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Idhar aacharya Ramshukla ki samadhi tutti hai.unhe samadhi me hi yah pata chal chuka ta ki kuch a isht hone wala hai .lekin ush anisht ko kuch samai k liye tala awasya ja sakta hai.yai prayas wo karna chahte te .
Unhone mantra ucharan dwara DHRUMLOCHAN ke prakat hone ka awahan kiya .
Bhayankar garjana k sath waha ek visal manavakriti prakat hui.
Dhrumlochan:maharsi aapne hame yaad kiya koi khas karya .
Aacharya:ha vatsa , paap nirantar badhta ja raha hai.hame dar hai ki ish paap ki aandhi me vo chirag jo ki iske anth ka karan banega waqt se pahle hi na bhuj jaie abhi toh ushne apni mata ki garv me asraya nai lia.aur jab janni hi na rahe toh srijan kaise hoga ye socho.
Dhrumlochan :aapka sanket mai bhalibhati samajh raha hu par jab shakti dand jaisi shakti kisi k pass ho toh bhala hamari kya awaskta.
Aacharyadhrumlochan ki baat sunn aacharya kuch deer muskurate hai) agr ek navyuvak ko jisnekabhi teer na chalaya ho aur usse hum lakshya de de toh kya wo usse vedhan kar sakta hai.
Dhrumlochan :chama aacharya mai aapka kathan samajh gaya.
Aacharya : ha shakti dand apne aap me ek prabal astra hai lekin hamari sishya ye bhul gai ki shakti hona hi awasyak nai .shakti ka gyan aur uska ushka abhyas b jaruri hai.tabhi koi b gyan apna fall deti hai.waise hame garv hai apne sishya par.
Dhrumlochan :ji aacharya lekin usne jo kiya wo sahi kiya.
Aacharya :iska aashirwad usse milega watsh aane wale samai msseusse ek aaisi putri ki prapti hogi jo apne mata k saman hi prabal kushagra pram yodha ttha pram sati hogi.uski takat uski satitwa me hi niwas karegi jisse v uski sadi hogi usse iska aadha bal prapt hoga
Lekin choro filhal tumhe bhadrasen aur kalawati ko sakusal yaha tak lane ka karya karna hai.
Wo kuch samaya paschat hi prasthan karne wale hai aur iski suchna chandrasen tak b pahuchne hi wali hai aur ek baat aur hamari shisya ko b sawdhan kar dena vaidantpur par b hamla hone wala hai.
Filhal bas hum ush anisht ko kuch samaya bas taal sakte hai taki bhavisya bacha rahe.
Dhrumlochan :hame prasthan karne ki anumati de


Idhar badhrasen maharani kalawati k sath nikalne ki taiyari me vyast te. tabhi durg k dawar k samip hi bhyankar vishfot k sath dhrumlochan prakat hota hai
ek baar toh jami kaaap utti hai aur baki sabi b kaap jate hai unhe kuch samajh aata usse purv hi dhrumlochan unke sammukh ta.ek visal manavakriti k roop me.ussne dwarpal ko suchna dene ko kaha
Dhrumlochan:jao dwarpal sumaila tak ye khabar pahuchana ki dhrumlochan ko aacharya ne bheja hai
Fir ussne apni aakriti sadharn manav k roop me kar li

Idhar sumaila ko jab yah suchna mili toh wo maharaj ko sath le rath par swar ho kar ush or badh chali.
Jab dono samip aate hai toh ek dusre ka abhiwadan kar te hai
Dhrumlochan :kafi samai baad hum mile hai fir se tumhe dekh kar khusi hui.
Sumaila :hame v bhut khusi hui aap toh hamare bare bhai ttha guru dono hi hai. Aaiye mahal chale wai baate karenge .waise pita ji prashtan karne wale hai toh mai akeli hi rahungi mujhe v aapka sath mill jaiega.
Dhrumlochan: na bahn , sayad sandeshwahak k sabdo par tumne gaur nai kiya.mujhe aacharya ne bheja hai
Sumaila : ( usse maharaj k samne prayojan puchna uchit na laga)chaliye vai baat karenge
Maharaj: hamari putri sahi kah rai hai hame b aapke aaatithy ka awsar pradan kare.

