Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

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Spoiler: CHARACTER GUIDELINES

Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???

 

[parkas]

Update 145

Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

Present

Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai VAJRADHIKARI bhai....
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[kas1709]

Update 145

Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

Present

Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Nice update....

 

[Shanu]

Wonderful update Bhai

 

[dhparikh]

Update 145

Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

Present

Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Nice update....

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Badhiya shuruaat Bhai....

Hello guys
Ye meri first story hai toh agar koi mistake ho toh maaf karna.

Yeh story rudra naam ke ladke ki hai jo Delhi me apne parivaar ke saath rehta hai
Ye middle-class family se belong karta hai
Ab aate hai introduction par

Dhamesh singh (dad)

Age 50
Inki ek grocery shop hai jo ghar se pass hi hai is age me bhi fit hai apne parivaar se bahut pyar karte hai
Shant aur hasmukh aur shant mijaj ke hai bacho ko freedom dene ke paksh me hai


Jab Delhi me naye the toh dukan me as a delivery boy kam kate the fir apne mehanat aur dimaag ke dam pe apni dukan kholi jisme inki help inke shop owner ne ki thi (ek baat shop owner ki shop aur dharmesh ki shop alag alag hai lekin 1 hi area me hai)
Jiske baad ek partnership par dukan kholi hai.Uske baad shop owner ko apne hisse ke paise dekar puri dukan ke ekmev owner ban gaye.


Jyoti sngh (maa)

Age 48
Ye house wife hai lekin ghar se tiffin service chalati hai taki apne pati ki ghar chalane me madad kar sake ye discipline ko le strict hai lekin ye bhi freedom dene pe believe karti hai ye bhi apne parivaar se bahut pyaar karti hai


Rudradev urf rudra (hero)

Age 19
Height 6.5 ft fair colour
blue color eye
8 pack abs
personally aisi ki college ki har ladki is pe marti thi leki ye kisi ko bhav nahi deta boleto ek dum sakht lounda
Ye filal college me hai computer science me graduation complete kar chuke hai london se aur ab apne pita ki help karne ke liye job dhoondh rahe hai london me bhi apne dam pe scholarship se padhai complete ki hai bahut intelligent hai jisse 19 saal me hi graduation complete kar li hai apne maa baap ke eklaute santaan hai isliye laad pyaar me jiddi h lekin kabhi galat baat ki jid nahi ki hai apne maa pita ki help ke liye alag alag compitition me part leta tha jisse ise price money mil sake jaha sab jitne ke liye participate karte the wohi ye paise kamane ke liye part leta tha isliye ye jyada dar arts aur games me champion ho gaya hai jaise fight, dance, singing, instrument playing(specially guitar aur mouth organ) and etc arts and game intelligent hai har exam aur compitition me first aata hai is liye sir mam ka bhi chaheta hai in short jis bhi cheej me hath dalta hai succesful hi hota hai. Iske apne kuch raaj hai jo waqt sath pata chalega

Note :- ye meri first story hai isliye iske kuch scene movie ya other stories se copy lag skte hai but belive me wo bas inspired hoga use completely copy nahi hoga.

