Incest Rishta

[Ella]

bahut accha likhte h aap mam,is kahaani such mien too hot or exciting, bahut badhiya ek sexy aur shandar kahaani, ekdom fadu aur garam,bahut h kamuk tharika se likha bahi, bahut maza aya.

 

[amita]

par kya sandhya ko pata hai ruchika ki bimari ke baare me ???..

kya agar wo aditya ko sachchai batakar apna rishta aage continue nahi rakh sakti ..
par aditya ne shadi ke vaade ke baare me jo kaha wo bekaar laga aisa laga usne sandhya ke character par ungali uthayi hai ..

par agar dekha jaaye to ( my pov ) galti sandhya ki bhi hai apna pati maanti hai aditya ko to saari baate ek dusre se clear karni chahiye naa ki direct gussa hokar rishta tod do ..

Aapke iss prashan ka jawab jaldi hi aage milega.
Aapka sujhav aur aapki soch kabile tareef hai.

Dhanyavad

 

[amita]

utna yaad nahi par ,,,, sabse pehle galti mohan aur ruchika ki thi jo apne baap beti ke rishte ko sabko batana nahi chahte the aur couple bankar hotel me rahe ..sandhya ne unko badhawa diya ki apna rishta wo aage le jaaye ..

aditya to ab galat hai jo itna aage aane ke baad ye baate kar raha hai ..

dekhte hai in dono jodi ka rishta aage kitna chalta hai ..

maine jo bhi kaha wo jitna maine padha hai ,,samjha hai usi ke aadhar par ..

agar kisiko bura lage to sorry ...

kahani achchi hai ,,,maine kahani ke kirdaaro ke baare me apni raay di hai ,,,naa ki writer ko bura kaha hai --- ki aap aise likho yaa waise ...

Sandhya ne vo galti tu maan li hai
Aapki baki baatein bhi sahi lag rahi hain.

Aapke itne Vishal vishleshan ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad

 

[Maximumx11]

Update 91

Sandhya 'Aap chahe ya na chhahe, lekin Main Patni hone ke nate aapki sabhi baatein manungi'
Aditya 'Aap nahin kar payengi, isliye Koi bhi vaada na karo kyounki jab Papa vapis aayenge, tab aap kya karogi'

Sandhya ke nipples ko masalne se usse dard ho raha tha, lekin Aditya ki baat se uske dil me dard hone laga aur vo dard chalak kar uski aankhon me aa gaya. Sandhya apane jajbaton par kabu pate hue apani peeth ko peeche karke Aditya ki chhathi par tika di aur apane hathon ko upar uthakar uske chehre ko pakadte hue kehne lagi 'Ab Maine apane aap ko Aapki biwi ke rup me sawikaar kar liya hai aur ab Main vahi ranhugi'

Aditya ne uske hothon par apane hothon ko rakh diya aur chusne laga, sath hi sath uski chuchiyon ki ghundiyoun ko bhi apane hathon se masalta raha aur beech beech me uski gardan par apane hothon ko le jata tu Sandhya machane lagti. Uske nitambon me Aditya ke ling ne bhi aatank machaya hua tha. Uski bhavnaon me ubaal aane laga aur vo apane aap ko samarpit karne ke liye taiyar karne lagi.

Aditya ne apane ek hath ko uske pait par le jakar uski nabhi ke paas gol gol ghumane laga. Vo apani ungali ko jab uski nabhi ke charon aur halke halke ghumata tu Sandhya ki utejana me ubal aata uar vo sisakane lagti. Ek baar tu Aditya ne apani ungali ko uski nabhi me dala aur aisa karne se uska ling neeche se uske nitambon ki darar me ghusne laga jisse Sandhya ke munh se nikala 'aauch' aur vo Aditya ki goadi se ucchal gayi. Sandhya ab kab tak hava me rehti, usse neeche aana pada aur usse laga ki jaise vo kisi bahut hi sakhat cheej par baith gayi ho. Sandhya ke munh se nikala 'uuuuu.....iiii.......iiiiiiii'

Vo fir se upar hui aur vapis neeche. Aisa lagne laga ki jaise vo Aditya ke ling par ucchal kud kar rahi ho. Aditya ne usko aisa karte dekh kaha 'ab lag raha hai ki Tum meri biwi ban gayi ho'

