Sci-FI [{RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete)} {RAJ - VIRAJ --- Two In One (Mystery Of The Snow Mountain Of Himlistan) (Running)}]

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi




RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete) PDF

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PART-1​

♡ Family Introduction ♡​

Update 01	Update 02	Update 03	Update 04	Update 05
Update 06	Update 07	Update 08	Update 09	Update 10
Update 11	Update 12	Update 13	Update 14(A) Update 14(B)	Update 15
Update 16	Update 17	Update 18

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PART-2​

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♡ Family Introduction ♡

Update 01	Update 02	Update 03	Update 04	Update 05
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UPDATE-9
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01 sal baad

Iis 1 sal main bahut kuchh badal gaya tha.
Raj ab 18 sal Ka ho gaya tha aur guru ji ki permission se Haridwar se Mumbai mein shift ho gaya tha.
Vahi Neha ne Raja ke business ko fir Se vahi mukam per lakar khada Kar diya Jahan per vah pahle tha.
Number 1 position.
Neha ne Raj ke permission se Uske sabhi business ka naam change kar kar A.R Rakh diya
Like A.R mall, A.R hotel, A.T institute.
Raj ke dadaji Ka business bahut bada tha unhone lagbhag sabhi line me apna paisa invest kiya tha.
Like Hospital, School etc.
Sath hi sath unke business ka main branch Mumbai me tha.
Jis Karan Raj Ko Haridwar se Mumbai aana pada.
Raj ke Mumbai aane ke baad Neha bhi Raj ke sath usi ke banglo mein settle Ho gayi.
Abhi kuchh dinon pahle hi A.R institute ko America and England se kuchh business proposal Aaye the.
Jis Karan Neha other country Me bhi Apne company ka branch kholne ke bare mein Soch rahi thi.
Aur iske liye Raj se baat karne wali thi.

In P.R Bonsel company
Meeting hall
Abhi yahan per company ke owner Chacha aur bua, company ke MD Muskan sath hi company ke a kuchh member baithe hue the.

Chacha-humne aaj yah meeting kyo rakhi hai aap sabhi ko pata hai na.

Member's-yes sir ham log khud is baat se pareshan hai.

Chacha-hamare company ki value aur demand market mein din par din girti ja rahi hai.
Muskan kya tum yah bata sakti ho ki iske piche kya reason hai.

Muskan-Yes dad

Bua-Muskan Maine tumhen kitni bar kaha hai.
Office mein dad aur aunty ka prayog mat Kiya Karo.
Office mein tum ham donon Ko sir aur mam kha Kar Hi bulao

Muskan-yes mam

Bua-tum kuchh bata rahi thi

Iske bad Muskan be meeting hall ke light off karva kar projector on kar diya.
Fir is vishay per lecture dena shuru ki.

(Writer-Kitna English bolati hai.
Mujhe To kuchh samajh hi nahin a Raha hai.
Bus itna samajh ja raha hai ki A.R institute Ne unke sath koi Dil cancel kar di hai.
Jiske Karan use nuksan hua Aur din per din A.R institute ke tarkki hone ke Karan P.R Bonsel company ko aur nuksan ka samna karna pada .
Chaliye ab Muskan ka lecture khatm ho gaya hai story ki taraf chalte Hain)

Uncle-maine bhi suna hai ki A.R institute India ki number 1 company ban gai hai.
Otherwise unhone kis region per hamare company Se deal cancel ki.

Member 1- sir Bina Kisi reason ke Hi deal cancel kar diye.
Aur kuchh ulte-sidhe reason likh diye.

Bua-ek kam karo A.R institute ke owner ke sath hamare meeting fix karvao.
Kisi bhi kimat par.

Member 2-ok mam

Uncle-abhi ke liye yah meeting khatm hoti hai.
A.R institute ke sath hamari batchit hone ke baad ho sake to dubara meeting bulai jaaye

Members-yes sir

P.R Bonsel company Se A.R institute ko jyada kuchh profit Nahin ho raha tha.
Jis Karan Neha ne kuch simple reason dekar unke sath deal cancel kar liya tha.

Chaliye ek najar Viraj per bhi Dal Lete Hain

Aap log shayad Viraj ko bhul gaye honge Chaliye Uske bare me thoda bata dete Hu.
yah vah hi hai jo 10 sal ki umra se Himalaya per 8 sal practis Kiya,
Aur kisi se badla lene ke liye nikal Para.
Viraj kuchh mahinon se London mein hi hai.
Viraj jab London aaya tha tab usne apna face change kar liya.
Sath hi usne apna 1 clone Ko bhi banaya jiska naam usne Virat rakha.
Virat bhi Viraj ke original face me nahin tha.
Lekin Uske pass Viraj ki kuchh powers thi

Chaliye ab Raj ki taraf chalte Hai.

