Fantasy Raja

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update 67


itna sun raja khush ho jata hai or yudh ke liye apni ta;war or apne dragon ko bula letahain or uspe swar ho jata hain raja ke dragon ke sath kayi dragon ate hain



tabhi asman se koi ata hain jisw dekh raja ke honthon pr muskuan aa jati hain



ab agge .......



asman se arawat hathi pr virajman hokar devton ke raja dev rja indra aa rhe the apne devta gan ke sath or sath simbha ke sathi ( simbha jo raja ki talwar ki dhar hain or talwar jise 7 mahaguru ne diya tha raja ko) yani ki sher aa rhe the asman se



nicche jamin pr utar ke devton ke raja indra dev raja ke pass jakar uske sath kandhe se kandhe milkar khade ho jate hain

raja age badh indra dev ke charan chuu unhe pranam karta hain or simbha ke sathi or devta gan ka dhanywad karta hain unke sath khade rhane ke liye


a;b raja ki sen abadh kal ki sena ke adhi ho gyi thhi



kal indrdev ko dekh kar bolta hain


kal- indra maintujhe nhi chhodunga tune mere pita ji ka wadh kiya tha or apni sena ke balbute tune haraya tha lekin is bar tumhari sen akisi kam ki nhi hahahha....... tum or tumhari ye bandar sena mujhe nhi hara sakti hain





indra dev kal ki bat sun hans kar jawab dete hai



indra dev - ye humare hath me nhi hota hain ki kon jitega or harega ye to sirf uski kabiliyat or uski sena ki himmat hi us vyakti or raja ko jitati hain



kal itna sunane ke bad akraman kar deta hai raja ki sena pr


kal ki sena kisi bukhe dher ki trh raja ki sena pr akraman kar deta hain kal apne har talwar baji sena ko age kar deta hain idher bhi indra dev ki agya pakar raja ki sena akraman dhawa bol deti hian kal ki sena pr dono paksh ki sena ek dusre ko kha jane wali najron se ek dusre pr ani shakti ka or bal prayog karte hain



jin lok ki sena gyab hokar kal ki sena ko apne talwar se unke dhar ko kat rhe the to prailok ki sena raja ki sena me jo bhi ghyal ho rhe the unhe apni healing power ki madad se unhe thik rhe the or devton ki sena apne apne khash shakti se akraman kar hre the koi apne jal ki kshakti se to koi agni ki madad se to kisi apni dharti ki shakti se unhe jala de rhe the devton ki sena me yudh kala ki sahaj or kaise yudh karna hain milkar ye deka jaa sakta tha



jis devta ke pass dhsarti ki shakti thi wo apni apni shakti se rakshokshon ko wahin rok de rhe the jise simbha ke sathi apn etej dhar danton se unhe unke dhar se alag kar de rhe the or aise hi yudh chalta jaa rha the yudh suru huye kuchh 1 pahar hi bite the ki raja ki sena ne apas me milkar kal ki sena ko kafi nukshan pahunch diye the apn i har ko dekhte huye kal ne apne kiku namak teer ko chla deta hain jisase parilok ki sena ek bar me hi murchhit ho jati hain or dhumketu apne sena ko age kar deta hain jo jinlok kki sena ko rok deta hain mahesh apni sena or hathiyar ki madad se simbha ke sathion or dragon jo upper se akraman kar rhe the unhe kaid kar deta hain ye sab hota dekh raja trija indradev sambhavi or pari maidan me kud padte hain apne sathiyon ki madad ke liye indra dev or unki sena simbha or dragon ko bachane ki jima lete hain to triaj or pari sambhavi ke sath milkar jinon ki raksha ke liye jate hain or raja parilok ki sena ko jyada nukshan na ho ilsiye wo kal ke har teer ko apne teer se kat de rha hain or kal se teeron ki yudh suru kar deta hain




aisa hi yudh apni sampati ki or badhti jaa rhe the yudh khatam khatam hote hote raja ki sena jo kal ki sen aki adhi thi ab wo ghat kar 1/4 ho gyi thi yudh ke pahle hi din raja ko kafi nukshan hota hain sambhavi or parilok ki kuchh sena apni healing power ki madad se apni chotil sena ko htik kar dete hain



udher kal ki sena ko bhi kafi nukkshan uthana pada uski sena ab adhi ho gyi thi lekin sankhya me adhik hone ke karan unhe kuchh jyada fark nhi pada


