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very nice update Lekin bich ka ek update gayab haiUPDATE 4
Uske baad raghav bola
Raghav - jisne bhi mere aadmi ko mara h samne aa jaye nahi to yaha pe khadi koi koi bhi ladki nahi bachegi
Jaise jaise gunde aage badh rahe the waha ke khade log dar se kampne lage the
gunde kul mila ke 15 16 ke aas pass the jo do gadiyo me aaye the
tab mai bole
Mai - ruk jao warna kisi ko nahi chodunga
Lakkha - dekho bhaiyon ek ladka hame dara raha raha
Aur sab thahake mar ke hasne lage
Lakkha - ja bache ja pahle apni maa ke doodh pe ke aa
Mai - agar aaj maine tumhe tumhari nani ki yaad na dila di to mera naam bhi ajay nahi
Raghav - sale ab tu nahi bachega dekh ke rahe ho maro sale ko hero ban raha h
Ek gunga ek hokey le ke meri taraf badhne laga aur mere paas aake jaise hi usne hokey marne ke liye uthya mai use ek bahut hi jor ka ghusa uske pet mera jisse wo udhta huwa raghav ke gaddi me ja ke lada aur uske muh se khoon aa gaya aur wahi wo dam tod diya
Iske baad do gunde ek sath meri taraf daude
Mai bhi dono ki taraf dauda aur udte hye un dono ko pakda aur apne ghuto ke niche le ke patka jisse wo jamin me dab gaye
Ye dekh ke baki gunde thoda dar gaye
Lakhha - salo es pille ko ek sath maro
Sbhibek sath mere taraf daude aur mai bhi daud laga diya kisi ka pair tuta kisi ka hath kisi ka sar phuta
aur sab jamin pe gire pade huwe krah rahe the
Lakka - ye bhache ab tuje koi nahi bacha sakta
lakha aur kalwa daudte huwe aaye aur mujhe ek ghusa mare jissi mai thodi dur ja kegira
phir mai utha aur dobara jaise hi marne ke liye do ne hath aage badhaya mai dono ke hath pakad ke lati aur ghuso ki barsat kar diya jissse Lakkha adhmar ho gaya aur kalwa ko todha kam mara jo pas jami pe karah raha tha
Raghav - gusse me haramkhor ab tujhe nahi chodunga aur apni bandook konmujhe marne ke liye jaise hi uthya
Mai kood ke uske paas gaya aur use utha ke patka diya jisse wo dard se tilmila gaya
Dubara utha aur jaise hi mujhe marne ko huwa mai hawa me kood ke ek jabardast ghoosa uske kan ke paas mara jisse wo wahi pe kisi ped ki traah gir gaya
Mai - kalwa se ja apne malik ko utha jaldi aur nikal yaha se
Aur wo kisi tarah sabko gadi me dala aur nikal gaya
Dusri taraf
Ek bahut hi ghana jungal tha jisme under jane par kafi bayawah lag raha tha jaha koi aam insan sapne me bhi jane ki kalpna kare
Ushi jangal me Bheema chalte huwe ja raha tha zhadiyo ko hatate huwe wo bhadha ja raha tha
kuch dur jane pe ek pahadi dikh rahi thi jaha kafi andhera dikh raha tha jo dekhne se hi kisi kali sakti ka aasry lag raha tha
Bheema us pahadi pe chadhne laga aur us par chala gaya jaha ek gufa dikh rahi thi wo us ghufa me chala gaya
waha ek danav jaisa aadmi ek havan kund ke paas baitha huwa tha aur samne ek bade se danav ki murti bani huwi thi
Bheema uske paas pahuch ke
Bheema - pranam gurudev
jo Bheema ka guru tha isliye mai use guru hi likhunga
Guru - apni aankhe khol ke aao aao Bheema mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha tha
Bheema - aisi kya baat hai gurudev jo aap mera intzar kar rahe the
