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Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

Kya me is story me magic aur super natural power add karu

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VAJRADHIKARI

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Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???
 
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parkas

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Agli subah

Aaj waisa hi ho raha tha jaise mene socha tha us durjan ne kruk me aaye sabhi naye logon ko apne mahal me bulaya tha jo mana karte toh uske sainik unhe maar pit kar jabardasti le aate

Is waqt hum sabhi aur saath me aur bhi 10 log waha us mahal me maujood the itne sare logon ko dekh kar sabse pahle pradhan ne durjan se anumati leke waha maujood jinke bhi pass kruk ki nagrikta thi un sab ko waha se bhej diya abhi waha sirf 8 log bache the jisme 6 hum the aur 2 shayad kisi dusre grah se aaye the

Un 2 no ka sharir bilkul pahadon sa majboot aur balshali lag raha tha hum 6 toh un dono ke saamne bachhe dikh rahe the jis wajah se sabka dhyan un dono par hi tha toh wahi pradhan baar baar mere taraf meri aakhon me kuch dhundhne ki koshis kar raha tha use aisa karte dekh ab mene bhi uske aakhon me ghur kar use dead look dene laga tha jisse uske man me is waqt bhay aa gaya tha

Durjan :- (un dono se) aap dono kon hai aur yaha humare kruk grah aane ka karan

Aadmi 1 :- maharaj hum pas hi ke grah shakti lok se aaye hai humare grah par kuch shaitani shaktiyon ne aakraman kar diya hai isiliye hum aapki sahayta mangne aaye hain

Durjan :- (ghamand me chur ho ke) agar kuch mangne aaye ho toh bhikariyon ke tarah bhik mango

Aadmi 2 :- maharaj hum bhik nahi sahayata mangne aaye hai

Durjan :- toh bhik mango ho sakta hai tumhari bhik mangne ki kala se prasann ho ke kuch sipahi tumhe de sakta hoon

Us durjan ke shabd sunke ab mera gussa badh gaya tha

Me :- maharaj ye dono aapke mehamaan hai inka aisa apmaan thik nahi

Durjan :- tum shant raho bachhe humare bich bolne ki jarurat nahi hai do badon ke bich me nahi bolte itne sanskar bhi tujhe nahi hai

Me :- mere itne bure din nahi aaye ki tujh jaise adharmi se sanskaar sikhu

Durjan :- Teri itni himmat ladke kon hai tu kyu aaya hai yaha aur kiske balbute se teri itni juban chal rahi hai

Me :- me rudra hoon mahan aacharya yuhan ka shishya me yaha guru dakshina ke liye unka badla lene aaya hoon

Mera introduction sunke waha maujood har koi shock ho gaya

Me :- (shakti lok walon se) aap dono chinta mat kijiye apni gurj dakshina lene ke baad me swayam aapke grah aake aapko un shaitano se mukti dilaunga ye mera wachan hai

Durjan :- yaha se jinda bachega tabhi toh unki sahayata kar payega (jor se chillake) sainikon khatam kar do is ladke ko

Uske itna bolte hi char shipahi mere taraf badhne lage lekin woh mere taraf badhte usse pahle hi pruthvik ne un sabko khatam kar diya jisse sabki nazar ab uske uper chali gayi thi aur jab sabki nazar uske chalaye banon pe gayi toh sab shocked ho gaye kyunki ye wahi baan the aacharya yuhan ke khaas baan jise dekh kar sabko ab dar lagne laga tha kyunki woh baan aacharya yuhan ki shakti darshate the aur woh kisi aur ke pass hone ka saaf arth tha ki aacharya ko uske uper pura bharosa hai

Durjan :- tum sabhi maroge aur sabse pahle marega (mere aur ishara karke) ye ladka

Me :- kal tir ke dware tujhe chunauti di thi humne aaj me khud tujhe yudh ke liye lalkarta hoon kal subah ki pahli kiran dhara pr girte hi hum yudh aarambh kar denge agar tumhare andar yudh karne ki himmat hai toh yudh karo me tumhe ek veer ki tarah sahid kahlane ka pura avsar dunga nahi toh tumhe patal se bhi dhoondh kar kutte ki maut marunga

