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Romance PAGLE SAHAB KI KABR (COMPLETED)

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Ye kya yar itni jaldi katam karfo ge mena socha ki anibharn ko suraj me sth kiya to kuch soch kehe kiya hoga par ap to isye he katam kar rahe ho
Chalo ap Jo bi kar rahe ho acha he hoga
All the best bhai
Take care
 
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Swaraj

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Ye kya yar itni jaldi katam karfo ge mena socha ki anibharn ko suraj me sth kiya to kuch soch kehe kiya hoga par ap to isye he katam kar rahe ho
Chalo ap Jo bi kar rahe ho acha he hoga
All the best bhai
Take care
Bro story drag karne me mai nahi manta.jis story ki jitni length honi chahiye itne me hi karta hoon.waise bhi iske baad " bholu jab raja bana "par focus karunga.
Saath aur support ke liye thanks
 

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Anirban padhai karne laga tabhi piano ki awaz fir aayi.lekin is baar wo poori tar taiyyar tha.dabe paanv wo apne kamre se nikal kar hall ki taraf gaya piano ki awaz abhi tak a rahi thi.

Anirban ne dekha ki ek Saaya sa piano baja raha tha aur jaise hi anirban ne us saya ko dekha Saaya gayab ho chuka tha.uske baad use kuch yaad nahi tha

Jab hosh aaya to to sidiyon ke paas pada hua tha
Anirban chupke se utha aur apne bed ki aur gaya
Soch soch kar pareshan ho raha tha anirban

Ye sab kya hai???
Kyun hai???
Wo saya ka piano bajana??
Aaj jo vriddh us kamre me mile jinke kamre se Neeli roshni a rahi thi???
Kya hai ye sab???

"Kya chote ustaad???"ek awaz ne anirban ke chehre par smile la diya

Chaganlaal,haan chaganlaal khidki ke raaste aaya tha.anirban ko apne daanv peench sikha raha tha
Zyadatar ye sab ghar ke peecha jo garden hai uske paas der raat ko karte hai dono

Ghar ke bahar thodi door jaane par anirban se nahi raha gaya

"Acha chaganlaal dada wo pahle sahab kya neele rang ko pasand karte the.??"anirban ne poochha

Chaganlaal chup tha kuch bola nahi

"Aaj Shaam ko mai us garden ke peecha galti se gaya aur mujhe wahan par ek kamra mila jahan se Neeli roshni a rahi thi"anirban bola

Ye sunte hi chaganlaal toot pada anirban par.anirban kaafi taaqatwar tha lekin chaganlaal ke aage wo kuch nahi kar pa raha tha
Chaganlaal anirban ke upar chad gaya aur apne dono haathon se uske gardan ko daboch liya

"Aakkkkk.....c chaganlaal dada ye kya.....kar rahe ho"anirban ke aankhon ke aage andhera cha raha tha.wo mar raha tha.

"Ye nahi ho sakta koi bahri aadmi hamare gaon me aakar pahle sahab ki kabr ke baare me jaan nahi sakta,maaf karna anirban.tujhe marna hoga,marna hi hoga"bol apni giraft aur mazboot kar li chaganlaal ne

Anirban ko pata tha uska time a chuka hai.koi bachane wala nahi tha ab.
Sirf bhagwan ko yaad kar raha tha aankhen band ho chuki thi.kuch hi pal ki baat thi

Tabhi

HINNNNN HINNNNN

ek ghode ki awaz hi sunai di anirban ko.lekin uske baad wo behosh ho chuka tha

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Subah aankhen kholne par saamne kritika dikhai di anirban ko
Jhat se utha baitha wo

"Arey lete raho lete raho.hum to ye kehne aaye the ki principal sir ne tumhe bulaya hai.lekin lag nahi raha ki tum unse is haal me milna chahiye,thoda rest kar lo fir chalte hai"kritika boli

"Nahi abhi chalte hai"bol anirban ready hone chala gaya
Sar dard se fata ja raha tha.lekin school jaana zaroori tha aur principal sir ki BAATEIN bhi sunni thi.

"Hmm anirban excellent improvement beta,mujhe laga tha ki improve karoge,lekin itna??
Continue with your efforts.waise sirf iske liye hi nahi bulaya tumhe"principal sir bole

"Fir kya sir??"anirban ne poochha


"Ek to tumhe pata hona chahiye ki kritika jheeku sardar ki beti hai.jheeku sardar jo apne time me jana mana daaku tha.log naam sunte hi kaamp jaate the.lekin surrender karne ke baad usne ye sab chod diya .lekin fir bhi aadmi khatarnak hai.koi usse ulajhta nahi.tum kritika se doori banaoge to acha rahega"principal sir bole

Anirban chup hi raha

"Aur ek baat jab tum yahan a hi gaye ho to pahle sahab ke baare me to suna hi hoga??"principal sir ne poochha

"Thoda bohut sir"anirban bola

"Jo bhi suna jaisa bhi suna.sab bhool jao.ye ek aafat hai.jitna door jaoge isse.utna acha rahega tumhare liye"principal sir bole

"Aapki baaton par amal karunga sir"bol anirban uth gaya

"Ok anirban apne studies war aise hi concentrate karo.baaki tum samajhdar ho"principal sir bole

Anirban unke room se nikal kar class gaya

Lekin saara din wo concentrate nahi kar paya.chaganlal ne us par hamla kyu kiya?????

