Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

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Spoiler: CHARACTER GUIDELINES

Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 3

Ab se stort hero ko point of view se chalegi
Aur shop owner ko bade papa (b.p) kahunga


At evening

Jab sab log naye ghar phuch gaye toh bade papa ne dono ko puri haweli dikhayi aur saare kamre bhi dikhaye
aur phir shaam tak saara saman bhi shift ho jata hai waise bhi humara jyada saaman nahi tha toh 1 ghante me sab saman set ho jata hai tab jab maa deewar me lagi ghadi ki taraf dekhti hai toh bolti hai

Maa :- are is sab me ek baat toh bhul hi gaye
Baba :- kya hua kuch saaman lana reh gaya kya me bola tha sab ache se check kar le na
Bade papa :- are toh kya hua bike nikal ta hu tu chal saath leke aate hai
Maa :- are mujhe toh bolne do. Hum ghar je chakkar me ye toh bhul hi gaye ki rudra ko pata hi nahi hai hum yaha shift ho gaye hai
Baba :- arey ha rudra ke baare me toh hum bhul gaye
Bade papa :- tum bhale hi apne bete ke baare me bhul gye par me nahi bhula me ne ravi (baba ka dost) ko bol diya hai woh Vicki(Ravi ka beta) ke saath le aayega rudra ko
Baba :- ye acha kia bhaiya
Bade papa :- acha sun wo meri kapdo ki dukan thi na jo abhi band padi hai woh tere naam kar raha hu wahi se apni dukan shuru kar
Baba :- me kya bol raha tha dukan ka abhi rahne dete hai
Bade papa :- kyun bhai
Baba :- ab agar dukan kholunga toh sara dhyan dukan me hi lagana hoga toh ghar ka kharch chalana padega jyada sevings bhi nahi hai aur ab agle mahine se rudra ke school fees bhi bharni padegi toh thode savings jama lu phir dekhte hai
Bade papa :- toh kya mere se le le me abhi atm se nikal kar deta hu
Baba :- nahi bhaiya
Bade papa :- kyu nahi lega maine bola tha me jo bhi dunga toh le lega
Baba :- ha lekin aap hi sochiye kal me thak kar ghar gaya toh rudra bhi mehanat karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya toh woh kya sochega ki uske baba jo kal use mehanat ke baare me bata rahe the wohi bina mehanat kiye aap se paisa udhar le kar jee raha hu
Bade papa :- matlab tum logo ne mujhe phir se paraya kar diya
Baba :- aap galat soch rahe hai
Bade papa :- kya galat soch raha hu agar meri jagah tera saga bhai hota tu kya paise lene se mana kar deta
Baat bigadte dekh maa boli
Maa :- ye kya aap itni si baat pe lad rahe hai hum aisa kare toh dukan ki saaf safai saman ki adjustments me 1 mahina toh nikal jayega tab tak aap bhaiya ke yaha kaam karo aur me bhi ghar me tiffin service ka kaam karti hu jisse savings bhi ho jayegi aur bhaiya aap ko humari madad hi karni hai toh aap apni contacts ki madad se humari dukan me grocery store ka saman ka intejam karo
Jaise maa bolna khatm kar ke saamne dekhti hai toh dono jan unhe hi muh phade dekh rahe the
Baba :- wah kya idea hai hum aisa hi karte hai kyun bhaiya
Bade papa :- ha bilkul sahi kaha ye toh humne socha hi nahi
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki me waha entry marta hu
Me :- maa ye kiska ghar hai aur hum yaha kyu aaye hai
Maa :- are ruk jara dheere bol pahle pani pi le kuch kha le nahi aate hi sawal jawab shuru ho gaye
Bade papa :- are tum chup raho ek toh bichare ko bina bataye yeah aa gaye ab use daat rahe ho tum pucho beta kya puch rahe the tum
Me :- ye kiska ghar hai
Bade papa :- ye aapka ghar hai
Me :- mera ghar lekin ye kab hua
Bade papa :- are hua nahi toh kya hua jald hi ho jayega aapke bade papa ke naam pe jo bhi cheej hai woh humare rudra ka hi toh hai
Jaise hi bade papa ne ye bola vaise hi maa baba kuc bolne ko hue tabhi bade papa mujhse bole
Bade papa :- jao aap fresh ho jao phir aapko aapka naya ghar bhi toh dikhana hai
Me :- jee bade papa me abhi aaya phir mujhe bhi aap sabse kuch baat karni hai
Bade papa :- jao jaldi aao
Me :- lekin me jao kaha
Bade papa :- are ha jyoti(maa) rudra ko uske room me le jao
Phir me aur maa chale gaye ab waha sirf baba aur bade papa rah gaye
Baba :- yeh sab kya tha bhaiya
Bade papa :- jo tha woh sach tha aaj se rudra hi mera warish hoga meri saari property ka malik rudra hoga mene saare kaagaj rudra ke naam kar diye hai uske 18 ve janmdin par sab officialy uske naam ho jayega
Baba :- lekin yeh sab karne ki kya jarurat hai chaliye ye maan liya ki ye rudra ke liye aap ka pyar hai lekin balveer ka kya woh bhi aapka beta hai uska bhi hak hai is per
Bade papa :- tum use beta bol rahe ho jo uske pariwar ki chita shant hone se pahle hi apne baap se property ke baare me baat karne ke liye vakil leke aa jata hai ya use beta bol rahe ho jo apne baap ko jan se marne ki dhamki deta hai kyonki usne property uske naam nahi ki ha bolo kya garenty ki kal ko property milne ke baad woh mujhe jinda chod dega bas meri tumse 1 request hai use inkar mat karna
Baba :- aap boliye toh sahi aap ko request karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai
Bade papa :- ye faisla tumhare akele ka nahi balki jyoti ko bhi karna padega
Baba :- aisa kya faisla hai
Bade papa :- rudra se related hai
Baba :- lekin
Bade papa :- abhi nahi rudra ke sone ke baad
Baba kuch bolte tabhi me waha aa gaya
Me :- baba aaj pata hai school me kya hua
Baba :- tum batao ge nahi toh kaise pata chalega
Me phir unhe aaj school ke jo bhi sir ne bata ya woh bata diya
Baba :- aur is ka kya inam milega tumhe woh bhi bata do
Me :- nahi woh me jitne ke baad hi bataunga
( sir ne ek competition ke baare me bataya jo rudra ke school me har saal hota hai jisme jo jitta hai use special prize milta hai woh kya hai baad me bataunga)
Bade papa :- chlo theek hai baad me batana abhi hum aapko ek breaking news dete hai
Me :- kya bade papa
Bade papa ;- aap ke baba bhi humare tarah dukan kholne wale hai
Me (excited) :- sach baba
Baba :- ha ab ap jao so jao kal baat karte hai
Me :- nahi pahle ice cream
Maa :- nahi koi ice cream nahi milegi
Me (masoom face banakar) :- badeee papaaa ice cream
Bade papa (haste hue) :- ja fridge me rakhi hai lele
Me :- thank you bade papa
Maa :- ja hath pohoch ta hai kya dekh pahle
Me :- hath pahuch jayega
Me kicthen jake aata ka dibba jo niche hi tha uspe khada hoke ice cream nikal leta hu ye dekh kar jaha maa ka muh khula reh jaata hai aur wohi baba aur bade papa hasne lagte hai
Me (maa ko chidate hue) :- yummy yummy
Maa :- ruk badmash me abhi batati hu tujhe
Yeh kahte hue maa mere piche daudti hai lekin me pahle se taiyar tha me turant apne room me bhag jata hu
Maa :- bhaiya aap ne hi sar pe chadha ke rakha hai
Baba:- tumhe ye jyada lagta hai toh jo bhaiya ab karne wale hai use kya kahogi
Maa :- aisa kya karne wale hai
Bade papa(serious tone me rudra ke kamre ko dekhte hue) :- me rudra ko apna warish banane wala hu
Maa pe jaise toh ye bomb phut gaya Woh apne hi duniya me kahi gum si gayi
Baba (maa ko hosh me late hue) :- kaha kho gayi
Maa :- baad me baat karte he
Bade papa :- ye toh baad ki baat hui philhaal meri ek request hai rudra ko lekar
Maa :- kya bhaiya
Bade papa :- maine rudra ke naam meri aur mere pushton ki saari dhan daulat toh naam kardi lekin me use meri jindagi ki saari mehanat use dena chahta hu meri abtak ki sabse badi mehanat ki kamai uske naam karna chahta hu
Maa :- aisa kya cheej hai bhaiya
Bade papa :- mera gyan aur kuch shiksha jo mere pita ne mujhe diya aur mr apnr beton ko dena chaha lekin usse pahle hi ek is duniya me nahi raha aur dusra is sabke kabil nahi isliye me chahta hu kuch saal tum dono apne kaleje ke tukde ko apne kaleje par pathar rakh kar mujhe dedo
Maa (kuch sochte hue) :- theek hai mujhe pata hai aap use na kabhi galat shikhaoge na kabhi use chot pahuchaoge
Bade papa :- bas ye hi bharosa banaye rakho aur ha me tujhe kal ek khas tarah ka tel dunga jise tum uske saare sharir ki malish karogi yaad rakho saare ango ki matlab sare ango ki
Maa :- me kaise
Bade papa :- kal se jo uski training shuru hogi use sahane ke liye is malish ki jarurat hogi nahi toh sare sharir me bhayanak dard shuru hoga
Maa :- theek hai aap par pura bharosa hai mujhe
Bade papa :- chalo ab jao aur ha ab se me rudra ke room me hi sounga theek hai
Kuch der baad sab sone chale jaate hai wohi maa baba apne room me
Baba :- ye kya ho raha tha niche bhaiya bolte ja rahe the aur tum shant ho ek baar toh puchna tha konsi kaisi aur kya training hogi woh bolte gayi aur tum manti gayi
Maa :- aap bhaiya ki baat ka soch kar pareshaan ho rahe hai me toh bhavishyavani ke baare me soch rahi hu
Jaise hi maa ne ye bola baba jo bed par baithe the woh turant khade ho jaate hai
Baba :- aaj itne saalo baad achanak ye sab kyu yaad kar rahi ho aaj achanak bhavishyavani kaise yaad aayi
Maa :- mujhe batao bhavishyavani kya thi
Baba jaise hi bhavishyavani ke baare me soch te hai unke chehre ka rang hi udne lagta hai har second chehre par bhav badal rahe the
Baba :- ha tum sahi bol rahi ho niyati se koi lad nahi pata

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Lagta hai hero ko kisi bahut jaruri mission ke liye Janam hua hai aur usi ki taiyari ki baat Bade papa keh rahe hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 4


