Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Upcoming...Update 230....
Villian....Death halo on Monday night between 10 to 11pm

 

[Gaurav1969]

Ye raj nahi hai mere khyal se

 

[Gaurav1969]

Nope .....usai toh raj chudayega...tab uski entry hogi lagao lagao andaja lagao

Bhai mujhe lag raha hai ye mrityudoot ya yamdoot hai
Agar inme se nahi to pakka abhay hi hoga

 

[Gaurav1969]

Sherdil kyo nahi ho sakta h....Abhay he kyo.... Aur agar abhay jinda h toh ajju aur shrutii ko pata hota na

Abhay ko hospital se hi shayad raj ke plan ke hisab se gayab kar diya gya hoga ya guruji le gye honge jiska kisi ko pata na chala ho .
Sherdil mandwa mein hi raha tha uska itna risk lena kisi bhi angle se fit nahi baith raha .

 

[Huzaif]

Sandeep Bhai 2 ,3 update ke baad flashback start ker dijiye ,taaki clear ho jaaye kaun jinda hai kaun nahi ,abhi sab comment ker rahe hai ki sherdil bhi mar chuka hai , but sherdil kab mara wo to mandawa me dada ji ke sath ladai lada tha last time uske baad kaha gaya wo aur kaise mara wo .......aur Abhay wo to pura toot photo gaya tha Deepika ko bachane ke chakkar me uski bhi haalat kharab ho thi .......aur wahi ranjan ki asliyat Manisha ko kaise pata chala aur usne hi apne baap ko mara ........ Ye sab kab pata chalega

Isliye flashback me sab clear kerke story ko aage badhaiye

ellysperry oo sab jab raj wapas ghar aayega tab uske update di jayegi kon kon mara aor kaise mara tab hi ham logo ko bhi pata chalegaa

 

[Gaurav1969]

Are nahi bro Matlb total he 500 plus honge matlb upar kitne jayenge ye pata nahi h...par jayenge jarur...total story ka 20 percent part pura ho gaya h...ab tak ...,baki sab tikh raha toh 700 plus bhi ja sakte h

Bhai ye story 700 update jaye ya 2000 update bas yehi kehna hai ki story aadhi mat chhodna kyonki hurt hota hai bahut .




271 update ke sath RAJA CHAUHAN bhai "Manhoos se Mahan tak" story ko chhod diya dil ko thes pahuncha is baat se bas aapse ummid hai ki aap is story ko iske THE END tak pahuchne se pehle QUIT nahi karenge fir chahe aapki shadi hi kyon na ho jaye.

 

[Krish P]

Sherdil kyo nahi ho sakta h....Abhay he kyo.... Aur agar abhay jinda h toh ajju aur shrutii ko pata hota na

koyi bhi ho dono me se ab bas update ka intezar hai aur ye suspense khule

 

[Saim1005]

Upcoming next update.....
Nothing is Impossible....

Working in progress....

"Ab tu koun h..."

"Wahi jo harpal tera picha karta tha..."

"Ab Tu bhi marega iske sath"

"Aj toh nahi waise bhi main markar he jinda huva hu ya sayad abhi bhi mara huva hu"

"NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE "

Bhai Wednesday b khatam hony wala hai
Koi chance update k....!!!!

 

[Gaurav1969]

Bhai ye story 700 update jaye ya 2000 update bas yehi kehna hai ki story aadhi mat chhodna kyonki hurt hota hai bahut .




271 update ke sath RAJA CHAUHAN bhai "Manhoos se Mahan tak" story ko chhod diya dil ko thes pahuncha is baat se bas aapse ummid hai ki aap is story ko iske THE END tak pahuchne se pehle QUIT nahi karenge fir chahe aapki shadi hi kyon na ho jaye.

Sandeep bhai jindagi kab kis mod par le aaye pata nahi chalta
Us samay pichla life ko chhod hume nayi shuruat karni hoti hai .
Har kisi ke life mein aisa time aata hai bas aap ye mat bhulna ki is forum par bhi aapki ek family hai jisko aapko hi badhana hai .
Best of luck for your bright future and keep writing this story till it ends.
Achha laga aapne mere predictions par react kiya .thank you for that.
Kal ka intejar hai agar editing time par ho jaye to nahi to aage ke liye intejar kar lenge bas dil se update dena.

 

[Rinku110]

Waiting for update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai Wednesday b khatam hony wala hai
Koi chance update k....!!!!

Bro teen din mai ek 12 saal se dost ki death mai jaake aya hu aur 2 din baad he sath mai khade dost ki wife yani bhabhi ke antim sanskar mai kal sham ko jaa ke aya hu ....ye wahi dost h jo 2 din pahle mere sath khada bol raha tha yaar galat huva ...aur do din baad main akhir mai antim sanskaar se sab chale gaye aur wo apni wife ke liye ro raha tha ...tab maine usai kaha heemat rakh bhai....aur usne sirf itni he kaha meri heemat toh bhai wo jaa rahi h...