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 1
Ek kamre me ek aurat apne bachhe ko padha rahi thi wo ldka kuch 4-5 saal ka hoga
Ting - Tong
Tabhi door ki bell baji aur ek 34-35 saal ka aadmi ghar aata hai
HUHH
Aur wo aadmi andar aake chair par baith jata hai uske chehre se hi aisa lag raha tha ki bahot thak kar aaya hai wohi ladka jab aadmi ko dekhta hai toh apni totli jaban me bolta hai
Ladka (totli juban me) :- baba, aap ko kya hua aap ka face se ice cream ki tarah pighal raha hai.
Hahaha
Jaise hi woh ladka ye bolta hai ghar me hasi ka tahaka gunj uthta hai jaha wo aadmi ke thake hue chehre par muskurahat wahi wo aurat has padti hai
Ladka (confused) :- kya hua maa aap has ku rahi ho?
Baba (muskurate hue) :- kyonki,me icecream ki tarah nahi pighal raha hu woh toh mujhe paseena aarha hai
Ladka :- paseena, woh kya hota hai aur kyu aata hai?
Maa :- jab koi jyada mehanat karta hai tab use paseena aata hai. Jaise tum jab dhup me khelte ho tab aata hai waise.
Ladka (muh fulate hue) :- matlab, baba aap akele akele khel ke aaye mujhe saath kyu nahi le gaye jao me aaapse nalaz hu.
Hahaah
Is baar maa ke saath baba bhi taha ka laga ke has pade kyuki ye baat ladke ne bade hi gusse lekin cute tarike se boli thi
Baba :- alelele mera beta mera rudra mujhse nalaz ho gaya ye lo me sorry bolta hu agar chahe toh murga banta hu (sahi pahechana woh bachha apna hero hai aur aadmi uske baba dharmesh aur woh aurat hero ki maa jyoti
Ek baat bata du abhi dharmesh delivery boy ka hi kaam karta hai)
Chair se uthkar murga bante hue
Hahahaa
Isi ek aur tahake ke saath ghar me ek 45-46 saal ka ek aadmi aata hai use dekhte hi rudra bade paap kekar daudte hue unke gale lagta hai
Aadmi jhuk kar rudra ko apni goad me bitha kar dharmesh ke paas leke aata hai aur wahi dusre chair par baith jaata hai
Aadmi (dharmesh ko dekhte hue) :- kya hua aise murga kyu bana hai
Aur phir jyoti use sab bata deti hai
Hahahahahaha
Phir ek baar sab has dete hai shwaye 1 ko chod kar wo hai apna hero kyuki use pata hi nahi tha ki ye log kyu has rahe the
Aadmi (dharmesh se) :-chal uth ja nahi toh gutne dukhne lag jayenge
Phir dharmesh uth kar baith jata hai lekin sab abhi bhi has rahe the
Rudra (confusion ke saath sab ko dekh te hue aadmi se) :- kya hua bade papa aap sab has kyu rahe hai?
Aadmi (khud ko sambhalte hue) :- kyunki aap ke papa kahi bhi kelke nahi aaye balki woh mehanat kar ke aaye hai
Rudra (masumiyat se) :- mehanat kya hoti hai?
Aadmi :- jab bhi koi bhi kisi bhi tareeke ka kaam kar te hai tab woh use karne ke rahe apni energy kharch karte hai
Wahi kharch hui energy ko mehanat karna kehte hai
Jaise hi woh aadmi bolke khtam karne ke bad rudra ko dekhta hai toh use hasi aa jati hai kyunki rudra ke face per se hi lag raha tha ki wo kuch nahi samja
Aadmi :- kya hua nahi samjha chlo koi baat nahi aasan tarike se batate hai
Jab bhi ham koi bhi kaam karte hai toh hum thak jjate hai kyu batao
Rudra (sir khujlate hue) :- kyun?
Aadmi :- jab bhi ham kaam karte hai toh kaam karne ke liye jo taakat hum lagate hai use mehanat kehte hai
Rudra (sochte hue) :- Acha, mehanat kyu karte hai?
Aadmi (muskurate hue) :- kyu ki jab ham mehanat kar te hai tab hame kuch na kuch inaam milta hai isliye us inaam ko MEHANAT KI KAMAI kahte hai
Rudra :- mehanat kis kis tarah ke hote hai?
Aadmi :- 3 tarh ki hote hai jaise sharirik mehanat, dimagi mehanat, aur bina wajah ki mehanat
Rudra :- toh maa baba konsi mehanat karte hai?
Aadmi (muskurate hue) :- aapke maa baba aur hum sharirik mehanat jyada karte hai aur dimagi mehanat kam
Rudra :- aur me
Maa :- tujhe mehanat na karni pade isilye toh hum itni mehanat karte hai
Rudra :- me bhi aaj se mehanat karunga
Baba :- nahi beta abhi aap ki mehanat karne ki umra nahi hui hai aap jab bade ho jayenge tab aap se hum bahut mehant karwayenge
Rudra :- ni mai bhi mehanat karunga woh bhi bhut saari taki mujhe bhi bahut saari kamayi mile aur me usse roj ice cream khaunga
Maa :- nahi abhi aap mehant nahi karoge abhi aap bahut chote ho
Rudra :- ni me bhi karunga
Baba :- ni beta jid nahi karte
Rudra (sad hoke) :- ok baba
Maa :- shabas beta aur yaad rakhna jab bhi aap mehant karoge tab utni hi karna jitni aap kar sakte hai agar aap apni taakat se jyada mehanat karoge toh aap bimaar pad jaoge
Rudra (sochte hue) :- toh baba bhi bimar pad sake hai na?
Maa :- haa
(Bina sawal dhyan se sune jawab dete hue)
Rudra(chintit swae me) :- nahi me baba ko bimar nahi padne dunga ab me bhi mehanat karunga baba ke saath jisse baba bimar nahi padenge aur mere saath khelenge bhi
Maa :- rudra
Abhi maa kuch bolti usse pahle hi aadmi(bade papa) bol pade
Bade papa :- are beta kisne kaha ki ap mehanat nahi karte aap toh hum se bhi jyada mehanat karte ho
Rudra (confused ke saath exited ) :- kaise
Bade papa :- woh aise ki jaise maine bataya ki aap ke maa baba dimagi mehanat kam aur sharirik mehanat jyada karte hai wohi aap sharirik dimagi mehanat dono 1 saman krte hai
Jaise ki aap school se paidal ghar aate ho phir khelne jaate ho waha daudte ho kudte ho tab aap sharirik mehanat karte ho aur jab aap padhai karte ho kuch naya shikhte ho tab aap dimagi mehanat karte ho samjhe
Rudra :- ha bade papa
Bade papa :- chlo ab sojao subah school bhi toh jana hai aur (dharmesh ko dekhte hue) ab me bhi chalta hu kal thoda jaldi dukan aana kuch kaam ki baat karni hai
Aur woh aadmi(bade papa) bhi chale jate hai aur 3 no jan bhi so jaate hai
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[Smith_15]

