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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread
Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
Update 47
Aaj meri neend jaldi hi khul gayi to maine soacha ki kyu na aaj exercise hi kyu na kar lu
Kafi din ho gaye the exercise kiye huwe maine pahle ki trah apna exercise kiya aur uske baad meditation karne laga
Pahle to dhyan nahi lag raha tha lekin panch cha baar karne ke baad mera dhyan lag gaya
Aur kuch hi time huwa tha ki mera dhyan shruti ki aawaj se tuta
Shruti - bhaiya bhaiya kya kar rahe ho
Mai - ha kyu chilla rahi hai abhi kya kaam hai
Shruti - mai chilla thodhe hi rahi hu wo to aap hi nahi sun rahe the aur aap ye kar kya rahe the subah ke 7 bj gaye hai sab aapka nashte pe intzar kar rahe hai
Mai - mai to ye sun ke chauk ke kya 7 bj gaye ( man me ) oh teri to mai to soacha ki abhi abhi dhyan laga aur isne mujhe jaga diya
Shruti - ab kya soach rahe hai chaliye na mujhe kichte huwe
Mai - chal mujhe chod tujhse nahi hoga aur mai utha use god me utha liya
Shruti - mujhe niche utariye ha ha dekhiye aap ka sarir pasine se bhiga huwa hai
Mai bhi uske galo me apna gaal ko ragadne laga wo haste huwe bole bhai log kuch aur na samajhna ye bhai bahan wala.pyar hai
AUR uske baad maine use niche utar diya aur wo mujhe ek mukka mar ke bhag gayi
Mai bhi hasta huwa andar fresh hone chala gaya aur fresh ho ke nashta karne ke liye nashte ke table pe aa gay
Nashte pe sabse thodhi bahut baat chit hui aur uske baad mai papa.se bola
Mai - papa mujhe kuch kaam hai mai aaj sham tak aaunga
Papa - kaha ja rahe ho abhi kuch din tum aaram karao jo kaam hai baad me bhi ho jayega
Mai - nahi mujhe jaruri kaam hai isliye mujhe jana hai aur mai rukunga nahi
Dadaji - theek hai jao lekin samay se aa jana ghar
Mai - ji dadaji aap sab chinta na kare mai jaldi aa jaunga
Uske baad maine apni ek gadi nikali aur uske baad chal diya police station
Us inspector se milne jise maine kal thappad mara tha
Aur jald hi police station pahuch gaya aur wo mujhe delhte hi bola
Inspector - ,sir aap yaha aaiye baithiye
aae pandey sahab ke liye chai manga
Mai - ye sab chodo ye batao ki victor ka kuch pta chala
Inspector - ha sir wo yaha ke ek hotol XXXX me dekha gaya room no xy me
Mai - theek hai chalo mere sath
Aur wo inspector mere sath gadi me baith gaya aur ham us hotal ki taraf chal pade wo hamare sahar me tha jo ki kafi famous hotel hai yaha har chij ki waywastha hai
Ham karib aadhe ghante me waha pahuch gaye aur ham counter pe ja ke us room ki jankari liye
To hame pta chala ki wo abhi room me hi hai ham waha chal pade
Aur darwaje ko cnock kiye
Andar se aawaj aai kaun hai paresan kar raha hai mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
Maine phir knock kiya andar chillate huwe kaun hai be baar baar knock kar raha hai
Aur darwaja khola aur hame samne dekh ke darwaja band karne wala tha
Maine dhakka diya wo chatak ke kamare me gira aur ham andar aa ke room ko lock kar diye
Aur victor ko mai sofe pe utha ke phenk diya aur mai bhi uske samne ja ke sofe pe baith gaya
Mai - dhyan se sunna aur sahi sahi jawab dena agar tune sahi bola ham chale jayenge
Aur tune agar jooth bola to samajh lena ki mai kaise marta hu tu to dekh hi vhuka hai
Ha to mera ye sawal hai kajal kaha hai
Victor - kaun kajal mai kisi kajal ko mai nahi janta