Raj Haridwar se Mumbai aane ke baad vahan ke sabse bade college R. State college mein admission le liya.
Neha Raj Ko bar-bar business join karne ke liye kahati lekin Raj Har Bar mana kar deta tha.
Jab Neha Ko pata Chala ki P.R Bonsel company unke Sath meeting karna chahti hai to usne Raj se baat karne ka faisla Kiya.

In dinner time

Neha- Raj cal office mein ek important meeting hai tumhen us meeting me shamil hona hai

Raj-Maine tumhen kitni bar Kaha ki yeah chote mote kam tum khud Hi Dekh lo.
Otherwise kis company ke sath meeting hai

Neha-P.R Bonsel company

Jab Raj Ko pata Chala Ki meeting Uske uncle ke company ke sath tab

Raj-ok kal kitne baje jaana hoga

Neha-10:am mein ham log niklenge 10:30am se meeting start hai

Raj-ok

Chaliye ab thoda A&A ki jhalak bhi dekh Lete Hain
London
In dinner time
Papa Maa Ansh and Anshu dinner karne ke liye baithe hue aur unke bich kuchh bahas ho rahi thi.

Ansh-papa ab main baccha Nahin Raha main 16 sal ka ho gaya

Papa-to kya main tum donon ko akele vahan bhej du.

Ansh-papa humne kitni bar kaha ki ham akele Nahin jaenge.
Ham aap logon ke sath jaenge

Papa-abhi mujhe yahan bahut kam hai.
Vaise bhi India mein apna koi business Nahin Hai vahan jaane ka koi fayda hi Nahin

Papa-Ab tum Hi Apne bacchon Ko samjhao

Maa-tum donon Ko kitni bar Kaha gaya hai ki India jaane ka bhoot Apne dimag se nikal do

Anshu-lekin maa

Papa-main ka diya matlab kah diy.
Aaj ke bad iis ghar mein India ka naam koi Nahin lega.

A&A- ok papa

Iske bad sabhi Apne Apne room mein chale jaate Hain

Ansh-dekhna chhoti ek din mein India jakar rahunga

Anshu-bhaiya mujhe bhi Apne Sath le jaaoge na

Ansh-tumhare Bina main kahin ja sakta hun kya.

In India
A.R institute

Abhi Muskan company ke andar gayi thi ki bus ki takkar Neha Se Ho jaati hai

Neha-Muskan long time no see

Muskan-what a present surprise Neha.
Maine ummid bhi Nahin Ki thi Ki tum yahan hogi.

Tabhi Neha Ke piche se Raj bolata hai

Raj-yah kaun Hai Neha

Neha- ye P.R Bonsel company ki MD hai

Raj-ok

Meeting me sabhi Ko yah baat sunkar surprise laga ki
Neha A.R institute company ki MD hai.
Raj ne P.R Bonsel company company ke sath deal final kar li aur Baki ka sara process Neha ko dekhne ke liye kha kar Chala Gaya.
(Writer-Is meeting ko bhi bahut lamba kar sakta tha
aur kuchh emotional scene bhi de sakta tha
lekin time Ki thodi Kami hai)

Otherwise main To yah batana hi bhul gaya ki iss 1 sal mein Neha ko yah realise hua Ki vah Raj Se pyar Karne lagi Hai
(main story ko romantic Nahin banana chahta hu
mujhe romantic story likhane bhi nahin aati hai
jis Karan story me na ke barabar romantic scene honge)

Aaj ke liye itna hi

aap ye otherwise kah kah ke abhut kuch skip kar chuke ho...isko band karo
thoda drama to dikhana chahiye tha...waha pe laga sayad Neha Muskan ko thoda mazza chakhaye bachpan ka badla le par nahi hua aisa...saath hi mein laga ki Raj bhi muskan se kuch puchega family ke baare mein par wo bhi nahi...
Maa Baap abhi tak nahi badle hai same attitude...
waise kya Raj ko pata hai ki Neha kon hai
romance dikha sakte the...

nice update

 

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UPDATE-10​

In Night

Neha Apne kamre mein baithi.
Aaj ke meeting ke bare mein Soch rahi thi.