Durjan :- teri itni himmat ja kal subah tujhe yudh maidaan me dikhaunga ki mujhse ladhne ka kya anjaam hai

Me :- hum bhi taiyar hai kal subah milenge jama karo jitni sena jama karni hai utni sabka kal antim divas hoga

Itna bolke me apne doston ke sath waha se nikal gaya aur woh dono bhi mere piche aa gaye aur woh durjan waha gusse me pagal huye ja raha tha

Durjan :- (pradhan se) pradhan jao aur jake yudh ki taiyari karo kal subah ki pahli kiran ke saath yudh aarambh hoga

Pradhan :- maharaj aap itni jaldi se nirnay na le hume us balak ki shaktiyon ka andaja nahi hai aur agyat shatru humesha khatarnak hota hai

Durjan :- shant ho jao pradhan tum ek mamuli sewak ho isiliye mujhe sahi galat ks gyan na do nahi toh abhi tumhare sar ko dhad se alag kar dunga jitna bola jaye tum utna hi karo ek gulam ho usi ki had me raho

Durjan ki us baat par pradhan bhadak utha jaise ki uske dubte lath pe hath rakh diya ho

Pradhan :- mafi chahunga maharaj lekin aapki gulami karna meri majboori hai mere purkhon ne is grah ke sukhon ke liye aur udhar ke liye humari har pidhi ko wachanon se bandh ke rakha hai

Durjan :- agar aisa hai toh jao me tumhe tumahre wachno se azaad karta hoon mujhe jarurat nahi hai tumhari un bachon se nipatne ke liye me akela hi kafi hoo

Pradhan :- me bhi na jane kitne varshon se isi din ka intjaar kar raha tha aaj se me bhi apne pradhan pad se istifa deta hu aur khud ko apne purkhon dwara diye wachno se ajaad maanta hoon

Itna bolke usne apne sar par pahne hue mukut ko nikal ke wahi jamin par pheck diya

Pradhan (jor se chillate hue) :- me mahaveer yodha SNAPE apne apko aaj se aur abhi se puri tarike se aacharya yuhan ko samarpit karta hoon

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Agli subah

Aaj waisa hi ho raha tha jaise mene socha tha us durjan ne kruk me aaye sabhi naye logon ko apne mahal me bulaya tha jo mana karte toh uske sainik unhe maar pit kar jabardasti le aate

Is waqt hum sabhi aur saath me aur bhi 10 log waha us mahal me maujood the itne sare logon ko dekh kar sabse pahle pradhan ne durjan se anumati leke waha maujood jinke bhi pass kruk ki nagrikta thi un sab ko waha se bhej diya abhi waha sirf 8 log bache the jisme 6 hum the aur 2 shayad kisi dusre grah se aaye the

Un 2 no ka sharir bilkul pahadon sa majboot aur balshali lag raha tha hum 6 toh un dono ke saamne bachhe dikh rahe the jis wajah se sabka dhyan un dono par hi tha toh wahi pradhan baar baar mere taraf meri aakhon me kuch dhundhne ki koshis kar raha tha use aisa karte dekh ab mene bhi uske aakhon me ghur kar use dead look dene laga tha jisse uske man me is waqt bhay aa gaya tha

Durjan :- (un dono se) aap dono kon hai aur yaha humare kruk grah aane ka karan

Aadmi 1 :- maharaj hum pas hi ke grah shakti lok se aaye hai humare grah par kuch shaitani shaktiyon ne aakraman kar diya hai isiliye hum aapki sahayta mangne aaye hain

Durjan :- (ghamand me chur ho ke) agar kuch mangne aaye ho toh bhikariyon ke tarah bhik mango

Aadmi 2 :- maharaj hum bhik nahi sahayata mangne aaye hai

Durjan :- toh bhik mango ho sakta hai tumhari bhik mangne ki kala se prasann ho ke kuch sipahi tumhe de sakta hoon