Dhrumlochan: hame aapke sath hi chalna hai maharaj hum jante hai ki aap himalaya ki or prasthan karne wale hai aacharya se milne aur aapko waha tak sakusal pahuchane ki jimmedari hame saupi gai hai

Ish baat se maharaj aur sumaila dono chauk parte hai kyuki ye baat kuch logo ko hi malum ti parantu sumaila ki chaukne ki wajh dusri ti.
dhrumlochan: isme chaukne ki koi baat nai aacharya apni yog sadhna k bal par bahot kuch jante hai.
Jo kuch ho raha hai ya fir jo kuch b hone wala hai aur tum to unki priya sishya ho tumhe toh yah malum rahna chahiye.
Sumaila : (chintit swar me ) mai ush baat se nai chauki khair chaliye sesh baat hum mahal me hi karenge abhi pita sri k prasthan me kuch pal sesh hai
 

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Teeno mahal ki traf nikal parte hai.dhrumlochan rajya ki bhavyata ttha praja ko dekh kar kafi khus ta.

Bhavisya ki garv me kya hai ye kaun janta hai.yaha kuch b asthai nai nai. Jaha paap,hai wai punya b hai
Yai sab baate dhrumlochan k masthisk me chal rai ti


Friends umid karta hun aapko upcoming updates ka kuch had tak andaja toh ho hi gaya hoga
 

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Idhar chandrasen mahal se duur ek gufa me shaitan ki aaradhna kar raha ta .hawan kund ke ird gird hadiya rakhi hui ti thik samne shaitan ki visal pratima ti uske thik samne ek navyuvti ko nirvastra kar bediyo se jakr kar lakri k gol patt par chit bandha gaya ta waha bas uske kuch gine chune sevak hi te guffa me charo taraff masal jal rai ti . Chandrasen k sarir par bas ek kala dhoti ta jisse ki wo langot k roop me bandh rakha ta .
Mantra padhta huwa shaitan ko aahuti diye ja raha ta .
Kuch samai baad sevko ko aadesh deta hai ki uski beriya khol jal me snan karaiye
Ladki bechari roiye ja rai ti maharaj mujhe chor dijye mere ghar me bas meri budi maa hai mere baaad uska kya hoga .
Daya kijiye maharaj itne nishtur mat baniye
Chandrasen: bari tejj awaj me hasta hai uski aawaj se pura gufa gunj utta hai
Tujhe jane du ha bol fir kiski bali du mai kiska bhog du apne aaka shaitan ko ja apne bache ko lekar aa uski bali deta hun tujhe jane dunga bol manjur hai
Ladki roti hui bhilakti hui kahti hai maharaj itne nishtur mat banye mere baad meri maa aur bache ko kaun dekhe ga mere alawa unka koi nai ish duniya me wo beshara ho jaienge mai sari jindgi apki charno ki dasi ban kar rahungi maharaj bas mujhe jeevan dan dejiye mere parivar par kuch toh raham kariye .
Chandrasen:tum log khare khare muh kya dekh rai ho isse pavitra kar ish aasan par. Iao jald
Ladki :maharaj aaisa mat kariye daya mahar.......(uski baat puri b nai hoti ki sevak usse jal kund me ek saman ki trah uchal dete hai )uski dil ki awaj uski raham ki pukar sunne wala koi na ta sayad yai hota hai shaitan jisme insaniyat lesh matr b nai hoti .aaj uski pukar sunne wala koi na ta ..
Fir sevak usse bal se pakar kar khich kar jal kund se nikalte hai aur bedi par lakar patak dete hai
Uskeee mukh se dard ki tejj lahar nikal jati. Hai maaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...........
Koi toh bachao mujhe ish darinde se khaa hai bhagwan tu........
sevak uske muh par ek tej tafar marta hai chup chap baith samjhi bechari dar se peshab kar deti hai
Chandrasen: isne aasan asudh kar diya isse fir se sudh karo aur aasan badlo . Sevak usse fir se lejakar jalkund me fek dete hai aur fir baal se khich kar bahar le kar aate hai ladki v samajh chuki ti uski chikh pukar sunne wala yaha koi nai ....
Chandrasen uspar fulll chirakta hai mathe par kala tilak bhabhut ka lagata hai aur nar kankal ki hadi ko pakar kar pani chuwata hai uske sare sarir par lagata hai.fir hawan k pass aa kar mantara ucharan karta hai aahuti dene k baad
Chandrasen :he mere aaka mere sharir me pravesh kar iss stri ka bhog lagaye aur mera chadawa swikar kare.he shaitano k swami mera bheet swikar kare...... aur ja kar shaitan k charno me shis jhukata hai aur jab uthta toh uski aankhe laal ho chuki ti mano aankho se angare baras rahe ho uska ling badh kar 12 inch ka ho jata hai aur uski motai b 4.5inch ho jati hai sevak ladki bichavan par patak kar jakar lete hai .
Chandrasen aage badhta shaitan uspe hawi ho chuka ta.
Bed par chadkar wo ladki ko pakr leta hai chor do isse tum logo ki koi jarurat nai
Tmhara aaka itna kamjor nai ki ek aam ladki uski pakar se nikal jaiye ye sari baate uske muh se shaitani aawaj me nikal rai ti jo kahi se v chandrasen ki toh nai ti
Wo pakar uske hoto ko chusna shuru kar kar deta hai jibh nikal.kar pure galo chat ta hai
Shaitan :badi chikni hai re tu
Bhut dino baad koi aaisi kamsin mili hai maja aaiega
Wo kahta hai ladki ke aankho me bhai saf dikh raha ta wo kuch bol nai pa rai ti bas roye ja rai ti mgar uski pukar sunne v toh kaun .achanak usse apne yoni dwar par uska ling mahsus hota hai aur ek hi dhake me pura 12 inch uski yoni me andar ghusa deta hai Ladki ki ek tejj dill ko dahla deni wali chik pure guffa me gunj jati hai ...wo dard bardast nai kar pati aur behosh ho jati hai
Shaitan :hosh me lao isse mujhe iski chikh sunni hai aur jal lekar pass hi raho agar fir se behos ho toh fir se hosh me lana . Sevak pani dalkar usse hosh me late hai .bechari hosh me aate hi dard se bilbila jati hai ...uski mukh se
 