Flashback
In Meeting

P.R Bonsel company ke sabhi member meeting hall me baithe hue the.
Tabhi vahan per Raj Neha aur A.R institute company ka manager aata Hai aur apni apni seat per baith jaate Hain

Raj-good morning all of you.
Mera naam Raj hai aur mai A.R institute company ka owner hun
Aaj ke meeting me mere company ke taraf se company ke MD miss Neha charcha karegi

P.R Bonsel company ke sabhi member ko yah sunkar socked laga ki
Neha A.R institute company ki MD hai.

Uncle-aapse milkar Khushi hui Mr Raj
Mere company ki taraf se company ki MD Miss Muskan charcha karegi.

Muskan-good morning all of you.
Aaj ke meeting ka main Karan A.R institute and P.R Bonsel company ke bich ke business Deal cancel hone par
And kuchh new business ke bich ki charcha per hai

Muskan-mai A.R institute ke MD se puchna Chahti Hai ki
Kis reason per unhone hamare bich ke business deal Ko cancel Kiya.

Neha- Kuch samay se P.R Bonsel company ke dwara hamari company ko koi profit Nahin ho raha tha.
Sath Hi P.R Bonsel company nuksan mein chal rahi thi jis Karan humne deal cancel Kiya.

Muskan-miss Neha aapko pata Hona chahiye ki sabhi company ka samay 19-20 hote rehte Hi.
Iska matlab yah Nahin Hai ki aap deal cancel Kar de.
Otherwise mai kuchh aur program/deal ke bare mein charcha karne ke liye yahan Aai Hu
Iske baad Muskan meeting hall ka light off karva deti hai
Aur projector on kar kuchh project ke bare mein batane lagti Hai
Jaise hi projector hota Hai Raj kahta Hi.

Raj-Neha mujhe yah project bahut pasand aaya.
Tum is project per P.R Bonsel company ke sath deal Karo aur kal Tak mujhe report do.

Aaj pahli baar Raj ne office me khud decision liya tha.
Jis Karan Neha kuch nahin pati hai aur P.R Bonsel company ke sath us project per deal Kar deti hai.
Flashback end

Neha-aaj Raj ko achanak kya ho gaya tha.
Jo usne itna bada business deal Bina kisi se discuss kiye Hi confirm kar diya.

Chaliye ab kahani ki taraf aage badhate hain

2 saal baad

In 2 saal mein bahut kuchh ho gaya tha.
Neha ne Raj Ko propose kar diya tha aur kuchh samay baad raj ne bhi accept kar liya
Kyunki Raj bhi Neha Se pyar Karne laga tha.
Vahi dusri Taraf
Viraj London ke top businessman me number 2 position per pahunch gaya tha
Aur kuchh hi dinon baad ek deal hona tha Jo uski company ko milte Hi vah number 1 position per pahunch jata.
Vahin papa ke business ka sabse bada enemy viraj tha
Kyunki vah kuchh samay baad unki company ko number 1 position se hata kar khud number 1 position per pahunch sakta tha.

Aaj Anshu aur Ansh ka 18th birthday tha.
Jis karan Papa ne bahut badi party rakhi thi
Aur London ke sabhi bade aadmiyon ko invite kiya tha.
Unhone is party mein Viraj ko bhi invite kiya tha
Kyunki unhen usse kuchh baat karni thi.

In party
London ke sabhi bade bade hasti is party me shamil ho rahe the
Aur papa khud unka swagat kar rahe the
Tabhi vahan per Viraj ki entry hoti hai.
Jisko lekar papa ek Taraf jaate Hain aur usse kuchh baat karne lagte Hain.

Papa- Welcome Viraj for this party

Viraj-Thanks Mr Bansal and
Aapane mujhe yahan Bina Kisi reason ke bulaya Nahin hoga.
To aap mujhe bataiye ki mujhe yahan bulane ka kya Karan hai.

Papa-Chaliye mai sidhe point per hi aata hu.
Mujhe information Mili Hai Ki tum "Ansoliya company" ke sath kuchh deal karne wale ho.
Aur mujhe vah deal Kisi bhi kimat per chahiye.

Viraj- sorry Mr Bansal lekin vah deal to main hi lekar rahunga.
Aakhir Uske bad main London ka top 1 businessman ban jaunga.

Papa- Tum ek bar mere baat per jarur sochana
Tum is deal Ke badle mujhse kuchh bhi mang sakte ho
kuchh bhi

Viraj-theek hai Mr Bansal
Agar time mila to mai jarur aapke baton per dhyan dunga.