Next day
At morning

Bade papa apni aadat anusar subah 4 baje uth kar fresh hoke 5 baje mujhe jagate hai
Bade papa :- chal rudra uth jaldi
Mw (aakh malte hue) :- aaahh aaj subah jaldi ho gayi bade papa
Bade papa :- nahi subah roj ke time par hi hui jai aaj aap ko jaldi uthaya hai aaj se hum aapko training denge
Me :- mujhe sone do abhi toh suraj chachu bhi nahi aaye
Bahar ke andhere ko dekhte hue me bolta hu
Bade papa :- chal uth jaldi nahi toh utha ke le jaunga
Me :- mujhe sone do na bade papa
Lekin bade papa mere ek nahi sunte aur mijhe jabardasti uthake haveli ke piche ke ground me le jaate hai
Bade papa :- dekh rudra agar tu mujhse pyar karta hoga toh tu chupchap meri baat sunega aur me jaisa bolu vaisa hi karega samjha nahi toh me tujhe hamesha ke liye chod ke chala jaunga
Me :- ok baba lekin aap mujhe chodke mat jana
Bade papa :- theek hai chal
Me :- kya karna hai mujhe
Bade papa :- me pahle hi bata du is me tujhe bahut mehanat karni padegi aur bas itna hi nahi tujhe me ek kadha aur dawayi dunga use khana hoga aur nahane se pahle teri maa teri malish karegi aur sone se pahle tujhe bina kuch bole malish karwani hogi
Me :- theek hai lekin aap mujhe chod ke toh nahi jaoge na
Bade papa :- nahi me toh majak kar raha tha tu toh rone laga chal ab is maidan ke 10 round laga jaldi chal
Me (shock ke saath) :- 10 round nahi bade papa mujhse nahi ho payega
Bade papa :- ye kya tu toh shuru karne se pahle hi haar maan raha hai chal naatak band kar me bhi tere saath daudta hu
Me :- ok chaliye
Uske jaha bade papa ke 10 round complete bhi ho gaye wohi mere abhi tak 7 hi round hue the 5 min baad jab mere bhi 10 round complete hojate hai toh bade papa mujhe aur bhi kuch exercise batate hai jise me jaise taise karke complete karta hu aise me hi 8 baj jaate hai phir bade papa mujhe pahle 1 goli dete hai jo thodi mithi thi aur 1 glass kadha dete hai jo bahut kadwa tha phir jab me hall me pahucha toh maa aur baba meri halat dekh ke pahle chintit ho gaye phir jab unhe sab pata chal toh wo shant ho gaye
Phir maa mujhe le jake malish karwayi malish karwate karwate kab nind aagayi pata hi nahi chala ( me bata du humare school ko 1 hafte ki chutti di hui hai) jab aakh khuli toh dekha ki dupehar ho gayi aur me uthneke baad nahane ka soch kar baath room chala gaya jab naha kar vapis aaya ttoh dekhta hai maa kisi aurat se baat kar rahi hoti hai aur us aurat ke saath meri hi umar ki ladki aur ladka bhi hai
Maa :- toh aap har tarah ka khana bana leti hai aapne kahi aur bhi kaam kia hai isse pahle
Aurat :- jee didi mera khudka hotel tha lekin kuch samay pahle hi mere devar ne dhoke se sab hadap liya aur hume ghar ke bahar phek diya
Maa:- toh aapke ghar me kon kon hai
Aurat:- me aur meri 5 saal ki beti aur 4 saal ka beta bas hum 3no hi hai
Maa :- aapke pati
Aurat :- woh toh 2 saal pahle hi chal base
Maa :- oh sorry
Aurat :- koi baat nahi
Tabhi maa ki nazar mujh par padti hai
Maa :- ye mera beta rudra ye bhi 5 saal ka hi hai waise aap ke bacho ka kya naam hai
Aurat :- meri beti ka naam anjali aur bete ka naam rohit
Me :- maa ye log kon hai
Maa :- beta maine kaha tha na me tifin service start karungi toh ye usme meri help karengi
Me :- me bhi help karunga aapko
Aurat :- nahi beta ye bahut mehanat ka kaam hai aap nahi kar paoge
Me :- me mehanat karne se nahi darta masi
Aurat :- me aapki masi kaise ho gayi
Me :- aapne ma ko didi kaha aur maa ki bahan masi hi hui na
Aurat :- lekin
Maa :- rehne dijiye ye sab se koi na koi rishta bana hi leta hai agar behas karne jayengi toh aapka hi sar dard kane lagega
Aurat :- theek hai beta me aaj se aapki masi
Me (khushi se tali bajate hue) :- yay meri bhi ab masi hai meri masi lekin masi aapka naam kya hai
Masi :- sanjna
Me (khushi se tali bajate hue):- yay sanjana masi
Maa :- chal uchal kud bahut ho gayi jaa jo padhai karni hai abhi kar le sham ko tere bade papa tujhe phir se training denge
Me (udas hote hue) :- theek hai maa
Phir rudra kamre me jakar padhne lagta hai wohi maa aur masi tifin service ke saman ki list banate hai aur rohit aur sanjana ghar dekhne lagte hai aisi hi shaam hojati hai aur phir shuru hoti hai meri pared jo rohit aur anjali bhi dekh rahe the starting me woh bhi excited the lekin jab meri haalat dekhi toh woh log bhi piche hat jate hai phir baari aati hai dawai aur kadhe ki
Bade papa :- lo rudra jaldi dawai aur kadha khatam karo phir ab me tumhari malish karta hu
Me :- theek hai bade papa lekin me pahle kadha piunga phir dawai khaunga
Bade papa :- theek hai le jaldi khatm kar phir malish bhi karni hai
Aise hi dheere dheere samay bit jata hai aur 1 hafta khatam ho jata hai
After 1 week
At morning
Me aur bade papa is waqt maidan me khade the aur rohit aur anjali balcony se dekh rahe the is 1 hafte ki training ke baad me bhi training se kafi comfortable ho gaya tha matlab ab me sari training kam se kam pareshaani ke saath complet kar deta tha aur thakta bhi bahut kam hi tha
Ab bade papa ne mujhe yoga ke bare me bhi sikhaya jo hum subah 3 baje humare hi kamre me karte the jis baare me kisi ko pata nahi tha
Ab story par aate hai
Bade papa :- toh rudra pichle 1 hafte se main tumhe training de raha hu aur tum bhi achi tarah se use shikh rahe ho is liye aaj se hum training ka level increase karenge aur yoga ka time bhi
Me:- theek hai bade papa me taiyar hu
Bade papa :- toh shuru kare tum jo ye belt dekh rahe ho 1 kg se leke 50 kg tak hai ab ye belt tumhare dono pairo aur hatho me bandhi jayengi jise tum jab tak me na kahu tum nahi utaroge theek hai
Me :- ji manjoor hai
Phir bade papa ne 1 kg ka belt mere hath aur pairo me baandh diya jisse mujhe chalne me dikkat ho rahi thi
Bade papa :- chalo ground ke 30 round lagao
Mujhe pata tha ki agar me bahas karunga to ye aur hard hota jayega is liye me bhi chup chap jaisa woh bolte me karta
Aise hi aaj ka training time khatam ho gaya
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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Chalo hero ki training ne hero ki band Baja ke rakh di aur hero ko Masi bhi mil gayi aur ab aur hard ho gayi uski training aur uski mammy ne tifin service bhi shuru kardi hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 5


Aaj hume school se mili 1 hafte ki chutti khatm ho gayi thi isliye aaj me malish ke baad soya nahi tha jab bade papa se belt ka pucha toh unhone utarne se mana kar diya toh me vaise hi uniform ke andar weight belt pehan school nikal gaya
At school
Aaj bhi first lecture santosh sir ka lecture tha
Sir :- rudra idhr aana
Jab sare students ground pe ja rahe the tab sir ne mujhe bulaya
Me :- yes sir
Sir :- rudra woh competition ke baare me kya socha
Me :- sochna kya hai sir mera fix hai me competition me part le raha hu
Sir :- ye form ise fill kara ke kal hi mere pass submit karva dena
Me:- kal hi kyon sir
Sir :- kyon ki paso se selection shuru hone wala hai or kal ka last din hai
Me :- ok sir
Sir :- ab jao aur suno agar mukabla jeeto toh use apne dimag me mat chadhne dena aur agar haar jao toh dil me mat laga lena
Me :- matlab
Sir :- matlab baad me samjhaunga abhi bas yeh yaad rakhna
Me :- ok sir aap mujhe compitition ke baare me batayenge kya
Sir :- ha kyu nahi
Sir :- har saal pure school se har standard ka 1 group banaya jata hai 20 students ka aur parso se wohi 20 students ko select kiya jana hai aur tumhare class ki jimmedari mujhe di huyi hai competition 3 part me divide kia hua hai
1st. Part running race (50 meter)
2nd. Part general knowledge questions and answers
3rd. Part exam
1st part me 20 mese 10 ko hi select kia jayega
Jo dus select honge unhe 5 groups me divide kia jayega har group me 2 students honge unka quiz rakha jayega general knowledge par us me top 2 group ko select kia jayega yani 4 students
Aur aakhri part me hoga exam 75 marks ka jo isme first aayega use hi spl.inaam milega
Me :- ok sir compitition ki dates kya hongi
Sir :- pahle 20 students select honge phir us hisab se date fix hongi but don't worry ek din me ek hi part hoga
Me :- ok sir
phir me waha se nikal jata hu abhi me waha se nikla hi tha ki humari english ki mam waha aa gayi
E. M:- kya baate ho rahi thi sir or student ke bich
Sir :- kuch nahi use compitition ke rules samjha raha tha
E. M :- waise mere hisab se ye competition hona hi nahi chahiye
Sir :- kyu
E. M :- dekho na itne massom bachon ko itni jard compitition ka samna karna pad raha hai
Sir :- tum bas compitition dekho bacho ko kaise taiyar karna hai ye me dekhta hu
E. M :- dekhna kahi rudra ka haal bhi ravi jaisa na ho jaye waise ravi ke incident ke baad rudra first student hoga jisse tum itni Priority de rahe ho
Sir :- nahi ravi jaisa nahi woh meri ji dagi ki sabse badi bhool thi jo maine us komal bache pe itna dabav dala
E. M :- are mera woh matlab nahi tha tum galat samajh rahe ho balki me ye keh rahi thi ki rudra me bhi wohi aag hai jo hume ravi me dikhi thi aur waise bhi usme sari galti ravi ki thi agar woh apna dimag laga kar khudko sambhalta toh wo aaj humare saath hota chalo honi ko koi nahi taal sakta jo hoga dekha jayega
Sir :- ha sahi kaha lekin me bhi isbaar sab soch samajh ke karunga
E. M :- its good
At home
Mosi :- didi sari tayari toh ho gayi hai ab tiffin service ka kaam kab se start karna hai
Maa :- 15 tarikh se hum tiffin service shuru kar denge
Mosi :- theek hai didi vaise naam kya rakhenge tiffin service ka
Maa :- are ye toh mene socha hi nahi
Mosi :- toh ab
Maa :- sham ko sabse puchte hai
Mosi :- jaisa aapko thik lage didi
At shop (bade papas shop)
Baba :- bhaiya shop ka kaam lagbhag khatm hi ho gaya hai toh aap wo contacts mujhe de dijiye me order kar deta hu
Bade papa :- tension na le mene already book kar diya hai parso tak aa jayega sab
Baba :- me soch raha tha dukan ki 15 tarikh se kare
Bade papa :- rudra ka janmdin hai na 15 ko
Baba :- ha isliye mene socha tha ki saman ki delivery 13 ko li jaye aur 14 ko puja karke 15 ko dukan shuru ki jaye
Bade papa :- woh sab thik hai naam kya hoga dukan ka board bhi toh banana hai
Baba :- mene naam soch liya hai
Bade papa :- kya naam socha hai
Baba :- RUDRA GENERAL STORE
Bade papa :- wah ye badhiya kiya chal abhi raj se mil ke board banane ke liye bol dete hai
Raj ki printing press hai in same area (not role in story)
Raj :- are sujit ji pranam kya baat hai aaj is garib ke dukan ki yaad kaise aagayi dharmesh bhai bhi sath hai
Bade papa :- ha dharmesh bhi dukan khol raha hai uske liye board banvana hai urgent me 13 ko puja rakhi hai
Raj :- are wah bhai party kab de rahe ho
Bade papa :- ye chup pahle kaam ka toh puch dukan ka naam kya hai kaha jai kaisa board lagana hai nahi ye sab toh puchega nahi sidha party kaam ka na kaj ka dushman anaj ka
Bade papa ke dantne se raj wohi khade khade kapne laga kyunki puri market janti thi ki bade papa ko jab gussa aata hai toh wo kisi ko nahi chodte isliye puri market unse darti hai
Raj(ladkhadati awaj me) :- are sujit ji gussa kyu ho rahe ho mene toh bas aise hi pucha tha
Phir baba unhe sab bata dete hai phir woh jab ghar aate hai toh
Maa :- kya hua aaj bada jaldi aagaye
Baba :- are ha dukan ab taiyar ho gayi hai toh usi ke board banane ka order deke aarshe hai
Mosi :- ye toh achi baat hai kab khul rahi hai aapki dukan
Baba :- 15 ko khulegi 13 ko puja hogi
Mosi :- 1 baat puchu agar aap bura na mano toh
Maa :- teri baat ka bura kya manna aur tu yahi puchna chahti hai na 15 ko kya khas hai
Mosi :- ha aapne bhi tiffin service ka kaam 15 se start kar rahi hai aur bhaiya(baba) bhi apni dukan 15 se start kar rahe hai isliye pucha
Maa :- 15 ko rudra ka janm din hai
Wahi pe rahul aur anjali jo sab baat sun rahe the woh rudra ke birthday ki baat sun kar excite ho jate hai is 1 hafte me rahul, anjali aur rudra best friend ban gaye the jaha anjali aur rudra best friend the wohi rahul ke liye toh rudra rollmodel ban gaya tha
Rahul:- kya bhaiya(rudra) ka birthday hai
Maa :- haa aapke bhaiya ka birthday hai
Rahul :- maa chalo na bhaiya ke liye gift lena hai chalo na
Gift ka naam sunke mosi tension me aa jati hai kyuki unhe kaam shuru kiye abhi 1 hi hafta hua tha aur unke pass philhaal jyada paise bhi nahi the wohi bade papa ne ye baat pehchaan li ki woh pareshaan hai aur kyu pateshaan hai
Bade papa :- are rahul beta hume bhi toh gift lena hai toh sab ek saath jayenge lekin abhi gaye toh rudra ko pata chal jayega isliye abhi rudra ko koi nahi batayega hum 14 tarikh ko rudra ke school jane ke baad hum sab saath me jayenge
Rahul :- maa hum school kab jayenge
Anjali :- jab starting se school
Attend karta hai tab toh badi mushkil se pass hota hai aur ab aadhe se school attend karne ko bol raha hai matlab 100% fail hoga
Anjali ke aise bolne se jaha sab has rahe the wohi rahul ki shakal rone wali ho gayi thi
Rahul (rote huwe) :- mummy dekho na didi kya bol rahi hai
Rahul ke rone se sab aur jor se hasne lagte hai
Me :- kya hua aap sab has kyu rahe ho
Me ghar me entry karte hue sab se puchta hu
Rahul (waise hi rote hue) :- bhaiyaaa
Me :- rahul kya hua ro kyu raha hai
Rahul :- bhaiya woh
Phir rahul sab rudra ko batata hai hasi toh rudra ko bhi ho rahi thi lekin wo control karke bolta hai
Me :- are aise kaise fail hota hai tu ek kaam kar raat ko sone se pahle mere kamre me aa me tujhe padhaunga fir dekhta hu kaise fail hota hai lekin tu agle saal hi admission lena
Rahul :- thik hai bhaiya (anjali ko chidhate hue) dekha didi bhaiya ab mujhe padhayenge ab me nahi aap fail hongi
Me :- maa baba maine aapko competition ke baare me bataya tha na ( bag se form nikalte hue) ye uska form please fill kar dijiye na
Anjali :- konsa competition rudra
Fir rudra sabko competition aur uske parts ke baare me batata hai
Maa :- rudra ek baar aur soch lo
Me :- soch liya
Fir maa baba form fill kar dete hai
Mosi :- didi vo tiffin service ka naam kya rakhna hai advertising bhi jaldi shuru karni padegi
Maa :- are ha acha yaad dilaya
Bade papa :- isme sochne ki kya baat hai tum dono ko sambhalna hai toh tum dono rakho naam
Maa :- vaise dharmesh aapne dukan kya naam rakha hai
Baba :- RUDRA GENERAL STORE
Maa :- toh hum bhi rudra ke hi naam pe rakh lete hai kyu sanjna
Mosi :- ha didi mujhe bhi yahi sahi lagta hai
Me :- maa me naam du kya
Maa :- ha bol na hum wahi naam rakhenge
Me :- ARR TIFFIN SERVICES
Maa :- ha ye naam toh acha hai lekin iska matlab kya hai
Me :- A means Anjali R means Rahul R means Rudra kaisa hai naam
Ye sunte hi anjali aur rahul bhag kar rudra ko gale lag jate hai isi tarah masti majak me aaj ka din nikal jata hai
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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Bahut badhiya ab hero apni training ache dikha payega competition me aur tifin service ke liye hero ne naam bhi acha diya hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 6