agle din ke suraj ki pahle kiran ke sath hi yudh ek bar fir prarambh ho utha is bar raja ki sena kafi gusse me apne ane wale har shaitan ko mar kar age badhte jaa rhe the raja bhi kisi kahar kitrh kal ki sena ko khatam kiye ja a rhe tha aaj aise lag rha the ki raja ki sena or raja aaj ke aaj hi is yudh ko sampat kar dena chah rhe ho




aisi bhayank garjna ko dekh kar raja ki nirdamant sena ka vadh ko dekh kar kal ki sena pichhe hatne lagti hain raja ke pass jab teer samapt ho jate hai to wo apni talwar se dragon pr swar ho kar sidhhe kal ki sena ko sampat karne laga jo bhi raja ke pass aa rha tha to raja uske ang ko katate jaa rhe tha kisi ke pair to kisi hath kisi kamar kisi sir ko hi kat de rha tha pure jung ki maidan mme kal ki sena ki chhekhe hi sunayi de rhi thi pari bhedhiya ban ( pari ek bhedhiya hain or wo raja ki mukhye shakti hain) kal ki sena ko apne daton me lekar uhnhe fadti jaa rhi thi dragon bhi asman se agg ke gole barsa rhe the jabki simbha ke sathi ab bhi kal kekakbje me the indra dev trija ke sath milkar bijliyon ki garjna kar rhe the


apne bajr se kal ki sena ko rakh me badl rhe the unhe rokne keliye mahesh ssamne aa jate hain jo sidha jakar trija se bidh jata hain trija ke sath bal yudh karne lagtahain



sham dhalte dhalte kal ki sena ab raja ki sena ki barabar ho jati hain or udher trija ant me apne hath se mahesh ke sir ko ukhad fenk deta hain jo sidh kal ke kadmo gir jata hain




raja ki sena aaj ke yudh se khush hokar jashn manane lagte hain aaj ke yudh ke pariman ke chalte aaj rat ke khane me kheer me banta hain puri sena ke liye




kheer banane ki jima devta gan ko di jati hain kul teen devta gan kheer banane lagte hainjabki nurja aaj apne hathon se raja trija pari sambhavi or indra dev ke liye khana alag banti hain




lekin ye kya achanak do devta kheer me kya dal rhe hain



dono devta agr kheer me kuchh mila rhe hain to to teesra devta kahan hain


are ye barton ke nicche kon leta huye jhain
ye kya ye to teesra devta hain ye aise kyun leta huya hain
or ye don o iski madad kyun nhi kar rhe or ye dono kya batein kar rhe hain chaliye chalkar sunte hain inki batein ye kya batein kar rhe hai




dono devta ko 1or 2 likhunga



devta 1 - hahahha kal ki yukti akhir safal ho hi jayegi


devta 2- haan kya kal ne yukti banaya hain hume khud indra dev ki sena me samlit hone ke liye kahan



( ye kya ye dono kal ki sena hain )


devta 1- haan aajunke hi kahne pr humne ye dawt rakhne ko kahan

devta 2 - or isme humne wo jadi buti mila diya hain jise kha kar ye sabhi apne apne lok me pahucnh jayenge or wahan kaid ho jayenge


devta 1- bilkul tumne sahi kahan magar indra dev rh gya agr wo raja use apne sath nhi le jata to



devta 2- fikar kyun karte ho bina sena ke ye log har jayenge or phir uske bad is pure brahmand pr sirf hamara hi kabja hoga



devta 1- hmmmm....tumne sahi kaha ... ab jaldi chalo sabhi ko khila dete hain




devta2- lekin ek bat samjh nhi ye kal un sheron ko apne kabje kyun rakhe hain unhe mar kyun nhi dete



devta1- kal nhi unhe mar sakte hain wo sher vishnu ke priye hain unhe vardan hain unhe koi nhi mar sakta hainor nhi un dragon ko koi mar sakta hai sirf kaid kiya jaa sakta hain or kal is dawat ke bad un sheron ko unke lok bhej kar kaid kar denge




devta 2- ab chalo jaldi dekho kooi aa rha hain





itna bolne ke bad jaise hi wo palte hain wahan kisi ko dekh kar ye dono dar jate hain




akhir achank kon agya wahan

 

[chaudhari]

Update 68


devta 2- ab chalo jaldi dekho kooi aa rha hain





itna bolne ke bad jaise hi wo palte hain wahan kisi ko dekh kar ye dono dar jate hain




Ab agge........





