Fantasy Raja

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Update 57




Ashram ke mukhye dwar pr mahaguru un teeno ki pratiksha kar rhe the jaise hi teeno wahan pahunchte mahaguru yuva ko apne sath le jate hain kyunki ab mahaguru ki kshiksha grahn karne ka samaye aa gya tha




Mahaguru yuva ko apne sath ashram ke pichhe wale bagiche me le jate hain jahan kisi ko bhi jana mana rhta hain





Mahaguru- vatsh aaj main tumhe 5 mahashakti kaise jagrit ki jati hain wo main aaj sikhaunga



Yuva- jo agya gurudev



Mahaguru- ab apne ankhe band kar apni 5 mahashakti ko jagrit karne ki kosis karo




Yuva wahin karne lagta hain jo mahaguru use bolte hain mahaguru yuva ko aaj kayi shakti ke bare me batate hain jise yuva dhyan se sunta hain




Aaj ki kshiksha de mahaguru yuva ke sath wapas ashrm aa jate hain unke jate hi kal jhadiyon me se niklta haiin or sab karne lagta hain jo mahaguru yuva ko bataye the





Dheere dheere samaye bitane laga mahaguru rojana yuva ko kshiksha dene lage or kal chhup kar wo sabi kshiksha grahn karne laga dekhte hi dekhte 5 sal bit gye in 5 salon me na yuva trija se mila or nhi nurja or na wo dono yuva se mil sakti thi kyunki mahaguru ki shkht hidayat thi koi bhi vyakti yuva se nhi milega jabtak yuva ki shiksha puri na ho jati




In 5 salon me nurja apne kshiksha grahn karne ke bad bhi wo ahsram me ruki rhti hain taki wo yuva se apne pyar ka ijhar kar sake or trija bina yuva ke mahal ane se mana kar deti hai dono yuva ke kshiksha samapt hone ki pratiksha karne lagti hain




Unki pratiksha pure 5 sal bad khatam hoti hain aaj mahaguru yuva ko ek aisi shakti sikhate hain jisase wo apni shakti kisi me bhi bhej sakta hain



Ye shakti ka bodh karane ke bad mahaguru yuva ko wapas ahsram bgej dete hain jaisr yuva wahan se wapas ashram jata hain use bahut hi ajib mahsus hone lagta hain wo wapas jaise hi ashram se jane ko huya ki wahan nnurja aa jati hain or wo apne pyar ka ijhar yuva se kar deti hain jise yuva nurja ko gale laga kabul kar leta hain or kal hi wo sardar ke pass jakar nurja se riti rijav ke sath humsafar bana lega



Ye sab ghatna do ankhe bahar se dekh rhi hoti hain or uske ankho me besumar ashoon aa jate hain wo wahan jyada der nhi rhta hain or wahan se wapas chla jata hain






Puri rat nurja or yuva ek dusre se apne gile sikawe dur karte hain or subhah ki pahli kiran ke sath hi pure ashram me shor gul sunayi dene lagta hain







Idher patal lok me klp chori chhipe un kale libash ke logon se milta hain or kuchh yojna bana unhe subhah hi us pr amal karne ko kahta hain

 

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Update 58



Shor gul ki awaj sun nurja or yuva jaise hi kutiya se bahar niklte hain unhe ek jagah kuchh chhhhatron ka jhund dikhta dekhne se aisa pratit ho rha tha ki wo sabhi kisi ko gher kar khade hain



Jigyasha was dono us bhid ko chirte huye age badhte hain jaise hi wo dono bhid ke bichobich pahunchte hai to unhe koi safed kapde me ek ladki khadi dikhti hain jiski peeth pr do sunhare rang ke pankh hain or hath ek chhadi jiske muhane pr kuchh gol gol jaise kuchh ghum rha hain dekhne se hi malum parta hain wo koi pari hogi abhi uski nurja or yuva ke trf thi jis karanvarsh dono uska chehra nhi dekh pate



Abhi kuchh kshan hi bite honge ki wo pari pichhe palatati hain jiska chehre pr duniya bhar ki masoomiyat ho jisko dekh kar hi achhon achhon ka man dol jaye ek pl ke liye to yuva ka bhi man dol gua lekin wo sacche dil se nurja ko pyar karta jiske karan wo wapas samanye ho jata hain





Abhi yuva uske chehre me hi khoya huya tha ki usko ek jor ka jhtka lagta hain huya yun ki nurja jo yuva ka hath pakade khadi thi wo bhagti huyi pari ke gale lag jati hain or usase uskahalchal pahunchti hain




Nurja pari ko lekar kutiya me wapas aa jati hain uske pichhe pichhe bechara mohit ho unke pichhe pichhe kutiya me dhakil ho jata hain ye hal sirf uska hi nhi ashram ke sabhi chhatr tha wosabhi kutiya ke bahar pari ke darshan ke liye lalait. Khade the


Annder pahunch nurja pari oryuva ka milap karati hain milap ke dauran pta pta chalta hain ki pari ka nam sambhavi hain or yenurja ki bachpan ki saheli hain tabhi usi samaye trija bhi kutiya me dakhil hotihain jo apni sanson ko samanye karne ki kosis kar rhi hain bat darshal ye huya ki jab trija subhah subhah yuva se milne ke liye. Jaise hi kutiya ke najdik pahunchi use kutiya ke bahar chhatron ki bhid dikhi jiske karan bhayevit ho uthi or dauti huyi kutiya ke ander chhatron ko chirte huye dhakil huyi or bar bar bhagwan se prathana kar rhi thi ki yuva sahi salamat ho ander jaise hi trija dhakil hoti hain use sabse pahle nurja dikhti hain. Jab trija charo trf apni njr ghumati hain to pati hain ki yuva khat ke dusre kone pr sahi salamat hain tab jakar trija ko jaan me jann ati hain


Jaise hi yuva ki njr us pr oadti hain wo use apne pass bulata trija yuva ke oass pahunchkar swaliye nrj se oari kev trf ishara kar oahunchti kon hain



