Komalkh ji... mein ìtna padha likha nahi hoon aapke english ko hindi mein padh to sakta par jyada samjh nahi sakta ...... .............................................. aap soch sakti hain ki ye kaisa reader hai jisko english nahi aati ...................................................................................... sorry Komalkh jiHi SANJU (Versha Ritu) Ji....
thanks for liking my story sanju ji.......thanks a lot.......this is my first attempt to write a story...........
thanks for your appreciation about my story..............i know only few ppl will like my story because it have love and emotions more than sex scenes.......ppl here like stories having sex all the time.........i guess........which i don't like.........
thankssssss once again for liking my story...........and telling some other ppl to read my story.........so kind of you...........thanks............i know i am giving updates late sorry for that.........writing a good update takes time...........i know u can understand sanju ji.......
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यादव जी ! लगता है आप भी बाकियों की तरह कन्फ्यूज हो गए । दीदी नहीं , भाई या अंकल भी बोल सकते हैं ।mst update didi reply in inbox
Komalkh ji .. aap jo English me reply karti hain meri kuch jyada samaj me nahi pata hoon .... log sochte hongen ye kaisa reader hai jisko English nahi aati main aisa hi hoon ..... kyonki main apni kamjori kisi se chupata nahi hoon ................ phir log bhale hi mujhe kuch bhi kaheinKomalkh ji... mein ìtna padha likha nahi hoon aapke english ko hindi mein padh to sakta par jyada samjh nahi sakta ...... .............................................. aap soch sakti hain ki ye kaisa reader hai jisko english nahi aati ...................................................................................... sorry Komalkh ji
Sanju bhai... komalkh ji didi hi hain ab ladies hain to didi hi bolengenयादव जी ! लगता है आप भी बाकियों की तरह कन्फ्यूज हो गए । दीदी नहीं , भाई या अंकल भी बोल सकते हैं ।
Komalkh ji mujhe itni english nahi aati aapke english reply ko hindi mein convert kar sakon .... ................................................................................ sorry aapke readers mein ek aisa reader bhi hai jisko acchi english nahi aati haiGud Eve Sirajali Ji.......
as i hv told everyone before that i only get weekend time......all other days i am too busy......on weekends too somtimes go to hangout with friends or family......so get little time to write.......but whenever i get time to write an update i do so and post for the readers......
also sorry for not replying on your posts everytime.......i hope all the readers can understand............and thanks too for liking my story.......as it is my first attempt to write a story..........
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Komalkh ji .... is update mein ek maa ka pyaar jhalkta hai ki Kaise uski beti ki jindgi theek ho Jaye...... priya arush ka bina vasna ka pyaar jo ye batata hai ki pyar dil se hota ......................................................... bahut hi khubsurt super duper updateUPDATE 26
Shaam hone par Anushka upar Aarush ke room mein jaati hai……. usko sota hua dekhkar….. use uthaane ke liye kehti hai…….
Anushka – Aman…..uth jao ab…..kitna sona hai tumhe……raat ko nahi sona kya…..
Anushka ki awaaz sunkar Aarush neend se jaag jaata hai aur uthkar bed par baith jaata hai……..
Anushka – tum jaldi se haath munh dhokar niche aa jao……main tab tak chai bana leti hoon……….
Aarush – baaki sabne pee li chai……….
Anushka – nahi abhi…… Priya didi aur maa dono tumhaara intejaar kar rahe hain……isliye main aa gayi tumhe uthaane……tum jaldi se niche aao……
Aarush – theek hai……aap chaliye………
Phir Anushka niche chali jaati hai aur Aarush bhi haath munh dhokar niche aa jaata hai……phir sab milkar chai peene lagte hain……..Priya ki maa chai peete hue kehti hai…..
PM – Priya chai peekar……Aman ke saath chhat se kapde le aana……subah sookhne ke liye daale the………sookh gaye honge ab tak………
Anushka – maa main le aati hoon……
PM – tu rehne de……..tu mere saath baithkar sabji katwa raat ke liye…….. jab se Priya aayi hai tu koi kaam nahi kar rahi hai ghar ka……..
Priya aur Aarush chai khatam karke chhat par kapde utaarne jaate hain……Aarush agay chal raha tha aur Priya uske pichhe…….chhat par pahunchte hi Priya pichhe se Aarush ko apni baahon mein bhar leti hai jisse uski chuchiyaan Aarush ki peeth par dab jaati hain…….uski chuchiyon ki softness aur tapish apni peeth par mehsus karke Aarush dhire se kehta hai…….
Aarush – My Love Jaan……mujhe aise mat pakdo pichhe se……
Priya – kyun…..
Aarush (hanste hue dhire se) – mere doston ka dum ghoot jaayega hum dono ke beech mein dabane se……..
Priya uski baat sunkar sharma jaati hai aur usko chhodte hue kehti hai……
Priya (sharmaate hue) – tum na ek dum impossible ho……kuch bhi kehte rehte ho……
Usko sharmaata dekhkar Aarush mudkar uska chehra apne haathon mein pakadta hai……. dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhne lagte hain…….Priya ki aankhon mein dekhte hue Aarush uske honthon par apne honth rakh deta hai aur uske honthon ko chumte hue pichhe le jaakar use deewar se sata deta hai…….bahut dino se Aarush ne PRiya ke honthon ko nahi chuma tha isliye woh uski tadap samjh rahi thi…….isliye woh use mana nahi karti aur uska saath dete hue apne honth kholkar apni jeebh baahar nikaalti hai aur Aarush ke honthon par phiraane lagti hai……..yeh dekhkar Aarush apna munh khol deta hai aur Priya apni jeebh uske munh mein daal deti hai aur uski jeebh ko pakadkar apne munh mein khinchkar uski jeebh ko dhire dhire chusne lagti hai…….do teen minute tak dono ek dusre ke honthon ko aur jheebh ko chuste hain…….. phir khud par control karke dono ek dusre se alag hote hain…….
Priya (muskuraate hue) – ab agar tumhaari ijaajat ho to kapde utaarkar niche chalien……nahi to maa ko shaq ho sakta hai……..