Class ke baad kritika se mila anirban

"Kya baat hai janab ka mood off hai??"kritika haskar boli

"Kritika hum dono ache dost hai.hai na??"anirban bola

"Koi shaque??"kritika boli

"Fir kyun tumne mujhse sab kuch chupaya apne aur apne papa ke baare me??"anirban thoda chillakar bola

Kritika chup thi.

"Mujhe sab pata chal gaya kritika.mujhe laga tha ki dosti me koi kisi se chipata nahi"bol anirban jaane laga

"Ruko anirban.tumhe hamari dosti todni hai to beshak tod lo lekin jaate jaate hamari baat suno"kritika boli

"Ye sach hai hamne sab chupaya tumse.lekin kyun pata hai tumhe??hamari maa ne papa ke galat raaste se door jaakar hane janm diya.lekin wo zinda nahi reh paayi aur guzar gayi.papa hame mummy ke bataye raaste par chalne ke liye banglore me hi padhane lage.lekin kuch log papa ki dushmani mujhse nikalne ke liye banglore me hum par hamla kiya.hum bach gaye.lekin papa risk nahi lena chahate the.isliye unhone hume moti nagar bulaya aur is school me admission karwai.papa ke darr se koi ham se batein nahi karta .hum akele ho gaye
Tab tum aaye.ek ajnabi bankar tumse dosti ki.kyunki darr tha.papa ke baare me jankar tum bhi humse door jaoge.lekin aaj fir bhi tum jaan hi gaye.khair kisi ko bandhan me nahi bandh sakte hum."bol sunane lagi kritika

Anirban paas aakar uske aansu pochte hue uske chehre ko dekhne laga.
Kitni khubsoorat hai kritika.aur uske dil me kritika ke liye kabhi kuch galat vichar aaye hi nahi

"Tum jaane wale the na jao"kritika boli

"Kaise jaun.agar fir un ladko ne mujhe pakadkar maara to??"anirban haste hue bola

Kritika bhi hasne lagi

"Chalo chalte hai Shaam hone wali hai"bol anirban jaise kritika ke saath utha.saamne jheeku sardar khada tha.
Aur use chaar aadmi khade the bandook liye.sab anirban ki aur bandook taankar khade the.
Lekin bagal me us shaks ko dekh chaunk gaya anirban
Wo shaks koi aur nahi chaganlaal tha
 

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"Zara Zardi chalo yaar"ghosh babu thoda tensed the .school me bulaya gaya tha unko
Car bhi kharab thi isliye unhone rickshaw le liya tha

Rickshaw wala muskuraya.yani Anirban ne kuch kiya hai.is ladke ke charche poore gaanv me hai


"Lo a gaya saab"rickshaw wala bola
Aridhman ghosh ne paise chukaye aur school me daakhil hua


"May i..."aridhman ghosh ne principal office me daakhil hue

"Aaiye aaiye aridhman ji,baithiye"principal zabardasti smile kar rahe the.gussa chehre par saaf jhalak raha tha

"Ji aapne ...."baithte hue aridman bole

"...bulaya hai.kyun??aap jaante nahi???exam ke results nikal gaye "principal thoda zor se bole

"To kya..."aridman ka dil zor zor se dhadkane laga

"Haan sir aapke bete ne doosri baar fail hone ka kirtiman sthapit kiya hai,jise shayad hi koi todna chahe"principal sir paani peete hue bole

"To.."aridhman ghosh ko kuch samajh nahi a raha tha ki kya bole

"To bas aapke bete ki chutti sir,padhai likhai uske bas ki baat nahi,aur haan aapko pata hai maine topi kyun pehni hai??"principal sir ne poochha

Aridman ghosh ne na mein sar hilaya

Principal ne apna topi utara.unke ganje sar ke upar 100%pure likha hua tha

Aridhman ghosh ko pata tha kiska kaam hai.unhone principal ko pranaam kiya aur tez kadmo ke saath ghar ki aur rawana hue

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"Wo dekh kya item hai yaar anirban??"