Update 146

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 2

Me aap ko apne ghar ke baare me bata du
Philhaal (when rudra was small kid) hum sujit uncle(bade papa) ke hi 1 ghar me rahte hai jo ki 1 rk hai jise woh as a seervents quarter ki tarah use kate hai jo ki shop ke uper hi hai
Next day
At morning

***** school
Is waqt apna rudra school ke gate per hi tha lekin uske dimaag me abhi kal raat me jo uske bade papa ne gyan dia tha wohi chal raha tha wohi sochte sochte woh kab class me pahuch gaya use hi pata ni chala use tab hosh aaya jab wo kisi takra ke jamin pe gir gaya
Aadmi :- kya chote miya kidhar?
Rudra :- sorry sir woh me class ja raha tha
Sir :- lekin tumhara class toh piche chut gaya toh idher kidher
Rudra :- sorry sir me abhi class me jata hu
Jaise hi rudra jane ke liye palat ta hai waise hi sir use rok dete hai
Sir :- ruko class jake kuch fayda nahi hai
Ruudra :- kyun sir
Sir :- kyunki aap 10 min late ho aur saare students ground me khel rahe hai
( is school me 2 ground hai 1 bahar ki taraf jise o.g. Kahenge or dusra ground andar ki taraf hai jise i.g. Kahenge)
Rudra :- matlab
Sir :- matlab ye ki aaj first or second mera lecture hai yani P. E. ka (physical education) isliye sab i.g. me hai samjhe pyaare
Sir (santosh patil, P. E. ke sir hai saare students ke favorite bhi hai kyunki iske 2 rason hai 1. Ye bahut friendly way se students ke saath baat karte hai on 2. Inka subject P. E. jisme sab ground me khelkud karte hai aur khelna kis student ko pasand nahi hota)
Rudra :- sorry sir
Sir :- sorry nahi ye batao kaja gum ho ki na class ka pata chala na saamne se chalte aaye insaan ka
Rudra :- sorry sir woh dhyan nahi tha
Sir :- wohi toh puch raha hu dhyan kaha tha tumhara
Rudra :- sir woh (phir rudra sir ko kal ki saari baat batata hai)
Sir(muskurate hue) :- acha toh janab ko jeevan ka sabse bada gyan mil chuka hai
Rudra :- matlab sir
Sir :- woh mai tumhe phir kabhi bataunga
Rudra :- ok sir
Sir :- ab yeh batao ki tum soch kya rahe the
Rudra(sad hoke) :- yehi sir ki maa baba mere liye itni mehnat kate hai ki kahi unki tabyet na kjarab ho jaye
Sir :- acha ye baat hai toh tum unki madad kyu nahi karte
Rudra :- me kaise unhone mana kia hai mehanat karne se woh kahte hai ki me abhi bahut chota hu
Sir :- hmm chote toh tum ho usme mai kuch nahi kar sakta (kuch sochte hue) ha lekin ek idea hai jisse tum apne maa baba ki madad kar sakte ho
Rudra :- (excited tone me) sach sir
Sir :- ha me tumse jhuth kyu bolunga
Rudra :- bataiye na sir kya idea hai
Sir :- toh suno

