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CHARACTERS OF STORY
Hero of story
V~KEY
SANDEEP (SUNNY)
Both are ex cobra units of army.
Aslam chicha
Shakil
Almaas:- Dead
Teno Mechanics he.
Aarti:- Doctor he
Khushali
sonu
Akshay
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Fantasy NATION OF DEAD (ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE)
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Hero of story
V~KEY
SANDEEP (SUNNY)
Both are ex cobra units of army.
Aslam chicha
Shakil
Almaas:- Dead
Teno Mechanics he.
Aarti:- Doctor he
Khushali
sonu
Akshay
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Jb jivan me kabhi gathjod kiya nhi to kholna kaha se aayega ab 3 log hai to combination bna kr kr sakte the pr nhi, ek dusre ki rassi kholne ke liye aage pichhe Khada hona padta hai or dekhne ke liye apne 3rd sathi ko unke hatho ko dekhne or instructions dene ko kahna chahiye tha, pr ye baat inke dimag me kaha se aayegi...Update:13
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Hum logo ko chalte karib ek ghanta upar ho gaya tha aur pyaas bhi lagi thi hum ko to hum ne vahi ek break liya pani piya aur aage ki taraf nikal gaye.
Hum road ke side jo jadiya thi vahi se hote huye ja rahe the.Dhup bohat tez thi agar dhup mein rehke chalenge to pyaas aur jyada lage gi isliye hum ped ki chaav mein chal rahe the.
Map ko dekhte dekhte chal rahe the hum.Itna chal ne ke baad bhi hum ko koi petrol pump nahi dikha agar dikhta to hum wapas jake khali drum mein bhar gadi se nikal jaate par phooti kismat hamari na to koi gadi dekhi na hi Petrol pump.
Hume chalte chalte shaam ho gayi thi aur hamara paani bhi ab khatam hone ko tha.
Humne thodi der vaha baith ne ka faisla kiya aur vahi bags rakh ke baith gaye hum.
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Vahi dusri taraf…..
Khushhali Akshay aur sonu abhi bhi bandhe huye the.
Khushhali:- Kuch socha kisi ne ki hum yaha se kaise nikale.
Akshay:- sochna kya hai isme ek baar hamare hath khul jaaye phir kuch na kuch tarkib nikal ke yaha se bach ke nikal jayenge.
Khushhali:- Haath hi to nahi khul pa rahe hai.
Sonu:- Main try karta hu Akshay ke hath khol ne ka.
Sonu ye bol apne hath jo pichhe rassi se bandhe huye the usse Akshay ke hath khol ne ka prayas karta hai par asafal ho jata hai.Sonu phir se lag jata hai Akshay ki rassi kholne mein par usko asafal ta hi hath lagti hai.
Sonu thak jata hai aur Akshay se bolta hai
Sonu:- bohat prayaas kiya rassi kholne ka par nahi khol paya ek baar tu try karke dekh.
Akshay sonu ki baat sun sonu ki rassi kholne ka try karta hai par vo bhi nahi khol pata.
Akshay ab khushali ka hath khol ne ka try karta hai par khol nahi pata.Aise 3 no ek dusre ki rassi kholne ki ji jaan se prayaas kar rahe the taki is nark numa jagah se nikal sake.
Kuch der baad thak jaane se vo rassi ko aise hi chod dete hai.Unki jo ek umeed thi yaha se zinda bach ke nikal ne ki us umeed pe bhi pani fir gaya tha.
Subah se leke shaam tak pani aur khana na lene se unme itni takat bhi nahi thi ab ki vo kuch aur kar sake.
Ek ghante baad Aadmi 1 aata hai unke kamre mein aur unke paas aake unke haath check karta hai ye dekh ne ke liye ki unke hath bandhe huye hai ki nahi.Sab sahi hone pe wo shaksh unke kamre se bahar nikal ke kamre ka darwaza bandh kar deta hai.