Raat ko sab khana khane ke baad rohit aur anjali mere kamre me aate hai us waqt me bhi apna homework kar raha tha
Me :- aagaya rohit chal baith bata konse subject se start kare are ankali tum bhi aayi hi kyu tumhe bhi dar lag raha hai kya fail hone se
Anjali :- me toh bas ye dekhne aayi thi ki tum log padhai ke badle masti na karo
Me :- ok rahul bol kaha se start kare
Rahul :- aap ke favorite subject se
Me :- mera favorite toh maths hai
Rahul :- maths kaise kisi ko pasand ho sakta hai woh kitna boaring subject hota hai
Me :- ab mujhe pasand hai toh hai
Rahul :- theek hai
Me :- ek kaam karte hai geography se start karte hai
Rahul :- ok
Me :- toh bata geography me kya pasand hai
Rahul :- woh maps me location find karne wala game
Me :- me topic ki baat kar raha hu
Rahul :- bhai aaj wohi khelte hai na study kal se karenge
Me :- nahi study ke time sirf study
Rahul :- theek hai bhai
Me :- chal humare pass sirf 2 din hai phir shop ki puja udghatan fir tiffin service ki opening hume study ke liye jara bhi time nahi milega
Rahul(muskurate hue) :- ha bhai waise aap sahi bol rahe hai 15 ko time nahi milega bahut kaam hai
Me :- ha lekin tu itna muskura kyu raha hai
Rahul :- kuch nahi bhaiya party ke baare me soch raha tha
Me (hairani se) :- konsi party mujhe kyu nahi pata
Itna sunte hi rahul ko ehsas ho jata hai ki usne kya bola aur wohi anjali ne apna matha pit liya
Anjali (gusse se) :- are gadhe ise surprise ke baare me nahi batana tha
Me (man me) :- ghar me party woh bhi surprise party mere se chupke rudra abhi nahi pata lagaya toh malum hi nahi padega
Anjali :- chal ab yaha kya kar raha hai chal room me
Me :- ruk rahul history ki textbook nikal
Rahul :- history lekin hum geography padhne wale the na
Me :- ha lekin mera history ka homework bhi hai toh dono ka kam ho jayega
Rahul :- theek hai bhai
Anjali (man me) :- lagta hai rudra ne kuch nahi suna acha hi hai ab inki padhai hone tak yahi rukna hoga
Me (man me) :- jab tak anjali yaha hai kuch pata nahi chalega
Me :- anjali jara dekh toh bade papa abhi tak sone ke liye kyu nahi aaye aur mere liye jara pani leke aa
Anjali :- theek hai
Phir anjali chali gayi
Me :- rahul pata hai history me sabse important kya hota hai
Rahul :- ha dates aur names
Me :- sahi kaha tujhe pata hai mujhe ye dates hi yaad nahi rehte
Rahul :- ha bhai pata hai
Me :- tujhe kaise pata
Rahul :- abhi ka dekh lijiye aap ko 15 tarikh ka kaha kuch yaad hai
Me :- acha tujhe bada yaad hai
Rahul :- ha yaad hai
Me(notebook me dekhte hue) :- bata kya hai
Rahul(bina dhyan diye) :- aapka birthday
Me (man me) :- kya mera birth day aur me hi bhool gaya acha hua abhi pata chal gaya nahi toh har bar ki tarah ma baba mera majak udate abhi iske samne kuch react kia toh ye sabko bata dega abhi shant rehna padega nahi toh inka surprise me inko hi surprise dunga
Rahul :- kya hua bhai kya soch rahe ho
Me :- kuch nahi soch raha tha ki tu kitna smart hai phir bhi anjali tujhe gadha kyu bolti hai shayad wo teri smartness se jalti hai
Rahul :- ha bhaiya mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai bhaiya
Me :- ek baat yaad rakhna hum ne jo baate ki uske bare me kisi ko mat batana nahi toh wo tujhe hi budhu bolenge
Rahul :- nahi bhai me budhu thode hi hu jo sabko bolunga
Me :- well done my smart brother
Tabhi anjali aa jati hai aur uske piche bade papa bhi aajate hai
Anjali :- ho gayi kya padhayi
Rahul :- ha chaliye sone chalte hai
Phir woh dono chale gaye
Bade papa :- kya hua aaj itni jaldi yaad aagayi bade papa ki
Me :- ha bade papa baat hi aisi hai aaj maine jo Compitation ke baare me bataya tha woh mujhe jitna hai kisi bhi kimat pe isliye me chahta hu ki aap meri training double kar dijiye
Bade papa :- hmm theek hai kya tum is faisle ke baare me dubara sochna chahte ya tum taiyar ho
Me :- ji bade papa me taiyar hu
Bade papa :- theek hai chal soja
Bade papa :- (man me) matlab jo maine socha tha wo bilkul sahi hai rudra hi wo ho sakta hai jo hume shrap se mukti de lekin shayad ye jaldbaji ka faisla hoga aur kuch saal iski training ko continues rakhta hu agar ye wohi hai toh iski kismat khud use dusre padaw par le jayegi chalo jo hoga dekha jayega
Isi ke saath ye raat bhi bit gayi
At morning

Aaj subah yoga ke baad turant bade papa mujhe ground par le aaye aur ye me bhi janta tha ki aaj se meri band bajni tay hai
Bade papa :- toh rudra aaj se tumhari training duble hogi
Me :- ji bade papa
Phir bade papa ne mere sharir se 1 kg ki belt utar ke 5 kg ki belt pehna di aur uske baad training bhi dugni kar di jisse meri band baj gayi khair me thak hara school pahuch gaya
waha dusra bomb mere sir pe phutne ko taiyar tha hume pata chala ki jo trials kal hone wale the wo aaj hi shedule kar diye hai kyunki kal se diwali ki chuttiya chalu hone wali thi jo 1 mahina chalti thi isi bich humara competition bhi hone wala tha isliye mene jaldi se apna form submit kar diya wohi santosh sir ne mujhe kuch tips di phir jab selection ke liye ground pe pahuche toh me 10th number pe qualify kiya
kyunki subah ki training se me pahle hi thaka hua tha aur mere body 5 kg ka extra weight bhi laga tha phir jab ghar pahucha toh phir se mera torcher start hua bade papa ke hatho phir malish ke baad mujhe hi pata nahi chalta ki me kab so gaya
jab aankh khuli toh dinner ka time ho gaya tha tab mene sabko mere school chutti ke bare me bataya
jise sun kar anjali aur rahul ka mood off ho gaya kyunki jab me school jata tabhi wo mere liye gift lene jane wale the lekin ab wo nahi ja payenge
toh wohi ye sab dekhte hue baba ne mujhe 14 aur 15 ko dukan aane ko kaha madad ke liye mujhe ye samajh aa gaya tha ki ye log surprise ki taiyari ke liye ye sab kar rahe hai isliye me bhi turant maan gaya kyuki mene mera surprise bhi soch liya tha
Aise hi din bitte gaye aur meri training aur hard hoti gayi jisse ye hua ki ab me 5 ki jagh 6 kg weight uthane laga ab aaj mera birthday tha isliye me subah se ghar me ho rahi bhagdaud ko dekh raha tha jaha maa aur mosi tifin service ka bahana dekar mere liye cake aur bhi kai sare tarh tarh ke pakwan ban rahe the toh bade papa aur baba apni sari taiyari jitna jaldi ho sake utne jaldi kar rahe the kyunki mujhe ghar se bahar rakhne ki jimmedari unhe mili thi
Wohi anjali sabse jyada mehanat kar rahi thi sab se pahle woh maa ke sath cake banaya phir mosi ki khana banane aur cake ko sajane me help ki lekin kuch bhi usse perfect nahi ho raha tha wohi rahul bas order de raha tha jisse anjali kafi gusse me thi wohi me sabke maje le raha tha phir me bhi baba ke saath dukan ke liye nikal gaya
Wohi mere nikal te hi bade papa aur anjali ne pura ghar saja diya aur wohi dukan me sara kaam bhi ache se hogaya aur dukan bhi ache se chal padi wohi dupehar ke time jab lunch time hota hai tab bade papa mujhe leke humare yaha ke ek hotel me le gaye jaha humne bhar pet khana khaya
At evening
The time pf celebration
Ab jab me aur bade papa ghar pahuche tab ghar me har jagah sirf andhera hi andhera tha Tabhi light aagayi aur sab jagah ujala ho gaya aur ghar bhi achi tarah se sajaya tha ab time tha mere surprise ka

Jaha ye sab ho rha hai wohi dur kahi jangal me do saye khade the aisa lag raha hai ki wo do insaan na hoke aatma hai usme se ek aatma ka color orange toh wohi ek ka black hai
O. A. :- toh shayad woh mil gaya hai mujhe mehsus ho raha hai ki ab humare lord bahut jald humare saath honge aur phir shuru hogi barbaadi
B. A. :- ji orange beast aapne sahi kaha jis din humare lord ko woh mani mil gayi tab is duniya pe sirf aur sirf barbadi hogi
Orange beast . :- ha black beastlekin hume humare uddeshya se bhatkna nahi chahiye yaad rakhna lord humesha kehte the ki jab bhi kuch karo toh soch samajh ke karna
Black beast :- ji aapne sahi kaha isiliye toh aaj tak hum 3no shaant hai nahi toh us mamuli pret ko marna konsi badi baat hai
Orange beast :- ha lekin us pret ki maut toh bas ek shurwaat hogi phir hogi barbadi sare dushmano ki barbaadi bas kuch saal aur jilo
Hahahaha
Watawarn me gunji ye darawani hasi kisi ke bhi pran lene ke liye paryapt hai

At home

Jaise hi sab mujhe surprise dene aaye waise hi me bade papa se gale ja mila aur jo bola use toh sabhi shock hi ho gaye
Me :- happy birthday to you bade papa
Bade papa :- are
Me :- nahi aaj aap ko birthday celebrate karna hi hoga dekhiye sabhi ne kitna acha surprise plan kiya hai
Bade papa :- are lekin meri baat toh sun nahi koi kuch nahi bolega aap sab ko meri kasam ab sab log bade papa ka birthday celebration karenge chaliye bade papa
Ab meri kasam dene ke baad koi kuch nahi bola lekin sab ke chehre bata rahe the ki sabka mood off ho gaya tha aur jaha me sab ke chehre dekh kar mand hi mand has raha tha wohi bade papa ne cake kaat ke sab ko khila diya aur jab meri bari aayi tab itni der se cotrol ki hui hasi chut gayi
Me (haste hue) :- kaisa laga mera surprise
Sab :- kyaaa
Me :- ha sabko kya laga mere birthday celebration ka plan mere bina hi banaoge aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chlega
Anjali (gusse se) :- matlab
Me (man me) :- ab yaha se nikal na padega nahi toh anjali ka gussa mere pe hi niklega kya karu? Ha idea sorry mere bhai)
Anjali :- kya soch raha hai
Me (rahul ke kandhe pe hath rakhte hue) :- are jab mere pass itna smart bhai hai toh koi mujhe kaise koi budhu bana sakta hai ha bhai bol tere jaisa smart bhai hote hue koi bhi mujhe budhu bana sakta hai kya
Rahul :- nahi bhai
Usne itna bola hi tha ki anjali ka gusa uspe phut pada woh bichara pure ghar me yaha se waha bhagta raha
Rahul :- are didi muje kyu maar rahi ho
Anjali :- subah se hukum pe hukum diye ja raha hai aur ab puri birthday party bhi kharab kar di
Ab tak anjali ne sabke sath mil ke rohit ko pakad liya aur ab woh mujhe marne ke liya mere tarf badh hi rahi thi ki me mere kamre me ghus gaya ab bade papa aaye aur mujhe kamre se bahar nikala aur phir sab ne meri ache se khabar li phir mera birthday celebration hua phir aise hi aaj ka din bhi khatam ho gaya