Sandhya 'kyoun koi shak hai kya'
Aditya 'Nahin shak tu nahi hai, lekin ek duvidha me fansa hua hun aur mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki tab kya hoga'
Sandhya 'kab'

Aditya ne uske chehre ko pakad kar uski aankhon me jhankte hue 'Aap ek baat batao jab Aapki shaadi Papa se hui thi, tab bhi aapne yeh baat sochi hogi aur apane aap se yahi vaada bhi kiya hoga ki puri jindagi unki Patni bankar rahogi'

Sandhya 'Haan bilkul kiya tha aur usse nibhaya bhi hai'
Aditya 'Jab Aap meri Patni ban rahi ho tu ye unke sath dhokha nahi hua, balki aapka apane vaade se dhokha nahi hua'

Aditya ki baat sunkar Sandhya ko ek bahut bada jhatka laga aur vo ekdam khamosh ho gayi aur uske chehre par dekhte hue uske chehre ko padhne ki koshish karne lagi aur vo sochane lagi aur apane aap se inn prashanon ke uttar dhundhne lagi

Kya yeh shaksh jisse vo pyaar karne lagi hai jindagi me uska sath de payega?
Kya ye wakai me uss pyaar ke kabil hai?

Kya ye jo prasahan pucch raha hai usko ye pucchane ka hak bhi hai?

Agar uski nazar me Main galat hun tu vo kounsa sahi hai?

Jo shakhs apani Mom ko chahe aur usse bina shaadi kiye hi uske sath khud ko Pati aur usse biwi ki tarah bartaav kare aur fir jab vo apani Mom ke kehne par hi sahi uski sharafat ka fayada uthakar uski maryada ko bhngh kare. Fir baad me uss par shak kare, kya yeh uchit hai?

Agar galti meri hai tu galti uski bhi utni hai, lekin kyounki vo Mard hai isliye vo mujhe doshi maankar neecha dikha raha hai. Kyoun?

Sandhya ke man me ekdam se halchal mach gayi aur vo sochane lagi ki kya mujhe iss Rishte ko aage badhana chahiye? Agar Aditya ko mujh par vishwas hi nahi hai tu Main kyoun uski goadi me baithi hun?

Yeh khyaal aate hi vo ek jhatke se uski goad se uṭhi aur washroom jane lagi.

Aditya ne usse pakdana chaha lekin vo washroom chali gayi aur vanha jakar vo apane aap ko rok nahi payi aur uski rulai fut gayi. Kafi der roti rahi aur apani jindagi ke bare me sochati rahi ki uski jindagi me kitne uttar chhadav aayenge?

Vo sochane lagi ki 'uski nasamjhi ki vajah se uski beti uske Pati (Mohanlal) ke sath couple bankar ghumne gayi aur vo donon Pati Patni bankar rahe. Jab mujhe iska pata laga tu bahut der ho chuki thi. Jab Doctor ne mujhe theek hone ka nuskha bataya tabhi mujhe iss baat ka pata chala tha. Uss waqt mere paas do raste the.
Pehla apane Pati se ladai karti tu ho sakta hai ki vo mere sath ho jata aur meri beti ko chhod deta. Meri beti jisme meri jaan basti thi aur agar vo usse dur ho jata tu mujhe ye andesha tha ki kahin meri beti josh me aakar aatamhatya na kar le. Aur agar aatamhatya na bhi kare tu uski shaadi me mushkil aati vo janha bhi shaadi karke jati tu kya vo apane Papa ko bhul pati? Kya vo apane Pati ki bhi ho pati? Agar na ho pati aur apani jindagi barbaad kar leti, tab kya hota?