Vo Aadmi dusre room mein jaake sab ke hath check karke darwaza bandh karte chala jata hai.sab kamre check aur bandh karne ke baad vo apne sathiyon ke paas chala jata hai.
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Hum thodi der baith ne ke baad khade huye aur chalne lage kyunki kotda abhi bhi dur tha kitna dur tha pata nahi Kyunki map mein KMs nahi likhe hote hai.
Sunny:- Vkey pani ka kuch intezaam karna padega bhai kyunki ab khatam ho gaya hai paani bhai.
Sunny ye chalte chalte baat kar raha tha.
Main:- Bhai nadi to yaha se bohat dur hai agar koi ghar ya shop jaisa mil jaye to vaha check karenge tab tak sirf chalte raho Kyunki kotda abhi bhi dur hai.kotda se hote huye Ahmedabad jayenge vaha sabarmati nadi hai.
Aarti:- Agar nadi ke paas pohach gaye to phir hamare survival ke chances bohat ziyada ho jayenge.Sirf khane ka tension hoga.
Main:- Khane ka kiya tension nadi hai to vaha machli (fish) bhi hogi hi aur dusre janwar bhi honge hi isliye ek baar nadi ke paas pohach jaaye to phir tension hi nahi hai.
Aslam:- Utna kaise chalenge hum hume gadi ka bandobast karna padega varna vaha pohch ne se pehle hi hum bhukh aur pyaas se mar jayenge.
Shakil bola jo kab se hamari baat sun raha tha
Shakil:- Are chacha Vkey aur Sunny bhai haina phir hume kiya tension.Mujhe pura yakin hai Vkey aur Sunny bhai pe ki vo kuch na kuch jugad kar hi lenge.
Uski baat sun maine Sunny ki taraf dekha aur bola
Main:- Dekh shakil aankh mund ke tu kisi pe bhi bharosa karega to tu jaan gawa baithe ga samja.Kudki safety khud karna sikh shakil DUNIYA MADERCHODO THI,HAI AUR RAHEGI.
Mujhpe Sunny Aarti aur Aslam ChaCha pe tu bharosa kar sakta hai par dusre kisi bhi insaan pe bharosa mat karna varna tu lot ke wapas nahi aayega hamare paas.
Shakil:- Ji bhai dhiyan rakhunga.
Aslam:- Vkey tune ye bat sahi boli ke kisi pe bhi bharosa nahi kar sakte is mahol mein par mujhe itna to yakeen ho gaya hai ki jab tak main Shakil Aarti tumhare aur Sunny ke sath hai tab tak hum safe hai.Tum dono hum ko bachane ke liye kisi bhi had tak ja sakte ho.
Main:- kasam se chacha agar mujhe in 3 4 dino mein khana nahi mila na to main aapko hi mar ke khaunga likh ke lelo. Mujhpe bohat bharosa haina aapko
Aslam chacha ne apni lath aage karte huye kaha
Aslam:- Ye lath dekhi hai is se hi tujhe kut dunga yahi ke yahi phir yaha tujhe zombies khayenge samja
Main:- Are chicha aap to bura maan gaye mein to mazak kar raha tha.
Ye bol maine chicha ko gale laga liya to chicha muskura ke bole
Aslam:- Ab chod jiyada drama karne ki jarurat nahi hai.
Unki baat sun main unse alag ho gaya aur hum aage badh ne lage.
Hum chalte chalte 3 ghante upar ho gaye the aur raat bhi ho gayi thi jab time dekha to 9 baj ne mein 10 min baki the.
Hum ne thodi der break lene ka socha aur hum vaha aas paas achi jagah dekh baith gaye kuch der ke liye.Pani to already khatam ho chuka tha isliye pine ke liye sirf maire paas beer ki 4 botale bachi thi to maine 4 botal nikali bag maise aur sunny ko ek di Aslam chacha ko di to unhone mana kar ke bole
Aslam:- Hamare Mazhab mein isko haram mante hai….