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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Lagta hai ye Bade papa pret hai Jo ye saye baat kar rahe hai aur acha maja chakhaya hero ne suprise walo ko khaskar Rahul faswa diya

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 7

Nexr day

Aaj subah sabne muje mere gifts diye jinhe dekh ke me shock ho gaya kyuki jo chije mujhe chahiye thi wohi unhone mujhe gift diye the
Jaha maa baba ne mujhe naye kapde diye the wohi rahul ne mujhe video game diya tha
Sanjana mosi ne mujhe wrist wacth di thi

wahi bade papa ne mujhe sports shoes and cloths diye the
Wohi anjali ne ek mouth organ diya tha

jo ki bhut pyara tha aur mujhe bhi pasand aaya tha
Aise hi din nikalte gaye aaj mera competition ka din tha
Sabse pehla competition tha race usme abhi time tha tabhi santosh sir aaye mujhe tips dene lage
Sir :- mene jo bhi bola use dhyan rakhna aur daudte waqt jyada nervous mat hona
Me :- ok sir
Abhi sir kuch bolte bade papa aagaye
Bade papa :- taiyaar hai mere sher apne life ke pahle competition ke liye
Me :- ji bade papa
Bade papa :- shabash mere sher muje barosa hai ki tu hi jitega mene jo bola hai hai woh dhyan hai na
Me :- ji bade papa dhyan hai
Sir :- Rudra tumhare competition ka time ho gaya hai
Me :- ji sir (sir ke pair chute hue) aashirwaad dijiye sir
Sir (mere sar pe hath rakhte hue) :- mene us din jo kaha tha use yaad rakhna
Me :- ji sir (phir bade papa ke pair chute hue) bade papa mujhe aashirwaad dijiye ki me hi jitu
Bade papa :- arey in bacho ke Compitation ke bare me kyu tension le raha hai woh toh tu hi jitega
Phir me waha se nikal jata hu wahi bade papa sir ko dekhte hue
Bade papa :- ab boliye kya problem hai
Sir :- matlab
Bade papa :- mujhe sidha point pe aane ki aadat hai jab me rudra se baat kar raha tha tab aapko dekha tha aap ki aakho me gussa dikh raha tha
Sir :- toh theek hai seedhi baat aap ko sharm nahi aati itne chote bache ko aap mentally torture kar rahe hai
Bade papa :- kya matlab
Sir :- us chote bache pe itna pressure dal rahe hai ki use ek all the best bhi nahi bola aur use ye competition bacho ka khel bol rahe ho arey ye competition usse double age ke bacho ke liye bhi hard hai aap uspe pressure dal rahe hai
Bade papa :- acha laga i like it
Sir :- kya….. Kya matlab aapka
Base papa :- yahi ki rudra ke sir uske liye itni chinta karte hai ye dekh ke acha laga
Sir :- aap ke dimag me ghus raha hai kuch ya aisa hai ki me hi bakbak kiye ja raha hu
Bade papa :- ghus bhi raha hai aur samajh me bhi aaraha hai lekin ye faisla rudra ka hai kisi ne uspe jor nahi dala hai isliye iska anjaam jo bhi ho iska jimmedar wo hi hoga
Sir:- aapka bolne me kya jayega mehanat toh woh karega jab woh harega khaskar tab jab sab log uspe ummid laga ke honge tab pata hai woh kitna tut jayega
Bade papa :- usme humari galti nahi hai jab sab ki ummid 1 se lagi hoti hai tab un sab ki taakat bhi us 1 me aajati hai agar woh phir bh haar gaya toh isme galti uski hi hai 1 lohar bas talwar banata hai lekin uska istemaal kaha karna hai kaise karna hai woh ye nahi jaanta ye bas woh yodha janta hai jiske pass woh sword hoti hai
Sir :- bate achi banate ho lekin rudra shayad in bato ke liya chota hai
Bade papa :- rudra mere bete jaisa hai me wohi karta hu jo uske liye sahi hoga
Sir :- bete se yaad aaya aapka 1 beta abhi jinda hai na kya naam hai uska ha balveer suna hai usne aapke sar pe banduk tan di thi taki aap property ke papers pe sign kar sake so sad
Sir :- me jaisa dikhta hu waisa hu nahi dua hi karna ki mere se kabhi takkar na ho fight me national level winner hu (bade papa ke kandhe pe hath rakhte hue) its just for your information
Sir bahar jahi rahe the ki tabhi


Wohi ground me meri race start ho gayi thi aur meri daily exercise ki wajah se meri speed badh gayi thi lekin aaj bhi bade papa ne mujhe belts utarne ki permission nahi di thi balki 1 kg badha diya tha
Ab starting me extra weight ki wajah se me thodi mushkil hui lekin me jald hi weight ke saath adjust ho gaya
Ab jaha me lagbhag last hi tha wohi me ab 9th position pe aa gaya tha
Aise last ke round tak me 2nd aagaya tha aadhe se jyada student to thakne ki wajah se haar gaye aur baki ko mene peeche chod diya
Ab hum dono hi finish line ke najdik the ki tabhi


Wohi changing room me

Sir bahar jahi rahe the ki tabhi
Bade papa :- ravi patil aapka student aapka ek lauta beta
use janm dete waqt aapki patni mar gayi isliye aapke gharwalo ne use manhoos man ke paida hote hi mar ne ki koshis ki but aap use leke bhag gaye
aur yaha aagaye yaha aane ke baad bache ko palne ke liye aapne school me nokri hasil kari lekin phir bhi aapke pass jyada paisa nahi tha toh aap ne fight ke mukable me hissa lena shuru kia
aapke bete ko bhi aapne 5 saal ki umr se national level winner banne ke liye train kia aap uske liye hero the isliye woh bhi bina sawal kiye aap jaisa bolte waisa hi karta
aise hi 15 saal aur nikal gaye
ab tak aapka beta state level competition ke liye select ho gaya tha aur jit bhi jata lekin apne pita ke apne pita ke apne prati vishwas ko dekh ke use dar lagne laga ki woh haar gaya toh uska hero uske baare me kya sochega isliye woh drugs lene laga
lekin uska bad luck competition ke sirf 1 ghante pehle drugs lete hue pakda gaya aur use humesha ke liye suspend kar diya jisse uske pita ne usse baat karne se mana kar diya
Ye woh sah na paya aur sucide kar liya
Ye sab sunne ke baad sir ki aakho me gussa aur nami saaf saaf dikh rahi thi
Sir:- aapko kaise pata
Bade papa (muskurate huye) :- me jaisa dikh raha hu waisa hu nahi (sir ke khande pe hath rakhte hue) aap bhale hi national level winner ho lekin me pure universe ka best fighter ka khitab jit chuka hu mujhse panga mat lena kahi mera ek haath pad gaya toh apne bete ke pass na phuch jao
Sir :- mana mene ravi ke saath galat kia lekin is sab me mujhe bhi ek sikh mil gayi ki 'agar mukabla jeeto toh use apne dimag me mat chadhao aur agar haar jao toh dil me mat lagao' lekin lagta hai aap me ghamand jyada hi hai
Bade papa :- aadha gyan agyanta se jyada bura hota hai
Ye sach hai ki jeet ka ghamand aur haar ne ka dar bura hai lekin wohi yodha ko maha yodha banata hai
Sir :- kaise
Bade papa (muskurate huye) :- abhi bache ho jab bade hoge tab pata lagana
Itna bolke bade papa nikal gaye
Wohi ground me
Hum dono finish line ke najdik the ki tabhi us dusre ladke mujhe girane ke liye dhaka diya lekin mene achanak speed badha di aur wo khud hi gir gaya natija me jit gaya
Tab tak sir aur bade papa bhi aagaye
Me :- sir,bade papa dekhiye me jit gaya
Sir :- bhut ache i am proud of you
Bade papa :- itni jaldi khush mat ho ye toh bas 1 part hai 2 part abhi bache hai
Me (mayush hote hue) :- ji bade papa
Phir bade papa chale gaye
Sir :- dekho rudra jo tumne aaj kiya woh kabile tarif hai bhale me match nahi dekha lekin commentary se pata chala kaise tumne sako haraya sabse aakhir me se first position pe
Me (khush hote hue) :- ye bhi bade papa ki hi idea hai ki kabhi kisi competition me shuru me hi apni taakat mat dikhao balki pahle apne apko kamjor dikhao phir dheere dheere apni takat dikhao phir aakhir me apni sari taakat ko ek saath samne lao phir hum hi jeetenge
Phir me bhi waha se chala gaya
Sir (man me) :- aakhir ye aadmi chahta hai kya itne chote bache ko jung ke daav pech shikha raha hai

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My 1st story

Rudra (adventure story)

please read if you like then support and you dont like then please tell me where is my mistake

Bahut jabardast update bhai bahut ache se aur aasani se heo race Jeet Gaya aur bade papa ne bhi sir ko ache suna Diya

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Chalo acha hai hero competition me Jeet Gaya aur ab 18 saal ka ho gaya hai ya hone wala hai aur Rahul se bhai chara bhi badh gaya hai aur Anjali se pyar bhi

Update 8



Jab me sir se milke maa baba se milne ja raha tha ki tabhi rahul aake mere gale lagke congratulations dene laga
Anjali (taunt marte hue) :- jita rudra hai tu nahi jo itna khush ho raha hai
Rahul :- bhai jite ya me baat ek hi hai lekin aap kyu jal rahi ho
Me :- rahul mujhe maa baba se toh milne de
Rahul :- sorry bhai
Me :- are isme sorry ki kya baat hai tu bhai hai mera
Rahul :- ji bhai
Phir me waha se maa baba ke pass chala gaya aur sabse pehle maa baba aur mosi ke pair chue aur unka aashirwad liya phir unhone meri tarif ki aur uske baad hum sab hotel me jaake jit celebrate ki uske baad sham ko ghar aa gaye jab me room me sone ja raha tha tab bade papa ne mujhe training karne me liye bulaya me mana karne laga toh wo mujhe utha kar le gaye phir mene bhi haar mankar beman se training karne laga usme saam ke 7 baj gaye race aur training karne se me itna thak gaya tha ki bed pe let te hi nind aa gayi jo sidha raat ko khane ke time khuli aur me fresh hoke khana khane baith gaya
Rahul (khana khate huye):- kal konsa competition hai bhai
Me :- kal nahi parso kal rest aur preparation ke liye diya hai
Rahul :- toh kya kal me aapke saath aapki help kar sakta hu wase bhi me baithe baithe boar ho jata hu
Me :- ha kyu nahi
Anjali:- agar tu iski madada karega toh yeh pakka har jayega
Baba :- are chup raho tum dono aur khana khao
Dono :- ji mama(rahul aur anjali baba mama maa ko mami kahte hai)
Phir sab ne khana khaya aur raat ko sote samay bade papa ne mujhe ghar ke library me bulaya jo ki har waqt band hi rahti thi jab me gaya toh mujhe waha bahut se weapons dikhe sare bhi antiques the

Me :- bade papa ye itne sare wepons aapke pass kaise aur kyu
Bade papa :- woh aise ki ye ye sab mere hi hai aur jab samay aayega tab inka use bhi me tumhe sikha dunga
Me :- lekin bade papa aap mujhe itna train kyu karte hai jaise ki mujhe kisi jung me jana hai
Bade papa :- ye me tumhe tumhari training ke baad bataunga
Me :- kyu abhi kyu nahi
Bade papa :- kyuki duniya me har chij ka samay tay hota hai aur us samay se pahle kuch bhi agar aisa ho gaya jo nahi hona chahiye toh woh sabke liye bhut khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai samjhe tum ha bade papa
Bade papa :- mene tumhe yeh kitabe dene ke liye bulaya hai

inhe har din yoga ke baad aur sone se pahle padhna aur jab man kare tab bhi padh sakte ho lekin in dono time tumhe padhna hi hai chahe jo bhi ho
Me :- ok bade papa
Bade papa :- aur ha sote waqt jo kitab padh rahe ho use apne takiye ke niche rakhna aur ye hum dono ka top secret hai is ke baare me kisi ko bhi mat batana
Me :- ji bade papa
Aur phir me apne room me jake woh kitab padhne laga 1-1.5 ghanta padhne ke baad mujhe jab nind aane lagi to me sone hi wala tha ki rahul aur anjali padhai ke liye mere room me aa gaye
Rahul :- bhai aap so rahe the kya
Me :- nahi re me toh bas sone ja raha tha
Anjali :- toh theek hai hum kal baat karenge
Me :- are nahi tum batao kya baat hai
Rahul :- aap hume padhane wale the na
Me :- sorry rahul aaj kafi thak gaya hu
Rahul :- are isme sorry ki kya baat hai bhai
Me :- good night rahul & anjali
Dono :- good night
Tabhi bade papa room me aa gaye
Rahul :- bade papa mujhe aapse baat karni thi akele me
Bade papa :- ha chalo
Phir bade papa aur rahul chale gaye me bhi anjali se kuch der baat ki phir woh bhi chali gayi phir bade papa room me aaye
Me :- kya hua
Bade papa :- sab theek hai aur koi sawal nahi jo bhi hoga sahi samay par pata chal jayega
Me :- ji bade papa
Bade papa :- aaj konsi book padh rahe ho
Me :- gupt yogatmik shakti
Bade papa :- theek hai ab jab tak ye kitab puri padhkar nahi hoti dusri kitab ko hath bhi nahi lagana
Me :- ok
Phir hum dono so gaye
Wohi dusri taraf aaj phir wo do beast jama huye the
Orange beast :- lord ki koi khabar
Black beast :- nahi aacharya(orange beast ka naam) lekin itna pata chal chuka hai ki unhone manav yoni me janm liya hai aur ab apne master ke saath jivan vytit kar rahe hai
Aacharya :- kya master ne bhi janm liya hai ye sab aakhir kyu ho raha hai kahi na koi bada shadyantra racha ja raha hai jisse hum abhi anjan hai
Tabhi waha 1 aur saya aata hai woh pura blue colour ka tha uske sharir se blue kirne aise nikal rahi thi ki mano aag ki lapte nikal rahi hi