Aarush – ok my love jaan……….chaliye……..lekin mera mann nahi bhara abhi……..main in gulaab ki pankhudiyon ka aur ras peena chaahta hoon abhi…….par jaanta hoon yahaan yeh possible nahi hai…… (Priye ke honthon par apna angutha pherte hue kehta hai)
Aarush ke aisa karne par Priya ki aankhien masti mein band ho jaati hain……woh ab phirse sharmaane lagti hai……aankhien band kiye hue hi sharmaate hue kehti hai……
Priya (dhire se) – Mere Aarush……Meri Jaan……ghar jaakar in gulaab ki pankhudiyon ka jitna ras peena chaaho…….jitni der peena chaaho……. pee lena……main mana nahi karungi…… mere yeh honth agar tumhe gulaab ki pankhudiyon jaise lagte hain……to yeh gulaab ki pankhudiyaan sirf tumhaari hi hain…….
Yeh kehkar woh jaldi se Aarush ke gale se lag jaati hai aur sharmaakar uske seene mein apna chehra chhupa leti hai…………..Priya ki yeh sharm dekhkar Aarush ko uspar bahut pyaar aata hai……. isliye woh use kaskar apni baahon mein bhar leta hai……phir kuch der ke baad dono ek dusre se alag hote hain………
Aarush – Jaan chaliye……ab kapde utaar kar niche chalte hain………
Phir woh dono chhat ke dusri taraf jaakar rassi ki taraf dekhte hain to wahaan par koi kapde nahi the…….yeh dekhkar Priya ko shock lagta hai……woh sochti hai…….
“jab kapde the hi nahi to maa ne hum dono ko upar kyun bheja…….”
Phir dono niche aa jaate hain……sidiyaan utarte waqt Priya apni maa ki taraf hairaani se dekhne lagti hai…….. jo usko dekhkar muskuraane lagti hai…….Priya Aarush ko uske kamre mein jaane ko kehti hai…….Aarush bhi bina koi sawaal kare chala jaata hai………yeh dekhkar Priya ki maa Anushka se kehti hai…….
PM – Anu jaa kitchen se mere liye nimbu paani banaakar le aa…….
Anushka kitchen mein chali jaati hai…….tabhi Priya apni maa ke paas aakar kehti hai……
Priya – kya maa…..chhat par to koi kapde nahi the……. phir aapne hum dono ko upar kyun bheja……
PM – achha…..shayad bhool gayi houngi……yaad aaya aaj to kapde dhoye hi nahi the……kya karoon beti umar ho gayi hai na……to shayad bhool gayi……
Priya – maa do teen din se dekh rahi hoon tum kaafi badli hui najar aa rahi ho…….
PM (muskuraakar) – main to nahi badli……haan tum jarur badal gayi ho……..waise tumhe aisa lag raha hoga……kyunki tum kaafi dino baad aayi ho na…………
Priya – maa main koi bachchi nahi hoon…….jo samjh na paon……batao na kya baat hai…….
PM (muskuraate hue dhire se Priya ke kaan mein kehti hai) – main bhi teri maa hoon……main bhi tujhe tujhse jyada jaanti hoon…….tu batayegi nahi to kya mujhe pata nahi chalega…….
Priya yeh sunkar ekdum se ghabra jaati hai…….
Priya – m…m….maine aapko kya nahi bataya……kya pata laga hai aapko……
PM – yehi ke hospital ka saara kharch tune akele uthaaya hai……tu ghabra kyun gayi ekdum se…..
Priya ko yahaan par jhooth bolna sahi nahi lagta isliye woh kehti hai…..
Priya – maine nahi diye hain hospital ke paise…….yeh saare paise Aman ne diye hain……main to tension mein paise laana hi bhool gayi thi……..lekin main dhire dhire saare paise chuka dungi…..aap chinta mat karo…………kuch paise pade hain mere paas wahaan jaakar use de dungi………….
PM – lekin kya uske gharwaalon ko yeh pata hai ke usne itne paise tumhe diye hain……..
Priya – mujhe nahi pata……main is baare mein usse puchhna hi bhool gayi maa…..achha hua tumne yaad dilaya……main usse puchh lungi is baare mein……….
PM – theek hai puchh lena…….
Tabhi Anushka nimbu paani ka glass lekar aa jaati hai…….Priya ki maa Anushka ko wahaan dekhkar chup ho jaati hai…….sabji kat jaane ke baad Priya sabji lekar kitchen mein chali jaati hai…….banaane ke liye……..yeh din bhi aise hi gujar jaata hai…….
Agle din Priya ki maa kehti hai…..
PM – Priya aur Anushka jao tum dono aaj Aman ko gaon ghuma lao……shehar ka ladka hai gaon ki life kaisi hoti hai yeh bhi dekh lega isi bahaane…….
Apni maa ki baat sunkar dono behnein Aarush ko lekar goan ghumaane chali jaati hain……kuch der ghumne ke baad Anushka thak jaati hai isliye kehti hai…….
Anushka – didi main to thak gayi hoon……aap isko agay tak ghuma laao……khet bhi dikha dena apne…….main tab tak yahaan baithkar tumhaara intejaar karti hoon……..
Priya – theek hai tu yahaan baith hum kuch der mein waapis aate hain……yahaan se kahin jaana mat…..agar jaana ho to phone karke bata dena mujhe…….
Anushka (hanste hue) – ok meri chhoti maa…….
Yeh sunkar teeno hansne lagte hain……..phir Aarush aur Priya agay nikal jaate hain……ghumte ghumte dono kheton mein pahunch jaate hain………kheton mein fasal lehra rahi thi…….. jo ke Aarush ne pehli baar dekhi thi……usko yeh najaara bahut achha lagta hai…….woh kehta hai……..
Aarush – Jaan…….yeh sab dekhne mein kitna achha lag raha hai…..kitni achhi hawa chal rahi hai……..