Ab dusra rasta ye tha ki Main aatamhatya kar leti aur sab dukhon se chuttkara paa jati, lekin yeh sochkar rah gayi ki kahin meri beti (Jo meri jaan hai, jisme Main apane aap ko dekhti thi itna hi nahin balki aaj bhi dekhti hun) khud ko meri aatamhatya ka doshi maankar kucch galat na kar le, isliye Maine apane aap ko Pati se dur karna shuru kar diya. Itna hi nahin beti ke liye mauke talashti rahi ki vo (Mere Pati jo ki ab uske ho chuke the) unke sath jayada se jayada waqt bitaye'

Vo aur bhi bahut kucch sochati rahi aur jab Aditya ne washroom ke door par knock kiya tu usne apane aasuon ko dhoya aur apane aap ko theek kiya. Uska man tu nahin tha Aditya ke sath baat karne ka, lekin usne apane man ko pakka kiya aur apane andar aatamvishwas ko bharkar bahar aayi. Vo jaise hi bahar aayi tu Aditya usse dekhkar 'kya ho gaya tha'

Sandhya 'kucch nahi' aur itna kehkar vo jakar sofey par baith gayi aur iss tarah jatane lagi jaise ki usse vanha Aditya ke hone ya na hone se koi farak nahi padta.

Aditya 'Bahar chale'
Sandhya 'kisliye'

Aditya 'Main soch raha tha ki aaj ek naye tourist point par chalenge'
Sandha ne bhav shunye hokar 'Meri koi iccha nahin hai, Tumhe jana hai tu chale jao'

Aditya tu hakkabaka rah gaya. Ek tu Sandhya ne pichale ek saal se usse kabhi kisi baat ke liye mana nahin kiya tha. Uska chahe man ho ya na ho, vo uske sath jati thi, dusra vo usse fir se Tum kehkar bula rahi thi. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki ye ekdam se kya ho gaya hai.

Aditya uske paas jakar uske kandhe ko pakad kar 'kya ho gaya Jaan'
Sandhya 'Ye kya tarika hai Mujhse baat karne ka, Main koi tumhari Jaan nahin hun, jo tumhari Jaan ho usse hi bulana'

Aditya 'Abhi thodhi der pehle hi tu aapne kaha tha ki ab aap meri Patni ke rup me ho'
Sandhya 'Kab meri Tum se shaadi hui'

Aditya ke paas koi jawab nahin tha lekin partyaksh me usne kaha 'Ham donon ne hi ek dusre ko Pati Patni mana hai tu man se hamari shaadi ho hi gayi hai'

Sandhya hansne lagi 'Man se shaadi, biwi jiss par har mard apana hak samajh kar usse apana gulam samajhta hai'

Aditya ko samajh aa gaya ki usse koi galti ho gayi hai aur usne baat ko sambhalne ki koshish me vo uske paas baithkar 'Mujhse kis baat par naraj ho, agar kucch hua hai tu batao, Main usse suljhane ki koshish karunga'

Sandhya khilkhila kar hansne lagi aur usse kehne lagi 'Mr. Aditya Tum apani samasya khud suljhao aur meri chinta karne ki jarurat nahin hai, aaj se balki abhi se ham donon ek nahin balki alag alag hain'

Aditya uski baat sunkar hadbada gaya aur kehne laga 'Mujhse koi galti ho gayi ho tu I am Sorry, lekin aisa tu na karo'
Sandhya 'Galti Tumse nahin mujhse hui hai jo Main Tum jaise shaksh se pyaar kar baithi. I am Sorry aur ab Main yanha se ja rahi hun'

Aditya 'Lekin kanha jaogi'
Sandhya 'Uski tumhe chinta karne ki jarurat nahin hai'

Aditya 'Lekin......'
Sandhya uski baat ko ansuna karke apane bag ko pack karne lagi. Aditya ne usse rokne ki bahut koshish ki lekin vo nahi ruki aur vanha se nikal gayi.

Udhar Mohanlal ke yanha

Ruchika 'Aisi baat hai tu yaar le Main kucch nahi kanhungi, lekin America ka kissa tu suna'

Fir donon hansne lage aur Diya duvidha me thi ki kya bataye jisse Ruchika ko vishwas bhi ho jaye aur bura bhi na lage. Diya ne kucch sochkar kehna shuru kiya

Diya 'Jaisa ki Maine bataya tha, uske baad ham donon vanha par ek saptah ke liye ek hi kamre me Pati Patni bankar rahe.
Ruchika 'yaar mujhe tu tumse jalan hone lagi hai'

