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Thanks Manik Bhai ! Yeah , Vrinda and Prem Pehle se Hi Incest Relation Me Hai !Is kahani par ye mera pehla review hai. socha pehle ek do parts padh lun, continue kiya to comment karunga. its really a very interesting story. har character ko uski nature ki according bahut achhe se maintain kiya hua hai. badi kahani upar se dheron characters ke saath likhna koi aasaan kaam nahi hai. par aapne ise bahut achhe se na sirf likha balke aage badha rahe ho. ek main character prem ke gird ghumti hui kahani mein uske sath harek insaan ka alag hi rishta jisme vrinda ek aisa character jisne uske honthon par kiss kiya, jisse mehsus ho raha hai ke ye log pehle se incest mein involve hain, ya fir kuchh log bhavnao mein behkar aisa karte hain. khair kahani achhi hai aur in sab sawalon ka jawab to lekhak sahib de hi denge agle bhago on. A must read story....
Thanks Bhai !Very good work waiting for next
Thanks Parkas Bhai !Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Blackstar bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
Thanks Bhai ! Mamta Ke Grah-Nakshatra Kuch Zyada Sahi Nahi Chal Rahe Abhi ! Pablo Ka Network Bhi Tagda Hai , Usne Prem and Co. Ka Pata Nikaal Hi Liya ! Aur is Update Ka Name Aese Hi Nahi " Laparwahi " Tha ! Agar Laparwahi Nahi Karte To Shayad Musibat Me Na Faste !Badhiya shaandar update
Mamta bechari tow faltu me fas gayi iss sabme
Lekin yeh Pablo ko kaise pata chala ki yeh saare log yaha rehe h
Kitni aasani se haath lag gaye or Ghar ke Bahar koyi security camera jaisa Kuch nahi tha kia
Baherhal dekhte h Prem kia kerta kaise sabko ya fir kuch longo ko bachata h