Yuva trija ko sambhavi ke bare me or usase uska jan pahnchan karta hain aise hi teeno sham takbatein karte hain or sham dhalte hi chron jungle ate hain jahan nurja or yuva ki sadi hoti hain yuva ki sadi hote dekh trija bhauk ho uthati hain kal rat se wo sahi se neend nhi le payi kyunki rat ko wo yuva ko apne dil kebare me batane ati hain mgr jab. Wo kutia ke dwar pahunchti hain jahan nurja or yuva dono apne pyar ka ijhar kar rhe the wo jyada der ye nhi dekh payi or wo wahan se roti huyi chali gyi





Idher patal lok me klp un kale libash ke madad se patal lok pr akram kar deta hain jisme yuva ke mata pita ko markar wo patal lok ka swami ban jata hain


Usi rat ko kal or kale libash wale chori chori mahaguru ke kutiya me dhakil ho jate hain or mahaguru ko dhokhe se mar dete hain or sath hi sath pure ashram me jitne bhi log maujud the un sabhi ko maut ke ghat utar deta hain prantu pure ashram me yuva nurja or trija ko na pakar kal pagal sa ho jata hain or apni shakti se use dhundhne ki kosis karta prantu wo dhundh nhi pata tabhi achanak wahan ke watawaran me ek awaj gunje lagti hain jise sun kal ko ek sadma lagta hain

 

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Update 59





Jaisa ki ap sab ne pichhle update me dekha



Usi rat ko kal or kale libash wale chori chori mahaguru ke kutiya me dhakil ho jate hain or mahaguru ko dhokhe se mar dete hain or sath hi sath pure ashram me jitne bhi log maujud the un sabhi ko maut ke ghat utar deta hain prantu pure ashram me yuva nurja or trija ko na pakar kal pagal sa ho jata hain or apni shakti se use dhundhne ki kosis karta prantu wo dhundh nhi pata tabhi achanak wahan ke watawaran me ek awaj gunje lagti hain jise sun kal ko ek sadma lagta hain




Awaj - kal tum jis ladki ko pana chahte ho wo ab kisi or ki ho gyi hain





Kal- nhiiiiiiiiii or tum kon ho




Awaj- main tumhare sathi ( kal libash} ka senapati hun




Kal- ab main kya karu or wo kidher hain or kiske sath huyi uski sadi main usko nhi chhodunga




Awaj- wo abhi jungle me hain jahan wo tumharw dushman ke sath suhagraat mana rhi hain





Kal- gusse me - yuva ye tune thik nhi kiya main tumhe jinda nhi chhodunga

Ye bolkar kal jungle ki or jane lagta hain



Awaj- ruk jao kal us jungle me tum nhi jaa sakte





Kal- lekin kyun




Awaj- kyunki wo jungle ko mahaguru ne banaya tha or tumne unhe mar diya jiske karan tum wahan nhi jaa sakta




Kal- lekin main us ko apne hathon se marna chahta hun


Awaj- tum nhi jaa sakte to kya huya mere sathi to jaa sakte hain jayo or yuva ko yahan le ayo
Kal ab main chalta hun





Kal- lekin tum or tumhare sathi mere or mere pita ji ki madad kyun kar rhe hain





Awaj- hahhahahhaha samaye ane pr sab pta chal jayega


Itna bol wo chala jata hain

Uski agya paa uski sena jungle ki ore chali jati hain or jungle me jaise hi kadam rakhte hain waise hi sambhavi ko pta chla jata hain or wo sabhi ko yudh ke liye agah kar deti hain






Jab wo jaise hi yuva ke kutiya ke najdik pahunchti hain to wahan use unke pyar ki awaj ati hain jise sun sambhavi ke mukh pr hansi aa jati hain or unhe preshan nhi karti or trija ko sab kuchh bta deti hain or use lekar jungle ke sima pr pahunch jati hain





Jaise hi kal ki sena jungle ke sima me dhakil hoti hain to wahan use trija or sambhavi jungli logon ke sath unka samna karne ke liye taiyar khadi milti hain



Jyada waqt nhi gujra tha ki us yudhme kisi ko dekh trija ko jor ka jhatka lagta hain



Wo or koi nhi trija ka dost dhumketu hainn jise dekh trija ko jhatka lagta hain kyunki wo kal ka senapati ke taur pr aya tha



Trija- dhumketu tum kal ke senapati





Dhumketu- haan main hi hun kal ka senapati




Trija- lekin tum iske sath kyun ho tum to achhe ho or tumhare pita ji ,mere pita ji or yuva ke pita ji ek achhe dost bhi hain tum dushman ke sath kyun mile huye ho





Dhumketu- gusse me- kyunki main tumse pyar karta hun lekin tumne kya kiya mujhe us kamine yuva ke liye mujhe thukraya or sath hi sath mujhe pure gurukul me mujh pr hath bhi uthaya tha tab kal ne mujhe kaha ki wo meri madad karega tumhe pane or yuva ko khatam karne me us din main is intazar metha ki kab mainyuva ko markar tujhe apna bana lun. Dekho aaj wo dinn aa hi. Gya hahahahaha



Trija gusse me- aisa kabhi nhi hoga dhumketu ye tumhari galatfaimi hain yuva tak oahunchne se pahle main tumhe mar dalungi




Isi ke sath suru ho jata dono ke bbich yudh


Trija apne shakti se sabhi ko marne ki kosis karti hain wo kisi ko nhi mar paa rhi. Thi or sambhavi ke kisi jadu ka asar un pr ho rh tha aise hi abhi yudh suru hi nhi huya tha ki yudh samapat ki or badh gya


Abhi kuchh kshan hi bite the ki dhumketu sambhavi or trija ko bandi bana leta hain



Dhumketu sambhavi ki trf dekh kar-

Dhumketu - wah kitni khubsurat hain aaj tujhe kal ke samne pesh karunga kal mujh pr bahut khush honge or mujhe shakti ki saugat denge



Dhumketu- chalo inhe lekar tabtak tum 4 yuva ko ghashit ka lekar ayo




Abhi 4 charo apna kdm hi badhaye the ki 4 ki cheekh pure vatavaran me gunj jati hain