Main:- Koi baat nahi chacha,shakil tu piyega ki nahi
Shakil:- Nahi bhai mar jaunga par mazhab na todunga.
Main:- jaise teri marzi bhai, Aarti tu le gi kiya
Aarti:- ha la de mujhe itni bhayanak pyaas lagi hai ki puch mat.
Maine ek beer ki bottle usko di aur maine Sunny aur aarti ne beer ki bottle khatam karke vapas chal ne lage ab hume paani ka aur rat katne ke liye ek achhi jagah ki talash thi isliye sab apni nazar aas paas ghumaye chal rahe the……
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Vahi sunny and party apas me combination bna kr chalte hai or ek dusre se salah masavra lete hai Jo ki survival ka ek or point hai... To pyas mitane ke liye bear ka istemal kiya hai badhiya hai abhi ke liye pr baad me pyas jyada lagne lagegi...
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Ise kahte hai kismat khushali, sonu or akshay ye tino yha marne ki pratiksha kr rhe the ki sunny, vkey and group vha raat gujare ka yhikana dhundhte huye pahuch gye, ab baat aai hai bchane ki to sabhi se slah bhi lena jaruri hai kya pta kya ho agle hi pal, sabhi ne unko bchane ka kaha hai dekhte hai kaise bachate hai Apne bichde member or baki ki familys ko... Jabardast update bhai sandar beautifulUpdate:-14
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Vahi dusri taraf………
Shaam se rat hone ko thi par khushali Akshay aur sonu ko yaha se bhaag ne ka koi tarika nahi mil raha tha.
Kamre mein sirf ek window thi jisse unko samay ke bare mein pata chal raha tha yadi Akshay khushali aur sonu Akshay ke kamre mein bandhe huye hote to unko samay ka bhi pata na chalta kyunki na to khidki aur na hi roshandan tha Akshay ke kamre mein.
Khushhali:- Mujhe pyaas lagi hai sonu.
Sonu:- Pyaas to mujhe bhi lagi hai par hum kuch nahi kar sakte.
Akshay:- Mera to tum logo se aur bhi bura haal hai bhook aur pyaas se.
Kuch der baat karne baad unko khana banane ki smell aati hai.
Akshay bolta hai sonu aur khushhali se
Akshay:- ye hamara saman loot ke khud kha rahe hai.
Sonu:- Tujhe khane ki padi hai mujhe ye tension hai ki hum yaha se zinda nikal payenge ya phir yahi tadap tadap ke marenge.
Khushhali:- main yaha aise bilkul bhi marna nahi chahti.
Akshay:- Hum thodi marna chahte hai.mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki shayad dusre log bhi hai dusre dusre kamre mein Kyunki vo aadmi ke yaha se nikal jaane ke baad dusre kamre ke darwaje bandh kar ne ki aawaj aai thi mujhe.
Sonu:- Ab tak to sirf ye log 2 hi dikhe hai pata nahi unlogo ka kitne aadmiyon ka group hoga.
Khushhali:- shayad 2 hi aadmi honge aur Darwaze bandh hone ki aawaz maine bhi suni thi shayad aur bhi log fase honge hamari tarah.
Sonu:- Shayad unhe bachane ke liye koi aaye aur hume bhi yaha se nikal de.Humara Group to already mar chuka hai.
Khushali:- Ab to raat bhi ho gayi hai ab bhagwaan hi hame bacha sakta he aur is nark se hume nikal sakta hai.
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Hum chalte hi ja rahe the kisi achi jagah ki talash mein Kyunki hume raat kat ni thi aur zombies wale mahool mein hum bahar road pe aise hi nahi so sakte the.
Main:- Aslam chacha thak to nahi gaye na itna chalte chalte.
Aslam:- Na abhi bhi main jitna chale hai usse dugna chal sakta hu.
