignore maara aur waha pathar ka baithne jaisa tha uspe baith gaya aur sochne laga ki kya karu, is time mera dimag kuch bhi nahi soch paa raha tha kyuki bhut saari cheez ek sath chal rahi thi jisme meri maa bhi shamil ho chuki thi. Jindagi bhi pata nahi kaisa khel khel rahi thi mere sath kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki aage kya karu.


Main apne khayalo se bahar aaya, jab wo inspector cell mein ghusa aur do hawaldaar bhi.


Main:- mujhe ek call karni hai.


Inspector:- nahi ho sakti abhi to remand hoga tera on duty police officer pe hath uthata hai. Bandho isey main sudharta hu.


Un dono hawaldaaro ne mujhe bandha aur bahar chale gaye.


Aur unke bahar jaate hi suresh ne mere thobde pe punch diya sach mein saale ka hath bhut bhari tha, bc abhi hospital se aaya hu ye fir bhej dega lekin main gun simran ko de di ye acha kiya kyuki mujhe pata tha ye inspector kuch chutiya harkat karega aur agar gun pakdi jaati to mere lode lag jaate.


Main apne dimagi khayalo se bahar aaya jab us suresh ne meri ribs pe mukke maarna suru kar diye aur fir doobara face pe.


Mujhe ab bhut dard ho raha tha kyuki wo bhut der se pit raha tha mujhe.


Main:- bhheenn ke lawwwdee faccce pee maatt maarr.


Wo gali sunke aur bawla ho gaya aur paas mein pada danda uthake mere ghutne ke piche wali side diya, aur main gaandfaad chillaya kyuki bhut tez dard hua tha lekin wo aage aur maarta isse pehle ek hawaldaar bhaga hua aaya aur us suresh ke kaan mein kuch bola jisey sunke suresh ne wo danda wahi feka aur bahar ho gaya cell se.


Main abhi bhi us dande se bandha hua tha apne dono hatho ke sahare latak sa raha tha kyuki mere pairo mein bilkul bhi jaan nahi thi khade hone ki aur is jallad ne bhut maara tha bhenchod gaand todunga iski bhi.


Tabhi police station mein do log enter huye jinhe dekh ke mujhe double shock laga kyuki ek to meri maa thi aur doosre shaks ko dekhke bas ek khayal aaya ki ye yaha kya kar raha hai aur iska meri maa ke sath kya wasta lekin wo shaks to wahi ruk gaya aur meri maa mujhe dekhte hi mere paas aayi aur chilla ke boli.


Maa:- hath kholo iske..


Do hawaldaar bhaag ke aaye aur mere hath khole lekin hath khulte hi main niche gir gaya aur meri maa ne mere sir ko apni gaud mein rakh liya aur meri aankho mein naa chahte huye bhi aansoo aa gaye aur bachpan ke wo pal jab main apni maa ki gaud mein sir rakh ke sota tha lekin main jada soch na paaya kyuki cell ke bahar wo shaks khada hoke police walo pe chilla raha tha isliye main bhi unki baate dhyan se sunne laga.


Ohh shit batana to bhul hi gaya ye banda raaj hai aur isiliye mujhe aur jada hairani ho rahi thi aur khusi bhi kyuki meri maa ko jo nujhe apne sath rakhne ka bhoot chadha hai wo raaj hi tod dega kyuki usey mere baare mein pata hai ki main ek drug addict hu aur wo ek aise insaan ko apne ghar mein kyu rakhega. Again in logo ne meri soch mein rukawat daal di apni unchi awaz se.

Raaj:- ye case ab tum police walo ka nahi hai, ye case ab CBI dekhegi aur inspector tum apni aukaat bhul rahe ho..


Suresh:- sorry sir galti ho gayi aage se nahi hoga. Lekin case to hamare paas rehne dijiye.


Raj:- bas postmortem ki report aane do aur fir un teeno ke katilo ko aur uske piche jo shaks hai uski laash milegi 24 ghante ander-2.


Us suresh ka face safed ho gaya aur wo salute karke nikal gaya. Wait a second ab mujhe yaad aaya maine raaj ko kaha dekha hai, newspaper mein maine iska interview padh tha kamal ka banda hai ye aur isne bhut ache-2 kaam bhi kiye hai.


Raj ander aaya aur meri maa ko bahar bhej diya aur mere paas baith ke bola


Raj:- tu tension mat le main dekh lunga unhe.


Main:- nahhhii ussseeyyy maaiiinnn hhiiii maarruuunggaa.


Raj:- halat nahi hai abhi teri aur mujhe pata hai tu kitna bada chupa Rustom bana firta hai tere sare murders ka pata hai mujhe, tere pe har second nazar rehti hai meri. Kaise kaise tune logo ko maara hai.


Main to bhenchod shock hi ho gaya inhe itna sab kaise pata aur mere expression dekh ke wo samajh gaye.


Raj:- dimag pe jor na daal ek hafte baad full recover hoke CBI office aa jaiyo.


Main haa mein mundi hillayi aur fir pata nahi kya hua kyuki main behosh ho chuka tha energy nahi bachi thi body mein bilkul bhi.





TO BE CONTINUED ??

O behanchod jhatkay pe jhatkey kabhi banda date pe se kidnap to kabhi best friend ka murder aur ab Raj ka bheja fry entry. Lode laga diye dimagh ke ab yah haal hai to jab story end ke kareeb jaayegi tab tam to sarey nut bolt khul jaa ge dimagh ke. Thoda halka haat rakho bade bhai.
Maza aa gaya kasam se. Bus thoda halke shock waves chalao.
 
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