Use dekh te hi dono saye dar se kapne lage aur apne ghutno par baith gaye aur eksaath bolne lage
Dono :- mahamahim ko hamara salam
M.M :- acharya aur sura(black beast) aap dono dharti pe kya kar rahe ho
Sura :- mahamahim hume kuch varsho pahle kisi shakti shali shaktikunj ka anumaan hua tha dharti par tabhi hum 3no dharti par aa gaye
M.M :- 3no matlab
Aacharya :- humare saath igris bhi aaya hai
M. M:- aur kya pata chala us shakti ke baare me
Sura :- lord ne phirse janm liya hai manavyoni me aur unke saath master hone ki bhi sambhavna hai
M. M:- ho kya raha hai dharti par lord aur master ek saath agar unhe sambhala nahi gaya toh dhrti me narsanhar hone der nahi lagegi
Awaj :- aisa nahi hoga mahamahim
Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki waha ek white saya aagaya wo aage aake mahamahim ke samne jhuk kar salam karne laga
M. M :- khade ho jao igris, aur batao kyu aisa nahi hoga jab lord ko purani bate yaad aagayi toh unke krodh ko koi nahi sambhal payeg
Igris :- kyunki unki krodhgni unke pass nahi hai jab yudh khatm hua tha tab lord ki krodhgni itni badhi thi ki khud master ne unki krodhagni ko apne andar sama li thi isliye is janm me unki krodhagni unke pass nahi master ke pass hai
M. M:- aur agar master ka krodh jagrit hua toh
Igris :- lord ke pass bhale hi unki krodhagni nahi hai lekin use shant karne ki urja jarur hai aur wohi master ke krodh ko shant kar sakenge
M. M:- theek hai jab sahi samay aayega tab mujhe bulana un dono ki prathamik shaktiya ko unhe de dunga
Igris :- mafi mahamahim lekin isbaar unhe unki shaktiya aasani se nhi milegi unhe us shakti ko pana hoga khudko unke kabil sabit karna hoga yahi shrap mila tha unhe yaad hai na
M. M :- ha kaise bhul sakta hu wo manhus din jab pure bramhand me khoon ki nadiya bahi thi
Igris :- abhi hume jana hoga suryodya hone wala hai
Phir woh charo saye waha se gayab ho gaye
Next dat
At morning
Aaj me jab utha aur kitab me se 1-2 yoga try kar raha tha tab mujhe kuch alag sa laga jaise ki me aag me jal raha hu lekin jab aakh khuli toh dekha ki sab sahi hai kidher bhi kuch bhi nahi hua isliye me aakhe band karke phirse yoga karne laga phir se aisa hi laga ki me jal raha hu lekin aakh kholi sab normal hi tha aisa 5-6 baar hua ab me thak har kar bina kisi tarf dhyan diye yoga karne laga aise hi 1 ghanta beet gaya lekin me toh jaise yoga karne me doob chuka hu ab aise hi yoga kar raha tha ki achanak meri aakhe khul gayi aaspass dekha toh kuch nahi tha ab mera yoga kane ka man nahi tha toh me phorse wahi kitab padhne laga 500-600 pages honge usme aur abhi toh me 8-9 pe hi pahucha tha ki training ka samay ho gaya
Tha jab me training ground pe pahucha toh ek surprise mera intezaar kar raha tha aur woh tha rahul jo ki pahle se training karne me laga hua tha
Me :- rahul tum yaha
Rahul (dudte hue) :- ha bhai me soch raha tha ki me bhi training karu aap ki tarah me bhi sikhunga bilkul aap ki tarah
Me (uske sath daudte hue) :- ye toh achi baat hai ab mujhe bhi partner milega
Rahul :- ha ab hum dono har waqt sath honge
Me :- ha
Aise hi bade papa ne aur bhi training karai jaha pe mujhe strictly train kia ja raha tha wohi rahul pe thodi kam sakhti dikhayi ja rahi thi aaj training ke baad me competition ke liye padhne laga wohi rahul bhi mere bag se kitab nikal ke padhne laga
Me :- kya padh raha hai
Rahul(bina book ka cover dekhte hue) :- history
Me :- boaring history padhne se acha mer help hi karde waise bhi book ulti pakdi hai aur woh science hai
Rahul :- me isi ka toh intezaar kar raha tha ki aap kab mujhse madad mange
Me :- waise tu anjali ke saath kyu nahi khelta woh toh teri sagi bahan hai me toh tujhe 1 se 1.5 mahine pahle hi mila hu
Rahul :- aapko acha nahi lagata kya aisa nahi hai lekin soch woh teri badi bahan hai use bhi lagta hoga ki uska bhai uske saath khele uske sath padhai kare
Rahul :- ha bhai mujhe bhi lagta hai ki me unke saath bhi apke saath karta hu waise msati karu padhai karu lekin woh har waqt mujhe tana marti rehti hai toh me kya karu
Me :- acha theek hai senti mat ho me hu na tere saath
Rahul :- ha bhai chalo competition ka preparation karte hai
Me :- waise tu training kyu kar raha hai
Rahul :- aapko dekhte dekhte mujhe bhi man hone laga toh mene bhi socha ki aapki tarah training karne laga
Me :- chal ab mujhe help kar(gk ki book iske taraf karte hue) ye deka yaha se yaha tak tu jitne ya jaise bhi question puch
Rahul(book lete hue) :- theek hai bhai
Phir uske baad rahul ne mujhse sawal puchne laga jiska answer me de deta aise hi din aur book dono complete ho gaye sham ko hum dono ko sath training karte dekh sab hairan ho gaye phir sab ko samjhane ke baad sab ne sath milke khana khaya jaha rohit har din se jyada khana kha raha tha me bhi uska sath dete hue aaj jyada khaya phir sab sone gaye me pahle gk ka revision karke yoga book padhne laga jab bade papa aaye tab unse kaha ki meri training slow kar dijiye jab tak rahul bhi mere level pe na aajaye thoda bahut manane ke baad bade papa bhi man gaye phir hum so gaye subah hum dono ne mil ke training ki uske baad me school nikal gaya jaha pe mera competition tha aaj hume mcq types question diye the
Jab me test deke ghar ja raha tha tab pata chala ki humara next competition bhi aaj hi hoga toh ab hum kya bole to hum bhi test ke liye ruk gaye jo ki mera bahut acha gaya sab mujhe pahle hi aata tha abhi 2 hafte wait karna tha jiske baad competition ka result announce hoga
Aise hi 2 hafte nikal gaye isme kuch khas nahi hua me aur rahul subah uthke sath exercise karte rahul ko yoga ke baare me nahi pata tha isliye me yoga apne kamre me hi karta tha us din ke baad ab tak har din kitab me likhi yoga karte waqt lagta ki mere har taraf aag lagi hai lekin sab ko ignore karke yoga karta rehta phir exercises ke baad pura di. Me aur rahul khelte rehte ya phir padhayi karte aur anjali maa aur mosi ki help karti thi kaam me aur phir humare sath khelti bhi thi
Aaj jab me yoga karke utha phir rahul ke sath exercise karta aur aaj hum brakfast kar hi rahe the ki doorbell baj uthi rahul ne jab darwaja khula toh waha humare school ka peon khada tha peon ne 1 letter diya aur chala gaya
Maa :- aisa kya kiya jo ghar tak school ke letter aane lage
Baba :- are padh toh lo ho sakta hai competition ka result ho
Maa :- ha me dekhti hu
Phir maa ne letter khola toh woh competition ka result hi tha
Me first tha aur first hone ka price tha ki is saal ki meri fees maaf ho jayegi is competition ke bare me santosh sir ne bataya tha
Ab sab mujhe badhayi de rahe the phir sabne breakfast kia phir har din ki tarah me aur rahul padhai karne lage phir sham ko training aise 13 saal nikal gaye
In 13 salo me bahut kuch ho gaya
1. rudra aur rahul dono ki training complete ho gayi (training me kya hua ye aapko time to time pata chalta jayega)
2. Rahul aur anjali ne bhi school me admission le liya woh teeno 1 hi class me padhte hai ab hal ye tha ki jaha anjali ache marks se pass hote hai waha rahul aur rudra pure school me top karte hai
Rudra jis bhi competition me part leta rahul bhi usi me leta aur dono ek dusre ko tough competition dete lekin har baar rudra hi 1st aata aur rahul 2nd
3. Rudra aur rahul dono ko ab yoga karte waqt kafi kuch mehsoos hota jo wo dono ek dusre se discuss karte lekin kisi aur ko nahi batate(jo ki aapko aage pata chalega)
4. Rudra aur anjali ek dusre ko pyar karne lage lekin is baare me dono jante hai lekin abhi tak kisi ne izhaar nahi kiya inke baare me ghar me rahul ko chod ke kisi ko nahi pata
4. Rudra jaha ekdum gussail hai use gussa aata nahi lekin jab aata hai samne wale ko chodta nahi iska gussa sirf anjali aur rahul hi shant kar sakte hai
5. Sujit (bade papa) ne inhe duniya ke sare fighting techniques aur har weapon ka use shikhaya hai
6. Jo kitabe inhe bade papa ne di thi jisse inhe kuch aisa chijo ka gyan mila hai jo samay ke anusar me aapko bata dunga
7. Aur bhu bahut si bate badli lekin woh aapko time to time flash back me pata chalregi
Ab apna phase 1 idher end ho chuka hai
Aur next update se phase 2 start hoga jo ki ful action aur thril se bhara hoga suspense bhi hoga aur ye humare story ka one of important part hoga aur isiliye me chahta hu ki aap mera sath aise hi dete rahe aur agar kuch suggestions ho toh wo bhi bataye
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My 1st story

Rudra (adventure story) :-

Adultery - Rudra (adventure story)

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[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 9 (phase 2)



Raat ka time tha ghanghor andhera

us andhere ko chirte hue 1 bike jispe 2 ladke baithe the

woh speed se ja rahi thi aur unke piche kuch gadiya speed se un bike sawaro ko pakadne ke hetu se unka picha kar rahe the
Aise hi picha karte karte wo bike aake 1 khai ke samne ruki aur bike ke rukte hi
Screeech
Screeech
Sari cars ne bhi achanak break mari
Aur un cars se 1 ke baad 1 aadmi nikle wo kul 25-30 aadmi the woh dikhne se hi gunde lag rahe the unke utarte hi woh dono bike sawar bhi bike se utar gaye
Gundon ka g kake aur ldkon ko l1 and l2 karke bulaunga.
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi l2 kone nikal bhagta hai jise dekh kar sare gunde hasne lagte hai.
G :- ye kya ye toh bhag gaya ab tum akele hamara kya bigad lega
L1 :- jaise kal tere boss ki factory udayi waise hi tumhe bhi uda dunga
G :- acha toh tum ho woh umr se toh kam ho lekin puri factory udadi
L1 :- umr se kya hota hai aise kam karne ke liye jigra chahiye jo hai ham dono me
G :- wah bate toh badi hai teri lekin tera dost toh tujhe chod kar bhag gaya
Tabhi piche se l2 bolta hai
L2 :- are jara piche bhi dekho na tab bolo kon bhaga
G :- acha tu wapas aa gaya
L2 :- me gaya hi kab tha me toh ghum kar picbe aaya tha taki koi bach ke na nikal paye
L1 :- chal jyada time pass mat kar waise bhi ye humare kisi kaam ke nahi
L2 :- ji bhai
G :- are ye kya…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi ek ke baad ek goliya chali aur ye goliya chalane wale wahi 2 ladke the
Hua ye ki jaise hi us gunde ne kuch bolne ke liye mu khola waise hi un do ladko ne apni jeb se 2-2 gun bahar nikal ke sab pe fire karna shuru kar diya