udher kal apne mahal ke jail me jata hai jhan raja ke mata or pita kaid hain unke pass pahunch kal kahta hain



kal - beti ( raja ki maa devika jo ki kal ki muh boli bhanji hain ) kal main tumhare bete ko mar dunga


santaru ( raja ke pita ) - nhi kal tum mere bete ko nhi mar sakte



kal hansta huye- main nhi mar sakta to kya huye koi to hain jo use mar denga milna chahoge us se jo tumhare bete ko mar dalega




kal- milo isase yehi hain jo tumhare bete ko mar dalenge kal tumhare bete ka akhiri din hoga



devika- mama ji kripya kar mere bete ko chhod dijiye




kal- beti tumhe ek abt pta hain tumhara beta baap bannane wala hain or main kal uske bete ko bhi mar dalunga kal ka din dono baap bete ke liye akhiri din hoga



itna bol dono hansne lagte hain


devika gusse or rote huye kahti hain - kal mere beta tujhe or isko mar dalega



kal - nhi beti wo mujhe mar sakta hain to lekin wo mujhe puri trike se nast nhi kar sakta hain



itna bol kal wahan se nikal jata hain


idher un dono ki baton ko koi devta sun lete hain or unke pass jakar jaise hi un donno rakshokshon ko marne kikosisi karta hain waise hi dono milkar us devta ko mar dalte hain or use wahin kahi uski lash ko pahle mare huye devta ke pass jakar rakh deta hain




uske bad wo dono devta pani me bhi dwa jadi buti mil dete hain or us pani ko dragon or simbha ke sathiyon ko wo jadi buti mila huya pani unhe pila deta hain or kheer ko baki devta ke sena ko khila deta hain



kheer or pani pi lene ke bad sabhi jan so jate hain or wo dono oraksh aksh raja ki gufa ki ore chal dete hain orr wahan pahunch kar whan ki har ke jaagah ki samiksha kar lete hai or wapas kal ke pass hjakar sari jankari unhe de dete hain or sath hi sath jadi buti mila huya or pani kheer sabhi ke khilane wali bat kal ko bata dete hain





idher raja or indra dev gufa me the jiske karan unhe kuchh bhi pta nhi chalta hain indra dev sarojni se milne ki ichha jatate hain jise raja siakar kar leta hain or indra dev ke sang sarojni ke pass chala jata hain sarojni indra dev ko dekh khadi ho jati hain or unke charan chhu kahti hain



sarojni- chacha ji ap yaha or yaad aa gyi main apko itne salon bad



indra dev- nhi beti main ana chahta tha lkein aa nhi saka or beti us din .....




sarojni indra dev ki baton ko katate huye man me kahti hain unke


sarojni (man me )- chacha ji unhe kuchh bhi pta nhi kripya unke samne kuchh bhi na kahe


indra dev sarojni ke man me kahte hain
indradev ( man me) - jaise meri beti ki ichhha or mujhe maf karna beti us din me tumhare pita ji ki raksha nhi kar saka mujhe maf karna

sarojni ( man me idra dev ke )- mafi mangane ki jarurt nhi hain chacha ji or maine apko maf kar diya chacha ji unhe ke samne kuchh bhi na kahe



indra dev apna sir hami me hila dete hain


raja - devraj ap achanak kyun chup hp gye



indra dev- wo main ye kah rha tha ki tridev ne apke bacche ke liye kuchh uphar bheje hain


indra dev apne sarir se trishul or chakra or ek shakti nikal sarojni ke bete ki or kar dete hain jo sarojni ke bete me sama jata hain jisase sarojni ka sarir chamkane lagta hai


indradev- beti main apne nati ko apna vjara uphar swarup dena chahta hun ise grahan karo

indradev ke sarir se vjara nikal sarojni me sama jata hain tabi wahan agni varun pawan yamraj or surye wahan aa jate hain


unhe dekh sabhi unhe pranam karte hain

sarojni pranam karne ke bad muh fer leti hain jise dekh sabhi devta ke honto pr muskan aa jati hain


agni- beti apne chachyon ko maf nhi karegi asal me hum sabhi ana chahte the kintu devraj jaise hi dharti pr apni sena ke sath pahunche the tabhi wahan kal apne sena ko bhej deta hain jisme uski sena bhi thi jiske karan hum nhi is yudh me aa sake ab bhi swarg me yudh chal rha hian or ye humara ans hain or humlog apne nati or apne beti se milne aye hain hume maf kar do beti


itna bol wo 5 dev rone lagte hain jisnhe rote dekh sarojni roti huyi 5 dev se gale mil rone lagti hain or kuchh der ro lene ke bad sarojni unse alag hoti hain