 

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dhumketu- chalo inhe lekar tabtak tum 4 yuva ko ghashit ka lekar ayo




Abhi 4 charo apna kdm hi badhaye the ki 4 ki cheekh pure vatavaran me gunj jati hain



ab agge......





ye kal ke 4 veer sipahi the jo uske pita ne uski rakha ke liye bheje the pranatu wo 4 kisi agni me lipate huye or unki sarir jal rhi thi



aone sathiyon ko un jalta huya dekhkar dhumketu gusse me kahte hian



dhumketu - kon hain kisi ki itni himmat ho gyi ki usne kal ki sena ko mara





dur se ek awaj ati hain
awaj - maine inhe mara


ye awaj kisi or ki nhi humare yuvraj yuva ki hain




dhumketu - achha huya ki tum khud aa gye




yuva - dhumketu tum aisa kyun kar rhe ho tum to trija or mere bachpan ke dost hain kyun tumne kal ka sath de rhe ho chhod do uska sath wo bahut kharab hai uske sth rhne se tumhe sirf nukshan hoga meri bat mano chhod do trija or sambhavi ko or baki logon ko bhi





un huya tha ladai ke dauran hi sardar yuva ke kutiya ke pass pahunch kar use sab kuchh bata deta hain jise sun yuva gussa me wahan se nikal jata hain nurja to apne pyar ko pakar ko pakar khushi khushi nind ke aghosh me sakun ki nind so rhi thi jab yuva whan pahunchta hain to whan trija or sambhavi ki dasha ko dekhar yuva gusse me ek ag ka gola bana un 4 logon pr fenk deta hain




dhumketu - yuva tum tumhare vajah se hi ye sab huya kal ne mujhe apne dost samjhkar usne apna senapati banya hain or ye dekho tumhare liye khash sena bheja hain kal ne






abhi ye dono bat hi kar rhe the sambhavi ne apne apko or trija ko azaf kara deti hain



isi ke sath ho jati hain yudh jahan yuva un kale libash ki sena ke sth akela lad rha the wahin trija or sambhavi dhumketu se ladti hain yuva har tarike se un kale libash ki sena ke sath yudh karta hain prantu un pr kisi shakti ka asar nhi hota tabhi achank wo kale libash wale ek hokar wolf ka rup le lete hain oir jaise hi wo war karne ko hota hain tabhi wahan samye ruk jata jo jaisa tha wo waise hi rh jata siwaye yuva ke




wahan achank akash me ek jyoti punj ati hain or bolti




jyoti punj- putr



yuva awaj ko bhali bhati pahchan leta hai ye awaj uske mhagur ki thi




yuva- gurdev ap kahan hain apki awaj to aa rhi hain main apko dekh kyun nhi paa rha hun



mahaguru- putr main upper ek jyotipunj ke rup me prastut hun ye meri atma hain ab mera koi sarir nhi hain mujhe mukti mil gyi hain




yuva- kya gurdev.....pr ap yun achank mujhe chhod kar kyun chale gye gurudev



mahaguru- putr tumhare jane ke bad kal chhori chhupe meri katiya me dhakhil ho gya or mere nindra ka faida utha usne meri hatya kar di . putr me yahan tumhe ek shakti mani dene aya hun jo ki 16 msniyon de bsn shsin or mujhe bhagwan ki tapsya ke falswarup mujhe bhagwan mujhe diya hain ise grahn karo or mujhe mukt karo putr
or putr iski puri shakti janane ke liye tumhe dhyan lagna padega or 4 din bad tak main is jungle ko surkshit rakh paunga putr tumhare pass keval 4 din hi hain 4 din kepasschat ye jungke aa surkshit ho jayrga or haan kisi ko is jungle bhaar nhi jane dena




yuva rote huye- ji gurudev



uske bad yuva us mani ko apne ander le leta hain or uske bad mahaguru ko pranam karta hain


mahaguru ke wahn se jate hi sab kuchh smanye ho jata hain jaise hi wo wolf us akrman karne ko hota hain tabhi yuva us mani kishakti se wahan se gayab ho jata hain or apni talwar ko yad karta hain or yuva us wolf pr akrman kar deta hain wolf n\bhi apni talwar ke sath ke sath yuva s e bidh jata hain isher in dono ke bich yudh ho rhi thi or udher abtak trija or sambhavi ne dhumketu ko har adiya or jaise hi trijadhumketu ko marne ko hoti hain waise hi dhumketu kal ke dwara fiye huye shakti ka praoyg karta hain jise trija or sambhavi ko kuchh der nhi dekh pati hain or isi ka faida utha dhumketu wahan se bhag niklta hain



idher yuva or wolf dono ke bich yudh chlata hain ant main yuva uske ek hath ko kat deta hain or sath hi sath uske ek pair ko kat deta hain isi ke faida yuva uske sar ko kalam kar deta hain or apne sathiyon ko azad kara deta hain or wapas trija or sambhavi ke pass jata hain or trija ko apne pass bulakar use apne tapsya ke bareme batata hain or unke sath waps kutiya pahuch jata hain



idher dhumketu apne har ke sath kal samne jata hain jahan kal ko sabkuchh bata deta hain

 

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Update 61

idher dhumketu apne har ke sath kal samne jata hain jahan kal ko sabkuchh bata deta hain

Ab agge ......