Phir dono ek khet ke side mein baith jaate hain……aur baatein karne lagte hain…….phir kuch der baatein karne ke baad Aarush Priya ka haath pakadkar use ganne ke khet ke ander le jaata hai……Priya bhi muskuraate hue uske saath chalne lagti hai……thoda sa ander jaakar Aarush ek ganna todta hai aur Priya ko lekar waapis baahar aa jaata hai…….Priya uski is harkat par khilkhilaakar hansne lagti hai…….yeh dekhkar hairaani se Aarush kehta hai…….
Aarush – kya hua my hottie maam……..
Priya – tum sirf ganna lene ke liye ander gaye the mujhe lekar………akele bhi to jaa sakte the……..
Aarush – akele jaane mein darr lag raha tha mujhe……..
Priya – darr aur tumhe………tumhe pata bhi hai ke darr kis chidiya ka naam hai…….
Aarush (muskuraakar) – to aapko kya laga tha……..yehi ke main aapko ander le jaakar kiss karunga……aapke saath masti karunga…….
Priya – haan……. (sharmaakar apna munh niche karte hue)
Aarush – aap to mere hi ho……jab dil karega aapse masti aur pyar karne ka…..tab kar lunga…..abhi to mera mann ganna khaane ka kar raha hai……maine sirf filmo mein dekha tha aise ganna khaate hue…..to socha aaj mouka mila hai to main apna yeh sapna poora kar loon……
Priya – theek hai tum ganna khao…….
Aarush – kya tum ganna khao……hum dono khaayenge…….
Yeh kehkar woh ganne ko beech mein se tod deta hai aur aadha Priya ko de deta hai……phir dono ganna khaane lagte hain…….Priya ganna khaate hue baar baar usko dekhne lagti hai aur mann hi mann uski maasoomiyat aur pyar par muskuraane lagti hai……..ganna khatam hone par Aarush kehta hai…..
Aarush – Jaan ab ghar chalna hai ya kahin aur bhi jaana hai abhi…….
Priya uski aankhon mein dekhte hue sharmaakar kehti hai…….
Priya – nahi ghar chalte hain……kaafi der ho gayi hai hamein nikle hue ghar se……
Priya ko yun sharmaata dekhkar Aarush puchhta hai…..
Aarush – Jaan…..aap sharma kyun rahe ho…….kahin aapka mann to nahi kar raha na mujhe kiss karne ka……mere saath masti karne ka……..agar kar raha hai to aap kar sakte ho……..sir se lekar paon tak main aap ka hi hoon……..jahaan chaaho kiss kar sakte ho aap……..main aapko mana nahi karunga………. (Aarush yeh kehte hue aankh maar deta hai)
Priya uski baat sunkar phirse sharmaa jaati hai………
Priya (sharmaakar) – tum kitne besharam ho Aarush……..kaisi baatein kar rahe ho……… tumhe bilkul bhi sharm nahi aati na……..
Aarush apne dono haath left aur right ko poore kholte hue kehta hai……
Aarush – isme sharmaane ki kya baat hai…….main apni dhadkan se baat kar raha hoon…..ab apne dil ki dhadkan se bhi koi sharmaata hai bhala……..
Priya uski baat sunkar muskuraane lagti hai aur agay badkar uske gale se lag jaati hai……… Aarush usko apni baahon mein bhar leta hai aur usko apni baahon mein uthaakar phirse ganne ke khet mein le jaata hai………wahaan le jaakar woh Priya ko utaar deta hai…….Priya phir Aarush ki aankhon mein dekhte hue kehti hai……..
Priya – I Love You Mere Aarushhhhhhhhh……….main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon……..
Yeh kehkar woh ek halka sa kiss Aarush ke honthon par karti hai……..phir woh uski baahon mein samaa jaati hai aur apni aankhien band karke……apna sir uske seene par rakh deti hai………Aarush bhi use apni baahon mein majbooti se jakad leta hai…….15-20 min tak dono aise hi ek dusre ki baahon mein khade rehte hain…….ek dusre ke pyar ko mehsus karte hue…….tabhi PRiya ka phone bajne lagta hai……..jisse dono ka dhayaan bhang hota hai…….Priya Aarush se alag hokar phone sunane lagti hai……..
Priya – haan Anu…….kya hua…….sab theek to hai……
Aarush Priya ko picche se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai…….aur uski gardan par halka sa kiss kar deta hai……
Priya – theek hain hum aa rahe hain…….phir saath mein ghar chalte hain……
Phir Priya call cut karte hue kehti hai……
PRiya – Jaanu……chalo chalte hain……Anu ka call tha……woh ghar jaane ko keh rahi thi……maine kaha hum bhi aa rahe hain…..phir saath mein chalte hain……
Aarush – chaliye my love…….hum to aapke hukum ke gulaam hain……jaise aap bolengi waise hum karenge…….. (uske saamne apne ghutno par baithte hue kehta hai)
Priya uski is harkat par muskuraakar uske baalon mein haath pherte hue……. uske ghutno par baith jaati hai……. uske chehre ko apne dono haathon mein lekar…… uske honthon par apne honth rakhkar ek pyar bhara kiss karti hai aur kehti hai……
Priya – tum mere gulaam nahi ho Mere Aarush……..tum meri jaan ho……..isse kum kuch nahi……….
Uski baat sunkar Aarush bhi muskuraate hue uske honthon par ek kiss karta hai…….Phir Priya uth jaati hai…….dono khet se baahar aakar Anushka ko jahaan chhodkar aaye the us taraf chalne lagte hain…….kuch hi der mein dono Anushka ke paas pahunch jaate hain aur phir teeno milkar ghar waapis aa jaate hain……..ghar aakar teeno khaana khaate hain aur phir yeh din bhi beet jaata hai……
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Shaam hone par Anushka upar Aarush ke room mein jaati hai……. usko sota hua dekhkar….. use uthaane ke liye kehti hai…….
Anushka – Aman…..uth jao ab…..kitna sona hai tumhe……raat ko nahi sona kya…..
Anushka ki awaaz sunkar Aarush neend se jaag jaata hai aur uthkar bed par baith jaata hai……..
Anushka – tum jaldi se haath munh dhokar niche aa jao……main tab tak chai bana leti hoon……….
Aarush – baaki sabne pee li chai……….