Guru - aaj mai tumhe aisi sakti dunga ki jisse tumhe koi manav nahi hara paayega
Bheema - iske baad mai is dharti pe raj krunga aur ek bhyanak thahaka laga ke hasa jise gufa uske thahake se dahal gayi agar waha koi hota to wo dar se hi waha mar jata
Guru - aao bheema baitho mere paas baitho
aur Bheema apne guru ke paas baith gaya
Uske baad guru kuch mantr bolne lage aur uske baad wo bheeme ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse Bheema ka sari jhatke dene laga aur saant ho gaya
Dushri taraf
Raghav ko le jane ke baad hamare gaon ke jamindar bhi apne aadmiyo ke le ke pahuch gaye the
jamindar inka naam
Shudhir singh h jo ki bahut hi achhe aadmi h aur unki ek beti h jiska naam Kajal h jo mere h class me h aur hamre ghar se inka aana jana rahta h
Shudhir singh ko mai jamindar hi likhunga
Jamindar - principal kya huwa kon tha wo
Pinci - ne sab bata diya jo bhi huwa tha uske baad jamindar bole
Jamindar - jo bhi yaha huwa koi kisi se nahi batayega sabhi log kaan khol ke sun lo Thakur ko nahi pta chalna cahiye uske bete ko kisne mara
Ladki mere paas aai aur boli
Ladki - dhanyawad bhaiya aaj aap nahi hote to mera kya hota
Mai - are bhaiya bol rahi ho aur dhanyawad bhi kah rahi ho kya ek bhai apni bahen ki raksha nahi kar sakta
Ladki - maaf kar dije bhaiya mere kahne ka wo mtlb nahi tha
Mai - chlo chodo in baato ko pahle aapne bhaiyon ko vaidh ji ke paas le chalo
Mai - zamindar ko chacha bolta tha jab unko aaya dekha to bola
chach in dono ko vaidh ji ke paas le chaliye
Tab chacha ne apne aadmiyon ko kaha aur wo dOno ko utha liyr aur sath me ladki bhi chali gayi
Tab chacha mere paas aaye aur mujhse bole
Zamindar - ajay beta kya jarurt thi ye sab karne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mai bhabhi ko kya jawab deta
Mai - chacha muzse aanyaya hote huwe nahi dekha jata
Chacha - achha chlo koi baat nahi
aur sab apne apne ghar chaliye aur ha yaad rahe jo mai bola sabko yaad rahe
Zamindar - apne ek aadmi se jao Hukum ( Bhanu parap ji )ke yaha khabar kar do jo yaha huwa aur naam mat batana Ye sab kisne kiya
Aur sab apne apne ghar chale gaye kuki is lafde ke karan school bhi band ho gaya
aur ham bhi chacha ke sath ghar chal diye
is ghatna krm me Shruti abhi tak mujhse kuch nahi boli thi
Udhar kalwa gadi le ke pahle hospital pahucha jo gaon se 30 min ke rashte pe tha jaha se sahar suru hota tha
Uske baad sabko admit karwake turant wo gadi le ke haweli bhaga aur wo waha pauchA dekha haweli me koi dikh nahi raha tha any naukaro se pta karne pe pta chala ki sirf thakur(ab mai gajedra ko tkthakur likhunga)
wo unke paas pahucha
Kalwa - malik malik
Thakur jo baith ke hukka pee raha tha usko dekh ke
Thakur - are kalwa tu yaha kya kar raha h aur ye chot kaise lagi tujhe
Kalwa - wo wo mamamalik
Thakur - hakla kyu raha h jaldi bta
Kalwa - darte huwe malik chtchote malik hospital me h
Thakur - kaise wo hospital pahuch gaya aur baki ke aadmi kaha h
Kalwa ne purighatna bata diya thakur ko jisse wo aag babula ho gaya
