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Dadaji -beta kahan ja rahe ho abhi tum sahi ho gaye ho thoda aaram bhi kar lo
Mai -arey Dadaji Jyada time nahi Kuch der Mein Wapas Aa Jaunga
Dadi -chal baith abhi nashta kiya hai Aaram kar lo aur Tumhare Dadaji bhi Sahi bol rahe Abhi Tumhe Aaram karna chahiye
Mai - yaar UP Satta 15 din me Ajeeb Ho Gayi Hai Uske Pehle Toh aise nahi rokte the Aap Sab MujHey Bhagwan Kisi Tarah yeah Ruk Jaye aur wahan pe Na Ja nahi toh pata chalega to kya gujregi ispe jab chalega Toh Kya hoga mere bete ka
Abhi Abhi Toh Ho Saya hai aur Agar Ye Jaane ka ki Kajal ko kuch ho gaya to Kaise Jiye Hum Sab Sambhalenge
mujhe lagta tha In Dono Ko Dekha to make Dosti Se Pyar Karti Thi Daayan liye Tu Mujhe Mil Jaye Teri Aankhon mein galat Khushi hoti thi Pyar Karne Wale me hoti hai
Agar aisa huwa to mera beta khud ko kaie sambhalega
Papa - Arabi Todna sawal jawab nahi karna chahiye kal chale jana Aaj Aaram Kar Lo Aaj Hum Sab Ki Baat Maan lo Tumhe Koi Nahi
Mai - thik aap sab Itna bol rahe To Nahi Jaunga lekin mujhe lag raha aap se mujhe kuch chupa Itna mana kar rahe hain
Dadi - Tu Bhi ekdum pagal hai kya kya Sochta rehta hai chal aaj aaram kar le
aur uske baad mein bhi Main Choti Parande Mein bat Gaya tabhi gate se ek Army wala Kisi doctor Ko li ke andar aaya aur bola Thakur Sahab Mehta ji Aaye Hain
Dadaji- Mehta ji Aye Aye mai aap hi ka kab se Intezar kar raha tha
good afternoon Lagaya Aur Main abhi Bahar Hoon Main Chala Gaya Kyunki mujhe pata de Sab apni Baatein apne Mein Lage rahenge main Bahar Aaya to mai dekha haMera Ghar Ke vahar
Bahar cafe hi Security dikh rahi thi Jaga Jaga Army Wale Hath Mein gun liye ghar ke charo taraf yani dwar pepahra de rahe the
Ab mujhe sakh ho raha tha ki koi na koi ghatna jarur hui hai Koi bahut badi ghatna hui ho isliye itni high security lagai gayi hai
Maine apna phone nikala aur kajal ke ghar call lagaya
Aur man me soacha ki waha aaj ja nahi sakta to kya huwa kajal se baat to ho sakti hai
Mai ne call lagaya lekin phone switch off aa raha tha aur maine land line bhi call kiya wo bhi switch off aa raha tha mai kai baar try kiya lekin koi fayda nahi huwa
Tabhi bahar nikhil aaya aur bola
Nikhil - are bhai yaha kya kar rahe ho andar doctor bula rahe hai
Mai - kya karne ke liye doctor mujhe bula rahe hai
Nikhil - bol rahe hai tumhara ceck up karna hai
Mai andar aaya aur doctor ne mera checkup kiya mujhe laga tamam itruction dene ki ye ye karo abhi aram ki jarurat hai falana dekana
Mai tang ho ke bola are uncle mai koi bachha thodhe na hu jo mujhe nahi pta rahega ki mai theek hu ya nahi
Aise hi kuch der me doctor bahar chala gaya aur mai maa se pucha
Mai - mammi ye kajal ke ghar ka no kyu nahi lag raha hai
Maa - hadbada ke ha wo ha shyad kharab hoga
Mai - are landline bhi thode hi na band hoga