Aarti:- Mujhe to tum puchna hi mat mere pairo ka bohat bura haal hai chal ne se.
Main:- ek aur beer ki bottle du kiya.
Aarti:- nahi abhi nahi baad mein.
Aise hi baat karte karte hum rasta kat rahe the.Pyaas to sab ko lagi thi par bol koi nahi raha tha bolne se ho ga bhi kiya.
Thodi der chalne ke baad mujhe dur ek ghar dikha to main bula
Main:- Ek ghar hai vaha dur chalo chalte hai koi aawaz mat karna.
Sab chup chap mere piche ho liye.kuch der chalne ke baad hum ghar ke paas pohach gaye.
Ghar 2 floor ka tha aur purana tha.
Main bola
Main:- Pehle khidki ki se andar dekh lete hai kahi aisa na ho ki humne darwaza khola aur zombies aaye sida hamari taraf welcome karne.
Sunny:- Is ghar mein hum rat kat sakte hai agar hum ne is Ghar ko clear kar diya to.
Main:- Ha! Aslam chacha shakil aur Aarti tum log yahi ruko main aur Sunny ek baar Ghar ke andar dekh te hai khidki se.
Ye bol main aur Sunny Ghar ke picche jake khidki se dekhne lage to mujhe sirf andhera dikha to maine Apni torch nikali aur usse andar dekha to main hairan ho gaya kiyunki andar mujhe khushali sonu aur Akshay bandhe huye dikhe.
Jaise hi meri torch unpe gayi to unhone bhi meri taraf dekha par torch ki light se vo mujhe pehchan nahi paaye.
Main waha se hat ke Sunny ke paas jane laga to pata nahi andhere main mera pair kisi chiz se takraya to main ghira niche.Niche baithe baithe hi maine torch uss chiz pe mari to mujhe lash dikhi.
Lash se badbu nahi aa rahi thi isliye main samajh gaya ki ye haal hi mein mara hai varna lash mein kidde pade huye hote aur badbu aati.
Main khada huaa aur gaya Sunny ke paas to Sunny ne mujh se bola
Sunny:- Yaha kuch locha lagta hai bhai adar maine 4 logo ki family dekhi jo bandhe huye hai.
Main:- maine khushali Akshay aur sonu ko dekha bandhe huye.
Lash ki taraf ishara karke Sunny ko bola
Main:- Vaha lash bhi padi hai kisi ki. Ab in logo ko yaha se nikal na hai ya phir aage badhe tu jo bolega vo main karne ko taiyar hu.
Sunny:- Ek kaam karte hai chacha aarti aur shakil se puch lete hai phir sab mil ke decide karte hai ki aage kiya karna hai hume.
Hum Aarti chacha aur shakil ke paas gaye aur unko sab bataya ki humne ghar ke andar kiya dekha vagera vagera aur unpe faisla chod diya ki hume un sab ko bachana chahiye ya phir aage badna chahiye.
Aarti:- Unko bachana chahiye hume varna vo log aise hi mar jayenge.
Aslam:- Ha Vkey bacha lete hai yahi toh mujhe mere mazhab mein sikhaya jata hai ki Niswarth se ki gai madad vo sab se upar hai.
Shakil:- Vkey bhai aapne chacha aur Aarti behan ko to sun liya hai aur main bhi unse sehmat hu to ab aap batao bhai ki aage kiya karna hai.
Main:- Kuch soch te hai kyunki andar vo log kitne hai vo bhi hume pata nahi hai to jo bhi karenge soch samaj ke karenge varna hum bhi fas jayenge.
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Jab sonu khushali aur Akshay ne kisi ko unke kamre mein torch marte dekha to khush ho gaye….
Sonu:- Kiya tumlogo ne bhi vahi dekha jo maine dekha.