Jisse jaha abhi kuch der pahle 25-30 aadmi the wohi ab lashon ka dher laga tha har tarf bas khoon aur lashe hi
L2 :- bhai agar inke leader kuch puchtach karte toh shayad aur pata chalta shayad
L1 :- nahi kuch pata nahi chalta sab bhade ke tatoo hai inhe kuch nahi pata
L2 : hume toh bas kuch hi addo ke baare me pata hai agar un haramio ko puri tarh se barbaad karna hai toh unke sare addon ke baare me pata hona chahiye
L1 :- jaise in sab addon ke baare me pata chala waise hi baki ke thikano ka bhi pata chal jayega
Tring-tring…
Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki waha gire lasho mese kisi ka phone paja shayad ye unka leader tha
L2 ne phone uthake l1 ko diya aur l1 ne call utha liya
Samne se :- hello
Me :- (shanti se)
Samne se :- mardiya usko
Me :- jinse ap baat karna chahte ho wo abhi badlo ke rath se yampuri ja rahe hai aap bhi apna sara kaam pura karke rakhe kyunki kuch dino aap bhi usi rath me sawar honge
Samne se :- jis din tu samne aaya usi din tujhe maar dunga
L1 :- mar gaye mujhe marne wale
Samne se :- tujhe toh me dekh lunga
L1 :- agar dekhna hai toh hume milna hoga
Samne se :- Agar himmat hai toh samne aake dikha
L1 :- tu khud pata nahi kis bill me chupa hai aur mujhe lalkar raha hai ye toh wohi baat ho gayi ki chuha khud apne bill me dubak kar baitha hai lekin phir bhi bahar ke hathi ko maidane jung ke liye bula raha hai
Samne se :- teri itni himmat ki mujhe chua bola ruk tu abhi tujhe dhumdhke mar dunga
L1 :- are maine toh bola hi nahi ki tu chua hai lagta hai ki tune teri asliyat swikaar kar li hai acha hai waise bhi tu kis bill me chupa hai woh bata me khud aa jata hu tere pass
Samne se :- agar himmat hai toh laga pata me kaha chipa hu chal tujh pe ahsaan karta hu jis factory ko tune udaya usi ke basement me hu aa aur dikha himmat
Ye sunte l1 pta nahi kyu halka sa muskura deta hai lekin turant serious hote hue
L1 :- apne liye 4 kandho ka intezaam kar le kyunki agle 24 ghante khatm hone se pahle me teri chita ko agni dunga
Itna bolte hi l1 ne wo phone wohi khai se niche phek diya
L1 (l2 ki taraf dekhte hue) :- le ab usi harami se uske thikano ke address puchna
L2 :- me sahdev ko bolke backup ready rakhne ke liye bolta hu
Kuch der baad woh dono ladke ek bade haweli ke samne khade the puri tarah khoon se lathpath agar un dono ko koi kamjor dil wala dekh le toh tabhi mar jaye
Un dono ladko ke haath me talwar aur samne kate pade karib 30-35 aadmio ki lashe ye saaf bata rahi thi ki abhi kitni bhayanak ladai hui hogi waise khoon se sane huye woh do ladke chalte huye us haweli ke andar jate hai jaha 1 aadmi aaram se baitha tha jaise bahar kuc ho raha hai use kich pata hi na ho
L1 :- are tuti hui factory ke neeche kya mast basement banaya hai is ko banane wale karigar ka number de na mujhe
Wo aadmi :- raghu raghu
Wo aadmi apne guards ya gundon ko bulane laga
L2 :- koi fayda nahi sab mare gaye waise sach me tu chuha nikla wo bhi kam akal
L1 :- tune jhuta address deke toh hume bomb se udane ka mast plan banaya lekin sale agar hum tere jaise underworld don ki itni baja sakte hai ki wo khud dar ke mare apne aap ko house arrest kar sakta hai toh soch na ki humara dimag kitna tej hoga
Wo aadmi :- matlab
L1 :- tune apne original number se phone lagaya jise track karke hum yaha aa gaye
L2 :- kitna chutiya hai tu aaj tera marna tay hai agar jinda bachna hai toh hunare sawalo ka jawab de
Itna bolke l2 ne apni jeb se gun nikal ke uske pair pe goli mar di
Wo aadmi (dard se bil bilate hue) :- mmmm…. Mujhe maf kardo me sare sawalo ka jawab deta hu
L2:- pahle professional sawal
Tere sare thikano ka pata bata
Aadmi :- nahi wo log mujhe maar denge
Dishkiyaoon
Itna sunte hi l2 ne apni gun se uke kandhe par fire kar diya
Aadmi :- mat maro pls…. Mai bata hu
Phir woh aadmi ne rote hue sab bata diya jo l1 apne phone me record kar raha tha
L2 :- ab personal sawal (kuch photos phekte hue) in sab ko jante ho
Phir woh aadmi un photos wale logo ke bare me jitna use pata tha bata deta hai
Aur bhi kuch sawal jawab hue lekin jab sawal jawab ka daur ruka tab sabse pable l1 ne apni jeb se 1 cutter nikal kar sabse pahle us admi ki 20 ki 20 ungliya kat di phir jab us admi dard kam hua toh l1 ne uske sine pe pair rakh kar uske 2no hath ukhad pheke phir se dard kam hote uske 2no pair bhi ukhad pheke phir us aadmi ke kan ke pass jakar
L1 :- sabka hisab hoga koi naahi bachega bachenge toh bas wo log jo umsab ke gharwale jinki galti nahi hai lekin wo bhi aisi jindagi jiyenge ki us jindagi se jyada achi unhe maut lagegi aur shurwat hogi tere family se teri maut ke baad bhale hi woh alishaan bangle me rahe lekin khana toh dur pani ke liye bhi bheek magni padegi unhe chal ab soja subah sab log diwali ki spl news sunenge bas sunenge nahi balki manayenge bhi ek aisi diwali jo dekhne wala apne pure jivan kal me nahi bhulega
Itna bolke l1 aadmi ke sir ko dhad se ukhad pheck diya
L1 (l2 se) :- sari jagah check kar jo bhi kam ki chiz mile uthale aur agar koi insaan dikhe toh hath pair kat kar jinda chod dena
L2 :- ji bhai
L1 :- sahdev ko sab thikano ki list de aur
bol diwali celebration ki taiyari karo
L2 :- theek hai
Kuch hi der baad woh dono ladke aur unke sath aur 3 jan bhi the jinmese 2 ladke aur ek ladki thi wo sab ek aisi jagah par the ki jaha se pura shahar dikh sake
L1 jab l2 ki taraf dekhta hai toh l2 ki akho me aasu the
L1 :- kya hua aise ro kyu raha hai
L2 :- aaj hi ke din wo
Itna bolte hi l2 l1 ke gale lag kar rone laga
L1 :- shant hoja mere bhai shant ho ja rahul
Ji sahi samjhe l2 apna hi rahul hai aur l1 rudra
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki tabhi pure shahr me ek ke baad ek dhamake hone lagte hai jo kahi aur nahi balki unhi thikano par ho rahe the jin thokano ka address unhone nikala tha

Aakhir aisa kya hua rudra aur rahul ke saath jo masoom se bacho se murderer banne par majboor ho gaye

Kon hai wo log jo wo dono khel rahe is khooni khel me unka sath de rahe hai

Akhir kon tha wo aadmi jise rudra ne itni berahmi se mara

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My 1st story
Rudra (adventure story)

Bahut bura hua hai shayad ya inki family ko maar diya hai jisse ye itne aggressive aur dangerous ho Gaye hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 10




2 saal pahle


Aaj haweli me sab bade khush hai kyunki aaj rudra ka 18va janmdin hai
Har saal ki tarah ghar sajane ki jimmedari baba aur bade papa ki thi
Khana banane ki jimmedari maa aur mosi ne uthayi thi
Aur rudra ko busy rakhne ki jimmedari anjali aur rahul ne uthayi thi
Morning time
At home
Rahul aur rudra ki training 2 mahine pahle hi complete ho chuki thi isliye wo dono exercise sirf week me 1-2 baar hi karte the
But yoga wo daily morning me karte the 2 ghanta phir vapas so jate yehi un dono ki routine thi dono ki
Aaj subah 5 baje rudra aaram se soya hua tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja dheere se khula aur bina aawaj kiye koi uske kamre me ghus gaya aur rudra ki taraf badh hi raha tha ki tabhi achanak se rudra ki nind khul jati hai aur wo use khich kar bed par sula deta hai
hua yu ki aaj rudra ko yoga karte hue hi 5 baj gaye tabhi use apne kamre ke bahar halchal hoti mahsus huyi isliye wo turant bed pe lete lete sone ka natak karne laga
Rudra jab use bed pe leta deta hai tab wo bhag na jaye isliye uspar baith jata hai phir jab uska chehra dekhta hai toh muskura deta hai
Kyunki wo koi aur nahi anjali thi jo rudra ko sabse pahle wish karne aayi thi
Rudra :- kya baat hai aaj humara naseeb hi khul gaya ki khud pariyo ki rani humare room me padhari
Anjali :- uth saand kahike nahi toh me tere niche hi dab jaungi
Ab rudra uske uper se uth toh jata hai lekin phir use apne se chipaka kar so jata hai
Anjali :- ab ye kya chood mujhe
Rudra :- ab hum toh nahi chodne wale aakhir aap humari girlfriend hai aur hone wali wife
Anjali :- wo wife ke bache pahle prupose kar phir gharwalo ko mana phir me sochti hu ki tujhse shadi karu ya nahi
Rudra :- he bhagwan shadi se pahle itne nakhre shadi ke baad kya hoga mujh bechare ka
Anjali(ada ke sath) :- wohi hoga jo manjure anjali hoga
Rudra :- hye ye ada kisi din humari jaan jarur le legi waise aaj ye aasman ki hoor hum per bijli girane humare kamre me kyu aayi
Anjali :- aaj humare sartaj ka janmdin hai unhi ko wish karne aaye hai
Rudra :- acha lekin madam aapke is khel ke chakar me pata hai kya time hua kuch hi der me sara pariwaar darwaje pe khada hoga
Tabhi darwaja bajne laga
Anjali :- ab kya kare
Rudra :- wohi jo har din karte hai
Phir anjali rudra ke bathroom se 1 mug pani la kar rudra pe udel diya phir darwaja khola jab sabne kamra aur rudra ki halat dekhi toh sab hasne lage
Rahul :- are didi aap yaha kamse kam aaj toh bhai ko baksh deti
Anjali :- kyu aisa kya bada teer mar liya ki itne der tak sone diya
Rudra:- rehne de rahul apna bhi time aayega
Anjali :- jaise har kutte ka din aata hai waise hi inka bhi aayega kyu sahi kaha na
Bade papa :- band karo tum dona suraj uga nahi ki ladna suru
Maa :- sahi kaha bhaiya rudra beta happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks maa
Rahul :- happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks brother
Ph8r sab ne wish kiya uske baad sab breakfast karte hue aaj ki planning karne lage jab breakfast over hua tab Anjali aur rahul rudra ko leke sabse pahle mandir gaye waha se phir woh mall gaye jaha anjali ladies section me gyi
Rahul :- bhai aap cafe me baitho me abhi aaya
Rudra :- kaha ja raha hai
Rahul :- abhi aaya 2 minute bas
Rudra :- thik hai ja jaldi aana
Phir rudra cafe me jake wait karne laga jab rudra wait kar raha tha tabhi waha kuch 2 ladkiya aa gayi jo theek rudra ke samne baithe the
Jab un mese 1 ladki nazar rudra pe padi toh wo apne baki dosto se bolne lagi
1st ladki :- hye dekho kitna handsome ladka hai
2nd ladki :- kaha neha (toh 1st ladki ka naam neha hai)
Neha(rudra ki taraf point karte hue) :- are priya tere piche woh dekh samne
2nd ladki (priya) :- are ha kya handsome dikhta hai agar dad ne meri shadi sahil ke saath nahi fix ki hoti toh isi ko apna boyfriend bana leti
Abhi ye log kuch bolte ki tabhi waha 3 ladke aagaye aur un mese 1 ladke ne priya ko gale laga liya
Ladka :- hello priya what a present surprise
Priya :- ha sahil woh neha se milne aayi thi
Sahil :- hi neha inse milo ye mere dost sam aur sid
Neha :- hello sam hello sid
Phir 5 cho jan bate karne lage phir kuch der baad neha aur priya waha se uth kar order dene gayi tab wo 3 ladke kuch plan karne lage jo sunke rudra ko gussa aaraha tha ki abhi uth kar 3no ki haddi tod de lekin tabhi rudra ko idea aata hai aur wo unka sara plan apne phone me record kar deta hai phir jab dono ladkiya waha aati hai tab rudra waha jata hai
Rudra :- hello everyone
Sahil :- hi sorry hum ne pehchaana nahi aap kon hai
Rudra :- are pehchanoge kaise kabhi mile hi nahi aur me aap 3no se nahi in dono ladkiyon se baat karne aaya hu
Priya :- ji kahiye aap kon hum ne pehchana nahi
Rudra :- are abhi toh bola ki kabhi hum mile hi nahi toh pehchanoge kaise
Mai toh aapko birthday gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- lekin yaha kisi ka birthday nahi hai
Rudra :- aise kaise nahi hai aaj mera birthday hai isliye me aap logo ko 1 gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- are aapka birthday hai toh aap hume kyu gift denge
Rudra :- are aisa gift aapko puri life me kisine nahi diya hoga yakin maniye
Sahil :- abey oye sales man he kya
Rudra :- me pahle hi bola hu mujhe in dono se baat karni hai toh tu kyu bich me kud raha hai
Ab sahil ko gussa aa raha tha
Priya :- acha me bhi dekho aisa kya gift hai
Phir rudra unhe wo abhi ki recording dikhane laga jisme woh log planing kar rahe the unka plan tha ki abhi wo kisi bhi tarah unki coffe me nashi dawai dalke phir unka mms bana ke unhe blackmail karenge
Ye sab sunne aur dekhne ke baad sidha priya sahil ko 1 jordaar thapad jad diya jisse sahil aur uske dosto itne waqt se jo gussa kabu kiya wo ab chut gaya
Sahil :- sali kamini mujhe marti hai rook abhi batata hu tujhe
Rudra :- are bhai ladkiyo pe hath uthake kya fayda himmat hai toh mujhse lad
Sid(sahil ka dost) :- sahil bhai aap us randi ko sambhalo hum dono ise dekh lenge
Jaise hi wo dono mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe waise hi maine apne takat ka istemal karke dono ke pet me ek sath jordar punch mara ki dono khoon ki ulti karne lage aur wahi pet pakad ke tadpne lage
Apne dosto ka aisi halat dekh ke sahil bhi mujhe marne aaya woh jab aaya tab maine uske bhi pet me punch mara jisse wo apna pet pakadke wahi jamin pe beth gaya
Sahil (karahte hue) :- tujhe nahi malum tune kispe hath uthaya hai
Jab wo sambhal gaya toh usne apna phone nikal ke kisi ko call mila ke mall me bula liya
Kuch hi der baad mall me lathi aur hockey stick ke sath 5 gunde enter hue
Gunda leader sahil ke pass pahuch gaya aur sab halat samjhne laga phir sahil ne un sab gundo ko mujhpe hamla karne ko bola phir suru hua 1 vs 5 ka mukabla
Gunda 1 ne mujh pe apni hockey stick se hamla kiya lekin mene uski stick pakad ke us ke mu par punch mara jisse uske 2 dat sahid ho gaye aur uske hath se stick chut kar mere hath me aa gayi phir us hockey stick ke madad se me baki gundon ko andha dhund mar raha tha jisse kuch hi der me sare gunde adhmare ho gaye jab me aakhri gunde ko maar raha tha tabhi sahil ne mujh pe piche se war kiya
lekin uski kharab kismat tabhi rahul ki entry hui jab usne mujh pe hamla hote hue dekha toh wahi pass ka flower pot uthake sahil ke hath pe de mara jisse jis hockey stick se mujh pe humla kar raha tha wahi uske hath se chut gayi
Jab sab tham gaya tab police ki entry hui wohi aas pass ke logo mese kisi ne call kiya tha jab police aayi tab sab se puchtach hui tab sab ne bataya ki mene aur sahil ke bicb fight suru thi jab police officer ne sahil ko dekha toh uske tote hi ud gaye kyuki sahil is area ke mla ka eklauta beta tha tab usne promotion ke chakkar me sahil par janlewa hamla karne ke apradh me mujhe arrest karne laga lekin tabhi