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Wohi dusri taraf dukan me lunch time me

Bade papa (s.o /shop owner) :- aa bhai dharmesh khana kha le
Baba :- ha abhi ye delivery karke aata hu phir kha lunga
S.O. :- are tu pahle khana kha kaam toh tu 2 bando ka kaam akele karta hai vaisa khana bhi kha nahi toh beemar pad jayega
Baba :- acha theek hai hath muh dhoke aata hu
S. O. :- ha jaldi aa me bike chalu karta hu
(me aapko bata du dupehar 2 se 4 shop band hoti hai us me hi aaram aur lunch ka bhi time hota hai)
Thodi der baad
S. O.:- Sach bhabhi bada mast khana banati ho aap
Maa :- thank you bhaiya
S. O. :- are isme thanks ki kya baat jo sach hai woh sach hai
Baba :- bahiya aap kal raat bol rahe the kuch kaam hai karke
S. O. :- ha mujhe apne nahi tere baare me baat karni hai
Baba :- matlab
S. O. :- matlab ravi(baba ke dost jinki Electronic ki dukan hai usi area me) ne sab bata diya hai ki tu bhi apni dukan kholna chahta hai
Baba :- maaf karna bhaiya mujhe pata tha aapko ye sun kar dukh hoga ki aapne
Jiski itni help ki wohi aapke khilaf competition me aana chahta hai
S. O. :- are tu pagal hai kya tu mere chote bhai jaisa hai yaad hai maine jab aapne pure pariwar ko kho diya toh tum 3no hi toh the jinhone mujhe tutne se bachaya nahi toh me kab ka tut kar bikhar chuka hota ek taraf tum log ho jo paraye hote hue bhi mujhe apno se badhkar maan dete ho aur ek mera woh chota beta balveer…
Abhi S. O. Kuch bol pate tabhi maa bol padi
Maa :- yeh kya kah rahe aap mai aapko bhaiya bhulati ya rakhi bandhti hu woh isliye thodi ki aap mere pati ke seth ho woh isliye ki aapko me sache apna bhaiya manti hu isliye lekin aap toh humare pyaar ko aihsano me gin rahe hai
S. O. :- toh kya jab mera chota bhai bhi khudka dhanda shuru karega toh kya mujhe bura lagega
Baba :- aisa nahi hai bhaiya
S. O. :- aisa nahi hai toh kya meri kahi har baat manoge
Baba :- aap hukum karo bhaiya
S. O. :- me kaise yakin karu ki tum dono kam sunne ke baad paltoge nahi
Dono (maa, Baba) :- hum nahi paltenge aap kam batao
S.O.:- nahi tum dono pahle rudra ki kasam khao
Maa :- aisa kya kaam hai jise karne ke liye hume rudra ki kasam khane pade
Baba :- ha bhaiya
S. O. :- kyu tumko mujhpe vishwas nahi hai
Dono :- nahi aap galat samajh rahe hai
S. O. :- toh khao kasam
Dono :- theek hai hum rudra ki kasam khate hai ki aap jo bologe woh hum karenge
S. O. :- toh chlo apna saman pack karo aur mere haveli chlo aaj se wohi tum dono ka ghar hai aur me kuch nahi sunne wala
Mom :- ab aapne rudra ki kasam de di toh ab hum kya bole
S. O. :- aur tu dharmesh sun me tujhe jo bhi dunga woh tu chup chap le lega chlo me tempo le ke aajata hu tab tak sara saman pack karke rakh dena samjhe
Itna bolte hi woh bina kisi se sawal kiye nikal jaate hai aur udhe jyoti aur dharmesh muh phaade unhe jaate hue dekhte hai jaise abhi jo bhi hua woh abhi tak unke dimag me process hi ho raha hai
S. O. (bahar se chillake) :- chlo saman pack karo
Yeh aavaj sunte hi dono ko hosh aata hai aur turant bhagte hue sara saman pack kar dete hai aur nikal jaate hai naye ghar
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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
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[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 3

Ab se stort hero ko point of view se chalegi
Aur shop owner ko bade papa (b.p) kahunga


At evening

Jab sab log naye ghar phuch gaye toh bade papa ne dono ko puri haweli dikhayi aur saare kamre bhi dikhaye
aur phir shaam tak saara saman bhi shift ho jata hai waise bhi humara jyada saaman nahi tha toh 1 ghante me sab saman set ho jata hai tab jab maa deewar me lagi ghadi ki taraf dekhti hai toh bolti hai