Anushka – nahi abhi…… Priya didi aur maa dono tumhaara intejaar kar rahe hain……isliye main aa gayi tumhe uthaane……tum jaldi se niche aao……
Aarush – theek hai……aap chaliye………
Phir Anushka niche chali jaati hai aur Aarush bhi haath munh dhokar niche aa jaata hai……phir sab milkar chai peene lagte hain……..Priya ki maa chai peete hue kehti hai…..
PM – Priya chai peekar……Aman ke saath chhat se kapde le aana……subah sookhne ke liye daale the………sookh gaye honge ab tak………
Anushka – maa main le aati hoon……
PM – tu rehne de……..tu mere saath baithkar sabji katwa raat ke liye…….. jab se Priya aayi hai tu koi kaam nahi kar rahi hai ghar ka……..
Priya aur Aarush chai khatam karke chhat par kapde utaarne jaate hain……Aarush agay chal raha tha aur Priya uske pichhe…….chhat par pahunchte hi Priya pichhe se Aarush ko apni baahon mein bhar leti hai jisse uski chuchiyaan Aarush ki peeth par dab jaati hain…….uski chuchiyon ki softness aur tapish apni peeth par mehsus karke Aarush dhire se kehta hai…….
Aarush – My Love Jaan……mujhe aise mat pakdo pichhe se……
Priya – kyun…..
Aarush (hanste hue dhire se) – mere doston ka dum ghoot jaayega hum dono ke beech mein dabane se……..
Priya uski baat sunkar sharma jaati hai aur usko chhodte hue kehti hai……
Priya (sharmaate hue) – tum na ek dum impossible ho……kuch bhi kehte rehte ho……
Usko sharmaata dekhkar Aarush mudkar uska chehra apne haathon mein pakadta hai……. dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhne lagte hain…….Priya ki aankhon mein dekhte hue Aarush uske honthon par apne honth rakh deta hai aur uske honthon ko chumte hue pichhe le jaakar use deewar se sata deta hai…….bahut dino se Aarush ne PRiya ke honthon ko nahi chuma tha isliye woh uski tadap samjh rahi thi…….isliye woh use mana nahi karti aur uska saath dete hue apne honth kholkar apni jeebh baahar nikaalti hai aur Aarush ke honthon par phiraane lagti hai……..yeh dekhkar Aarush apna munh khol deta hai aur Priya apni jeebh uske munh mein daal deti hai aur uski jeebh ko pakadkar apne munh mein khinchkar uski jeebh ko dhire dhire chusne lagti hai…….do teen minute tak dono ek dusre ke honthon ko aur jheebh ko chuste hain…….. phir khud par control karke dono ek dusre se alag hote hain…….
Priya (muskuraate hue) – ab agar tumhaari ijaajat ho to kapde utaarkar niche chalien……nahi to maa ko shaq ho sakta hai……..
Aarush – ok my love jaan……….chaliye……..lekin mera mann nahi bhara abhi……..main in gulaab ki pankhudiyon ka aur ras peena chaahta hoon abhi…….par jaanta hoon yahaan yeh possible nahi hai…… (Priye ke honthon par apna angutha pherte hue kehta hai)
Aarush ke aisa karne par Priya ki aankhien masti mein band ho jaati hain……woh ab phirse sharmaane lagti hai……aankhien band kiye hue hi sharmaate hue kehti hai……
Priya (dhire se) – Mere Aarush……Meri Jaan……ghar jaakar in gulaab ki pankhudiyon ka jitna ras peena chaaho…….jitni der peena chaaho……. pee lena……main mana nahi karungi…… mere yeh honth agar tumhe gulaab ki pankhudiyon jaise lagte hain……to yeh gulaab ki pankhudiyaan sirf tumhaari hi hain…….
Yeh kehkar woh jaldi se Aarush ke gale se lag jaati hai aur sharmaakar uske seene mein apna chehra chhupa leti hai…………..Priya ki yeh sharm dekhkar Aarush ko uspar bahut pyaar aata hai……. isliye woh use kaskar apni baahon mein bhar leta hai……phir kuch der ke baad dono ek dusre se alag hote hain………
Aarush – Jaan chaliye……ab kapde utaar kar niche chalte hain………
Phir woh dono chhat ke dusri taraf jaakar rassi ki taraf dekhte hain to wahaan par koi kapde nahi the…….yeh dekhkar Priya ko shock lagta hai……woh sochti hai…….
“jab kapde the hi nahi to maa ne hum dono ko upar kyun bheja…….”
Phir dono niche aa jaate hain……sidiyaan utarte waqt Priya apni maa ki taraf hairaani se dekhne lagti hai…….. jo usko dekhkar muskuraane lagti hai…….Priya Aarush ko uske kamre mein jaane ko kehti hai…….Aarush bhi bina koi sawaal kare chala jaata hai………yeh dekhkar Priya ki maa Anushka se kehti hai…….
PM – Anu jaa kitchen se mere liye nimbu paani banaakar le aa…….
Anushka kitchen mein chali jaati hai…….tabhi Priya apni maa ke paas aakar kehti hai……
Priya – kya maa…..chhat par to koi kapde nahi the……. phir aapne hum dono ko upar kyun bheja……
PM – achha…..shayad bhool gayi houngi……yaad aaya aaj to kapde dhoye hi nahi the……kya karoon beti umar ho gayi hai na……to shayad bhool gayi……
Priya – maa do teen din se dekh rahi hoon tum kaafi badli hui najar aa rahi ho…….
PM (muskuraakar) – main to nahi badli……haan tum jarur badal gayi ho……..waise tumhe aisa lag raha hoga……kyunki tum kaafi dino baad aayi ho na…………
Priya – maa main koi bachchi nahi hoon…….jo samjh na paon……batao na kya baat hai…….
PM (muskuraate hue dhire se Priya ke kaan mein kehti hai) – main bhi teri maa hoon……main bhi tujhe tujhse jyada jaanti hoon…….tu batayegi nahi to kya mujhe pata nahi chalega…….
Priya yeh sunkar ekdum se ghabra jaati hai…….