5 dev- beti hum apne nati ko vardan dene aya hun ise mana mat karna pichhli bar mana kar dia tha tune




sarojni - thik hain chacha ji main mana nhi karunga lekin itni shakti kya iske ke liye khatra n hi ban jayega



indradev- nhi beti maine uski sabhi shakti ko bandh dunga main bad me





sarojni- thik hain


uske bad agni kahte hain -
betimain apne nati ko ye vardan deta hun ki use kabhi aag or tap kabhi nukshan nhi pahunchyega




varun- main varun ye vardan deta hun ki use kabhi jal or koi taral padharth kabhi nukshan nhi pahunchyga


surya- main ye vardan deta hun ki use 7 suraj jitna tej mere nati me hoga


yamraj-- main ye vardan deta hun ki wo kahin bhi a jaa sakta hain



pawan- main vardan hun ki mere nati me pawan se bhi adhik tej chal payega or use koi hawa hila nhi sakta



indra dev - beti tumhe pata hain tridev ne use kya shakti di hain



sarojni - nhi chacha ji

indra dev- beti vishnu bhagwan ne apne chakra or sheshang ka ek ansh diye hain to bhagwan shiv ne apne trishul ka ek ansh to bhagwan brahma ne mere nati ko brahmand ki sampurn gyan diya hain or merea braj ki shakti se uska sarir vraj ke samna majbut ho jayega







5 dev- ab hume jane ki agya do beti sada khush rho


ashirwad de 5 dev wapas chale jate hian

tabhi achanak indra dev raja or baki sab ko kuchh sochte huye pate hain
indra dev- raja kuchh sochne ki jarurt nhi beti sarojni meri bhatiji hain or iske alwa main kuchh nhi bata sakta or tum sab bhi kuchh jyada na socho



abhi koi kuchh kahta tabhi pari kahti hain- main apne bete ko ware wolf ki shkti dungi jab sab kuchhh na kuchh mere bete ko de hi rhe haint o


nurja - to main jino ki shakti dungi

sambhavi- main pari ki shakti dungi


trija- main mayavi shakti dungi apne lal ko


itna kah sabhi trija pari nurja sambhavi ke sarir se kuchh shaktiyan nikal sarojni me sama jati hain



uske sarojni rja kw trf dekhti hain mano ankhon se hi kah rhi hain ki ap apne bete ko kuchh nhi denge


raja sarojni ki dil ko sam jata hain


raja - main apne bete ko apni talwar or apna dra gon deta hun
simbha aaj se tum or dragon tum bhi mere bete ke sath rhoge


dragon or simbha raja ke talwar se bahr nikal hami bharte hian



aplog ek bat bata dun ki raja ka dragon raja ke sath hi rhta hain jiske karan wo jadi buti mila huya pani nhi pita hain



Raja- devraj main kal ko kyun nhi mar sakta



Indradev- aisa isliye kyunki kal ne mahaguru ka gyan chori se liya tha jo ki mahaguru yuva ko de rhe the us gyan ko upyog yuva ne kabhi nhi kiya tha lekin kal ne kiya jiske karan agr koi use mar bhi deta hain to uska vans me ka koi vyakti use jinda kar sakta hain ya wo jise chunta hain wo lekin ye samaye pr nirbhar karta hain yaad rakhna raja tum kal ke sarir ko nasht to kar sakte ho lekin use puri tarike se khatam nhi kar sakte usko khatam karne ke liye do alag alag galaxy se janma koi vyakti hi use mar sakta hain isliye kal ko tumhare bete ke alawa koi dusra nhi mar sakta





Raja- iska mtlb sarojni dusre galaxy se hain




Indradev- haan lekin main iske alawa tumhe kuchh nhi bata sakata mujhe maf karna

uske bad indra dev apne nati ki shakti ko banddh dete hain


tabhi indradev gufa se bhar nikal gufa ko ek surksha ghera me kar dete hain ye sab karte huye man kahte hain

indra dev (man me )- beti maf karna main kisiko nhi bacha paunga



iske bad indra dev wapas gua me aa kahte hain

indra dev- sambhavi nurja or sarojni beta ap teeno is gufa me se nhi nikalna cahe kuchh bhi ho jaye



nurja- jaise apki ichha devraj




indra dev- hmmm....chalo rja ap subhah ho gyi hainyudh ka samaye ho gya hain



jaise hi pari trija or indra dev raja ke sath bahar nikltehain tp unhe ek jhatka lagta hain

 

[chaudhari]

update 69


indra dev- hmmm....chalo rja ap subhah ho gyi hainyudh ka samaye ho gya hain



jaise hi pari trija or indra dev raja ke sath bahar nikltehain tp unhe ek jhatka lagta hain


ab agge....