Idher jab dhumketu apni jaan bacha kal ke pass pahunchta hain to wo gusse me nikal jata hain himalay ki ore jahan achhai hain wahan kisi trh ki burai maujud nhi thi
Kal himalaya pahunch wahn hahakar macha deta hain or devon ke dwara banaye sabhi dharmastal ko nast kar deta hain or un sabhi guruyon ko maut. Ke ghat utar deta hain jo duniua me achhai faila rhe the prantu kal himalay ke garbh me asthit devon ke ansh ke pass nhi pahunch pata or unhe dhundhta rhta hain himalaya me





Yuva kutiya se bahar nikal 4 din tk us mani ke rahsaye ke bare me oruski shakti ke bare me janane ke. Liye tapasya me lin ho jata hain



Yuva ke kutiya se bahar nikal jane ke bad sambhavi apni jadui chhadi se soyi huyi ki ore karti hain achanak chhadi me se thande pani nikal nurja pe girne lagta hain jisase nurja hadbad kar uth. Jati hain




Nurja ko kisi chhoti bacchi ki trh hadbad kar uth kar pani pani chilate huye idher udher bhagte dekhkar trija or sambhavi pet pakar hasne lagte hain



Jab nurja ko sab majra samjh ata hain to wo sambhavi or trija ko bhagane lagti hain unhe marne ke liye lekin dono nurja ke hath nhi ati ant me teeno thak harkar khat pr let jati hain jiska nurja faida utha leti hain or unhe rashi se bandh deti or unhe ulta hawa me tang deti hain





Nurja dono ko hawa me ulta tang kar pet pakar hasne lagti hain


Nurja- ab kaisa laga meri pyari bano



Sambhavi - achha lo kar lo bat rat ko khud mauj kiye or apni jaanu sambhavi ko bhul gyi mujhe masti nhi karne di



.nurja sarmate huye- wo wooo




Sambhavi haste huye - ab dekho kaise sarma rhi hain meri lajo



Nurja sarm ke mare uska chehra lal ho jata hain


Trija- ab chhodo bhi or hume utaro nurja


Ye sun nurja dono nichhe utar deti hain

Phir hona kya tha karne lage dono milkar nurja ki tang khinchayi dono milkar sam tak nurja ko tang karte hain



Sam ko jab yuva wapas nhi lautta to wo trija ke trf dekhti hain

Nurja- wo ab tak aye nhi



Trija- yuva ne kaha tha ki wo teen ke bad ayega or hume isi jungle me rhneko kaha hain or yahanse kisi ko bhi jane nhi dene ko kaha hain



Sambhavi- prntu mujhe to jana padega na wahan mujhe parilok bhi to dekhna hain



Nurja- nhi. Tum nhi jayogi jab unhone mana kiya hainto



Sambhavi nurja ki tang khinchte huye- wah ji abhi se hi unka nam nhi le rhi wah or apni saheli ki koi ahamiyat bhi na rhi achha sila diya tune mere pyar ka

Ye bol sambhavi magarmachh ke anshoon bahane lagti hain

Nurja sambhavi ko natak ko achhi trh se samjh jati hain or uske pet me ek. Chutki kat deti hain


Sambhavi achanak huye is humle se uchhal jati hain or bgl me rakhe pani ke tub me jaa girte hain or bhing jati hain

Uski aise durdasha ko dekh kar nurja or trija ki hansi nhi rukti hain or dono hasane lagti hain




Unko haste dekh sambhavi ko gusse aajata hain or apni chhadi se un pe pani ki barsat kar deti hain jisase unki hansi chinkhon me badalgyi or sambhavi kihansi nikal gyi aise teeno apas me khelte huye kutiya me so jate hain
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Dheere dheere 3 din kaise bit gye kisi ko kuchh pta na chala or aaj wo din aa hi gya jiska intazar pura brahmand karne wala hain kya hoga kisi ko nhi pta




Teen dino me yuva ne kayi shakti ke bare me jan jata hainor tapasya se uth kutiya ki ore chal deta hain jahan teeno deviyan uska intazar kar rhi hoti hain

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In teen dino me nurja ko trija ke bare me pta chal jata hain ki wo yuva se apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hain or nurja ko ye bhi pta chal jata hain ki sambhavi bhi yuva ko chahne lagi hain





Abhi yuva kutiya ke pass pahunchta usase pahle uske smne koi akar gid jata hain jab yuva us vyakti ka chehra dekhta hai to chonk jata hain.

 

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Update 62

Abhi yuva kutiya ke pass pahunchta usase pahle uske smne koi akar gid jata hain jab yuva us vyakti ka chehra dekhta hai to chonk jata hain.



Ab agge .....


Yuva- are ap yahan or is hal me kya huya or ap kon hain


admi- yuvraj main apke rajye ke senapati ka guptchar hu




yuva - lekin apki aisi halat kisne ki?


guptachar- yuvraj senapati dokhe se mahal pr akraman kar mahal pr kabja kar liya hain or jab unhe pta chala ki main unke sadyantr ko jan gya hun to unhone mujhe marne ke liye apne sathi ko mere pass bheje the taki ye khabar maharj ko na bata sakun prantu mujhe mahal oahunchne sen pahle senaptai ke sainikon ne mujhe pr humla kar diya tha kisi trh mainunke changul se bach gya or mahal ki or chal pada maharaj ko suchit karne prantu mere wahan pahunchne se pahle hi senapati ne mahal pr kabja kar liya or unhone


ye bolte huye guptchar ruk gya achank guptchar ke rukne jane se yuva ko ghabrat hone lagti hai or wo guptchar se



yuva - guptchar kuchh bolo kya huya mata ji or pita ji thik hainn na ?




guptchar - yuvraj senapati ne rote huye.... maharaj or maharni ko mar dala unki hatya kar diya





yuva ye sunte hi wo fut fut kar rone laga wo khud ko sambhal nhi paa rha tha kuchh der abhi huya tha ki wahan sardar aa jate hain un yuva ko bilakh bilakh kar rote huye dekh kar wo yuva ke pass jakar puchhte hai or usase sant karate hain





sardar- rajkumar ap un achanak ro kyun rhe hainor ye kon hainor is halat me guptchar ki or ishara karte huye



ab yuva ki rone ki awaj siskiyon me badal gyi
yuva siskate huye kahte hain



yuva - sardar ye humare rajye ka guptchar hain or isne bataya ki senapati bagi nikala or usnae mahal pr akaraman kar diya or ..... ye bolte huye ruk jata hain or kuchh der sant rhane ke bad bolta hain usane maa or pita ji ko mar dala ye bolte huye yuva sardar ke gale lag rone lagta hain


kuchh der rone lene ke bad yuva gussa me khada hota hain or kahta hain


yuva- sardar main us senapati ko nhi chhodunga sardar nurja kahan hain or haan use or nhi kisi or ko pata chalna chahiye



achanak yuva ko trija ke pariwar ki yaaad ata hain or wo guptchar ki ore dekhkar kahta hai



yuva- guptchar mahamantri kaise hai ?


