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Shandar update hai
awesome faadu update
keep posting
Superb update bhai
Keep rocking
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शब्दों का बेहतरीन उपयोग जो अपडेट के पहले शब्द से आख़री शब्द तक एक अदभुत समां बांध दिया
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और अन्त हमेशा की तरह ............ अब क्या होगा ?
Mast mast update bro . . . .
Nice bhai
Lajawab super mind-blowing update Bhai
Very nice update bhai.
Ek Shabd yaad aaya hai "BOMBARDING"
Aaj kuch aisa hi feel ho Raha hai jaise ki entertainment ki bauchaar ho gayi ho. Ye update bahut hi mast tha.
Ek Baar pahle bhi Kah Chuka hoon aaj fir Kah Raha hoon mujhe aapka ye style bahut pasand hai Jahan aap half update past ka dete ho aur half update me story Ko continue karte ho esse Sabse accha ye hota hai ki hamara rythem Bana rahata hai aur kahani se attachment aur uski yaadein barkaraar rahti hai. Aur lambe chuade flashback se boring bhi feel nahi hota. Esliye ye Silsila har janm ke flashback ke saath kaayam rakhna.
Ab es update ke bare me.
Raj ki ek aur journey Suru ho gayi hai. Aur ab to wo dark lok ja Raha hai. Name se hi kuch khtarnaak feel ho Raha hai to fir asal story ka romanchak hona to confirm hai. Lekin ye wahan pahunchte hi kya Ho Gaya. Aakhir unicorn cheekh Kyun Raha hai.
Es story me mujhe main characters ke Baad Mrinal ka Rola Sabse mast lagta hai. Usne jo mahaul banaya hai uska kya kahna. Us ke saath jo bhi do chaar line Judti hain use padhkar Maja AA jata hai.
Entjaar rahega es Naye Safar ka Jahan par Dark lok aur sighal garh ki kahani ek saath chalegi.
Super update diya hai bhai maja aa gya
You are great writer bhai