Priya – m…m….maine aapko kya nahi bataya……kya pata laga hai aapko……
PM – yehi ke hospital ka saara kharch tune akele uthaaya hai……tu ghabra kyun gayi ekdum se…..
Priya ko yahaan par jhooth bolna sahi nahi lagta isliye woh kehti hai…..
Priya – maine nahi diye hain hospital ke paise…….yeh saare paise Aman ne diye hain……main to tension mein paise laana hi bhool gayi thi……..lekin main dhire dhire saare paise chuka dungi…..aap chinta mat karo…………kuch paise pade hain mere paas wahaan jaakar use de dungi………….
PM – lekin kya uske gharwaalon ko yeh pata hai ke usne itne paise tumhe diye hain……..
Priya – mujhe nahi pata……main is baare mein usse puchhna hi bhool gayi maa…..achha hua tumne yaad dilaya……main usse puchh lungi is baare mein……….
PM – theek hai puchh lena…….
Tabhi Anushka nimbu paani ka glass lekar aa jaati hai…….Priya ki maa Anushka ko wahaan dekhkar chup ho jaati hai…….sabji kat jaane ke baad Priya sabji lekar kitchen mein chali jaati hai…….banaane ke liye……..yeh din bhi aise hi gujar jaata hai…….
Agle din Priya ki maa kehti hai…..
PM – Priya aur Anushka jao tum dono aaj Aman ko gaon ghuma lao……shehar ka ladka hai gaon ki life kaisi hoti hai yeh bhi dekh lega isi bahaane…….
Apni maa ki baat sunkar dono behnein Aarush ko lekar goan ghumaane chali jaati hain……kuch der ghumne ke baad Anushka thak jaati hai isliye kehti hai…….
Anushka – didi main to thak gayi hoon……aap isko agay tak ghuma laao……khet bhi dikha dena apne…….main tab tak yahaan baithkar tumhaara intejaar karti hoon……..
Priya – theek hai tu yahaan baith hum kuch der mein waapis aate hain……yahaan se kahin jaana mat…..agar jaana ho to phone karke bata dena mujhe…….
Anushka (hanste hue) – ok meri chhoti maa…….
Yeh sunkar teeno hansne lagte hain……..phir Aarush aur Priya agay nikal jaate hain……ghumte ghumte dono kheton mein pahunch jaate hain………kheton mein fasal lehra rahi thi…….. jo ke Aarush ne pehli baar dekhi thi……usko yeh najaara bahut achha lagta hai…….woh kehta hai……..
Aarush – Jaan…….yeh sab dekhne mein kitna achha lag raha hai…..kitni achhi hawa chal rahi hai……..
Phir dono ek khet ke side mein baith jaate hain……aur baatein karne lagte hain…….phir kuch der baatein karne ke baad Aarush Priya ka haath pakadkar use ganne ke khet ke ander le jaata hai……Priya bhi muskuraate hue uske saath chalne lagti hai……thoda sa ander jaakar Aarush ek ganna todta hai aur Priya ko lekar waapis baahar aa jaata hai…….Priya uski is harkat par khilkhilaakar hansne lagti hai…….yeh dekhkar hairaani se Aarush kehta hai…….
Aarush – kya hua my hottie maam……..
Priya – tum sirf ganna lene ke liye ander gaye the mujhe lekar………akele bhi to jaa sakte the……..
Aarush – akele jaane mein darr lag raha tha mujhe……..
Priya – darr aur tumhe………tumhe pata bhi hai ke darr kis chidiya ka naam hai…….
Aarush (muskuraakar) – to aapko kya laga tha……..yehi ke main aapko ander le jaakar kiss karunga……aapke saath masti karunga…….
Priya – haan……. (sharmaakar apna munh niche karte hue)
Aarush – aap to mere hi ho……jab dil karega aapse masti aur pyar karne ka…..tab kar lunga…..abhi to mera mann ganna khaane ka kar raha hai……maine sirf filmo mein dekha tha aise ganna khaate hue…..to socha aaj mouka mila hai to main apna yeh sapna poora kar loon……
Priya – theek hai tum ganna khao…….
Aarush – kya tum ganna khao……hum dono khaayenge…….
Yeh kehkar woh ganne ko beech mein se tod deta hai aur aadha Priya ko de deta hai……phir dono ganna khaane lagte hain…….Priya ganna khaate hue baar baar usko dekhne lagti hai aur mann hi mann uski maasoomiyat aur pyar par muskuraane lagti hai……..ganna khatam hone par Aarush kehta hai…..
Aarush – Jaan ab ghar chalna hai ya kahin aur bhi jaana hai abhi…….
Priya uski aankhon mein dekhte hue sharmaakar kehti hai…….
Priya – nahi ghar chalte hain……kaafi der ho gayi hai hamein nikle hue ghar se……
Priya ko yun sharmaata dekhkar Aarush puchhta hai…..
Aarush – Jaan…..aap sharma kyun rahe ho…….kahin aapka mann to nahi kar raha na mujhe kiss karne ka……mere saath masti karne ka……..agar kar raha hai to aap kar sakte ho……..sir se lekar paon tak main aap ka hi hoon……..jahaan chaaho kiss kar sakte ho aap……..main aapko mana nahi karunga………. (Aarush yeh kehte hue aankh maar deta hai)
Priya uski baat sunkar phirse sharmaa jaati hai………
Priya (sharmaakar) – tum kitne besharam ho Aarush……..kaisi baatein kar rahe ho……… tumhe bilkul bhi sharm nahi aati na……..
Aarush apne dono haath left aur right ko poore kholte hue kehta hai……
Aarush – isme sharmaane ki kya baat hai…….main apni dhadkan se baat kar raha hoon…..ab apne dil ki dhadkan se bhi koi sharmaata hai bhala……..
Priya uski baat sunkar muskuraane lagti hai aur agay badkar uske gale se lag jaati hai……… Aarush usko apni baahon mein bhar leta hai aur usko apni baahon mein uthaakar phirse ganne ke khet mein le jaata hai………wahaan le jaakar woh Priya ko utaar deta hai…….Priya phir Aarush ki aankhon mein dekhte hue kehti hai……..