guptchar - wo mahamantri ne apne kartyve ka palan kie or mharaj ki jan bachane ke liye unhone apni pran ko nachharvar kar diya
yuvaraj ab mera waqt aa gya hain maine apne apko ye samachar pahunchane tak khud ko jinda rakha tha

ye bolkar guptchar apne pran tyag deta hain


yuva- sardar inka rajikye samn ke sath inka antimsanskar ki jaye



sardar - ji rajkumar





iske bad us guptchar ka rajikye tarike se antimsanskar kar deta deta hain or uske bad apne kutiya me pahunchta hain jahan wo teeno haste khelte dekh uske ankhon me anshoon aa jata hain yuva apne ashoon ko pochhta hain or unlog ke sath milkar batein karne lagta hain abhi ye 4 batein hi kar rhe the ki whan achanak pure kutiya me dhuyan failne lagta hain sabhi ghabra jate hain or charon taraf dekhne lagte hain dheere dheere dhuyan hatne lagta hain or wahan kisi ko fekh kar nurja or sambhavi khadi ho jati

 

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iske bad us guptchar ka rajikye tarike se antimsanskar kar deta deta hain or uske bad apne kutiya me pahunchta hain jahan wo teeno haste khelte dekh uske ankhon me anshoon aa jata hain yuva apne ashoon ko pochhta hain or unlog ke sath milkar batein karne lagta hain abhi ye 4 batein hi kar rhe the ki whan achanak pure kutiya me dhuyan failne lagta hain sabhi ghabra jate hain or charon taraf dekhne lagte hain dheere dheere dhuyan hatne lagta hain or wahan kisi ko fekh kar nurja or sambhavi khadi ho jati




ab agge......



nurja - senapati ap yaha maine pahle hi apko bataya tha na ki main ab wapas nhi aungi jinnlok





senpati- rajkumari ji ...... rote huye... rajkumari jji humare mahal pr kisi kal nam ke shaitan ne akrman kar diya th apni sena ke sath yudh 4 din se chlata rha or us yudh ko hum jit nhi sakte the jiske humare sahyta ke liye parilok se madad mangi gyi or unhone madad ki apni shkati se yudh abhi chal rha hain dono trf bhadi nukshan huya prantu ek dukh khabaru hain rajkumari




nurja thoda ghbra kar


nurja - kkya huya hainsenpati ji boliye mujhe bahut ghabrat ho rhi hain




senpati - rajkumari ji apke pitaji or parilok ke maharaj ke paran kabhi pran pakhude ho jayenge kripya kar ap dono jaldi chale





nurja or sambhavi pr kisi pahad jitna bhadi padta hain or dono fut fut kar rone lagti hainjise trija or yuvs dono ko sambhalti hianor kuchh dder ro lene ke bad nurja yuva ke trf dekhti hain




yuva - nurja sambhavi tumdono jitni jaldi ho sake jayo or sath hi trija tumdono bhi jayo taki tum dono ki sena ki madad kar skao



iske bad teeno senapati ke sath jinnlok chali jati jahan dono rajkumari apne pita ki awasta ke dekh bhavuk ho jati hain or lpstikar rone lagti hain dono ko rota dekhkar dono raja apni beti ko rota dekh unhe sant karate hainor unhe sant hone ko kahte hain or jinn lok or [arilok ko shaitan ki saya se bachane ko kahte hain or dono rajkumari ko ashirwad dono raja apne pran tayag dete hain kuchh der rone dhone ke bad dono raja apni riti riwaj ke sath antim sanskarkiya jata hain abhi dono raja ka antim sanskar hi hota hainki yudh ki ghoshn aho jati hain or dono rajkumari yudh me trija ke stah samlit ho jati hain





teeno ke jane kek bad yuva apne mahal laut jata hain apne sena ki poshak me yuva akele hi kal ke pita ji ko yudh ki chetavani apne andaj me karta hain
yuba ek teer me ek kale kapde bandh mahal ke sabse upper wale asthan pr chal a deta hain jahan wo teer kisi hawaa ki tehi se ek sena ko lagta hain jiske muh se ek cheekh nikal jati jise sun kal ke pita ji wahan pahuchta hain jahan wo aone ek sena pr yudh ki ghoshna wala kapde ke sath teer uske sarir me dhansha huya tha

ye dekh kal ke pita ji ke honthon pr ek muskan taiyar jati hai or ek sena ko apne pass bula kal ko bulane ko kahta hain




kal ke pita ji man me - akhir tum aa hi gye yuva hahahahaha

 

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ye dekh kal ke pita ji ke honthon pr ek muskan taiyar jati hai or ek sena ko apne pass bula kal ko bulane ko kahta hain




kal ke pita ji man me - akhir tum aa hi gye yuva hahahahaha


AB AGGE......




udher jin lok me nurja or sambhavi trija ke sath us yudh ke chhetr me pahunch jati jaha unhe dhumketu or ek aisa shaksh rhta hain jise dekh nurja ko vishwash nhi hota hain ki wo aise kiya hum log ke sath

wo koi or nhi nurja ka hi chachera bhai or uske dost the unhe dekh nurja apne chacha ki ore dekhti hain jab nurja chacha ki najar nurja ki ore milti hain to unki ankh sharm ke wajah se jhunk jati hain tabhi unki kano me nurja ki awaj ati hain



nurja - chacha ji bhai ne aisa kyun kiya ?