Maa :- are is sab me ek baat toh bhul hi gaye
Baba :- kya hua kuch saaman lana reh gaya kya me bola tha sab ache se check kar le na
Bade papa :- are toh kya hua bike nikal ta hu tu chal saath leke aate hai
Maa :- are mujhe toh bolne do. Hum ghar je chakkar me ye toh bhul hi gaye ki rudra ko pata hi nahi hai hum yaha shift ho gaye hai
Baba :- arey ha rudra ke baare me toh hum bhul gaye
Bade papa :- tum bhale hi apne bete ke baare me bhul gye par me nahi bhula me ne ravi (baba ka dost) ko bol diya hai woh Vicki(Ravi ka beta) ke saath le aayega rudra ko
Baba :- ye acha kia bhaiya
Bade papa :- acha sun wo meri kapdo ki dukan thi na jo abhi band padi hai woh tere naam kar raha hu wahi se apni dukan shuru kar
Baba :- me kya bol raha tha dukan ka abhi rahne dete hai
Bade papa :- kyun bhai
Baba :- ab agar dukan kholunga toh sara dhyan dukan me hi lagana hoga toh ghar ka kharch chalana padega jyada sevings bhi nahi hai aur ab agle mahine se rudra ke school fees bhi bharni padegi toh thode savings jama lu phir dekhte hai
Bade papa :- toh kya mere se le le me abhi atm se nikal kar deta hu
Baba :- nahi bhaiya
Bade papa :- kyu nahi lega maine bola tha me jo bhi dunga toh le lega
Baba :- ha lekin aap hi sochiye kal me thak kar ghar gaya toh rudra bhi mehanat karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya toh woh kya sochega ki uske baba jo kal use mehanat ke baare me bata rahe the wohi bina mehanat kiye aap se paisa udhar le kar jee raha hu
Bade papa :- matlab tum logo ne mujhe phir se paraya kar diya
Baba :- aap galat soch rahe hai
Bade papa :- kya galat soch raha hu agar meri jagah tera saga bhai hota tu kya paise lene se mana kar deta
Baat bigadte dekh maa boli
Maa :- ye kya aap itni si baat pe lad rahe hai hum aisa kare toh dukan ki saaf safai saman ki adjustments me 1 mahina toh nikal jayega tab tak aap bhaiya ke yaha kaam karo aur me bhi ghar me tiffin service ka kaam karti hu jisse savings bhi ho jayegi aur bhaiya aap ko humari madad hi karni hai toh aap apni contacts ki madad se humari dukan me grocery store ka saman ka intejam karo
Jaise maa bolna khatm kar ke saamne dekhti hai toh dono jan unhe hi muh phade dekh rahe the
Baba :- wah kya idea hai hum aisa hi karte hai kyun bhaiya
Bade papa :- ha bilkul sahi kaha ye toh humne socha hi nahi
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki me waha entry marta hu
Me :- maa ye kiska ghar hai aur hum yaha kyu aaye hai
Maa :- are ruk jara dheere bol pahle pani pi le kuch kha le nahi aate hi sawal jawab shuru ho gaye
Bade papa :- are tum chup raho ek toh bichare ko bina bataye yeah aa gaye ab use daat rahe ho tum pucho beta kya puch rahe the tum
Me :- ye kiska ghar hai
Bade papa :- ye aapka ghar hai
Me :- mera ghar lekin ye kab hua
Bade papa :- are hua nahi toh kya hua jald hi ho jayega aapke bade papa ke naam pe jo bhi cheej hai woh humare rudra ka hi toh hai
Jaise hi bade papa ne ye bola vaise hi maa baba kuc bolne ko hue tabhi bade papa mujhse bole
Bade papa :- jao aap fresh ho jao phir aapko aapka naya ghar bhi toh dikhana hai
Me :- jee bade papa me abhi aaya phir mujhe bhi aap sabse kuch baat karni hai
Bade papa :- jao jaldi aao
Me :- lekin me jao kaha
Bade papa :- are ha jyoti(maa) rudra ko uske room me le jao
Phir me aur maa chale gaye ab waha sirf baba aur bade papa rah gaye
Baba :- yeh sab kya tha bhaiya
Bade papa :- jo tha woh sach tha aaj se rudra hi mera warish hoga meri saari property ka malik rudra hoga mene saare kaagaj rudra ke naam kar diye hai uske 18 ve janmdin par sab officialy uske naam ho jayega
Baba :- lekin yeh sab karne ki kya jarurat hai chaliye ye maan liya ki ye rudra ke liye aap ka pyar hai lekin balveer ka kya woh bhi aapka beta hai uska bhi hak hai is per
Bade papa :- tum use beta bol rahe ho jo uske pariwar ki chita shant hone se pahle hi apne baap se property ke baare me baat karne ke liye vakil leke aa jata hai ya use beta bol rahe ho jo apne baap ko jan se marne ki dhamki deta hai kyonki usne property uske naam nahi ki ha bolo kya garenty ki kal ko property milne ke baad woh mujhe jinda chod dega bas meri tumse 1 request hai use inkar mat karna