bahar unki sabhi sena behosh or kisi adrish janjir se bandhe huye hain jaise hi raja unhe chhune ko hota hain waise hi sabhi gyab ho jate hian rh jate hain to wahan sirf raja indra dev or pari trija ye dekh abhi koi soch pata waise hi kal ki sena samne khadi thi dhumketu ke sath jise dekh raja gussa ho jata hain or bina kisi ki pravah kare wo sidha akraman kar deta hain or dhumketu ki sena ko chirte huye dhumketu ke pass pahuch apne dragon pr swar ho use yudh karne lagte hain kuchh ksham ke bad raja apni talwar dhumketu ke sarir me utar deta hain jisase uski maot ho jait hian or raja bina kuchh soche samjhe kal ke mahal me dhakil ho jata hian jahan kal singhashan pr baitha huya tha abhi raja kuchh kar pata tabhi kal apne pichhe se suntaru or devika ko bahr nikalta hain jo ki dono ki gardano pr do shaitan le khade the unhe dekh raja ruk jata hain or usase unhe chhodne ko kahtehain


kal- ab dekhna raja kaise main tumhare samne hi tumhare bete or sabhi patni ko mar dalunga hahahah itna bol kal apni ek sena ki tukdi or kuchh kale libash wale gufa ki or chal dete hain




raja- kal mere bete ko chod do usne tumhare kya bigada hain abhi to wo apna pahla kadam tak nhi rakha hain uske badle meri jan le lo lekin use chhod do


kal(man me) - kyunki wohi hain jo mujhe or mere chacha ko mar skat ahain



kal- to thik hain abhi tum apni talwar se apne apko mar do



raja - thik hain
ye bol jaise hi raj apani talwar ko gardan ke pass le jata hain tabhi wahan raja ke mata pita apni gardan pr rakhi talwar ko khich dete hain



devika- beta mat aisa karo or mujhe maf karna beta main tumhe matr prem na de saki itna bol devika ke sath suntaru bhi mar jata hain ye dekh raja ko gussa aa jata hain or jaise hi raja apni talwar lekar khada hota haintabhi pichhe se ek vyakti raja ke pith me talwar ghusha deta hain or wo wahan se chla jata hain ( ye wahin admi tha jise kal ne bulaya tha ) kal ke pass


kal- us admi ko... chacha ji ab ap jayie main ise dekh lunga



uske bad kal ke chacha ji wahans e chale jatehain
kal raja ke pass jata hain

kal- dekha raja main akhir tujhe mar hi dala hahahhaha


raja apni akhiri sans ke sath hi uski pran pakhore ud jate hain



udher
raja ke jane ke bad indra dev pari triaj ko wahin rok dete hain taki wo gufa ki raksha kar sake

indra dev- beti maine is gufa kio surksha ghere me dal to diya hain lekin jaise raja ke beta ka janm hoga ye surkshs ghera tut jayega tum yehi raho



tabhi wahan asamn se ek devta hain
devta- maharaj jaldi chale rakshaksh jit jayenge



indra dev - lekin main kaise


tabhi pari kahti - devraj ap chale jaye main yahan dekh lungi hum dono hain



indra dev- jiti raho beti itna bol devraj rote huye unhe or baki sabhi ko ankhe band kar dekhte huye chale jate hian




jaise hi devraj wahan se jate haintabhi wahn kal ki sena ke sath wo kale libash wale pari or trija pr humla kar dete hian

is yudh me pari or trija ne milkar kal ki sena to mar diya lekin wo kale libash wale sena ko mar nhi pati or wo sahid ho jati hain unhe marne ke bad wo log gufa ki ore chal detehainlekin wo log us gufa ki surksha ghere hoenke karan ande rjaa nhi pate hain or us surksha ghere ko todne ki kosis karne lagte hain



idher jaise hi kal palat kar jane ko hota hian tabhi raja wapas jinda khada ho jata hian ( jab raja apne mani ko hasil karne gya tha tabhi wo dragon ke pasine me nahya tha jiske karan wo ek bar markar wapas jinda ho sakega )



raja - kalllllllllll....