Us durjan ke shabd sunke ab mera gussa badh gaya tha

Me :- maharaj ye dono aapke mehamaan hai inka aisa apmaan thik nahi

Durjan :- tum shant raho bachhe humare bich bolne ki jarurat nahi hai do badon ke bich me nahi bolte itne sanskar bhi tujhe nahi hai

Me :- mere itne bure din nahi aaye ki tujh jaise adharmi se sanskaar sikhu

Durjan :- Teri itni himmat ladke kon hai tu kyu aaya hai yaha aur kiske balbute se teri itni juban chal rahi hai

Me :- me rudra hoon mahan aacharya yuhan ka shishya me yaha guru dakshina ke liye unka badla lene aaya hoon

Mera introduction sunke waha maujood har koi shock ho gaya

Me :- (shakti lok walon se) aap dono chinta mat kijiye apni gurj dakshina lene ke baad me swayam aapke grah aake aapko un shaitano se mukti dilaunga ye mera wachan hai

Durjan :- yaha se jinda bachega tabhi toh unki sahayata kar payega (jor se chillake) sainikon khatam kar do is ladke ko

Uske itna bolte hi char shipahi mere taraf badhne lage lekin woh mere taraf badhte usse pahle hi pruthvik ne un sabko khatam kar diya jisse sabki nazar ab uske uper chali gayi thi aur jab sabki nazar uske chalaye banon pe gayi toh sab shocked ho gaye kyunki ye wahi baan the aacharya yuhan ke khaas baan jise dekh kar sabko ab dar lagne laga tha kyunki woh baan aacharya yuhan ki shakti darshate the aur woh kisi aur ke pass hone ka saaf arth tha ki aacharya ko uske uper pura bharosa hai

Durjan :- tum sabhi maroge aur sabse pahle marega (mere aur ishara karke) ye ladka

Me :- kal tir ke dware tujhe chunauti di thi humne aaj me khud tujhe yudh ke liye lalkarta hoon kal subah ki pahli kiran dhara pr girte hi hum yudh aarambh kar denge agar tumhare andar yudh karne ki himmat hai toh yudh karo me tumhe ek veer ki tarah sahid kahlane ka pura avsar dunga nahi toh tumhe patal se bhi dhoondh kar kutte ki maut marunga

Durjan :- teri itni himmat ja kal subah tujhe yudh maidaan me dikhaunga ki mujhse ladhne ka kya anjaam hai

Me :- hum bhi taiyar hai kal subah milenge jama karo jitni sena jama karni hai utni sabka kal antim divas hoga

Itna bolke me apne doston ke sath waha se nikal gaya aur woh dono bhi mere piche aa gaye aur woh durjan waha gusse me pagal huye ja raha tha

Durjan :- (pradhan se) pradhan jao aur jake yudh ki taiyari karo kal subah ki pahli kiran ke saath yudh aarambh hoga

Pradhan :- maharaj aap itni jaldi se nirnay na le hume us balak ki shaktiyon ka andaja nahi hai aur agyat shatru humesha khatarnak hota hai

Durjan :- shant ho jao pradhan tum ek mamuli sewak ho isiliye mujhe sahi galat ks gyan na do nahi toh abhi tumhare sar ko dhad se alag kar dunga jitna bola jaye tum utna hi karo ek gulam ho usi ki had me raho

Durjan ki us baat par pradhan bhadak utha jaise ki uske dubte lath pe hath rakh diya ho

Pradhan :- mafi chahunga maharaj lekin aapki gulami karna meri majboori hai mere purkhon ne is grah ke sukhon ke liye aur udhar ke liye humari har pidhi ko wachanon se bandh ke rakha hai

Durjan :- agar aisa hai toh jao me tumhe tumahre wachno se azaad karta hoon mujhe jarurat nahi hai tumhari un bachon se nipatne ke liye me akela hi kafi hoo

Pradhan :- me bhi na jane kitne varshon se isi din ka intjaar kar raha tha aaj se me bhi apne pradhan pad se istifa deta hu aur khud ko apne purkhon dwara diye wachno se ajaad maanta hoon