Thakur - achha chal pahle mujhe hospital le ke chal
Aur wo dono gadi le ke hospital pahuch gaya aur raghav ke room ke pass pahuch gaye jaha uska operation ho raha tha
Kuki kalwa doctor ko bta diya tha ye kaun h jisse uska turant h ilaj hone laga tha
Tabhi ot ka darwaja khulta h aur doctor apna mask nikalte huwe nikalta h
Thakur - doctor mera pota kaisa h ab
Doctor - sir wo ab koma me h kuki uske dimag ke nichle hisse ki nase dab gayi h aur uske kamar ki haddi bhi jod se thodi bagal ho gayi h
Ye sunke thakur badak gaya
Aur kalwa se pucha
Thakur - kon tha wo jo apni jindgi se ub gaya jo itni himmat uski ki thakur se dusmani mol le li
kalwa - malik jo hamare gaon ke pachim me h waha
Thakur - chal turant haweli aur apne aadmiyon ko le chal aaj uki us gaon se arthi hi uthegi
wo dhadhadhate huwe nikal liye waha se
Idar
Zamin dar ka aadmi haweli pahuch gaya aur Bp singh ko sari baat bta diya kyu huwa kya huwa aur Bp bole chlo abhi ham thode der me aate h aur wo chala aaya
Idahar
ham sab ghar pahuch gaye aur chacha apne ghar ghar pe pahuchne pe dekha ki maa baharhi mera intazar kar rahi thi sayad jo huwa wo maa ko bhi pta chal gaya tha
Ha chalte huw maa ke paas pahuch gay jaha mujhe maa kuch nahi boli mere liye ye kisi zhatke se kam nahi tha
Kahir ham sab ghar me aagaye Aur mai apne kamre aaya aur kapde nikal ke half lower aur banyan dal ke bistar pe let gaya tab tak dekha maa aur Shruti mere kamre me aa gayi thi
maa mere paaa ayi aur boli
.
Maa - chal thoda khada ho ja
Aur mai khada ho gaya maa mere hath pair dekhne lagi aur meri banyan bhi utrwa di jaha mere pheeth me 3, 4 nisan pade the sayadladai karte huwe lag gaya hi but us samay mujhe pta nahi chal tha jo ab halka halka dard ho raha tha
Maa - ja Shruti beta tel garam kar ke le aa dekh kitne bade bade nisan pad gaye h aur Shruti tel garam kar le aayi
Maa - ab tu pet ke bal let ja
Mai let gaya aur maa meri malish karne lagi
Maa - kya jarurat thi akele ulajhne ki agar kuch ho jata to
Shruti - ha maa wha itne gunde the bhaiya akele hi ladne lage jo sab kisi bhaise se kam nahi the
mai dar hi gayi thi agar aapko kuch ho jata to mai kya karti
Aur wo roni si surat bana li jo dekhne me bahut hi maasum lag rahi thi jisse dekh mujhe uspe bahut hi pyar aa raha tha
Mai - are gudiya tu kyu dar gayi kya tera bhai isiliye itni mehnat karta h ha
Maa - abhi chup raho dono baad me baat karna pahle dono aaram kar lo
Aur meri malis kar ke maa aur shruti chali gayi aur mai kuch der me so gaya
Bhar gaon me sabhi chaupal pe baithe huwe the thabhi waha 5 ,6 Scorpio aa ke ruki aur usme se thakur sahit aur Uske hathiyar band bande utre
Tabhi do min baad 6 Scorpio aur aa ke ruki
unme se Bp aur unke aadmi utre
Thakur - Bp ko dekh ke man me ye yaha kya karne aaya h yahi sichte huwe chaupal pe pahuch gaya
Thakur - kiski himmat huwi mere pote ko chune ko uski boti boti kaat dunga
Tab tak Bp bhi waha pabuch gaye the
Bp - thakur auwKat me baat karo ye mera ilaka h aur tere bete ne glti ki thi saza use milni hi thi chahe jo de use
Thakur - jissne mere bete ko mara use nahi chodu ga