Baba :- aap boliye toh sahi aap ko request karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai
Bade papa :- ye faisla tumhare akele ka nahi balki jyoti ko bhi karna padega
Baba :- aisa kya faisla hai
Bade papa :- rudra se related hai
Baba :- lekin
Bade papa :- abhi nahi rudra ke sone ke baad
Baba kuch bolte tabhi me waha aa gaya
Me :- baba aaj pata hai school me kya hua
Baba :- tum batao ge nahi toh kaise pata chalega
Me phir unhe aaj school ke jo bhi sir ne bata ya woh bata diya
Baba :- aur is ka kya inam milega tumhe woh bhi bata do
Me :- nahi woh me jitne ke baad hi bataunga
( sir ne ek competition ke baare me bataya jo rudra ke school me har saal hota hai jisme jo jitta hai use special prize milta hai woh kya hai baad me bataunga)
Bade papa :- chlo theek hai baad me batana abhi hum aapko ek breaking news dete hai
Me :- kya bade papa
Bade papa ;- aap ke baba bhi humare tarah dukan kholne wale hai
Me (excited) :- sach baba
Baba :- ha ab ap jao so jao kal baat karte hai
Me :- nahi pahle ice cream
Maa :- nahi koi ice cream nahi milegi
Me (masoom face banakar) :- badeee papaaa ice cream
Bade papa (haste hue) :- ja fridge me rakhi hai lele
Me :- thank you bade papa
Maa :- ja hath pohoch ta hai kya dekh pahle
Me :- hath pahuch jayega
Me kicthen jake aata ka dibba jo niche hi tha uspe khada hoke ice cream nikal leta hu ye dekh kar jaha maa ka muh khula reh jaata hai aur wohi baba aur bade papa hasne lagte hai
Me (maa ko chidate hue) :- yummy yummy
Maa :- ruk badmash me abhi batati hu tujhe
Yeh kahte hue maa mere piche daudti hai lekin me pahle se taiyar tha me turant apne room me bhag jata hu
Maa :- bhaiya aap ne hi sar pe chadha ke rakha hai
Baba:- tumhe ye jyada lagta hai toh jo bhaiya ab karne wale hai use kya kahogi
Maa :- aisa kya karne wale hai
Bade papa(serious tone me rudra ke kamre ko dekhte hue) :- me rudra ko apna warish banane wala hu
Maa pe jaise toh ye bomb phut gaya Woh apne hi duniya me kahi gum si gayi
Baba (maa ko hosh me late hue) :- kaha kho gayi
Maa :- baad me baat karte he
Bade papa :- ye toh baad ki baat hui philhaal meri ek request hai rudra ko lekar
Maa :- kya bhaiya
Bade papa :- maine rudra ke naam meri aur mere pushton ki saari dhan daulat toh naam kardi lekin me use meri jindagi ki saari mehanat use dena chahta hu meri abtak ki sabse badi mehanat ki kamai uske naam karna chahta hu
Maa :- aisa kya cheej hai bhaiya
Bade papa :- mera gyan aur kuch shiksha jo mere pita ne mujhe diya aur mr apnr beton ko dena chaha lekin usse pahle hi ek is duniya me nahi raha aur dusra is sabke kabil nahi isliye me chahta hu kuch saal tum dono apne kaleje ke tukde ko apne kaleje par pathar rakh kar mujhe dedo
Maa (kuch sochte hue) :- theek hai mujhe pata hai aap use na kabhi galat shikhaoge na kabhi use chot pahuchaoge
Bade papa :- bas ye hi bharosa banaye rakho aur ha me tujhe kal ek khas tarah ka tel dunga jise tum uske saare sharir ki malish karogi yaad rakho saare ango ki matlab sare ango ki
Maa :- me kaise
Bade papa :- kal se jo uski training shuru hogi use sahane ke liye is malish ki jarurat hogi nahi toh sare sharir me bhayanak dard shuru hoga
Maa :- theek hai aap par pura bharosa hai mujhe
Bade papa :- chalo ab jao aur ha ab se me rudra ke room me hi sounga theek hai
Kuch der baad sab sone chale jaate hai wohi maa baba apne room me
Baba :- ye kya ho raha tha niche bhaiya bolte ja rahe the aur tum shant ho ek baar toh puchna tha konsi kaisi aur kya training hogi woh bolte gayi aur tum manti gayi
Maa :- aap bhaiya ki baat ka soch kar pareshaan ho rahe hai me toh bhavishyavani ke baare me soch rahi hu
Jaise hi maa ne ye bola baba jo bed par baithe the woh turant khade ho jaate hai
Baba :- aaj itne saalo baad achanak ye sab kyu yaad kar rahi ho aaj achanak bhavishyavani kaise yaad aayi
Maa :- mujhe batao bhavishyavani kya thi
Baba jaise hi bhavishyavani ke baare me soch te hai unke chehre ka rang hi udne lagta hai har second chehre par bhav badal rahe the
Baba :- ha tum sahi bol rahi ho niyati se koi lad nahi pata

