Romance RANG TERE ISHQ KA

[AK_01]

UPDATE - 01
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ek marriage hall ke piche char ladke daru ki do bottle leke chale jate hai...
ye charo best friend hai or yaha in charo mese ladka2 ki bahan ki shadi hai marriage hall me...

Charo marriage hall ke piche aa jate hai jaha andhera tha or kisi ke aane ko bhi chance nahi tha to charo hi niche jamin par hi beth jate hai or bottle or chakna, glass, pani ki battle bich me rakh dete hai..


" yaar jaldi se peck banao.. sala bahot dino bad daru mili hai " …. Ladka4 bolta hai..

" 2 min bc itni jaldi kya hai...chala branded mal dekh kar teri lar tapakne lagti hai " ladka2 bola..

ladke3 bolta hai :- are tu batua chor ki bat chod or bottle khol be..

" haan be kholta hu..." ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan kholta hai..

ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan khol kar fir
char plastic ke glass me daru nikalta hai ..
fir charo glass ne pani bhi dalta hai or
charo ke pack ban jate hai..

ladka2,ladka3,ladka4 tino apne apne pack le lete hai..
ladka1 abhi chup chap betha tha..
to ladka2 use dekh kar bolta hai..

Ladka2 :- nishu darling tu aise kyu muh latka ke betha hai be?… le peck laga ..

ladka4 bolta hai : - breakup ho gaya iska lagta hai..

ladka4 ki baat sun kar ladka2 bolta hai :- kya hua bhai tuje?..

Ladka 1 pehle apna pack leke ek hi sans me pura gale me utar deta hai or fir bolta hai..

Ladka 1 :- are yaar vo mene ek ladki ko kal mall me dekha tha... or mujhe use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi pyaar ho gaya hai yaar..

Ladka 2 :- abe teri to pehle se Gf hai na ..?

Ladka 2 :- hain nahi be thi 15 din pehle hi breakup kar liya mene..

Ladka 2 :- kyu be kya hua tha dikhne me to achi thi fir kuch lafda hua tha kya? Or uska name Kya tha be ?.

"Ankita ".. ladka4 fatak se bola..

Ladka 3 :- tu bahot yaad rakh raha be iski Gf ka name ?

Ladka 2 :- abe tum dono chup betho...
nishu kya hua tha ankita or tere bich jo tune breakup kar liya?..

( Ladka1 koi or nahi nischal hi hai)

Ladka 1 :- Nischal ( nishu)

Ladka 2 :- Vicky ( Vicky

Ladka 3 :- Divyesh ( dhula)

Ladka : - Pankaj ( loe)


Nischal :- hmmm… to suno tum logo ko to pata
hi hoga ki is vaction me papa Dubai gaye the..
to papa mujhe apni office ki or business ki
jimedari mujh par chhod gaye the ..

To me office sambhal ne me itna busy tha ki
Ankita ko milne hi nahi gaya 20 din tak..
Mujhe time hi nahi milta tha..
papa ke bina business sambhal na bahot hard tha mere liye or uper se Ankita call pe call kar rahi thi...me call par thodi bahot bat kar leta tha..
par ankita ko to bas milna tha..

Ek din dopaher ko me office me beth kar file dekh raha tha ki Ankita ka call aaya..

Mene call receive kar liya..or jaise hi mene kan par fone lagaya to udhar se ankita itni badki hue thi ki mene jaise hi hello bola...

Nischal :- hello jaan...

Ankita :- me yaha tumhe har pal yaad karti rehti hu..1-1 min tumhe miss karti hu or call bhi me samne se karti hu tab … tumhe meri kuch chinta bhi hai ya nahi... kitne din se tum mujhe milne nahi aaye or naa hi thik se baat karte ho...me tujhe kitna pyaar hu or ek tum ho apne kam me busy rehte ho...aisa bhi kya kam karte ho jo tum mujhe milne ke liye bhi nahi aa sakte...

Ek hi sans me itna bol gay ankita ki me to sun te hi reh gaya...

Nischal :- relax baby... me abhi papa ka office ka kam sambhal raha hu is liye time nahi mil pa raha hai milne ka..

Ankita :- haan to kaam to sab karte hai mujhe bhi ghar me bahot kam hai fir bhi me hamare liye time nikal leti hu..

Nischal :- me papa ki office or business sambhal raha hu yrr..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

Nischal ( teri maa ×××××××..) :- ( gusse se chilate hue ) sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Nischal :- rona band karo or suno kal hum milte hai betway coffee shop me okk..