nurja ke chacha ji ko main nc likhunga taki confusion n ho



nc- beti mujhe nhi pata usne humlogon ke sath aisa kyun kiya




nurja - chacha ji ap mujhse kuchh chhup rhe hain bataiye bat kya hain



nurja ke chacha ji rote huye
nc- beti wo tumse pyar karta hain or tumse sadi karna chahta hain prantu maine or bhaiya ne use bahut samnjhaya kintu wo nhi mana or usne bagwat ki dhamki de dali is humlogon ne halake me le liya tha or aaj dekhon ... rote huye....usne bagwat kar dali mujhe maf kar do beti




nurja apne chacha ji ke pass akar
nurja - royie mat chacha ji isme apki koi galti nhi hain kripya ap mujhse maafi na mange


nc- nhi beti maine hi is saupole ko janm diya th aor main hi is saupole ko ma dalunga or isne apni mata ... rote huye ....mar dala jo isko samjhane ayi thi or main dur khada bas darska bana raha or kuchh kar na saka or bhaiya ko bhi isne dhokhe se mar dala tha
beti mujhe vachan do tum is saupole ko nhi marogi main hi ise marunga isne pure jinlok ke itihash me mera sir sharma se jhuka dala ise mar kar main apne bhaiya ka badla lunga or apne purwajon ke samne khada ho paunga





abhi nurja kuchhh bol pati usase pahle hi yudh ki bigul baj jati hain jise sun nurj ake chacha nurja ko wapas apne sthan ke pass jane ko kahte hain





bigul ke sampat hote hi yudh suru ho jata hain jo ki jinlok ke itihas ka sabse khataranak yudh hoen wala tha



kal dur khada hi pure yudh ki jnakari le rha tha tabhi uske pass uske pita ji ke bheja huya sena yuvak ki jankari le ata hain jise sunkal dhumketu ko apne pass bula leta hain or chal padta hain narak lok yuva se apne badla lene




achanak trija ko dhumketu kal ke sath jtate huye dikhta hain use kuchh sanka hoti hain prantu wo yudh ko is bich majhdar me chhod kar nhi jaa pati hain or yuvako diye huye vachan ke wajah se bhi jaa pati




idher narak lok ke wasiyon ko jab pata chalta hain ki unka yuvraj aa gya hain to wo log bhi apne yuvraj sath dene ke liye rat ke andhere me hi mahal ko par kar jate hain kya budhhe jawan yahan tak ki bachhe or aurte bhi yuva ke pass pahunch jati hain unhe dekh kar yuva ko thoda sash milta hain prantu ek yuvraj hone ke karan wo apni praja ko khatre nhi dalna chahta yuva sabhi wapas jane ke liye or yudh na samlit hone ke liye bahut samjhta hainkintu koi nagarwsi yuvako nhi chhodkar jate hain or usi ke sath yudh karna chahte hain bechara yuva bhi unki bat man leta hain




jab kal ke pitaji ko nagar khali hone ke bare me pta chalta hain to wo or krodhit ho jata hain




shubhah ki pahli kiran keksath hi yudh duru ho jata hain


chaliye thoda jankari le lete dono sena ki

kal ki sen a


kal mukhye sena ko lead kar rha tha jo ki kaarib 40 ki sankhya me the ye koi mamuli nhi ye log kale libash wale sena the or karib 1 lakh ki sena ko dhumketu lead kar rha tha or kal ke pitaji 1 hazar ghodh ehathi ki sena or talwaron ki sena ke sath yudh me samlit tha jo ki karib 4 lakh the



kal ki sena ka koi ant hi nhi dikh rha tha ye sab dekh yuva ko apni raja ki chinta hone lagi jo ki matr 400 hi the joa apne hathon me hasi thi or talwar bacchon ke hathon me dhanus or ban the jo unhone rat me hi janglu kki tahniyon se kat ka rbanaye the itni bishal sena ko dekhne ke bad jaise hi yuva apni praja ki ore dekhta hain jo ki pure nidarta ke sath kha jane wali ankho se kal ki sena ko dekh rhe the


unki josh ko dekh yuva bhi josh me aa jate hai

kal sankh baja yudh ki goshna karta hain or isi ke sath yudh suru ho jata hain




abhi kal ki sena yuva ki sena tut padtausase pahle hi asaman se indra dev ki sena apne devta gan kesth yuva ke paksh me khade ho jate hainyuva ko kahte hain ki maine apke pita ji ko vachan diye the ki hum devta unke har mushkil ghadi me khade rhnege
devton ki sena kul 4 lakh thi


yuva apni mani ki shkti se apne jaise 50 hazar yuva ko yudh me prakat karta hain


yuva ke trf se indra dev sankh nad karte hain or isi ke sath yudh suru ho jati hain


yuva apne jaise dikhne wale yuva ke sath kal ki ore badh jata hain or bich maidan me pahunch kal or kale libash (kale libash ko main kl likhunga ) teeron ki bochhar yuva kar deta hain jise apni mani ki shakti se banaye dhanus se un teeron ko apne teeron se nast kar deta hain usher indra dev apni sena ke sath kal ke pita ji ke sath yudh karne karne lagte hainindra dev apne bajr se to unki sena agg or hawa ki madad se kal ke pita ji ki sena ko nast karte jaa rhe the lekin tabhi dhumketu apne sena ke sath ek hi war me nagar ke rhne wale sabhi nagarik ko khatam kar deta hain or indra dev ki sena pr tut padta hain dhumketu ki sena pith pichhe war indra dev ki sena pr kar deta jain jisase indra dev ki sena khud ko sambhal nhi ptri hain or isase indradev ko kafi nuskahan hota hain


isi trh yudh or samayeke sath gahrata jaa rha hai

 

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dhumketu ki sena pith pichhe war indra dev ki sena pr kar deta jain jisase indra dev ki sena khud ko sambhal nhi ptri hain or isase indradev ko kafi nuskahan hota hain


isi trh yudh or samaye ke sath gahrata jaa rha hai



ab agge .......