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the ki pure Party hall light band ho jata hai
Aur achanak sidhiyo per light focus hota Hai
Jahan se Anshu and Ansh ekadam Hero aur heroine ke mafik niche aa rahe the.
Party ke sabhi naujawanon ko ine donon se jalan ho rahi thi
Ladkon ko Ansh se ladkiyon ko Anshu se
Tabhi achanak Viraj ki najar in dono per jaati Hai
Aur uski Dil Ki dhadkan badh jati Hai.

Thode hi der ke baad A&A ke Ke samne pahunch jaate Hain fir pure party hall me light a jaati Hai.
Thodi hi der ke baad A&A cake ko khate Hain
Fir sabhi mehman un dono ko gift dete hai jisme Viraj bhi shamil tha
Ant mein papa kahte hai

Papa-aaj main bahut khush hun batao Tum donon Ko kya chahie.

A&A-papa hamara tu hamesha se yah ichcha ki ham donon India jaaye

Yah baat sunkar papa ko bahut gussa aata Hai
Lekin vah party ka mahaul bigadna Nahin chahte the
Iske bad papa kahate Hain

Papa-main tum donon ke India jane ke bare mein sochunga.

Dheere-dheere party khatam hone lagti Hai
Aur sabhi mehman Apne-Apne Ghar Ko jaane lagte Hai
Lekin Viraj party ke ek side abhi tak ruka hua tha
Jis Ke upar papa Ka dhyan jata hai aur vah Viraj ke pass jaate Hain aur kahate Hain

Papa-kya baat hai abhi tak tum yahan per ruke hue Ho

Viraj-Mr Bansal maine aapki baton par bahut socha
Uske baad maine decision liya Ki main main "Ansoliya company" ke sath deal Nahin karunga
Lekin Uske badle mujhe vah chahiye

Papa-kya chahie

Iske baad Viraj Anshu ki taraf ungali kar deta hai
Jab papa ko uski baat samajh aati hai
Tab unhen bahut gussa aata hai
Fir vah kahate Hain

Papa- Mai iske bare mein Soch kar aapko kal bata dunga
Jiske baad Viraj Apne Ghar Chala jata Hai
Aur papa Maa ko lekar kamre mein jaate Hai

Papa-tumhen aaj hi Ansh aur Anshu ke sath India jana hoga.

Maa-lekin ham to use India bhejne wale Nahin the.
To Fir ab India kyon bhej rahe hain

Papa-Viraj ki najar Anshu per aa gaya hai.
Aur Viraj ka sambandh underworld don Virat ke sath hai
Jis Karan ham to kya
London koi bhi insan uska kuchh Nahin bigaad Sakta.

Papa-tum abhi hi un donon Ko lekar Mumbai Chali jao
un donon Ko kuchh pata nahin Jana chahiye.
Vahan per uska admission karwa dena

Maa-theek hai jaisa aap kahen.

Raaton-Raat Hi maa aur A&A London se Mumbai pahuch jaate Hain.
Vahi A&A iss baat se bahut khush hai ki vah India ja rahe hai
Lekin achanak yah baat use samajh nahin aa rahi thi.

Mumbai airport
Mumbai airport per pahunch kar maa ek taxi ko book karti hai
Aur apne ghar ki taraf jaati Hai
Papa ne shahar Ke side area mei ek Ghar banvaya tha
Bhavishya me jarurat padne ke liye
Aur aaj vah kaam a raha hai
Abhi yah log kuchh dur hi gaye the ki achanak taxi kharab ho jaati Hai
Jis Karan mom ko bahut gussa aata Hai

Mom-jakar Kisi gadi ko rokiye mujhe jaldi Ghar Jana Hai

Taxiwala-ji memsahab

Iske bad taxiwala ek Car ko rukvata Hai
Fir teenon usme baith jaate Hain.
Yah gadi Neha ka tha aur vah abhi Office ja rahi thi.

Thodi der me Ghar aa jata hai
phir mom aur A&A car se utarkar kar Ghar chale jaate hain
Aur Neha office
Lekin raste raste mein Neha and A&A ke bich Jaan pahchan Ho jaati Hai.