kal jaise hi pichhe palta ta hain wahan raja ko jinda dekh kahne lagt hain


kal- tum jinda kaise ho salte hain achha huya lagta hain teri maut mere hathon hi hogi


uske bad suru ho jatihian dono ke bich yudh ye kayi dino tak chalta hain ant me raja kal ke sine me talwar utar deta hain



kal marte huye kahta hian - tum mujhe mar nhi sakte main wapas jinda ho jaunga lekin tum dharti ke logon ko kaise pap mukt karoge agr tum apni shakti se pap mukt kar diya to tum bhi jinda nhi rah payoge


itna bol kal mar jata hain



kal ke marne ke bad raja wapas dharti aa jata hain jahan raja sabhi logon ko paap karte huye dekhta hain jisase uska dil rone lagta hain or wo space me pahunch dharti ko ek surksha ghere me dal detea hainjisase koi bhi buri shakti kabhi dharti pr nhi pahunch sakti hain or nhi kabhi ye surksha gher a tut payega or uske bad raja apne shakti se dharti pr se sabhi pap ko khatam kar deta hian ye sab karne ke bad raja ka sarir dheere dheere gyab honelagta hain


raja rote huye kahte hain- mujhe maf karna beta main tumhe nhi dekh paunga or nhi tumhare sath khel paunga or mujhe maf karna sabhi pari trijaa sambhavi nurja or sarojni tum sabko samaye nhi de paya


itna bolte bolte raja rone lagta hain or dheere dheere uske sarir pura gyab ho jata hain tabhi wahan gufa me

 

[chaudhari]

na bolte bolte raja rone lagta hain or dheere dheere uske sarir pura gyab ho jata hain tabhi wahan gufa me


ab agge.....


Nurja roti huyi - didu kosis karo or jyada takat lagayie



Sarojnu- nhi ho paa rha aiiiiii maaaaaaaa


Nurja - kosis kariye meri shakti humdono ko jyada der unlogon se nhi chhipa sakti ab meri shakti kamjor pad rhi hain thoda or jor lagaye didi




Sarojni- ek jordar chheekh sarojni ke muh se niklti hain maaaaaaaaaaaa




Isi chhekh ke sath sarojni behosh ho jati hain ye dekh nurja turant pani ke chhite sarojni ke chehre pr marti hain




Sarojni hosh me ane ke bd ek jordar cheekh uske muh se niklti hain





Usi samaye sambhavi wahan ati hain or nurja se kahti hain




Sambhavi- nurja ab hum kisi bhi waqt unhe dikhne lagenge agr bache ka janm nhi ho paya to bhavishya khatre me pad jayega didi ab sab kuchh apke hathon me hain didi jaldi kijiye





Itna kah sambhavi wahan se gate ke trf chali jati hain roti huyi jiske ashoon nurja or sarojni dekh leti hai.






Abhi nurja sambhavi ko dekh hi rhi thi tabhi us pure kamre sarojni ki ek chhekh gunj jati hain or sath hi sath ek bacche ki bhi



Jaise hi nurja or sbhavi palat kar sarojni ki trf dekhti hain to pati hain. Sarojni ne ek sunder se balak ko janm diya hain




Sambhavi daudti huyi sarojni ke pass ati hain or bacche ko hath me lekar sarojni ko dekhti hain jise dekh sarojni or nurja ko is halat me bhi hansi aa jati hain kyunki sambhavi bilkul ek bacche ke jaisi harkat kar rhi thi nurja bacche ko hath me lekar




Nurja - mera baccha bilkul tum apne papa pr gye ho bahut hi natkhat koi is duniya me ane me bhi itni natak bhala koi karta hain badmas kahi ke dekho to tumne apni maa ko kitni chot pahunchai hain



Isi ke sath nurja bacche ko sarojni ke hath me de deti hain



Sarojni ke hath me ate hi baccha ronw lagata hain use chup karane ke liye .sarojni use apna ek maa ka kartbaye pura karti hain use dudh pila kar apne bacche ko dudh pilate huye sarojni rone lagti hain or badbadane lagti hain




Sarojni- dekho mere lal main kaisi abhagan ek maa hun main tumhari natkhat pan badamashiyon or tumhe badhte huye nhi dekh sakti main tumhe sine se laga kar payar nhi kar sakti mujhe maaf kar dena mera lal isi ke sath sarojni uske mathe pr chum kar rone lagti hain





Ye najara dekh nurja or sambhavi bhi rone lagti hain sarojni ko gale laga kar



Nurja- mere lal tumhari 5 maa hone ke bad bhi tumhe mamta nhi mil payega hum kya kare babu tumhe bachane ke liye hume marna hoga taki tum is duniya ko bacha sako main ek aisi abhagan hun jo main tumhari maa ki bhi raksha nhi kar sakti mujhe maaf kar dena mere bete or nhi tumhare pita ki raksha kar saki
..

Nurja- didi ye dekhiye iske chhati pr chakra bana huya hain or pith pr trishul bana huya hain

Dono wo sab dekhi hi rhi thi ki sambhavi rote huye kahti hain




Sambhavi - rote huye babu hum sab tumse bahut pyar karte hain humlog se tum nafrat nhi karna bab.........