Itna bolke usne apne sar par pahne hue mukut ko nikal ke wahi jamin par pheck diya

Pradhan (jor se chillate hue) :- me mahaveer yodha SNAPE apne apko aaj se aur abhi se puri tarike se aacharya yuhan ko samarpit karta hoon

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

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Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

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park

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Update 145

Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

Present

Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Agli subah

Aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath hi raja durjan apni sena leke apne rajya ki seema par tainat khada tha toh wahi pe me aur mere pancho sathi thik unke saamne khade the ek taraf lakhon ki sankhya me sena aur dusri taraf sirf hum 6

Jaha maidan me dono paksh tainat the toh wahi dur pahad par pradhan snape ke saath meri panchi sena bhi maujood thi

Pichli raat

Is waqt hum sabhi usi pahad par apna khema banakar baithe the aur yudh ki ran niti bana rahe the

N :- toh kal yudh me hum konsi ranniti apna yenge

Me :- ranniti humare kisi kaam ki nahi kyunki humare saamne lakhon ki sena hogi aur dusri taraf hum 6

Abhi mene ye bola tha ki tabhi waha ek aawaj aayi

" 6 nahi 7"

Jaise hi humne us aawaj ki disha me dekha toh waha pradhan khada tha

N :- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi kya

Snape :- me jaanta hoon ki tum mere uper bharosa nahi rakhte lekin mene us durjan ke prdhan ke pad se istifa deke aaya hoon aur is yudh me main aacharya ke taraf se yudh ladhne ka faisla kiya hai krupya mujhe mere papon se mukta kare

Jab woh ye sab bol raha tha toh me lagataar uski aakhon me dekhke uske dimag me jhank raha tha jisse mujhe ye pata chal gaya ths ki woh sach bol raha hai

Me :- hum tumhare nirnay ka samman karte hai lekin ye yudh hum kisi prayaschit ya kisi pratishodh ke liye nahi balki humari guru dakshina ke roop me ladh rahe hai isiliye hume ye yudh khud se ladhna hai agar hume kewal pratishodh hi chahiye hota toh me ek pal me pure grah ko khatam kar deta

Snape :- mene mahal me aapki shakti mahsoos ki hai aur isme koi shaq nahi hai thik hai me aapke guru dakshina ke bich me nahi aaunga

Me :- kal ke yudh ke liye mere pass ek yojna hai hum kal apne tatva shakti se humla karenge dhyan se suno meri yojna....

Present

Is waqt hum yudh ke liye taiyar the waha durjan kabhi apne sena ko dekhta toh kabhi hum 6 ko aur hume dekh ke hasne lagta itne me hi mene yudh ka ailaan kar diya

Me :- AAKRAMAN

Mere aakraman bolte hi sabse pahle Bizli ne apne vidyut tatva ka istemaal karke uski sena pe lagataar Thunder Bolt se humla karne lagi jisse uski sena me halchal shuru ho gayi sabhi log dar ke maare yaha waha bhagne lage

Snape :- Thunder Bolt attack aacharya yuhan ne hi is attack ki khoj ki thi aaj durjan ko mrutyudand milna tay hai

Wahi maidan me jab sabhi log bhag rahe the tabhi Jwala ne apni agni shakti ka istemaal kar ke durjan ke sena ko 3no taraf se aag ki deewar se gher liya tha jisse ab uski sena ko bhagne ke liye kewal saamne ka rasta baki tha jaha hum 6 khade the

Woh durjan ki sena abhi agni deewar ko dekhke ruk gayi thi ki tabhi Vayu ne aage aake apne vayu tatva ka istemaal kar ke us agni ko aur bhadka diya jisse us agni deewar ke pass me khade sabhi log jal ke rakh hone lage tabhi Vayu ne apni shaktiyon se hawa ka aisa jhonka nirmaan kia jisse durjan ki aakhri pankti me khadi sena apne aap us agni deewar me jake julusne lagi