Khushhali:- Ha kisi ne torch maari hamare kamre mein matlab koi hume bachane aa gaya
Akshay:- Itna khush hone ki jarurat nahi hai dusre log bhala apni jaan jokhim mein daal ke hume kyu bachayenge.
Khushhali:- Tu hamesha negative kyu sochta hai.
Sonu:- Khushali vo sahi keh raha hai bhala koi hume kyu bachayega.
Khushhali:- Hume nahi par jo dusre log hai unke group wale to unhe bachane aayenge.
Akshay:- Koi nahi aayega khushali hume bachane hum yahi marenge tadap tadap ke.
Akshay ne ab Zinda rehne ki ummeed chhod di thi aur wo tha bhi kamzor dil wala.
Ye bol Akshay rone lagta hai....
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Sahi hai guru aaj sikari ka bhi sikar karne lage sanny or vkey paji strategy to bahut Acchi Bnai hai or ye sabse jyada kargar bhi hoti hai info lo or kam tmam kr do Arti or sakil badhiya hai or Yadi Ye dar se aisa karte to unhe saq ho jata pr yha unhe bharosha tha ki sunny or vkey inko samhal lenge... Ab dekhte hai inke sathiyo ko kaise thikane Lgate hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvabUpdate:-15
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Hum log ghar ke side mein chupe hue the aur aage kiya karna hai vo soch rahe the.Kuch der vicharvimsh karne ke baad aur sab ne apni apni ray dene ke baad humne ek upaye nikal liya.
Humne milke ye upaye nikala tha ki Aarti aur shakil help mangne ke liye darwaza khat khatayenge Aslam chacha vahi ghar ke side mein chupe Honge agar koi problem ho jaye to vo turant action le sake.unke ek aadmi ko jadiyo ki taraf leke aayege jaha main aur sunny chupe honge aur jaise vo aadmi Aarti shakil ke sath hamare paas se gujarenge to hum ghat laga ke usko maar denge.
Filhaal ke liye to yahi idea nikala humne.
Main:- To main aur Sunny vaha samne jadiya hai vaha chup jaate hai phir tum log apne apne kaam pe lag jana.
Main aur Sunny nikal gaye jadiyo ki taraf Aslam chacha chale gaye ghar ke side mein chup ne ke liye.
Aarti aur Shakil mere Sunny Aslam chacha ke chup ne ka intezar kar rahe the.Jaise hi hum sab chupe Aarti aur Shakil chale gaye ghar ki taraf.
Ghar ke paas pohach ke Aarti ne dawaza khat khataya to Kuch min baad darwaza khula.Aarti aur Shakil ne saamne dekha to ek aadmi ne Darwaza khola tha.
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Darwaza khul ne se pehle……
jab darwaza bajane ki aawaz aai to adar vo charo Aadmi chokane ho gaye kyunki zombies bhi ho sakte the ya phir in logo ne jin ko bandhi banaya tha unke sathi bhi ho sakte the.
Aadmi 3 bola apne sathiyon se
Aadmi 3 :- Ab is waqt kon ho sakta hai.
Aadmi 1:- Hamara shikar hoga aur kon hoga madad mangne ke liye aaye honge humse.
Aadmi 4:- Khud shikar chal ke Shikari ke paas aaya hai to kaise jane de unko hum.
Aadmi 4 ki baat sun sab has ne lagte hai.
Aadmi 2 :- Haso nahi hume chokanna rehna padega.
Aadmi 3 apne sathi Aadmi 1 se bolta hai
Aadmi 3:- jao tum jaake darwaza kholo pehle dekh lena hole se ki kon hai.
Aadmi 1:- Ha mujhe pata hai ki kya karna hai.
Ye bol Aadmi 1 darwaza ke paas jata hai aur darwaze mein jo hole kiya huaa tha usme se dekhta hai to usko Ek ladka aur ek ladki dikhte hai.
Ye dekh vo khush ho jata hai aur normal hoke darwaza khol de ta hai.
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Darwaza khul ne ke baad…….