Tabhi wahan gate tode kale libash me kuchh log aa jate hain jinki ankhe surkh lal chamak rhi thi jinke chehre ko dekh ek aam insan wahin mar jaye



Kal libash- to isne janm le hi liya khatam kar do is bache ko


Abhi log un tak pahunchte usase pahle hi nurja khafi hokar apni jadu se teeno or apne bete ko lekar wahan se gyab ho jati hain or dharti pr aa jati hain





Unke gyab hote hi wo kal libash wala vyakti bolta hain main kal libash wale vyakti ko kl likhunga



Kl- bach kar kahan jaungi hahahahaha



Isi ke sath wo apne sathiyon ke sath gyab ho jata hain or wo bhi dharti pahunch jata hain





Sambhavi kahti hain - didu ap bacche ko lekar dusre galaxy chali jaiye wahan ye log ise nhi dhundh payenge main ek portal bana deti hun





Sarojni mana karne lagti hain kahti hain main tum dono ko aise chhod kar nhi jaungi lekin nurja or sambhavi ke bahut samjhane ke bad wo man jati hain





Nurja apne gale me se ek locket apne bete ke gale me phana deti hain uske gale me ate hi wo locket uske chhati me sama jata hain.





Sambhavi ek portal bana deti hain dono nurja or sambhavi akhiri bar apne lal ko gale laga kafi der tak roti hain uske pure chehre ko chumti hain



Nurja or sambhavi - mere lal




Abhi ye log rote huye apne bete ko oyar kar rhi thi jo ki ek sakun neend le rha tha tabhi wo dono bachhe ko wapas sarojni deti ki tabhi wahan wo kale libash wale log aa jata hain or samne portal ko bana huya dekh kar us portal pe apni talwar fenk deta hain jisase achanak wo portal dheere dheere band hone lagti hain




Sambhavi ke lakh kosison ke waujud bhi wo portal ko sahi nhi kar paa rhi thi koi chara na dekh kar sarojni apne bete ko akhiri bar use pyar se dekhne ke bad use portal me fenk deti hain ye kahte huye





Sarojni- mujhe maaf karna mere bete




Portal ke ander bacche ke jate hi wo portal band ho jata hain




Teeno maa apne lal ko surkshit dekh khush hoti hain or sath hi sath unhe unke jigar ke tukde ka bichhadne ka gum bhi hota hain wo teeno khud ko sambhalti hain or un kl wale logon pr tut pdti hain

 

[chaudhari]

End 2


Teeno maa apne lal ko surkshit dekh khush hoti hain or sath hi sath unhe unke jigar ke tukde ka bichhadne ka gum bhi hota hain wo teeno khud ko sambhalti hain or un kl wale logon pr tut pdti hain


ab agge........




Nurja gusse me - main tumsab ko jinda nhi chhodungi tum sabne mujhse mera pati meri bahane trija or pari ko chhina hain dhokhe se main tumsab ko khatam kar dungi ..





Kl- hahhaaha shukr hain tumhara beta bach gya varna main tum logon ke ankhon ke samne hi uske itne tukde karta hain ki tumlog use gin nhi pati
Jayo dekh kya rhe ho humla karo ..





Isi ke sath kl ke kul 55 sathi terno se bidh jate hain




Sarojni apni mani ki shakti jagrit kar un pr teeron ki baochhad karne lagti hain lekin un teron ka koi asar un pr nhi hota haib


.
Sambhavi or nurja ki shakti ka bhi asar un sab pr nhi hota hain antatah wo teeno ek me sama jati hain.





Ek bhayankar jin ka rup leleti hain
Jin - hahahah ab nhi bachoge tumsav

Jin ke muh se un teeno ki awaj ek aath aa rhi thi



Jin un sabko hawa me utha un sab ke do tkde karne lagta hain dekhte hi dekhte jin ne kayi kl ko mar diya



Kl apne sathiyon ko marta dekh wo jin pr humla kar deta hain.


Un dono ke bich ki ladai itni jabardasht hoti hain ki wahan maujud aaspas ki jagah puri tarike se nasht ho jati hain kabhi jin us pr bhari padta to kabhi wo jin pr bhari padta





Dekhte hi dekhte jin kafi kamjor ho gya tha lekin usase kayi jyada badtar halat us kl ki ho gyi thi asal me wo kl icr 235689 ke grah ka senapati hain




Wo apni aisi halat ko dekh usne apne raja ko turant wahan bula leta hain




Kl ke sena pati ko kls likhunga





Abhi jin us kls ko jaan se mar deta ki tabhi wahan uska raja aa jata hain or jin ko ek lat mar deta hain lat itna jabardasht tha ki jin asman ko chirta huya Jupiter pr girta hain