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Update 4


Next day
At morning

Bade papa apni aadat anusar subah 4 baje uth kar fresh hoke 5 baje mujhe jagate hai
Bade papa :- chal rudra uth jaldi
Mw (aakh malte hue) :- aaahh aaj subah jaldi ho gayi bade papa
Bade papa :- nahi subah roj ke time par hi hui jai aaj aap ko jaldi uthaya hai aaj se hum aapko training denge
Me :- mujhe sone do abhi toh suraj chachu bhi nahi aaye
Bahar ke andhere ko dekhte hue me bolta hu
Bade papa :- chal uth jaldi nahi toh utha ke le jaunga
Me :- mujhe sone do na bade papa
Lekin bade papa mere ek nahi sunte aur mijhe jabardasti uthake haveli ke piche ke ground me le jaate hai
Bade papa :- dekh rudra agar tu mujhse pyar karta hoga toh tu chupchap meri baat sunega aur me jaisa bolu vaisa hi karega samjha nahi toh me tujhe hamesha ke liye chod ke chala jaunga
Me :- ok baba lekin aap mujhe chodke mat jana
Bade papa :- theek hai chal
Me :- kya karna hai mujhe
Bade papa :- me pahle hi bata du is me tujhe bahut mehanat karni padegi aur bas itna hi nahi tujhe me ek kadha aur dawayi dunga use khana hoga aur nahane se pahle teri maa teri malish karegi aur sone se pahle tujhe bina kuch bole malish karwani hogi
Me :- theek hai lekin aap mujhe chod ke toh nahi jaoge na
Bade papa :- nahi me toh majak kar raha tha tu toh rone laga chal ab is maidan ke 10 round laga jaldi chal
Me (shock ke saath) :- 10 round nahi bade papa mujhse nahi ho payega
Bade papa :- ye kya tu toh shuru karne se pahle hi haar maan raha hai chal naatak band kar me bhi tere saath daudta hu
Me :- ok chaliye
Uske jaha bade papa ke 10 round complete bhi ho gaye wohi mere abhi tak 7 hi round hue the 5 min baad jab mere bhi 10 round complete hojate hai toh bade papa mujhe aur bhi kuch exercise batate hai jise me jaise taise karke complete karta hu aise me hi 8 baj jaate hai phir bade papa mujhe pahle 1 goli dete hai jo thodi mithi thi aur 1 glass kadha dete hai jo bahut kadwa tha phir jab me hall me pahucha toh maa aur baba meri halat dekh ke pahle chintit ho gaye phir jab unhe sab pata chal toh wo shant ho gaye
Phir maa mujhe le jake malish karwayi malish karwate karwate kab nind aagayi pata hi nahi chala ( me bata du humare school ko 1 hafte ki chutti di hui hai) jab aakh khuli toh dekha ki dupehar ho gayi aur me uthneke baad nahane ka soch kar baath room chala gaya jab naha kar vapis aaya ttoh dekhta hai maa kisi aurat se baat kar rahi hoti hai aur us aurat ke saath meri hi umar ki ladki aur ladka bhi hai
Maa :- toh aap har tarah ka khana bana leti hai aapne kahi aur bhi kaam kia hai isse pahle
Aurat :- jee didi mera khudka hotel tha lekin kuch samay pahle hi mere devar ne dhoke se sab hadap liya aur hume ghar ke bahar phek diya
Maa:- toh aapke ghar me kon kon hai
Aurat:- me aur meri 5 saal ki beti aur 4 saal ka beta bas hum 3no hi hai
Maa :- aapke pati
Aurat :- woh toh 2 saal pahle hi chal base
Maa :- oh sorry
Aurat :- koi baat nahi
Tabhi maa ki nazar mujh par padti hai