Aur aap sab mujh se kuch chupa rahe hai bahar itni high security kyu lagai gayi hai
Dadaji - wo kya hai na jab se tu gaya hai gaanv ke halat bahut kharab chal rahe hai aur isi liye security rakhi gayi hai
Mai - ab mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab mujh se kuch chipa rahe hai ab aap sach sach mujhe sab bata dijiye
Shabhi sar niche kar ke baith gaye koi kuch nahi bol raha tha
Mai - gudiya tu hi bta na kya huwa hai jo sab is trah.se muh latkaye huwe hai
Wo bhi kuch nahi bol rahi thi aur wo un sab ka mukh dekh rahi thi
Mai - theek hai aap sab nahi batayenge mai khud ja ke pta kaRTA hu gusse me
Aur mai bahar jane laga mai dadaji ki aawaj sun ke mai ruk gaya
Dadaji - isliye ham sab tumhe rok rahe the kyuki ab wo nahi rahe ������
Mai - kaun nahi raha kya Kajal ko kuch huwa hai aur aap kise bol rahe hai kaun nahi raha
Hyper ho ke
Dadaji - are beta sant ho ja aao baitho mai batata hu
Uske baad mai kuch bola nahi un sab ke paas mai baith gaya
Dadaji - baat tab ki hai jab tu yaha se gayab hu to hamne mele ko 2sre din band karwa diya
Aur jab mele wale jane lage to hame mele ke ek manch ke niche kuch bom rakhe huwe mile
Uske baad yaha pe police ki suraksha badha di gayi aur shabhi se puvh tach ki gayi lekin kuch nahi pta chala ki bom yaha pe kisne rakhwaya
Aur uske dusre din baad tumhare bpapa ko ek call aya
Usse usne dhamki di ki mele ko band karwa ke tum sab ne bahut badi galti ki hai
Tu har baar mere rashte me aa ke mere plan ko bekar kar deta hai
Ab jald hi iski bhapai koi tera karbi apni jan de ke bharega
Hamne yaha pe khas suraksha agencies ko yaha pe bula ke unki duty lagwa diye
Lekin ham sab galat the ek din ek gaanv wala aaya aur bola ki sarpanch ji ki hatya kar di gayi
Kuch nakab posh log aaye aur kuch gaanv walo aur sarpanch ji aur unki ptni ko mar ke chale gaye
Beech me
Mai - aur aur kajal kajal ka kya huwa thodha paresan ho kar
Dadaji - bata raha hu aur wo bola ki wo sab Kajal ko utha ke le gaye
Aur hamne use bahut dudhne ki kosis ki lekin hame koi bhi sabut nahi mila ki ham sab kajal ke paas pahunh paaye
Mai - kaun ye sab karwaya aur kyu karwaya ye nahi pta chala
Dadaji - ek victor naam ke aadmi ka pta chala hai
Tumne jise do baar mara tha usi ne kisi ke kahne pe ye sab karwaya hai
Ham sab use dudhne ki kosis kar rahe hai police bhi isi ki jaanch me lagi hai in sab ke peeche kaun hai
Mai (gusse me) meri hi galti thi maine use jinda chod diya tha lekin is baar nahi bachega wo
Dadaji - sant ho jao beta ham sab dekh rahe hai na sab theek ho jayega
Mai - nahi ab mai kajal ke ghar ja raha hu ab mujhe koi nahi rokega aap sab mujh se itni badi baat chupa rahe the
Maa - nahi beta aisi baat nahi wo tum aaj hi sahi huwe is liye ham sab nahi bta rahe the kahi tumhe phir kuch na ho jaye
Mai - aap sab ke rahte huwe itna kuch ho gaya aur aap sab ???