Anikta ka rona band ho jata hai ek min me or bolti hai :- okk jaan …byyy love you...

Or call cut ho jata hai...

Nischal ne kehna band hi kiya tha ki Leo bol padta hai..

Leo :- chipkali bacha na peda kare a andda muke andda.…

Nischal :- haan tere baap ne chipkali ka business khol rakha hai to vo roj chipkaliyo ki delivery karvata hoga jo tujhe sab pata hai bhosdk...

Vicky :- hahahahaa …..haahahaaa...hahahaaaa…. Tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?….

Tino pet pakad ke hasne lage.…
or fir thodi der me hasna band kar ke wapis peck banaya or vo pack pite hue vicky bola..

Vicky : - haan to ab aage kya hua tu coffee shop me milne gaya tha ya nahi ?

Nischal : - haan batata hu pehle pack to pi lene de...

( Story ki thodi si jhalak hai baki sab ka intro details agle update me dunga..)

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[AK_01]

UPDATE - 02​

hum charo ne pack khatam kiya or loe fir bola..

LOY : - ab aage bata coffee shop gaya tha ki nahi?

NISCHAL :- hmmm...to suno...


RESTAURANT KE UNDER...ANKITA WITH NISCHAL..


hum dono ek table par bethe the..
Restaurant bahot mast tha.. under music bhi baj raha tha romantic wala..

Ankita chup chap bethi thi kuch bhi bol nahi rahi thi to mene pucha...

NISCHAL :- kya hua tujhe kab se yuhi chup bethi ho..?..

ANKITA :- ........

NISCHAL : -(pyar se) kya hua?

ANKITA: - .............

ab mujhe gussa bhi aane laga tha ankita kuch bol nahi rahi thi is liye..

NISCHAL :- kyaa........hua....?

bc ab bhi kuch nahi boli..

NISCHAL :- ( jorr se ) kyaa huaa...?

ankita rone lagi....

UskiI rone ki avaj sun kar waiter aa gaya hamare table pe vo niche jhuk kar mera or ankita ka face dekhne laga...

NISCHAL :- kya hai be?

WAITER :- order...

NISCHAL :- to tu mere sar pe chad ke order likhega kya? ...dur khada re be.. jaa do cup chai leke aa..

ankita jo rona band kar ke hum dono ko dekh rahi thi vo fatak se boli..

ANKITA :- mujhe chai nahi pini...

NISCHAL :- to coffee order kar du..?

ANKITA :- no mujhe coffee bhi nahi pini..

NISCHAL :- baby coffee to tumhe bahot pasand hai na to fir kyu nahi pini?

ANKITA :- yuhi...mujhe nahi pini...

waiter ankita ko puchne laga

WAITER :- pasta lau mem..

NISCHAL :- coffee..

WAITER :- pasta..

NISCHAL :- tu jaa bhe do cup coffee leke aa...

waiter chala gaya or ankita boli..

ANKITA :- tune coffee kyu mangvay?

NISCHAL :- yaar vo sab chod hum kitne din bad mile hai kuch achhi bat karte hai na..

ANKITA :- teri wajah se....tune coffee kyu magvay?

NISCHAL :- kuch or baat kare?.. tumhare liye office ka sara kam chhod kar aaya hu..ab puri raat jaag kar mujhe Din ka sara kam khatam karna hoga..

ANKITA :- to isme me kya karu?....tune coffee kyu magvay?

saala mera dimang kharab ho raha tha par fir bhi me use pyar se bat karne ki sochi...

NISCHAL :- tujhe pata hai mane aaj white colour ki baniyan pehni hai..

ANKITA :- tune coffee kyu magvay?
NISCHAL : - ( bh***** ) tu aaj mast dikh rahi hai..ek dam hot...

ANKITA :- hmmm.. thank you... but tune coffee kyu magvay?

NISCHAL :- udhar dekh red top wali ladki bhi coffee pi rahi hai...

ANKITA :- ( gusse me or jorr se) tera dhyan us kamini par hai .. tune coffee kyu magvay?..

Ankita itni jor se boli thi ki restaurant ke under ke sare log hamari taraf dekh rahe the..

NISCHAL : - ( dheere se) dekh sab log hume hi dekh rahe hai to dheere bol....

ANKITA :- tumhe sab logo ki padi hai sivay mere...tune coffee kyu magvay ?