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Waise hero 5 saal ka tha aur ab 13 saal baad ki kahani hai jisme wo aise gundo ko maar rahe hai toh 5+13= 18 honi chahiye current time me hero ki age but yahan aapne 2 saal pehle hi hero ko 18 saal ka kar diya bahut galat hai ye action acha tha dekhte hai ab kya hota hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Update 11


Jaise pichle update me padha ki kaise tudra ne mla ke bete ko mara aur waha police aagayi
Ab aage

P. O. :- ye baju hato yaha itni bheed kyu laga rakhi hai kisne hume phone kia tha ki yaha ladai ho rahi hai
Tabhi police officer ki nazar sahil par padti hai
P. O. :- oh teri ye toh mla ka beta hai kisne hath uthaya le ispar
Waha kahde logo ne mere tarf ungli utha di
P. O. :- kyu re badi garmi hai ma tujhme jo mla ke bete par hath uthaya
Priya :- dekhiye sir aapko galat Fahmi hui hai ladhai toh sahil aur uske dosto ne shuru ki thi ye sahil mujhe blackmail karne ka plan kar raha tha iska sabut bhi hai humare pass
P. O. :- sabut wagaira sab court me yaha nahi chal re chokre ter garmi utaar ta hu
Rahul :- lekin sir isme bhai ki kya galti unhone pahle humla kiya tha
P. O. :- oye chup bolana ye sab court me
Abhi police officer mujhe hatkadi pehnane hi wala tha ki tabhi
Jab ye sab ho raha tha wahi is waqt ghar ko sham ke celebration ke liye ache se sajaya ja raha tha aur maa aur masi kicthen me khana bana rahe the jisse sham ko aaram se enjoy kar sake

At hall
Baba aur bade papa ghar ko sajane me lage hue the jaha bade papa sari arrangements kar rahe the ki tabhi baba apne hi socho me gum the
Bade papa :- dharmesh(baba ko kandhe se pakadkar) oye dharmesh
Baba (hosh me ate hue) :- ha bhaiya kya hua
Bade papa :- kab se aavaj de raha hu kaha dhyan hai tera
Baba :- are kuch nahi bhaiya pichle kuch dino se jab bhi bahar jata hu lagta hai ki koi mera picha kar raha hai
Bade papa :- are koi tera picha kyu karega tune kidhar kisika kuch ahit kiya hai
Bade papa ke aakhri shabd sun ke baba phir se kisi gehri soch me pad gaye
At kitchen
Yaha alag hi mahol hai mosi ne apne phone me gane lagaye hue the aur maa aur mausi dono hi mast gane gun-gunate hue khana bana rahi thi ki tabhi mosi maa ke tarf dekhte hue boli
Mosi :- didi mujhe kuch ajib sa lag rha hai
Maa :- ajib se tera kya matlab hai kahi khane me kuch gadbad toh nahi hui
Mosi :- nahi didi me anjali ki baat kar rahi hu
Maa :- (chintit swar me) kya hua anjali ko
Mosi :- pata nahi kyu lekin pichle kuch mahino se baat notice kar rahi hu sabse alag akele rahne wali ladki sabse ache ghul mil rahi hai
Maa :- are isme chinta ki kya baat hai me bolti thi na jaise jaise badi hogi woh sab ke sath bhi rahne lagegi
Mosi :- ha lekin aur bhi bate hai jaise achanak hi kisi baat ko sochke muskurane lagti. Jo normal powder lagane ke naam se bhi chid jati thi wo ab ghante ghante bhar makeup karte baithti. Achanak sharmane lagti hai.
Maa mosi ki bate sun kar khil khilake hasne lagi
Mosi :- kya hua didi mene kuch galt bola kya
Maa :- are nahi meri bholi bahn jo sab tu bol rahi hai ye maine bhi notice kiya hai aur iska karan bhi pata hai
Mosi :- kya kaaran hai didi
Maa :- are teri beti ko pyar ho gaya hai
Mosi :- kyaa….
At hall
Bade papa :- ab phir kaha gum ho gaya
Baba :- kuch nahi bhaiya me ye soch raha tha ki bache kab bade ho jaye pata hi nahi chalta kab wo chota palne me khelne wala wo chota sa gudda aaj itna lamba chouda pahad ban gaya ki height mere se bhi jyada
Bade papa :- are tu itna immotional kyu ho raha hai abhi toh aur bhi bahut kuch hai
Baba :- pta nahi bhaiya aaj kal bhut baicheni tehti hai jaise ki bas kuch hi din rah gaye mere jivan ke
Bade papa :- dekh agar aisa bola na toh yahi utha ke patak dunga samjhe
Baba (muskurate huye) :- ji bhaiya
Baba (man me) :- bhaiya aap toh mujhe chup kara doge lekin mera atit mere hatho hue un papo ko kaise shant karoge sahi kahte hai sab ki niyati se chupa ja sakta hai lekin bhaga bahi ja sakta
Itna bolte hi baba ki aakho se aasu aa gaye jo koi dekh le isse pahle hi mita diye

At mall

waha achanak police siren ka aavaj aane laga aur kuch hi der me kuch senior police officer aur 2 aadmi unke saath aaye
Un do mese 1 ne mast suit but pehna tha toh wahi dusre ne kurta payjama pehna tha
Jaise hi wo dono aadmi humare pass pahuche toh tab bhi priya aur neha us suit wale aadmi ko dad kehke gale lag ke rone lagi
P. Dad:- chup beta ab rona band karo aur mujhe saaf saaf batao ab ki asal me kya hua
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki tabhi us dusre aadmi ki nazar sahil pe padi
Aadmi :- kisne mara mere bete ko bolo
P. O. :- mla sahab ye is chokre ne mara
Mla (sahil ka dad) :- kyu re ladke kyu mara mere bete ko
Priya :- uncle aap unhe kuch mat boliye jo bhi usne kiya wo sahi kiya aap ek baar ye video dekh lijiye
Mla :- priya beta aisa kya hai video me
Jab tak mla video dekhta hai tab tak hum uske bare me jaan lete hai
(mla raj singh behad hi sadha sidha aur imaandaar mla iski biwi bete ko janm dete waqt hi mar gayi isliye ab iska iske bete ke alawa koi nahi bahut pyar karta bete se lekin uski galti pe saza bhi dena aata hai lekin aaj tak sirf laad pyar se hi pala hai
Sahil :- mla ka beta dil ka acha hai lekin baap ke laad pyar aur galat sangat ki wajah se bahut bigad gaya hai iske dosto ke chaplusi ki wajah se ise lagta hai iska koi kuch nahi bigad sakta)
Jab mla ne video dekha toh pure public ke samne sahil ki pitayi shuru kar di aur police ko sahil ko arrest karne ka order diya
Mla :- (rudra se) shukriya beta agar tum sahil ko nahi rokte toh pata nahi woh kya kar baithta shayad wo aise raste chal padta ki waha se wapas aana namumkin hota
P. Dad :- ha beta tumhara shukriya tumhari wajah se mere ghar ki ijjat bach gayi
Me :- are aap dono ye kya kar rahe hai aap bade hai mujhse aap ko mafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi yeh toh mera farz tha chaliye chalta hu
Jaise hi jane ke liye muda priya ne apne dad ke kaan me kuch kaha
P. Dad :- ek second beta priya ne bataya ki aaj tumhara birthday hai
Me : - ji uncle
P. Dad :- toh beta agar tum bura na mano toh me aaj tumhe apne 1 hotel me party dena chahta hu please beta mana mat karna
Me :- sory uncle lekin agar aap mujhe ye party doge toh shayad sab samjhenge maine ye sab jaan bujh ke kiya aap ka attention pake paise lene ke liye ya aap se kisi bhi tarah ke fayde ke liye
P. Dad :- thik hai beta koi problem nahi lekin ye mera card rakho in future jab bhi tumhe mere layak koi bhi kaam ho be jhijhak phone karna ye thakur paritosh ki jaban hai kabhi bhi tumhari madad karne se piche nahi hatunga
Me :- lekin uncle me kaise
P. Dad :- beta please ye mana mat karna
Me :- thik hai uncle
Mla :- ha beta tumhari wajah se mere pariwar par balatkari ka daag lagne bach gaya ye mera card jab bhi jarurat ho be jhijhak phone karna
Me :- ok uncle
P. Dad :- waise tumhara naam kya hai beta
Me :- rudra… rudradev singh
Aur ye mera bhai rahul
P. Dad :- tum dono se milke bhut khushi hui yaad rakhna humare ghar ke darwaje tumhare liye har waqt khule hai
Me :- ji uncle
Phir wo sab chale gaye
Me :- rahul ye baat kisi ko pta nahi chalna chahiye
Rahul :- ji bhai
Me :- ye anjali ko kitna time lagega
Rahul :- pta nahi itna kya shopping kar rahi hai
Me :- ek kaam kar tu aage ho me dekhke aata hu 1 ghante baad mandir ke samne milenge
Rahul :- ji bhai
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Bahut jabardast update but ye hero ke baba ne kya Kiya hai atit me Jo wo itna dukhi hai aur usko Aisa lag raha hai ki koi uska picha kar raha hai aur ye Priya aur Sahil ke papa bahut ache hai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Bahut jabardast update bhai bahut ache se hero ne apne pyar ka ijhar kiya aur ye saaye hero aur hero ke bade papa ke hi sathi hai shayad but lagta hai Rudra ,Rahul aur bade papa hi bache hai es hadse me

Update 12

Me :- ye anjali ko kitna time lagega
Rahul :- pta nahi itna kya shopping kar rahi hai
Me :- ek kaam kar tu aage ho me dekhke aata hu 1 ghante baad mandir ke samne milenge
Rahul :- ji bhai
Ab aage
Uske baad rahul chla jata hai phir me anjali ko phone karta hu asal me ye mera hi plan tha ki rahul ko jaldi se age bhejne ka phir me anjali ko ek surprise dene ka wada kiya tha
Jab anjali aayi toh mene uska hath pakad ke chalne laga

Jab me mall se bahar nikle phir me use leke ek cafe me gaya jaha uske liye ek khas chij mene plan ki thi

Jise dekh kar wo bahut khush ho gayi. Aur phir humne ek sath coffe aur nashta kiya phir waha se me use ek special jagah le gaya

