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Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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UPDATE 51

NYI SUBAH HUI AUR EK NYA ADHYA BHI SURU HONE WALA THA JISSE MAI BEKHABAR SUBAH KI EXCERCISE KAR KE NAHANE KE LIYE JA RHA THA

AAj ka din mere liye kaisa rahega ye to nhi pta tha mujhe jaha aaj kya ho jayega aur abhi tak mai wo raat wali baato ka bhi man me vichar kar rha tha

Kaisi paheli ki trah ki batao ko bata ke chle gye the wo rishi jisse mai baar soach rha tha badlne wala hai aakhir meri life me aisa kya badlne wala hai jo ki mujhe hi badal dega

kkhair chodo in sab baato ko chlte hai hero pe
mai abhi abhi bathroom se naha ke nikla hi tha ki maa ki aawaj aai

Maa - are beta jaldi aa aaj itna late kyu ho rha hai kya kar rha hai

MMai - bas maa aa gya abhi
iske baad mai kapde change kar ke neeche pahucha jaha shabhi baithe huwe the

MERe neeche aane ke baad shabhi ne nasta kaarna starat kar diya jab shabhi ka nashta ho gya to dada ji bole

DADA ji - aur beta tab kiuse ja rhe ho delhi

mAI - kisse kya bus se jaunga kitni dur hai hi apne yaha se delhi maine ticket book kar liya hai bus ki 10 bje niklegi bus

PAPa - acha waha koi jarurat pade to call kar ke hame bata dena

MMai - okk papa
iske baad aise hi sb btane lge thik se jana ye wo trah trah ki tips mili jo ki har gharwale dete hai

aaise hi time kab nikal gya 10 bj gye lta nhi chla uske baad mai bhi ghar se nikal diya jaha mere jane pe koi bhi khus nhi tha

wwaise maine bhi kisi ko ye nhi bataya tha ki delhi me nai kaha ja rha hu

mere just niklane kee baad turant dadaji ne kisi ko call lagaya

DDadaji - hello haa mera pota abhi abhi nikla mujhe uski pal pal ki khabar milni chahiye

uudhar se bhi kuch bola gya aur use baad kuch der baat karke dadaji ne call rakh diya

iidhar mai ghar se nikalne ke baad shide bus aade pe aaya jo ki bahut dur nhi hai hamare ghar se jaha se ramghar ka busadda bana hai kahi bhi koi bhi city shabhi ke liye buses chalti hai

mmaine ac bus book kiya tha jo ki yaha pahuchne pe pta chala ki bus aaj late ho jayegi 1 bje ke aas paas niklegi

waise bhi maine soacha mujhe to udhar sham me hi nikalna hai to koi dikkat nhi

iidhar kisi trah se 2 ghante bitaye maine uske baad bus nikal padi delhi ke liye jo mujhe sham 5 bje chodne wali thi delhi

wwahi dusri taraf usi jangal me delhi ke jaha mujhe jana tha usi jagal me bahut hi andar jaha se akas ko dekhna namumkin tha itne ghane peepal bargad ke pede lgye huwe the

wwhi un ledo ke beech ek gufa bani thi jo ki gahre andhre me dekhna namumkin hi tha

uus gufa me birju kale kapde pahne huw logo ke beech baitha huwa tha jaha kisi baat pe charcha ho rhi thi

BIRJU - abhi tak wo aaya nhi tum to bol rhe the hamari chal is baar nakaamyab nhi hogi

sshaks 1 - sabra rahko birju hamari koi bhi palan khabhi kharab nhi hota is baar wo nhi bach payega

iitne salo se ham uska ant karne ki kosish kar rhe hai is baar mere prabhi ne bataya hai is ka mauka khali nhi jana chahiye

kkyuki yhi sabse acha samay hai use khatam karne ka is baar ham chuke to wo nhi chukega

aISe hi wo sab apni baato aur planing ke baare me charcha karte rhe

Idhar meri bhi bus pahuch gyi delhi me mai bhi bus us watawarn ko mahsoos karne me lga gya jo mere tarango ne jiska abhas kraya tha mujhe
 

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UPDATE 51

NYI SUBAH HUI AUR EK NYA ADHYA BHI SURU HONE WALA THA JISSE MAI BEKHABAR SUBAH KI EXCERCISE KAR KE NAHANE KE LIYE JA RHA THA

