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Chandrasen sumaila ki traf badhta hai usse suraksha ghera najar hi nai aati

Prantu jaise hi wo usse takrata hai usse ek teej zhatka lagta hai aur wo chitakkar durr girta hai .usse

Kuch pal toh samajh hi nai aaya ki ye huwa kya.fir uske chehre p muskan nach uthti hai

Chandrasen : mai b ajib murkh hun maine ye soch b kaise liya ki tum itni asani se meee hath aajaogi
Kabi kabi jaida prashan hone par aisi galti ho hi jati hai prantu aaj jaisa awsar b kabi nai milne wala
Kyuki tum toh koi platwar karne wali ho nai samadhi me jo lin ho.

Itna kast kyu deti ho khud ko aakhir meri maharani ho tum aaisi jogan wali wes husa tum par sobha nai deti..
Idhar mantri aur jyotish man me yai sochte hai ki maharaj prashanchit ho kar kahi pagal toh nai ho gai khud se hi bate kiye ja rai hai
Chandrasen idhar soch chuka ta ki usse kya karnahai wo suraksha ghere ko torne k liye shakti prayog suru kar deta hai par sari shaktiya wifal hoti ja rai ti.
Sab shakti dand se takrane k baad dhwast ho jate aur ghera aur badh jata kai bhyankar astr shastra ka prayog kar liya chandrasen ne par wah sumaila tak pahuchne k liye mgar safalta na mili

Chandrasen wapas mantri aur jyotish k pass wapas aata hai aur aapas me vicharvimarsh karne lagta hai.

Jyotish apni ganna karne me lage te aakhir me iss suraksha kawach ka toor unhe mill hi gaya .
Wo chandrasen ko batlata hai jisse sunn kar wo khush ho gaya .

Chandrasen : kya jyotish ji ye upai aap pahle batla dete mai kabse bal prayog kar k har gaya itna vilamb toh na hota . Khair deer aaiye durust aaiye.

Chandrasen wapas suraksha ghere k najdik gaya usne dhyan lagaya
 

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AB AAGE.........

CHANDRAsen k hatho me shakti dandka toor aa chuka ta jisse wo prawesh kar sakta ghere k andar wo tor tha sumaila ka mangalsutra ab shakti dand bhala sumaila k chij ko bhala kaise nakar shakta hai ye toh usse swikar karna hi parega ..

Chandrasen aankhe kholkar aage badhta hai wo jaise hi mangalsutra ko aage karta hai suraksha ghera usse aage badhne ka marg de deta hai wo andar pravesh hi karne wala ta ki waha aachartya pahuch chuke te unhone ek shakti ka prahar chandrasen par kiya jisse wo kuch kadam piche ho gaya .

Aacharya : dhrumlochan tum Kalawati ko lekar suraksha ghere k pass jao Kalawati tumhe kisi b trah sumaila ko samadhi se bahar lana hai .jao jaldi.

Mai rokta hu inko .

Chandrasen : namaskar guru ji aap b aa gaye .hamara pranam swikar kare

Waise dhanywad Kalawati ko v yaha lane k liye aapne mera karya aur v aasan kar diya .

Aacharya : ye toh waqt hi batayega chandrasen

Dhrumlochan Kalawati ko lekar aage badhta hai chandrasen idhar mantri ki or alishara kar deta hai dhrumlochan ko rokne k liye aur swayam acharya k samne aa jata hai

Dhrumlochan par mantri aur baki sabhi tut parte hai iss prakar aarambh ho gaya khuni sangram .dhrumlochan ek tej garjana k sath aapne vishalkaye swarup me aa jata hai Kalawati kuch chan thatak jati hai .
Chandrasen h: hat jaiye hamare marg se guru dev nai toh mai bhul jaunga ki aap mere gurudev hai.
Aacharya : chalo jann kar khusi huyi ki tumhe itna yaad hai mgar ye sambhav nai ki mai tunhe aaisa karne du .

Chandrasen shakti ka tej prahar aacharya par karta hai .aacahrya ne usse sahajta se uss shakti ko nast kar diya .dono traf se bal prayog hone laga .