Aur jaise hi Vayu apna kaam pura karke jaise hi woh piche aaya

Waise hi Neera aage aayi aur usne aate hi sabse pahle apne jal tatva ki madad se sabhi vipakshi sainikon ko piche ki aur sarka diya lekin uske is jal prahar se Jwala ne nirmeet ki hui agni deewar bhi nasht ho gayi jiske wajah se sare sainik phir se bhagne lage lekin tabhi Neera ne apni jal ke taapman ko kam kar ke unhe barf me badal diya aur phir us sari sena par barf ke chote lekin nukile tukdon se humla karne lagi jisse ab pahle jaha lakhon ki sena thi wahi ab kewal 10000 sainik bache the apni sena ki ye avastha dekh kar durjan bhi bhaukhla gaya tha kyunki uski sena ko humla toh kya bhagne ka bhi mauka nahi mil raha tha

Uske baad Nira ke hatne ke baad Pruthvik maidan me utra aur usne aate hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi dhanush uske haath me aaya waise hi usne apne tiron se baki bache sipahiyon ko bhi maar diya abhi kewal waha pe raja durjan aur uske navratna mantri baki the

Ab me bhi apna jalwa dikhane ke liye aage badha mere aage badhte hi raja durjan ne apne navratna mantriyon ko aage badhne ke liye bol diya jaha woh sabhi rath pe virajmaan the toh me rath vihin khada tha

Jaise hi me unke saamne aaya un 9 mese 5 mantri aage aaye aur pancho apne apne tatva shakti ka istemaal kar rahe the jiska jawab me kewal apne bachav se de raha tha mene abhi tak kisi pe bhi aakraman nahi kia tha jisse sab mujh par has kar mera majak udane lage the aur me aise hi bachav karte hue unke bilkul najdeek pahuch gaya tha aur unke najdeek pahuchte hi mene apni aakhe band ki aur dekhte hi dekhte mera pura sharir aag me gayab ho gaya tha jise dekh ke waha khade sab shocked ho gaye the jisse un pachon ke chehre par dar saaf dikh raha tha

Mene aaj se pahle apne doston ke saamne bhi aisa magic use nahi kiya tha jisse woh bhi shocked ho gaye the lekin phir unhe yaad aaya ki ye magic aacharya ne hi mujhe sikhaya tha toh woh thode normal hue uske baad mene un pachon mantriyon ko unke rath ke saath hi jinda jala diya

Ye nazara dekhke baki 4 mantriyon ki bhi phat gayi thi jo unke chehre par aaye hav bhav se show ho gaya tha jiske baad mene pruthvi tatv ke istemaal se baki 4ro mantriyon ko jinda jamin me gaad diya

Ab kewal waha hum 6 aur raja durjan hi baki the jaise hi usne mujh par humla karna chaha mene use wahi pe aakash tatva yani vidyut tarang se bandh diya

Abhi us yudh ke maidan me snape aur sari panchi gang bhi aa gayi thi toh wahi mere sathi bhi us durjan ko maarne ke liye aage badh rahe the ki tabhi mene unhe rok diya

P :- rudra hume rok kyu rahe ho ise maarke humari gurudakshina purn ho gi

Me :- nahi pruthvik ise maarke nahi guruwar ke pratishodh se gurudakshina milegi

Itna bolke mene apni aakhe band ki aur kuch mantra bolne laga jisse waha portal khula aur usme se aacharya bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar snape apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur sare panchi bhi jamin pe utar ke apne sar ko aacharya ke charno ke saamne jhuka diye

Me :- aacharya apna pratishodh lijiye aur hume humare kartavya se mukti dijiye

Mere bolte hi aacharya aage badh kar durjan ke pass gaye aur uske sar pe hath pherne lage

Aacharya (hath pherte hue) :- kyu durjan aisa kyu kiya tumne mene tumhe apne putra saman mana tha tumhe har woh shiksha shikhayi jo mujhe pata thi phir bhi (mujh se) rudra mukt kardo ise

Aacharya ka ishara pate hi mene us durjan ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar diya

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aaj ke liye itna hi

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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