Abhi ke liye itna hi
next update me Raj aur A&A ki mulakat dekhenge

Villain aa gaya... to Viraj businessman tha aur wahi Virat underworld mein
Anshu pe nazar gayi aur ye usko mangne laga...kya kuch khass tha anshu mein ya bas aise hi isne ye kiya..
chalo ab aage dekhte hai kya hota hai dono ke bich

 

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UPDATE-11​

Mumbai aane ke kuchh dinon baad A&A Ne Mumbai ke sabse bade college R. State college me apna admission karaya
Aur aaj un donon ke college ka pahla din tha

R. State college
Ek car college campus me aati Hai
Aur usmein se 2 log bahar nikalte Hai
Pura college unhin dekhne lagta hai aur UN donon ko dekh kar jalta Hai
Yah donon aur koi nahin Ansh aur Anshu hai
Tabhi kuchh senior ki najar ine donon per padati hai jo ragging le rahe the

Anshu-bhai suna hai India ke college mein ragging liya jata hai
Mujhe to bahut dar lag raha hai

Ansh-Tum chinta mat karo
Agar koi hamara ragging lega to main use acche se sabak sikha dunga

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the unke samne senior ka ek group aa jata hai
S1-new admission
A&A-yes sir
S2(Anshu se)-sirf usi Ki bahon mein rahegi meri bahon mein bhi aao
S3-apna size to bata do jaaneman
Anshu-yah kis Tarah Se aap baten kar rahe hain
S1-ham to isi tarah Se baten karte Hai
Agar size Nahin bataogi To ham khud naap lenge.
Ansh ne Jaise hi yah baat suni
Usne ek jordar punch S1 ke face per mara
Jis Karan Uske munh se khoon nikalne laga
S2 Ne Jaise hi yah Dekha vah Ansh ki aur lapka
Lekin bich raste me hi use Raj ne pakad liya
Yah senior ka group Raj se 1 sal junior tha

Raj-yahan per kya ho raha hai

S2-kuchh Nahin sir ham to bas ragging le rahe the

Jab Raj ne yahi baat Ansh se poochha to usne Puri sacchai bata di
Jiske bad Raj senior ke group ko lekar principal ke office pahunch gaye
Jahan per principal ne us group ko 1 weak ke liye suspend Kar Diya

S1-use ladke Ne Aaj achcha nahin kiya
Aaj use pata chalega ki hamara power kya hai.
S1, S2 se- jakar Apne aadami Ko bol do sham ko college ke bahar rahane ke liye

Dusri Taraf
Jab mom Mumbai aai tab unhe mere (Raj ke) bare mein yaad Aaya
Unhone A&A ko koi kaam ka bahana banakar Haridwar mahasant ke aashram me aa gai

In Haridwar
Is waqt mom mahasant Se mere bare mein poochh rahi thi

M.S-bahut jaldi aa Gaya aap
Maine aapko Kaha tha ki 18 sal Tak Raj Ko Haridwar mein rahana hoga
Lekin Ab vah 20 sal Ka Ho Gaya Hai.
2 baras pahle hi vah Haridwar se Mumbai Chala Gaya.

Mom-uska koi to contact Hoga aapke pass

Mahasant-main uska mo. no. to aapko Nahin de Sakta
Lekin Uske 2 barsh pahle ki photo jarur de sakta hu

Iske bad mahasant ne mom ko mere 18ve janmdin ki photo de diya
Jiska baad mom dobara Mumbai aa gai

In College
College ke chhutti ke baad
Jaise hi A&A college campus ke bahar Gaye
Unhen S1 aur unke gundon Ne gher liya.
S1-college mein tu bahut Hero ban raha tha.
Tumhare Karan mujhe 1 weak suspend Hona pada
Ab main tumhen duniya Se suspend kar dunga
Fir uske bare mein Apne gundo se
S1-Maro sabhi log isko yah bachana Nahin chahie

Jaise hi ek gunda Ansh Ke samne gaye
Ansh ne ek punch Uske pet par mara vah Vahi gir gaya
Isi tarah Se Ansh ne a 2-3 gundon ko mara
Lekin tabhi S1 Ne piche se ek lohe ke rod se Uske sar par mara
Jis Karan Ansh niche gir Gaya Uske bad sabhi gunde use Apne pairon se Marne lage tabhi vahan per mai aaya

In Raj side
College ke chhutti ke baad jab main campus se bahar nikala
To Dekha ek jagah bahut bhir lagi thi
Jab main vahan per Gaya to Dekha ki S1 aur kuchh gunde subah wale ladke ko maar rahe the
Jiske bad maine UN sabhi gundon ki tabiyat se dhulai Kar di
Uske baad jab use ladke ki taraf dekha to vah ka behosh ho gaya tha
Aur ek ladki Uske sar Ko aapane god mein liye ro rahi thi.
Main uss ladki se baat Kiya to pata Chala uska naam Anshu hai aur uss ladke ka naam Ansh.
Main Ansh ko Apne Car me dala tab tak aansu bhi Car mein baith gai thi
Mai Ansh ko lekar Hospital Gaya Jahan per doctor ne use dekhkar bola

Doc-thodi Si chote aai Hai main Patti kar deta hun aur kuchh davaiyan likh deta hun
Thodi der baad ise Hosh aa jaega.