Idhar mantri aur anya se larte huwe dhrumlochan Kalawati k sath suraksha ghere k samip b nai ja saka wo akeli hi suraksha ghere me pravesh kar gai
 
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Bahut hi achha laga is ko padh kar. Aapne ise dubara suru karke bahut achha kiya. Ab jaldi 2 update de kar ise wahi pahucha dijiye jaha ise chora tha.
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Bahut hi achha laga is ko padh kar. Aapne ise dubara suru karke bahut achha kiya. Ab jaldi 2 update de kar ise wahi pahucha dijiye jaha ise chora tha.
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Jarur dost agla number isi ka lagane vala hu
 

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Dhrumlochan uski senao ko toh chutki ki trah msal de raha ta par mantri aur senapati ko sambhalna uske liye v bhari par raha ta . Dhrumlochan ne apne aapko teen akkrityo me batt diya aur har ek aakriti ek sena k sath toh ek senapati k sath aur ek mantri k sath larne lagi . Sena pati aur mantri v kam na te .

Unhone ek sath war akarne ka nirnaya laye taki asli dhrumlochan k pata chal sake
 

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Kalawati kafi prayash kar k thak chuki ti par sumaila ti ki dhyan se jag hi nai rai ti..

Kalawati ko kuch samajh hi nai aa raha ta ki wo kya kare

Idhar aacharya chandrasen par bhadi par rai te .aacharya se yudh chandrasen ko apne liye ghatak sidh hota huwa pratit ho raha ta ab usne chal karna hi uchit samjha bina chal k aacharya se jit pana
Uske liye sambhaw nai lag raha ta. Dhrumlochan ki toh senapati aur mantri ne halat kharab kar rakhi ti dono ka var ek sath jhel pana bhut hi kathin ta wo bas unke war ko kisi trah rok hi pa raha ta war karnne ka avsar mile tab toh wo vaar kare.
Kalawati usse samadhi na jagta gdekh wichlit ho jati hai ek baar wo aacharya ki traf dekhti hai mgar wo toh chandrasen se hi uljhe pare te. dhrumlochan ki toh khud apne p ban pari ti wo b madad nai kar sakta ta.

Kalawati kuch na sujhta dekh wai sumaila k charano me lipat pari aur roti hui kahti hai

Beti dhyan se bahar aa ja dekh teri maa tujhe bula rai hai kya tu apni maa ki baat b nai sunegi

Uth beti uth isse pahle ki deer ho jaiye uth ja .

Par sumaila uth hi nai rahi ti Kalawati bechain hokar kahti hai
Aaj tu na uthi toh teri maa apne pran tere charno me hi tyag degi tujhe jagna hi hoga

Wo wai apna sar ek sila par patakne lagti hai sar se rakt ki dhara bahne lagi aur fir behos ho kar uske good me hi girr pari

Idhar sumaila ka mann dhyan me hi bechain ho utha usse ajib si uljhan hone lagi jaise kisi apne k paresani me hone p hoti hai.na chahte huwe b wo dhyan se jagne lagi .aur jab uske netra khule toh

Samne ka manjar dekh uski ruhh kap uthi aur Kalawati ka hal dekh kar toh wo mano ro pari

Sumaila : ye kya ho gaya maa aapki ye hal kaise ho gai .

Sumaila khud b kafi kamjor ho chuki ti jada chalne ki shakti usme na ti jiss wajah se wo wai giir pari

Kalawati ko hosh me lane k liye pani ki awaskta ti par jalkund toh shukha para ta .kuch sochkar sumaila ne suraksha ghera hatane ka faisla kar liya .

Sumaila ne dhyan se suraksha ghera hatane lagi idhar aacharya ne jab dekha ki sumaila jag chuki hai toh prashan ho gai par yahi unka dhyan bhatak gaya .jo unke liye toh sahi nai ta.

Par suraksha ghera hatate dekh wo vichlit ho gai nai beta ye kya kar rai ho .unki baat puri v nai huyi ti ek tejj ghatak prahar talwar ka unke dill k karib se hi unke sinne k aar par nikal gai .

Bas unke mukh se ek karah k sath itna hi nikla sumailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..........................
 

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Sumaila ne jab netra khola toh samnne ka manjar dekh usse kuch sujha hi nai usske netra dukh aur krodh se lal par gaya chandrasen aacharya ka khel smapt hi kadne wala ta ki sumaila me na jane kaha se itni shakti aa gai ki wo uth khari huwi aur ek tej ghatak prahar shakti dand ka jamin p de marti hai ek bhayankar garjana k sath mgar issme wo ho gaya jo nai hona chahiye ta .
Jo prahar Chandrasen aacharya par karne wala ta uska rukh sumaila par ho gaya ush

Sumaila k ghatak prahar k karan usko jhatka hi aaisa laga ki wo apne prahar ki disa sambhal hi na saka..