Maa :- ye mera beta rudra ye bhi 5 saal ka hi hai waise aap ke bacho ka kya naam hai
Aurat :- meri beti ka naam anjali aur bete ka naam rohit
Me :- maa ye log kon hai
Maa :- beta maine kaha tha na me tifin service start karungi toh ye usme meri help karengi
Me :- me bhi help karunga aapko
Aurat :- nahi beta ye bahut mehanat ka kaam hai aap nahi kar paoge
Me :- me mehanat karne se nahi darta masi
Aurat :- me aapki masi kaise ho gayi
Me :- aapne ma ko didi kaha aur maa ki bahan masi hi hui na
Aurat :- lekin
Maa :- rehne dijiye ye sab se koi na koi rishta bana hi leta hai agar behas karne jayengi toh aapka hi sar dard kane lagega
Aurat :- theek hai beta me aaj se aapki masi
Me (khushi se tali bajate hue) :- yay meri bhi ab masi hai meri masi lekin masi aapka naam kya hai
Masi :- sanjna
Me (khushi se tali bajate hue):- yay sanjana masi
Maa :- chal uchal kud bahut ho gayi jaa jo padhai karni hai abhi kar le sham ko tere bade papa tujhe phir se training denge
Me (udas hote hue) :- theek hai maa
Phir rudra kamre me jakar padhne lagta hai wohi maa aur masi tifin service ke saman ki list banate hai aur rohit aur sanjana ghar dekhne lagte hai aisi hi shaam hojati hai aur phir shuru hoti hai meri pared jo rohit aur anjali bhi dekh rahe the starting me woh bhi excited the lekin jab meri haalat dekhi toh woh log bhi piche hat jate hai phir baari aati hai dawai aur kadhe ki
Bade papa :- lo rudra jaldi dawai aur kadha khatam karo phir ab me tumhari malish karta hu
Me :- theek hai bade papa lekin me pahle kadha piunga phir dawai khaunga
Bade papa :- theek hai le jaldi khatm kar phir malish bhi karni hai
Aise hi dheere dheere samay bit jata hai aur 1 hafta khatam ho jata hai
After 1 week
At morning
Me aur bade papa is waqt maidan me khade the aur rohit aur anjali balcony se dekh rahe the is 1 hafte ki training ke baad me bhi training se kafi comfortable ho gaya tha matlab ab me sari training kam se kam pareshaani ke saath complet kar deta tha aur thakta bhi bahut kam hi tha
Ab bade papa ne mujhe yoga ke bare me bhi sikhaya jo hum subah 3 baje humare hi kamre me karte the jis baare me kisi ko pata nahi tha
Ab story par aate hai
Bade papa :- toh rudra pichle 1 hafte se main tumhe training de raha hu aur tum bhi achi tarah se use shikh rahe ho is liye aaj se hum training ka level increase karenge aur yoga ka time bhi
Me:- theek hai bade papa me taiyar hu
Bade papa :- toh shuru kare tum jo ye belt dekh rahe ho 1 kg se leke 50 kg tak hai ab ye belt tumhare dono pairo aur hatho me bandhi jayengi jise tum jab tak me na kahu tum nahi utaroge theek hai
Me :- ji manjoor hai
Phir bade papa ne 1 kg ka belt mere hath aur pairo me baandh diya jisse mujhe chalne me dikkat ho rahi thi
Bade papa :- chalo ground ke 30 round lagao
Mujhe pata tha ki agar me bahas karunga to ye aur hard hota jayega is liye me bhi chup chap jaisa woh bolte me karta
Aise hi aaj ka training time khatam ho gaya
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