Priya – I Love You Mere Aarushhhhhhhhh……….main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon……..
Yeh kehkar woh ek halka sa kiss Aarush ke honthon par karti hai……..phir woh uski baahon mein samaa jaati hai aur apni aankhien band karke……apna sir uske seene par rakh deti hai………Aarush bhi use apni baahon mein majbooti se jakad leta hai…….15-20 min tak dono aise hi ek dusre ki baahon mein khade rehte hain…….ek dusre ke pyar ko mehsus karte hue…….tabhi PRiya ka phone bajne lagta hai……..jisse dono ka dhayaan bhang hota hai…….Priya Aarush se alag hokar phone sunane lagti hai……..
Priya – haan Anu…….kya hua…….sab theek to hai……
Aarush Priya ko picche se apni baahon mein bhar leta hai…….aur uski gardan par halka sa kiss kar deta hai……
Priya – theek hain hum aa rahe hain…….phir saath mein ghar chalte hain……
Phir Priya call cut karte hue kehti hai……
PRiya – Jaanu……chalo chalte hain……Anu ka call tha……woh ghar jaane ko keh rahi thi……maine kaha hum bhi aa rahe hain…..phir saath mein chalte hain……
Aarush – chaliye my love…….hum to aapke hukum ke gulaam hain……jaise aap bolengi waise hum karenge…….. (uske saamne apne ghutno par baithte hue kehta hai)
Priya uski is harkat par muskuraakar uske baalon mein haath pherte hue……. uske ghutno par baith jaati hai……. uske chehre ko apne dono haathon mein lekar…… uske honthon par apne honth rakhkar ek pyar bhara kiss karti hai aur kehti hai……
Priya – tum mere gulaam nahi ho Mere Aarush……..tum meri jaan ho……..isse kum kuch nahi……….
Uski baat sunkar Aarush bhi muskuraate hue uske honthon par ek kiss karta hai…….Phir Priya uth jaati hai…….dono khet se baahar aakar Anushka ko jahaan chhodkar aaye the us taraf chalne lagte hain…….kuch hi der mein dono Anushka ke paas pahunch jaate hain aur phir teeno milkar ghar waapis aa jaate hain……..ghar aakar teeno khaana khaate hain aur phir yeh din bhi beet jaata hai……
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Agle din subah Priya ki maa ko chhodkar sab nashta kar lete hain to Priya ki maa kehti hai…..
PM – arre Aman beta……jara mere saath chaloge……
Priya – maa main chalti hoon aapke saath……ise kyun pareshaan karna…….waise jaana kahaan hai………
PM – mujhe mandir jaana hai…….tum ghar par rehkar apne papa ka dhayaan rakho……
Priya – lekin maa woh mandir jaakar kya karega…….
PM - arre woh bhi mandir dekh aayega isi bahaane……aur mujhe kuch kaam bhi hai isliye dopahar ka khaana tum bana lena……main ise apne saath lekar jaa rahi hoon……
Priya – theek hai maa……main ghar par rehti hoon……aap dono jao…….
Phir Priya ki maa Aarush ko apne saath lekar ghar ke baahar chali jaati hai……..raaste mein chalte hue…..
PM – Aman beta……tum rehte kahaan ho shehar mein…….
Aarush - aunty ji…….mera ghar inke ghar ke paas mein hi hai…….
PM - kinke ghar ke paas mein……
Aarush – aapki beti ke ghar ke paas aunty ji…….
PM – achha….. tum Priya ko kya keh kar bulaate ho…….
Aarush ko samjh nahi aata ke iska kya jawaab de…….phir bhi woh kehta hai….
Aarush – main to unhe aap keh kar bulaata hoon……
PM – achha……tumhara bahut bahut dhanyawaad beta…….
Aarush – woh kisliye aunty ji…….maine to aisa kuch nahi kiya hai…….
PM – mujhe pata hai beta……tumne saare ilaaj ke paise diye hain……
Aarush – nahi aisa to nahi hai aunty ji…..woh paise to aapki beti ke the……
PM – jhooth mat bolo beta……. Mujhe pata hai itne saare paise ek saath woh itni jaldi arrange nahi kar sakti……. Anushka ko doctor ne bata diya tha ke payment kisne ki hai…….
Aarush – koi baat nahi aunty ji……isme thanks karne ki kya jarurat hai…….
PM – kyunki tumne jo kiya…..aisa koi nahi karta hai…..kisi anjaane ke liye bina kuch soche itni help karna…….
Aarush – chhodiye in baaton ko aunty ji…..woh dekhiye mandir aa gaya hai……chaliye aap pooja kar lijiye…….
Priya ki maa chup ho jaati hai……dono mandir ke ander chale jaate hain…….
Mandir mein jaane ke baad Priya ki maa bhagwaan ki murti ki taraf dekhkar haath jodkar kehti hai……
PM (aankhon mein aansoo bharkar) – main aaj bahut khush hoon bhagwaan……aakhir tumhe meri beti par taras aa hi gaya……….tumne meri beti ki jindagi mein bhi khushiyaan bhej di……maine use itna khush kabhi nahi dekha hai…… saari umar uski dard aur taane sunane mein hi gujari hai……ab agar uski jindagi mein khushiyaan di hain to inhe hamesha banaaye rakhna prabhu……
Yeh kehkar woh rone lagti hai………Priya ki maa ko rota dekhkar kar aur uski baat sunkar Aarush usse kehta hai……
Aarush – aunty ji yeh aap kya keh rahi hain……..
PM - haan beta main bilkul theek keh rahi hoon…….meri bachchi ne saari umar sirf taklifien hi dekhi hain……hamesha pyar ko tarsi hai meri beti…….is ghar mein use kabhi pyar nahi mila……bina koi galti kiye bhi usne kayi baar apne papa se daant suni hai….. beijjati sahi hai……..maar khaayi hai…….phir bhi jab woh bimaar hote the to Priya raat raat bhar jaag kar unki sewa karti thi……lekin phir bhi us insaan ne kabhi use woh pyar nahi diya jiski woh hakdaar thi…….jis kaaran woh hamesha udaas rehti thi…….