Shakti dand k prahar se waha jitne v uske aadmi te aur swayam chandrasen ek bwandar me fas kar ush jagah se kafi durr ja girre sab kafi buri trah se ghayal b ho chuke te .

Aaj ek baar fir se sumaila ne uski jeet ko jo bas hone hi wali ti ek pal me hi haar me badal diya .
Wo girte huwe v chik parta hai sumaila aaj tere karan mai firr se prast huwa hu

Duwa karna ki dubara na mujhse mill sako.

Idhar chandrasen toh uss jagah se ja chuka ta par dhrumlochan wai jamin par uthne ka prayas kar raha ta .aacharya toh ghakmi ho murchit ho chuke te, Kalawati abi b behos ti aur sumaila .ussh nagastra ko khud se lagne se na rook paii aur uska kandha jhakmi ho chuka ta.

Jahar teji se uske badan me failne laga ta. Mgar inn chano me v usse Kalawati ki parwah khud se kahi jada ti usne abi shakti dand ko sambhal rakha ta aur usse wapas jalkund ko jal se bhar diya .mgar usko prayog wo na kar paiye Kalawati ko hosh me lane k liye kyuki wo pahle hi murchit ho jamin par girr chuki ti .
 

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Ab waha bas ek hi aadmi bacha ta jisse hosh ta wo tha dhrumlochan wo kabi sumaila ko dekhta to kabi Kalawati ko to kavi aacharya ko sab k sab behos pare te par sumaila k sharir ka teji se nila parta rang dekh kar wo apni bachi kuchi shakti ko ek jut kar uth khara huwa


Aur uske ghav lage hath ko chira laga kar aur kas kar bandh deta hai taki jahar kuch kam teji se faile

Usse abhi yaha se nikalne ki chinta sabse pahle ti .wo Kalawati ko hosh me lata hai aur uske sar p b apna gamcha bandh deta hai taki rakt ka bhaw kam ho

Mgar sarir se kafi khoon bah jane k karan wo fir se murchit ho gai .

Dhrumlochan ko waha jada samai tak rukna sahi nai laga kyuki khatra un sab ki jann ka gujarte waqt k sath samip aata ja raha ta aur chandrasen wapas v kabi b tapak sakta tha aur itna toh dhrumlochan v jaan chuka ta ki wo chandrasen ko jada samai tak rok pane me shakcham nai hai

Sabse pahle usne urantastri ka nirman kar unsabko usme dala aur usse adrishya karte huwe waha se le chala .
Dhrumlochan abi yai soch raha ta ki kaha insab ki jaan ko bachaya ja sakta hai kyuki aacharya toh khud jhakmi hai aur atishigra unhe ilaj na mila toh unki jaan chali jaiegi kuch soch kar wo wapas

Unn sab ko ussi duniya me le aata hai jaha se sumaila aur Kalawati gurudev ko milne gai te ab uran tastri ko ussne ek bmw car ka ruup de diya aur sidha maharaja hospital me kar ko le jakar tejj horne bajata hai .aur khud gate khol kar unhe bulata hai teeno ko jald hi icu me shift kar diya gaya .ab jab isse kuch rahat mili toh dhrumlochan k aankho k samne v andhera chane laga aur wo behosi me khota chala gaya.

Na jane kaun si shakti ti jo ab tak usse hosh me rakhe huyi ti warna dhrumlochan v kam jhakmi na ta.

Dr. Sab prayas me lage te par sab ki isthiti khatre me bani huwi ti .

Koi kah nai shakta ta ki kaun bach paiega kaun nai .

Idhar ussi hospital me jab dhrumlochan teeno ko lekar aaya ta toh ek admi sumaila aur Kalawati ko dekh kar chauk jarur gaya ta wo aadmi koi aur nai pa dit ji hi te . Jo ki bacho ko tika dilwane hospital me aaye huwe te .
 