Mujhe gussa aa gaya aur maine ek jhanatedar thappad jad diya uska ek daant sahid ho gaya
Mai - kutte ki punch sidhi nahi hoti kabhi usi trah se lato ke bhoot bato se nahi mante
Ab apna muh kholega yah yahi tere muh ko tod ke chala jau
Victor - btata hu btata hu marna nahi
Mai - ha chal jaldi bak
Victor - use delhi ke don ka beta utha ke le gaya hai wo abhi jinda hai
Wo usse shadi karne wala hai
Mai apne sar ko pakad ke man me ( aah kajal ko kuch nahi huwa bhagwan tera lakh lakh dhanyawad )
Mai - agar ye baat jhooth hui to yaad rakhna wo din tera aakhri din hoga jab mai Delhi se lautunga
Uske baad ham waha se chale aaye
Mai - inspector tumhara kaam ho gaya
Aur uske baad mai ghar laut aaya ye to mujhe bada ajib laga aur aap sab ko bhi lag rha hoga
kyuki itni aasani se Victor ka pta chalna aur ek hi zhapad me sab bta dena
khai jo bhi ho mai us SI ko wha se bhej ke Us Victor ko wha se utha ke ek Secret jagah yani ki wha aap sab ko yaad hoga secret hi samjh lo kyuki nadi ke paas ek gufa mili thi mujhe
use waha sift kar diya
aur use aankh band kar ke waha le gya aur jadu se kuch light jala diya aur kuch khane pine kq saman bhi rakh diya
aur uske baad mai wha us gufa ko bahar usi pathar se band kar diya aur ghar aa gya
ye kaam to ho gya tha ki mujhe pta chal gaya tha Ki Kajal kaha hai aur bas ab mujhe kisi trah Delhi jana tha
ab kaise jana tha ye bhi soachne ki baat thi ghar wale to kahi jane dene ki baat se tayar bhi nhi honge
phir bhi mai soacha jo hoga dekh lenge aur wha se yhi sab soachte huwe ghar aa gaya
Aaj meri neend jaldi hi khul gayi to maine soacha ki kyu na aaj exercise hi kyu na kar lu
Kafi din ho gaye the exercise kiye huwe maine pahle ki trah apna exercise kiya aur uske baad meditation karne laga
Pahle to dhyan nahi lag raha tha lekin panch cha baar karne ke baad mera dhyan lag gaya
Aur kuch hi time huwa tha ki mera dhyan shruti ki aawaj se tuta
Shruti - bhaiya bhaiya kya kar rahe ho
Mai - ha kyu chilla rahi hai abhi kya kaam hai
Shruti - mai chilla thodhe hi rahi hu wo to aap hi nahi sun rahe the aur aap ye kar kya rahe the subah ke 7 bj gaye hai sab aapka nashte pe intzar kar rahe hai
Mai - mai to ye sun ke chauk ke kya 7 bj gaye ( man me ) oh teri to mai to soacha ki abhi abhi dhyan laga aur isne mujhe jaga diya
Shruti - ab kya soach rahe hai chaliye na mujhe kichte huwe
Mai - chal mujhe chod tujhse nahi hoga aur mai utha use god me utha liya
Shruti - mujhe niche utariye ha ha dekhiye aap ka sarir pasine se bhiga huwa hai
Mai bhi uske galo me apna gaal ko ragadne laga wo haste huwe bole bhai log kuch aur na samajhna ye bhai bahan wala.pyar hai
AUR uske baad maine use niche utar diya aur wo mujhe ek mukka mar ke bhag gayi
Mai bhi hasta huwa andar fresh hone chala gaya aur fresh ho ke nashta karne ke liye nashte ke table pe aa gay
Nashte pe sabse thodhi bahut baat chit hui aur uske baad mai papa.se bola
Mai - papa mujhe kuch kaam hai mai aaj sham tak aaunga
Papa - kaha ja rahe ho abhi kuch din tum aaram karao jo kaam hai baad me bhi ho jayega
Mai - nahi mujhe jaruri kaam hai isliye mujhe jana hai aur mai rukunga nahi
Dadaji - theek hai jao lekin samay se aa jana ghar
Mai - ji dadaji aap sab chinta na kare mai jaldi aa jaunga
Uske baad maine apni ek gadi nikali aur uske baad chal diya police station