"Huh wo to kuch bhi nahi pankaj pichle school ki item zyada mast thi saare saman kaise tight hai un ladkiyon ke"anirban bola

"Waise school se yaad aaya.report card dikhayega nahi apne parents ko??"pankaj ne poocha

"Arey nahi us saale taklu ne ab tak mere baap Ko bula kar baja bhi diya hoga"anirban bola

"Tu itna serious matter light kaise leta hai yaar??"pankaj ne poochha

"Chod na ye sab chal navina ki aur chalte hai aaj mast xxx movie nikla hai"aankh maarkar anirban bola

"Tu saale sudhrega nahi"bol pankaj utha aur fir dono dost nikal pade
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Jaise hi aridhman apne ghar aaye.unhone dekha ki bheed jama ho gayi hai

"Kya maamla hai??"aridman ne logon se poocha

"Maamla aapke honhar bete se poochiye"ek aurat gusse se boli

"Haan aur poochiye kaise hamare bahu betiyon ko chhedta hai"ek buzurg bol pada

"Aur maar peet karta hai "ek aadmi bola

"Aur hamare bacchon ko bigad raha hai"ek mahila boli

Aridhman ghosh apman aur gusse se sar jhukaye khade rahe kuch der

"Aap log nishchint hokar jaiye mai jald hi kuch na kuch karta hoon"aridhman bole

"Haan haan kuch kijiye warna hum khud kuch kar lenge"sab log ek saath bole aur chale gaye

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Ghar pohunchte hi aridhman ghosh chillaye

"Arindam,kahan hai ye ladka.arindam"zor se chillaye aridhman

"Kya hua kyun gala faad rahe ho???"Mrs ghosh daudte hue aayi

"Kyun???tumko pata nahi tumhara ladla kya kar raha hai poore ilake mein??"aridhman bole

"Bachpana hai uska,baccha to hai"Mrs ghosh boli

"Wah jab kuch na bache to bachpana aur bacha hai bolkar taal do"aridhman bole

"Dekho ji..."

"Bas ab aur koi is nalayak ki pairvi nahi karega,aur haan school se tumhare honhar bete ko nikal diya hai, congratulation"bol aridhman khojne lage unke bete ko

"Nikal diya matlab??aise kaise??"Mrs ghosh boli

"Do baar fail hua hai tumhara ladka,schoo swale haath jodkar keh rahe hain baksh do"aridhman apne bete ko khojate rahe lekin unka beta ghar nahi aya tha


Shaam ko clinic me aridhman ghosh dr aridhman ghosh ban gaye the

"Good evening doctor sahab"muskurate hue mukhtar ali khan chamber me aaye

Dr aridhman ghosh kisi soch me doobe hue the isliye dhyan nahi diya unhone

"Maine kaha good evening dr s
sahab"thoda zor se bole mukhtar sahab

"Oh are mukhtar sahab good evening,sorry pata hi nahi chala aap kab aaye"aridhman bole

"Hmm lagta hai koi tension hai aapko"mukhtar sahab bole

"Nahi mukhtar sahab aisa kuch nahi hai,lekin aapke aane ki wajah ???sab kuch thik hai na??"aridhman thoda concern dikhate hue bole

"Nahi doctor sahab.mai to aapko shukriya kehne aaya tha.kyunki 2 saal tak aapne yahan ke logo ke liye jo kiya uske liye hum kitne baar aapka dhanyawad denge itna kam hoga"haath jodkar mukhtar sahab bole

"Are ye kya kar rahe hai sahab .ye to hamara farz tha.aadmi hi to aadmi ke kaam ayega??"aridhman bole

"Aaj kuch logo ne aapke ladke ke baare ne shikayat ki mujhse"mukhtar sahab bole

Iske jawab me aridhman chup rahe

"Mai kya kahta hoon doctor sahab.kyun na aapke ladke ko doosri jagah bhej kar padhaya jaay???"mukhtar sahab bole

Aridhman abhi bhi chup rahe

"Motinagar me mera ek bungla hai,khali pada hai.aap apne bete ko wahan rakh kar padha sakte hai.ek government school hai wahan waha padha sakte hai."mukhtar sahab bole

"Lekin..."kuch sochte hue bole aridhman ghosh

"Jaldi nahi hai.soch kar jawab dijiyega.acha chalta hoon goodnight"bol uthkar chale gaye mukhtar sahab

Aridhman ghosh ne goodnight kiya.lekin unke dimag me ek hi jagah ka naam ghoomna laga

Motinagar
bigdel shezade ko motinagar bheja jaye ga...

motinagar delhi wala ki Kolkata me koi jagah hai??
 
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Nice one bro
Story seems very mysterious
And complicated too
Looks like reading a novel
Keep it up
Let's see what happens with anirbaan and kritika
 
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