Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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Update 50

Mujhe soye huwe kuch hi der huwa tha ki Mujhe laga ki mera naam lekar mujhe koi pukar raha hai
aur wo aawaj nirantar aa rahi thi aur mai uth ke baith gaya aur charo taraf dekhne laga to mujhe koi nhi dikh rha tha

aur tabhi mai kuch dekh kqr chauk gya mere chaukne ka kqran tha mai abhi bhi apne bistar pe so rha tha aur mai kaise is trah se sab kuch dekh paa rha tha
tabhi phir mere kano me ek aawaj suni padi

aawaj - putra chauko nhi maine hi tumhare sarir se tumhare sukshm sarir ko bahar bulaya hai

mai - aap hai kaun aur mujhe is trah se bulane ka karan kya hai aur aap to dikhai bhi nhi de rhe hai

Awaj - qbhi tumhari iksha puri karte hai
tabhi pure kamre pe bahut hi jyada rosni ffail gyi itna jyda ki mere sukshm sarir ki aankhe bhi band ho gyi

aur sab sab kuch normal huwa tab samne dekha to mere samne ek bahut hi tezswi koi rishi khade huwe muskura rhe the unhe dekhte hi maine unhe prnam kiya

Mai - he rishiwar aap kaun hai mai aapko nhi janta lekin phir bhi meri aatma ko ek ajib si anubhuti masoos ho rahi hai
ek ajib si shanti ka aheaas ho rha hai

Rishi - purtra abhi to hamare parichay ka samay nhi aaya hai to abhi to hame ajanbhi hi rahna padega (muskura kar bole)

Mai - jaisi aapki iksha ho risiwar aur aap ka yaha is trah se mujhse milne aane ka kya uddsya hai

Rishi - tumhe to ab tak to pta to chal hi gya hoga ki tum koi shadharan manusya nhi ho tumhare andar daiwiya shaktiya samhit hai jo tumhe janmjaat ishwar ka tohfa mila hai

Mai - ji rishiwar mujhe gyat hai

Rishi - tumne qpni daiwiya shaktiyon ke sath sath kuch shaktiyan us tilasm me jane ke baad arjit kiya hai
aur un shaktiyon pe tumhara koi sanyam nhi hai hai jab wo shakti tumhare upar hawi hoti hai to tumhe tumhare sarir aur mastisk pe un saktiyon ka niyantran ho jta hai isliye tumhe kuch bhi yaad nhi rhta ki tum kya kqr rhe ho

isilye mai tumhe kuch dene aaya hu jisse tum apni shaktiyon ko samjh sakonaur un par niyantran kar sako kahi aisa na ho ki tum khud hi khud ka vinas na kar lo

kyuki tum is baar jaha ja rhe ye safar hi tumhari niyato ko badal dega aur ek nyi niyati likhi jayegi agar tum safal ho gye to nya adhya suru hoga ek nyi jang ki suruwat hone wali hai

mai - aap kya kahe ja rahe hai mere kuch bhi samjh nhi aa rha hai apke kahne ka kya mtlb hai

wo - agar tumhe sab kuch gyat hi ho jayega to is rahsya ka kya mahtwa rh jayega bas itna samjh li jo tootega wo hi phir se khada hoga aur jo ladega wahi jeetega

tayar rho aane wale kal ke liye aane wale kal me kya hone wala hai kisne dekha hai ialiye tumhe btane aaya hu tumhe khud par niyantran rakhna hoga is safar pe

nhi to wo hoga jo kisi ne bhi aochna nhi hoga badlegi niyati badlega vayktitwa to hoga mahasanhar

Mai - aap ke khne ka mtlb kya hai mai kuch bhi nhi samjh paa rha hai hu

wi - mujhe jo samjhana tha maine tumhe bta diya aur samjha diya hai tumhe bas achhe se vichar karna hoga kya karna hai

ab mujhe bhi chalna hoga kyuki ab tumhari bahan uthne wali hai aur mai ek baar phir kqh rha hu tumhe niyantran rakhna hoga khud par

aur uske baad phir se waha roani phail gyi aur meri aankh vand ho gyi tabhi mujhe laga mujhe koi hila rha hai

Shruti - bhaiya bhaiya kya huwa uthiye na ( mujhe jhkjhor kar boli)

jisse mai uth kar baith gya aur bola
mai - kya huwa gudiya tu ghabrai kyu hai

Shruti - bhaiya abhi aap neend me kya bole ja rhe the aur pta nhi kya kya badbda rhe the
mai aapko kab se hila rhi hu jagane ke liye

Mai - kuch nhi gudiya lagt hai mai sapna dekh raha tha chal soja abhi 3 bj rhe hai aur use mai apne asth phir se le ke so gya

aur mai aankh band kar ke ab to jo mujhe neend me huwa use soachne laga aur mujhe ab ek alag hi gyan ka bhandar sa mahsoos ho rha tha

ab to mujhe neend aane se rhi isliye shruti ke balo ko shlane laga jisse shruti phir se so gyi aur mai uth ke sadhna me baith gya



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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 50