Aadmi ne Aarti aur Shakil se pucha
Aadmi:- Ha ji boliye
Shakil bol ta hai us aadmi se
Shakil:- Maaf kijiyega hume aap ko itni raat gaye taklif dene ke liye.Main shakil hu aur ye meri aapa hai Arshi.Hume aapse madad chahiye thi aur aas paas koi ghar ya insaan dikha nahi isliye hum ne aap ka darwaza khat khataya.
Ji vo mere abbu ko chot lagi hai kya aap hamare sath chal ke unko yaha lane main madad karenge.
Shakil ye sab bina dare bola jisse us Aadmi ko shakil pe yakin ho gaya.
Aadmi ne ek baar aarti ki taraf dekha to Aarti bhi bina dare khadi thi isliye aadmi ko Aarti aur shakil pe yakin ho gaya.
Aadmi Aarti aur Shakil se bola
Aadmi:- Ruko main andar jake mere ek aur sathi ko leke aata hu taki tumhare abbu ko aasani se yaha leke aa sake.
Shakil:- Ji jaisa aapko thik lage.
Aadmi ne wapas Darwaza bandh kiya.
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Andar Ghar mein…..
Aadmi Darwaza bandh karke Apne sathiyon ke paas chala gaya aur unko jake sab baate bata di jo aarti aur Shakil se hui thi.
Sab baat sunne ke baad Aadmi 3 bola
Aadmi 3:- Acha kiya tum akele nahi gaye ek kaam karo isko(Aadmi 4) apne sath leke jao tum.
Aadmi 3:- Ab hume aage se dhiyan rakh na padega.Ye to achha huye ki ye log der raat aaye hai isliye sab so rahe hai agar din mein aate to koi darwaza baj ne aawaz se chillata to hamara sach samne aa jata.Ab se hum jis ko bhi badhi banayenge unke muh me kapda thus denge.
Aadmi 4:- hume kaha pata tha ki log yaha se bhi gujar sakte hai par jo bhi ho in log ne hum ko kuch naya sikhaya hai.
Aadmi 2:- Ha ye sahi rahe ga ab se.
Aadmi 1:-Mein aur ye(Aadmi 4) jake apne naye shikar ko leke aate hai.
Ye bol Aadmi 1 Aadmi 4 ke sath darwaze ki taraf nikal gaye aur drawaze ke paas jake darwaza khol ne lage
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Ghar ke bahar………
Aarti aur Shakil ko darwaza khul ne ki aawaz aai to un logo ne darwaze ki taraf dekha aur darwaza khul te hi unko us pehle wale aadmi ke sath dusra aadmi bhi dikhayi diya.
Aadmi 1 ne darwaza khol ke Aadmi 4 ki taraf ishara kar ke kaha Shakil aur Aarti se
Aadmi 1:- Ye mera Dost hai aur ye bhi mere sath aap ki madad karne ke liye aayega.Ab hume le chaliye aap ke abbu ke paas.
Shakil:- Ji aaiye hamare piche piche…
Ye bol shakil aur aarti jadiyo ki taraf jane lage aur unke piche piche Aadmi 1 aur Aadmi 4 bhi chal ne lage.
Jadiyo ke andar guse Aarti Shakil aur vo dono shakhs thoda andar gaye jhadiyo ke.
Mujhe aur Sunny ko ye log dikh gaye to main aur Sunny chhup te huye bina koi aawaj kiye unke piche chale gaye.
( Main aur Sunny in sab chizo mein mahir the kyunki hum log Cobra unit ke member the.World ki sab army Cobra unit se jungle war sikhane ke liye unko invite karte hai.)
Main Aadmi 1 ke paas jake apni Axe nikal ke pehle war kiya uske gale pe.Axe lagti hi Aadmi 1 ka gala aadha kat gaya aur side mein jul ne laga.