Jab jin khada hone ki kosis jaise hi karta hain ki raja us jin pr apni lat rakh deta hain jaise hi jin lat rakhne wale shaksh ko dekhta hain to uske muh se niklta hain





Jin- tum



Raja jiska chehra hi nhi tha jiska chehra hawa me jhum rha tha uska dhad uske sarir se alag tha jiska cgehra hi bata rha tha ki wo kitna khatarnak hoga




Raja - haaa main



Jin- lekin tum to mare gye the na





Raja -maine bola tha na ki main kabhi khatam nhi ho sakta hahahahhaa





Jin- lekin jin ke kahaniyon me bataya gua tha ki tumhari maut ho chuki hain





Raja - hahahahha us kahani me puri bat nhi likhi gyi thi ab marne ke liye taiyar ho jayo



Isi ke sath raja ne apne pith se ek talwar nikla leta hain or us jin ke sine me utar deta hain





Talwar sine me lagte hi wo jin sarojni nurja or sambhavi me badal jata hain




Tabhi raja ki najar sarojni pr padti hain



Raja- tum yahan





Sarojni- haa senapati ji main rajkumari sarojni





Ye sunte hi nurja or sambhavi apna dard ko bhula sarojni ko dekhne lagti hain ankhe phade



Raja- rajkumari ahh jisko pane ke liye maine tumhare pure pariwar ko khatam kar diya tha or na jane kitne varshon tak tumhe dhundhta rha or dekho tumhare husn ne aisa mujhe deewana banaya ki maine ek jin ki tapsya ko bhang kar diya jisase usne meri aisi dur dasha kar di thi






Sarojni- rote huye -tumne kitne behrami se mere pure pariwar ko khatam kar diya
Tha mera jaan se pyara mera bhai usne tumhra kya bigada tha wo to abhi 5 sal ka hi tha usko tumne mere ankho ke samne hi mar dlaa tha or mere pita ji or maa ko sote hi unhe dhokhe se mar diya tha







Raja- tum achanak gyab kaise ho gyi thi





Sarojni- ahhhhhhh kahrate huye tumse badla lene ke liye main wahan se bhag gyi thi or ek mani ka rup le li thi jisko mere pati ne apni tapsya se mujhe paya






Raja -lekin tum mani ka rup kaise





Sarojni +- mere aradhye ne mujhe ek mani bana diye the or mujhe mere pati ke ander sama diye the




Sarojni haste huye - tum na to us samaye mujhe or mere jism ko paa sake or nhi ab hagaahaha ab tumko mera beta hi tumhe marega tumhe khatam kar is pure brahmand ko tumhare atyachar se bachayega





Sarojni apne dono hathon se sambhavi or nurja ka hath pakar rote huye kahti hain.




Sarojni- mujhe maaf karna bahna maine ye bat tum sab se chhupaye thi agr na chhupati to aisa din nhi dekhne ko milta




Nurja- nhi didi mafi mangane ki koi jarurt nhi hain ye sab to upper wale ka khel hain



Sambhavi- haan didi agr ap na chhupati to ap ke jaisi hume itna pyar karne wali didi nhi milti




Teeno rote huye ek dusre ko jamin pr hi gale lagate huye rote huye apna dam tod deti hain




Jaise hi raja sarojni ko chhune ko huya ki teeno ka sarir hawa me gyab ho jata hain




Raja chilate huye kahta hain



Raja - hahhaahha sarojniiiiiiii tum bhul gyi mujhe marne ke liye wo talwar ki jarurt padegi jo na jane kahan hain jayo senapati iske bete ko dhundh kar mar dalo






Kls- pta nhi maharaj wo portal kis grah pr khulti hain




Raja garajte huye


Raja - jayo dhundho use main apne kal ko khud apne inhi hathon se marunga hahahahhaa

 

[chaudhari]

Completed ....

 

[Akil]

Waiting for next one bro abhi toh kal aur kl ka king aur kal ka chacha zinda h so please give update waiting for it

 

[Suryaa]

phele waali kahani ki tarah y bhi bhote acchi hi
and
mai aapsi aur yaha story pdne waalo si kahana chuga ki meri bhi kuch stories es website par chle rahi hi
me bhai ki tarah expert to nahi hu....par apni taraf si try kar raha hu...so aap sabhi vo stories bhi jarur pdna aur apni comment karna na bhulna
aur jaha mujhe aur dhyan dena chahiye vo bhi batana
My threads are
1. Naam ek Rupe Anek
2. Aaladin- Naam to suna hoga
3. Boss

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.