Aur Bp sabka hisab mai lunga
Bp - agar mele ke pahle tu ya tere bete ya tere kisi aadmi ne kisi gaon wale pe hAth uthya to tu mele me bhaag nahi le paayega
Thakur ye sun ke til mila gaya
thakur - Bp bahut hi jald phir hamari mulakat hogi
aur wo babhanate huwe waha se nikal liya
Bp - achha sudhir mai chalta hu mujhe aur bhi kaam
aur ha mujhe tum us bahadur se kab mila rahe ho
Sudhi yani zamindar
Zamindar - hukum jald h
Aur sabhi khade ho ke parnam kiye aur Bp chle gaye
is prakar se mere naam ko daba diya gaya
jo ki kisi bade kkam ki taraf isara kar raha tha
Udhr gupha me
Us gupha me ab Bheema ko hosh aa gaya tha jo dikhne me aur hi bhayanak ho gaya tha chehare pe ur hi krurta aa gayi thi aur wo waha se apne guru se aagya le ke apni haweli ki taraf chal pada
jaha pahuch kar us ghatna ki jankari mili ki uska chota bhai koma me h jisse bahut h gussa aaya use ki koi uske bhai ko marne ki himmat kiya
philhal wo mele ka soach ke sant ho gaya aur usse mele ke baad milne ki socha
Idhar
ham sab khana kha ke so gaye aur agli subha apne kamo me lag gaye
Shruti - maa bhaiya ka kal birthday h mai kajal didi ko bulane ja rahi hu
kaja zamindar ki beti inka ana janna laga rahtaa h
Maaa - achga ja jaldi aana
Shruti - theek h ma
Mai kahi ghumne gaya tha mai ghar pe nahi tha
Shruti zamindar ke ghar pahuch gayi zamindar ka ghar ek khothi ki trah tha jo dekhne me kafi sundar tha
Shruti khothi ke andar chali gayi khothi me kaam karne wale apne apne kaam kar rahe the Shruti sidhe Kajal ke room me chali gayi
jaha kaja apne bed pe let ke padh rahi thi Shruti kamre me pahuchi aur boli
Shruti - are didi aap kab mama ke ghar se aayi
Kajal - are choti tu kab aayi mai to kal hi aayi hu
Shruti - mai to abhi abhi aayi jab aap padhne me busy thi
Kajal - aur bata kya ho raha h aur chachi kaisi h
Shruti - maa theek h mai aapko bulane aayi thi kal bhaiya ka birthday h
Kajal - chaukte huwe kya kal ajay ka birthday h mai to bhul h gayi thi
ruk mai abhi tayar ho ke aayi
Shruti - chachi nahi dikhiye di kaha h
kajal ki maa Suneeta jo bahut hi achE swabhav ki h ye apni eklauti beti se bahut pyar karti h aur ajay ko bahut manti h
Kajal tayar ho ke apni maa ke room ke taraf chal di aur room me pahuch ke
Kajal - maa mai ajay ke ghar ja rahi hu kal uska birthday h
Suneeta - Ajay ka birthday h kal aur mujhe aaj pta chala
Kajal - ha maa aur Shruti mujhe bulane aayi h
Suneeta - ek kaam karna tu bhabhi ji ko mana lena is bar ajay ka birthday hamre ghar manya jaya
Kajal - sach ma tab to mai chachi ko jarur tayar kar lungi
Suneeta - theek h ja beta .
aur dono ghar aaya gayi jaha maa baithi thi
Kalal - maa ke pair chu kar namste chachi
Maa - kush raho beti jug jug jio
Maa - aur betI maat kaisi h tumhari
Kajal - theek h
aur yahi gupsup chalu ho gaya aur kajal emotional blackmail kar ke tayar kar li ki ajay ka birthday uske ghar manya jayaega
Aur jab mai ghar aaya tabtak kajal ja chuki thi
kajal je ke apni maa se bta di chachi tayar ho gayi h
isi prakar aaj ka din beet gaya aur raat ho gayi aur ham kha pe ke sone chal diye