Papa - beta tu tension na ham sab kajal ko dhund lenge ham sab kosis kar rahe hai
Mai - nahi ab mai khud kajal ka pta lagaunga ab aap sab kuch nahi karenge
( gusse me )
Dadaji - beta itni si baat ke liye itna paresan kyu ho rahe ho ham sab pta kar rahe hai na
Mai - ( thodha gusse me ) itni si baat ke liye itni si baat nahi hai wo meri
Maa - haa haa bolo kya
Mai - ha wo meri life ki ek hi dost hai mai use nahi kho sakta hu ( emotions pe kabu kar ke )
Mai - maa mai kajal ke ghar ja raha hu mujhe ab koi nahi rokega aur ha mere sath ye security bhi nahi chahiye mujhe
Maa - haa chale jana abhi pahle sant ho jao na
Dadaji - are bahu kya kar rahi ho abhi halat sahi nahi kyu jane de rahi ho
Maa - pita ji jab ye kisi chij ki jid kar leta hai to ye kisi bhi nahi sunta ise rokna namumkin hai ab
Dadaji - theek hai beta nahi manoge to jao ab ham kya kar sakte hai
Uske baad ham mai jane ke liye utha to nikhil bhi mere sath chalne ko tayar tha aur ham dono Kajal ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaye
us Si ko thappad marne wala koi aur nahi balki Yaha Ke DIG the
Mai yaha DiG ka name nahi likhunga kyuki inkaa role story me kuch khas nahi hai
Aur dig ke sath me mere badepapa bhi the
SI- khada hokar sir aap yaha ye ye ladka andar ghusa ja raha tha
DIG - Pata hai tumhe jiske girebaan par tumne hath dala kaun hai
SI - nahi sir wo to mai ise rok raha tha ye jabardasti guse chala ja raha tha aur rokne par bhi nahi ruk raha tha
DIG - tumhe yaha ka si kisne banaya jab tumhe ye hi pta nahi ki ye kaun hai ha
Aur duty aise ki jati hai kisi par tum apni wardi ka roob dikhaoge
Mai tumhe abhi suspend karta hu
You are suspended now and get lost from here
Mai - sir sir rukiye ap suspend na kijiye ye yaha ka SI kab se hai
dig- beta ye to yaha naya aaya hai abhi ise yaha aaye huwe ek hapta huwa hai aur yahi ye case investigate kar raha hai
Mai - achha to kaha tak investigation pahuchi hai tumhari SI se
SI - wo sir ham pta laga rahe hai kaun hai aur is case ki file SP sir ke paas hai
Mai - hmm okk ab tum ja sakte ho aur ha apna number mujhe dete jana
Mai isliye aisa bola kuki mujhe is par doubt ho raha tha
Dekh kar hi ye ghuskhor lag raha tha
Wo apna no mujhe diya aur jate huwe bola
SI - sir ab to bta dijiye ki ye kaun hai jiske liye aap mujhe suspend kar rahe the
DIG - YE ye yaha is gaon ke malik Thakur Ajay pratap hai
Wo mera naam sun ke jaise laga ek baar dar gaya aur apna sir neeche kar ke waha se chala gaya
Mai uske baad andar ki taraf chal diya jaur mere piche piche sabhi aane lage
Mai andar pahuca to dekha ki waha andar baramde (loby) ko fite se kuch jagah gheri gayi thi aur waha do logo ki jagah par unke aakar ka sfed sketch banaya gaya tha
DIG - waha ke nisan ki taraf ishara kar ke ye sarpanch ji aur ye unki wife yaha par mili thi aur kuch log ko goli maar ke lawn me chod gaye the
Mai us jagah ko waha dhyan se dekh raha tha waha par kai jagah sidhiyo ke paas diwaro pe bhi goli ke nishan the
Mai use dekh ke use chute huwe sidhiyo se upar ki taraf jane laga
Jab upar ja raha tha to upar sidhiyo pe kahi kahi khoon ke nisan the
Mai use dekhte huwe upar pahuch aur kajal ke kamre ki taraf aaya dekha darwaja tuta huwa tha
Mai soachne laga ki ye samne se aaye the yah direct peeche se mai balkani ki taraf chal diya
Aur waha pahucha to dekha ki waha pe ek taraf rassi padi hui thi aur wo rassi uchai pe chadhne ke liye kaam me aati hai kyuki aage ki taraf kaanta laga huwa tha aur wo bji hi TEC technology wala iske bare me dig sir ne mujhe bataya