Diya 'kis baat ki jalan'
Ruchika 'Ek saptah tak ek hi kamare me Pati Patni bankar, bahut maze kiye honge'

Diya bagle jhankane lagi lekin partyaksh me 'Yaar Tum bahut Lucky ho, Vo sirf aur sirf Tumse pyaar karte hain, unke liye baki sab bekar hai'
Ruchika 'kya baat kar rahi hai, ek saptah tak tum jaisi hur pari sath me ho aur sirf sath me hi nahin balki Patni ke rup me aur Tum keh rahi ho ki kucch nahi hua'

Diya man me sochane lagi ki Ruchika ko kaya bole, Diya ke man me tu bahut kucch aa raha tha batane ke liye lekin vo ek sadhi hui baat karna chah rahi thi.

Diya 'Yaar sachi bataun, bura mat manna Main tu sach me unse pyaar karne lag gayi thi lekin vo hain ki tas se mas hi nahi hote the, unko apane nishchay se hila nahin payi. Unke man me tu sirf aur sirf tum bassi hui thi. Vo Tumse bahut jayada Pyaar karte hain aur unka pyaar dekhkar Mujhe Tumse Rashak hota tha ki kaash Tumhari jagah Main hoti'
Ruchika ne jaldi se uske munh par ungali rakhte hue 'Bhagwan na kare ki Meri jagah tum hoti. Main kabhi bhi apani pyaari si Behan se badhkar saheli ke liye mere jaisi jindagi ki kamna karun. Mera tu pata hi nahin hai ki Jinda bhi nachungi ya nahin'

Diya ne usko gale laga liya aur uske mathe ko chumte hue kaha 'Aisi ashubh baatein munh se nahin nikalte. Main apani puri jaan laga dungi aur tumhe kucch nahi hone dungi'
Ruchika 'Dekh yaar honi ko tu koi taal nahin sakta, Jo hona hai vo hokar rahega. Maine tu soch liya hai ki agar jana hai tu jana hai, lekin jitni bhi jindagi bachi hai usse hansi khushi jeena hai. Mujhe tu sirf chinta hai tu iss baat ki hai ki agar Mujhe kucch ho gaya tu inka kya hoga'

Diya 'Tujhe kucch nahin hoga'
Ruchika 'Iss baat ko yanhi chhod yaar aur bata ki America me kya kya hua'

Fir Diya usse America ke trip ki baatein (beech beech me detail me likhungi) batati rahi aur aise hi waqt beetta raha aur sham ho gayi. Un baaton se Ruchika ko ek baat ka pata chala ki Mohanlal se Diya pyaar karne lagi hai aur man hi man me usse pane ki teevar iccha bhi thi, lekin nari lajja ki vajah se kucch kar nahi payi. Vo Mohanlal ko bhai maan chuki thi aur iss naate bhi vo kucch nahi kar sakti thi.

Tabhi Mohanlal aa gaya aur Ruchika ko Mumbai shift karne ki parkriya shuru ho gayi. Mumbai aakar usse hospital me admit karwa diya. Hospital me kisi ko bhi rahne ki izazat nahin thi bas milne ke waqt hi mil.sakte the. Mohanlal ne rehne ke liye jab hotel book karwana chaha tu Suraj ne jid karke usse apane ghar par rehne ke liye majboor Kar diya.

Bahut he khubsurati kai saath likha Huya update. Bahut badhia..

 

[pie]

Most of the commentators blaming either Sandhya and Ruchika for going ahead with their illicit relationship, very few critizie Aditya for that has he not shown some resistant but more than that this guy has a rag of questions - so far in this story immature most of the time - hope will show some kind of maturity and sensibility when going to win the trust of Sandhya.

Mohanlal Ji ke baare mein kya khaoon kaafi lucky hain teen teen kanayoon ka sukh mila hain

 

[amita]

Vey detailed analysis

Rightly said

 

[kamdev99008]

no comment

 

[pie]

is puri kahani me mere anusar.....