Jo ekdum awesome thi jisse anjali bahut khush ho gayi
Anjali :- wow! Jaan (anjali akele me mujhe jaan hi kahti thi) kitni achi jagah hai aap ko is baare me kaise pata
Rudra :- bas ek din ghumte hue aaya tha tabhi socha tha kisi special din tumhe yaha leke aaunga aur ek surprise dunga
Anjali(excited hoke) :- surprise konsa kaisa
Rudra :- are thoda sabr rakho aur chalo mere sath
Phir me use leke aur andar chala gaya jaha mast view dikh raha tha

Anjali :- wow kya awesome hai ye jagah aapka surprise toh bahut hi acha hai ab kya kare are ruko toh abhi bahut chije hai

Phir jab maine use sari jagah ghuma kar ho gaya toh me use ek bahut hi sundar jagah le aaya jise delhke woh bahut khus ho gayi

Anjali :- aap great ho jaan thank you aise khoobsurat surprise ke liye
Me :- are ye aapka surprise nahi hai ye woh jagah hai jaha aapko surprise mile ga.
Anjali :- agar jagah itni khas hai toh surprise kitna khas hoga jaldi bataiye na surprise
Me :- are jaan rukiye itne bhi besabri achi nahi hai apni aakhe toh band kijiye aur aapko meri kasam aakhe kholi toh
Phir anjali ne apni aakhe band ki aur phir me surprise ki taiyari karne laga
Me :- ab aap aakhe khol sakti hai
Jab anjali ne aakhe kholi toh….
At home
Afternoon time in kitchen
Mosi :- kya aap sach keh rahi ho didi ki anjali ko pyar
Maa :- matlab mujhe pahle bas shak tha lekin tumhari bate sun ke mujhe yakin ho gaya ki anjali ko pyar ho gaya hai
Mosi :- lekin aap kaise keh sakti hai ki ye sab pyar me hi ho sakta hai koi aur bhi wajah ho sakti hai
Maa :- are meri bholi behna mene bhi love marriage hi ki hai aur pyar ka bukhar jab sir chadhta hai toh kya hota hai ye mujhse behtar koi nahi samajh sakta
Mosi :- tab toh mujhe anjali se baat karni chahiye ki ye sab band kar de agar woh kisi galat aadmi ke pyar me pad gayi toh kya hoga uska wo kya hum sab kisi ko muh dikhane ke kabil nahi rahenge
Maa :- are chinta mat kar mujhe pata hai woh kiske pyar me pagal hue ja rahi hai

Wohi kisi unknown place me jaha suraj ki roshni bhi nahi pahuch sakti ekdum andheri jagah par aaj phir se woh charo saye ek saath the koi meeting kar rahe the
M. M:- kya baat hai igris tumne hum sab ko itni jaldi me kyu bulaya
Sura :- ha batao igris itni bhi kya jaldi thi ki raat hone ka bhi intezaar nahi kiya
Aacharya :- are aap dono shant rahiye igris ko bolne do
Igris :- shukriya Aacharya toh jaise hum charo jante hai ki ab woh din dur nahi jab hume master and lord ko unki pahli takat se avgat karna hoga ab sthiti bigadne wali hai lekin kab kya kaise kidhar hoga kisi ko pata nahi hoga
Sura :- toh hum charo milke us hone wali ghtna ko rok sakte hai
M. M :- nahi. Bhul ke bhi aisa mat karna yaad hai na jab pichli baar humne neeyati ko badlne ki koshis ki thi toh kitna vinashkari yudh hua tha humare pure prajati ka sarvnash hua tha sabse jyada lord ka aur hum sabko bachate hue master ne bhi apna jeevan tyag diya tha
Sura :- toh ab hum kya kare
Aacharya :- jo ho raha hai use hone do bas sawdhan raho ki koi anhoni had se badkar na ho use roko mat uske asar ko kam karo
Igris :- ji aacharya ab me chalta hu
M. M. :- theek hai igris ab sidha usi din milenge
Phir charo saye apne apne rah par chale gaye
At home
Is waqt baba apne room me baithe the darwaja ko lock kiya hua tha unke hath me ek photo thi jisme bhut sare log the photo dekhne se bahut purani lag rahi thi photo ko dekhte waqt unke aakho me aasu the
Baba (rote hue) :- mujhe maf kar dena aap log shayad aap sab itne salo me mujhe bhul bhi gaye honge lekin me nahi bhul paya apni us pap ko jis wajah se aaj ye sab hua uska me hi jimmewar hu
Abhi baba ro hi rahe the ki tabhi unka darwaja knock hua unhone khud ko sambhalte hue darwaja khola toh samne maa khadi thi
Maa :- aap yaha kya kar rahe hai aur aapki aakhe
Jab maa ke nazar bed pr rakhe hue photo pe gayi toh woh sab samajh gayi
Maa :- me samajh gayi lekin mene aapko kitni baar bola hai ki aap ki isme koi galti nahi hai wo sab bas andhvishwas tha lekin aapko toh kisi ki sunni hi nahi hai agar aap unke sath jate bhi tab bhi wohi hota jo hona tha
Baba :- lekin agar
Maa :- ab bas jo hona tha ho gaya aur waise aapke najariye se dekha jaye toh ye sab meri wajah se hua hai
Baba :- ab mujhe acha feel karane ke liye khud par ilzaam laga rahi ho
Maa :- jaise ap nahi gaye aur wo unhoni ho gayi lekin sach toh ye tha ki mene aapko jane se roka tha agar me na rokti toh kya hota boliy
Baba :- nahi isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai kismat se koi nahi bach sakta
Maa :- me bhi toh kab se yahi kah rahi hu lekin aapko meri baat manni hi nahi hai
Baba :- thik hai chalo aaj ke baad is bare me koi baat nahi hogi
Maa :- ye hui na baat aap faltu me yaha time pass kar rahe ho aaj rudra ka janamdin hai jaldi taiyari kijiye
At mall in afternoon
Mene jab rahul ko mall ke bahar bheja toh woh mere kahe anusaar mandir jane laga lekin jab woh bike start kar raha tha ki tabhi waha uska 1 dost aa gaya toh woh usse baat karne laga jab woh chala gaya tab rahul apni bike start karne laga lekin tabhi use me aur anjali dikhe hume dusri taraf jata dekh rahul bhi humare piche aagaya
Rahul ko meri aur anjali ki love story ke baare me starting se pata tha lekin use aaj ke baare me nahi pata tha
At rudra side
Jab anjali ne apni aakhe kholi toh uska muh khula ka khula hi reh gaya kyunki me uske samne apne ghutno par baitha ke propose kar raha tha

Anjali :- (shock me) rudra ye kya
Me :- anjali aaj me apne pyaar ka izhaar kar raha hu bolo kya tum is gadhe ke sath apni jindagi gujarogi
(jor se chikh te huye) I LOVE YOU ANJALI
WILL YOU MARRY ME
anjali ko toh samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare jis pal ki woh itne besabri se intezaar kar rahi thi ki kab rudra use propose kare iske liye toh woh apne room me har waqt is pal ke liye prepare kar rahi thi lekin ye haseen pal itne achanak se aa jayega usne socha hi nahi tha mare sharm ke usne phir se apna muh apne hatho se dhak liya

Me :- bolo anjali WILL YOU MARRY ME
anjali ne dheere se apne chehre par se hath hata diya aur sharm se uska muh hi nahi khul raha tha use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki woh apni khushi ko kaise jahir kare
Anjali :-(dheere se) yes rudra
Me :-(khushi se) anjali ek baar or bolo
Anjali (jor se) :- HA RUDRA I WILL MARRY YOU
abhi anjali ko hi maloom tha ki kase usne apne pyar ka izhaar kiya tha uska sarir sharm ke mare kap raha tha wo turant mere gale lag gayi

Jab wo aake mere gale lag gayi toh aisa laga ki jaise mujhe sare duniya ki khushiya mila gayi abhi hum dono bhi ek dusre ki aakho me dekh rahe the jaha door door tak sirf pyar tha ek dusre ke prati sirf apar mohabbat

Abhi hum dono ek dusre ke aakho me dekh rahe the hume duniya se kuch ghanta farak pad raha tha abhi hum dono ke lips ek dum najdik aa gaye the

Hum dono kiss karne hi wale the ki tabhi pata nahi kaha se joro se dhol nagade aur siti ki aawaje sunayi dene lagi
Jab hum dono ne us taraf dekha toh paya ki rahul joro se siti baja baja ke nach raha tha aur usne hi mobile pe dhol nagade ke aawaje chalayi thi ise dekh kar hum dono turant ek dusre se alag hue toh rahul joro se hasne laga jab usne hum dono ko uski tarf hi ghurte dekha toh woh samajh gaya ki ab uski khair nahi isliye usne waha se bhagne me hi apni bhalayi samjhi jab mene use bhagte dekha toh me bhi uske piche bhaga aur mere sath anjali bhi bhagi hum dono ki training ki wajah se hum dono bhi tej bhag rahe the lekin anjali woh piche hi rah gayi phir aage badh ke mene achanak hi apni speed badha di aur use pakad liya
Me :- ab bata kaha bhagega
Rahul (mere maje lete hue) :- mujhe maaf kar do jiju me hi pagal hu jo me apne hi didi aur jiju ka quality time kharab kar diya
Ye sab bolte hue usne jiju aur quality time pe jyada jor diya tha jisse me use marne laga
Me :- kya bola sale
Rahul :- ha wo toh hu me aapka
Me :- kya
Rahul :- are wohi jo abhi aapne kaha sala aur aap mere jiju
Me :- teri toh abhi dikhata hu jiju-sala ke bache
Rahul :- abhi kaha jiju pahle aapki shadi hogi phir meri hogi tab toh speed pe depend karta hai ki pahle kya dikhata hai jiju ke bache ki sale ke (hum dono ke bich aise jokes common the)
Itni der me anjali bhi aa gayi aur aate hi pass padi lakdi uthake hum dono ko marne lagi
Me :- are anjali mujhe kyu maar rahi ho mrne kya kiya
Rahul :- are aap ka toh shadi se pahle hi ye haal hai shadi ke baad kya hoga
Abhi rahul bol hi raha tha ki anjali use marne lagi hum dono ko toh kuch lag nahi raha tha lekin bichari wo lakdi sahan nahi kar payi aur tut gayi
Aur jab lakdi tuti toh rahul phir se chidhane laga jisse anjali sharmake mere sine me apna chehra chupane lagi
Phir aise hi masti karte hue hum log ghar aa gaye har baar ki is baar bhi ghar ko fulon se sajaya gaya tha jab hum ghar aaye toh mera aarti utarke swagat kiya phir hume fresh hone bheja toh hum apne room me gaye fresh hokar aaye toh sab khana hamare man pasand ka bana tha phir hum sabne celebrate kiya phir sab jake so gaye aise kuch din haste khelte gujar gaye humari life ek dum mast chal rahi thi sab hasi khushi bit raha tha lekin woh kahte hai na "jab kismat me hi likhe ho laude toh insaan kaha se khaye pakode"
At unknown place
Igris :- toh mitro aaj woh ghadi aa gayi hai jab hume apne lord aur master ke samne khul kar aana hoga aur unke atit se avgat kara ke unke takat ka jo hissa humare pass hai use unhe deni hoga
Sura :- toh samasya kya hai hum log bhi apne kartavya purn karke apne asli roop me aa sakte hai aur is shrap se mukt honge jis wajah se hum in insani roop me kaid hai
Aacharya :- sura sahi kah raha hai igris ab kya samasya hai
Igris :- samasya hai niyati
M. M. :- matlab
Igris :- ye ki hume unhe apni shakti dene se niyati ne roka hai sarvapratham niyati unki pariksha legi agar woh usme purn roop se uttirn honge tab hume unhe un shaktiyon ke liye taiyar karna hoga tab hi hum unhe wo shaktiyon ke pass leke ja sakte hai phir unhe wo shaktiya khud se hasil karni hogi
M. M. :- lekin aaj ke hadse ke baad kya unme itna dheeraj hoga
Igris :- yahi unki pariksha hai isiliye hum aaj ke hadse ko rok nahi sakte kewal uska asar kam kar sakte hai
M. M. :- theek hai ab hume chalna chahiye
Uske baad wo sab chale gaye

At morning
Aaj diwali ka pehla din tha yani lakshmi pujan ka din isliye aaj sab me alag hi utsah tha hum sab mil ke sari tayari karte hue dopahar ho gayi jab hum log lunch karke bathe hi the ki rahul ne apna muh khola
Rahul :- maa phtake lane kab chalna hai
Mosi :- hume kyu puch rahe ho har baar toh tum teeno hi jate ho
Me :- ha chal rahul hum nikalte hai
Anjali :- ruko mujhe abhi taiyar bhi hona hai
Me :- Tum nahi aa rahi hu
Anjali :- kyu
Me :- agar tum aaoge toh hum raat ke pahle toh nahi aa payenge
Bade papa :- ruk me bhi aata hu
Phir hum teeno nikal gaye khridi ke liye
Wohi humare jaane ke baad

BOOOOOOOMM
aur isi ke sath isi ke sath rudra ka pura ghar blast ho gaya
Kisne kiya ye blast ye natural tha ya man maid
Agar man maid tha toh kisne kiya ye kyu kiya ye
Kya hua rudra ke ghar se jane ke baad jo pura ghar dekhte dekhte blast hogaya
Kya is mese koi bach paya ya nahi agar bacha toh kaise
Ab kya hoga rudra ka
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