AAj ka din mere liye kaisa rahega ye to nhi pta tha mujhe jaha aaj kya ho jayega aur abhi tak mai wo raat wali baato ka bhi man me vichar kar rha tha

Kaisi paheli ki trah ki batao ko bata ke chle gye the wo rishi jisse mai baar soach rha tha badlne wala hai aakhir meri life me aisa kya badlne wala hai jo ki mujhe hi badal dega

kkhair chodo in sab baato ko chlte hai hero pe
mai abhi abhi bathroom se naha ke nikla hi tha ki maa ki aawaj aai

Maa - are beta jaldi aa aaj itna late kyu ho rha hai kya kar rha hai

MMai - bas maa aa gya abhi
iske baad mai kapde change kar ke neeche pahucha jaha shabhi baithe huwe the

MERe neeche aane ke baad shabhi ne nasta kaarna starat kar diya jab shabhi ka nashta ho gya to dada ji bole

DADA ji - aur beta tab kiuse ja rhe ho delhi

mAI - kisse kya bus se jaunga kitni dur hai hi apne yaha se delhi maine ticket book kar liya hai bus ki 10 bje niklegi bus

PAPa - acha waha koi jarurat pade to call kar ke hame bata dena

MMai - okk papa
iske baad aise hi sb btane lge thik se jana ye wo trah trah ki tips mili jo ki har gharwale dete hai

aaise hi time kab nikal gya 10 bj gye lta nhi chla uske baad mai bhi ghar se nikal diya jaha mere jane pe koi bhi khus nhi tha

wwaise maine bhi kisi ko ye nhi bataya tha ki delhi me nai kaha ja rha hu

mere just niklane kee baad turant dadaji ne kisi ko call lagaya

DDadaji - hello haa mera pota abhi abhi nikla mujhe uski pal pal ki khabar milni chahiye

uudhar se bhi kuch bola gya aur use baad kuch der baat karke dadaji ne call rakh diya

iidhar mai ghar se nikalne ke baad shide bus aade pe aaya jo ki bahut dur nhi hai hamare ghar se jaha se ramghar ka busadda bana hai kahi bhi koi bhi city shabhi ke liye buses chalti hai

mmaine ac bus book kiya tha jo ki yaha pahuchne pe pta chala ki bus aaj late ho jayegi 1 bje ke aas paas niklegi

waise bhi maine soacha mujhe to udhar sham me hi nikalna hai to koi dikkat nhi

iidhar kisi trah se 2 ghante bitaye maine uske baad bus nikal padi delhi ke liye jo mujhe sham 5 bje chodne wali thi delhi

wwahi dusri taraf usi jangal me delhi ke jaha mujhe jana tha usi jagal me bahut hi andar jaha se akas ko dekhna namumkin tha itne ghane peepal bargad ke pede lgye huwe the

wwhi un ledo ke beech ek gufa bani thi jo ki gahre andhre me dekhna namumkin hi tha

uus gufa me birju kale kapde pahne huw logo ke beech baitha huwa tha jaha kisi baat pe charcha ho rhi thi

BIRJU - abhi tak wo aaya nhi tum to bol rhe the hamari chal is baar nakaamyab nhi hogi

sshaks 1 - sabra rahko birju hamari koi bhi palan khabhi kharab nhi hota is baar wo nhi bach payega

iitne salo se ham uska ant karne ki kosish kar rhe hai is baar mere prabhi ne bataya hai is ka mauka khali nhi jana chahiye

kkyuki yhi sabse acha samay hai use khatam karne ka is baar ham chuke to wo nhi chukega

aISe hi wo sab apni baato aur planing ke baare me charcha karte rhe

Idhar meri bhi bus pahuch gyi delhi me mai bhi bus us watawarn ko mahsoos karne me lga gya jo mere tarango ne jiska abhas kraya tha mujhe
Nice updates
 

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UPDATE 51

NYI SUBAH HUI AUR EK NYA ADHYA BHI SURU HONE WALA THA JISSE MAI BEKHABAR SUBAH KI EXCERCISE KAR KE NAHANE KE LIYE JA RHA THA

AAj ka din mere liye kaisa rahega ye to nhi pta tha mujhe jaha aaj kya ho jayega aur abhi tak mai wo raat wali baato ka bhi man me vichar kar rha tha