NISCHAL :- abe yaar coffee kyu mangavate hai log?...pine ke liye.. to mene bhi pine ke liye hi mangvay hogi na ..

ANKITA :- par mujhe coffee nahi pini to tune coffee kyu magvay ?

ab mera dimang kharab ho gaya tha bc .. to me fir gusse me bola..

NISCHAL : -( gusse se) tujhe coffee nahi pini to teri coffee me pi jaunga ...

ANKITA :- tujhe do do cup coffee pini thi to tune mere liye coffee mangvane ka natak kyu kiya?..

NISCHAL :- ( gusse me) tujhe coffee nahi pini to me kya karu ...ab order kiya hai to pini to padegi na..

ANKITA : - mere mana karne ke bad bhi tune coffee kyu mangvay? Me nahi piyungi to tujhe bhi nahi pini chahiye na..

NISCHAL ( gusse me table pe gusa mar ke ) ye mere baap ka restaurant nahi hai jo hume free me bethne dega

Me itni jor se bola tha ki restaurant me jo music chal raha tha vo bhi band ho gaya...

ANKITA :- ( rote hue) kitna jorr se chilaya tu...music bhi band ho gaya...

NISCHAL :- (music bajane wale waiter se) o bhai music chalu rakh..

ANKITA :- kitne dino bad hum mile hai fir bhi tum muj par itna gussa kar raha hai.. mere mana karne ke bad bhi tune coffee mangay...mujhe fikar nahi hogi kya tumhari...tumhare papa kitni mehnat karke paisa kamate hoge or tum aise paise barbad kar rahe ho...tum ne coffee kyu magvay ?..

bc mujhe ab bahot gussa aa raha tha kab se ek hi bat pe atki hai ye...tabhi waiter aa gaya ..

WAITER :- lo sir apki coffee ....

mene gusse me waiter ka coller pakad ke niche khisa or bola :- teri coffee ab daal de apni g**d ke under....kaha dalega?

WAITER :-( darte hue) under..

NISCHAL :- kaha dalega.?

WAITER :- meri g***d ke under...

mene waiter ko choda or bill ke paise table pe rakh kar jaldi nikal gaya restaurant se...
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LOY :- haahaahaahaaa.....tune coffee kyu mangvay....hahahahaaa.....

NISCHAL : - Saala mene sapne me bhi ye nahi socha tha ki coffee bhi kisika breakup kara sakti hai...

Vicky :- ( girl ki avaj nikal te hue) tune coffee kyu magvay .....hahhaaaahhaa...

NISCHAL : - abe ab pack banao bc...

LOY :- dhule fatafat char glass coffee bana...hahahaahaaa...

DHULE : - abe fatisar uska breakup ho gaya or tujhe masti chadi hai be..

NISCHAL :- abe mujhe breakup ho gaya uska gam nahi hai... vaise bhi me ankita ko pyaar nahi karta tha vo to usne mujhe blackmail karke haa bulvaya tha..tum chutiyo ko to pata hai na usne kya natak kiya tha school me..

VICKY :- haan be yaad hai...usne propose kiya tha to tune mana kar diya tha to vo school ki building par chad kar kudne ki dhamki di tab jake tune ha kaha tha..

NISCHAL :- mene haa kaha tab se mere credit card ka istemal itna hua hai ki utna to mene 10 saal me bhi nahi kiya hoga utna tin saal me ho gaya....
har bar 50 hajar...1 laakh utne ki shopping karti hai vo or to or uske sare kharche vo mere paiso se hi karti...mobile bhi mene use gift kia tha iPhone vo bhi usne samne se hi manga apni birthday par...fir activa bhi mere paiso se li usne ... saala jab papa mujhe puchte ki tere credit card se itne paisa kaha kharch karta hai...to me kuch bol hi nahi pata...saala Pareshan ho gaya tha is liye ab usase dur hi rahunga...or mene maa ko sab bata diya hai to maa ne sab handle kar liya hai....

LOY :- Abe tu aunty ko sab bate kyu bata deta hai...? Bhala aisi bate apni maa ko kon batata hai be..?