1- mohan ne ruchika me interest ruchika ke jor dalne par lena shuru kiya...uska apna attraction sirf ruchika hi nahi kisi bhi female ki or sirf sex ke liye tha... Kyonki sandhya se use sirf yahi nahi mil raha tha...isiliye wo diya se bhi jud gaya

wo ruchika ko romantic attraction se nahi.. Jo natural care hoti hai beti ke liye.... Usi nazariye se care karta hai... Pyar karta hai

2- sandhya. ..is parivar me sari samasyaon ki jad sandhya aur uska confused dimag hai
pahle use mohan se sex karne me pareshani feel hoti thi.... Dhyan dein... Ye sirf uski feeling thi.... Ek bete ko janm dene ke bad sex me physically painful sirf mentally hi ho sakta hai physically nahi... Minor infections ke siwa

mohan ne jab ilaj ke liye kaha to uske confused dimag me ilaj se bhi dar feel hone laga....

isne khud hi jabardasti mohan ke sath ruchika ko as couple bhejna shuru kiya aur... Jab ise pata chala ki wo dono pati patni ke roop me bahar ghumne lage hain... To apne plan ke hisab se bina kisi dar ke.... Dhyan dein... Ab ijal karane mein use dar nahin laga....
Aur ilaj ke baad sahi hone par khud apne pati se duri banakar ruchika ke pas dhakelne lagi... Apne dimag me ruchika ki mansik halat ka bhram banakar

iske bad isne bete ko apne akelepan aur na jane kitni tarah ke emotional blackmail se apne sath intimate kiya.... Maa ka hak bhi aur biwi ka maja dono chahiye...aditya se commitment chahiye. Lekin apni koi commitment nahi

3- ruchika... Iska pyar sirf umr aur mahaul ki wajah se bana attraction hai.... Jise ab mahaul me badlav ke sath wo mohan ki care me convert kae chuki hai.... Isiliye wo diya ko accept kar rahi hai... Mohan ki bhavi humsafar ke taur par

4- aditya..... Ye sabse saf suthra character hai.... Maa sandhya ki sari nautanki emotional blackmail se use laga ki mohan ke hamesha dur rahne ki wajah se sandhya sexually frustrated hai... To lastly usne bhi apni umr ki demand ko dekhte huye dono ke satisfaction ke liye sexual intimacy ko accept kar liya..... Lekin commitment ki jo shartein thi sandhya ki... Aur jo possesiveness thi sandhya ki...... Use dekhte huye use sandhya se bhi commitment chahiye tha.....

aditya ka har sawal. ..sirf yahi nahi... Jab aur jitne sawal usne shuru se sandhya se kiye..... Wo adiya ki maturity dikhte hain....

lekin sandhya har sawal ko ghumane ya ruthne manane ke drama se. ..na to apni kisi baat ko samne rakhna chahti aur na hi committed hai

overall. ......
sandhya is the culprit
mohan is the victim
ruchika is emotional
adiya is matured...

Very deep analysis of each character but slightly disagree with you on Aditya.

Sandhya wants to his girlfriend but he put the condition that she has to behave as her actual girlfriend both mentally and physically, can't he says at that moment let you will be mine girlfriend mentally only

He also said that in future perhaps he may have realatiionship with other ladies while on the other hand he expect Sandhya to be always loyal to him after she accepts him as partner. No commitment from him albeit so far he didn't involve with anyone yet.....

 

[kamdev99008]

no comment

 

[amita]

The questions in Aditya's mind is valid but more difficult to answer than questioning, so Sandhya got up. Sandhya is seeing her daughter's happiness on one side and on the other she is in pain herself and today Aditya has given that pain again. I would consider it okay to blame the situation.
Sandhya knows the truth about Mohanlal and Ruchika but does Aditya know this? What has happened to Ruchika, why are you not telling us? And why does Sandhya and Aditya never go to meet her?
The update is very good but some things are not clear and I am very upset due to this. The story goes on in the present and past at the same time, so it is a bit difficult to understand. Not a single character in the story is happy, so I am not happy either. What is going on in Mohanlal's mind?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Marvelous review pointing finer points.
Well your unhappiness with regards to Character shows how deeply you are involved with the story.

What ever you feel may not be true or it may be worse than that.

Regarding Ruchika's illness is detailed in the next episode which would be posted possibly tonight.

Some of the things would be revealed slowly so that you could guess what's going to happen.

But at the end you would definitely be happy.

Thanks