Maine doctor ko payment Kiya
Uske bad Anshu Se Uske ghar ka address puch kar donon ko uske ghar le Gaya.
Iss waqt ghar mein koi nahin tha
Anshu Ne Ghar Ka tala khola fir maine Ansh ko uske kamre mein lita diya.

Mai-ab main ghar ja raha hun mujhe kuchh kam hai

Anshu-theek hai bhaiya.

Mujhe Aaj pehli Baar Kisi Ne bhaiya Kaha tha
Aur mujhe achcha bhi lag raha tha
Lekin pata nahin kyon.

Jaise hi meri Car Ghar ke bahar gai
Vaise hi mom ki Car gate ke andar aai

Jab mom Ghar Ke andar aai
Tab unhe Anshu ne aaj ke bare mein sari bate bata di
Jiske baad mom ne god ka shukriya Kiya.

Vahi dusri Taraf
S1 iss waqt Mumbai ke sabse bade gunde Ke paas tha
Aur us samay India ka sabse bada Don bhi vahan maujud tha

S1 ne uss gunde ko A&A ki Supari di
Lekin is waqt vah gunda bahut pareshan tha
Jis Karan usne mana kar diya diya

S1-Bhai main iss kam ke liye aapko munh mange paise dunga
yah meri ijjat ka sawal hai

Iske bad S1 ne uss gunday ko A&A ka picture dikhaya
Jo usne college mein khincha tha
Jaise hi Us gunday ne A&A ka picture dekha
Vah turant hi uss picture ko lekar uss don ke pass le gaya
Pic dekhkar ek Pal Ke liye to vah Don socked Ho Gaya
Lekin dusre hi per usne apna mobile nikal kar kahin call laga Diya

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update Viraj ke bare me

agar ye Viraj ke baare mein tha tab to wo aise hi pata kar sakta thaRaj ke dad se milke uske pass powers thi past jaan lene ki...to kya yaha pe koi aur aane wala hai..
nice update

 

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UPDATE-12​

Writer language
In Viraj side

Viraj ko Apne bare mein tab se yad hai Jab vah Himalaya per tha
Jab vah 10 sal Ka tha
usse pahle ki yaddasht Viraj ke pass Nahin Hai
Viraj ko Apne bachpan ke bare mein kuchh bhi Nahin Yaad hai
Use Apne Mata pita Ke bare mein kuchh bhi Nahin yaad hai
Jab vah 10 sal Ka tha tab Uske dimag mein kuchh bhi Nahi tha
Kuchh bhi Nahi
Shivay 2 chehre ke
Aur vah chehra tha Santosh Bansal aur pinki Devi ki.
Viraj ko aisa lagta tha ki vah in donon se bahut nafrat karta hai
Had Se jyada nafrat
Lekin aisa kyon use kuchh pata nahin tha.
Use apne andar bahut Sare power mahsus hua.
8 sal Tak Himalaya per practis karne ke baad
Jab Uske sabhi power jage
Tab usne Apne power ki sahayata se
Apne yaddasht ko thik karne ki koshish ki
Lekin kuchh fayda Nahin hua
Jiske bad Viraj me aapane power ki sahayata se
Un donon tasviren ke bare mein janne ki koshish ki
Tab use pata Chala Ki yah donon London ke top 1 businessman hai
London mein koi bhi unke khilaf Nahin jata Hai
Vahan ki sarkar bhi in donon Ki baat manti Hai