NISCHAL :- abe meri life me agar koi hai jise me koi bhi bat nahi chupata to vo meri maa hai.. tum logo ne suna hoga ki maa or beti sabse best saheliya hoti hai... or aise hi mere or maa ke bich bhi best friend wala rista bhi hai....bas fark itna hai ki me beta hu par maa mujhe beti ki tarah rakhti hai apni saheli hi manti hai... isi liye to maa ne mera nick name nishu rakha hai...

jab ankita ne school me jo nakat kiya vo bhi maine usi din maa ko sab bata diya tha..

tab maa ne bhi kaha tha ki abhi use proposal ko accpet kar le abhi use mana kar dega to fir se suicide karne ki Koshish kar sakti hai...kuch jyada problem ho to mujhe bata dena me sab dekh lungi...
Or phir mene restaurant wali bat batay maa ko to maa ankita ke ghar gay thi..
maa ne ankita ke ghar jake kya kiya ye to mene nahi pucha par tab se ankita ka ek bhi call ya msg nahi aaya hai...

VICKY :- aunty sach me tera bahot dhyan rakhti hai...jaise Tu aaj bhi 1, 2 saal ka chota bachha ho...

Abhi hum baat kar hi rahe the ki koi hume dhundte hue idhar hi aa raha tha or...vickida...kaha chala gaya...nalayak...
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TO BE CONTINUED.................

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[AK_01]

INTRO ​

☆ NISCHAL FAMILY ☆

ASHOK RATHOD (NISCHAL KE PAPA ) :- age: - 48 ..

ek business man hai or inka swabhav bhi acha hai... apne tino bacho se bahot pyar katre hai... is shaher me inki log bahot ijjat karte hai..

POOJA RATHOD ( NISCHAL KI MAA) :- age 45

Dikhne me Khubhsurat hai or bahot hi samajdar bhi hai.. ashok ko business me bhi bahot help ki hai.. jab koi bachha nahi tha tab ashok ke sath hi office jati thi or business sambhal ne me help karti thi...fir bache hone ke bad ghar par hi rehne lagi..ye bhi apne tino bacho ko bahot pyaar karti hai par sabse jyada nischal ko pyaar karti hai..

NIHARIKA ( BADI BETI) :- age 25.

Niharika ki shadi 1 saal pehle ho gay hai... ye bhi dikhne me apni mom ki tarah Khubhsurat hai..or ghar me use pyaar se sab nikki name se bulate hai..
( NEERAJ - niharika husband )

NISCHAL RATHOD ( ashok or pooja ka beta and kahani ka hero) : - age 20

Ye dikhne me bahot hi masoom or cute hai and body se fit bhi hai daily gym jata hai... abhi MBA me 2year me hai... ye bhi apni family se bahot pyaar karta hai..

AAROHI ( CHOTI BETI) :- age 19

Ye bahot sararati hai har vakt masti karti rehti hai ghar me or sabse jyada nischal ke sath masti karti hai...abhi MBBS ke first year me hai..

MANOJ RATHOD ( ASHOK KA BADA BHAI) age 55.

ye bhi ek business man hai or ashok or ye dono bhai mil kar business sambhalte hai...dono bhai ke bich bahot pyaar hai...is liye in dono ki bahot achi banti hai..business ki niv inhone hi rakhi thi..

SAROJ RATHOD ( MANOJ KI PATNI) :- age 53

thodi moti hai hai or ghar me inki ijjat sab karte hai..matlab ghar ki mukhiya hai..12th tak hi padhay ki hue hai.. is liye shadi ke bad sirf ghar hi sambhala hai..

RITESH RATHOD ( BETA) :- age 28..

ye police me ACP hai is shaher me..body me so dum fit hai pahelwano ki tarah..ye bhi apne family ko bahot pyaar karta hai or nischal or aarohi ko bahot laad karta hai.. inki shadi 2 saal pehle ho gay hai..

SAKSHI ( ritesh ki patni) age 28..

dikhne me Khubhsurat or swabhav bhi bahot achaa hai or study ne b.tech tak ki hai par shadi ho jane ke bad kahi job par nahi gay matlab saroj ne mana kiya is liye ghar KA kam hi karti hai or ghar par hi rehti hai and ritesh ki tarah ye bhi nischal or aarohi ko bahot lad karti hai..

( YE pura parivar ek hi ghar me sath rehte hai)

☆ NISCHAL FRIENDS ☆

1. VICKY PRAJAPATI

2. DIVYESH PATEL (dhula)

3. PANKAJ BHARWAD ( LOY)
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MEERA RAJPUT ( HERION) :- age 20..

bahot Khubhsurat hai .. or sath me boxing champion hai state level tak ki..