yuva apne or mani ki shakti ko puri trh jagrit kar ke un kale libash ko khatam to kar deta prantu in sabme yuva ko bahut nukshan ho jata yuva ke clone kal ki sena ko khatam kar indradev ki madad karte hain or dhumketu ki sena ko khatam karne lagte hain kal apni har ko dekhte huye bhaukhla jata hain or wo yuva pr pith pichhe war karne lagta hain or usi shakti ka use karta hain jo mahaguru ne yuva ko sikhya tha ye war itni jabrdast hoti hain ki yuva narak lok se bahar fenka jata hain or wo brahmand me pahunch jata hain kal bhi uske pichhe yuva ke pass brahmand me pahunch jata hain or wahan dono apne talwar se yudh karne lagte hain inki yudh bina ruke chalti rhti hain kabhi talwar se talwar takrati to kabhi ban se ban aise hi ye dono ladte huye akash ganga ke bichobich pahuch jata hain jahan unhe black hole inki talwar se takrati urja ko apne ander khinch le rhi thi inki talwaron ke takrane karan kayi grah nast ho gye or sath hi sath wahan pr rhne wale log bhi



jabki dharti pr yudh sampat ho chuka tha jisme indradev apne bajr se kal ke pita ko mrityu dand de dete hain kintu is yudh se dhumketu bach kar bhag niklta hain hain



jinlok trija ne apne asuri shakti ke balbute wo jung jit to jati hain prantu is yudh me kafi ghayal ho jati jiske karan sambhavi or nurja use jinlok me hi rok leti hain is yudh ka ye parinam niklta hain ki jinlo ke kayi basinde apni ahuti de baithte hain sath hi sath parilok ke bhi




kal or yuva ka yudh kayi dino tak bina ruke chalta rha isse sabhi devta gan is yudh ko rokne ke liye indradev ke sath brahmand ke pitama ke pass is yudh ka parinam ke liye jate hain jahan pitamha kahte hainye rajan apko yuva se uske sarir ki mani ko puri jagrit kar de lekin yad rhe yuva kal ka wadh nhi kar sakta hainuska wadh kisi or ke hathon ho sakta hain ab jaldi jaiye is yudh ke karan mahadev kafi kupit ho gye hain or haan jaise hi kal ka wadh hoga waise hi yuva ki sarir se wo mani nikal jayegi



uske sabhi gan indra dev ke sath yuva ke pass pahunch us mani ke binashkari shakit ko jagrit kar dete hain jaise hi mani ki binsh kari shakti jagrit hoti hain yuva ke sarir se ek aggg ki lapte niklti jo kal ke sarir ko jala det ihain kintu uske atma konast nhi kar pati uski atma jate huye kahti main laut kar jarur aunga hahahahaha......



uski atma ke jate hi yuva ke srair se wo mani bahar nikal dharti pr jaa girti hain or uske 16 tukde ho jate hain ....




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yuva- raja yehi haintumhare pichhle janm ki khani dekho ab suraj bhi dhalne wala hain



sardar- yuvraj ab kya karna chahiye apka to rajye bhi nast ho gya hain or bahurani ( sardar nurja ko bahurani kah kar bulate hain ) or trija bhi nhi ayi hain

yuva- sardar wo aye to unhe batna ki main itne nirdosh llogon ke wadh ka papi hun or mujhe praschit karne ke liye mujhe ye sarir tayag karne padega or raja ye machhli jo tum dekh rhe ho us katori me wahi hain tumhari manjil or akhiri 16 mani ise lo



yuva- sarojni mujhse tumse kuchh akele me bat karani hain



sarojni yuva ke pichhe uske kutiya me chal deti hian


yuva - darwaje ko band kar do

sarojni darwaje ko band kar deti hain uske bad wo yuva ke pass jakar khadi ho jati hain



yuva- tumne raja ko apni sacchayi to nhi batayi na


sarojni - nhi maine unhe nhi batayie hainabtak



yuva- hmm thik hainuse kabhi pta nhi chlna chahiye ki tum kon ho




sarojni- jimain samjh gyi


yuva- thik hainab chalo or humara beta kaisa hain ?



sarojni- sharma kar- wo thodi na apka beta hain wo to raja ka beta hain



yuva- bat ek hi hain na hahhaha


ye sun sarojni or yuva hanst ehuye wahan se bahar nikaljate hain or or raja or sardar ke pass pahunch ek agni kund yuva apni shakti se taiyar karta hain or raja ke trf dekh kar


yuva- raja ek bat yad rakhna tum kal ko nhimar sakte ho uska wad kissior ke hathon hoga or sarojni aone bacche ko khyal rakhna isko bhavisye me bahut kam karne honge or main sari shakti or vidya apne is nanhe se mehman ko deta hun


itna bol yuva sari shakti or vidya sarojni ke bete ko deta hain


yuva- maine ye shakti bandh di hainjabtak ye khud ko nhi dhundh leta tabtak iski sari shakti bandhi rahegi sarojni tum apni himmat kabhi nhi harna kyunki bavishye main jo tumhare sath hoga usase tum kamjor pad sakti ho lekin ek bat rakhna tumhare garbh me ek aisa blak pal rha hain jo pure brahmand or devtayon k ouski parkop bachyega thik hain ab mainchalta hun

Raja- lekin main kyun nhi mar sakta kal ko


Yuva- samaye ane pe sab pta chal jayega ki kon kal ko marega thik hain ab main chalta hun

raja or sarojni hmm rote huye .....



yuva ke agni me jane se pahle wahan jungle ke sare janwar wahan agnikund ke pass khade ho jate hian or rote huye yuva ko vidayie dete hain


isi ke sath yuva agni kund apna hath hilate huye chla jata hain


wahan kuchh der roote hainsabhi jungli janwar rorte hainor us agni kund dekhte rhte or kuchh der bad wahan se sabhi chale jate hain


raja bhi apni 16 mani kolekar sarojni ke sath wapas present me aa jata hain jiski khabar kal or dhumketu ko ho jata hain



kal apne kaksh se kalika ke sath niklta hain ( ap sabhi ko to yad hoga ki kal kalika ke sath ek kamre me band tha )

kal- kalika tum icr 235689 grah chali jayo jahan tumhe wahan mere chacha milenge wo us grah ke raja hain



kalika - ji thik hain


kal- or haan mere ansh ko sambhal kar rkhna bas yahi jo mujhe wapas jinda kar sakta hian


kalika- ji thik hain


uske bad kalika icr 235689 grah ki or nikal jati hain
or kal chal deta hain dhumketu ke pass jahan dhumketu ne mahesh ko wapas vashna grah se bula liya tha


kal- taiyar ho jayo sabhi yudh ke lye humlog kal hi raja pr akraman karenge subhah ki pahli kiran ke sath