Aarush sab baatein dhayaan se sunta hai phir……..
Aarush – lekin unke papa unse aise kyun behave karte hain…….
PM – Priya souteli hai na isliye…….
Aarush ko yeh sunkar jhatka lagta hai…….
Aarush – kya……yeh aap kya keh rahi hain…….aisa kaise ho sakta hai……
PM – Priya mere pehle pati ki beti hai jinki mrityu Priya ke janm ke kuch mahino baad hi ho gayi thi……..main to dusri shaadi nahi karna chaahti thi…….lekin mere maa baap aur bhai ne mujhe majboor kiya dusri shaadi ke liye kyunki woh mujhe apne saath nahi rakhna chaahte the saari umar……..mujhe bhi majboor hokar shaadi karni padi……..Anushka ke paida hone tak to unhone Priya ka bahut dhayaan rakha lekin Anushka ke paida hone ke baad pata nahi kyun Priya ko lekar woh badal gaye…….
Aarush - Kya woh yeh sach jaanti hain……
PM – haan PRiya sab jaanti hai…….lekin Anushka nahi jaanti……Anushka bahut pyar karti hai apni didi ko……isliye main chaahti bhi nahi ke woh ya koi aur yeh sachaayi jaane……arre yeh to ise padaana bhi nahi chaahte the…….
Aarush – matlab……kyun…..
PM – kyunki yeh padne mein bahut achhi thi……anushka thodi kamjor thi padayi mein…..Priya shayad unki beti nahi thi isliye yeh nahi chaahte the ke woh jyada pade likhe…….maine jaise taise ise school ki padai karai……..lekin……. School ke baad jab woh padna chaahti thi to yeh use agay padne dena nahi chaahte the……phir iski ek dost thi jo ise bahut pyar karti thi……woh ise apne saath jabardasti le gayi teacher ka course karaane ke liye……saara kharch bhi usi ne uthaaya iska……..
Aarush – inke papa ne roka nahi…….
PM – rokne ki koshish ki thi inhone…….Priya bhi nahi jaana chaahti thi apne papa ki bina marji ke……..lekin iski dost badi jiddi thi……….. usne bhi keh diya ke agar yeh uske saath nahi jaayegi to woh bhi nahi jaayegi course karne ke liye……..bachpan ki saheliyaan jo thi dono…….woh ise bahut pyar karti thi……….woh ise apne saath le jaakar hi maani………
Yeh kehkar Priya ki maa chup ho jaati hai…….kuch der tak chupi chhaayi rehti hai……phir Aarush is chupi ko todne ke liye kehta hai……..
Aarush – kya main aapse ek sawaal puchh sakta hoon…..agar aap bura na maanein to……
PM – puchho……kya puchhna chaahte ho………
Aarush – aapne unke baare mein yeh sab mujhe kyun bataaya……….jabki aaj tak yeh baatien koi nahi jaanta……..unki apni chhotti behan bhi nahi…………
PM – kyunki mujhe laga ke tumhaare liye Priya ke jeevan ka yeh sach jaanana bahut jaruri hai…….
Aarush - aapko aisa kyun laga…….itna bharosa kyun hai aapko mujhpar ke main kisiko kuch nahi bataunga……
PM – mujhe tum par nahi apni beti par bharosa hai……..
Aarush – matlab……
PM – meri beti ne bataya ke tum kaafi samjhdaar ho…….isliye main jaanti hoon ke tum kisiko kuch nahi bataoge……Priya ko bhi nahi ke tumhe yeh sach pata hai……yeh baat tumhaare aur mere ilawa kisiko nahi pata……maine tumhe yeh sab isliye bataya taaki tum kabhi kabhi uska haal chaal puchh liya karo…….uski help kar diya karo agar use jarurat pade to……jaise yahaan aaye ho uske saath uski help karne……….
Aarush (tokte hue) – lekin woh to shaadishuda hain……unke pati hain na unka dhayan rakhne ke liye……waise aapne unke pati ko bhi nahi bataya yeh sach…….
PM – shaadishuda kya beta…….uski shaadi nahi hui uske papa ne use 10 lakh rupaye mein shaadi ke naam par becha hai…….. tum yeh keh sakte ho………
Aarush (shocked hote hue) – becha hai matlab…….
PM – uski shaadi Ankur se karaane ke badle mein mere pati ne 10 lakh rupaye liye hain Ankur ke baap se…….lekin yeh baat Priya ko nahi pata hai…….
Aarush - aap to unki maa hain phir aapne unhe rokne ki koshish kyun nahi ki………
PM – mujhe bhi uski shaadi ke kuch waqt baad pata chala yeh sab……jab maine Ankur ke baap aur inki baatein sun li galti se……..iske papa ek laalachi kism ke insaan hain……yeh to main jaanti thi lekin itne gir jaayenge yeh mujhe nahi pata tha……..main jaanti hoon shaadi ke baad bhi woh sirf naam ki dulhan hai…….shaadishuda hone ke baad bhi woh akeli thi ab tak…… lekin yeh sab jaante hue bhi main usse kuch nahi poochh paayi……kyunki woh kuch nahi baatayegi mujhe……ander hi ander ghutati rahegi……..
Aarush – to aap kya chaahti hain…….woh kya karein…….
PM – main bas yeh chaahti hoon ke woh apni jindagi khul ke jiye sirf apne liye……is baar jabse woh yahaan aayi hai bahut khush lag rahi hai…….usko chehre par muskaan aur sukoon dekhkar mujhe aisa mehsus hua……… jaise usne kuch aisa paa liya hai jiska use barson se intejaar tha…….……ek maa hone ke naate main bas apni bachchi ko hamesha khush dekhna chaahti hoon…….main chaahti hoon ke uski jeevan mein yeh khushi hamesha bani rahe…….