18 sal ki umra me Viraj Himalaya se direct London Aaya
Use Santosh Bansal aur pinki Devi ko harane ke liye ek group ki jarurat thi
Viraj ke pass ek special power tha
Vah Kisi bhi vyakti Ko dekhkar Uske bare mein sab kuchh Jaan leta tha
Viraj ne sabse pahle apna face change kiya
Fir usne London me 8 aise logon Ko select Kiya Jiske pass kuchh bhi Nahin tha
Aur use per bharosa Kiya ja sakta tha
Fir Viraj be in 8 logon Ko kuchh mahinon Tak training diya
Isi bich Viraj ne 1 clone banaya Virat
Jiska Face change tha
Un 8 logon ke training complete hone ke baad
Char logon Ko Viraj ne Virat ko de Diya
Aur char logon Ko apne pass Rakh liya
Virat ke paas Jo member Gaye vah the G1, G2, G3, G4
Aur Viraj mein apne pass Jo member rakhe vah the B1, B2, B3, B4
Virat ne G1, G2, G3, G4 ki sahayata se London ke sabhi don ko maar Diya
Aur khud vahan ka don ban gaya
Uske baad Viraj ne G1, G2, G3, G4 Ko duniya ke sabhi don ko Apne Taraf milane ke liye bheja
Aur Jo Nahin mile unhen maar Diya Gaya
Kuchh hi mahinon mein Virat world ka Good Don ban gaya.
Good Don isliye Kyunki Iske Don banne ke baad rape aur murder lagbhag kam ho gaye.
Virat ne G1 koi India G2 Australia G3 & G4 ko bhi alag alag desho mein bhej kar vahan ki jimmedari soup Diya.

Vahin Viraj underworld ke paise se business start Kiya
Aur dekhte hi dekhte London ka top 2 businessman ban gaya.
Jiske baad usne apne business ko pure world mein faila Diya
Aur B1 koi India B2 ko Australia B3 & B4 ko alag alag desh bhej kar vahan ke business Ki jimmedari Soup Diya.

Lekin Viraj ka main lakshy Santosh Bansal aur pinki Devi ko barbad karna tha.
Jiske liye unke business ko barbad karna bahut jaruri tha.
Viraj ne unke business mein Apne kuchh logon Ko bhej diya
Jo dhire dhire hai unke business ko andar Se khokhla Karne laga
Jiski jankari Kisi Ko Nahin thi

Aise hi ek din Viraj ko A&A ke birthday ka invitation Aaya
Aur vah usme Gaya
Jab Viraj Ne pahli barA&A Ko Dekha
To uski aankhon mein aansu aa Gaye
Uski dhadkan tej ho gai
Lekin use iska Karan pata nahin chala
Viraj Santosh Bansal aur pinki Devi ko darinda samajhta tha
Usne socha itne masoom aur acche bacche in darindo ke pass kyon Hai
Usne ine donon ko vahan Se nikaalne Ki sochi
Aur party ke baad ek deal Ke badle A&A ko Mr Bansal se mang liya
Lekin Mr Bansal ko laga ki vah sirf Anshu ko mang raha hai
Mr Bansal ne raato-raat A&A ko India bhej diya vahin
Jab Viraj Ko pata Chala ki Mr Bansal ne A&A ko kahin bhej diya hai
To usne pure underworld ko A&A ko dhoondne ka kam soup Diya
Aur sabhi ko A&A ka picture de Diya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Aaj thoda time mil gaya Jiske Karan ek Aur update likh diya update Dora chhota hai hai lekin details jyada hai

Next update mein ham padhenge
1 small flashback ke sath sath Kuchh twist jismein jikra hoga Kuchh new character ki

uske pass memory nahi hai apne bachpan ki...par nafrat karta hai wo Raj ke Mom dad se....
kya ye bh koi twin case hai...
Nice update

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Back to business
Ye ajeeb hi chal raha hai kuch...Dada ji ko bada atpata laga hoga ye kahai batane mein...ki tere Maa Baap ne tere liye teri bahan ko choda fir apne agle baccho ke liye tujhe
Training sahi chal rahi hai...Gussa aana lazmi tha...
Nice update

Chalo ek couple to milla iss family mein jo apne bachon ke baare mein sochta hai
Neha ke saath bahut bura hua...
Dada ji bhi guzjar gaye
VIllan bhi sahi lag raha hai....powers bhi bata di...bich bich mein writer jab apni baat kahta hai wo mast hai...
Kya mahasant ne sahi kiya...waise wo bhi to dost the Dadaji ke ...kya wo nahi jaa rahe..aur ab kya wo Raj ke maa baap wapas aayenge America se

Kya yaha pe Viraj ki power Raj ke ander aa gayi thi yaa ye kuch aur tha
Neha dukhi hogi hi...usko to aaj tak yahi lagta tha uske apne Maa Baap hai ye Chacha chachi par ye wo nahi hai...Dada ji har mahine kaha chale jaate the
next update mein Maa Baap wapas aane wale hai...saath hi bhai bahen bhi milne wale hai

kya jodi hai...aise Maa baap kaha hote hai....ab to agar Neha aur Raj ko uske Papa naa bhi pahchane to koi badi baat nahi hogi...aur wo Maa haiya kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha...emotion hi nahi inme...
Late aaye hai ye mahasay...apne hi Pita ke antim sanskar mein
nice update