 

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kal- taiyar ho jayo sabhi yudh ke lye humlog kal hi raja pr akraman karenge subhah ki pahli kiran ke sath




Ab agge.......


idher raja or sarojni apne jhinjh grah ke jungle me ek gufa me the jahan raja sarojni se kahta hain


raja- ab main nurja trija or sambhavi or meri jaan pari se tumko milata hun.


sarojni thumkate huye kahti hain
sarojni - ap bahut khush ho rhe hain meri sautano se miilane ke liye



raja hadbadte huye

raja - nhi aisa nhi hain main to tumko apni jano se milana chahta hun


sarojni hanste huye

sarojni - hahahaha .....ap bahut jaldi ghabra jate hain


sarojni ki bat sun raja samjh jata hain ki wo mera popat kar rhi hain

raja - ruko main tumko batata hun popat banana kise kahte hain


itna bol raja sarojni ke pichhe bhagta hain use pakdn eke liye lekin sarojni raja ke pakad me nhi ata hain kuchh der bhagna ke bad achanak sarojni ek cheekh nikal jati hain jise sun raja turant sarojni ke pass pahunch


raja- ghbrate huye- kya huya ? kahin chot to nhi lagi ?



sarojni muskurate huye - wo..sharmate huye....wo humare ladle ne lat mari


raja- wo achha

achanak jab rraja sarojni ki kahi huyi bat pr gor karta hain to wo khush hote sarojni ko god me utha kar use gol gol ghumane lagta hain


raja- kya bola tumne humare ladle ne pahli lat mari mujhe bhi sunana hain uski awaj ko



achanak rajkumari ki awaj ati hain (राजकुमारी तो याद होगी ही समुन्दर देव की राजकुमारी ) - main to use mahsus kar rhi hun or dekh bhi rhi hun use mera ladla bilkul ap or did pr gya hain



itna sunana tha ki sarojni sharma jati hain hain uske bad raja sarojni ko niche utarta hain or apna kan ko lekar sarojni ke pet pr laga kar

raja- bolo beta papa bolo



achanak raja ko uske bete ki lat padti hain or itna hi mahsus karna tha ki raja khushi me gale laaga leta hain sarojni ko



sham ke kiran ki anth ke sath hi raja dhaya nme lin ho apne sarir se pari nurja sambhavi ortrija ko apne sarir se alag karta hain or unlogon se milata hainsarojni se or ye bhi batata hain ki sarojni mere bacche kimaa banae wali hain iske bad hona kya tha sabhi ladkiyan lag gyi raja ko dar kinar kar sarojni ki khatirdari or dekhbal karne lagi or bari brai sabhi ne apne ladle ko mahsus kiya



aisa hi ye rat raja or uski wifes ne hansi khushi waqt bitaya


subhah ki pahli kiran ke sath hi nurja or sambhavi jinlok or parilok ki sena ko yudh ke liye jhinjh grah bula leti hain or kuchh hi der me suraj ki phli kiran ke sath hi yudh suru ho jata hian aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke sath sarojni ke garbh me pal rha bacha pure 8 mahine ka ho gya


yudh kshetr me raja trija pari or sambhavi thi nurja sarojni ke sath gufa me thi jo sarojni ki dekh bahal keliye ruk gyi thi jo bahar se dekhne me koi gufa lag rha tha prantu ander se wo ek kutiya ke jaisa lagta hain



chaliye hal jan lete hain yudh kshetr ka

kal apni 4 lakh senake sath or dhumketu apne sath 50 hazar ke sth tha or mahesh nayi technology ke gadget kesath kal ki adhi tukdi jo ki kul 8 lakh senake sath thi



or idher raja ki sena me jinlok se ae kul sena 60 hazar ki thi or parilok se ayi sena kul 10 hazar thi


itni kam sena ki janssakhya ko dekh jinlok ki sena or parilok ki sena ka manobal tutne lagta hain jise dekh raja kuchh kadam age badh un sabhi sen ake age khada hota hain or kahta hain



raja- mere sathiyon main janta hun humari sena unki ek tukdi ke barabar bhi nhi hain lekin ek chij ki kami hain unme unke pass manhol or bahadur sena sena nhi hain unke pass jo apne raja or apne praja keliye or duniya ki rakshksh ke liye apni jaan ki pravah bhi nhi kartedoston or mere sath kadam sekadam milakar chalne wale hum sabhi bhalibhati jante hainki yudh me ya to har hoti hain ya jeeet lekin hum aaj yudh jine keliye nhi karenge aaj hum ladenge aone wale bacchon ke liye taki unhe koi gulami nhi sahni pade marna to sabhi ko ek din hain hi humlog marne ke dar se apne ane wale bacchon ko khatre me nhi dal sakte or nahi unka bhavisye andhkar me dal sakte hai agr ap log me se jo bhi wapas ghar jana chahte hain to isi pa; is yudh ko chhod wapas ghar jaa sakte hain


itna bol raja apne sir jhunka leta hian unlogon ka faisla ka jawab ke liye



tabhi pure yudh maidan me raja ki sena ek awaj me kahte hain


sena - hum nhi jayenge hum ladenge or jitenge bhi hum ladenge apne bacchon keliye or duniya ke liye apni ahuti khushi khsuhi de denge lekin yahan se ... danton ko piste huye ....yahan se kisi bhi shaitano ko jinnnda wapas nhi jane denge hum ladenge hum jitenge ........



itna sun raja khush ho jata hai or yudh ke liye apni ta;war or apne dragon ko bula letahain or uspe swar ho jata hain raja ke dragon ke sath kayi dragon ate hain



tabhi asman se koi ata hain jisw dekh raja ke honthon pr muskuan aa jati hain



asman se kon ata hain jise dekh raja ke honthon pr muskan bikhad jati hain janane keliye kahani ke sath bane rhe