Aadmi 4 Aadmi 1 ki aisi halat dekh chilane hi wala tha ki Sunny ne piche se uska muh daba diya aur main us aadmi se bola
Main:- Chillaya to tere sathi se bhi bura haal tera karunga samja.Ab bata Kitne aadmi hai tumhare uss ghar mein.
Maine jaise hi sawal pucha to Sunny ne apna hath uske muh se hata diya
Aadmi 4:-Mujhe kuch mat karna main sab bata ta hu.
Sunny:- Tujhe hum zinda chod denge pehle hamare sawal ka jawab de.
Aadmi 4:- Adar hamare aur 2 aadmi hai.
Usne ye bola hi tha ki Sunny apna chura uske gale ke aar paar kar diya……..
Main Sunny se bola
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Maine aur Sunny ne undono ko mar giraya ab bache 2 jo ghar mein the.Un 2 ko ghar se bahar nikal na tha kyunki agar hum andar jate to hamari jaan ko khatra hota.
Ghar unka tha aur vo log ghar ke ek ek kone se wakif the.
Chhup ke hamla bhi kar sakte the hum pe Isliye unko Ghar se bahar nikal na jaruri tha aur sahi bhi tha.
Main:- Chalo jaldi Aslam chacha ke paas agar der kardi to inko dhundh te huye inke sathi bhi aa sakte hai.
Meri baat khatam hote hi hum sab chale gaye Aslam chacha ki taraf.
Aslam chacha ke paas pohach ke hum ne unko mahol ki jankari di.
Hum sab unko bahar nikal ne ke baare mein kuch soch hi rahe the ki Shakil bola
Shakil:- Bhai ek idea hai mere paas
Main:- bata bata bhai
Shakil:- Bhai Main aur Aarti behan Ghar ke samne ki taraf jaake ek sath pathar marenge to un ko lagega ki unke hi sathi honge aur jaise hi koi darwaza kholega to usko koi dikhega nahi.Jab koi dikhega nahi to woh ghar se bahar aake dekhega ya phir andar jaake apne dusre sathi ke sath bahar aayega AUR jab bahar aayega ya phir aayenge toh aap aur Sunny bhai darwaze ke dono side chhup ke khade honge to bas sahi mouke pe unko daboch lena.
Main:- Wah bhai Wah kiya dimag lagaya hai maan gaye tujhe Shakil.
Aslam:- Main kya karunga ye bhi bata de Shakil beta.
Shakil:- Aap yahi chhup ke rehna agar koi gadbad ho jaaye to aap turant action le sako isliye aap Vkey aur Sunny bhai ke backup honge.
Main:- To chalo phir lag jaate ke kaam ko anjaam dene mein.
Main aur sunny jaake chup gaye darwaze ke dono taraf.Aslam chacha ghar ke side mein chup gaye.Aarti aur shakil Ghar ke samne chale gaye.
Aarti aur Shakil ne apne apne hath mein pathar liya aur de mara ghar ke darwaze pe chokkne wali baat ye thi ki dono ke pathhar darwaze pe lage jiski umeed mujhe kam thi are kam kya na ke barabar thi.
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Vahi Ghar mein..………..
Aadmi 1 aur Aadmi 4 ko aarti aur shakil ke sath jaane ke baad Aadmi 2 aake Darwaza wapas bandh kar deta hai aur apne dusre sathi ke paas chala jata hai.
Aadmi 3 aur Aadmi 2 apne sathiyo ka aane ka intezar kar rahe the.
Aadmi 3:-ye log Jyada der na kare to acha hai Kyunki abhi se main bechain hu ki un logo ke paas kiya kiya saman hoga.
Aadmi 2:- Bhai daru mil jaye to moj ho jayegi apni bohat din ho gaye hai bhai daru piye huye.
Aadmi 3:- Tu daru chod aur sab kamre ek baar check kar ke aa.
Aadmi 2:- Ji bhai karke aata hu.