Aur phir kamare me aaya to dekha ki kamre me kafi tod fod hui thi shayad kajal bachne ke liye samano ko phenki hogi
Mai - mujhe lagta hai ki yaha jo bhi log aaye the wo kajal ke liye aaye the
DIG - (chauk kar ) tum ye kaise kah sakte ho ho sakta hai sarpanch ji ka koi dushman ho
Mai - jaha tak mere hisab se wo kajal ke liye aaye the kyuki wo seedhe peeche ki taraf se ghar me ghuse the
Aur kajal kisi trah se yaha se bhagi hogi kyuki seedhiyon pe khoon ke nisaan the shayad wo bhagte huwe neeche giri ho aur use chot lag gayi ho
Aur yadi sarpanch ji ko marne aaye hote to wo samne se aaye hote aur unhe maar ke chale jate aur upar aana hi nahi padta ya to kahi rashte me hi maar dete
Jisne bhi ye kiya hai agar kajal ko kuch huwa na to
mai jald hi use iski saja dunga aur wo bhi tadpa tadpa ke marunga use (thodhe gusse me)
DIG - Wah mai tumhari guess ko daad deta hu ho sakta hai tumhara soachna sahi ho lekin ham ye bhi nahi masn sakte wo kajal ke liye aaye ho
Mai - jo bhi ho ab wo jayda din chup nahi sakte jald hi wo is duniya ko chod denge
Aur aise hi kuch baate hui aur uske baad ham ghar aa gaye aur sath me bpapa bhi aa gaye
Jab mai ghar pahucha to dekha to dono bua aur unki betiyan bhi aa gayi thi
Mujhe dekh ke sabhi gale mili aur apne apni sikate ki aur aise hi din beet gaya kuch kash nahi huwa aur dinne ke baad sab sone chale gaye
Aur mai un sab waha ki sabhi chijo ko soachte soachte so gaya
Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed
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Story main kuchh samajh nahi aaraha.
Hero kab police station gaya
kab SI uske colour pakda
Kab DIG aalya
Kab bade papa aaye
Sorry to say but mujhe lagta hai aap kahani ko pehele se hi likh ke rakhe ho lekin updates nahi de rahe ho.
Aur ek baat jab hero ko hose aaya uske baad kuchh drama hi nahi hua.
Agar koi us part ko gaur se padhe toh samajh sakta hai.
Bhai update dene se pehle thoda padh bhi liya karo yaar.
Kuchh majedar part aap skip kar jate ho
Bura mat manna
But mujhe jo lagta hai is story ke bareme woh batadia.
Hero kab police station gaya
kab SI uske colour pakda
Kab DIG aalya
Kab bade papa aaye
Sorry to say but mujhe lagta hai aap kahani ko pehele se hi likh ke rakhe ho lekin updates nahi de rahe ho.
Aur ek baat jab hero ko hose aaya uske baad kuchh drama hi nahi hua.
Agar koi us part ko gaur se padhe toh samajh sakta hai.
Bhai update dene se pehle thoda padh bhi liya karo yaar.
Kuchh majedar part aap skip kar jate ho
Bura mat manna
But mujhe jo lagta hai is story ke bareme woh batadia.
Black water
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Naina
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Brilliant update golu ji.... Extraordinary 
Absolutely Right...
apne writer ne jab se ye Restart kara hai na story tab se na jaane iska writing skill kaha chale gaya...
Before forest Hero na itna faltu baat karta tha or na Faltu ka Ghussa
or Woh wapis aake jo Ghusse wala update bhi thik nahi laga, agar thik se padha jaaye to.
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Are bhai kit gya tu update aawe ga k nehi yaar tu kati gayab ho gya h
Thanks bhai
Aap shi bol rhe hai but maine story likh ke nhi rakha hu thoda is samay depressed chal rha hu kuch samjh nhi aa rha kya karu aur maine kya likh ke post kiya wo bhi nhi padha aur dobara abhi is forum pe aaya nhi aaj aaya tab mujhe pta chla kya kiya hu but abhi mai 2 4 din nhi likh sakta dimag ki maa bahan ek ho gyai hai
& Thanks mujhe bura nhi lga
Bhai 2 3 din lagenge abhi
Mentally disturb hu sorry for late
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