Kaisi paheli ki trah ki batao ko bata ke chle gye the wo rishi jisse mai baar soach rha tha badlne wala hai aakhir meri life me aisa kya badlne wala hai jo ki mujhe hi badal dega

kkhair chodo in sab baato ko chlte hai hero pe
mai abhi abhi bathroom se naha ke nikla hi tha ki maa ki aawaj aai

Maa - are beta jaldi aa aaj itna late kyu ho rha hai kya kar rha hai

MMai - bas maa aa gya abhi
iske baad mai kapde change kar ke neeche pahucha jaha shabhi baithe huwe the

MERe neeche aane ke baad shabhi ne nasta kaarna starat kar diya jab shabhi ka nashta ho gya to dada ji bole

DADA ji - aur beta tab kiuse ja rhe ho delhi

mAI - kisse kya bus se jaunga kitni dur hai hi apne yaha se delhi maine ticket book kar liya hai bus ki 10 bje niklegi bus

PAPa - acha waha koi jarurat pade to call kar ke hame bata dena

MMai - okk papa
iske baad aise hi sb btane lge thik se jana ye wo trah trah ki tips mili jo ki har gharwale dete hai

aaise hi time kab nikal gya 10 bj gye lta nhi chla uske baad mai bhi ghar se nikal diya jaha mere jane pe koi bhi khus nhi tha

wwaise maine bhi kisi ko ye nhi bataya tha ki delhi me nai kaha ja rha hu

mere just niklane kee baad turant dadaji ne kisi ko call lagaya

DDadaji - hello haa mera pota abhi abhi nikla mujhe uski pal pal ki khabar milni chahiye

uudhar se bhi kuch bola gya aur use baad kuch der baat karke dadaji ne call rakh diya

iidhar mai ghar se nikalne ke baad shide bus aade pe aaya jo ki bahut dur nhi hai hamare ghar se jaha se ramghar ka busadda bana hai kahi bhi koi bhi city shabhi ke liye buses chalti hai

mmaine ac bus book kiya tha jo ki yaha pahuchne pe pta chala ki bus aaj late ho jayegi 1 bje ke aas paas niklegi

waise bhi maine soacha mujhe to udhar sham me hi nikalna hai to koi dikkat nhi

iidhar kisi trah se 2 ghante bitaye maine uske baad bus nikal padi delhi ke liye jo mujhe sham 5 bje chodne wali thi delhi

wwahi dusri taraf usi jangal me delhi ke jaha mujhe jana tha usi jagal me bahut hi andar jaha se akas ko dekhna namumkin tha itne ghane peepal bargad ke pede lgye huwe the

wwhi un ledo ke beech ek gufa bani thi jo ki gahre andhre me dekhna namumkin hi tha

uus gufa me birju kale kapde pahne huw logo ke beech baitha huwa tha jaha kisi baat pe charcha ho rhi thi

BIRJU - abhi tak wo aaya nhi tum to bol rhe the hamari chal is baar nakaamyab nhi hogi

sshaks 1 - sabra rahko birju hamari koi bhi palan khabhi kharab nhi hota is baar wo nhi bach payega

iitne salo se ham uska ant karne ki kosish kar rhe hai is baar mere prabhi ne bataya hai is ka mauka khali nhi jana chahiye

kkyuki yhi sabse acha samay hai use khatam karne ka is baar ham chuke to wo nhi chukega

aISe hi wo sab apni baato aur planing ke baare me charcha karte rhe

Idhar meri bhi bus pahuch gyi delhi me mai bhi bus us watawarn ko mahsoos karne me lga gya jo mere tarango ne jiska abhas kraya tha mujhe
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UPDATE 51 A


MAINE APNE LIYE HOTEL PHLE HI Dekh liya tha jaha se mujhe arawali pahadi pahuchne me koi dikkat na ho

kAH sakte hai wo area jyda develop nhi tha kyuki ye city ke bahar ka area tha jo ki kisi kasbe ki trah basa huwa tha hotel to lgbhag har jagah hi ban chuke hai ye bhi waisa hi holel tha jyda mahnga nhi tha

mujhe yaha pahuchne me hi sham ho chuki thi aane ke baad maine turant khana order kr diya khana peena hone ke baad mai room me thoda aaram karne ke liye so gya kyuki mujhe udhar raat me hi jana tha bina kisi ke nazar me aaye