Ye bol Aadmi 2 sab kamre check karne chala jata hai kuch der baad vo Aadmi 3 ke paas aake kehta hai
Aadmi 2:-Sab so rahe bhai ya phir mar gaye hai maine paas jake nahi dekha agar jata to vo jag jaate usse hamare aane wale shikar ko fasane mein mushkil hoti bhai.
Aadmi 3 :- Ye tune sahi kiya. Tujhe nahi lagta ki unko kuch jyada hi der ho gayi hai.
Aadmi 2:- Bhai apne bhai(Aadmi 1) ne bataya to tha ki us ladke aur ladki ke abbu ko chot lagi hai shayad uske abbu ko pairo mein chot lagi hogi isliye unko uthake la rahe honge.
Aadmi 3:- apne wale bande shane hai isliye unki puri madad kar rahe honge taki unko jara sa bhi shak na ho unpe.
Aadmi 2:- Main bhi vahi bol na chahta tha bhai.
Ye log aapas mein baat karne lag jate hai.
Kuch min baad darwaza khat katane ki aawaz aati he to Aadmi 3 apne sathi ko bolta hai
Aadmi 3:- shayad vo log aa gaye hai ja jake darwaza khol de.
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Ghar ke bahar……….
Pathhar phek ne ke kuch sec baad mujhe aur Sunny ko darwaza khul ne ki aawaz aai to hum dono chokkane ho gaye.
Darwaza khula aur kuch hi sec mein ek aadmi bahar aaya jaise hi vo bahar aaya main uske piche gaya aur uska muh daba ke darwaze ke side mein lake chure se 4 war kiye lagataar uske sine pe jaha dil hota vaha.
Time kam tha to ek aur war kiya uske gale pe aur usko vahi side mein leta Diya.
Vo abhi bhi zinda tha aur Ghughhu ki halki si aawaj aa rahi thi uske muh se aur khun bhi nikal raha tha to maine apna ek pair uske muh par rakh diya aur jo halki si aawaz aa rahi thi vo bhi bandh ho gayi ab.
Ab mujhe aur Sunny ko intezar tha iske sathi ka jo kuch hi pal mein aayega jab ye wapas nahi jayega tab.
Kuch der ke baad hume aahat huyi kisi ke aane ki to hum phir se chokkane ho gaye.
Vo shakhs andar se chillaya
Aadmi :- a kaha gaya tu
Par usne jab kisi ki bhi aawaz nahi suni to vo bahar aaya thoda sa bikul darwaze pe par hamare range main nahi tha isliye hum chup chap khade rahe aur sahi mouke ka intezaar karne lage.
Hum thode side mein the isliye usko nahi dikhe varna agar nazdik hote darwaze se to hum aasani se dikh jate use.
Aadmi phir se chillaya
Aadmi:- Kaha hai tu agar meri aawaz sun raha hai to aa idhar.
Shayad unke paas to nahi chala gaya lagta hai ye log sadak pe hi honge.
Ye us shakhs ne dhire se bola tha par hume sunai de gaya tha.
Itna bol vo shaks bahar aaya ghar se aur sadak ki taraf jaane laga to main zapata uspe aur piche se uska gala daboch liya maine.
Sunny mujhe dekh aage aaya 3 war kiye us shakhs ke pet mein to vo aadmi chillaya aur meri pakad se chhut ne ki koshish karne laga.
Ab Aarti sakil aur Aslam ChaCha bhi aa gaye mere aur Sunny ke paas.
Main us shakhs ko chhod diya to Aslam chacha ne ghuma ke ek lath diya uske sar pe aur vo aadmi jor se chillaya vahi ladkhadane laga apna sar pakad ke par chacha ne uske ghir ne se pehle ek aur lath diya uske sar pe aur vo phir se chilla ke wahi let ke tadap ne laga to Sunny uske paas baith ke uska gala kaat diya.
Main Sunny se bola
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