Aarush – unhone aapko kuch bataya nahi is baare mein ke woh itni khush kyun hain……
PM – maine usse puchha tha lekin usne mujhe kuch nahi bataya…..lekin main uski maa hoon……9 mahine usko apni kokh mein paala hai……..har maa ki tarah main bhi apni bachchi ki har khushi aur gum ko uske bina kahe mehsus kar sakti hoon…… mujhe pata hai ab tak jindagi ke safar mein woh akeli thi lekin ab woh akeli nahi hai……koi hai jo uski is khushi ka kaaran hai……koi hai jo uska khayaal rakh raha hai……. (Aarush ki taraf dekhkar kehti hai)
Aarush bhi Priya ki maa ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai……
Aarush – lekin woh to shaadishuda hain…….phir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain…..
PM – to kya hua agar woh shaadishuda hai to……use apni shaadishuda jindagi mein woh khushiyaan to nahi mili jiski woh hakdaar hai…….agar woh shaadishuda hai to kya yeh uski galti hai……..kya usko khushiyaan paane ka adhikaar nahi hai…….pyaar paane ka adhikaar nahi hai……..tum batao mujhe…….agar woh shaadishuda hai to kya apni saari ichhaayein maarkar jeevan gujaar de woh……main yeh nahi chaahti…….main chaahti hoon meri beti ko woh saari khushiyaan milein jiski woh hakdaar hai……….
Aarush ab Priya ki maa ki aankhon mein dekhkar kehta hai…….
Aarush – Pyaar paane ka adhikaar to unhe hai…….yeh to main bhi jaanta hoon ke woh dil ki bahut achhi hain……woh to itni pyaari hain ke kisiko bhi unse pyar ho jaaye……
PM – main bas tumse yehi keh rahi hoon ke sirf naam ki shaadi hui hai uski……. mujhe pata hai……..mera bas chale to main aaj is shaadi ko khatam kar doon…… ek maa hone ke naate main bas apni beti ko jindagi mein khush dekhna chaahti hoon…….main jaanti hoon meri beti kabhi bhi galat nahi ho sakti…….
Aarush – yeh to aap sahi keh rahi hain…..
PM – waise kya tumhe pata hai woh itni khushi kyun hai……uski khushi ka kaaran kya hai…….
Priya ki maa ka yeh sawaal sunkar Aarush bina dare unki aankhon mein dekhkar kehta hai…….
Aarush – is sawaal ka jawaab main kaise de sakta hoon……agar aapko aisa lagta hai to yeh aapko apni beti se puchhna chaahiye…….
PM – mujhe laga shayad tumhe kuch pata ho is baare mein …….
Aarush iska koi jawaab nahi deta bas unhe dekhta rehta hai…….use chup dekhkar Priya ki maa kehti hai……
PM – tumhe kya hua……tum to aise chup ho gaye..……jaise maine tumse tumhaare baare mein hi puchh liya ho……maine tumse kaha to hai ke main bas apni beti ko hamesha khush dekhna chaahti hoon…..isliye hi aaj mandir aayi thi……. uske jeevan mein yeh khushiyaan hamesha bani rahein iske liye prarthna karne……chalo ab ghar chalte hain……bahut der ho gayi hai…..
Aarush – Ji aunty ji……chaliye……
Phir dono ghar ki taraf chal dete hain…….. Priya ki maa ki baatien sunkar Aarush thoda sa confuse ho gaya tha…….yeh sochkar ke kahin Priya ki maa ko kuch pata to nahi chal gaya un dono ke beech mein kya hai…….woh poore raaste mein baar baar PRiya ki maa ko hi dekhta rehta hai……Priya ki maa bhi jab usko apni taraf dekhta paati to bas muskura deti………isi tarah dono kuch hi der mein ghar pahunch jaate hain…….Priya dono ko ander aate dekhkar kehti hai……
Priya – dekh aaye mandir…..tum thak gaye hoge…..ruko main tumhaare liye paani laati hoon…..
PM (hanste hue) – beti budiya to main hoon…..thaki to main houngi…….lekin tumhe mere bajaaye Aman ki jyada fikr ho rahi hai…….
Priya thoda sa sakpaka jaati hai……
PM – ghabra mat main majaak kar rahi thi…….ab tu use apne saath laayi hai to teri jimedaari banti hai uska khayaal rakhne ki……kyun theek kaha na maine……
Priya – maa aise koi baat nahi hai…….maine to bas aise hi kaha……aap to baat ko pakad kar hi baith gayin…….
PM – achha jaa jaldi se pehle paani lekar aa……phir khaana laga de…….hum dono ko bahut bhookh lagi hai…….tumhaare haath ka khaana khaane ke liye taras raha hoga……
Priya (ascharya se) – matlab kya hai aapka……
PM (muskuraate hue) – arre mera matlab hum dono ko joron ki bhookh lagi hai…….isliye khaana khaane ke liye taras rahe hain………waise tujhe kya laga……
Priya – kuch nahi…….
Priya apni maa ko kuch der tak ek tak dekhti rehti hai……..Priya ki maa phir haathon se khaana daalne ka ishaara karti hai to Priya apni maa ko ajeeb si najron se dekhte hue kitchen mein chali jaati hai…….. phir sab milkar khaana khaate hain…….khaana khaane ke baad Priya ki maa sone chali jaati hai……Priya Aarush ko bhi apne kamre mein jaakar aaram karne ko kehti hai aur khud woh jaakar apne papa ke paas baith jaati hai……. Upar jaakar Aarush sone ki koshish karta hai lekin uske dimaag mein Priya ki maa ke dwara ki gayi baatien ghoomne lagti hain……..woh sochta hai…..
“Aunty ji mujhse mandir mein aise baatien kyun kar rahi thi……..unhone mujhe Jaan ke baare mein sab kuch kyun bataya…….jo kisiko bhi nahi pata…….kya chaahti hain woh…..kya unhe hum dono ke rishte ke baare mein pata chal gaya hai…….agar haan to unhone kuch bhi kaha kyun nahi…….kya mujhe unse is baare mein puchhna chaahiye…….nahi main aise unse yeh nahi puchh sakta kyunki agar mere andaaja galat nikla to unhe agar abhi nahi pata hai hamare rishte ke baare mein…….. to unhe pata chal jaayega…….phir meri jaan ke liye problem ho sakti hai…….”
Yehi sab sochte hue use neend aa jaati hai aur woh so jaata hai………..
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