Us inspector se milne jise maine kal thappad mara tha
Aur jald hi police station pahuch gaya aur wo mujhe delhte hi bola
Inspector - ,sir aap yaha aaiye baithiye
aae pandey sahab ke liye chai manga
Mai - ye sab chodo ye batao ki victor ka kuch pta chala
Inspector - ha sir wo yaha ke ek hotol XXXX me dekha gaya room no xy me
Mai - theek hai chalo mere sath
Aur wo inspector mere sath gadi me baith gaya aur ham us hotal ki taraf chal pade wo hamare sahar me tha jo ki kafi famous hotel hai yaha har chij ki waywastha hai
Ham karib aadhe ghante me waha pahuch gaye aur ham counter pe ja ke us room ki jankari liye
To hame pta chala ki wo abhi room me hi hai ham waha chal pade
Aur darwaje ko cnock kiye
Andar se aawaj aai kaun hai paresan kar raha hai mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
Maine phir knock kiya andar chillate huwe kaun hai be baar baar knock kar raha hai
Aur darwaja khola aur hame samne dekh ke darwaja band karne wala tha
Maine dhakka diya wo chatak ke kamare me gira aur ham andar aa ke room ko lock kar diye
Aur victor ko mai sofe pe utha ke phenk diya aur mai bhi uske samne ja ke sofe pe baith gaya
Mai - dhyan se sunna aur sahi sahi jawab dena agar tune sahi bola ham chale jayenge
Aur tune agar jooth bola to samajh lena ki mai kaise marta hu tu to dekh hi vhuka hai
Ha to mera ye sawal hai kajal kaha hai
Victor - kaun kajal mai kisi kajal ko mai nahi janta
Mujhe gussa aa gaya aur maine ek jhanatedar thappad jad diya uska ek daant sahid ho gaya
Mai - kutte ki punch sidhi nahi hoti kabhi usi trah se lato ke bhoot bato se nahi mante
Ab apna muh kholega yah yahi tere muh ko tod ke chala jau
Victor - btata hu btata hu marna nahi
Mai - ha chal jaldi bak
Victor - use delhi ke don ka beta utha ke le gaya hai wo abhi jinda hai
Wo usse shadi karne wala hai
Mai apne sar ko pakad ke man me ( aah kajal ko kuch nahi huwa bhagwan tera lakh lakh dhanyawad )
Mai - agar ye baat jhooth hui to yaad rakhna wo din tera aakhri din hoga jab mai Delhi se lautunga
Uske baad ham waha se chale aaye
Mai - inspector tumhara kaam ho gaya
Aur uske baad mai ghar laut aaya ye to mujhe bada ajib laga aur aap sab ko bhi lag rha hoga
kyuki itni aasani se Victor ka pta chalna aur ek hi zhapad me sab bta dena
khai jo bhi ho mai us SI ko wha se bhej ke Us Victor ko wha se utha ke ek Secret jagah yani ki wha aap sab ko yaad hoga secret hi samjh lo kyuki nadi ke paas ek gufa mili thi mujhe
use waha sift kar diya
aur use aankh band kar ke waha le gya aur jadu se kuch light jala diya aur kuch khane pine kq saman bhi rakh diya
aur uske baad mai wha us gufa ko bahar usi pathar se band kar diya aur ghar aa gya
ye kaam to ho gya tha ki mujhe pta chal gaya tha Ki Kajal kaha hai aur bas ab mujhe kisi trah Delhi jana tha
ab kaise jana tha ye bhi soachne ki baat thi ghar wale to kahi jane dene ki baat se tayar bhi nhi honge
phir bhi mai soacha jo hoga dekh lenge aur wha se yhi sab soachte huwe ghar aa gaya
Pichle do update me jo galti hui thi use shi kar diya hu aur aaj ka update chota hai is liye sorry kal se update ke size bade honnge aur do baar me post karunga edit kar ke kyuki mobile me ek baar me bada update type karne bor ho jata hu
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Brilliant update golu ji... Great going 
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