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Pandit dindyal un aurto k dekh achambhit te aur sath hi dill k kisi ek kone me darr b chupa ta kahi unki beti ki khusiyo k fir se grahan na lag jaiye abi abi toh ush bechari ne apni jindgi jini suru ki ti apne bacho me wai toh uske jine ka matra ek sahara te.
Reshma v pandit ji k sath hi thi uski goodh me tulsi ti toh pandit ji ki goodh me atal..

Pandit ji halaki bhut dayalu swabhav k te par baat jab apne bache ki khusi ki aati hai toh

Aache khase aadmi ko nishthur bna deti hai .hospital me halchal machi hui ti aacharya sumaila aur Kalawati teeno ki halat kafi najuk ti halaki dhrumlochan behos ho chuka ta par wo khatre se bahar ta..

Pandit ji kuch pal khare ho kar wai ek tak dekhte hai fir reshma ko lekar reception ki traf jate hai.

Pandit ji: (receptionist se puchte hai ) beta kya tum mujhe batla shakti ho abi abi jo yaha 4 logo ko bharti kiya gaya hai jinme do aurat aur do admi hai wo kaun hai
Receptionist:
Nai baba hame nai pata ki wo kaun hai halaki police ko khabar de di gai hai kahi unke aane k baad pata chale.

Pandit ji : acha unhe kya.....unki baat puri b nai hoti ki nurse waha aati hai aur receptionist se kahti hai .

Nurse : jaldi dusre hospital me pata karo aur blood bank me v contact karo hame o -ve blood group ka intjam karna hai baki k liye toh ho chuki hai par ye blood group hamare pass nai hai .

Receptionist : turant dusre hospital aur blood bank me contact karti hai par bas ek bottle khun ka bandobast hi ho paya.
 

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Na jane kyu reshma jab wahi blood group sunti hai jo khud uska ta .toh khud ko rook nai pai aur kah baithti hai

Dekhiye mera v same blood group hai agar pareshani na ho toh aap dekh le mai dene k liye tayar hun

Dindayal ji apni beti ki or ek tak dekhte hai unhe khud k8 beti p naaj ho raha ta ki kaise unki beti jise janti b nai uski madad karne ko tayar hai aur ek wo hai jo bacho se uska rista jankar b ab tak khare soch rai te kya kare kya na kare.
Receptionist wahi p ek staaf ko pass hi bulati hai.

Suniye harish ji jara madam ko icu ki trf lete jaiye aur shila mam ko inform kar de mi inka blood group same hai

Receptionist reshma ki traf murti huyi madam aap inke sath hi chali jaiye

Pandit dindayal babu apni beti aur staf k sath piche piche chal pare .


Tabhi samne se icu ka gate khulta hai aur ek adher umra ki dr. Apne chehre par se mask hatati huwi bahar nikalti hai
Nikalte hi uski najar sane se aa rahe staf p parti hai

Dr.: harish kya huwa blood ka kuch huwa ya nai

Staff : madam ye madam ka kahna hai ki inka blood group v wai hai jo ki hame chahiye .

Dr.: najar utha kar reshma ko dekhti hai

Aap aaiye mere sath andar

Reshma dr. k piche unke sath chal parti hai tulsi ab v uski good me hi ti

Andar ja kar aap let jaiye aur sister bache ko aap le lo jara ..
sister aage badh kar tulsi ko apni good me ete hai wo b uske sat aaise khelne lagti hi mano kab se janti h o

Badi pyari bachi hai aap jara hath idhar de

Dr.reshma ka khun jach karne k liye lete hai aur 10 minWait karne ko kahti hai idhar police inspector rajvir hospital me in karta hai
Inspector : ha toh madam toh apne hi mujhe call kar information di ti na kaha hai patient
Receptionist : ji sir hamne hi call kiya ta abhi toh patient ko hosh nai aaya woh icu me hai
Inspector apni tejj paini najar hospital me idhar udhar ghumate huwe apne chari ki hath me yu hila raha ta jaise malish kar raha ho dande ki

Uske chehre se hi raub jhalk raha ta woh counter par jhukte huwe hi receptionist p ekbharpur najar dalte hwe kahta hai hm

Toh patient se related koi information

Receptionist : inspector k u ghurne se jara sakpaka jati hai
N............n....nnooooo sir koi information nai hai

Inspector : toh lekar kaun aaya unko yaha

Receptionist : sir lane wala shaks khud buri trah jhakmi ta aur wo b isi hospital me admit hai
 
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