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...uski mukh se basss yai nikalta hai

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Koi toh bachao
Maaaa
Par uski chik sunne wala waha tha b kaun esi trah wo chikti rahi behos hoti rai ye shil shila bas chalta hi raha takriban dedh ghante usko isi trah bhogne k baad shaitan jhara .mgar ladki ke jism me bas sase rah gai ti par taqat bilkul nai wo hil b nai pa rai ti chalna toh dur ki baat ti


Anth me ush ladki k muh se bas itna nikalta hai ki teri barbadi ka karan v ek stri hi banegi yaad rakhna ye ek stri ki badua hai upar wala meri ye aakhri iksha ki laaj rakhna bhale hi tune mujhe aaj nai bachaya fir v mujhe viswas hai tujhpe . Ye baate dhimi karah k roop me uski mukh se nikli. Aur antim b



Uski yoni buti trah se fat chuka ta aur khun ki dhar ruk hi nai rai ti par darindo ko ish par b chain nai aaya use shikar me jakar kar latka diya gay a aur shaitan muh fare uske rakt ka intjar kar raha ta sevak talvar lekar uske sarir ko chirte gaiya aur wata varan me ek antim chik gunji fir sant aakhir kab tak shahti bechari ruh ne sath chor diya jism ka ab bas wo nahata raha rakt pita raha aur ant me shatan k pairo me rakh kar uske sar ko dhar se alag kar diya gaya.
 

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Dhrumlochan aur sumaila ko ja mahal me akant milta hai toh sumaila swal

Karne se khud ko rok nai pai

Sumaila : bhrata sri pita sri k samaksh jo prashan mai nai kar pai ti wo mai abi puchna chahti hun
Koi chintniye visya hai kya anyatha aapko yaha aacharya kadapni nai bhejte

Dhrumlochan : vishya toh chintniya wakai hai tabhi aacharya ne hame maharaj ttha maharani

Ki surakhsha k liye bheja hai aur tumhe b sajag rahne ka nirdesh diya hai vaidantpur hamla b ho sakta hai

Sumaila: toh kya aaise me pita sri ka yaha se nikalna uchit hoga .uski baato me chinta spast jhalak

Rai ti
Dhrumlochan: dekho bahan mai bhawisya nai janta aur na hi janne ka icchuk hun. Jha tak mai

Tak mai samajhta hun hame karm me yakin rakhna chahiye agar khatro se dar kar hum aaj se muh feer le toh fir sunahre bhavisya ki parikalpna b wyarth hai. Har karya me kathnaiya chunavtiya
Aati hai. Toh kya hum piche hat jaiye.nai bhavisya me kya hoga aur kya nai wo hame naai sochna
Agar aaj jo hame karna hai wai na kare toh fir bhavisya kaisa hoga.