Neha uski beti hai hi nahi... ye baatein jarur Neha ne hi sunni hogi...
Ab Neha ha kya hoga...usko to property mein bhi kuch nahi milla hai...
nice update

mulakat acchi rahi....raj ko yakkin ho gaya Neha pe aur usne usko business bhi saup diya...Neha ko bhi kaam mil gaya hai
nice update

Thanks for supporting Ristrcted Bhai
Otherwise
First time family type story likh Raha tha isliye character ko emotion dene me thoda mistake ho Gaya
Jiska ek bara Karan Kuch secret bhi tha Jo 1st part ke last me pata chalega
And first part ke last me Aapke Sare doubt clear Ho jaenge

Maine iss site pahli story Jo ki mere dwara likhi gai pahli story thi family base per hi thriller tha Jo ki long story thi but Bina anubhav ke likhane Ke Karan vah short story ban gai
First story link

Thriller - Dharkan

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[DAIVIK-RAJ]

aap ye otherwise kah kah ke abhut kuch skip kar chuke ho...isko band karo
thoda drama to dikhana chahiye tha...waha pe laga sayad Neha Muskan ko thoda mazza chakhaye bachpan ka badla le par nahi hua aisa...saath hi mein laga ki Raj bhi muskan se kuch puchega family ke baare mein par wo bhi nahi...
Maa Baap abhi tak nahi badle hai same attitude...
waise kya Raj ko pata hai ki Neha kon hai
romance dikha sakte the...

nice update

Brother romantic scene mujhse likhi hi Nahi jati hai
Otherwise
Maine iss thread ke first part ko short story hi Soch kar Likha tha Jis Karan Kuch character ke character Ko Nahin dikhaya Gaye
but
Second part Thora long hai like 40-45 update Tak usme Aisha koi mistake Nahi hoga

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Villain aa gaya... to Viraj businessman tha aur wahi Virat underworld mein
Anshu pe nazar gayi aur ye usko mangne laga...kya kuch khass tha anshu mein ya bas aise hi isne ye kiya..
chalo ab aage dekhte hai kya hota hai dono ke bich

Anshu ki khass baat masumiyat bholapan aur shadgi hai
Otherwise
Next update me yah clear ho gai hai ki Viraj Anshu Ke piche Kyon pada hai

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

agar ye Viraj ke baare mein tha tab to wo aise hi pata kar sakta thaRaj ke dad se milke uske pass powers thi past jaan lene ki...to kya yaha pe koi aur aane wala hai..
nice update

Because Viraj Raj ke dad Ka mind Nahi padh Sakta hai
Agar Raj & Viraj ek sath koshish kare to padh sakte hai dono because Raj ke dad ke pass bhi Kuch power hai
Kaise Kuch update me pata chal jayega
Otherwise
First part & second part ki story line difference hai aapko second part jarur Pasand aayegi

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

uske pass memory nahi hai apne bachpan ki...par nafrat karta hai wo Raj ke Mom dad se....
kya ye bh koi twin case hai...
Nice update

Brother twin case to Nahi hai but fir bhi ek Tarah se twin case hai
Raj & Viraj ke first meeting me iska jawab mil jayenge

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

aap ye otherwise kah kah ke abhut kuch skip kar chuke ho...isko band karo
thoda drama to dikhana chahiye tha...waha pe laga sayad Neha Muskan ko thoda mazza chakhaye bachpan ka badla le par nahi hua aisa...saath hi mein laga ki Raj bhi muskan se kuch puchega family ke baare mein par wo bhi nahi...
Maa Baap abhi tak nahi badle hai same attitude...
waise kya Raj ko pata hai ki Neha kon hai
romance dikha sakte the...

nice update

Villain aa gaya... to Viraj businessman tha aur wahi Virat underworld mein
Anshu pe nazar gayi aur ye usko mangne laga...kya kuch khass tha anshu mein ya bas aise hi isne ye kiya..
chalo ab aage dekhte hai kya hota hai dono ke bich

agar ye Viraj ke baare mein tha tab to wo aise hi pata kar sakta thaRaj ke dad se milke uske pass powers thi past jaan lene ki...to kya yaha pe koi aur aane wala hai..
nice update

uske pass memory nahi hai apne bachpan ki...par nafrat karta hai wo Raj ke Mom dad se....
kya ye bh koi twin case hai...
Nice update

Thanks for supporting Ristrcted brother