Mujhe soye huwe kuch hi der huwa tha ki Mujhe laga ki mera naam lekar mujhe koi pukar raha hai
aur wo aawaj nirantar aa rahi thi aur mai uth ke baith gaya aur charo taraf dekhne laga to mujhe koi nhi dikh rha tha

aur tabhi mai kuch dekh kqr chauk gya mere chaukne ka kqran tha mai abhi bhi apne bistar pe so rha tha aur mai kaise is trah se sab kuch dekh paa rha tha
tabhi phir mere kano me ek aawaj suni padi

aawaj - putra chauko nhi maine hi tumhare sarir se tumhare sukshm sarir ko bahar bulaya hai

mai - aap hai kaun aur mujhe is trah se bulane ka karan kya hai aur aap to dikhai bhi nhi de rhe hai

Awaj - qbhi tumhari iksha puri karte hai
tabhi pure kamre pe bahut hi jyada rosni ffail gyi itna jyda ki mere sukshm sarir ki aankhe bhi band ho gyi

aur sab sab kuch normal huwa tab samne dekha to mere samne ek bahut hi tezswi koi rishi khade huwe muskura rhe the unhe dekhte hi maine unhe prnam kiya

Mai - he rishiwar aap kaun hai mai aapko nhi janta lekin phir bhi meri aatma ko ek ajib si anubhuti masoos ho rahi hai
ek ajib si shanti ka aheaas ho rha hai

Rishi - purtra abhi to hamare parichay ka samay nhi aaya hai to abhi to hame ajanbhi hi rahna padega (muskura kar bole)

Mai - jaisi aapki iksha ho risiwar aur aap ka yaha is trah se mujhse milne aane ka kya uddsya hai

Rishi - tumhe to ab tak to pta to chal hi gya hoga ki tum koi shadharan manusya nhi ho tumhare andar daiwiya shaktiya samhit hai jo tumhe janmjaat ishwar ka tohfa mila hai

Mai - ji rishiwar mujhe gyat hai

Rishi - tumne qpni daiwiya shaktiyon ke sath sath kuch shaktiyan us tilasm me jane ke baad arjit kiya hai
aur un shaktiyon pe tumhara koi sanyam nhi hai hai jab wo shakti tumhare upar hawi hoti hai to tumhe tumhare sarir aur mastisk pe un saktiyon ka niyantran ho jta hai isliye tumhe kuch bhi yaad nhi rhta ki tum kya kqr rhe ho

isilye mai tumhe kuch dene aaya hu jisse tum apni shaktiyon ko samjh sakonaur un par niyantran kar sako kahi aisa na ho ki tum khud hi khud ka vinas na kar lo

kyuki tum is baar jaha ja rhe ye safar hi tumhari niyato ko badal dega aur ek nyi niyati likhi jayegi agar tum safal ho gye to nya adhya suru hoga ek nyi jang ki suruwat hone wali hai

mai - aap kya kahe ja rahe hai mere kuch bhi samjh nhi aa rha hai apke kahne ka kya mtlb hai

wo - agar tumhe sab kuch gyat hi ho jayega to is rahsya ka kya mahtwa rh jayega bas itna samjh li jo tootega wo hi phir se khada hoga aur jo ladega wahi jeetega

tayar rho aane wale kal ke liye aane wale kal me kya hone wala hai kisne dekha hai ialiye tumhe btane aaya hu tumhe khud par niyantran rakhna hoga is safar pe

nhi to wo hoga jo kisi ne bhi aochna nhi hoga badlegi niyati badlega vayktitwa to hoga mahasanhar

Mai - aap ke khne ka mtlb kya hai mai kuch bhi nhi samjh paa rha hai hu

wi - mujhe jo samjhana tha maine tumhe bta diya aur samjha diya hai tumhe bas achhe se vichar karna hoga kya karna hai

ab mujhe bhi chalna hoga kyuki ab tumhari bahan uthne wali hai aur mai ek baar phir kqh rha hu tumhe niyantran rakhna hoga khud par

aur uske baad phir se waha roani phail gyi aur meri aankh vand ho gyi tabhi mujhe laga mujhe koi hila rha hai

Shruti - bhaiya bhaiya kya huwa uthiye na ( mujhe jhkjhor kar boli)

jisse mai uth kar baith gya aur bola
mai - kya huwa gudiya tu ghabrai kyu hai

Shruti - bhaiya abhi aap neend me kya bole ja rhe the aur pta nhi kya kya badbda rhe the
mai aapko kab se hila rhi hu jagane ke liye

Mai - kuch nhi gudiya lagt hai mai sapna dekh raha tha chal soja abhi 3 bj rhe hai aur use mai apne asth phir se le ke so gya

aur mai aankh band kar ke ab to jo mujhe neend me huwa use soachne laga aur mujhe ab ek alag hi gyan ka bhandar sa mahsoos ho rha tha

ab to mujhe neend aane se rhi isliye shruti ke balo ko shlane laga jisse shruti phir se so gyi aur mai uth ke sadhna me baith gya



Friends mai is thread ko do tin update pe close karne wala hu Aur nye part ko nyi thread me likhunga mujhe lagta hai shabhi ko ise padne me boring lag rha hoga

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[Shahrukh]

Zaberdust update bhai

 

[paarth]

Boring to nahi hai bs sahi Speed, size and direction se likho acha rahega sabhi k liye. Update size thora increase karo and ab aage bdhao story ko with a bit more of Speed

 

[Golu]

Sorry friends abhi kheto ka kaam aa gya hai jutai buai me busy hu 2 3 din me updated deta hu