Aur mujhe aate samay pta th ki dadaji ne mere peeche bhi kisi ko lgaya hai bina uske pta chle mujhe udhar jana tha

aaise hi raat ho gyi uske baad maine dekha raat ke 9 bj gye the mujhe ye samay shi laga nikalne ke liye

mai dhire se hotel se peeche ke raste nikal liya maine map pe st kar diya tha location jo ki jya dur nhi yaha se 3 km dur dikha rha tha

mmai bhi map ko follow karte huwe jaldi jaldi chal diya mai kachhi sadak se ja rha tha jo ki map pe unknown rasta tha jo ki lg rha tha kafi kam use hota hai kyuki raaste par kafi zhadi wagarah dikh rhi thi

Mujhe pahuchne jyada samay nhi lga mai rizarwali pahadi ke paas khada tha jaha se ab jagal suru ho rha tha aur samne puri barricade kiya huwa tha jo kantile taro se se jagal ke 2 miter aage hi lagaya gya tha

wwhi duri taraf raste ke ek banner lga huwa tha lohe ka andar jana mana jo lohe ka tha jisme buri tarke se jang lg chuka tha drkhne se hi pta chal rha tha ki idhar koi aata jata nhi tha

bbahut pahle hi is area ko sarkar ne aam nagriko ke liye pratibandhit kar diya tha kyuki idhar kafi logo ke gayab hone ki khabar milti rhti thi jisse sarkar ne is pure ilake ko band kar diya

kHair maine dekha aas paas ghusne ke liye jagah nhi dikh rhi thi thi mai thoda aur aage ghum ke dekha ek tar wala pole jo kafi bada tha whi sate huwe laga tha

tthabhi mujhe gadi aane ki aawaj aai aur mai bhag ke ek jhadi me chup gya kuch hi samay me dekha ki police ki jeep thi jo is area ka gast lga rhe the

wO gadi jaise aai aur usi trah se waise hi chli gyi unke jane ke turant baad mai us pole pe jaldi jaldi chadh ke dusri taraf kud gya

kudne ke baad mai bina ruke us jagal me ghus gya jisme suru me hi kafi ghane ghane aur lambe lambe ped the

Is jangal me ghass bhi bahut thi jo ki mere kamar tak thi na kuch neeche dikh rha tha aur na hi upar se mai jitna andar ki taraf ja rha tha wo jangal aur bhanay hota ja rha tha

rraat aisi andheri lg rhi tgi mano is grah me na ho ke mai kisi aur grah pe aa gya hu jaha na ko chandrma ho aur na hi koi surya ho

ddusri taraf

BIRJU - mujhe abhas huwa hai jaise wo is jangal me aa chuka hai shabhi satark rho

aapne samne khde gulamo se bola kyuki wo kale posak pahne huwe sevak hi lg rhe the jo ki hath me bhala liye khade the

aaur baki ke waha shabhi baithe huwe wo kale libade wale log bhi turant uth ke jagal ki taraf chal diye
.

wwhi mere hotel pauchne ke kuch der baad wo aadmi bhi mere peeche peeche usi hotel me pahucha aur usne bhi ek room le liya aur mere pe nazar rakhe huwe tha

mmere room me jane ke baad wo bhi usi room ke paas aya jisme mai gya tha wo key hole se dekha mai bed pe so rha hu to wo wha se chla gya

aaur usne dadaji ko call kiya is aadmi ka jyda role nhi hai is liye name nhi likhunga

aadmi - hello sire

ddadaji - ha bolo tum bhi uske peeche ho na wo kahi gyab to nhi huwa

aaadmi - nhi sir mai bhi pauch gya aur chote sir abhi room me so rhe rahe hai

Dadaji - ha koi bhi gadbad nhi honi chahiye aur mujhe khabar milti rhni chahiye ki wo kya kar rha hai
.
aadmi - ji sir mai har ghante batata rhunga aapko
uske baad usne call cut kar diya aise hi wo har aadhe ghante pe mere room me aa ke mujhe dekh ke chala jata

jab mai hotel se nikal gya aur mere niklne ke 15 min baad wo mujhe dekhne aaya jaha mere room bahar se band tha wo turant neeche bhaga mujhe pure hotel me chan mara mai kahi nhi mila

mere baare me wo hotel staff se bhi pucha lekin kisi ko kuch pta nhi mai kaha gya wo ab paresan ho gya ki ab wo kya kre mere bare me ghar bta de ya nhi usne mujhe phle dhoodhne ka nirnay liya aur bahar chal diya.



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