Sumaila: (uske netro me aanshu aa gai) in sab ki jimmewar mai hun

Dhrumlochan: ye tumhara bhram hai. Tumne toh itne salo tak apni jimedari bakhubi nibhai hai

Ho sakta hai bhavisya me tumhare hato khuch aham hona ho.aur mujhe ye b abhas ho raha hai

Ki tum jis dubidha me ho usse tumhe sighra hi bahar aana hoga

Tabi waha par maharaj aate hai putri ab hame prasthan karna hoga.mai chahta to ye ta ki tum b hamare sath chalo par wartman halat ko dekhte huwe kisi ka toh rukna awasyak hai

Sumaila : pita sri aap nishchint ho kar jaiyejab tak mai hun tab tak aap chinta na kare.

Maharaj:chaliye dhrumlochan ji ab hum niklenge.

Unhone apne sath raj purohit rani aur sena ki choti tukriko sath liya aur nikal pare apne gantavya ki or .tabi sumaila ko kuch yaad aata hai

Sumaila :tahriye pita sri shakti dand ko aap pahle aatmsat kare.ab aapko iski aawaskta paregi

Wah mantra ucharan karti hai uske hato me tej prakash punj k sath shakti dand aa jata hai

Sumaila: ab aap apne rakt ki do bund ish par de aur mere sath hi mantra ucharan karenge

Maharaj ne chaku se apne anghute par chira laga kar ush par apne rakt se abhishek kiya.aur sath me sumaila k sath mantra ucharan karne lage.aur dhere dhere shakti dand tej kiran punj k roop me unke mastisk me pravesh karta gaya.

Tatpaschat wo waha se prasthan karte hai inke rajya k sima k bahar aate hi chandrasen k guptcharo ko iski suchna prapt ho jati hai.wo nikal pare chandrasen ko sandesh dene.

Jab chandrasen ko ye suchna milti hai wo atyant khus hota hai

Chandrasen:bhdrasen ab tumhe kaun bachayega .maine toh kabi socha v nai ta ki tum mera grash
Itni aasani se ban jaoge.

Usse abi shakti dand aur dhrumlochan k bare me gyat na ta. usne komad ka awahan kiya. Komad prakat hota hai jo ki atayant shaktishali daitya ta.

Komad :maharaj ish sewak ka aviwadan swikar kare.aapne mujhe yaad kiya.
 

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Chandrasen: tumhe hamara ek karya karna hai bhadrasen aur kalawati himalya ki or ja rai hai

Tumhe bhadrasen ko khatm karna hai aur kalawati ko yaha lekar aana hai.ish karya me jo b bich me aaiye usse khatm kae dena

Komad:aaisa hi hoga maharaj(,,aur wo nikal parta hai
Chandrasen :senapati hamari sena ko taiyar karo hame vaidantpur ko apne samarajya ka hisa bnana hai

Idhar sumaila mahal me senapati ko bulati hai

Senapati: aapne hame yaad kiya koi karya

Sumaila : hamari sena ki kya istiti hai

Veerbhadra(senapati),: sare apne jagah p tainat hai

Tabi rajya guptchar aata hai aur dono ka abhiwadan karta hai

Guptchar: chandrasen ki sena aur chandrasen hamari rajya p hamla karne wale haiaur wo prasthan b kar chuke hai

Sumaila( muskurate huwe): ye hame pahle se gyat hai par itni sighra ye umid nai ti

Sayad chandrasen mujhe bhul gaya hai

Senapati krodit lahje me uss dust ko sabak sikhane ka samai aa gaya hai

Sumaila: sant rahe veerbhadra yudh josh se nai ranniti se jiti jati hai pahle unhe mujhse nipat lene de. Ham nai,chahte ki hamari nirdosh janta ka rakt bahe


Sabi aapna sthan grahan kar le aur aapko toh hame nirdesh dene ki awasakta nai
 

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Superb update bhai
 
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Thanks for starting this story
 

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