BAKI ITNRO JAB JAROORAT HOGI TAB DUNGA BICH ME JO KOI BHI AYEGA USKA..

Nice intro

 

[Naina]

waiting for next update

 

[Destiny]

abhi kaha abhi to heroine hella ki entry baaki hai

Nainaji hella ki entry hone par entry get par mai khada milunga fhulo ki mala liye aab ye us par hain fhul ki bhar utha pauegi या nehi

 

[Destiny]

are wo repeat telecast agar nischal ki jindagi mein aayi to ho gaya sab swaha TV serial dekhne ki jarurat hi nahi

Tabhi to mang ye uth rahi hain ankita hi heroin honi chahiye. Nashe wali

 

[Destiny]

INTRO ​

☆ NISCHAL FAMILY ☆

ASHOK RATHOD (NISCHAL KE PAPA ) :- age: - 48 ..

ek business man hai or inka swabhav bhi acha hai... apne tino bacho se bahot pyar katre hai... is shaher me inki log bahot ijjat karte hai..

POOJA RATHOD ( NISCHAL KI MAA) :- age 45

Dikhne me Khubhsurat hai or bahot hi samajdar bhi hai.. ashok ko business me bhi bahot help ki hai.. jab koi bachha nahi tha tab ashok ke sath hi office jati thi or business sambhal ne me help karti thi...fir bache hone ke bad ghar par hi rehne lagi..ye bhi apne tino bacho ko bahot pyaar karti hai par sabse jyada nischal ko pyaar karti hai..

NIHARIKA ( BADI BETI) :- age 25.

Niharika ki shadi 1 saal pehle ho gay hai... ye bhi dikhne me apni mom ki tarah Khubhsurat hai..or ghar me use pyaar se sab nikki name se bulate hai..
( NEERAJ - niharika husband )

NISCHAL RATHOD ( ashok or pooja ka beta and kahani ka hero) : - age 20

Ye dikhne me bahot hi masoom or cute hai and body se fit bhi hai daily gym jata hai... abhi MBA me 2year me hai... ye bhi apni family se bahot pyaar karta hai..

AAROHI ( CHOTI BETI) :- age 19

Ye bahot sararati hai har vakt masti karti rehti hai ghar me or sabse jyada nischal ke sath masti karti hai...abhi MBBS ke first year me hai..

MANOJ RATHOD ( ASHOK KA BADA BHAI) age 55.

ye bhi ek business man hai or ashok or ye dono bhai mil kar business sambhalte hai...dono bhai ke bich bahot pyaar hai...is liye in dono ki bahot achi banti hai..business ki niv inhone hi rakhi thi..

SAROJ RATHOD ( MANOJ KI PATNI) :- age 53

thodi moti hai hai or ghar me inki ijjat sab karte hai..matlab ghar ki mukhiya hai..12th tak hi padhay ki hue hai.. is liye shadi ke bad sirf ghar hi sambhala hai..

RITESH RATHOD ( BETA) :- age 28..

ye police me ACP hai is shaher me..body me so dum fit hai pahelwano ki tarah..ye bhi apne family ko bahot pyaar karta hai or nischal or aarohi ko bahot laad karta hai.. inki shadi 2 saal pehle ho gay hai..

SAKSHI ( ritesh ki patni) age 28..

dikhne me Khubhsurat or swabhav bhi bahot achaa hai or study ne b.tech tak ki hai par shadi ho jane ke bad kahi job par nahi gay matlab saroj ne mana kiya is liye ghar KA kam hi karti hai or ghar par hi rehti hai and ritesh ki tarah ye bhi nischal or aarohi ko bahot lad karti hai..

( YE pura parivar ek hi ghar me sath rehte hai)

☆ NISCHAL FRIENDS ☆

1. VICKY PRAJAPATI

2. DIVYESH PATEL (dhula)

3. PANKAJ BHARWAD ( LOY)
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MEERA RAJPUT ( HERION) :- age 20..

bahot Khubhsurat hai .. or sath me boxing champion hai state level tak ki..

BAKI ITNRO JAB JAROORAT HOGI TAB DUNGA BICH ME JO KOI BHI AYEGA USKA..

Intro

 

[Lucky..]

Na ji na ue na cholbo hamko ankita chahi to chahi

Ankita nischal ko bikhari bana degi...

 

[Lucky..]

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Thank you AK_01 bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Superb

Thanks bro